关于保护水的英语作文初一(汇编20篇)

There are still many environmental problems in recent years.One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil.The polluted air is very damaging to peoples health.Polluted water causes diseases and deaths.More importantly, the vegetation has been greatly reduced, with the rapid growth of modern cities.

In order to protect the environment, many governments have done a lot of work.Introduced legislation to control air pollution, protect forest resources and Marine resources, and stop any environmental pollution.Governments, therefore, are playing the most important role of environmental protection today.

I think the government must take more concrete measures to protect the environment.First, the government should make the people fully aware of the importance of environmental protection through education.Second, more efforts should be made to implement policies on population planning, because more people mean more people mean more pollution.Finally, those who intentionally destroy who should be severely punished.We should let them know that destroying the environment means destroying humanity itself.

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仍然有很多环保问题在近几年。最严重的问题之一是空气，水和土壤的严重污染。污染的空气严重损害人们的健康。污染的水引起的疾病和死亡。更重要的是，植被已大大减少，随着现代城市的快速增长。

为了保护环境，许多国家的政府都做了很多工作。介绍了立法措施控制空气污染，保护森林资源和海洋资源，制止任何环境污染。因此，各国政府正在发挥环保今天最重要的作用。

我认为，为了保护环境，政府必须采取更具体的措施。首先，政府应该让人民充分认识到环境保护的重要性，通过教育。第二，更应努力把人口规划实施的政策，因为更多的人意味着更多的人意味着更多的污染。最后，那些故意破坏谁应该受到严厉惩罚的环境。我们应该让他们知道，破坏环境就是毁灭人类自己。

[保护的环境英语作文

Me Hello，everybody!My name`s Kevin Bill。I am a 15-year-old boy and I am from China。My favorite movie are Rush Hour and Mr。Bean。Do you know them?I think they are exciting action movie and interesting comedy 。My English teacher is a beautiful teacher and she`s always friendly to us。Her favorite sport is basketball and we always play basketball together。My favorite music is pop and my favorite fruits are apples and grapes。And Sunday is my favorite day。How about you ?What`s your name?

The seas and oceans receive the brunt of human waste, whether it is by deliberate dumping or by natural run-off from the land.

In fact over 80% of all marine pollution comes from land-based activities and many pollutants are deposited in estuaries and coastal waters. Here the pollutants enter marine food chains, building up their concentrations until they reach toxic levels. It often takes human casualties to alert us to pollution and such was the case in Minimata Bay in Japan when many people died as a result of a pollutant building up in food chains. A factory was discharging waste containing methyl mercury in low concentrations into the sea and as this pollutant passed through food chains it became more concentrated in the tissues of marine organisms until it reached toxic levels.

As a consequence 649 people died from eating fish and shellfish contaminated with mercury and 3500 people suffered from mercury poisoning.

Throughout history man has changed his physical environment in order to

improve his way of life。 With the tools of technology he has altered many

physical features of the earth。 He has transformed woodlands and prairies into

farms and made lakes and reserviors out of rivers for irrigation purposes or

hydroelectric power。 Man has also modified the face of the earth by draining

marshes and cutting through mountains to build roads and railways。

However， mans changes to the physical environment have not always had

beneficial results。 Today， pollution of the air and water is an increasing

danger to the health of the planet。 Each day thousands of tons of gases e out of

the exhausts of motor vehicles。 Smoke from factories pollutes the air of

industrialized areas and the surrounding areas of the countryside。 The pollution

of water is equally harmful。 The whole ecological balance of the sea is being

changed and industrial wastes have already made many rivers lifeless。

Now environmental protection is more pressing than ever before。 As we know，

massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even

poses a great threat to mans existence。 Indifference to these problems will

mean mitting suicide。 Therefore， effective measures should be taken and laws

passed to conserve environment。 Otherwise，man is certain to suffer from the

serious consequences caused by this lack of care for his living

surroundings。

昨天,我跟哥哥去玩,看见一位叔叔正拿着大毛笔,挥洒自如地在水池旁写了“请节约用水“五个大字，随后，那位叔叔将水龙头开到最大开始洗笔。洗着洗着，水就淹没了池子，像发大水一样，向四面八方流去,，叔叔还是视而不见,仍然我行我素.他为了不让水溅到自己的身上,躲得远远的。

水在“哗哗”地流着,仿佛在悲哀地说：“唉，有些人真的不知道我们的可贵之处，也不知道我们的贡献有多大，如果植物没有了水，它们就会渴死，要知道我国的淡水资源日益紧张。“唉”，我听到后叹了一口气，想：那位叔叔自己写下了几个大字“请节约用水”，可他自己却在浪费水资源，他说的和做的一点都不一致啊!于是我走过去，客气地对叔叔说：“叔叔，水是生命之源，你不节约用水，等到水枯竭的那天，后悔就来不及了，植物会全渴死，人类就会不复存在，水对人类是何其珍贵啊!”

叔叔听了我的话，先愣了一下，吃惊地看看我，脸红到了耳朵根，说：“了不起，你真是我的‘老师’。”然后他连忙地关上了水龙头。

我经历了这样的事，决定从自身做起，爱惜水资源：

1、可以把洗过菜的水用来浇花、浇菜。

2、及进关紧未关好的水龙头。

3、把家中抽水马桶的水量调小。

4.水是用不完的,但我们有珍惜哦!

如果每人都能节约一点水，地球妈妈会笑得更灿烂，万物会更加生机勃勃。

It is known to everyone that the unrestrained slaughter of wild animals has diminished the number of some endangered species. More and more species are being driven to extinction every year. It is terrible to think that magnificent animals are being sacrificed to human vanity

There are already laws enacted to prevent the importation of rare animals and the products made from their flesh, skin and bones.

These laws must be strictly enforced. Violators of these laws must be severely punished .Moreover, the public must be informed about the natural treasures we stand to lose .If we don’t take immediate action, we will be depriving future generations of our most precious heritage.

In Taiwan, because most people do not understand the importance of wildlife, the wildlife is in a poor situation. We Chinese are fond of eating anything delicious, so there are many animals killed by hunters. People enjoy eating tigers, bears, birds, and lions, so there are fewer and fewer birds flying in the sky and fewer and fewer bears running here and there in the forest. Instead, we often see them for sale at the market. How poor they are! And how cruel we are!

In my opinion, we should try every possible way to preserve wildlife. First, no one is allowed to hurt any wild animal. Second, the authorities concerned should punish those who kill any wild animal. Third, we should pay more attention to those endangered species to protect them from being eaten. If we can do so, nature must become very beautiful.

Water水

As the saying goes, the woman is made of water, that I said that my

mother is god. Mother is very love cry, tears like spring rain, in an unbroken line. Watch TV, my mother was often moved to tears; scary stories, mother sometimes cry; however, when I do something wrong, mothers love cry. I am very naughty, always love to do something wrong. Once, I and my

grandmother bickering, the grandmother gas straight said to his mother:" see, this is you teach the good son." In the evening, and everyone else to sleep, my mother came to my room, wake me up, tell me a reason, but I still have a little impatient, my mother said, tears as the bead curtain, I feel anxious, saw her mother look, I will get up immediately went to grandma house grandmas

apology, grandmother laughed, then point behind, I saw my mother at the door secretly laugh, from now on, my mothers eyes became my life buoy. Motherly love like water, my mental errors washing clean out completely.

俗话说女人是水做的，那我说妈妈就是水神。妈妈很爱哭，眼泪像春雨一样，连绵不绝。看电视时，妈妈经常会被感动的哭；讲恐怖故事时，妈妈有时也会被吓哭；不过，当我做错了事时，妈妈最喜欢哭。我很淘气，总爱做一些错事。有一次，我和外婆斗嘴，把外婆气的直对妈妈说：“看，这就是你教的好儿子。”到了晚上，等其他人都睡了，妈妈来到我的房间，把我叫醒，对我讲了一堆大道理，可我还有点儿不耐烦，妈妈说着说着眼泪就像珠帘一样，我难过急了，看见妈妈的样子，我马上起床跑到外婆房里给外婆赔礼道歉，外婆笑了起来，然后指指背后，我看见妈妈在门口偷偷地笑了，从此以后，妈妈的眼睛就成了我人生的航标。母爱似水，把我的错。

[学生英语作文：水

两湖一库无非就是指百花湖、红枫湖、阿哈水库。这两湖一库可是我们的生命之水，是贵阳人民的摇篮，但是现在这两湖一库正在受到严重污染。有很多不自觉的人往河里扔垃圾，在河里方便、钓鱼……不光这样，许多工厂、企业不断的在排放污水，严重的污染了水质，使得生态环境被破坏，鱼虾绝迹。

我们贵阳人的生命之水被污染了，说不定在不久的将来，贵阳人民全部都会得疾病死亡，造成的原因就是我们喝的水被污染了。难道我们要让这臭哄哄的河水流入大海、流入长江、黄河吗？难道我们一定要在史书上添上贵阳，是世界上第五大沙漠吗？

还好现在已经有一部分人觉醒了，懂得了环保的重要性。但是还有一部分人，还在随便扔垃圾。

所以为进一步净化“两湖一库”水质，贵阳市将陆续向红枫湖、百花湖、阿哈水库各投放600万、400万和200万尾鲢鳙鱼苗，加上此前“两湖一库”已经另行投放了1000万尾鱼苗和50吨鱼种，今年贵阳市累计向“两湖一库”投放近4000万尾鱼苗鱼种。

我现在作为一名贵阳市民，也作为一名优秀少先队员，我一定要做到保护两湖一库，珍爱生命之水。

[保护两湖一库珍爱生命之水作文

水， 是一切的生命之源。正因为有了水，才有了这个蔚蓝而美丽的星球，才使人类、动植物得以生存。

假如真的没有水，那会怎样呢?那地球上也会和火星、土星一样，没有生命，死气沉沉。那么，将不会有人类的出现，树木，花草等一切将不复存在。鲜花经过浇灌才会绽放，绿叶经过滋润才会美丽。如果没有水，鲜花会绽放吗?小溪会欢唱吗?小鸟会飞翔吗?小树会枝繁叶茂吗?答案不言而喻。

水资源是有限的。陆地上的淡水资源非常之少，地球的表面虽然被百分之七十的水所覆盖，但大多是海水，海水是咸水，不能直接利用，而淡水资源只占地球上水体总量的百分之二点五三，其中近百分之七十是固体冰川，即分布在两极地区和中、低纬度地区的高山冰川，还很难加以利用。目前人类比较容易利用的淡水资源，主要是河流水、淡水湖泊水，以及浅层地下水，储量约占全球淡水总储量的百分之零点三，只占全球总储水量的十万分之七。

在日常生活中，水总是不知不觉地被浪费掉。洗菜要一盆一盆地洗，要是开着水龙头冲，一餐饭就要耗水50千克。用洗衣机洗衣服满桶再洗，若分开两次洗，则多耗水120千克 。淘米水洗菜，再用清水清洗，不仅节约了水，还有效地清除了蔬菜上的残存农药。洗衣水洗拖帕、帚地板、再冲厕所。第二道清洗衣物的洗衣水擦门窗及家具、洗鞋袜等。 大、小便后冲洗厕所，尽量不开大水管冲洗，而充分利用使用过的“脏水”。 淋浴如果关掉水龙头擦香皂的话，洗一次澡可节水60千克。夏天给室内外地面洒水降温，尽量不用清水，而用洗衣之后的洗衣水。自行车、家用小轿车清洁时，不用水冲，改用湿布擦，太脏的地方，也宜用洗衣物过后的余水冲洗。 家庭浇花，宜用淘米水、茶水、洗衣水等。家庭洗涤手巾、小对象、瓜果等少量用水。宜用盆子盛水而不宜开水龙头放水冲洗

如果大家都没有节水的意识，如果真的到了水贵如油的那天，将会有无数的人干渴而亡，地球上的最后一滴水将会成为人们悔恨的眼泪!

珍惜水资源，保护水环境。污水处理系统，加强水环境监测，强化法律意识，依法管理水资源、水环境。

节约用水，利在当代，功在千秋。所以，我呼吁大家，节约用水，从现在开始，节水，爱水，珍惜水资源，保护水资源。从我做起，从身边的一点一滴做起!

保护环境的英语作文一：

Topic:

Environmental problems are as big as not for individual country or individual people to address。 In other word， we have reached the stage that environmental problems be solved for international view。 To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years， many nations have bee more aware of the environmental issues each nation faces， such as air and water pollution。 The question is， are the environmental issues a national problem or an international problem? It is my belief that the environmental issues have grown to the point of being an international problem needing international cooperation to resolve。

Because of the differences in environmental policies， resources and technology， international cooperation could provide quicker results and have a greater impact on bringing resolution to environmental problems for nations of differing environmental policies and of lesser resources and technology。 By pooling international resources and technology to address the environmental problems， the disadvantaged nations are provided the assistance needed。 Otherwise their environmental conditions deteriorate ultimately affecting the resources and environment of the world as a whole。

One of the difficulities to an international resolution to environmental issues is the difference in individual nations view and policies toward environmental protection。 In order for international cooperation to occur and succeed， the nations of the world must submit themselved to international standards and supervision by an international mission elected by the participating nations of the world。 All members must agree to abide by the standards established。

The environmental issues facing each country are not unrelated to the well being of the rest of the world。 The impact is long term and international in scope。 Without international cooperation and agreement to address such environmental issues as glacial melting at the South Pole， depletion of the ozone layer， water pollution， air polution， etc。， the environmental conditions of the world will deteriorate to the detriment of every nation， not just those that ignore or lack the resources and technology to resolve their individual environmental problems。

As part of the same planet， it is the responsibility of each individual and nation to protect the global environment。 Only international cooperation will provide the timely solutions and the effectiveness needed to stop the deteriorating global environment。

保护环境的英语作文二：

As we all know， the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today。 Water is polluted， we have no clean water to drink。 Many trees are cutting down， some animals are getting less and less。 Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky。 The population is increasing faster and faster， resources are getting less and lessetc。 Not only does it affect our lives and health， it also has a great affection in the future。 People’s health has been greatly affected by air， noise and water pollution。 Many people died of diseases。 In order to live a better life， something must be done to stop the pollution。 It’s our duty to protect our environment。 We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere。 Trees are very helpful and important for us。 We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future。

If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment， the world will bee much more beautiful。 In a word， if everyone pays more attention to our environment， there will be less pollution and our life will be better。 There is only one earth， I hope everyone will protect our environment well。

保护环境的英语作文三：

Our environment is very important for our lives 。 We need the fresh air， the clean water and so on 。 In the past， there were many trees around us ，the air was fresh and the river was clean。But now，people cut down many trees。 Air pollution and water polloution are very serious 。 The environment around us bees very terrible 。 We should protect our environment。 First， we should plant many trees to keep water。 Second ， we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work。。 Third ， we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river 。 Fourth， we shouldn’t use the plastic bags。 Finally， we can ask more people to join us。

保护环境的英语作文四：

Good environment can make people feel happy and fit 。 To improve the environment means to improve our life。

We should plant more trees and flowers around us 。 We shouldn’t cut them down 。 We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air。

Whenever we see litter on the ground ， we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins。 Never spit in public。 Don’t draw on public walls。 It’s our duty to protect the environment。

保护环境的英语作文五：

In modern society， we tend to bee more and more aware of our living environment or physical environment， because we are not clean as before。 So many people now choose their house as to its environment but not its location and expenses to afford it。 As we all know， the environment pollution is more and more serious during these years， what we could do is to make great efforts in protecting environment gradually。 As to government pollution， as to mon people。 We also try to protect it and make it remain clean。 Although we have managed to protect the environment to a certain extent。 It is still a very long way to go。

本次月考试卷只有笔试部分共十个题型包括单项选择，补全单词连词成句，阅读理解，口语运用，句型转换，书面表达等。既考查了学生的基础知识和基本技能，又考查了学生的交际运用能力，但从学生成绩来看并不能达到大部分学生成绩优秀，结合学生的实际情况，反思自己的教学行为，我想应该从以下几个方面努力：

1.针对单选题及句型转换题中出现的错误，我感觉自己对学生的英语基础知识把关不够严。在以后教学中要狠抓基础知识，多提问多听写，充分利用早读让学生在有限的早读时间内掌握所学知识。

2.阅读理解是学生英语综合能力的一种体现，是学生的弱项。加强英语阅读方法的指导以及阅读训练尤其提倡学生进行课外阅读让英语阅读成为一种习惯对学生的英语阅读能力的提高将会有很大的帮助。

3.英语是一门语言，语言是用来交流的工具，因此英语的交际性显得很重要，在以后的教学中可以进行课前五分钟自由对话，在运用任务型教学法，游戏教学法等多提供给学生一些交际英语的机会。

4.这次英语考试成绩基本可以，但有两极分化的趋向，在英语教学中面对全体学生关注每一个学生的成长尤其是后进生是预防两极分化的重要途径，还可以成立“一帮一”小组帮助后进生在尽可能短的时间内提高英语成绩。

总之，每次考试都是对自己教学工作阶段性的“评价”。要及时通过考试反思自己的教学中存在的问题，在总结与反思中不断进步，不断成长这样才能在三尺讲台上表现的更精彩些!

反思二：初一英语月考反思

第一次七年级英语月考试卷充分体现了新课改的精神，切实有效地考察了所学知识内容。下面对试卷试题进行具体分析：

一、试卷题型情况

1、注重对基础知识、基本技能的考察，题型新颖、覆盖面大，涉及到了所学的全部内容，促进学生有效学习。

2、注重从实际中选取素材，考察了学生的分析和处理问题能力。

3、试卷对学生探究能力是一个重点考察，增强了学生的探究分析能力。

二、试卷结构分析

试卷充分体现了新课标课改精神，注重了对学生基础知识和综合能力的考察，因此对学生的细心程度要求很高。

1、听力部分：试题难度不大，因此学生在该部分的得分率较高，但是学生的两极分化严重，高分很高，甚至满分，而低分则太低。

2、完形填空和阅读理解：难度适中，但是得分率一般，主要原因是学生理解文章不透彻，阅读能力差造成的。

3、词语运用：此题是各大题中得分最低的一个题，主要原因是学生对词的用法掌握不好，一些固定词组记不清。

4、书面表达：该题对于学生来说是比较容易的一题，它是对学生整体知识的一个考察，但两极分化最为严重。

三、学生分析

存在问题：

1、优等生对基础知识掌握较好，但是还有一部分学生对语言的运用能力较差，对比较碎的知识点没有能够很好地掌握。

2、中等生的基础知识掌握不够牢固，并且做题比较粗心。

四、具体改进措施

1、钻研新教材，夯实英语基础。练习中很多学生“一看就会，一做就错”，这种现象比较普遍，失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢，只有扎扎实实从基础做起，才能最终达到“一看就会，一做就对”。

2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的，而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的，因此，要加强理解语篇的能力训练，增强英语语感。

3、规范训练，改进学习方法。要善于分析学生，找出学生的薄弱环节，合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。

在今后的教学中应注意开阔学生视野，多渠道、大容量地给学生提供具有时代感的英语信息，加强语言运用能力的培养，少讲解，多给学生实际运用语言的机会，在用中学英语。

hello, everyone! my name is i’m a student in a very beautiful school called liangbing middle school and i am in class 1 grade 7.my hometown liangbing is also a beautiful town. i’m very happy and i like to make friends with others. i  also like singing but traveling is my favorite, i have been to  many interesting places in china but i haven’t been to other  countries. what a pity!

at school, i study chinese,math, english, history, politics  and so on. i like all of them. i often help my teacher takecare of my class and i think i am a good helper. i live with my parents and we go home on time every day.

when i am at home, i often help my mother do some housework and my

mother said i am a good helper, too. my mother is a barber.she cuts hair very well.she is kind.many people like her. she often teaches me the way of

learning well, if you want to learn english well, here is some of my advice. at first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. if you keep working hard, you will be successful. then, you ought to speak english as much as possible. remember an old saying, nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it.  that’s all, thank you.

Happy Class Break

The bell rang and the class was over. Many classmates jumped up from the seat. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom while talking and laughing. Two girls were singing a song on their seats. Some boys were telling a joke loudly. They were laughing together. I was chatting with some classmates when Li Hong came to me. She joined us. Our class break was often full of fun and laughter. We often have a pleasant break

[初一英语作文：快乐课间

Now, some animals have disappeared, and then take crocodile is close to extinction, though very fierce, but humans are more fierce. Because of some organs from animals has the prominent economic value, thus become a subject of human plunder use, become the main factor of extinct animals. Crocodile with sharp teeth, and huge appetite for food, we all said the crocodile, but more afraid of human, the crocodile in the eyes of human, the crocodile can be made into the luggage, handbags, wallets, shoes and other goods, so the crocodile, has now become almost extinct animals.

Animal friends, a lot of destruction of human will have serious adverse consequences, ecological environment caused by serious imbalance, so that the human living environment is destroyed. Eliminate animal, is to eliminate human oneself, if one day the animals in the world are gone, that human can survive? To protect animals, cherish this nature of every creature! Let us start from now, starts from me, to protect the animals, make the world a better place! To protect animals, is to protect human oneself.

现在，有些动物已经灭绝了，就拿快要灭绝的鳄鱼来说，虽然很凶猛，但人类更凶猛。就是因为有些动物身上的器官具有突出的经济价值，由此成为被人类掠夺利用的对象，成为动物灭绝的主要因素。鳄鱼长着锐利的牙齿，和硕大的食物胃口，我们都说鳄鱼可怕，但鳄鱼更怕人类，在人类的眼中，鳄鱼皮可以制成行李箱，手提包，钱包，鞋等物品，所以鳄鱼，现在已经成为快要灭绝的动物了。

朋友们，动物的大量毁灭对人类将产生严重的不良后果，造成生态环境严重不平衡，从而使人类的生存环境遭到破坏。消灭动物，就是在消灭人类自己，如果有一天世界上的动物全都消失了，那人类还能生存吗?要保护动物，珍惜这自然界里的每一个生灵吧!让我们从现在做起，从我做起，保护动物，使世界变得更美好吧!保护动物，就是保护人类自己。

Pandas are my favourite animals. In fact, all the people like pands as well. Pandasliving in the wild can live for 20 years while the pandas that live in the zoos can have a life of more thqn 30 years. Pandas are really lovely. They can not only climb trees but also swim. However, the number of pandas is decreasing sharply. It is said that there are only 1000 pandas remaining in the world at present. It is sad news for all of us. Therefore, we are supposed to take measures to protect pandas in order to prevent them from dying out.

Nowadays, most people, especially those who live in the country, want to

move to the city. But is the city life perfect? Every coin has two sides.

现在很多人，特别是那些生活在农村的人，都想去都市生活。但是，都市生活真的很好吗?每面硬币都有两面，每件事都有利有弊。

Its true that things seem to be more convenient in some ways such as

finding jobs, transportation service, etc. Also places for relaxing like parks

and hotels are attractive.

事实上，有些事似乎(因为在城市生活而)变得更方便，比如找工作、交通运输服务等等。有些供人放松的地方也非常吸引人，比如公园和旅馆。

But we have to say something bad, too. The environment is awful because the

population is too large and too much rubbish make the air unfresh.We have to pay

lots of money on our life including the bad things above!

但是，我们也必须说些弊端。因为众多的人口和大量的垃圾污染了空气，所以(城市)环境是很可怕的。我们必须花费非常多的钱在(改善)生活方面，其中便包括之前提到的那些不好的事。

In my opinion, we must take a correct attitude to it. No matter where we

are, we can creat our own sky if we try our best!

在我看来，我们必须采取正确的态度去面对都市生活。无论我们在哪儿，我们都可以尽自己所能，创造出一片属于自己的天空!

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

大家好，我是大家熟悉的水，以前的我，美丽清澈，而现在的我，又臭又脏。而这一切的一切，都是人类造成的。

以前的我，伴着泉水的叮咚响，唱着欢快的歌，一路欢快的跑着，许多的人都会在我的身边散步，嬉戏，我总是快乐的。而现在，一切都变了，工厂里排放出来的废水流进了我的身体，前来游玩的人们总会把垃圾扔在我的身体上，日积月累，我身体上的垃圾越拉越多，原来清澈的我也变得肮脏不堪，人们经过我的身旁总会捂紧鼻子，逃命似的从我的身旁跑过，每当这时，我总会流泪，我替人类感到悲哀。

我是生命的源泉。人类对我的需要仅次于氧气。人类如果不摄入某一种维生素或矿物质，也许还能继绩活几周或带病活上若干年，但人类如果没有我，却只能活几天。人体细胞的重要成分就是我，我占成人体体重的60——70％。人体的每一个器官都含有极其丰富的水，血液和肾脏中的水占83％，心脏为80％，肌肉为76％，脑为75％，肝脏68％，就是骨头也含有22％的水分。

人体的各种生理活动都需要我，比如我可以溶解各种营养物质，脂肪和蛋白质等要成为悬浮于水中的液体状态才能被吸收；我在血管、细胞之间川流不息，把氧气和营养物质运送到组织细胞，在把代谢废物运出体外，总之，人的各种代谢和生理活动都离不开我。

但是，人类好像对于这些都浑然不知似的，还是一味的破坏我，如果他们再这样破坏，那么世界上最后一滴水将是人类的眼泪。

人类只知道，动物和植物有衰老的过程，其实我也会衰老，而且，我的衰老对人体健康也有害，水分子是主链状结构，我如果不经常受到撞击，也就是说，如果我不经常处于运动状态，而是处于静止状态时，这种链状结构会不断地扩散，增大，最后就会变成人类所说的——死水。

”人类，快醒醒吧。“我呼吁道。

Behind every great achievement in anyones life lies perseverance. We see

this in every human endeavor. Outstanding sportsmen spend all their time

practising. Their endurance is beyond imagination.

The same is true of businessmen who build up fortunes. What we usually see

are their achievements, but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they

have put in a lot of continual steady efforts. We all have read of great

musicians, writers and inventors who have created or discovered breakthroughs in

human achievement. Invariably they have said that they owe all their success to

perseverance. As to college students, quite a big number of then, have become

successful language learners through perseverance, however, a certain group of

them, just stop half way and their previous efforts turn out to be

fruitless.

Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunders is perhaps one

of the most outstanding. The 65-year-old man from Kentucky had a dream to start

a chain of fried chicken restaurants all over the world. To realize his dream,

he knew that he needed a restaurant owner to go into partnership with him to

open the first restaurant and to fry chicken according to the secret recipe he

had. Colonel Saunders had knocked on 1008 doors before he finally found his

partner. It is doubtful whether many of us would have had the perseverance to

knock even a hundred doors.

From the above discussion we can draw a conclusion that success comes to

anyone who keeps working perseveringly and lack of perseverance can only result

in frustration and failure.

This week I mostly stayed at home and did some homework. Last Saturday HP6 had just come out. And many Harry Potter fans went to buy it. I did’t buy it because it was too expensive, but I downloaded it on the Internet. It was in English. Many people went on translating as soon as the book came out. I also took part in it and became a part of the translating group. From this group, I first realized that my English was so poor. I needed to look up in the dictionary all the time. It was really troublesome. But I withheld and withheld. I had translated many paragraphs. I was the youngest among the translators, but I didn’t feel there was much pressure. This work was hard but I really felt happy. We had already finished nearly 20 chapters

The population of the earth is increasing very fast. Humans must make the earth support the increasing population. This has made it necessary for agriculture and industry to develop rapidly.

Such a rapid development produces more and more waste, which goes into the water, the soil and the air. Some of it is made harmless. However, where there is too much of it, the poisonous waste may do great harm to the things around the people.

When farmers add fertilizer to the soil to make plants grow better, or use poison to kill pests, poison is sent into the air, the water and the soil. When birds, fish and people eat the grain, drink the water or breath the air, harm will be done to their health.

The air in big cities is often made very dirty by cars and factories. Millions of tons of waste and poisonous gases are sent into the air with the smoke. In some places, little is done to make the smoke clean before it goes into the air.

Fortunately, people are beginning to realize just how serious the whole situation is. In many countries, laws have been made to stop factories from sending out poisonous gases.