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1000小升初英语记叙文写作指导
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+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
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篇1:关于疫情的英语优秀作文
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+ 加入清单春节,一个我期待很久的日子,原本应该处处是一派快乐、热闹,到处充满欢声笑语的景象。但今年的春节,由于新型冠状病毒的肆虐,所以我只能待在家中,不可以出门,有事出门也要戴着口罩,而且爸爸妈妈每天都会提醒我要注意保暖,注意个人卫生。而在前线奋战的医生们,不知奋斗了多少个日夜,可是,新型冠状病毒好像丝毫没有退却的念头。在这几天中,不知有多少人被病毒夺去生命,不知有多少医生为了战“疫”不可以回家,还在与病毒抗争。
Spring Festival, a day Im looking forward to for a long time, should be
full of happiness, bustle and laughter. But this years novel coronavirus is so
rampant that I can only stay at home and wear masks when I go out, and my
parents remind me to keep warm and pay attention to personal hygiene every day.
The novel coronavirus seemed to have no intention of retreat, but doctors
struggled for many days and nights. In these days, I dont know how many people
have been killed by the virus, and how many doctors are still fighting against
the virus in order to fight the epidemic.
我不禁要问:“新型冠状病毒,你为什么选择了人类?为什么选择这样的日子降临人间?为什么要来伤害人类?”
What novel coronavirus, what do you choose to do with humans? What makes
such a date come to earth? Why do we want to harm human beings?
一天晚上,新型冠状病毒大胆地出现在我面前,扬起下巴轻蔑地一笑说:“你只看结果,不看经过,你知道我是怎么来的吗?我本来生活在动物身上,可是你们这些人类杀死了它们,还把它们吃了,还有人直播吃蝙蝠的过程。所以引发疾病的不是我,而是你们人类。而且我想告诉你,在这个世界上最可怕的不是狮子、老虎,而是你们人类,你们人类的嘴是一个无底洞,是永远也填不满的,你们人类贪婪、残忍,不停地伤害动物,难道你们就不害臊吗?”说完它转过身就走。我冲着病毒叫喊:“可人类也有善良的一面,在这个世界上好人一定比坏人多。”新型冠状病毒转过身来说:“人类的残忍是不可想象的,你们已经打破了生态平衡,直到现在还有人不知悔改!”我大声喊道:“你快走吧!人类已经知道错了,如果你再不走,人类总有一天会把你消灭的。”新型冠状病毒说:“我可以走,不过,如果人类再不知悔改,我的兄弟们还会再来的。”
One night, novel coronavirus boldly appeared before me. Chin lifted up and
smiled scornfully. "You only look at the results, but do not see the passage. Do
you know how I came? I was living on animal, but you humans killed them, ate
them, and someone else was eating live bats." So its not me that causes the
disease, its you humans. And I want to tell you that the most terrible thing in
the world is not the lion or the tiger, but you human beings. Your human mouth
is a bottomless hole, which is filled with discontent forever. You human beings
are greedy, cruel, and constantly hurting animals. Arent you ashamed? "After
saying it, turn around and walk away. I shouted at the virus, "but human beings
have a good side. There must be more good people than bad people in this world."
The novel coronavirus turned around and said, "the cruelty of human beings is
unthinkable. You have broken the ecological balance. Until now, there are still
no repentance!" I shouted, "go away!" the human race has already known that it
is wrong. If you do not go again, mankind will one day destroy you. The novel
coronavirus said, "I can go, but if the human beings do not know repentance, my
brothers will come again."
突然一阵铃声传来,我醒了,可新型冠状病毒说的话却还在我耳边回荡。我希望人类可以吸取此次的教训,善待地球,拒绝吃野生动物,也希望那些染上新型冠状病毒的人们快点好起来
Suddenly, novel coronavirus came back, but I still woke up in my ear.
Animal and novel coronavirus, I hope that people can learn from this lesson,
treat the earth well, refuse to eat wild animals, and hope that those who are
infected with new coronavirus will get better soon._ueditor_page_break_tag_
篇2:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单我的一家总共五口人爷爷、奶奶、父亲、母亲和我。家充满了温馨的感觉。
爷爷六十有余,皱纹满面,在那一道道深深的皱纹里,蕴含着一个感人的故事……爷爷的职业是务农、种葡萄,但他喜欢京剧。父亲的头上有不少白发,大概是日夜操劳而行成的吧。父亲额头有两颗黑痣,这并排站在父亲脸上。我父亲还有个不好的习惯,常常喝酒,每次都喝得大醉。母亲那道浓浓的眉毛下有一对大双眼。母亲的嘴能说会道,要谈起文章,她滔滔不绝。而且母亲很勤劳,我家所有些家务她全包了。而我,是一个小学四年级的小学生,爱玩电脑、爱看电视、爱做小制作。看了以上介绍,你对我和我的家人有了肯定的认知了吧。
篇3:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单我爱我的家,我的爸爸和妈妈那是一首歌,一首使人温暖的歌;那是一首歌,一首使人快乐的歌。每次听到,我都会想起那次家庭跳绳比赛。
星期天的下午,睡完午觉起来的我觉得浑身都是劲儿,就对爸爸说:爸爸,我们比赛跳绳吧!爸爸很爽快地答应了。哥哥和妈妈当裁判,妈妈算我跳的数量,哥哥呢?当然是算爸爸跳的了。
我伸伸胳膊,抬抬腿,做好热身运动。比赛开始了,哥哥大声地喊道:各就各位,预备开始!我握紧绳子的两端快速地跳了起来。心想:这次可不能输给爸爸,我得加快速度。可没过一会儿,我的身体越来越沉,脚也有些不听使唤。可看看爸爸,他仍在飞快地跳着,绳子就像蝴蝶的翅膀在扇动。三分钟到了,比赛结果出来了,爸爸跳了200下,我只跳了134下,正当我垂头丧气的时候,妈妈突然说:这次因二位参赛者都很努力,所以都可以得到精美礼品一份。听了这话,泄气的我一蹦三尺高,家里传来了一阵阵欢声笑语。
篇4:雾霾英语
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+ 加入清单As the saying goes "qiu dong smog knife to kill". We can see and catch
"smog" actually have bigger influence on the body, especially the high incidence
of respiratory and cardiovascular and cerebrovascular diseases in the elderly
group.
1. The effects on the respiratory system. Haze composition is very
complicated, including hundreds of atmospheric chemistry particulate matter.
Which is bad for your health mainly aerosol particles less than 10 microns in
diameter, such as mineral particles, sea salt, sulfate, nitrate, organic aerosol
particles, fuel and car exhaust, etc, it can directly enter and adhesion in the
human respiratory tract and alveoli. Especially the submicron particles are
deposited on upper and lower respiratory tract and alveolar, causes the disease
such as the acute rhinitis and acute bronchitis. For obstructive bronchus
asthma, chronic bronchitis, emphysema and chronic respiratory diseases such as
chronic obstructive pulmonary disease patients, haze weather can make the
illness acute or acute exacerbation. If this kind of environment will cause lung
cancer for a long time.
2. The effects on the cardiovascular system. Haze weather pollutants in the
air, air pressure is low, easy to induce acute cardiovascular disease. Such as
heavy fog, the moisture content is very high, if people in outdoor activities
and sports, the bodys sweat is not easy to discharge, cause people bosom
frowsty, increased blood pressure.
3. The fog haze weather can also result in close formation ultraviolet
weakened, activity of the infectious pathogen in the air, increase of infectious
diseases.
4. Reduce because of the fog the sun, ultraviolet irradiation in children
is insufficient, inadequate vitamin D in the body to generate, the absorption of
calcium significantly reduce, serious can cause rickets in infants, childrens
growth to slow down.
5. Affect mental health. Heavy fog weather depression, due to weak light
and easy to let a person produce mental laziness, depression, and pessimism,
encounter something goes wrong and even easier to spin out of control.
6. Affect the traffic safety. Low vision in haze weather, visibility, air
quality is poor, easy to cause traffic jams, traffic accidents.
篇5:关于教育的英语
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+ 加入清单With the development of todays technology, education becomes more
important than before because people need to learn more to adapt the
society.Education enables people to understand the world better and have a good
job in the futrue.Moreover ,it also hao an impact on peoples behavior.
First of all, education improves peoples learning ability that makes them
know more about the world.Most things taught in schools are the basic skills or
means to further understsnding of our society .Only by learning these,can human
have an opportunity to study more and know more about the society .Secondly,
opportunities are often given to someone who is good educated .Employers tend to
believe that people have high education are intelligent and they can manage
their jod and adapt the working environment quickly.That is why the educated
people always get a good job. Thirdly, the more people learn the more modest and
polite they act.Learned people think that they are not good enough ,so they show
a big patience to learn from everything .They often try to figure out the
solution of problems by things they meet or learn.
In sum,education can turn people out with better learning skills,job
offering and good behavior,so I think education is important to people to
fulfill their goals and live a easy life .
篇6:小升初英语作文:Busy
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+ 加入清单I dont like Saturday at all. Because I am tooBusyto enjoy myself. In the morning, I go to school to have classes from 8:00 to 11:30. In the afternoon, I play the violin with the classmates from 2 to 4. In the evening, I have to go to an evening school.When I get back, I only want to have a sound sleep. Sometimes Im as busy as a bee. I would like to have a free Saturday of my own.
篇7:2024年高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文,给出的要点虽然不多,但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历,谈出自己对此的感受即可。
俗话说:早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。
【参考范文】
the early bird will catch worms
an old saying "the early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.
for example, the chinese athletes excellent performance in xx olympic winter games in vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. if they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.
another case in point is my learning experience. i was good at english, but i couldnt pass the exam, for i wasnt prepared well before the examination. i had many things to solve at that time. as i met the complex things, i was at a loss. the reason was that i had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so i failed.
in short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.
篇8:关于疫情的英语作文万能句子
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+ 加入清单Scientists
believe an animal source is "the most likely primary source" but that some
human-to-human transmission has occurred.
科学家认为动物是“最有可能的初始感染源”,不过,也有一些人传人的病例。
Signs
of infection include respiratory symptoms, fever, cough, shortness of breath and
breathing difficulties.
感染症状包括:呼吸道症状,发烧,咳嗽,呼吸短促,呼吸困难等。
2019-nCoV,
as its been labelled, is understood to be a new strain of coronavirus that has
not previously been identified in humans.
这种新型冠状病毒(2019-nCoV)此前未在人类身上发现过。
Coronaviruses
are a broad family of viruses, but only six (the new one would make it seven)
are known to infect people.
冠状病毒是一个庞大的病毒家族,目前已知会感染人类的有六种(新发现的这种是第七种)。
篇9:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单大家好,我叫刘若瑶,我们家是三口之家。先说我那强壮的爸爸吧,我爸爸他很棒,因为他会把我高高举过头顶。他上楼时的脚步声很响,我们家住在四楼,爸爸上到二楼时,我们都能听见那响响的脚步声,就知道亲爱的爸爸回来了。
我妈妈她很友好,每次回家时,她都会拥抱一下我们,并且诉说一天的快乐,她还很关心我们的身体健康……
下面我就要上场了,我很活泼开朗,是我们家的小天使,爸爸妈妈一看见我就像看见了开心果,我每一次都会给爸爸妈妈逗的哈哈大笑。
这就是我的家庭成员,每一天都有我们家的欢声笑语!
篇10:我爱我的家庭的英语作文
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+ 加入清单the typhoon is coming. it comes with the heavily wind and rains. this is my first time to see the wind so strong. i got sleeplessness on sunday night. the windows were making noises by the great wind. even i could hear the voice of the iron sheet down on the street. we could not go out while the typhoon coming. it was very dangers because we might be hit by the trees, ad signboards or others things. anyway, stayed at home was the best choice for the foul weather.
this afternoon, we play a game called ‘family tree’. this game is very interesting. i’m very interested in it. our teacher’s family is very large. she has many brothers and sisters. but i am unlucky, i has only a sister and i without brothers. but i think i have the best parents in the world. they are very friendly to me. i live in a good family. my grand parents loves me, too. when they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.
when i was a child, i can’t undertand them. i want to have bread. my grand father took a bike to qu tang. because in our village there is no ‘bread house’. qu tang is far from our village. now i grow up. i understand them when i think of this things. i will cry i can’t use words to say i love them.
i love my family!
篇11:有关规则英语作文高中
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+ 加入清单Nowadays, smart phone has been part of our life. We can see people lowing
down their heads and playing smart phones all the time. When people are walking
on the street, the traffic regulations are no longer their first concern. It is
so dangerous for them to keep their attention on the phone. Dutch officers
figured out a new rule to let people realize the traffic lights. On the ground,
the traffic light can be seen. What a smart idea. When people are watching smart
phones, they can see the lights, too. At the same time, we need to think about
the problem that whether our life is controlled by the technology.
篇12:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单我有一个“乐天派”之家,家中成员有偶老汉,妈咪,还有本大少爷。当然,偶也会当当出气筒。
幽默的老汉
偶的老汉比较幽默,经常搞些笑话出来,令人捧腹大笑。瞧,他又来了。老汉长着一副严肃的脸,其实他一点也不严肃。我最讨厌他用针似的老板胡子,在我睡觉的时候来亲我的脸(嘻嘻,我魅力大,没办法哦),让我总是睡不着,因此我还得了后遗症,每次睡觉的时候都会在梦中打醉拳。老汉最大的特点就是走路两脚分的开,像电影[[举起手来]]里的那个小日本鬼子,腿型像大大的“O”字。
篇13:读书英语年级100词
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+ 加入清单I think reading is important in the whole life for people. There are many
benefits of reading.
Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs
without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and
writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write.
Thirdly, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to
job hunting in the future.
Finally, reading helps us become self-cultivation that would be beneficial
to our whole life. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and
what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of
reading.
篇14:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单我生活在农村一个普普通通的家庭,我家里有四囗人,爸爸、妈妈、弟弟和我。我的家庭并不富裕,爸爸常年在外打工,妈妈在家种了几亩田,生活虽然艰辛,但是我们依然快乐。
弟弟是个小皮猴,每天总是笑嬉嬉的给我们制造麻烦。妈妈是个勤劳的妇女,每天起早贪黑忙碌着,为我们洗衣服,做饭,叫我们起床,吃饭,送我们上学,然后去地里干农活。我爸是名工人,在外地打工为我们挣生活费,一天也不舍得耽误。而我就是要好好学习考出一个好成绩让爸爸妈妈咸的到欣慰。
这就是我的家庭,一个简简单单,普普通通的家庭,一个并不富裕但依然快乐的家庭。
篇15:家庭生活片段作文200字
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+ 加入清单我们家是一个四口之家。我有亲爱的父母和一个可爱的弟弟,还不到一岁。母亲有瀑布状的直发。母亲有双眼皮和眼睛。人们说母亲的眼睛特别美丽,就像天空中的星星。妈妈是家庭主妇,总是为我们的生活工作。父亲的眼睛和母亲的眼睛相反。父亲的眼睛很小。他总是有一个大肚子。他的姐夫开玩笑说,他的父亲有一个七个月大的孩子在他的胃里。爸爸的皮肤是白色的,但是健康的亲戚朋友说爸爸是个好人,不喝酒,不打牌。但爸爸的脾气有点暴躁。我哥哥很可爱,和我小时候完全一样。我妈妈说我们就像一个模特儿。我哥哥的皮肤是白色的,但他的睫毛长得像个洋娃娃。我是个没有白眼睛的女孩。我学习不好,但我是个好孩子。我的四口之家很幸福。
篇16:写长城的英语作文初三80词
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+ 加入清单As the saying goes, "not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall".
When I was small, I know there is a Chinese building called the Great Wall. So I
very want to go to there to see. Finally, when I was three years old, my father
and mother took me to the Great Wall.
Far see the Great Wall, it is like a huge dragon, hovering in the numerous
mountain. Its ups and downs, and sometimes hidden in the mountains, and
sometimes jumped out from the mountains, like surf on the roller.
Father hold me, go up along the steep steps, I looked at the Great Wall, it
is hard to find a flat place, all of them are steep, slope, the steps of each
slope and the steps of the joint has a tower. These towers like past a huge,
magnificent castle.
People mountain people sea, climbing to the Great Wall. In the photo and
the Great Wall, magnificent in praise of the Great Wall, people say: "well, the
badaling Great Wall really real!" And enjoy the beautiful scenery. Even the
foreigners come to China to see the beauty of the Great Wall. Looking down from
the Great Wall, the rolling mountains, reflected in our eyes, pieces of thick
forests and maturity, endless.
The Great Wall is built with large stone and ChengZhuan, tall and strong,
the walls covered with square brick, square brick is flat and level. Outside the
wall along the lines of "window" and the "gap".
The Great Wall, it is the world famous great buildings.
篇17:我的暑假英语
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+ 加入清单This year. I want to have a happy summer holiday so I want to do some
interesting things.
今年。我想有一个快乐的暑假,所以我想做一些有趣的事情。
I want to go the sea and I would like to swim in the sea.I want to play
water with my parentsin the sea.
我想去海边,我喜欢在海里游泳。我想我的parentsin海玩水。
I would like to visit my grandparents and eat much good food.
我想去看望我的祖父母和吃很多好的.食物。
I want to have a wonderful summer holiday this year.
今年我想有一个美好的暑假。
篇18:有关老师的英语
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+ 加入清单Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss
Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficult when we began to study
English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came
into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She
said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the
fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened
carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class
was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more
interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss
Wei!”
篇19:大学英语
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+ 加入清单When students are going to high school, they are under great pressure,
because their main goal is to enter the college, so they need to work so hard.
The school will test them so often that they want to get the best scores.
Cheating on the exams is many students’ choice, as they could not do well on the
exam, so they want to find the confidence by getting the high marks. Other
students even buy the exam answers, what they do is totally wrong. Frist, it
will cost students a lot of money on buying the answer, it refers to spend their
parents’ money, it is not easy to earn money. Second, the answers that students
buy are not accurate all the time, most of the answers are wrong, students are
easy to get cheated. Students should work hard to improve their study.
篇20:小升初英语作文:School information
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+ 加入清单Its the first day of school once again. Stepping into the gate of the school always reminds me of the responsibility I carry as a student. Being a student is not just about attending classes and showing up during examinations. I’m here to be empowered. To gain knowledge is all about empowerment. And wish that someday, I could use that knowledge to make a significant contribution to the society.