关于保护水的英语作文初一（推荐20篇）

Many years ago, I saw the movie Harry Porter and I was so impressed by it. The magical world was so wonderful that I wanted to live there. My thoughts were so active that I always dreamed about myself walking in the magical world and taking the risk. So I decided to write down the things I dreamed about and then made these become a book. This is my little dream, when the book is finished, I want to read them to my friends and my brother. Now I have written down a few pages, I continue to write every day. I get great motivation to finish my little dream. I imagine how happy I will be when I finish the book, so I keep writing it when I have the thoughts. I am so proud of myself for I never giving up to finish my dream.

there are a great many hobbies to choose from. some people enjoy collecting coins or stampes,

ohers choose to spend their time on sports or music.

I have many hobbies,but playing basketball is my favorite one.

At weekends, we always build a team to play basketball against anoher one in our neighbourhood.

The competitions brought us so much fun.

I think playing basketball is a good way to build up ones body and relax oneself.

But I will always remember that its unwise to spend too much time playing.

现在有很多爱好可供选择，一些人喜欢收集硬币或者邮票，其他人则喜欢把时间花费在音乐和运动方面.

我也有许多爱好，但是打篮球是我最喜欢的，

周末，我们会和邻居建立一个小组对打篮球，比赛带给我们很多的乐趣，

因此我认为打篮球是一个好的方式增强体质以及放松自己，但是我也认为花费太多时间打篮球也是不明智的.

Animals Need Protecting

There are more and more endangered animals at present，so how to protect them has been our task of top priority 。 Its wrong for people to hunt animals for their meat and feather，for they are our good friends。We should protect them instead of killing them。Giant pandas，which are one of the endangered animals，live in the forests and live on bamboo lealves。They can just live safely in the natural protection zones。We should stop killing animal and protect them。

As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference。

大家好，我是大家熟悉的水，以前的我，美丽清澈，而现在的我，又臭又脏。而这一切的一切，都是人类造成的。

以前的我，伴着泉水的叮咚响，唱着欢快的歌，一路欢快的跑着，许多的人都会在我的身边散步，嬉戏，我总是快乐的。而现在，一切都变了，工厂里排放出来的废水流进了我的身体，前来游玩的人们总会把垃圾扔在我的身体上，日积月累，我身体上的垃圾越拉越多，原来清澈的我也变得肮脏不堪，人们经过我的身旁总会捂紧鼻子，逃命似的从我的身旁跑过，每当这时，我总会流泪，我替人类感到悲哀。

我是生命的源泉。人类对我的需要仅次于氧气。人类如果不摄入某一种维生素或矿物质，也许还能继绩活几周或带病活上若干年，但人类如果没有我，却只能活几天。人体细胞的重要成分就是我，我占成人体体重的60——70％。人体的每一个器官都含有极其丰富的水，血液和肾脏中的水占83％，心脏为80％，肌肉为76％，脑为75％，肝脏68％，就是骨头也含有22％的水分。

人体的各种生理活动都需要我，比如我可以溶解各种营养物质，脂肪和蛋白质等要成为悬浮于水中的液体状态才能被吸收；我在血管、细胞之间川流不息，把氧气和营养物质运送到组织细胞，在把代谢废物运出体外，总之，人的各种代谢和生理活动都离不开我。

但是，人类好像对于这些都浑然不知似的，还是一味的破坏我，如果他们再这样破坏，那么世界上最后一滴水将是人类的眼泪。

人类只知道，动物和植物有衰老的过程，其实我也会衰老，而且，我的衰老对人体健康也有害，水分子是主链状结构，我如果不经常受到撞击，也就是说，如果我不经常处于运动状态，而是处于静止状态时，这种链状结构会不断地扩散，增大，最后就会变成人类所说的——死水。

”人类，快醒醒吧。“我呼吁道。

Punctuality is a good habit. It means to do things at the fixed time. When others are late and you have waited for a long time,you must be angry. And then you should try to be punctual. So you will win others’ trust. At the same time if you are always not punctual, you will become lazier and lazier, even fail in the life.

No punctuality is a bad habit. We should get rid of it. We should try to be punctual forever.

[Punctuality初一英语作文

1、But save square inch ground, stay with descendant Geng.

但存方寸地，留与子孙耕。

2、Protection of the environment is everyones responsibility.

保护环境，人人有责。

3、Rescue the Earth is to rescue future.

拯救地球就是拯救未来。

4、The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

水的量是适宜的饮料是越来越少了。

5、But some people dont care about it.

但有些人不关心它。

6、It is very important to take care of our environment.

这是非常重要，我们要保护我们的环境。

7、Now people pay more attention to how to pretend our environment .With the development of science and technology,it becomes more important to pretend our environment.In china,prentending environment is very nomal in our life for the Olympics coming or the peoples sense of environmental pretection.

环境保护是当今社会的一大热点问题。随着科技的发展，环保显得越来越重要。在中国，也许是奥运会的临近，也许是人们意识的崛起，环保已经成为我们身边一个普遍的存在了。

8、It“s our duty to protect our environment.

它”是我们的责任来保护我们的环境。

9、Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染。

10、The rubbish will pullute the enviroment .It is bed for our health.So please dont throw about the rubbish.

垃圾污染环境，损害健康，不要到处扔垃圾

11、Its our duty to protect our environment。

保护我们生存的环境是我们的责任和义务。

12、The waste water will pour into rivers,lakes and fields.It will harm the crops ,kill a large number of fish.

废水流到河里，湖里和田野里，污染农作物，杀死大量的鱼。

13、Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment.

这是每个人的责任，爱护和保护环境。

14、Cherish the source of nature, totally make a living a life green.

珍惜自然之源，共营生命绿色。

15、It is very important to take care of our environment.

这是非常重要，我们要保护我们的环境。

16、Something must be done to stop the pollution.

必须采取某种措施来制止污染。

17、We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.

我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐的树木。

18、We should plant more flowers and trees.

我们应该种更多的花和树。

19、If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果人人都为保护环境作出贡献，世界将变得更加美丽。

20、We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.

我们必须拿起一些垃圾，扔到垃圾桶它。

21、As we know , water is very important to man.

我们知道，水是非常重要的人。

22、We cant live without water.

我们的生活离不开水。

23、We should not throw litter onto the ground.

我们不应该往地上扔垃圾。

24、Treat kindly the Earth is to treat kindly oneself.

善待地球就是善待自己。

25、Trees are very helpful and important for us.

树是非常有益的，对我们很重要。

26、How to pretect our enviroment has been one of the most difficult problem in the world.

如何保护环境已经成为世界最大难题之一。

27、We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

我们应该种更多的树，为了生活得更好，更健康的未来。

28、Keep the enviroment clean and tidy.We have only one earth.We should try our best to pretect it,make our home more and more beautiful.

保持环境干净和整洁，我们只有一个地球，应该保护它，使我们的家园更加美丽。

水，是生命的源泉。我们的一生都离不开水，所以我们应该珍惜水资源。可是在如今，很多人都认为水是取之不尽、用之不竭的。所以水资源正面临着危机。有人可能会想“地球表面有71%是海洋，这么多水，有什么危机呢?”可是我们能够利用的水资源只有地表淡水和埋藏较浅的地下淡水资源，而这部分水资源仅占全球总水量的0.32%。所以对于水资源，我们能够做的最基本的就是节约。

有资料显示，我国是一个缺水严重的国家，淡水资源仅为世界平均水平的四分之一，在世界上名列110位，是全球人均水资源最贫乏的国家之一。我国作为世界知名的大国，水资源如此匮乏，这个问题一定要想办法解决。

2010年云南遭遇百年一遇的全省性特大旱灾，干旱范围之广、时间之长、程度之深、损失之大，均为历史少有。生活在从未发生过旱灾地区的我一直理解不了水在云南的珍贵，但是今年的寒假去了云南之后，我切身感受到了水在当地的宝贵。

这次去云南的行程中一共遇见了三位导游，这三位导游都会在早上给每人发一瓶矿泉水，这三位导游是分别在不同的日期为我们担任导游，他们之前素不相识，甚至可能从未见过面，但是他们却在发矿泉水的时候说出了相同的话：“我给大家发的这瓶水是用来喝的，如果你想用这瓶水来洗手的话，请你把这瓶水还给我。”导游还对我们讲，云南的人最看不惯的就是有人浪费水。当我们还在浪费水的时候，干旱地区的人们已经开始节约水了，所以我们也要行动起来，不能等到水已经枯竭的那一天才意识到水的重要性。

我国的水存在两大问题，一是水资源的短缺，二就是水污染严重。

有关资料显示，1994年7月，淮河上游的河南境内突降暴雨，颍上水库水位急骤上涨超过防洪警戒线，因此开闸泄洪将积蓄于上游一个冬春的2亿立方米水放了下来。水经之处河水泛浊，河面上泡沫密布，顿时鱼虾丧生。下游一些地方居民饮用了虽经自来水厂处理，但未能达到饮用标准的河水后，出现恶心、腹泻、呕吐等症状。经取样检验证实上游来水水质恶化，沿河各自来水厂被迫停止供水达54天之久，百万淮河民众饮水告急，不少地方花高价远途取水饮用，有些地方出现居民抢购矿泉水的场面，这就是震惊中外的"淮河水污染事件"。

在日常生活中，我们也经常会发现水污染的例子。我每次去沿江公园散步，都会发现松花江面上有行人随手丢弃的饮料瓶、塑料袋等垃圾，美丽的松花江就这样被污染了。

现如今，工业越来越发达，人类的生活需求越来越高，有些工厂为了图省事，直接将未经处理的工业废水排入江河之中，导致了水的污染。有些农民大量使用化肥、农药、除草剂，从而造成了农田污水。由于人们过多的砍伐树木，造成了水土流失。

多年来，中国水资源质量不断下降，水环境持续恶化，由于污染所导致的缺水和事故不断发生，不仅使工厂停产、农业减产甚至绝收，而且造成了不良的社会影响和较大的经济损失，严重地威胁了社会的可持续发展，威胁了人类的生存。

人类不能以破坏生态环境来发展经济，这样做所要付出的代价太大了。世界上仅城市地区一年排出的工业和生活废水就多达500立方公里，而每一滴污水将污染数倍乃至数十倍的水体。这惊人的数字也警示着我们要保护水资源。

污水还会危及我们的健康。中国很多癌症多发地区的人就是因为长时间喝了被污染的水，才导致了寿命减少。由于喝了被污染的水而丧生的孩子不计其数。为了我们的健康，我们一定要重视水安全。

布来基曾经说过：“水是万物之首”。每一滴水都值得我们去珍惜，我们一定要合理的利用每一滴水，不去浪费它，让生命的源泉永远长流!

Hello!I am a girl,My name is Zheng jingyi,I’m 12 years old,I come from Zhangzhou,I’m in Class 2,Grade 7.My telephone number is 123456789.I have long hair,big eyes,small nose and small mouth.Look!Who is she?She is my good friend,her name is Chen han,she is 12,too.She is from Zhangzhou,too.She is 14 years old,she is in Class 3,Grade 7,She telephone number is 987654321.She has short hair,big eyes,small nose and wide mouth.We are in the same school,but in different Classes.

The Lantern Festival which occurs on the 15-th day of the First Month of the Chinese Year marks the end of the New Years Holidays.

Lanterns are everywhere. A most interesting tradition is the posting of riddles called Lantern Riddles. Riddles are written on pieces of paper and posted on lanterns or wall. Any one solving the riddle is awarded a prize. And the food for lantern festival is Tang Yuan i have made some Tang Yuan in a ginger soup my wife got a serious cold so i cooked a pot of ginger soup for her. I look forward to the next spring festival.

Why should we protect wildlife animals?

Do you know of any endangered animals?Why are they in danger?

I think there are many endangered animals in the world,such as tigers and pandas.When farmers cut down trees,tigers can no longer hide and hunt.Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.And there are few places where pandas can live.We are not alone in the world.We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us.So protecting wildlife animals are very important.We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed.If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse,the world will be more beautiful.It is very easy but useful.

[关于保护动物的小学生英语作文

随着科技的高速发展，人类对资源的需求越来越多，致使南极北极冰雪融化的速度加快、海平面日渐上升、南极出现臭氧空洞、北京的沙尘暴、雾霾天气不断增加、日本大地震后造成的核泄漏污染……

当我们在享受美好生活的同时，是否想到保护环境的重要性呢?

那么，请同学们关注一下我们的校园，看!操场上、校门口、楼梯过道上漫天飞舞的纸屑、食品袋、饮料瓶;瞧，雪白的墙壁上那些张牙舞爪的涂鸦……这些都是和我们校园文明不和谐的一幕啊!

同学们，如果我们大家都行动起来，争当环保的主人翁，不乱扔纸屑、果皮，不乱涂乱画，随手捡起地上的纸屑垃圾，爱护环境，把我们的校园装扮的漂漂亮亮。当我们在绿树成荫的校园小道上漫步时，一定会感到心旷神怡;当我们在窗明几净的教室里读书时，一定会全神贯注;当我们在整洁优雅的环境中学习时，一定会心情舒畅。

优美的环境，让我们懂得珍惜，学会爱护;优美的环境，让我们知书达理，更加文明;优美的环境，让我们学会谦让，学会做人;优美的环境，让我们道德高尚，使我们的学习更加进步!

Animals are mans most loyal friend, please dont hurt them.

I am particularly fond of small animals,. I think, they are mans most loyal friend. So, when I see others to dispose of animals, in the heart can not help but sad. My dream is to people and animals live in peace.

Now people are like to eat dog meat hot pot, I dont understand. A dogs life, it is to his own master, dont just because it is old, useless, and denied the value of its existence. This is not possible! People will also newborn puppies thrown into the lake, trash can, they are discarded, it is no good. Everyone has the right to existence significance and value, even if is a person, also not qualified to deprive their lives.

I have witnessed the cat after being hit by a car fly. The distorted face telling the pain of it. Its blood, viscera was hit from in vitro. Although the rain wash away the traces of blood, but every time I go there, mind will automatically jump out of the scene, think of the cat that broken beyond recognition, think about it before he died not look in the eyes...

Since then, I was in my heart silently vowed, to do their own efforts, to protect small animals, at least, dont let them innocent caused the death.

I think, in the future, I will set up a "happy family", there will be dedicated to adopt the stray animals, if the man willing to adopt, I will also be given to him. In this way, those who stray cat, stray dogs have a warm home. I will also for those precious endangered animal donations, not completely destroy them.

Perhaps, so I am very silly, very silly, but I am willing to do that silly to worry about in others eyes puny little animals.

If you also like me "stupid", let us firmly "silly". Because they are lovely.

动物是人类最忠诚的朋友，请不要伤害他们。

从小，我就特别喜欢小动物。我觉得，它们是人类最忠实的朋友。所以，当我看到别人随意抛弃动物时，心中不禁很难过。我的梦想就是人们和动物和平相处。

现在人们都很喜欢吃狗肉火锅，我很不理解。狗的一生，都是为了自己的主人，难道就只是因为它老了，不中用了，就否定它存在的价值。这是不可以的!人们还将刚出生的小狗崽扔到湖里、垃圾桶里，将它们随意丢弃，这也是不行的。每个人都有存在的意义和价值，即使是人，也没有资格剥夺它们的生命。

我曾经亲眼目睹了猫被车撞飞后的惨状。那扭曲的脸诉说着它的痛苦。它的鲜血、内脏被撞离体外。尽管雨水冲刷掉血的痕迹，但每当我走到那儿时，脑海就自动地跳出了那一幕，想起那只被撞得面目全非的猫，想起它死前不甘的眼神……

从那时起，我就在心里默默发誓，要尽自己的努力，来保护小动物，至少，也不会让它们无辜枉死。

我想，在将来，我会成立一个“幸福之家”，这里会专门收养流浪小动物，如果好心人愿意收养，我也会赠送给他。这样，那些流浪猫儿、流浪狗儿就有了一个温暖的家。我也会为那些珍贵的濒临灭绝的动物捐款，让它们不至于完全灭绝。

或许，这样的我很傻、很傻，但我愿意做那个傻傻的为在别人眼里微不足道的小动物担心的人。

如果你也像我一样“傻”，那让我们坚定不移地“傻”下去。因为它们都是可爱的。

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

i have a good friend , her name is gina . she is a girl. she is 13 years old.she is a student in class 1 of no.1 middle school . she studies very well. her favorite subject is chinese , beacuse it is very interesting.her like strawberries best.

she usually gets up at 6:00am .then she brushes her teeth. next she goes to school at 7:40. she has four classes in the morning . her last ciass is history . that is her faorite subject , too.she goes to bed at 9:00pm.

she has a big family.she love her mother and father . and she also has a sister.she also like she.

this is my good friend . i want to learn about your good friend. please write and tell me about your friend.

“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。”这句名言不正是赞扬老师那种无私奉献的精神吗？如果说“妈妈”是我们来到世界上的第一声呼唤，那么“老师“就是我们步入文化知识的第一声称呼。在这六年的小学生活里，有许多老师曾教过我，在他们的辛勤培育下，让我懂得了做人的道理和中国深渊的文化知识，在这么多位教过我的老师中，我最喜爱的老师就是现在的班主任欧阳老师。

欧阳老师是一位可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师。我们班在学校算是很出名，每个老师来上课都会以笑脸而来，伤心而回。从此我们班在学校就出名了，每个老师都不愿意来我们班上课，只有欧阳老师依然不放弃我们。这也因为我们班的同学很调皮，经常为一两句不中听的话发生争执，为一两件微不足道的事情而打架，使到整个班变得很乱。

虽然欧阳老师也曾对我们失望过，但她并没有因此放弃我们，而是更加耐心地教育我们，让我们懂得做人的道理，让我们知道父母最大的希望就是自己的孩子能够出人头地，不在受没有文化的苦，欧阳老师总是以一些特别的方式让我们记住以往的教训，做到知错能改、诚实守信，不仅是在课堂上还是在课外，欧阳老师总是能给我们一种和蔼可亲，平易近人的感觉。经过几年的奋斗，终于，欧阳老师的付出得到了回报，在去年的期末考试中我们班的成绩在十几个学校中，拿到了第二名，给学校争了很大的光，不管怎么说这也是欧阳老师的功劳呀！

欧阳老师非常关爱学生。记得有一段时间，快临近期末考试，水痘传染很厉害，尤其像学校人多密集的地方，传染的更快。学校各班都有人感染水痘，我们班也有个别同学感染，一请假就是一两个星期，对学习影响很大。欧阳老师为了防止传染水痘的同学成绩下降，就叫一些基础好的同学帮他们补习，一有不明白的问题欧阳老师就耐心的讲解，直到同学弄懂题意，有时还印一些练习卷来做，然后根据同学容易做错的题目，在仔细地讲解，直到同学做对为止，她才慢慢地离去，做自己的工作，老师的付出让同学们对考试也更有信心了，果然在期末考试中，我们拿到了好成绩，算是给欧阳老师的惊喜吧！

我即将毕业了，但欧阳老师为我们班做的一切一切，令我肃然起敬，在这的六年的小学生活里，是您给了我世界上最宝贵的东西—知识；是您让我的成绩和写作水平渐渐的提高；是您让我懂得了做人的道理和做事的原则；是您让我从一个丑小鸭变成里一只美丽的天鹅；是您用知识的源泉改变了我的人生；是您创造了一个全新的我。我会永远记住这为可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师—欧阳老师。

Recently, I was so shocked by the news that a young boy died of violence

after his parents sent him to a private school. The slogan of the private school

was to help parents correct kids bad behaviors. A lot of parents choose to send

their kids here after they giving up educating their kids. The public blamed the

parents for not educating their children in the right way. There is no doubt

that the root of kids problems come from family. Many parents always force the

children to do what they want and ignore the kids feelings, so they will go

against the elders thoughts. Finally, the parents lose temper. The elder should

show respect to the kids. Communication can solve the problem. When the children

receive love and understanding from parents, they will be nice persons.

There are four seasons in a year.The first season is spring. In spring,

almost everything comes back to life. The snow begins to melt, the trees sprout

and the grass turns green.Spring is warm so that its a good time to go hiking

outdoors. After spring, itis summer. Summer is my favorite season,because I can

swim quite often. The third one is autumn. In autumn, the weather is cool and

comfortable. Farmers may be the busiest people, because autumn is a time of

harvest.Winter is the last season of the year. In winter, the weather is very

cold. In the north, it usually snows. Children can play games or make snowmen

after snow. It seems very funny. But, because of the cold weather, I dont like

winter very much. Whats your favorite season?

I enjoy summer vacation very much.Becausesummer vacation is the longest vacation of the year. We have more than fifty days to rest. Though it is very hot, we can either go to swim or stay in the air-conditioned room.

In the evening, I like to go shopping with my friends.We can eat many things in summer, such as ice creams, watermelons, grapes, and so on.In summer, I always go on a trip with my parents. Its a good chance for us to visit some nice interesting places.

"Low carbon" start small, since the sixth grade, as long as I dont save, mom and dad will speak of the words in my ear. To this end, I decided that I really want to be a low-carbon life. Remember once, mom after using the mask, just ready to throw away, just let me see, I hurriedly shouts to prevent a mother: "mom, cant throw away!" Mother heard after, immediately stop. I ran over and took the mother in the hands of the mask. Then said to his mother: "mom you have finished using the mask cant throw, said on television the mask after use can wipe furniture, not only a bright shine, and its fragrance.

"After listening to his mother, smiled and patted my head say:" my daughter really understand low carbon life. "I cant agree in front of dad, in a few days ago, because our wardrobe very damp, mom and dad are there, then I thought of my grandma often use newspaper mat in the wardrobe, she told the newspaper can be moistureproof, still can absorb peculiar smell, so I went to the newspaper, but used the newspaper all let me away, now also really didnt have the newspaper in the home, the somebody else all say" books to time square hate less "but I want to say today" newspaper when hate nothing ". Well, by the way, today I thought I saw daddy came home from work with a newspaper, I hurriedly found the father, "dad you back a newspaper today? "Dad puzzled nodded, I cant wait to say:" quick contribution out, I have an idea. "

When dad see me the paper pad in the wardrobe, harm my dad cant find newspapers and buy one. Now, I walk to school every day, no longer let father motorcycle send me; Every time I go shopping bring your own bag... I want to live a low-carbon life. Low carbon starts from me, lets construction of a new civilization, happiness, charm, donggang.

“低碳从小做起”，自从上六年级以来，只要我不节约，爸爸妈妈就会在我耳边说起这句话。 为此，我决定真的要做个低碳生活的执行者。 记得有一次，妈妈用完面膜之后，刚准备要扔掉，恰巧让我看到了，我连忙大喊一声阻止妈妈：“妈妈，不能扔掉!”妈妈听见了之后，立即停下。我飞快跑过去，夺下了妈妈手中的面膜。然后对妈妈说：“妈妈你用完的面膜不能扔，电视上说面膜用完之后可以擦家具，不仅擦得亮，而且还有香味。

”妈妈听了后，微笑着拍拍我头的说：“我女儿真的懂得低碳生活了。” 在爸爸面前我也不能服输，就在前几天，因为我们家的衣柜很潮湿，爸爸和妈妈都无计可施，这时我想到了奶奶常常用报纸垫在衣柜里，她说过报纸可以防潮，还可以吸收异味，于是我就去找报纸，但是以前用过的报纸都让我扔掉了，现在家里还真的没有报纸，人家都说“书到用时方恨少”今天我却想说“报纸用时方恨无”。嗯，对了，今天我好像看见爸爸下班时拿回来了一张报纸，我连忙找到了爸爸：“爸爸你今天是不是拿回来一张报纸?”爸爸疑惑不解的点点头，我迫不及待的说：“快贡献出来，我有办法了。”

当爸爸看我把报纸垫在衣柜里时，害的我爸爸找不到报纸又买啦一张。 现在，每天上学我都步行，再也不让爸爸摩托车送我;我每次逛街都自备口袋……我要过真正的低碳生活。 低碳从我做起，让我们一起来建设文明、幸福、魅力、新东港吧。

Boys and girls, do you understand how much environmental knowledge, know? Protecting the environment is the human consciously protect natural resources and make them get reasonable use, to prevent the pollution of natural environment and damage. Now, the earth environment gradually destroyed. Because there are many environmental destruction, someone for reason, there are natural causes. But most people are deforestation, litter and other factors.

As far as I know from the Internet, 30 years from 1950 to 1950, more than half of the worlds forests have been destroyed, one half of the forest land into desert in Africa. Green vegetation is present in the human nature of "being" of life. World the 50 years after the 20th century, however, damage to people and animals live in green environment, green vegetation is in a recession, the global soil loss to increase to 25.4 billion tonnes a year, desertification, soil is at an annual rate of 5 to 7 square kilometers expanded rapidly.

In 1998, through China the earth in the Yangtze river, the songhua river, such as large rivers, lost the past gentle beautiful smiling face, out of ferocious ferocious terror. Raging storms, the roaring river, rolled up the flood peak, and again engulfed entire villages, pieces of land, cities and counties, each factory, a school... Oh my god, this is what a loss!

In recent years, because humans cut down trees, also damage the environment, make the vegetation destroyed, causing the phenomenon of land desertification, soil erosion, etc. Trees also gradually reduce, then, to absorb carbon dioxide, large amounts of carbon dioxide make the air become warm, creates the world present situation: the greenhouse effect.

Campus is always has a beautiful scenery, now everyone dont protect the environment, it makes our environment destruction. Look at the corner of the street is filled with plastic bags, cigarette butts. On the flower beds in the neighborhood is filled with dirt, we should protect everything we have good resources. I have people here dont protect environment under the condition of reverie: one day, the tree my grandfather in the beautiful scenery in a rest, suddenly to a few people, to prepare for a picnic here. Not for a moment here a beautiful environment becomes dirty, but this a few people or ignored. "The men finally walked" the tree grandpa sad cried, alas! The men got the cigarette butts on the grass, the ground filled with plastic bags, bottle. A few days later the tree grandpa dyspnea died because of bad environment.

同学们，环保知识你们了解多少，知道多少?保护环境是人类有意识地保护自然资源并使其得到合理的利用，防止自然环境受到污染和破坏。现在，地球上环境逐渐遭到破坏。环境遭破坏的原因有许多，有人为原因，也有自然原因。不过大多数是人们乱砍乱伐，乱扔垃圾等因素。

据我从网上了解，自1950年到1980年30年间，全世界有一半以上的森林面积被毁，其中非洲的二分之一林地变成不毛之地。绿色植被是大自然赠于人类的“生命之被”。可是，世界进入20世纪50年之后，人和动物赖以生存的绿色环境遭到破坏，绿色植被正在衰退，全球土壤失量现以增加到每年254亿吨，沙漠化土壤正以每年5-7万平方公里的速度迅速扩展。

1998年时，流经中国大地的长江、松花江等大江大河，失去了往日温柔美丽的笑脸，露出了凶猛恐怖的狰狞。肆虐的暴雨，咆哮的江水，卷起了一次次洪峰，吞噬了一个个村庄，一片片田地，一个个市县，一座座工厂，一所所学校……天哪，这是多么大的损失啊!

近几年，也因为人类大量砍伐树木、破坏环境，使植被遭到破坏，造成了土地沙漠化、水土流失等现象。树木也渐渐减少，于是，二氧化碳无法吸收，大量的二氧化碳使空气变得温暖，就造成了世界上目前出现的状况：温室效应。

园里都总有一处美丽的风景，可现在大家都不保护环境，这才使我们的环境遭受破坏。你看街道上的角落到处都有塑料袋，烟头。小区里的花坛上到处都有脏东西，我们应该保护好我们现在所拥有的一切美好资源。我就在这人们不保护环境的情况下遐想：一天，大树爷爷在一处美丽的风景休息，突然来了几个人，准备在这里野餐。没一会儿这里美丽的环境一下变得脏兮兮了，但这几个人还是置之不理。“这几个人终于走了”大树爷爷悲哀的叫着，唉!那几个人把小草上弄上了烟头，地上掉满塑料袋，瓶子。没过几天大树爷爷因环境不好呼吸困难死去了。