英语毕业考试作文【优秀20篇】

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

Nowadays, colleges and universities enroll an increasing number of students year after year. After four years of study, they have to meet more and more rivals in the labor market, usually many of them going home with no work at all, disappointed.

With more graduates and less job vacancies, students are encouraged to start business of their own when they graduate from university. They may start take up anything they are interested in, make decision on their own, and obtain the fruit of their own labor. In this way, graduates will become more independent, imaginative and creative.

Yet this process should be supported by our government. The government should provide special policies for these students, and when necessary, guide them onto a correct road.

My school is big and beautiful. It is in my hometown. There are many flowers, trees and grass there. There is a track on the playground, too.

Im in Class 3, Grade 6. In my school, every grade has three classes. There are seven lessons every day. We must get up at 5:30, because our school bus comes at 6:30. We get to school probably at 6:55. Our class begins at 7:50. We eat lunch at school at 12:00. We finish school at 3:30. So we go home very early. After school, I do my homework at home. Sometimes, I play football with my friends. We are all very happy. This is my school!

Dear schoolmates,

As I am graduating, I’d like to write this letter to express my feelings before leaving school. As for me, it is the school life that colors my daily life. During the three years, I had a good time with teachers and classmates who were in favor of me. Besides, there is no doubt that I achieved lots of knowledge and skills which are good for my future study.

Nevertheless, there are also some things that I regret about. For instance, wasting too much time playing computers, I spent a little time in studying. Moreover, I regret arguing with my friends when I was in a low spirit.

Gone are the days when I studied in high school. Needless to say, there are many challenges in university where I will start my new life. Therefore, I should make every effort to study in university.

Here is some advice for you to take. Under no circumstances should you waste time doing things that aren’t linked with study. Apart from this, it’s high time that you should spare no effort to get good marks at school.

Good luck to all of you!

Yours

和同学生活了六年以久，今天却要走向五湖四海，走向自己的梦想，走向理想的中学。我们要离开这亲爱的母校，离开最真挚的朋友，离开自己的启蒙老师，我一想到这些不禁感到阵阵心寒。

记得我六年级时作文真是一窍不通，没有一篇是得优的，可是在里毕业考试不剩几个月时老师对我们进行了作文加强训练，一天一篇作文，字必须写满600字，要用上好词佳句，才过了几个星期作文能力就提高了许多，我真开心。

在我数学考试不及格的时候是老师给了我信心，让我勇气继续努力学习，最后取的理想的成绩，让我轻松的面对毕业考试。在我面临困难时同学们给我勇气，当自己失望时，给了我希望，同学们各个都是热心肠，我们班的每个同学都是乐于助人，就想是亲兄弟亲姐妹一样，团结友爱，而却要奔自他方，有的人还可以再见，而有的人连一面都见不了，不过每个人都有自己的梦想，每个人都为了自己的梦想而前进，完成自己的梦想，了了父母“望子成龙，望女成凤”的心愿。

现在我们都将要读初中了，我要努力学习每个星期都要来看看母校看看启蒙老师，向老师汇报学习情况，和老师谈谈话。我要让父母过上好日子，要让老师和同学们看看我的成就，对了还要和父母出国旅游，还有我和同学一定得在北大青华大学见面!这是我和同学们的愿望，将来可能我还会看见同学们那熟悉的面容，听见熟悉的声音，我们各自汇报自己的情况，生活得怎么样，那时我们肯定有说不完的话。

我相信在十多年后的今天我们都会怀着美好心情见面，我们要让老师看看我们的成就，我们要让老师看看我们是聪明的，是对祖国有用的人!我相信我的梦想会实现的!

As the world gets globalized, the communication between countries has been enhanced, studying abroad has become a dream for countless young students. As a college student who is majoring in English, I would like to keep my further study in a foreign county after graduation, so that I can improve my knowledge and my ability to live.

随着世界变得全球化，国家间的交流得到了加强，出国学习已经成为了无数青少年的梦想。作为一名学习英语专业的学生来说，我喜欢毕业后出国学习，这样我就可以提高我的知识和生活的能力。

As for me, learning English in a native speaking environment is very important. I would choose to continue my further study in Britain orAmerica, both are good for my major. The English-speaking countries can provide me a good chance for me to gain my knowledge. I can know more about the culture and conventions, it helps me to do some translation work.

对于我来说，在一个讲本土语言的国家学习英语很重要。我会选择在英语或者美国继续我的学业，这两个国家都对我的专业有好处。讲英语的国家能给我提供学习知识的好机会。我可以学到更多的文化和习俗，这有助于我做一些翻译方面的工作。

Overseas study would also provide a good opportunity to learn how to live by myself. In china, I have been living with my parents all my life, my mother takes care of me all the time, but now, I am an adult, it is time for me to be independent. I can learn how to communicate with others, how to take care of myself and so on. All these abilities are vital for my future career.

出国学习也能提供一个学习如何独立生活的好机会。在中国，我一直都和父母生活在一起，我的妈妈一直在照顾我，但是现在，我已经是一个成年人了，该是时候自立了。我可以学着如何与人交流，如何照顾自己等待。所有的这些能力对于我将来的职业很重要。

With the constant interaction between nations, it is necessary for us to learn more about the world. Studying abroad provides such chance, at the same time, we could also learn to be independent.

随着国家之间的交流日益频繁，更多的了解世界对我们来说是很必要地。出国留学提供了这样的机会，同时，我们也能学着自立。

在毕业考试的前一周,把我们班的几位老师忙的像热锅上的蚂蚁,想知道这是为什么吗?让我来给你说吧.

事情的原因的这样的:在临近考试的十几天,我们班就想有瘟疫一样,有三分之一的同学都说肚子疼,有许多同学都去打点滴,可是只有 少数同学恢复了健康,其他同学还在喊肚子疼,最后,老师也没有办法了,这件事惊动了校长,校长叫来了卫生院的人,真是不查不知道,一查吓一跳,经过诊断,发现有一名同学是阑尾炎,需要立即动手术.这可急坏了老师们,怎么在这节骨眼上动手术,下周就要考试了,唉!这怎么办呢?过了一会儿,老师们终于冷静下来,魏老师决心查清事情的原因,这下老师就没心思上课了.

在今天上午这节课,老师没有上课,而是在问我们这几天的生活的情况,有没有吃错东西,许多天下都说是伙食团,老师说:"其他班都在伙食团吃,都没有问题,怎么就我们班有问题?"这种推测立即被否定了,几天过去了,班里风平浪静,可好景不长,又有许多同学说肚子疼,一检查,又有一位是阑尾炎,着一下可把我们下惨了,都害怕自己得阑尾炎,影响考试,于是,就有人说自己千万别的阑尾炎,还有人开玩笑说别人一不小心得了阑尾炎,不用考试,直接念初中,多好啊!没想到这句话竟然成真的了,又有一位同学得了阑尾炎.

还不知道是什么原因造成同学们肚子疼就有三个阑尾炎,真不知道怎么搞的.在星期三的队会上,老师向我们说了造成这次事故的原因,原来是有些同学用自来水蒸饭,自来水里的沙没有过滤,让沙沾到了米上,同学们吃了这些有沙的饭,就会肚子疼,在一个得阑尾炎的同学的肠子里发现了一些沙.事情的原因终于查清了,我们也松了一口气,在这以后,我们班就没有同学说肚子疼了,到是其他班的同学说独自疼.

看来,以后蒸饭要注意点儿!

导语：雾霾作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，能唤起初中生环保意识。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

【猜题理由】

近年来我国多地雾霾天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，能唤起初中生环保意识。

【预测题目】

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

1.感谢他的关注。

2.简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

3.谈谈你的感想。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅;开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数; 词数：120左右

【优秀满分范文】

Dear David,

Im glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China.

Thank you for your concern. Im also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to peoples health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

Graduation is a time when we move on， from school to university， or out into the real world。

Before graduating from school， We usually have a variety of activities， like taking pictures， leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship， or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect。

However， I have mixed emotions about moving on。I want to stay and have more fun with my friends， but I will have to move on。Graduation means taking a step forward———moving onward and upward。Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced。

Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not。Let‘s make great efforts so that our dream will come true。

[英语作文毕业

2015年6月的大学英语四级考试刚刚结束，作为打头阵而出现的作文题目一直是令广大考生备受瞩目且头疼不已的专项。此次考试还是沿续之前的出题风格，以图画的形式来考查，要求考生写一篇不少于180个单词的议论文。

由于是花卷形式出现，所以涉及到多个题目。本次四级考试已知的三道作文题目是：

1. 人与电脑(电脑对人所产生的影响)

2. 人与手机 (人对手机的过分依赖性)

3. 父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用

参考范文：

As is graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl is talkingwith her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to thecollege of your choice!” Then, her mother smilesand seems content with thisresult. Apparently, the cartoon aims toreveal the fact that a majority ofmodern parents play anincreasingly negative role in their children’s growth.

There are several possible reasonsaccountable for thisphenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has onlyone child;therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentionson that child and exertmuch pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover,numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilleddreams byletting their children learn what they failed to learn and applyforthe college by which they failed to be accepted, because theyhave become richerand they believe that they have the power tomake what they wanted and want cometrue now(原因二). For instance, myuncle used to be a poor man and his dream that oneday he wouldbecome a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But hemadea fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my youngerbrother topractice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan ofsports, but now he has toplay violin everyday unwillingly andofter quarrels with theirparents(举例：原来-然后-结局).

To sum up, it is unreasonable for parentsto control theirchildren’s life(总结句). In order to help them grow happily andhealthily, parents aresupposed to communicate with their kidsabout what they are really interested in(建议一，目的句型).Meanwhile, itis about time that parents let their kids make their ownchoices(建议二，“是时候”句型).Only in these ways will children grow in apsychologically happy environment andrealize their owndreams.

结果和结论部分代表着论文的主要成就和贡献，英语毕业论文有没有价值，值不值得读者阅读，主要取决于你所获得的结果和所得出的结论。因此，在写作结果和结论部分时，一般都要尽量结合实验结果或仿真结果的图、表、曲线等来加以说明，使结论部分言之有物，有根有据;同时，对那些看不懂中文的英文读者来说，通过这些图表，结合英文摘要的说明就可以比较清楚地了解论文的结果和结论。也只有这样，论文的结论才有说服力。如有可能，在结尾部分还可以将论文的结果和他人最新的研究结果进行比较，以突出论文的主要贡献和创新、独到之处(回答 What is new and original in this paper)。

The sun is lazy, the white clouds are lined with blue sapphire. The sound of the car is a discordant episode. How can the cicadas come out today? Is it a matter of mind?

No matter whether it has a heart or not, I have a heart. I was depressed, thoughts such as Piaoxu, some inexplicable sadness sour my nose, and I think that in the graduation old thing.

Speaking of graduation, I can see that the old scene is still holding up tears. The picture has been fixed in my mind. Maybe I would think it was a great play at that time. I will disdain to think, "is not graduation?" Graduation does not represent a farewell, we can also contact ah, and not no more. Its ridiculous to think about it now, and I didnt know if I was in contact with you after graduation. Graduation seems to be a growth, but also a cruel dismancling.

Perhaps, I once again opened the junior high school, graduation, I will show a smile and a heart when they think primary school can not let go, the mouth may be saying: "this group of people can be really memorable, stupid every day and I am funny......"

Perhaps, so when I was in high school, once again opened the graduation, I would have a nose acid, who may visit your curious mind primary school, you may regret muttered: "I was so...... Early know that... "

Maybe, when I was in college, when I opened my graduation picture again, I could not stop my tears in the last second.

The next second, I will laugh, I laugh good memories between us, because I was crying or not forget them, forget the smiling faces, or to the primary school since then attachment, I may point to the childish graduation photo can not let people say: "fool, I didnt forget you......"

Perhaps, I grew up, once again opened the graduation, I will feel the time how so fast, this sentence may be you are tired of listening to adults, mouth talking about how time flies we cant understand, because you dont know if you have the time of your life is the most valuable and most worthy memories of time.

Maybe, we will no longer contact after graduation, but I will always be waiting for your blessing to my 20**.

since school comes into being， the test standard has been used to appraise performance of students. so far it is still being used， which may suggest that actually there are some advantages in it. however， it is also highly possible that the test standard is a not ideal way to find out what students have learned and what they havent. most school is still using it just because there is no better method to replace it.

in my opinion， the following three points are the critical flaws in the test standard.one of the most harmful effects on the test method is that it will force us to study just for passing tests， not for acquiring knowledge especially in china. obviously the final object of education is making us intellective by learning more knowledge. while the test is only a way to examine the level of students studies， it has been deteriorated to a sifter deciding the fate of students. why can it be called a terrible sifter? now in the tests， which decide who can enter a higher school， thousands of poor students， who want a splendid future， must prepare for the tests by finishing a great deal of practices. those practice tests are heavy-laden to them. so in this case， how can they be expected to study to obtain knowledge? to them that are enough if they can reach the level which tests need. in the end what our nation will get， genuine persons with ability or just test robots?secondly， tests will bring the examinees great pressure， which can affect their lives. a typical example of this is that most young students have worn glasses even though some of them are still children. for preparing for tests， they must spend a lot of time on doing their homework so that their eyesight becomes worse and worse. and the more time they spend on those， the less time they have for playing and relaxing. consequently， there is a bad influence on their health.thirdly， in fact， test system itself can not veraciously estimate who is better than others because there are many factors impacting the results of test. for instance， someone cheated in test so that his score would be higher than others. or someone who was too nervous to perform well fell in the test.

[我对考试的意见英语作文2200字

导语：即将迎来小学毕业季，你有什么感想吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I will graduate from elementary school soon .

6-year learning is coming to an end. I clearly know that Im going to a junior high school soon.

I have heard that the study there is much harder than that in primary school. So I have to work hard to achieve a new height. First I will read lots of books so that I can get ready for the future learning. Then I will do some practice. As the saying goes: Practise makes perfect.

In a word I will try my best!

【参考译文】

很快，我就要从小学毕业了。

六年的学习快结束了，我清楚地知道我马上就要去初中了。

我已经听说那儿的学习比小学的要难很多。所以我必须努力学习以达到一个新的高度。首先，我要读很多书以便我能为将来学习做准备。然后，我要做很多练习，就像一句谚语说的那样：熟能生巧。

总之，我将尽我全力。

The proper ways for students to relax I am the monitor of class 3 grade3 in No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. Of the 60 students at my class, 31 boys and 29 girls, 30 students like watching TV, 12 students like playing computer game, 8 students kike listening to music. And only 5 students like to do exercise. But my class have 5 students do not have time to relax. I think there are different relax way for different people. But I think listening to music is the best relaxing way for students. Because It can help my grade.

[英语作文考试例文

“明天考试！”，老师破天荒地宣布。不可能！我们这些“不认真上课分子”，可被这事吓了一跳。要知道，这个学期可从没考过试。大家还以为不用考试了呢！

为了不让我们的尊严被破坏，为了我们在班上不被女生嘲笑。我们“不认真学习分子”，应该一起行动起来，把考试考好。我们想出A、B、C三套方案。A方案开始了。我开始求我的同桌。只要你给我抄答案，我就请你吃鱿鱼丝。同桌边笑边说，你请我吃鱿鱼丝，我还给你炒鱿鱼呢！我只好垂头丧气地走了。A方案完全失败了。

B方案更强，我们在教室各地放上小镜子，想抄同桌。镜子被女生发现后被女生弄成“黑墨镜”！我们又在老师办公室里放了“定时多连拍相机”，谁知这相机拍到的都是老师骂学生，连试卷的影子都没有看见一点。

晚上我不停地复习，可一下子就睡着了，C计划宣告失败。第二天，天上下着大雨，和我的心情一样沉重。可等我到学校后，老师却说，今天不考了。大家异口同声地问：“为什么不考？”“因为下雨了”，老师说。我们又问；“下雨和考试有什？么关系？”当然有关系，难道我没说是体育考试吗？

啊？白白复习了！不过，通过此事，我们明白了，平时不认真，临时抱佛脚是没有用的。

In recent years, there is a growing concern for the spending craze during graduation. Thefarewell dinners, which once symbolized a celebration of the four-year friendship and the bitterness of pending departure, pose a gigantic financial burden on the graduates.

A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the following might be the critical ones. Firstly, it’s an undeniable truth that today’s college students tend to spend much more money than before. What’s more, the farewell dinners are held in the name of more and more social groups, such as classes, college societies, dormitories and etc.

In my view, the problem mentioned above has become increasingly severe, so great concern is deserved and effective measures are called for. To begin with, it is essential that the school should attach more importance to teaching the concept of thrift. Secondly, students should enhance their awareness that money never stands for affection. Only with these measures taken, I’m convinced, can the craze of spending during graduation be eased.

郭明义参军之前，只是初中学历。在部队时，他抓住“缝隙时间”学习英语。来到矿山工作后，他每天晚上都骑自行车往返20多公里，到市内的夜校学习。

1992年，国家“七五”重点建设项目——齐大山矿扩建工程进入开工准备阶段，郭明义又考入英语强化班进修一年。1993年工程开工后，他担任了33台、每台价值1000多万元、载重量154吨生产汽车——电动轮现场组装的英文翻译。

美国犹格里德公司澳大利亚售后技术服务部中国区总管，两次劝说郭明义到他所在的公司工作，并承诺给予比他当时收入高6至7倍的工资，可老郭不为所动，说：“我上党校、夜校、进修，都是企业支付的学费，还发给我补贴。我对企业有感情，我要回报企业，对企业的发展有信心。”

虽然电动轮的进口备件质量检验不归郭明义负责，但每次对着备件做翻译时，他都认真检查，先后发现了5台电动轮有质量问题。公司与外方据理力争，最终获得10万美元的赔偿。

在语文考试中，作文占的分数比较大。如果把握住语文的写作技巧，对语文成绩有很大的提高。下面是小升初作文开头提高分数的五种写法，希望对2012小升初的学生有帮助。

一、开头突出文章中心

例：一直以来，我有一个高远的梦想，就是能挺起胸、昂起头，做一个成功者！然而，殊不知，没有洒下汗水的土地怎能收获丰收的喜悦？没有精心培育的大树怎能长得叶繁枝茂？只有坚持不懈、永不言弃，才可以到达成功的彼岸！

作文的题目是《成功其实离我们很近》，小作者在文章开头就点明了文章的中心，写出了要想取得成功就要“洒下汗水”、就要“精心培育”；只有坚持不懈、永不言弃才能成功。开头直接进入主题，使中心突出，读者读起来也容易抓住要领。

二、开头抒发真情实感

例：母亲，您是一股清澈的甘泉！我是一棵绿油油的禾苗；您是早晨的太阳！我是一株刚冒出嫩芽的小草；您是湛蓝的大海！我是一条小小的鱼儿……妈妈呀！请接受女儿的这份爱！

作文的题目是《……笑了》，小作者写自己为妈妈做了一件事情，看到了妈妈欣慰的笑。在开头中使用了排比、比喻的修辞直抒胸臆，赞美了妈妈，也表达了对妈妈的感恩之情。抒发了真情实感，打动读者并引起了下文。

三、紧扣作文题目写开头

例：成功时，我会听到妈妈的声音：“孩子，你是我的骄傲！”失败时，我会听到妈妈的声音：“别灰心，下次一定行！”骄傲时，我会听到妈妈的声音：“你还可以做得更好！”……

作文的题目是《声音》，小作者紧紧围绕“声音”两个字开篇，“声音”一词出现三次，每一次还都直接写出了“声音”的具体内容。让读者感受到成长中的小作者在关键的时候总会得到来自妈妈的赞扬、鼓励、提醒的声音！显示了审题和遣词造句的能力。

例：生命是一段牵挂的行程，即使是一把伞，也是父母对儿女一份暖暖的爱。在人的一生中，有许许多多是可以淡忘的，但是有些东西却无法忘却，譬如这生命中的伞。

这是一篇课外阅读《生命中的伞》的开头，作者紧紧围绕自己的题目中“生命”和“伞”开篇，强调了一把蕴含父母之爱的伞令作者终生难忘，开篇点题，引人深思。

四、结合文章内容写开头

例：小时候，听外婆讲过吃到双黄蛋的人运气好、有福气，偶尔吃到双黄蛋的我总是高兴得不得了。前一段时间尽管我一直很努力，但学习成绩总是不理想，很是郁闷。最近，爸爸为我准备的早餐中总会出现双黄蛋，每次爸爸惊喜地把双黄蛋端给我看时，我就会拥有一份好心情，学习状态也越来越好。在我庆幸双黄蛋带给我好运的时候，我发现了爸爸为我“制作”双黄蛋的秘密……

作文题目是《这就是幸福》，小作者的这篇文章是写父亲为了调整孩子的心情，故意买小鸡蛋制作出“双黄蛋”给孩子吃，孩子发现了“秘密”后被父亲感动，也感悟到自己的幸运、福气与双黄蛋无关，自己的幸福是父亲用爱给搭建的。文章的开头将这件事的内容基本概括了一遍，令读者对文章的内容有所了解。

五、开头渲染环境气氛

例：冬季，雪花翩然飘向大地，窗外是一个粉妆玉砌的童话世界，眼前是一片晶莹的白，我的思绪也如同轻灵的雪花，舞动起来。

作文题目是《财富》，小作者写了雪花纷飞的冬季里妈妈关爱自己的一件事，通过这件事感悟到伟大的母爱是一笔最大的财富。开篇描写了特殊的自然环境，渲染了气氛，为后文对人物的描写，事情的记叙做了铺垫。

例：夜好静好静，月光悄悄洒进我的房间，我躺在床上，想着白天的事情，久久不能入睡。

作文题目是《我做的对》，小作者写的是有一定朗诵水平的自己在朗诵比赛的复赛中被淘汰了，心情不好，但当进入决赛的同学需要帮助练习时，自己经过思想斗争，毫无保留地去帮助同学。同学在比赛中胜出，自己在分享别人的快乐的同时也慨叹自己做的对。文章开头只一句话，描写了“静静的夜”，“悄悄洒进房间的月光”，营造了一个恬静的夜晚，一如小作者“做对了”后那颗坦然、满足、平静的心境。

好的作文！好的开端！好的成绩！预祝我们九小小升初的学生考个好成绩，进入自己理想的中学！

Recently the rise in phenomenon of the graduates signing up for the army has aroused public concern. According to a research, about 31% of graduates sign up for the army this year, which sets a new record during these ten years.

最近在高校毕业生现象的增加引起了公众的关注。根据研究表明，今年大约31%的毕业生报名参军，创下近十年来的记录。

The reasons why so many graduates sign up for the army can be complicated. First of all, most of them are attracted by the outstanding treatment. Besides, joining the army can release the pressure of looking for the job. Finally, a number of graduates treat the army as a group which can strengthen their bodies and train their mental strength.

那么多毕业生报名参军的原因是很复杂的。首先，大部分人是被其丰厚的待遇所吸引；除此之外，参军可以减轻找工作的压力；最后，有些毕业生把军队看作是可以加强身体素质和加强心理素质的一个群体。

As far as I concerned, I agree on the opinion that the army can train graduates well, but I doubt it can solve the problem of obtaining employment. So I call on treating signing up for the army properly.

就我而言，我同意军队可以好好的培养毕业生，但我对它能解决就业问题表示怀疑。所以我觉得应该参军也要适当。

[毕业生参军高三英语作文

今天是7月9日，大家的心情都格外紧张，因为我们迎来了一个重要的日子——毕业考试！

大家都万分紧张地坐在教室里，一丝不苟地看着书，俗话说得好：临阵磨枪，不快也光！而有一些同学们则拿出自己丰富的早点，好好的补充补充。有的人则一副成竹在胸的样子，悠然自得地在走廊上散着步，真是演义了世界杯的口号为胜利而来！可我觉得最紧张的还是老师，他们仍在利用最后的时间为弟子们复习还有所欠缺的知识，真是可怜天下老师心！

考试，考试，真是一轮重头戏！清脆的铃声一响，大家便各自奔向了自己的考场，自己的考号了。我的考号是107，在六三班考，也就是第三考场。各坐其位后，随着洁白的考卷发向考生后，一场没有硝烟的战斗就开始了。只见刚才还充满欢声笑语的考场立刻鸦雀无声，同学们的眼球也如被磁铁死死吸住了一般，动都不动弹。哗哗的笔尖划过的声音，紧张得让人无法呼吸。我也不甘示弱，细心地答了起来，题虽然很简单，可稍不注意，带来的便是后悔了，只有做起草稿才会奋笔疾书，真不愧是慎思之呀！不一会儿，我便突破了填空题，接下来的便是判断题了，遇到判断题，我便有个怪圈，总要在这留下一个红叉叉，于是在分析和判断时，我都格外小心，希望不要有失误啊！时间如流水一般流去，考场的奋笔疾书又变成了看卷沉思，作图题和应用题看来难住了他们，可我却来了劲，因为我的拿手好戏来了。随着三角板和直尺的移动，我兵不血刃地闯过作图题，然而应用题中的一道圆锥计算题却让我有些为难。挺复杂的！这几乎让我无从下手，算出的答案也不敢确定，时间留给我的机会越来越少了，要收卷了，我狠狠心，写上了一个答案便交上了卷子。交卷的一刹那，我的心仿佛进入了无底洞，久久不能拔出，真希望幸运之神眷顾我呀！

接下来的语文考试也同样紧张，不过我轻松搞定，真是一次紧张的考试！它将永远的留在我的记忆中！

[毕业考试的作文