关于保护水的英语作文初一【热门20篇】

Each of us has one, two, three, even four or five ideals. Remember Leo Tolstoy once said: ideal is the beacon. Without ideal, there is no secure direction; Without direction, there is no life.

Why do I want to be animal lovers? First: I particularly sympathetic to animals, such as some stray dogs, stray cats stray animals, Ill give them while mom and dad to leave some food to eat, they will initially with a grain of salt, (because they are often some selling dog meat, and the cat, temptation, then......) So I went far away, looking at them in a secluded place finished eating, I didnt leave. The second: I know about animals in particular, almost every day I see happy pets, there will be a little information about pets. Like our little teddy - cool, I can see the cool body movements to determine what it wants.

If we live for 20 years, 30 years, animal lovers really when me, I will be banned from kill the stray animals such as dogs, cats, explore the loch ness monster really is, a cure for hydrophobic drugs, the study and the most important thing is to protect the animals, prohibit cruelty to animals, to feed the animals... To protect the environment, only in this way can the animals survive, if we cant live without animals, such as cattle, help mankind to plow.

Although I have not yet when animal lovers, but I also calculate the half animal lovers, but I still call on everyone to protect animals, starts from oneself.

我们每个人都有一个、两个、三个，甚至四五个理想。记得托尔斯泰曾经说过：理想是指路明灯。没有理想就没有坚定的方向;没有方向就没有生活。

为什么我要当动物保护者呢?第一：我对动物特别有同情心，比如一些流浪狗、流浪猫之类的流浪动物，我会趁爸爸妈妈离开的时候给它们一些食物吃，一开始它们会半信半疑，(因为它们常常被一些卖狗肉，参猫肉的，引诱，然后就……)于是我就走的远远的，在一个隐蔽的地方看着它们吃完了，我才离开。第二：我对动物特别了解，我几乎每天都看快乐宠物，里面会有些关于宠物资料。比如我家的小泰迪——阿酷，我可以看阿酷的身体动作来判断它想要干什么。

如果再过上20年，30年，我真的当上动物保护者，我一定会禁止人们掠杀猫、狗之类的流浪动物，探索出尼斯湖水怪的真正面目，研究出治愈狂犬病的药物，还有最重要的事情就是要保护好动物，禁止虐杀动物，随便给动物喂食……要保护好环境，只有这样动物才能生存下来，如果没有动物我们也无法生存的，比如说牛，帮助人类耕田。

虽然我还没有当上动物保护者，但我也算半个动物保护者了，但是我还是要呼吁大家保护动物，从自己做起。

导语：随着环境污染愈加严重，水资源也被破坏，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

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在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。

Day, night, and finally ushered in the long-awaited summer vacation. In

these two months, can"t play games every day! Besides, even if I think so, mom

and dad are certainly can"t promise. Only done to make them more satisfied, my

freedom is a bit more, this summer vacation will have a more pleasant. Combined

with the requirements of the teacher and I wish mom and dad, have a preliminary

arrangement.

Who is willing to drink the polluted water? It can cause us to be ill and even to die. We cant wait for a moment to protect our water sources. The water we use comes from oceans, lakes, rivers or streams. But many of these water sources are getting seriously polluted. Towns and cities are pouring dust into the water. Many people are throwing all kinds of dirty things into the water. Factories are pouring waste material into the water. Therefore, water sources have become so badly polluted that some of the water is unfit to drink or to use. Now it is high time that we should do something to protect our water environment from being polluted.

When I was very small, I lived in my hometown. My grandparents raised two

dogs, and I liked them very much. I watched them grow up from the little animals

to the big dogs. Every time when I leaved home for school, they would follow me

for some distance. When I walked a little far away, they would turn home. When I

went home after school, they would wait for me in the door and swayed their

tails. I knew they were welcoming me home. They were like my family members and

I learned that animals are part of our nature. We should protect them. We can

create a harmonious society.

水，人类不可缺少；水，动物不可缺少；水，植物不可缺少。水是生命的源泉，是人、动物、植物生存的必须品，是不可缺少的东西。水在地球上占2/3，海水约占全球总水量的96、5%。在余下的水量中地表水占1、78%，地下水占1、69%。人类主要利用的淡水约在全球总储水量中只占2、53%。既然我们的生活离不开水，水资源又是这么的有限，我们就应该好好保护、治理水环境。

保护、治理水环境，我们首先要从节约用水开始。如果看到水龙头没有关紧，就要马上把水龙头关紧，不能够浪费一滴水；我们可以把淘米水用来浇花，把洗脸水用来洗手，把洗衣服的水用来冲马桶；喝了半瓶的矿泉水继续揣在兜里，直到喝完为止……这些都是节约用水的好方法。

其次，我们应该好好地治理水环境。让干净的河流、湖泊永远保持干净；不能把生活垃圾、工业废水排入河流、湖泊之中。不然的话这条河流就会变成一条又黑又臭又赃的河流。如果河流、湖泊中的水一旦被污染了，我们就得把污染的水源迅速地隔离开，并及时地把垃圾清理掉，以免污染其它河流、湖泊。

生命之源——水，请信任我们，我们一定会保护好你，这是我们每个人的责任。

Like tangible cultural heritages such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden

City, intangible cultural heritages like Peking Opera and

Confucius-commemorating rituals are equally crucial. We should make our utmost

efforts to preserve intangible heritages because, without their physical form of

existence, they are in greater risk of extinction.

According to UNESCO’s Convention for the Safeguarding of Intangible

Cultural Heritage (2003), all forms of social customs and habits, folklore,

performing arts, rituals, oral traditions, festivals, traditional crafts and

various knowledge and practices about nature and universe can be classified as

intangible cultural heritages. As a country consisting of a great diversity of

ethnic groups and with time-honored history and civilization, China abounds in

intangible cultural heritages. Cultural heritages connect modern people with the

historical past, allowing them to acquire a cultural and historical identity.

Without cultural heritages, we would be rendered absolutely rootless and we

would find it hard to cope with challenges at present and in the future.

However, the modernization process poses mounting threats to intangible

heritages. Many people have a blind faith in the latest electronic devices. It

is also pathetic to see elderly people in possession of such legacies pass away

without transmitting them to the younger generation. Faced with those

challenges, we should both preserve and renovate our ancestral heritages so that

we can help contribute to the cultural diversity of the world and return to our

spiritual homeland in this age of impersonal science and technology.

随着科技的发展，我们的环境也越来越差了，清新的空气已经不在了，小编收集了关于保护环境的英语句子，欢迎阅读。

1、Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment.

爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。

2、But some people dont care about it.

但是有些人却不关心或不在意。

3、The most important question in the world today is pollution.

当今世界最重要的话题就是污染问题。

4、The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。

5、Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.

更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。

6、They waste a lot of water in their daily life.

日常生活中他们浪费很多水。

7、Something must be done to stop the pollution.

人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。

8、They throw rubbish into rivers , too.

他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。

9、Do not throw rubbish onto the ground. Do not waste water. Use both sides of paper when you write. Stop using plastic bags for shopping. Make classrooms less noisy.

不要在地上扔垃圾。不要浪费水。当你写字时要在纸的两面都要写。停止使用塑料袋去购物。减少教室里德吵闹声。

10、Planting trees Trees are very helpful and important for us.

树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。

11、No one can live without water or air.

没有人能离开水和空气生存。

12、we cant live without water.

没有水我们就不能生存。

13、We should take many measures to stop pollution.

我们应该采取许多措施去停止污染。

14、Without the shade from trees, Earth would get too hot to live on.

没有了树荫，地球将会变得太热而不能生存。

15、Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。

16、As we know , water is very important to man.

我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。

17、We need to protect Earth because it is our home.

我们需要保护地球因为它是我们的家。

18、Its our duty to save water.

节约水是我们每个人的责任。

19、We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。

20、We dont need to do big things—we can start out small.

我们不需要做大事，我们可以从小事做起。

21、Lets do our best to make it more beautiful.

让我们尽力让它更美丽。

22、We should stop factories from producing harmful gases.

我们应该阻止工厂生产有害气体。

23、If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.

如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。

24、We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.

我们一边耗尽自然资源，一边产生化学污染物。如果继续这样做的话，地球上的生物将难以生存。

25、Protecting the environment is every mans responsibility.

保护地球环境是每一个人的责任。

26、if everyone could make a big contribution to environmental protection, our home will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人为环境保护作出一点贡献，我们的家园会变得更加美丽。

27、Protecting the environment，everyone，s duty.

保护环境，人人有责。

28、The short life of the flowers away, leaving behind the beauty is forever.

带走的花儿生命短暂，留下的美丽才是永远。

29、Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.

许多国家制定了法律来保护大气、森林和海洋资源，制止环境污染。

30、The protection of trees, that is, to protect themselves。

保护树木，就是保护自己。

31、In addition to the photos, nothing taken away; In addition to the footprints, nothing left.

除了相片，什么都不要带走;除了脚印，什么都不要留下。

32、Have green trees, have the pulse of the earth.

树木拥有绿色，地球才有脉搏。

33、Earth is our home, you rely on green.

地球是我家，绿化靠大家。

34、We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.

我们一边耗尽自然资源，一边产生化学污染物。如果继续这样做的话，地球上的生物将难以生存。

35、Protecting the environment is every mans responsibility.

保护地球环境是每一个人的责任。

36、if everyone could make a big contribution to environmental protection, our home will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人为环境保护作出一点贡献，我们的家园会变得更加美丽。

37、Protecting the environment，everyone，s duty.

保护环境，人人有责。

38、The short life of the flowers away, leaving behind the beauty is forever.

带走的花儿生命短暂，留下的美丽才是永远。

39、Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.

许多国家制定了法律来保护大气、森林和海洋资源，制止环境污染。

40、The protection of trees, that is, to protect themselves。

保护树木，就是保护自己。

41、In addition to the photos, nothing taken away; In addition to the footprints, nothing left.

除了相片，什么都不要带走;除了脚印，什么都不要留下。

42、Have green trees, have the pulse of the earth.

树木拥有绿色，地球才有脉搏。

43、Earth is our home, you rely on green.

地球是我家，绿化靠大家。

There is an English saying.It says,"Early to bed, early to rise, makes a

man healthy, wealthy and wise." Have you ever heard it before?It means that we

should go to bed early and get up early.If we do,we shall be healthy.People must

have enough time to sleep.We should sleep for 8 hours every day.So we must do

our homework quickly and go to bed before 10 p.m.Proverbs can always give us

some enlightenment.To know some proverbs is good for us.

有的人喜欢香浓的咖啡，有的人喜欢甘甜的果汁，有的人喜欢刺激的啤酒，有的人喜欢清香的暖茶。而我只喜欢在清闲的时候，坐在午后慵懒的阳光下，喝一杯晶莹澄澈的白开水。它纯净、透明，静静地躺在玻璃杯中，不泛起一丝涟漪，像一个精灵，带给我无限启示。

一杯白开水，再普通不过了，它总是给我安静的感觉。在生活中，难免遇到波澜，这时我们要保持这种安静。心如止水，不为波澜而惊起一丝波纹。我们的心境正应像一杯白开水，透明，不带有任何杂质。即使处于乱世之中，只要有水一样的心境，就不会为其所动。虽然我们并不追求“遗世独立，羽化而登仙”的超脱，但是保持水一样的心境总会使我们在混乱中找到规律，在嘈杂中追寻宁静。

一杯白开水，平平淡淡，喝下去，不带一丝味道。有的人喜欢用水冲咖啡，或者用水沏一杯香茗，这样可以在平淡中加入一些特别的味道。我们是否了解那些味道就来自那种平淡呢？白开水以这样的平淡包容一切，使杂质显出自己的味道。很难想象用茶水冲果汁，或用啤酒泡咖啡会是怎样的味道。生活亦是如此，平平淡淡的生活总是最纯净的，当我们厌烦这种平淡时，只需向这平淡中加一点佐料，然后去感受这其中的香浓与刺激。咖啡不能多喝，同样地，生活也不能时时充满刺激，在短暂地刺激过后总要回归平淡地。有的人说“平平淡淡才是真”，这话还是有一定道理的。

一杯白开水，在阳光下闪耀着晶莹的光芒。它不是水晶，但却要有水晶一般的火彩。有人说过“是金子，总要发光的”，这仿佛在说不是金子就永远不会发光，但一杯白开水颠覆了这句话。我们或许生来并不是金子，但我们不应因此而自暴自弃。不是金子，就努力做一杯白开水吧！在阳光下发出自己独特的光辉。

一杯白开水，纯净又不失内涵，安静又焕出光芒，给我以无限的联想。有时想想，在如水般平淡的生活中保持如水的心境，在这种条件下，做一个如白开水的人，这未尝不是一件好事。

新学期新打算，就要有新的目标，开始我们新的旅行，向着我们的新目标去奋斗，去实现我们崇高的理想。下面是小编为您带来的是初一新生活英语作文相关内容，希望对您有所帮助。

With elementary school knowledge, with the character of primary school, with primary school habits, we entered the junior high school gate, at this time, we have become a veritable junior high school students. We are faced with the first turning point in our life, exciting and exciting.

Entering the class, everything is strange, strange students, strange teachers, even tables and chairs are strange, I am happy, I am lonely.

Look at the timetable. Im almost shocked. So many classes, what history, biology, geography... Its so scary. And this is the textbook, I have never touched, I am happy, I am helpless.

In class, or the teacher speaks too fast, or I do not have books, and do not listen, I lost, I confused. If I listen carefully, even to the realm of self denial, I rejoice, and I rejoice.

Ah! This magical first day! Turn me into a sentimental person, turn me into a sentimental person, change me into a wise and sensible person, and turn me into a person who knows how to value time.

Now I realize how beautiful this new stage and new life are!

带着小学的知识，带着小学的性格，带着小学的习惯，我们踏进了初中的大门，此时，我们已是名副其实的初中生。我们面临着人生中第一个转折点，又是激动，又是兴奋。

踏进班级，一切都是陌生的，陌生的同学，陌生的老师，就连桌椅也是陌生的，我高兴，我寂寞。

看看课程表，我差不多快惊呆了，这么多门课，什么历史呀、生物呀、地理呀......真是多得让人感到可怕。而且这是课本都是我从没接触过的，我欢乐，我无助。

上课时，或是老师讲得太快，或是我没有书，而听不进去，我失落，我迷茫。若我听得很认真，甚至到了“忘我”的境界，我喜悦，我欢腾。

啊！这神奇的初一啊！把我变成了一个多愁善感的人，把我变成感情丰富的人，把我变成一个乖巧懂事的人，把我变成一个懂得珍惜时间的人。

现在，我才领悟到，初一这个新阶段、新生活是多么美好啊！

[初一新生活英语作文

Today is my busy day.Let me tell you the plan of me .

In the morningI must get up very early to makes breakfast for my family .They have breakfast at about 7:00.Then will I play badminton outside with my good friend at 8:00.

In the noonI should back home and make lunch for them .After having lunch I will wash the dish.Then I will take part in a gathering of friends after 2:00.At 7:00pmI should make supper.

At nightI should clean the room and do some homework.

今天是我忙碌的一天。让我告诉你我的计划。

早上我必须很早就起床做早餐为我的家人。他们大约在7点吃早餐。然后将八点我和我的好朋友在外面打羽毛球。

在中午我回家应该为他们的午餐。午饭后我将洗菜。然后我将参加一个朋友的聚会在两点之后。我晚上7:00应该做晚饭。

在晚上我要打扫房间和做一些作业。

[初一英语作文：my busy day

A few days ago, I saw lots of uncle aunt spitting in the street.

Not, today again see a school wearing a black T-shirt uncle, he casually spit onto the ground. I quickly come forward to stop, I didnt think uncle didnt look at me, continue to go forward.

Sometimes, the grandpa in the home also can make the same mistake. Driving well, suddenly to a screeching halt, opened the window one mouthful phlegm vomit. When I stop him, he said: "it doesnt matter." But Im not discouraged, see uncle, aunt spit anywhere, I will stop them in time. Remind them to pay attention next time. If they had followed my advice, my in the mind is better than eating the honey still sweet. For example, the last time I go to the park to play, my father and mother saw a aunt walked into the grass, vomitted an one mouthful phlegm. I saw hurriedly block, aunt smiled at me and said "Im sorry, but I will pay attention next time." At that time, dont mention how much I have a sense of achievement.

Whenever grandpa didnt listen to my advice, I would reason with him. "Spit to influenza infection, diseases such as tuberculosis, harm is very big, do not only their uncivilized, also hurt others, also caused great damage to our environment." Grandpa heard my these words have never spit sputum. Mistakes can change or good comrade!

For one hundred days after the youth Olympic Games, let us work together, starts from me, do civilization from nanjing, nanjing and beauty.

前几天，我看到了由很多叔叔阿姨在马路上随地吐痰。

这不，今天放学又看到了一位穿着黑T恤的叔叔，他很随意地把痰吐到了地上。我急忙上前阻止，没想到叔叔看都没看我一眼，继续往前走。

有时，家里的爷爷也会犯同样的错误。开车开得好好的，突然来个急刹车，打开车窗吐一口痰。我阻止他时，他却说：“没关系的。”但我并没有气馁，看到有叔叔，阿姨随地乱吐痰，我就会及时阻止他们。提醒他们下次注意。如果他们采纳了我的建议，我的心里会比吃了蜜还甜。例如，上次我和爸爸妈妈去公园玩，看见一位阿姨走进了草丛，吐了一口痰。我看了连忙阻止，阿姨友好地冲我笑了一下，说“不好意思，我下次会注意的。”那时，别提我多有成就感了。

每当爷爷不听我劝告的时候，我就会跟他讲道理。“吐痰容易传染流行性感冒，肺结核等疾病，危害很大，这样做不但自己不文明，还害了其他人，对我们的环境也会造成很大的破坏。”爷爷听了我的这一番话就再也没有随地吐过痰。知错能改还是好同志嘛!

为了一百天以后的青奥会，让我们大家同心协力，从我做起，做文明南京人，创美丽南京城。

我们要保护野生动物、爱护树木……

We should protect the wild animal, love trees...

今天，我正在里院子和娇娇、苗苗玩吊床，突然，一阵冷风扑面而来，把我们三个冻得直哆嗦，回头一看，一棵新载的小树苗被风给吹歪了，我跑过去一看，小树苗幸亏没死，这时候苗苗和娇娇过来了，苗苗拽着我的手说：“赶紧玩吊床吧!”娇娇说：“人家正在把小树苗扶起来。”苗苗拽着我的手把我拉到吊床上，娇娇往小树苗这面拽。我就说：“我把小树苗扶起来在玩吊床吧”，大家都同意了。于是我们把小树苗重新栽了起来。

Today, I was in the yard, Miao Miao and Jiao Jiao play a hammock, suddenly, a gust of wind blowing, the three of us shivered, a look back, a new set of saplings is blown askew, I went over to look, but not dead saplings, while Miao Miao and Jiao Jiao here, Miao Miao grabbed my hand and said: "to play a hammock!" Jiao Jiao said: "people are small trees up." Miao Miao grabbed my hand and pulled me into the hammock, Jiao Jiao to the pull saplings. I said: "I put the young trees in the hammock, play up", you agree. Then we put the young trees to plant.

干完之后，我们才高高兴兴的去玩吊床去了。保护环境，人人有责。

After the job, were happy to play to the hammock. Protect environment, everyones responsibility.

City cleanness is the symbol and reflection of the civilization of that city. It is obvious that if one comes to a clean and bright city, he will have a comfortable feeling and will be in a joyful mood. On the contrary, a dirty and polluted city may drive him away. So the deanness is very important to a city. But how can we get it?

The key lies in the citizensawareness of the importance of deanness. Citizens are the owners of their city. If everyone dwelling in the city keeps the city clean enthusiastically just as they keep their house clean, then streets will become cleaner and cleaner, buildings brighter and brighter, and consequently, the city will surely become more and more beautiful.

Some measures must be taken to keep our cities clean. For example, we should set a limit to noises and exhaust gases, and invest in the planting of trees and flowers. Moreover, some education and punish ment are necessary too. I believe in the future our city will become more beautiful gardens in a common effort of all the urban inhabitants.

On Monday the typhoon had gone. Luckily it was not hurricane. And it had only been here for 2 days. Also after this typhoon, not many people lost their lives. On Saturday I finally finished my second learning. Some students were very happy because we finished all summer learning. But some students sighed because of the heavy homework. I wasn’t sad and wasn’t happy, either. I just know we have been junior three students. We must work hard to enter a good senior high school and pave the way for the future. So heavier homework, shorter holiday and more study are all a must

Panda is familiar by more and more people as the development of Internet. Now people can see the live show from the Internet. These lovely angels are favored by the fans from all over the world. What they do in the daily life makes people laugh out loudly. No one can resist the charm from these angels. But it is known to all that panda is dying out, because it is not easy for them to get birth to the new babies. What’s more, people damage the environment, which makes panda lose their home. We can do small things to protect them. When we go to the zoo, we should not throw away the rubbish and keep quiet, in the purpose of not to disturb these lovely creature. We love panda, it is our duty to protect them from dying out.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Our society in constant development, our living standard has been improved, but my door but misses the point, that is environmental protection.

You see, lawn grass became yellow, and the roadside trees listlessly, dense forest under the handfuls of sharp saw also gradually away from us. This, but the fact that iron!

In the countryside, people cultivation of levelling, and so many trees lost their lives, however, these precious land because of improper use, was a wild field soil. In this way, a vast expanse of land with a large abandoned, year after year, day after day, past the dense forest will one day be a state long, become a piece of the other people hate the boundless gobi desert!

Everybody should know area Tuo lake, the biological variety there, especially the hairy crabs there, with a meat tender yellow, more and more the favour of people. Now, Tuo lake surface is covered by algae is full, the water had turned out to be a tan. And also the dead fish floating in the lake, garbage, and black water plant, are miserable sufferings

Careless human ah, you wake up, we live on the earth has not been able to afford, the forests on the earth in the sharply reduce, desert and wilderness is a miraculous increase. Clean fresh water resources is constantly reduced, however, dirty ChouShui river is in the unceasing increase, shouldnt, all is false?

Want people to listen to me a advice: please dont covet interests and cut down a tree, please dont waste water because of the naughty. Although these are only some things, but the cumulative up one by one and is a great thing. I believe that in the near future, our world will become more beautiful.

我们的社会在不断的发展，我们的生活水平也在不断的提高，可是我门却忽略了一点，那就是环境保护。

你瞧，草坪上的小草变黄了，路边的大树无精打采，茂密的森林也在一把把锋利的电锯之下渐渐的离我们远去。这，可是铁一样的事实!

在农村，人们垦荒造田，许许多多的树木就这样失去了生命，然而，这些宝贵的土地有因为使用不当，又被沦为荒田野土。就这样，一大片一大片的土地被荒废了，年复一年，日复一日，昔日那茂密的森林总有一天会一反长态，变成一片另人讨厌的茫茫的戈壁沙滩!

大家应该都知道五河沱湖吧，那儿的生物品种繁多，特别是那儿的大闸蟹，，以个大肉嫩、黄多而倍受人们的青睐。而现在呢，沱湖水面上皆被水藻覆盖满了，水竟然变成了黃褐色!而且湖水中还漂浮的死鱼、垃圾、还有黑乎乎的水草，真是惨不忍

糊涂的人类啊，你们醒醒吧，我们赖以生存的地球已经承受不了了，地球上的森林在急剧的减少，沙漠和荒野却奇迹般的增加。干净的淡水资源在不断的减少，然而，肮脏的臭水河却在不断的增加，难道，这些都是假的吗?

希望人们听我的一句劝告：请不要因贪图利益而砍树，请不要因为贪玩而而浪费水。虽然这些只是一些小事，但是一件件累计起来，就是一件大事。我相信，不久的将来，我们的世界将会变的更加美好。

Welcome to my hometown!Fujian is my hometown.It is a modern and busy province.It has a long history.There are many big supermarkets,beautiful gardens and good factories here.It is very easy to go shopping.You can see green hills,big trees and nice flowers.There are many restaurants in Haimen.You can enjoy Haimen goat.It tastes very delicious.Many visitors come here to enjoy it.

There are many good places to visit.There is a park and a big Shopping Mall.You can see films in Renmin Theatre.My school is one of the best schools in my hometown.It is on Changjiang Road.It is very beautiful.I hope you can come and visit soon.

欢迎来到我的家乡!福建是我的家乡。这是一个现代和繁忙的省份。它有一个悠久的历史。有许多大型超市,美丽的花园和良好的工厂在这里。这是很容易去购物。你可以看到青山,大树和漂亮的花。有许多餐馆在海门。你可以享受海门山羊。它尝起来很好吃。许多游客来这里是为了享受它。

有很多参观的好去处。有一个公园和一个大的购物中心。你可以在人民剧院看电影。我的学校是最好的学校在我的家乡。它是长江路上。它非常漂亮。我希望你能很快来拜访。

文章文体：议论文。

文章要点：1.保护环境的重要性；2.学生在家庭中节约能源的具体做法和感想；3.今后的打算。

文章框架：文章应该是三部分两段式。第一段（包括要点前两部分）1.环保的重要性；2  接着是站在学生的角度谈谈家庭节约能源的具体方法，第二段写第三要点，即谈谈今后打算。  重要句型短语：It is important to protect our environment, the energy in the world is limited. turn off the light and other appliance when you ,re not using them, wed better not waste the energy, use public transportation, recycle the waste，I can learn more to develop new and clear energy, like the energy from the wind and solar 等。

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With the development of our society, energy in the world becomes more and more limited, so it is quite important for us to save energy and to protect our environment. As a student, there are a lot of methods we can do to save energy at home. For example, first, we can turn off the light as well as other appliances when we are not using them. Second, recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. Whats more, it is suggested to use public transportation more instead of private cars.

Above all, everyone can make a great contribution to our environment. I hope I can learn more to develop new and clear energy, like energy from the wind and solar.