高二英语作文范文10篇写人汇总20篇

Echo,my favourite teacher,is a pretty and slim lady.One of the most

important reason that I like her is that she is very sincere.When she talks to

others,she always has a smile on her face.I think Echo is a natural teacher

beacuse she has a lot of good methods on teaching.She is not only quite

friendly, but also humorous.Her class is full of fun that you have never feel

bored.To improve our grades,she usually gives us some advices about how to learn

English well.Whats more,she sacrificed her own time to help every student,no

thought of gain.Sometimes,she nearly has no time to have lunch.When I ask her

questions,she must spare no effort to make me understand,with patience and

careness.I have never seen such a good teacher as her before.A good teacher can

point out the direction and give you endless strength when you get into

trouble.Im lucky enough to have such a good teacher present to my life. Echo

has a great inflence on me.Im thankful her help very much.

Last year, I went to Guang Zhou in the summer vacation. I felt so excited, it took me about four hours to get there. In the daytime, the air was so stuffy and the sun was so hot, so my friends and I decided to take a rest in the hotel. When the sun almost got down, we started to go on the street, the first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks, we had no idea which to eat, so we planed to eat as much as we could. I found myself couldn’t stop eating, the food was tasted. After we finishing eating, we started to go shopping.Guang Zhou is famous for the foreign trade, its clothes are fashionable and cheap. We went to the shopping street, trying on all kinds of clothes, at last, we bought many clothes. This trip is so unforgettable to me.

去年暑假，我去广州旅游。我感到很兴奋，我花了大约四个小时到那里。白天，空气很闷，太阳很大，所以我的朋友和我决定去旅馆休息。当太阳将要下山了，我们开始逛街，第一件事就是找东西吃。街上有很多美味的小吃，我们不知道吃什么好，因此我们计划尽可能多吃。我无法停止下来，食物太美味了。吃完以后，我们开始购物，广州的外贸很出名，衣服时尚，价格便宜。我们去了购物街，试了各种各样的衣服，最后，我们买了很多衣服。这趟旅程对我来说是很难忘的。

Today I found time was a cruel thing.

Whatever man is, time always goes on.It won‘t stay to wait for somebody. You can‘t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing.

Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won‘t leave them more. Today I found I hadn‘t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do.

I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

[About time高二英语日记

School for nearly two months, in school, many teachers have left a deep impression on me, but I the deepest impression is the kind of English teacher, ms liu.

He has blond hair, students think that it is dyed, but liu said: "it was born. We are all very surprised, he not only has a cool head of hair, but also full of teaching experience and the knowledge of English, he will use humorous language comes to our interest in learning, lets put in a special clever every knowledge to understand more thoroughly.

Whenever we have English class, the students are very excited, liu will teach us of the clever way to learn English, make learning English more simple and interesting. During the class, he will teach us English loudly shout out, also said: talented people are those who repeat the most times, we are going to step on my English.

On one occasion, liu taught to us "family show" this word, it means family show. At this time, liu said: "everyone seen rice didnt show! It is family show" homophonic ". We have also a listen to, really, from then on, the word gave me a very deep impression.

Our teacher liu is not only has the rich teaching experience, but also as a father, care to us. English whenever I ask him questions, he will patiently explain to me, until I completely understand. But liu for not writing homework classmates were not so good. Remember once, I forgot to write English homework, teacher liu gave me a piece of my mind. Since then, I have never experienced no homework. As an old saying goes, "the strict teacher I". Because of the teachers strict requirements, just make me in months exceeded otherregions made a good record in English.

He is my English teacher, he has an ordinary but great job and we all respect him, love him.

开学近两个月了，在学校中，许多老师都给我留下了较深的印象，但我印象最深刻的就是和蔼可亲的英语老师--刘老师。

他有一头金发，同学们都认为那是染出来的，但是刘老师却说：“那是天生的”。我们都很惊讶，他不仅有一头帅气的头发，而且还有一肚子的教学经验和英语知识，他会用幽默风趣的语言提起我们的学习兴趣，用特殊巧妙的方法让我们把每一个知识点理解的更透彻。

每当我们上英语课，同学们就十分兴奋，刘老师会教我们学英语的巧妙方法，让学英语变得更简单、有趣。上课期间，他会教我们大声喊出英语，还说：天才就是重复次数最多的人，我们要把英语踩在脚下。

有一次，刘老师给我们教了“family show”这个单词，它的意思是家庭秀。这时，刘老师说：“大家都看过‘饭没了秀’吧!它就是‘family show’的谐音”。我们一听，还真的是，从此，这个单词给了我无比深刻的印象。

我们的刘老师不仅有丰富的教学经验，而且还像一位慈父，对我们无比关怀。每当我去问他英语题时，他都会耐心的给我讲解，直到我完全懂为止。但刘老师对于不写作业的同学就没有那么仁慈了。记得有一次，我忘了写英语作业，刘老师把我批评了一顿。从此以后、我就再也没有不写作业的经历了。俗话说得好：“严师出高徒”。正因为老师的严格要求，才使我在月考中取得了不错的英语成绩。

他就是我的英语老师，他有着一个平凡而伟大的职业，我们都尊敬他，喜欢他。

打开记忆的闸门，爷爷和蔼可亲却又严肃认真的形象又浮现在我眼前。

爷爷是个很有趣的老头儿。不知什么时候，皱纹悄悄地爬上了他那可爱的脸上，也许是以前在乡下做事太累了吧。爷爷很爱笑，一笑两眼迷成了豆芽，嘴里不时发出“哈哈”的爽朗的笑声，手还不时的扬扬，那个样子真像个老顽童，让人感到特别的亲切。

我年幼的时候，爷爷还住在乡下，我常常到乡下去玩。记得那个时候，我太马虎，吃饭的时候经常把饭粒撒了，像个漏嘴巴似的。米粒便如雨一样不停地往下掉。爷爷家的大公鸡便争先恐后地跑过来抢着吃，总是吃得饱饱的。我有时候还故意剩饭，把米粒捏成饭团放在地上，用脚一跺，走路时鞋子粘乎乎的，那感觉真有趣。可爷爷呢，总是把碗里的饭吃得干干净净，连一滴油也用饭擦干净吃了，有时把我撒在桌子上的饭，都捡起来，我就小声的嘀咕了一句“爷爷真小气，一粒米也不放过。”

立夏的前一天，爷爷说要把我带到田里去看一看。我好奇的猜想，爷爷带我去那儿干什么?“孙子，你看!”爷爷站在田埂上，把我抱了起来。我顺着爷爷的手指望去。一望无际的.麦田上，几位戴着草帽的农民伯伯正在收割麦子，田地里有些麦子已经割到了，一把把整整齐齐地捆着，倒在地上。天空高高悬挂的烈日无情的烘烤着大地，我的汗也从额头上、鼻梁上滚了下来，被爷爷搂着的双腿开始发起抖来了。想不到，我们吃的粮食是这样来之不易，我糟蹋的是农民伯伯的血汗呀!所以要珍惜我们的粮食。

爷爷把我带回家了后，给我讲了一年二十四节气，并且告诉我麦子成长过程需要好好管理的，使我从中知道了“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦”的道理。我很惭愧的对爷爷说：“我错了，爷爷，我今后一定珍惜粮食”。

我懂得了爷爷对我的教育，我把农民伯伯的辛苦记在了心里，我后来没有剩一粒米，但我想起了那些大公鸡，我告诉了爷爷，他说原来你是疼爱那几只大公鸡，他们是有自己的饲料的，爷爷说：“放心吧”。又放出了他那完美的笑声。

从那以后，我不再浪费米饭了，还养成了简朴、节约的那一些好习惯。

后来爷爷家搬到了城市的郊区住，爷爷闲着的时候，便种种花儿。爷爷用自己的实际行动，教育我成长，激励我前进。

As the whole world has its boundaries, limits and freedom coexist in our life. I don’t expect complete freedom, which is impossible. I simply have a dream that supports my life.I dream that one day, I could escape from the deep sea of thick schoolbooks and lead my own life. With my favorite fictions, I lie freely on the green grass, smelling the spring, listening to the wind singing, breathing the fresh and cool air and dissolve my soul in nature at last. Simple and short enjoyment can bring me great satisfaction.I dream that one day the adults could throw their prejudice of comic and cartoon away. They could keep a lovely heart that can share sorrow and happiness with us while watching cartoon or doing personal things. That’s the real communication of heart to heart.

I have the belief that my dreams should come true. I am looking forward to some day coming when I am like a proud eagle, which flies to the blue and vast sky.

Lei feng, is a helpful good fighters. Lei fengs life, at the age of 3, my father died, soon, the mother also committed suicide, lei feng has been living a miserable childhood. Lei feng grew up later, a heart for their country, though his body is very weak, but no bitter living lei feng is capable.

Lei feng in spite of himself, a heart for others, sacrifice, is only 20 years old, because he was helped many people, so many people are sad for him. Think of this, my eyes flashing with tears, but cant flow down. I was deeply moved by the the lei feng spirit, although on the surface, nothing much, but my heart has been secretly determined: I want to learn from lei fengs uncle, learning that he, for the country to the spirit of the people.

A mans life is the most precious, a person only once. Lei feng is willing to give his life for the interests of the people, this is the ordinary people cant do.

Learn from lei fengs uncles belief, has taken root in my heart: I want to learn from lei fengs uncle, learning that he, for the country to the spirit of the people.

雷锋，是一个乐于助人的好战士。雷锋一生下来，3岁时，父亲就去世了，不久，母亲也自杀了，雷锋一直过着苦难的童年。雷锋长大了以后，一心为国，虽然他的身体很弱，但再苦的活雷锋都能干。

雷锋不顾自己，一心为着他人，牺牲时，才二十几岁，正因为他生前帮助过许多人，所以，许多人都为他伤心。想到这，我的眼睛里闪烁着泪花，但怎么也流不下来。我被雷锋这种精神深深地打动了，虽然表面上没什么，但我心中已经在暗暗下决心：我要向雷锋叔叔学习，学习他那种为国、为人民的精神。

人的生命是最宝贵的，一个人只有一次。雷锋愿意把他的生命来换人们的利益，这是常人做不到的。

向雷锋叔叔学习的信念，已经在我心中生了根：我要向雷锋叔叔学习，学习他那种为国、为人民的精神。

Dumpling is a traditional food for the China. There was a doctor named

Zhang Zhongjing legend, he used the dumplings to help cure the disease, we

celebrated the Spring Festival happily. Then,every Spring Festival, everyone

will eat dumplings to thank him. Whats the time now we can eat dumplings,

dumplings in our life more and more common, are more and more popular, but also

become a traditional food of the China. Let me tell you how to make dumplings. .

the first step to buy some dumpling skin, meat (such as pork, beef, mutton, crab

and so on), vegetables (such ascabbage, leek, carrot etc.). The next step to

wash them, and cut them up, add some salt, mix together. Next, put the mixture

into the dumpling skins. Finally put the dumplings into the pot, boil for ten

minutes. You can enjoy dumplings.

During the winter holiday, I was very happy because of the Chinese new year

and other reasons. During the holiday, my parents and I went back to my hometown

in the countryside in Hebei Province. I had not come back for several years, so

that I was so surprised to find that great changes had taken place in this small

village in the past years. Almost every family in the village had color TV set

and some of them had computers. Many families had their houses newly built or

rebuilt. Previously,could be seen everywhere, but now they have taken on an

entirely newlook. Motorcycles or even private cars are not luxuries any

more.

One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were

going to join a tour and travel abroad. Previously, the villagers were busy in

their farm work all the year round, but now they have much more time and money

to relax or entertain. Traveling has become a new trend among villagers. Seeing

these amazing changes, my father said that he would go back to my hometown as

soon as he retired. As for me, I strongly supported his idea.

Is a lovely girl, her innocence is the origin of our happy, brings us her happy smile.

Her name is li zhang, her eyes wide, mouth like a cherry, very lovely, long hair, she is good at jumping rope, run, jump, etc...

Shes good at her grades in school, take the first every time, once dropped her grades, was beaten by her mother and father, the next day I went to school found that she didnt come to school.

I came to her shes at home, a corner to cry, I used to have a look at herll hurt all over, I asked her, "whats wrong with you." She said to me: "mom hit me, I good sad, she is the first hit me."

I was angry for her mother said: "shes your daughter, even if she is bad to also can not call her again." Her mother said: "Im sorry, daughter, mother is wrong, please let we trust." Li sent zhang said: mom, I would like to challenge you.

This is my friend, my good friend forever.

是一个可爱的女生，她的天真是我们快乐的起源，她的快乐带给了我们笑容。

她的名字叫李送张，她的眼睛大大的，嘴巴像樱桃，可爱极了，头发长长的，她擅长跳绳，跑步，跳远，等等……

她在学校她的成绩很好，每次都拿第一，有一次她的成绩下降了，被她的爸爸妈妈打了，第二天我来到学校发现她没来上学。

我来到她家她在家的一个角落哭，我过去一看她满身都是伤，我问她：“你怎么了。”她对我说：“妈妈打我，我好伤心，她是第一次打我。”

我生气的对她的妈妈说：“她是你女儿，即使她考的再不好也不可以打她啊。”她妈妈说：“对不起，女儿，妈妈错了，请你愿谅。”李送张说：妈妈我愿谅你。

这就是我的朋友，我永远的好朋友。

Nowadays, we can often hear the discussion whether buying cars should be encouraged. Some people suggest that we should buy cars. But others claim that driving cars is not a wise idea. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter opinion.

To begin with, there are few parking lots, so the streets are made narrower by the cars parked along the roads. For example, my father could not find any places to park when we went to the supermarket.

Moreover, many drivers do not obey regulations, because people do not pay enough attention to the rule of traffic. For instance, I often see people cross the road when the traffic lights are still red.

Last but not least, the growth of new roads’ construction is usually slower than the increasing number of cars. For example, the length of the road has gone up by 20% in 2002. However, the number of cars increased by 50% in the meantime.

From what has been discussed above, we could draw a conclusion that encouraging buying cars is not fit for today.

西楚霸王项羽，是我很喜欢的一位历史人物。历来人们对他一直都有极大的争议，多少次文人笔下的英雄悲剧，虽然他一直是我眼中的英雄，但不得不承认，即使他在鸿门宴上杀了刘邦，但是那又如何，他仍然不可能夺取天下，成为天下霸主，还百姓一个和平安稳的盛世;即使有机缘巧合让他称了西楚霸王，也不可能千秋万代，如大汉般繁华，对后史影响至深。

首先，他太过自信，于是，只变成了自负。再者，从历史的角度，他该是饱读诗书或者礼贤下士，懂得纳谏。但是他是武将，会打仗，而且打的还不错，陈胜，吴广动摇了秦朝的根基，而项羽就是那最后的一根稻草，最后会死是因为他总是以自我为中心，不听取他人意见，甚至是自己的叔父，而旦太重感情，这一切便早己注定了他悲剧的下场。

其次，他太重感情。这是我喜欢他的一点，但却也是让他失败的一点。乌江战败后，他想到的不是自己保命，而是托付好自己的红颜知己虞姬和宝马。有句话，叫“最是无情帝王家”。项羽他不像刘邦，为了自己可以抛妻弃子，无情无义，天理不容，有人说这是“大男子主义”，无药可救。但我欣赏他的义气，和真诚，这是刘邦所不及的，是他们永远的差距。

再次，他很单纯。刘邦只在鸿门宴上稍一套话，就知道了曹无伤对项羽的进言，而项羽却浑然不知，一心一意地做自己的事，没看到刘邦背后的奸诈的笑。与狡辩多计的刘邦相比，西楚霸王项羽确实显得幼稚得多，甚至是傻。

最后，项羽根本就不可能杀刘邦。因为刘邦事先知道了消息，老谋深算的他敢去赴鸿门宴，就说明已经胜券在握。又有樊哙与项伯相保，张良，萧何和韩信的相护，怎会身死?何况项羽本就重情谊，曾与刘邦结为兄弟，怎么会杀他呢?他刘邦就凭这敢入宴，真真的会算计，让人生厌。

退一万步说，项羽就算杀了刘邦，都不可能夺取天下。败在刘邦手下，是必然的事实，因为他自身的思想，和当时环境的影响。也可以说是项羽成就了刘邦一统天下的霸主梦，刘邦成就了项羽的悲剧——一种足以令整个中华民族为之肃然起敬的悲剧。

那案边釉色为谁添、红墨为谁颜。铜铃声泯灭，铜锈尽绵延。繁华故迁，重音铺过天。

翼州城郊，毛驴牵着老叟一睹云烟，老叟吹着小曲却惊动了天边的孤鸢，于是它衔着他的童年坠入了人间。只因贪得了人间是非，老叟眼帘泪不尽成泉。只鸢又如何去校队，这刻意的签。

那是一场没有浮色的童年，他微笑地走在人间。一切美的意象是对她诗化得铺垫。寻寻觅觅他等她一句挚言。途彼公田，他只用了一个温馨勾勒眼前。如此简单的独白，如此简单的安排，却换得她执意以冷漠泼散成冰的流年。

岁寒数十载，沧桑刻在他的脸上。那光阴酝酿的女儿红，他愈品愈浓，她却故自以笑释从容。

她匆匆了却尘嚣予我以从容，我孤影沉默在溪水桥头。迷失的雾，而我已坠入沉默的低谷，我沉默，声不易出。一如那皎洁的月光斑驳在枯树枝头，或凄美，又或是卑微。一切归于自然，人不予雕琢。

沉默如荼，我尝它千百度，却尝不出你的孤独。为什么你如此委婉而又倏忽。这隐藏在深闺里的雉鹃，又如何飞出你沉默过的远古。

沉默如荼，你尝它千百度，却不在酒暖梦微处。为什么我在故里不见伊人故。这繁华已故的雕塑，染上了风雪，热情不复。

多年后、竹篱短、野草馨。蔓延在浓墨交织的山水间。蓦然一回首，潸然涕下。你蹙绣眉为了谁。近距离的情节，远距离的诉说。我不解你沉默为了谁。开不了口的结局，你沉默又离去。我沉默投之以不舍。因为不忍乱却这片独径上的忧伤。

你沉默因为放弃，以婉约放弃那蝉翼般的柔情。

你沉默因为坚守，以虚无缥缈坚守那雾雨的朦胧。

你沉默，是关于低调的华丽。因为你，我读懂了什么叫放不下的回忆。或许，沉默是我们间最真的回忆。

[高二写人作文:为你而沉默

Parents are the people who care about us the most. But for a lot children,

they think it is necessary for parents to give them everything. As they grow up,

they start to realize their responsibility and feel grateful to their parents. I

was very naughty before. One day, I hanged out to play with my friends very

late, but I havent told my parents, because I thought they would not care. But

when I went home, I found my parents and uncle were sitting together, and they

looked very upset. When my parents saw me, they were angry to ask me why I went

home so late. I felt unhappy and shouted at them. Then my uncle told me that my

parents worried about me so much, and they had searched me for the whole street.

At this moment, I felt so touched, and felt their love.

Chinese nickname "week". Tang dynasty, the Chinese fu "in the spirit in the week, god pose as soon as possible to the moon and the" the week with the moon and the par, highlighted in the associated with affection, and love the most beautiful, is also the most sadness moving two nights. About is for this reason, people call the men and women married auspicious day "week".

On a clear summer night, shining stars in the sky, a white Milky Way like a bridge across the north and south, in the river on both sides, each with a shining star, river, distant relative, that is Altair and vega.

Seventh eve sit watch petunia vega, is a folk custom, according to legend, on this night of the year is heaven vega and the cowherd meet on the magpie bridge. Vega is a beautiful fairy bright, ingenuity, earth women in this evening to her beg for wisdom and artful art, little also not to grant her a happy marriage, so the seventh day is also called the needlework.

Legend in the Tanabata night, looked up and can see the gigolo knit meet the Milky Way, or in the melon and fruit under the frame can be overheard two people meet in the sky when talking about.

Girls in the evening is full of romantic breath, the bright moon in the sky, on the seasonal fruits, the god worship, beg celestial fairy can empower them clever mind and deft hands, let own knitting sewing techniques skillfully, beg for love marriage marriage more artful match. The past marriage for women is decided to a lifetime of happiness for life, so, there is countless beings men and women will in this night, the night static people deep time, to the sky pray yourself being extremely.

七夕别称“星期”。王勃的《七夕赋》“伫灵匹于星期，眷神姿于月夕”把星期与月夕相提并论，点出了一年四季中与亲情、与爱情相关的最美好、也最凄楚动人的两个夜晚。大约正因如此吧，后人便把男女成婚的吉日良辰叫作“星期”。

在晴朗的夏秋之夜，天上繁星闪耀，一道白茫茫的银河象一座天桥横贯南北，在河的东西两岸，各有一颗闪亮的星星，隔河相望，遥遥相对，那就是牵牛星和织女星。

七夕坐看牵牛织女星，是民间的习俗，相传，在每年的这个夜晚，是天上织女与牛郎在鹊桥相会之时。织女是一个美丽聪明、心灵手巧的仙女，凡间的妇女便在这一天晚上向她乞求智慧和巧艺，也少不了向她求赐美满姻缘，所以七月初七也被称为乞巧节。

人们传说在七夕的夜晚，抬头可以看到牛郎织女的银河相会，或在瓜果架下可偷听到两人在天上相会时的脉脉情话。

女孩们在这个充满浪漫气息的晚上，对着天空的朗朗明月，摆上时令瓜果，朝天祭拜，乞求天上的仙女能赋予她们聪慧的心灵和灵巧的双手，让自己的针织女红技法娴熟，更乞求爱情婚姻的姻缘巧配。过去婚姻对于女性来说是决定一生幸福与否的终身大事，所以，世间无数的有情男女都会在这个晚上，夜静人深时刻，对着星空祈祷自己的姻缘美满。

写人的英语作文在高考中不少见，什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。

写人记叙文，一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，应根据要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。

【几点注意】

1.使用正确人称和时态。

①时态：

一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

②人称：第一人称或第三人称

2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等，包括所给的全部信息点，不能遗漏或随意添加。

3.对所给的信息进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。

4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

【常见词语】

①外貌特征：

pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big

smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, …

②性格特点：

absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent,

lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …

③童年情况：

as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,

spend his childhood in, ...

④兴趣爱好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…

⑤教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s

degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …

⑥ 成就或事迹：

become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the

Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,

concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...

⑦他人评价：

an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be

considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make

great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...

例文

你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿，介绍赵郁的成长经历。

注意： 1、词数不少于60。

2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：首席技师 chief technician

Ordinary but Great

We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good

at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

______________________________________

【范文】

Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.

Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

【评析】

1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息：姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组，突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历)，内容完整、详略得当，体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

2. 正确使用人称(第三人称)，灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词，使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

3. 语言规范，表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式，如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等，增加了文章的亮点。

凤凰浴火而盘涅，而我因你而蜕变!——题记

你是谁?我忘了，我不知道你的一切，不知道你为何来到我的身边，不知道你为何会陪我度过一百多个日夜，更不知道将来的将来，我在这里，而你在哪里?

我是个忤逆的人，做事很拗，常常指东走西，随性而为，所以我不喜欢你。“谁让你整天板着脸，跟我欠你钱似的。”我瞥了你一眼，便不再看你。

这时候，你似乎察觉到了我的波动，可你不动声色，照常指着黑板讲着“-=60，f(-)=多少呢?”我不会，只能翻翻白眼，心想躲过一劫是一劫。突然，我听见了我的名字，是你在喊我，我只能无力地起立，像颗呆瓜，说不出个所以然。你看了我一眼，我能感受到你深呼吸了一口气，问道：“不会吗?”

“恩。”语气中略带“责备”，似乎觉得你做错了事，应该得到批评。

“恩好，那我们再讲一遍，你跟着我走，f(-)=-+60……”

我想看你，但却不敢看，我猜一定又是那副板着的脸。“那好，现在你可以告诉我-=60，f(-)=多少了吧。”“72”我有些漫不经心，却瞥见你微微一笑，似昙花一现，随后又是一副严肃。我的心猛然一震，原来你不是这样的啊!对，你的眼神代表着关爱，你的耐心代表着关爱，你的严肃代表着关爱，原来你一直都在关爱着我，而我却从不知道，冷俊的外表下，你有一颗炽热的心，如母爱般光辉耀眼，只是我冰封了自己。那一刻，你融化了我的坚冰，我懂了。

夜间的校园，是那么的宁静，有的只是“踢踏踢踏”微微有些急促的脚步声，它在远去。昏暗的路灯下，藏着无数的秘密。我抬着头，望着你被拉长的残影。

第一堂课照例做着数学，又是一大堆的数字符号，天知道它们代表着什么啊。我抱着头，一道不会做，又是一道，哇下面还有两道。“烦死了，交卷!”我龙飞凤舞般写上自己的名字，看都不看往组长那一扔——让它自生自灭去吧。

第三堂课，门轻轻被打开了，当你拿着试卷走到我跟前时吓了我一跳，你拍拍我的肩，又指了指试卷，问道：“都不会做?”我点了点头。

“你来”我看你时你已经到门外了，那张白卷随风飘动着。像什么?像投降的白旗，看它张牙舞爪的，在嘲笑我呢。

你在办公室为我一道道讲解，我回去时已然下课了。在转角处，我看见你匆匆的背影——孩子一定饿坏了吧!我仿佛看见了你焦急的模样还有远处飘来的哭啼。

这一刻，我感动了。

春日里，嗡嗡的蜜蜂酿制的蜜儿是你从瑶池中捞出的琼浆，“为谁辛苦为谁甜”是你告诉我们奉献的高尚;夏日里，亭亭的荷花上晶莹的露珠，是你从天幕中洒下的甘露，“出淤泥而不染”是你教育我们处事要自律;秋日里，累累的硕果天边的金黄，是你从彩霞中摸出的浓妆，“粒粒皆辛苦”是你告诉我们成功源自勤奋;冬日里，朵朵的梅花万里飘雪，是你从仙子那里取来的薄纱，“凌寒独自开”是你给予我们迎难而上的勇气。

喔，你是谁?你是我的老师，你是我的长辈，你是顾--。

People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of

traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.

My preference depends on the purpose of the travel. On a summer vacation I

travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk

on a grass covered path along a river or among the hills I feel detached from

the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get

more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop

where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a

train or on a bus. net

When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I

still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. People travel by

plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer

vacation is to go on foot.

在这一则报导中，我学到很多事，但我第一个想到的是，造成地球变暖的原因是二氧化碳增加。

In this paper, I have learned a lot of things, but I think the first one is the cause of global warming, the increase of carbon dioxide.

为什么二氧化碳会增加呢?我想到的原因是人们常常开车、养食家畜、工厂大量排放黑烟……等。不过这些是大家可以一起解决，说不定可以改善地球继续暖化，例如：目的地很近的话可以骑自行车;目的地很远的话，可以搭乘公共交通运输工具;家畜的排泄物经过处理再排入河内;工厂可以建一座废弃处理厂……等。

Why carbon dioxide will increase? I think the reason is often drive, raising livestock, food factory emissions of smoke...... Etc.. But these are all can solve them together, it can improve the Earth continues to warm, for example: the destination is close enough to ride a bike; destination long enough, can take the public transport; waste livestock treated and then discharged into the Hanoi factory; to build a waste treatment plant...... Etc..

请大家不要小看二氧化碳的威力，等到海平面上升、都市浸水和农地淹没，到最后就会面临粮食不足的危机了。请大家跟我一起喊：“停止伤害地球的行为吧!我们居住的地球只有一个。”

Please do not underestimate the power of carbon dioxide, when the sea level rise, urban water and farmland submerged, eventually facing food shortage. Please call with me: "stop the harm to the earths behavior! Only one earth on which we live. "

When we watch the TV series, there is always the similar plot, in order to fulfill the dreams, the protagonist give up the best time for the treatment, though they are seriously ill. This sounds so inspiring, the spirit of pursuing the dreams moves so many audiences, but for me, besides moved, I feel more sorry about the protagonists, for their unwise choices. Life is important, only the living person can have the rights to talk about the dreams, if they lose their lives, everything is impossible. So health is more important than dreams, people need to keep themselves healthy first, and then they can better fulfill their dreams. The wise person will choose to get the treatment and give up the dreams for a while, when they recover, they continue their dreams. So health first, then other things rank second.

当我们看电视剧的时候，总可以发现相同的剧情，为了实现理想，主人公放弃了最佳的治疗时间，虽然他们本身已经病得很严重。这听起来很励志，为了追求理想的精神感动了很多观众，但是对于我来说，除了感动，对主人公我感到遗憾，因为他们做了不明智的决定。生命是很重要的，只有活着的人才有权利去谈论理想，如果他们失去了生命，一切就不可能了。因此健康比理想重要，人们需要首先保持他们健康，然后才能更好地实现理想。明智的人会选择治疗，暂时放弃理想，当恢复健康的时候，他们可以继续他们的理想。所以，健康第一，其他的事情第二。

In my opinion, the schoolwork now being assigned to high school students is

too heavy. While it is true that students need to study, they need other things

as well if they are to grow into healthy and well-rounded adults. High should be

allowed more time for play. Plying is not wasting time, as some think. It gives

them physical exercise, and also exercise their imagination. Which tends to be

stifled by too much study. Finally, the pressure put on high school students by

excessive schoolwork can cause serious stress, which is unhealthy physically and

mentally. I do not advocate the elimination of schoolwork. I do think, however,

that a reduction of the current heavy load would be beneficial to students and

to the society as a whole.