写自己初中三年变化的英语作文（汇集20篇）

Once a year the Spring Festival is coming, everybody busy couplets, everybody is bursting with happiness atmosphere, very happy, our family is no exception, on the twenty-nine, I just got up, my mother called to my sister and couplets, we posted a big character in the central door, on both sides of the door posted couplets on the "Fu born Xi annual music" the second line is "rich suisui Tim Choi Huan" streamer is "Happy New Year" soon we posted a good, I look at my work very happy.

On New Years Eve, we put on new clothes and set off firecrackers with our sister. A "crackling" sound from our ears through, like thousands of households to send blessings, we are very happy. On the eve of new years Eve, we had dinner, and I watched the Spring Festival Gala with my father, mother and sister. That wonderful performance made my mood open, there was a cross talk, there was a sketch and a song and dance... Very pretty. But I like Xiao Shenyang? Ya egg? Zhao Benshan and the old finished "no money" is so fun.

Lunar New Years day I just woke up and found a gift money pillow, sister, we laugh, and we ate dumplings, went to grandmas home after worship, pay New Years call, grandparents, give us the gift money, but also to eat out, we eat, we are very happy.

I like the new year. Its good for the new year.

Whenit comes to online shopping, different people holds different ideas towards it.Some people seem extremely enjoy the way of buying things online because theyfeel online shopping is so convenient. Some just don’t believe that they can buygood quality commodities from Internet. As far as I’m concerned, I think onlineshopping creates lots of benefits to people.

Firstly,buying things online is a way of saving time. Compared with the traditional wayof shopping, we have no need to go out to pick up our favorite goods from storeto store. Just a click, we can have things in our shopping cart and just waitfor the goods to be delivered to us. To this extent, not only we can save thetime of finding things from store to store but we don’t need to spend time ontransportation. Thus, we can save lots of time to enjoy fun.

Secondly,buying things online can save our money. People buy commodities by Internet notonly because it saves us time, but also, we can save lots of money. It is oftenseen that some people just go to the physical store to check out thecommodities they want to buy and then they would search for their favoritecommodities online and take the order. People do this just because they knowthat online goods are usually cheaper than the goods displayed in shop windowbecause online shop have no need to pay the rent. So, people are more inclinedto buying things from online store.

Thirdly,convenience is the last but not least thing of shopping online. Since we canbuy things online, there is no need to go out to look for things we want tobuy. What we need to do is to simply sit before our computer, search for thingswe want to buy, click our favorite thing and then pay our order by our bankcard. And then, you just need to wait for your goods to be delivered to yourhome.

Inconclusion, shopping online is a convenient, time-saving and money saving wayof buying things. Therefore, we can benefit a lot from shopping online. That’sthe reason of why shopping online has developed faster and faster in recentyears.

I think my teacher got out of bedon the wtong side this afternoon as she hasn’t cries.i went to office saw the boys unhappy.Because the students got their teacher’s goat became they didn’t do their homework..I think this is my teacher unhappy’s cause. Today, I saw a boy ,he played the handset.But didn’t saw the walls so he Rnocked we laugh up our sleeve at he knocked ,but he hurt his norse in the accident, and he was laying it on thick about how painful it was .

It’s also a happy day, isn’t it ?

我认为我的老师今天很不高兴因为她一个下午都没笑过。我到办公室去看到一些男生很不高兴，因为他们的作业没写。我想老师生气就是这个原因。今天，我看见一个男生，他正玩着手机，但是他并没有看到前面有墙，所以他撞了上去，在他撞上去时，我们都窃笑。但是他的鼻子受伤了，他看起来好像很痛苦。

今天也是快乐的一天，不是吗？

[又是快乐的一天初中英语日记

每个人都有自己最感动的事情，你有，我有，大家都有。可是每个人最感动的事情却不同，有人感觉吃到了美味的食物就是最感动的事情，有人感觉去了风景很好的地方就是最感动的事情。我却认为最感动的事情就是自己最爱的人为自己尽力做了他们为我做的事情。

我有个很好的爸爸妈妈，他们每天辛辛苦苦给我做早餐，送我上学读书，晚上还会辅导我的功课。

记得有一次，我因为贪玩没写作业，妈妈知道了之后很生气，妈妈从我记事起就没有打过我，可是这次她却狠狠的打了我，打的时候我哭，妈妈也哭了。

我的家里不富裕，也买不起很贵重的东西，西瓜是很贵重的东西对于我们家来说，可是妈妈每次都给我买，让我一个人吃，大家都没吃，我当时觉得很感动，这是世界上最美好的礼物，妈妈的爱。

我经常生病，爸爸带我去医院打吊针，可是每次回来我都要吃刀鱼，可是刀鱼真的很贵，妈妈还是咬牙给我买，每次我生病都有刀鱼吃，妈妈的爱，我感受到的是难以回报的爱，是世界上最伟大的爱。

最感动的事情就是你爱着的人，用尽力气来爱你，不计较一分一毫，给你世界上最好的东西，我已经得到了，我真的很感动，我是个很幸福很幸运的人，这些就是我记住的最感动的事情，我永远都忘不了爸爸妈妈对我的爱，我真的很感动，想对他们说我很爱他们，希望他们将来在我的护佑下生活，爸爸妈妈我爱你们！

Changes in Shanghai

1 300年前的上海

2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)

3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)

参考作文

Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.

300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。

Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.

今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。

Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.

上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。

点评：虽然2010年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。

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对英语试卷的评价与建议

篇一:介绍自己情况英语作文

每一次考完试之后，仅仅由别人的评价来判定自己是不全面的，当自己也沉淀下来，窥探自己的内心，写下自己的自我评价，这样才可以不断进步。但是自我评价要怎么写呢?下面是小编为大家带来的对英语试卷的评价与建议，相信对你会有帮助的。

对试卷的评价与建议篇一

一、 试卷基本结构分析

安徽卷英语试卷卷面满分150分，共86道题目。全卷由选择题和非选择题组成，第Ⅰ卷选择题包括听力、英语知识运用和阅读理解三个部分;第Ⅱ卷为第四部分写作，分为第一节任务型阅读和第二节书面表达。具体情况分布如下表：

二、总体评价

本套试卷是严格按照XXXX年安徽省高考英语《考试说明》,结合新课标《考试大纲》精心命制的，难度适中。整套试卷立足教材,突出语篇,强调应用,注重交际,语言考查的灵活性更强,

完全符合安徽高考英语试题的命题原则。其特点有下列几个方面:语言注重时代性及隐含的情感态度和文化意识,关注社会热点,语言考查的灵活性增加。

三、具体分析

第一部分 听力

.听力注重以考生熟悉的话题考查考生听英语的能力,从今年的听力试题可以看出,直接获取信息的试题有所减少,推断题有所增多。选用的材料特别注重语言的真实性和交际性,对话的内容涉及面较广,口语化程度较高。

第二部分：英语知识运用

(I)单项填空

单项填空题在保证知识覆盖面的基础上,突出一贯倡导的语境化、交际化的特点,题干力求语言生动、地道,语境真实、新颖,所选考点都是《考试说明》中所列的语法知识和要求掌握的词汇。该部分涉及动词时态和语态、固定搭配考查的有24、26、28题，33题考查倍数表达法，25、35题考查交际用语。同时兼顾对代词、形容词短语等项目的考查。整体考查全面,要求考生掌握好基础知识。

XXX年安徽卷单项填空试题考查项目数据统计：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，2013年高考在单项填空部分考查了考试大纲所要求的基本考点，考查的项目多达13项。主要考查了动词的时态与语态、非谓语动词以及交际用语。但去掉了对冠词、主谓一致和其它特殊句式的考查。各题题干简洁，却能够给考生创设一个个较为完整的语言情景，这有利于考查学生在具体语境下对所学过语言知识的掌握情况。

(II)完形填空

完形填空是一篇议论文，作者谈了如何学好一门语言，难度属于中等。综合考查考生在语篇中对词汇的掌握和运用能力,以及对篇章逻辑的理解和把握能力。从考点上看，主要考查实词，兼顾虚词。请看下表。

2010-2013年安徽省高考英语完形填空考点分布：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，高考完形填空题重点考查名词、形容词、和动词等实词。这就要求考生在了解语篇的基础上，加强语义、语境的深层次理解，同时还应具备一定的逻辑思维能力。所以在平时的学习中一定要注意高频词汇的积累，对于这些常考词的词性、词义与用法要准确无误的把握。

第三部分：阅读理解

根据考试说明，阅读理解主要考查学生六个方面的能力，即理解事实细节、理解主旨要义、推理判断、猜测词义、理解文章的基本结构、理解作者的意图，观点和态度。下面是近四年的阅读理解题的考点分布表。

XX安徽省高考英语阅读理解相关考点统计表：

从上表可以看出，2013年试卷阅读理解选材广泛。文章涉及健康习惯调查、如何确保有足够的生活用水慈善基金会、网络的发展让人们忽视了现实中交往、探戈舞的介绍等话题, 题型设计多样 ,细节理解题、推理判断题考查较多,兼顾对主旨大意、句意推测题的考查,试题整体难度适中。

第四部分：写作

该部分共分两节，第一节为任务型读写，考查考生对书面语言的监察能力;第二节为书面表达题，考查考生根据所提供的话题和特定的要求进行书面表达的能力。

(I)任务型读写

任务型读写题与2012年相比,难度相当,内容是关于幸福，学生读起来较为轻松，题目设置有梯度，答题要求简练和规范。涉及词语释义、同意替换、归纳演绎、细节理解等。 近几年安徽卷任务型读写所选文章以说明文为主，内容贴近现代社会生活。2013年此题的难度与往年持平。这就要求考生在阅读理解的基础上，对文中所提供的信息的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括，并根据表格的形式，把加工后的信息准确、有序地完成与短文有关的表格，这一题型共10题，每个空格只能填一个词。其特点是任务型阅读属于综合能力考查题，考查的能力有：(1)捕捉信息能力，属基础题，快速获取信息的能力;在这十个空中，捕捉信息题要占一半。(2)组织信息能力，属活用题，考查学生组织信息和表叙信息以及对文中的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。(3)概括信息能力，属概括题，要求学生在获取相关信息后，根据表格相关要求，对所获取的信息进行二次加工，这主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。

(II)书面表达

XX年安徽省高考英语书面表达题统计表：

书面表达依旧属于话题作文，关于文明校园征稿，难度不大。命题贴近考生生活,符合考生的认知水平,能够让不同层次的考生都能不同程度地发挥自己的英语水平,体现考试的公平性。

总之,整套试卷命题科学,充分体现安徽新课标高考的精神。紧扣时代热点,整套试题渗透着对考生人文素养的培养,让考生在答题的同时受到思想感情、文化意识、价值观等方面的启发和教育。

对试卷的评价与建议篇二

期中考试已经结束了，这次考试是对于不少刚刚接触英语的初一新生而言是一次重要的考试，是全面衡量学生这段时间学习情况的一次考试。下面我主要从以下几个方面来分析：

一、考试质量分析

1.试题方面

就整个试题而言，考点分布均匀，覆盖面广，考题难度适中，大部分试题能够体现目前注重基础、体现能力的考试命题要求。

2.试卷方面

本次考试题型，分为听力部分、辨音、单项选择、阅读理解、完形填空，词汇运用，阅读表达，翻译句子和写作几个大部分，各部分难易程度不同。大部分题都比较基础，和平时的练习比较起来相对集中一些，更能反映出学生在这一阶段学习中的问题。

此次英语考试的听力部分，内容为与日常教学相关的材料，与所学教材难度相当，较为简单。朗读速度适中，对平日教学的听力训练有着良好的导向作用。但在第一节中还是有部分学生容易犯书写不规范的错误，也有些学生“g”、“j”不分，“r”、“l”混淆，因而造成较多失分。这学期对学生在听力方面的练习不是很多，除了在课堂上少量练习外，平时课下学生几乎得不到练习。

单项选择，突出了课本和平常练习中较基础的知识，学生训练较多，此部分得分较好。

完形填空，对于我校大部分基础较薄弱学生而言觉得难度较大，因选项具有大的灵活性，而学生在平时对单词的记忆和对句子的积累还不够牢，而且也没有掌握好做题技巧，没有联系上下文推测出正确答案，以至于此部分得分较低。

翻译句子，由于平时练习较多，且反复强调大小写及单词、字母的正确书写，因此这部分得分比预计要好。阅读表达学生在此题得分较少，不是多了这个就是漏了那个，答的不好，得分非常低。

写作部分大部分学生书写较差，只有极少数学生在这部分未动笔。

二、分析原因

教师方面的原因：

这段时间由于课时多，时间紧，因此对学生部分知识掌握情况的落实不够，这也是这次考试成绩不高的原因之一。从这次考试中应该吸取这样的教训。在以后的英语教学中，加大管理力度，提高学生在课堂上的学习效率。

学生方面的原因：

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，且大部分学生毫无学习习惯而言，记忆知识极难，遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强，完形填空、阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。很容易漏掉be动词。

三、今后采取的措施

抓好单词、词组过关，狠抓知识落实。在进行单词和词组教学时，首先让学生读准音，然后反复读单词和词组，并找出同义词、反义词、类似用法的词一起记。在进行句型时，以小组合作等方式举一反三，反复练习课堂上学习的句型。平时督促学生多听录音磁带，一星期集中训练两次听力，在培养学生的听力技巧和听力能力上多下功夫，提高他们的听力能力和听力技巧。

在阅读教学中，设计一些问题，通过学生自读文章找出其答案，在整体上感知文章内容。而且讲解文章时，注意生词在句中的运用、注意文章里出现的词组，注意对关键句子的理解。针对学生阅读能力差的问题，将通过大量阅读来培养学生的语感以及通过上下文捕捉信息的能力，还要注意文化背景知识的学习，拓宽学生的知识，开阔学生的视野。

不会用英文写作文是绝大多数学生的通病。作文是由句子构成，一个正确的句子需要用正确的句型、正确的词组，正确的时态构成。训练学生的答题技巧和书写方面的好习惯。写好作文，没有诀窍，只有多写多练。

在今后的教学中，我们将继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功;引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力;培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题;讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语;在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。在培优辅差上下功夫，大面积提高学生的优秀率和合格率。

对试卷的评价与建议篇三

英语测试对于提高教学质量起着有效的促进作用。通过测试一方面教师可以取得教学工作的信息反馈，另一方面，可以调动学生的学习积极性，使学生在今后的测试中不断发扬成绩，克服缺点，取得最佳效果。测试的重要性是显而易见的，对试卷的评讲就显得尤为重要。高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

高质量的试卷评讲会让师生收益非浅。有效的评讲，能让老师更成功地总结教学经验，分析学生学习情况以改进教学，提高教学效率和教学效果。有效的评讲，能让学生找到自己的不足和改进学习的方法。

有效地评讲英语试卷应该坚持三个原则：

一、评讲的内容和细节必须由学生实情决定。学生才是课堂的主体，教师只是引导者。学生在测试中暴露了他们自己在英语各方面存在的问题或漏洞，学生有他们自己的难点和疑惑。教师具体该讲什么和怎样讲必须根据学生的情况和特点来进行。对于学生普遍存在的难点，应该仔细分析，详细评讲。对于个别学生存在的难题，可以个别辅导，个别评讲。

二、评讲必须结合试卷特点。尽管都是英语测试，但不同阶段，不同时间的测试试卷是有其自身的特点的。教师应该在认真分析和研究试卷的基础上评讲试卷，切不可千篇一律的对待各种英语试卷。试卷的评讲步骤和时间长度都要根据试题的难度来定，当然必须结合学生实际。对于不同类别的试卷应该有不同的评讲方式，对于试卷中的不同题型也应该用不同的方法。

三、评讲时必须给予学生必要的反馈和消化的时间。英语课堂的师生互动性很强，即使是评讲试卷也应如此。评讲时切不可让老师一个人唱独角戏，其间必须穿插必要的互动和反馈。尤其在评讲典型错题时，有必要先让学生自述答题思路，然后由老师根据学生的错误根源进行讲解，最后让学生再读题目和正确的解答依据。学生始终是受教育的主体，教师切勿包办一切。

简而言之，评讲试卷必须结合试卷的特点和学生的实际情况，切不可草率行事。 怎样才能有效的评讲英语试卷呢?

第一、认真了解和初步分析试卷。在评讲前，教师有必要用自己教给学生的方法亲自把试卷做一遍，以便确定试题的检测范围和感受试题的难度。在做题的过程中可以预测学生的难点，也可以根据学生所学内容，看看哪些题目超出了学生的学习范围。当然，也可以检阅试卷的不足，以便今后选择并合理利用英语试卷。

第二、认真统计学生成绩。在批阅完学生试卷后，认真统计学生的成绩是很有必要的。统计的项目主要有：求出平均值和求出差距。在统计出平均成绩后，可以参照其他班的情况分析，确定该班的成绩位置。平均分较低，就说明该班的成绩较差。如果平均分较高，那该班的整体情况就较好。另外，还要排列出全班考生中的最高分和最低分，找出二者之间的差距。差距越大，两级分化就越严重，教学的难度就越大。在排列学生成绩时，最好由高分到低分排列，找出中间位置考生的分数，并把该成绩列为全班成绩的中位数。在评讲试题时，要特别注意中位段的学生的反映和效果。

第三、根据学生的成绩和分析情况，再次分析试卷，并做好学生的错误统计。在分析学生成绩后，及时的看学生答题的错误率，从中找出学生的典型错题。错误率较高的题目，就是要评讲的重点部位。这部分题目，既是学生应该关注的，也是教师应该详细评讲的。在统计错误率后，教师应该耐心的查阅典型错题，分析学生答错的原因，反思自己教学上的不足。对于，教师很难作分析的题目，要及时与学生进行交流，然后再确定学生做错的根源。 第四、认真耐心的评讲试卷。在试卷发给学生之后，教师可以安排学生自主讨论和简单分析自己的试卷。教师最好要提示学生如何讨论和分析。例如，要求学生发现自己的错题，并尽力分析出错题的知识类别：是宾语从句还是动词不定式，还是动名词或是其他的。

在学生分析错误类别后，可让学生互相讨论解答的方法或依据等，让学生达到初步了解解答出错的根源，并试着改正自己的错误。对于学生猜对的题目，也要要求学生诚实地标出来，一并作为错题对待，设法杜绝学生答题的侥幸心理。在学生讨论分析试卷后，教师就可以开始评讲试卷了。对于学生错误率较高的试题，教师必须详细的评讲。评讲时不光要书写答题的根据，还要多举相关的例子，最终要让学生能正确解答这些题和相似的试题。对于错误率较低的试题，蜻蜓点水般的评讲就可以了。当然，这部分错题的分析可以让成绩优秀的学生来完成。既可以从分发挥优生的能力，又能给其他学生提供鲜活的榜样。最后，就要解答学生的疑问了。

在评讲试题时，教师最好不要全部评讲，而是留一些小的疑问给学生。这样便于引导学生学会提问和思考。在教师评讲了主要错题之后，可以让学生之间互相讨论，让他们尝试相互探讨相互学习。在讨论和研究的过程中，激发学生学习的激情，启发他们思考和解决问题。在学生提出疑问后及时有针对性地给予解答，并随时肯定学生的质疑能力和探讨精神。

第五、师生认真翔实地做好总结。在师生互动地评讲完试卷后，教师和学生都有必要进行各自的总结。学生需要总结初自己在知识和能力上的薄弱环节，并写好错题集。在学生收集错题时，教师应要求他们写明解题的正确依据。英语教师也有自己的总结。要总结学生的薄弱环节，要总结自己评讲时出现的不足(范围过大，语言不清楚，讲解欠通俗等)。教师也要收集学生的典型错题。以便今后检测时插入以往的错题，让学生巩固和弥补以前的不足。

总而言之，坚持实事求是的原则，坚持师生互动的方式，让英语试卷的评讲体现教师、学生、试题和环境之间的相互作用的关系，让英语试卷的评讲更有效，才能真正的体现英语检测对学生的评价和督促作用，才能真正地增强英语教学的实际效果。

高考英语满分作文-我的秘密

篇二:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文:我的秘密

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I

immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boys parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely. When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people. Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷，而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心，我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来，小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭，但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。 我到家时已经很晚了，因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来，我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boys parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷，我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这，我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子，小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了，因为我依旧想看比赛。

但是我到家太晚了，比赛已经结束了。真遗憾!然而我仍然很高兴因为我帮助了他人。我没有将这件事告诉其他人，这只是我的秘密。

高考英语作文优秀范文分类(全)

篇三:介绍自己情况英语作文

经典范文

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语

优点：有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾：不易听懂等

结论：??

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用

优点：易于理解等

缺憾：英语氛围不浓等

结论：??

注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。

2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

名师点评：

审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。

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背诵内容：

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with，对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评：

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12：30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。 2

参考词汇：干旱drought 注意：词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）

1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

范文背诵：

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can

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perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

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Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。

（3）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意：1．词数：150左右 2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明）. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the

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高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

篇四:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

July 17th Fine

This morning, on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A little girl was calling for help in the river nearby. I immediately got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. At last the girl was saved, After sending the girl back home, I hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

However, in the afternoon the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. Soon the story spread all over the school. TherefOre, the teacher knew why I was late this morning and he apologized to me. The headmaster also praised me and called on all the students to learn from me.

7月17日 晴

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩正在附近的河里喊救命。我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。女孩终于得救了。把小女孩送回家后，我急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

然而下午小女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿，很快我的事迹传遍了整个校园。由此老师知道了我今早迟到的原因，他向我道歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。

July 17th Fine

Today I did a thing that was well worth doing although I was misunderstood at the beginning.

This morning on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A girl fell into the river! I got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. After a few minutes struggle, I finally saved the girl, I informed the girls parents and then hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

In the afternoon, the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. After the teacher learned the whole thing,he made an apology to me. And the headmaster praised me and also called on all the students to learn from me. I felt very proud.

7月17日 晴

今天我做了一件非常值得做的事情，尽管开始我被误会了。

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩落水了!我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。几分钟的努力后我终于救了小女孩。我通知了小女孩的父母然后就急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

下午女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿。老师知道了整件事后向我道了歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。我感到非常自豪。

b well, all those feelings over the next few months through our phone calls and our chats…and then i told her i want to see her, and she said yes『我告诉自己想见她，然后她同意了。』.

n and then?

b when i put down the phone, i just have the questions of ‘am i mad?’ 『当放下电话的时候，我问自己是不是疯了。』

n u never meet friends offline before? 『你之前没见过网友么?』

b well, i can never explain all of my story, dreaming of things we are doing at the time they happen, and the feeling of knowing each other so well, the feelings of how we were meant to meet. 『我真的无法说清楚我的故事，回想着当时发生的事情，所有的感觉，从认识对方，到完全了解对方，还有我们相识的必然性。』

n unexplained. 『无法解释的。』

b yes, by all means『的确是这样』. it was just unplanned. 『这跟我计划的不一样。』

n amazing, isn’t it?

b yes, when i finally met her, yes.

n and where did you meet?

b we meet in a kfc store『肯德基店』 near xu jia hui 『徐家汇』and the song is ours which is ‘qing zang gao yuan’ 『青藏高原』, the song still makes me close to cry. 『现在一听到这首歌我就想哭。』

[我告诉自己想见她英语作文附译文

Our parents give us much love every day,so we should give them love,too.That was a holiday,I stayed at home alone.I made a dinner for my parents.Because I was only seven,the meal was really awful.But my mother never stopped saying,"Its very delicious!"She said she was very impressed.

How do you give your parents love?

The Palace Museum is located on city center in Peking.China is existing

biggest, most integrity of thou building cluster.It is been one of five greatest

temples in the world by the fame.

The Palace Museum start to set up in A.D.1406, the Palace Museum have the

size courtyard more than 90s and the house contain 980 and add up to 8704.the

Palace Museum surroundings surround 12 meters in height, long the Palace Museum

wall of 3400 meters, form is one rectangular city defense, there is 52 meter

wide moat outside the wall surround, formation a fortress of severe barracks.The

Palace Museum has 4 doors, center door Wu door, east door Donghua door, west

door Xihua door, north door Shengwu door.

古代有一位得道的高僧，法力无边，能把阻挡自己行进的大山移动，令世人惊诧不已。一日，有人问高僧："如果把山移不过来，怎么办？"众人皆仰视倾听，高僧淡淡一笑："山不过来，我过去！"

这是何等旷达乐观的姿态！其实，成功并非只有唯一的诠释，条条道路通罗马，偏拗地坚持只会无端地浪费时间，是过分的迂腐拘泥，调整一下心态和思路往往会有"柳暗花明又一村"的效果。

态度决定高度，一条路走到黑摔得遍体鳞伤却不思变通，必将付出沉重的代价。李白《长歌行》中有"常存抱柱信，岂上望夫台"的诗句，说一男子为等约会的女子，在河水暴涨的时候，宁可抱住桥柱被水淹死，也不愿离开约定的地点。诚信精神固然可嘉，但失去了生命，纵然有美好的意愿又有什么意义？

针对现实生活，美国著名哲学家罗曼.w.皮尔写下了《态度决定一切》，强调积极思维的效用，

改变不了世界，那就要试着去改变自己，当前的社会依然遵守达尔文的生物进化论，个人作为小气候不可能改变大环境，成功无坦途，但我们可先融入其中去适应它，再逐渐地去影响、改变它。

对于棘手的困难，台湾的成功实业家严长寿说："怕它，就要研究它。"

对任何艰难险阻永不妥协，另辟蹊径，然后再竭尽全力求其完美，这才是成功人生的标记。

[试着去改变自己初中作文

有一位诗人说：什么是快乐?快乐就是做好自己能做的事。多么朴实的一句话，却蕴含着深刻的道理。因为当我们把自己能做的一件事做好后，我们就会找到一种满足、一种信心，于是我们就会以一个愉悦的心态去做下一件事。

做好自己能做的事，是我们在成长中前进的基础;做好自己能做的事情，是我们改造世界的条件;做好自己能做的事情，是我们走向成功的必经之路。做好自己能做好的事，说起来容易做起来难，这不仅要求我们坚韧踏实，更要求我们有一种执着、永不言弃的精神。

史学家司马迁身心受到巨大伤痛，没有绝望，完成了《史记》这一巨著，给后人留下了宝贵的文化遗产，他做好了自己能做的事。发明家爱迪生经历了一次又一次失败，没有放弃，最终取得了成功，一项项新发明诞生，他做好了自己能做的事。最后的成功让人欣喜，让之前的失败与挫折更有意义。做好自己能做的事，并不一定在事业上取得成功，但至少在精神上，是一名胜利者。

还有很多例子。越王勾践卧薪尝胆，三千越甲可吞吴;史铁生下身瘫痪，却在轮椅上奋笔疾书;贝多芬双耳失聪，《命运交响曲》振奋人心。为人民服务的雷锋，人民的好公仆焦裕禄，刚正不阿的任长霞??他们都是当代的楷模，他们都是在做好自己能做好的事，如此地脚踏实地。

试问，现在的人们有几个能把自己能做的事情做好?我觉得，一件事情，已经做了，就要把它做好，不要给自己留下遗憾。

做好自己能做的事，是一种气概，是一种能力，是一种进步，这需要我们有“千磨万击还坚劲，任尔东西南北风”的执着精神;需要我们有“柳暗花明又一村”的乐观心态。做好自己能做的事，实际上是对我们意志、毅力、心态的考验和磨砺。

我们不能决定生命的长度，但可以控制它的宽度;我们不能做到事事顺利，但可以做到事事尽力。做好自己能做的事，让我们的人生平凡而不平庸。做好自己能做的事，成就生命的辉煌，体现生命的价值。

试题分析：对能做的工作要热爱执著。有些工作是重要的，也是有限的，不是每个人都做得到，也不是每个人都做得了的。做自己做得了的事要安心去做。

做一个好的领袖是一支燃得亮亮的蜡烛，做一个好的家庭主妇也是一支燃得亮亮的蜡烛，如果每个人都做一支燃得亮亮的蜡烛，那世界上便没有了黑暗的地方。

做好自己能做的事，人活着就有了价值;做好自己能做的事，人活着就有了意义。

[做好自己能做的事初中3年级作文

Mother is the most important person to us. Now people celebrate Mother’s

Day every year. It has become more and more popular. This day is on the second

Sunday in May. On that day, children often send their mother flowers to express

their love. And some children make small gifts for their mothers.

In last years Mothers Day, I didnt spend it with my mother because she

was in the hometown and I was at school, which made me feel ashamed. At night, I

called my mother. At that time, I left my tears, and my mother told me that I

should study hard at school. In the end, I said to her “Happy Mother’ Day, I

love you" and she was very surprised and happy.

Nowadays it is common to encounter a scene when people want to see things

happen but can‘t make things happen for various reasons. The most important

reason is that they just refuse to create and innovate. With the accelerated

pace of our society,more and more people recognize the importance of creation

that is bound to make a difference in social productivity.

As far as I am concerned,we should all have the notion of being the

participants of supporting creation. First of all,creation is the most vital

factor to improve the inner competitiveness of our nation. For another,it is

certain that creation is so essential that enables many people to find their

positions in the company and careers in their lives.

Measures are also needed to encourage creation . First and foremost,the

government should establish certain rules to sweep up the obstacles of

invention. Some people have already complained much about complicated procedure

of patent applications or high fees to do experiments of inventions.

Additionally,high schools and universities can provide students with

scholarships or overseas learning opportunities,which will stimulate more

youngsters to join the group of invention and innovation.

How time flies！ It has been three years since I came to the school。 My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees。 The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework。 My classmates are all very friendly to each other。 We always help each other。 I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends。 I enjoy my school life。 However， I dont do well in math。 I’ll try my best to study math during the summer holidays。 Now Im going to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates。 Ill miss my school life。

Hi! Peter,

I’m glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu.

TheSpring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is a custom to give lucky money to children. I get lucky money every year. I will put most of it in the bank, and spend the rest on some books. This year is no exception(也不例外) and I also got lucky money.With it, I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia，hoping the things can bring some happiness to them.

For you, I think it’s a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your hostfamily before you leave China. You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England. Or, just keep it as good memories.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

The 15-Day Celebration of Chinese New YearThe first day of the Lunar New Year is "the welcoming of the gods of the heavens and earth."Many people abstain from meat on the first day of the new year because it is believed that this will ensure long and happy lives for them.

On the second day, the Chinese pray to their ancestors as well as to all the gods. They are extra kind to dogs and feed them well as it is believed that the second day is the birthday of all dogs.The third and fourth days are for the sons-in-laws to pay respect to their parents-in-law.The fifth day is called Po Woo. On that day people stay home to welcome the God of Wealth. No one visits families and friends on the fifth day because it will bring both parties bad luck.On the sixth to the 10th day, the Chinese visit their relatives and friends freely. They also visit the temples to pray for good fortune and health.The seventh day of the New Year is the day for farmers to display their produce. These farmers make a drink from seven types of vegetables to celebrate the occasion.

The seventh day is also considered the birthday of human beings. Noodles are eaten to promote longevity and raw fish for success.On the eighth day the Fujian people have another family reunion dinner, and at midnight they pray to Tian Gong, the God of Heaven.The ninth day is to make offerings to the Jade Emperor.The 10th through the 12th are days that friends and relatives should be invited for dinner.

After so much rich food, on the 13th day you should have simple rice congee and mustard greens (choi sum) to cleanse the system.The 14th day should be for preparations to celebrate the Lantern Festival which is to be held on the 15th night.

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the

time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.

Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days

become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is

singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some

birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the

nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful

flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

As it is known to us all ,LuXun is a famous Chinese writer. He is not only

a writer, thinker, but also the founder of Chinese Literature . He wrote many

classic (经典的)novels and his stories, which are translated many languages, were

made into film,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice,which

deeply showed peoples suffering in the old days.

Because of his achievement to Chinese literature, Chairman Mao spoke highly

of him. Besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high

school and university. I think youll gain a lot from reading his works.

Great, thats great! At last I was looking forward to the holiday of national day. I can always relax and relax. My parents and I had an early appointment to travel by train during the national day. On this day, I got up early, and when everything was ready, my family set out. When we arrived at the square in front of the train station, it was already a sea of people, and we were crowding the railway station with the endless stream of people.

Into the waiting hall, here is a racket, crowded, we managed to find a space to sit down, I drink slobber, rest for a while, restless eyes began to look around. Not far away, a pair of silver - haired old couple helped each other, slowly sitting on their seats and talking in a small voice. On the other side, a few middle school students were laughing loudly. A tour guide, holding a small flag, is talking to the tourists of the tour group... "Why?" Suddenly, a sound of childish sound attracted me, I looked back, a chubby little girl sat on her mothers lap, "why together and we cant go out and play dad?" The little girl innocent eyes full of doubts, long eyelashes glitter, mother lovingly stroked the girls head, said softly: "your father is a traffic policeman, in order to ensure the safe travel, to the holidays will be more busy, can not go out to play with us." The little girl Sidongfeidong nodded, nestled in her mothers arms. I listened quietly, eyes unconsciously fall in the busy distance from time to time flashed, cleaners are carefully clean the ground, wiping tables and chairs, the policeman is patrols, warily watching the situation around the station staff smiling, patiently answer questions of passengers. It is their hard work that makes our trip safer and more convenient.

This picture, I have been deeply remember in the heart, when we celebrate the holiday with my family, we have to wonder whether this happy, how many people need to work to pay, and the family when we have a joyous gathering, to wonder whether and how many people still insist on work, not and your family reunion? These honorable men, let me say, "thank you!"

太好了，太好了！我终于盼来了国庆节长假，总算可以放松放松了，我和爸爸妈妈早就约好了国庆节期间坐火车去外地旅游。到了这一天，我早早地起了床，一切准备就绪后，我们全家出发了。到达火车站前广场时，那里早已是人山人海，我们随着川流不息的人群挤进了火车站。

走进候车大厅，这里更是人声鼎沸，热闹非凡，我们好不容易才找到空位坐了下来，我喝了口水，休息了一会儿，眼睛开始不安分地四处打量起来。不远处，一对满头银发的老夫妻互相搀扶着，慢慢地坐到座位上，小声地交谈着。另一边，几名中学生在大声地说笑着。一位导游举着小旗子，正在向旅行团的游客们说着什么……。“为什么？”突然，一声稚嫩的童音吸引了我，我回头一看，一个胖乎乎的小女孩儿坐在妈妈腿上，“为什么爸爸不能和我们一起出去玩而呢？”小女孩儿天真无邪的大眼睛充满了疑惑，长长的睫毛忽闪着，妈妈爱怜地抚摸着小女孩儿的头，轻声说道：“你爸爸是一名交通警察，为了保证大家的出行安全，到了节假日会更加忙碌，就不能陪咱们出去玩儿了。”小女孩儿似懂非懂地点点头，依偎在妈妈的怀里。我静静地听着，目光不觉落在了远处不时闪现的忙碌的身影上，清洁工人正在仔细认真地打扫地面，擦拭桌椅，警察叔叔正在四处巡逻，警惕地注视着四周的情况，车站服务人员面带微笑，耐心地解答着旅客的疑问。正是他们的辛勤工作，使我们的出行更加安全、便捷。

这一幅幅画面，都被我深深地牢记在心中，当我们和家人一起欢度国庆假期时，是否想过，我们拥有的这份快乐，需要多少人为之工作，为之付出，当我们和家人欢聚一堂时，是否想过，又有多少人还要坚持工作，不能和家人团圆呢？这些可敬的人啊，让我真诚地说一声：“谢谢您们！”

I like watching all kinds of sports, especially tennis. Roger Federer is

famous all around the world, who has been popular for many years. Now he is

almost 35, which is the old age for tennis player. Many players choose to quit

playing as they are more than 30 and Roger was once doubted by the public. They

believed that Roger would not play as good as before, but Roger proved that they

were wrong. This year, Roger won two grand slams. He is still the top tennis

player. Federer is the real hero in my heart. He not only keeps on playing

tennis, but also a good husband and father. He never lets his fans down.

风吹着船一路前行，过了一会儿，风停了，船在河里不动了，留给船夫无限惊慌与懊悔，此后他也许只能随波逐流或等待下一个渺茫的救助……

生命犹如一条奔流不息的河，我们都是过河的人。可以依赖风，可以依赖水，但掌舵的应是我们自己，任何时候都要开辟自己的路，过分依赖他人会让我们失去自我，甚至失去创造奇迹的能力。

身躯瘦小的寄居蟹寄居在岸边的浅水里，大海每次涨潮都会带给它们一点食物，于是只要有定期的潮水，它们就赖在岸边不回大海。生活总处在饱一顿饥一顿的状态，寄居蟹因此很难长大。枯水期它们会拼命爬回大海，最终也能成长为很大的海蟹。依靠外力的协助，可以带给我们意想不到的收获或是解决问题的便捷，但个人的努力是生命意义的本源，“自助”永远是实现自我的不二法门。正如热心于慈善事业的爱尔兰富商布鲁斯南对其家乡人的帮助，三千万美元的捐助之后家乡人民依旧清贫，当他停止了捐助之后，却在五年后欣喜地看到家乡人因种植山果而致富的场景。

生命都具有让其丰满的能力，具有创造奇迹的力量，这种力量潜藏于内心深处，我们只有在自己開辟道路的时候，不断地叩问与发现，才会让这种伟大的力量喷薄而出，从而赋予我们一世灵光。父母对孩子的溺爱，也许正是对孩子的毁灭。可曾见过翩跹飞舞的蝴蝶，在阳光下它的双翅那么雄健！那是在破茧而出的时候，它用尽了一生的力气将体液挤往双翅。“白玉不毁，孰为珪璋。”古人虽已远去，但言犹在耳。

拳王泰森的恩师达马托为泰森建造了一座精神小屋，他为泰森制定了详细的训练计划，晚上师生之间还要进行心灵的交流，帮助泰森划定他的交友圈。当达马托溘然长逝以后，失去了精神小屋的泰森迷失了生活的方向，锒铛入狱。正如风吹着船前行，一路扬帆直航，但当风停以后，船因没有方向、船夫没有船桨而搁浅或碰触暗礁。

他人的帮助只能解决一时的问题，却帮不了我们一生。自我定位，走出自己的路。自助进而自强，我们才能达到梦想的彼岸。

走出自己的路，成为翱翔于蓝天的雄鹰！

[初中优秀作文走出自己的路