英语毕业考试作文(20篇)

导语：毕业,就像一个大大的句号,从此,我们告别了一段纯真的青春,一段年少轻狂的岁月,一个充满幻想的时代……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的毕业感想英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

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时间过得真快!我在我的学校学习了三年。我将在一个月内从中学毕业。我渴望与你分享我的快乐和悲伤。在三年的生命中我有太多的回忆。其中一个给我留下了深刻的印象。我还记得，当我开始学英语的时候，我发现它太难了。无论我如何努力，我仍然不能做得很好，几乎放弃了。当我的英语老师发现我的问题时，她就如何学好英语和我进行了一次交谈。从那时起，她一直在帮助我。渐渐地，我对英语产生了兴趣，我擅长英语。我觉得我很幸运能成为她的学生之一。我从她身上学到了很多。当别人遇到困难时，我会尽力帮助他们。我认为帮助别人是件快乐的事。

My teachers and fellow students，

In a couple of weeks， we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys， full of laughter and tears。

To make the journey safe and fruitful， our great teachers contributed their time， energy， love and the whole heart. Here， we are extremely grateful for all that you， dear teachers， have done for us。

It’ll soon be the time for us to depart， though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey。

Finally， on behalf of all the graduates present here， let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from the middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.

I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

这次期中考试，学生英语成绩很不理想，两极分化十分明显，部分语法知识的掌握不够牢固，尤其是个别题 反复做过几次也没能把握好，阅读理解能力和书面表达能力比较弱。具体有以下几点：

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，学生遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强，阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。

造成这种结果的原因是多方面的，但最重要的有下面几方面：

1.对学生要求不够严格;部分学生偷懒。

2.没能充分调动学生的积极性;提高课堂教学效率。

3. 典型题讲解不够，训练不到位。

4.平时检查督促力度不够。

在今后的教学中，

1、继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功。

2、引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力。

3、培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题。

4、讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语。

5、在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。

6、设计全面、高校的课外作业，并进一步培养学生良好的书写习惯，做到整洁、规范，正确地书写;每周写一篇作文。

7、在教学过程中， 还需加大学习力度，积极研究探索教学方法并及时改变，就一定能提高整体英语水平。

母亲节就要来了，按照内容要求，写一篇以“我的母亲”为题，120~140词的英语作文。

1. 你母亲是个农村妇女，50多岁，没上过学，但懂得年轻人掌握知识的重要性，她很关心你的学习情况；

2. 你的母亲为了让你有的时间学习，总是竭尽全力来照顾你。一次，当你听说母亲病重，回家看她时，她正带病坚持为你做新衣，你激动得热泪盈眶；

3. 你母亲就是这样一位妇女，善良、勤劳，永远值得你尊敬和爱戴。

My mother is a village woman， who is already in her fifties. She had very little school education， but she knows that knowledge is of great importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me to study hard.

My mother takes good care of me and does everything she can for me， so that I can spend more time on my study.

Once she was badly ill and had stayed in bed for several days. When I got home to see her at night， I found the light was still on and mother was sitting in bed， making new clothes for me ！ I was so deeply moved that tears came to my eyes.

Such is my mother， a kind and hard-working woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

[关于母亲节英语考试作文

We had English final exam yesterday. I feelvery sad now because I think I didn’t do well in the exam. Firstly, just amoment ago I realized that my composition in the exam stayed from the point,because I misunderstood the meaning of Green Campus. I thought Green Campus isonly the color of the campus. So I totally got away from the point. Inaddition, time was not enough for me. Eventually, I wrote some answers on theanswer sheet without thinking. Thus I’m afraid I can’t pass the exam. I am nowvery anxious.

我们昨天英语期末考试。我感到很伤心，因为我觉得我没把试考好。首先，不久前我才发现我把作文写离题了，因为我把绿色校园的意思理解错了。我以为绿色校园是指校园的颜色。所以我离题了。此外，时间对我来说也是不够的。最终，有些题目我都没看就直接写答案上去了。所以我怕我会考试不及格。我现在很担心。

Graduation message: never take things too bad, optimistic pictures, crisis warning, hope everyone can be successful!

毕业寄语:希望大家在一起的四年是人生中美好的回忆，等到年老时想起这四年的时光，脸上露出甜蜜的微笑。愿大家都能拥有一个精彩的人生，在整个人生道路上都能顺顺当当。

Graduation message: I hope you four years together in life is wonderful memories, wait until the old thinking of the four years, face smile a sweet smile. Wish all of you can have a wonderful life, in the life on the road can be smoothly.

毕业寄语：有人说：“人人都可以成为自己幸运的建筑师。”愿你们在前行的道路上，用自己的双手建造幸运的大厦。

Graduation message: some people say: "everyone can be the architect of his own happiness." Wishes to you in the way, with their own hands to build the building lucky.

毕业寄语：不管未来有多长久，请记住成长的路上有你有我;不管经历多少个春夏秋冬，请铭记共度的青春年华。亲爱的朋友，愿你绽放最绚丽的笑容，给明天画出最美丽的梦。

School motto: no matter how long the future, please remember that the growth of the road there you have me; no matter how many seasons, please remember my youth. My dear friends, may you bloom the most beautiful smile tomorrow, to draw the most beautiful dream.

毕业寄语：

Graduate from:

忽然之间，四年光阴就要这样流逝而过;

Suddenly, four years would be passed by;

眨眼之间，我们都已将离开这里;

The blink of an eye, and we all have to leave here;

辗转之间，我们都将各奔东西;

After, we will each rush thing;

晃晃悠悠，摇摇摆摆，未来变得茫然;

Wobbly, go swaying, the future becomes vacant;

谁曾说，大学是最张扬的青春;

Who ever said, University is one of the most publicized youth;

谁曾说，大学是最绚烂的舞台;

Who ever said, University is the most gorgeous stage;

谁曾说，大学是最难忘的回忆;

Who ever said, University is the most unforgettable memories;

对于我们，大学就是那些美好的日子……

For us, the university is the happy days ... ...

毕业寄语：今日同窗分手，说一声：珍重!

Graduation message: today we broke up, say: treasure!

明朝校友相逢，贺一句：成功!

1.Thinking of each other is just like a thread connecting both you on the one end and m e on the other end.

思念是一条细长的线，一端系着你，一端系着我，时刻连接着两颗跳动不息的心。

2.If life cheats you，dont be disappointed and worried.Calmness is needed in melancholy days.Believe that pleasantness is coming.Long for the bright future though you are unhappy. All will pass by and everything will be over.Past things will be pleasant memories. ———[Russia]Alesander Pushkin

假如生活欺骗了你，不要悲伤，不要心急。阴郁的日子需要镇静。相信吧，那愉快的日子即将来临。心永远憧憬着未来，尽管你现在常常是阴沉的。一切都是瞬息，一切都会过去，而过去了的，将会变成亲切的怀念。

3.I am not an outstanding student of yours，but you are the most respectable teacher to me in my eyes. On this special day，I extend my heartfelt respects to you!

我不是您最出色的学生，而您却是我最尊敬的老师。在这特别的日子里，我要把一份崇高的敬意献给您!

4.Time does not water down the wine of friendship;distance does not separate our hands of longing.Wishing you happiness forever!

时间冲不淡友情的酒，距离拉不开思念的手，祝福你，永远永远!

5.Time is flying away，and years are passing by.Only our friendship is always in my heart.Farewell，my friend!Take care，my friend!

流水匆匆，岁月匆匆，唯有友情永存心中。朋友，再见!朋友，珍重!

6.Oh，my friend，do you like stars?If you feel lonely far away from home，look up at the stars in the sky， where there is a star for luck that Ive send you.

朋友，你喜欢星空吗?如果有一天你在远方流浪时感到孤独、忧郁，请抬头看看星空，那儿有我送给你的幸运星。

7.Life is a profound book.Others notes cannot replace your own understanding.May you find and create something new in it.

生活是一本精深的书，别人的注释代替不了自己的理解。愿你有所发现，有所创造。

8.No formula can be used to calculate your devotion;no poems and songs to express our heartfelt gratitude to you.It is you that cultivate our minds with your extensive knowledge and your noble spirits.On this special occasion，please accept our best wishes!

加减乘除，算不出您作出的奉献!诗词歌赋颂不完对您的崇敬!您用知识的甘露，浇开我们理想的花朵，在这不寻常的时刻，请接受我深深的祝福!

9.Dont be disappointed on the journey of life.There are friends in the world.Seize your chance and value your opportunities.May our friendship be everlasting.

人生路上何须惆怅，天涯海角总有知音。把握机会珍惜缘分，祝愿我们友谊长存。

10.I have three wishes：May our friendship warm our hearts!May joy be always with you and me!May we often meet each other!

我有三愿：一愿友情温暖我们心田，二愿欢乐永驻你我心间，三愿我们常常相见!

一. 上升增长

1.add up to 增加了eg. The total amount of  added up to 14 billion pounds in 1994. 2. to jump to / to soar to 一跃达到/ 猛增到

eg. The total working days lost soared to 10 million in 1979.

3.an increase of aboutpercent as compared with 与相比大约增加了

eg. In August as many as 39 car accidents were reported, indicating an increase of about 79% as compared with the number of January.

4.to experience an increase/incline 有了增长

eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing an incline.

二. 下降，减少

1.to sink/drop/reduce to 减少到

eg. The rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in 1979.

2.to experience a decrease/decline 有了减少

eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease. 注意：

修饰上升/减少的副词有：

rapidly slowly dramatically respectively 表达上升/减少的最后状态的词有：

the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10%

Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies.

（1）I think we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.

OR:（2）I think our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers. For example, their children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students.

OR:（3）I think with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture.

I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!

That’s all. Thank you.

女士们，先生们：

我是李华。今天，我非常荣幸地在这里我代表学校。我要谈谈我的城市高中教育。

从图1我们可以看到高中学生来自不同的家庭背景。除了本地学生，谁占百分之九十，百分之八的学生都是非本地工人的子女。甚至有百分之一的外国学生。

根据图2，学生毕业后都选择提出了一个更多元化。其中百分之六十打算去上大学。三成选择进入职业学校，其余百分之十打算去国外深造。

（1）我认为我们有更多的自由选择什么我们想毕业后做。上大学不再是对我们大多数人唯一的选择，因为它年前的事。

或：（2）我认为我们的城市政府作出更多努力，帮助非本地工人。例如，他们的子女可以享受与城市学生良好的教育的平等权利。

或：（3）我与我市经济发展的思考，更多的外国人被吸引到这里设立企业，他们高兴地送子女到当地学校，了解中国和中华文化。

我相信在未来的教育我们的城市是有希望的！

这样就好了。谢谢。

[关于毕业去向的英语作文

在毕业考试的前一周,把我们班的几位老师忙的像热锅上的蚂蚁,想知道这是为什么吗?让我来给你说吧.

事情的原因的这样的:在临近考试的十几天,我们班就想有瘟疫一样,有三分之一的同学都说肚子疼,有许多同学都去打点滴,可是只有 少数同学恢复了健康,其他同学还在喊肚子疼,最后,老师也没有办法了,这件事惊动了校长,校长叫来了卫生院的人,真是不查不知道,一查吓一跳,经过诊断,发现有一名同学是阑尾炎,需要立即动手术.这可急坏了老师们,怎么在这节骨眼上动手术,下周就要考试了,唉!这怎么办呢?过了一会儿,老师们终于冷静下来,魏老师决心查清事情的原因,这下老师就没心思上课了.

在今天上午这节课,老师没有上课,而是在问我们这几天的生活的情况,有没有吃错东西,许多天下都说是伙食团,老师说:"其他班都在伙食团吃,都没有问题,怎么就我们班有问题?"这种推测立即被否定了,几天过去了,班里风平浪静,可好景不长,又有许多同学说肚子疼,一检查,又有一位是阑尾炎,着一下可把我们下惨了,都害怕自己得阑尾炎,影响考试,于是,就有人说自己千万别的阑尾炎,还有人开玩笑说别人一不小心得了阑尾炎,不用考试,直接念初中,多好啊!没想到这句话竟然成真的了,又有一位同学得了阑尾炎.

还不知道是什么原因造成同学们肚子疼就有三个阑尾炎,真不知道怎么搞的.在星期三的队会上,老师向我们说了造成这次事故的原因,原来是有些同学用自来水蒸饭,自来水里的沙没有过滤,让沙沾到了米上,同学们吃了这些有沙的饭,就会肚子疼,在一个得阑尾炎的同学的肠子里发现了一些沙.事情的原因终于查清了,我们也松了一口气,在这以后,我们班就没有同学说肚子疼了,到是其他班的同学说独自疼.

看来,以后蒸饭要注意点儿!

Failure exists in every stage for everybody. As students, I think the most common failure would be failing in the exam. Yes, I have failed in the exam for many times. It is very common, because on one can keep the name of ever-victorious generals forever. But some students do not figure out this. When they fail in the exam, they need a long time to recover, even have directly negative effect on their inner heart. This is not the right way to deal with this problem. We need to figure out the reason why we don’t do well in the exam. And then correct it. Try our best to get better next time.

失败对每个人来说都存在于每一个阶段。作为学生,我认为最常见的失败将会在考试中失败。是的,在考试中我失败了很多次。这是很常见的,因为在一个永远保持常胜将军的名字。但是有些学生并不算出这个。当他们考试失败时,他们需要很长时间才能恢复,甚至直接负面影响他们的内心。这不是正确的方式来处理这个问题。我们需要找出为什么我们不要在考试中做得很好。然后改正它。尽力获得更好的下一次。

[英语作文：考试失败

1)做模版：拿几片范文，找几句比较拽的结构型句子，拼凑出一个你自己顺手的框架即可。不用到处找，也不用找很多，一个框架即可，当然，准备一些可以替换的词：比如recommendation替换conclusion.漂亮句子很多，但若水三千，我只掬一瓢饮。

2)找出主要的错误类型，每种写出一道两句经典的表述即可。

3)考时30分钟分三个阶段：一)12-15分钟，写出完整的第一段，三个征文段的topic sentence，和完整的末段。写第一段的同时就构思topicsentence,末段无非是重复结论和三句topic。这样的好处是结构已经完整了，你不用慌了。。二)13-10分钟，完成三段正文。我以前觉得这个很困难，后来想通了。无非是把这层意思说清楚就行。3句话就够了。也够长了。三)5分钟check.还一个作用时，是在前面没有完成，还有一个buffer,也不至于弹尽粮绝。

4)非常措施：考试万一时间不够，首段就抄原句;如果时间还不够，末段就cut-paste首段和topic 的文本，稍加修改即可。但是，结构是完整的。

5)ok作文法的精髓和适用范围：精髓：看上去很美。适用范围：不想得6分的人(因为想的6分的人追求的是实际上也很美。如果运气好，可以的5分，运气不好，可以的4分。

There are four seasons in a year.My favorite season is summer .Because when the summer is coming .I can change the beautiful skirt and I can go swimming .I like the swimming pool very much.In summer ,all things are bright.I can go to a lot of places that I like.In summer holiday,I also can spend my holiday with my parents and we can go to the Forbidden City.How interesting !

The four seasons accompany us and make our lives interesting.Summer is when everyone has fun under the warm sun,autumn is the time of harvesting,and winter’s white snowflakes decorate the bare earth and trees.But it is spring’s vitality that fascinates me the most.

I remember when I was a small child,my favorite season was winter.But one thing made me change my mind.

I loved playing in the garden and climbing trees when I was small.But I realized one autumn day that golden leaves had started to fall from my favorite tree,and by winter its branches were already bare.I thought that it had died,and would never turn green again.

When my father knew why I was crying,he told me:“The tree hasn’t left you.It’s just resting.I promise in three months,that tree will be prettier than ever.” I believed what my father said and waited for three months.

Sure enough,when the time came,the tree was greener and taller than ever.Sprouts started to stretch their heads out of the melting snow,and creeks and streams started to run again freely.

From then on,spring has become my favorite time of the year because its vitality brings me happiness.

一年有四个季节。我最喜欢的季节是夏天。因为夏季即将来临。我可以改变这个漂亮的裙子,我可以去游泳。我非常喜欢游泳池。在夏天,一切都是光明的。我可以去很多地方,我喜欢。在暑假,我还可以花我的假期和我的父母和我们可以去故宫。多么有趣!

四季陪我们,使我们的生活有趣。夏天是当每个人都有有趣的温暖的阳光下,秋天是收获的时候,冬天的白色雪花装饰裸土和树木。但这是春天的活力,最让我着迷。

我记得当我还是个小孩,我最喜欢的季节是冬天。但有一件事使我改变了主意。

我喜欢在花园里玩,爬树的时候小。但我意识到秋天的一天,金色的树叶已经开始从我最喜欢的树,和冬天的树枝已经光秃秃的。我以为它已经死了,不会再变绿了。

当我父亲知道我为什么哭,他告诉我:“这棵树就没离开过你。只是休息。我保证在三个月内,那棵树将会比以前更漂亮了。“我相信我的父亲说,等待三个月。

果然,的时候,这棵树是绿色的,比以往任何时候都高。豆芽开始伸展头上的雪融化,自由和小溪,小溪又开始运行。

从那以后,每年的春天已经成为我最喜欢的时候,因为它的生命力给我带来了快乐。

导语：雾霾作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，能唤起初中生环保意识。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

【猜题理由】

近年来我国多地雾霾天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，能唤起初中生环保意识。

【预测题目】

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

1.感谢他的关注。

2.简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

3.谈谈你的感想。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅;开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数; 词数：120左右

【优秀满分范文】

Dear David,

Im glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China.

Thank you for your concern. Im also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

四级作文是英语四级考试中的一个难点，2013年英语四级考试临近，参加英语四级的考生们最关心的就是2013英语四级作文预测了，为考生们准备了2013四级作文预测：感恩，希望这些2013英语作文预测能对考生们有所帮助。

On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude

On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenonthat we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack thesense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancientland with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adultswere not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude tothose who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth。

Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heartis that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I stronglybelieve that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy forthis social headache. As young university students of the new era, we shouldmake our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense ofgratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should joinour hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in thisway can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I begyou to act from now on.

At graduation, I want to say to the classmates: thank you for me, and the other teachers, to the entire school things support!!!!! Are you the teacher of the sky, fly a pair of wings, the growth of happiness!

Time passed quickly, you by, unconsciously, you through the junior middle school three year study life. In three years, you leave footprints in the campus, and released, scattering the ideal sweat, harvest I wish, to take away the maturity, and left behind the memories. A few days to come, in my mind, often will save you present at his desk the homework situations; Crazy dozen laughter, Let the teacher force to eat breakfast things like; Creating art festival in song; On the sports ground endeavoring figure; More specific classmates stealing copy homework awkwardness; Climbing over the fence risk; Have help each other love; More in order to hit a small thing of reckless...... . I think this is your life, is also growing occasionally I will.

Graduate, the separation, leaving gratitude, take it hope.

As the economy is developing so rapidly, people’s attitude towards life is changing at the same time. Credit cards are becoming more and more popular. but what advantages and disadvantages do they have?

Firstly, it is quite convenient ant safe for us to use a credit card. Cash-stolen does not exist in this way. People now take a card instead of a heavy purse wherever they go. Secondly, credit cards represent great honour. People using credit cards shows his special identity and draw others attention.

On the other hand, credit cards are not always that good. Credit cards can lead to overspending somehow. People pay more than they have and then get busy paying off. Furthermore the credit card cheating happens more often.

In my opinion, credit cards do good in our life. But we should use them carefully. Only when used credit cards properly can make contribution to a more convenient and safer life.

The sky misses white clouds, just as I miss home, but I always can not meet my hometown.

I dreamt of the clear lake in my hometown. It was just like the bright eye, looking at me and telling me something. I dreamt of wild grapes in my hometown, They were really sweet! To relieve the pain in my heart, I could only come home in my dream.

I miss home! I miss my grandmother, miss her sweet hug!

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

本次英语命题是八年级备课组命题，以考查基础知识为主，在此基础上考查学生综合运用语言的能力。命题材料贴近学生生活，难度适中。期中听力题，短文首字母填空和书面表达失分较多。我所教两个班级在均分，及格率和优秀率上都比较接近，均分60分左右，八(1)班19个及格、高分9个，八(2)班21个及格、11个高分。

从本次考试所反映的现状来看，今后的教学中应注意：

1、加强听力训练，营造语言环境。课堂上一定要加强对学生的听力训练，坚持用英语组织教学，尽可能利用多种教学资源让学生接触地道的语音、语调，多听英、美人士的录音材料。

2、狠抓基础知识，加强写作训练。书面表达能客观地反映学生英语基础知识掌握情况，并且一直是学生的薄弱环节。

3、继续注重英语阅读教学。阅读理解在我们的各种测试中所占分值越来越大，而且选材也更趋广泛化。因此课堂教学中要侧重“篇章”，强调“含义”，将语篇教学贯穿于课文教学和阅读理解教学中，利用语篇教学扩大学生词汇量，增强语感，丰富文化知识，提高学生分析问题和解决问题的能力。

4、注重兴趣培养，慎防两极分化。从试卷分析中可以看出，两个班级都不同程度地出现了令人担忧的“两极分化”现象。一定要注意激发、培养学生的学习兴趣，关注学生的情感，营造宽松，民主、和谐的教学氛围，保护每个学生的自尊心和学习英语的积极性。只有这样，掉队的学生才会减少，也才可能大面积提高均分。