中考英语作文过渡词衔接词【汇集20篇】

幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确， 字迹工整，80-100词。

范文

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。

根据下面的汉语提示写一个60字左右的口头通知：

假如你是班长，你们要举办英语讲座(lecture)。

1 时间：3 月1日星期五下午3 点至五点

2 地点：阶梯教室(lecture theatre)

3 讲座人：北京大学李平教授

4 报告的内容：怎样学英语

5 要求大家准时出席 (attend)，并且可以向他咨询有关的问题

例文：

Announcement

Girls and boys / Ladies and gentlemen，

May I have your attention，please ? / Attention，please.

I ve got announcement to make./ I m very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held in the lecture hall / theater from 3 p.m .to 5 p.m. on Friday，March 1st.It will be given by Professor Li Ping from Beijing University. The topic is How to learn English well .You may take notes if you like. And you may ask any question on English learning / study after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time / don t be late.

That s all，thank you.

[英语作文题目专项训练题中考备考

Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.

I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.

First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.

At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score

Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.

And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.

I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.

长这么大，无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活，好多人认为我们很快乐，其实我们也有一些烦恼，比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。

我今年13岁了，个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几，但我不是不张，只是长得慢，一年只长几厘米，害得我妈着急死了，我也很着急，希望我快点长高，因为长不高太麻烦了。

第一：让我很没面子，同学们经常那我开玩笑，比如有一次，我和林启哲上厕所，旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友，他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他：“小朋友，你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”，然后他嘲笑我说：“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。

还有一次，我和林启哲去超市shopping，本来是很开心的一件事，可当我来到收银台时，那个阿姨笑着问林启哲：“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了，林企鹅笑着解释完，走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我，我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新，我想找个机会报复一下

第二，让我体育总是比不过别人，个子不高肯定体育不好，尤其是什么跑步不行啊。

还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个，已经六年了，从来没变过，又一次，国旗下表演，前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题，刚好我是最近的，他问我，我没想到，她在哪里提醒我才明白，让我一下很难堪，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。

我恨不得快点长高，但事与愿违，我只好自嘲：“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮，只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。

（浙江金华中考作文）Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的创建和谐校园活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴 趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! Ive been here for nearly a year. Im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Tom

中考英语满分作文：

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! Ive been here for nearly a year. Im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.

[中考英语满分作文创建和谐校园

our city is a new and developing city, and was built at the beginning of 1980s. the infrastructure for water, gas, electricity and other energy in this area is complete and sufficient.

from here one can travel to any place by sea, by air or by land. and there is a highway leading to the capital, beijing. besides there are many other advantages for the investors to work here. for example, the areas around this city are rich in natural resources.

the public order is very nice and so on. the most impor ant. thing is that the government of this city supports foreign investors in many respects. in a sentence, this city is filled with enthusiasm and vigor. it is a good place for investors.

标题：中考英语作文题目为感谢信的写法

关键词：中考英语作文题目

导读：中考英语作文题目虽然是我们没有办法准确预测的，但是有些类型的题目还是出现频率比较高的。下面我们就挑选了“感谢信”这种题材为大家介绍一篇优秀的范文，帮助大家。

假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊.校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏.请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信.注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with,

stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng,

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. Since then, we have become very close friends. I think I’ll try to help others just like you.

Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.Yours,

Liu Yan

桑德斯上校退休后拥有的所有财产只是一家靠在高速公路旁的小饭店。饭店虽小，但颇具特色，与众不同。可最受欢迎的、也是客人最爱吃的一道菜就是他发明烹制的香酥可口的炸鸡，仅此就给他带来了一笔可观的财富。多年来，他的客人一直对他烹制的炸鸡赞赏有加。可是令他万万没想到的是，由于高速公路改道别处，饭店的生意突然间也一落千丈，最后只好关门歇业。被逼无奈，桑德斯上校决定向其他饭店出售他制作炸鸡的配方，以换取微薄的回报。

在推销的过程中，没有一家饭店愿意购买他的配方，并且还不时地嘲笑他。一个人在任何年龄被人嘲笑都不是件令人愉快的事，更何况到了退休的年龄还被人嘲笑，这就更令人难以接受了。而这恰恰发生在了桑德斯上校身上。他不但被人嘲笑并且接连不断地被人拒绝，可见这些经历对他的影响有多么巨大。但他始终没有放弃，在没有找到买主之前，他开着车走遍了全国，吃住都在车上，就在被别人拒绝了1009次后，才有人终于同意采纳他的想法，购买他的配方。从此后他的连锁店遍布全世界;也被载入了商业史册。这就是肯德基的由来。

人们为了纪念这位桑德斯上校，就在所有的肯德基店前树立一尊他的塑像，以此作为肯德基的形象品牌。俗话说：“神枪手是一枪一枪打出来的!”缺乏坚持不懈的毅力或者认为自己不能得到自己想要的东西，这两者都是阻碍大多数人勇于改变的关键原因。如果你能够紧紧抓住自己的目标不放并坚持不懈，那么很快你就会超过大多数人。记住，是你掌握着自己的生活。如果你一心想达到一个目标，就一定会有办法取得成功。

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

这次期中考试，学生英语成绩很不理想，两极分化十分明显，部分语法知识的掌握不够牢固，尤其是个别题 反复做过几次也没能把握好，阅读理解能力和书面表达能力比较弱。具体有以下几点：

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，学生遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强，阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。

造成这种结果的原因是多方面的，但最重要的有下面几方面：

1.对学生要求不够严格;部分学生偷懒。

2.没能充分调动学生的积极性;提高课堂教学效率。

3. 典型题讲解不够，训练不到位。

4.平时检查督促力度不够。

在今后的教学中，

1、继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功。

2、引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力。

3、培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题。

4、讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语。

5、在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。

6、设计全面、高校的课外作业，并进一步培养学生良好的书写习惯，做到整洁、规范，正确地书写;每周写一篇作文。

7、在教学过程中， 还需加大学习力度，积极研究探索教学方法并及时改变，就一定能提高整体英语水平。

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径：

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

I have a lot of aspirations. but what i desire most is to have no examinations.

We are always told that examinations aim to check what we have learned. but i dont think so. examination is not the best way, especially in the primary school. examinations, composition examinations in particular, will bring students, teachers and parents a great deal of pressure. to cope with the examination, some students just remember the model essays by rote. it will do no good to the improvement of writing.

The students scores can be measured by their daily in-class study and by the completion of their everyday homework. if we do in this way, all the students and teachers will have a pleasant time every day.

翻译：

我有很多愿望，但我最渴望的就是不要考试。

我们总是被告知考试的目的是为了检测我们学到了什么，但是我不这么认为。考试不是最好的方式，特别是在小学。考试，特别是作文考试，会给学生、教师、学生家长带来很大的压力。为了应付作文考试，一些学生仅仅是死记硬背范文，这对提高学生的写作没有什么好处。

学生的成绩可以通过课内的日常学习和每天家庭作业的完成情况来衡量。如果我们用这种方法检查学习效果，所有的学生和教师每天都很快乐。

一、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely/totally/entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way/respect/aspect.

3. A and B differ in…

4. A differs from B in…

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in…

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B…

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B…

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B…

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B…However, A…; on the other hand, B…

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…

二、演绎法常用的句型

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5.The reasons are as follows.

三、因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result/therefore/thus/hence/consequently/for this reason/because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of/Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

四、举例法常用句型

1. Here is one more example.

2. Take … for example.

3. The same is true of…

4. This offers a typical instance of…

5. We may quote a common example of…

6. Just think of…

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

My three middle school life is coming to an end.

In these past three years, we all have experienced a lot.

We have many good friends who studied and played together.

Our respectable teachers has taught us so many things that how to study, how to deal with questions, how to get along with others. Thanks for my teachers education for me.

Now, Im going to try my best to complete my lessons and use the freetime to do meaningful things.

I think I will miss you who are our friends and teachers.

我三年的初中生活即将结束。

在过去的三年里，我们都经历了许多。

我们有许多一起学习玩耍的朋友。

我们尊敬的老师教会我们很多东西，如何学习、如何处理问题、怎么与人相处。多些我的老师对我的教育。

现在，我将会尽我所能完成我的学业，利用课余时间去做有意义的事情。

我想我将会想你们的我的朋友、我的老师!

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

韩梅是我最好的朋友，我们从出生开始就彼此认识了。因为我们是双胞胎。她是我的姐姐。就像很多的双胞胎姐妹一样，我们长得几乎一模一样。最容易区分我们两个的方法是她在手臂上有一个伤疤。那都是我的错。在我们六岁的时候我们在楼梯旁边玩之后我们不小心把她推下楼梯。她受伤了，但是一点都没有怪我。这就是她的伤疤的来历。自从那时候起，我们的父母总是通过那个伤疤来区分我们。韩梅在学习上比我好。所以有时候我考试不及格被妈妈批评，她就会挡住那个标志冒充我去接受批评。我很感激她。所以有时候我也会冒充她去帮她参加钢琴课，因为她对钢琴一点都不感兴趣。玩这样的游戏真的是太有趣了。

一、素材

言语类

(一)名人名言

1.大地给予所有的人是物质的精华，而最后，它从人们那里得到的回赠却是这些物质的垃圾。——惠特曼

2.地球所提供的足以满足每个人的需要，但不足以填满每个人的欲望。——甘地

3.大自然是善良的慈母，同时也是冷酷的屠夫。——雨果

4.人生欲求安全，当有五要：一要清洁空气;二要澄清饮水;三要流通沟渠;四要扫洒房屋;五要日光充足。——南丁格尔

5.我们不要陶醉于我们对自然界的胜利，对于每一次这样的胜利，自然界都报复了我们。——恩格斯

6.我们违背大自然的结果是，我们破坏了自然景观的美，自然动态的美和天籁的美。——诺曼?卡曾斯

7.人法地、地法天、天法德、道法自然。——老子

8.久在樊笼里、复得返自然。——陶渊明

9.俯仰终宇宙、不乐复何如。——陶渊明

10.山中何所有?岑上多白云只可自怡悦、不堪持寄君“诏问山中何所有”，赋诗以答。——陶弘景

11.仓满鼠雀喜、草尽兔狐愁。——包拯

12.只有服从大自然，才能战胜大自然。——达尔文

13.水光山色与人亲，说不尽，无穷好。——李清照

14.人们常常将自己周围的环境当作一种免费的商品，任意地糟蹋而不知加以珍惜.——甘哈曼

15.大自然的每一个领域都是美妙绝伦的。——亚里士多德

16.没有一个清洁美好的环境，再优裕的生活条件也无意义。——曲格平

17.自然不掺杂半丝人情。谁抵抗它，谁就被一脚踢开，谁顺从它，谁就承受其恩典。——长冈半太郎

18.人只有按照自然所启示的经验来生活。——叔本华

19.大自然斯不会欺骗我们，欺骗我们的往往是我们自己。——卢梭

20.一切都是一个行列，宇宙便是用完美的步伐前进的一个行列。——惠特曼

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(二)妙语集锦

21.人类对自然生态的道德期望必须与其对自然生态的道德责任相联系，人类与自然生态之间必须建立一种等价交换机制，以此限制、消除人类对自然生态不负责任的邪恶行为和自利欲望的膨胀，匡正天人之间的严重不和谐关系。

——张立文

22.可持续发展是既满足当代人的需要，又不对后代满足其需要的能力构成危害的发展。

——世界环境与发展委员会对”可持续发展”的定义

23.人类将会杀害大地母亲，抑或将使她得到拯救?如果滥用日益增长的技术力量，人类将置大地母于死地;如果克服了那导致自我毁灭的放肆的贪欲，人类则能够使她重返青春，而人类的贪欲正在使伟大母亲的生命之果——包括人类在内的一切生命造物付出代价。——汤因比：《人类与大地母亲》

24.除了足迹，我们什么也别留下;除了摄影，我们什么也别带走为了子孙后代，请留下一片净土。

——台湾森林公园环保广告

25.淡水用完——南北极取，冰山用完——过滤海水，海水用完——?——公益广告

26.人类是花的“根”，环境是未绽的“花苞”，“根”努力就能开出美丽的花朵，反之只有枯竭、谢落。

——哲学家如是言

27.鲁迅：不在污染中爆发，就在污染中死亡。

裴多芬：环境诚可贵，治理价更高，若为利润故，二者皆可抛。

——互联网上网友戏改名人言论以讽刺当今环境现状

28.罗贯中：滚滚长江东逝水，“碱”花淘尽英雄，污染依旧在，不见夕阳红。

——叶檀《关于环境问题的几点思考》的观感

事例类

数据

失落的“伊甸园”——两河流域文明的毁灭

由于土地盐碱化而引起古文明衰亡的最早案例

位于两河流域的美索不达米亚平原，是人类文明最早的发源地之一。在这片肥沃的土地上，古代世界最伟大的三个文明曾经在这里繁荣昌盛。苏美尔、亚述、阿卡德和巴比伦人相继在公元前4000至前2000年间，在这里创造了高度发达的城市文明，令世人叹为观止。然而，这些古文明的发祥地如今却是盐碱泛滥、流沙纵横的不毛之地。

就这个问题，美国亚述学家雅可布生对西亚出土楔形文字史料做过一次深入调查。他发现美索不达米亚的土壤盐碱化由来已久，始于公元前2400年的拉格什城邦，不久就发展到幼发拉底河，1000年后盐碱化进一步扩展到古巴比伦。20世纪50年代，美国芝加哥大学教授布雷伍德在伊拉克的耶莫组织过一次由地质、气象、动物和植物学家共同参加的大规模跨学科考古发掘，结果简直令人难以置信。布雷伍德在《伊拉克库尔德史前调查》中这样写道：

人类以及他们从事的农业和牧业，总的来说起一种破坏作用，尽管无人想有意去破坏……过去曾是丛林的整个平原和切姆查玛克河谷的山麓地区，如今连灌木丛都不存在了。栎树灌木丛在还未长到6英寸之前就被砍伐。由于树林和灌木树的消失以及草地每年春季全被吃光，只剩下草根，土壤大量流失，填入河流……

[点拨]世界上环境问题日趋严重和恶化，即对地球造成了重大的伤害，也对我们的生存形成了严重的威胁。

[适用话题]素材可用于“恶化”或“保护”“报复”一类的话题。

历史事件

北美“死湖”事件

美国东北部和加拿大东南部是西半球工业最发达的地区，每年向大气中排放二氧化硫2500多万吨。其中约有380万吨由美国飘到加拿大，100多万吨由加拿大飘到美国。七十年代开始，这些地区出现了大面积酸雨区，酸雨比藩茄汁还要酸，多个湖泊池塘漂浮死鱼，湖滨树木枯萎。

[点拨]我们在现代化建设的进程中，以牺牲环境为代价，只是为了满足一时的需求。而大自然却因此遭受到了不可弥补的创伤。

[适用话题]素材可用“破坏”或“报复”类话题。

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库巴唐”死亡谷”事件

巴西圣保罗以南60公里的库巴唐市，二十世纪八十年代以“死亡之谷“知名于世。该市位于山谷之中，六十年代引进炼油、石化、炼铁等外资企业300多家，人口剧增至15万，成为圣保罗的工业卫星城。企业主只顾赚钱，随意排放废气废水，谷地浓烟弥漫、臭水横流，有20%的人得了呼吸道过敏症，医院挤满了接受吸氧治疗的儿童和老人，使2万多贫民窟居民严重受害。

卡迪兹号油轮事件

1978年3月16日，美国22万吨的超级油轮“亚莫克?卡迪兹号”，满载伊朗原油向荷兰鹿特丹驶去，航行至法国布列塔尼海岸触礁沉没，漏出原油22.4万吨，污染了350公里长的海岸带。仅牡蛎就死掉9000多吨，海鸟死亡2万多吨。海事本身损失1亿多美元，污染的损失及治理费用却达5亿多美元，而给被污染区域的海洋生态环境造成的损失更是难以估量。

[点拨]人类的短视使得环境日益恶化，而人类也因此受到了相应的报应。急功近利的做法反而欲速则不达。

[适用话题]此素材可用于“和谐相处”或“可持续发展”类话题。

As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.

When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.

After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.

我们都知道，我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功，并得到别人的尊重。在我看来，成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。

当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢用手做东西。有一次，我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子，我通常做的，但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况，我真的很想放弃。然而，经过一次思考，我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分，最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴，因为我的创造力，我得到了第一个奖。

之后，我明白每当我们面对麻烦，抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。

[中考英语满分作文努力

Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can’t approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.

如今，往往是缺乏了解父母与子女之间。孩子们总是抱怨他们的父母都是过时的，而父母并不赞同他们的孩子说的和做的。因此，形成一个大的代沟。

The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future, earn and spend their own money, and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don’t quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school. Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents’ tendency to interfere in children’s daily activities.

产生代沟的原因有很多。孩子们想要自由的选择自己的朋友，选择在学校自己的班级，规划自己的未来，自己挣钱自己花，和一般运行自己的更独立的生活方式比父母允许的。同时，年轻的孩子们希望能够得到父母的，但大多数父母不太了解他们的孩子。他们认为这是他们教他们的后代的传统信仰的责任。他们想让他们听话，在学校做得很好。因此，误解往往从父母倾向于干涉孩子的日常活动。

In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.

在我看来，父母和子女间的代沟问题可以通过双方的共同努力，增进相互理解的解决。

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

外籍教师Richard想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式。假如你是李华，请以The way I go to school为题，写一篇英语短文，想Richard介绍自己的到校方式。

提示：

1. How do you go to school?

2. Why do you prefer to go in that way?

注意：

1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，并围绕你所选择的某种交通方式，写出二至三个理由，可适当发挥。

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。

3. 词数60-80个。(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)

The way I go to school

I’m Li Hua.

参考样文：

I’m Li Hua. I go to school on foot. I have several reasons for that.

First, my home is not very far from my school, it is just about two kilometers away from school. It takes me about 20 minutes to get there. Second, walking to school is a kind of exercise. It is good for my health. Third, it’s pretty safe to walk to school because there is a lot of traffic on the road at this time of a day. So I prefer going to school on foot. It’s really a good choice.