我的英语老师作文四年级（推荐20篇）

杨老师留着一头短发，戴着一副大镜框的黑色眼镜，白白的皮肤，大大的眼睛，就像个平易近人的邻家女孩。

杨老师是一个幽默风趣的老师。一节英语课上，老师正在教我们背诵“金鱼”这一单词。突然，她好像想到了什么，眨巴着大眼睛对我们说：“你们知道金鱼是什么颜色的吗？”

“我知道，我知道，金鱼一定是黄色的。”一位同学沾沾自喜地说。

“不对，不对，金鱼明明就是红色的嘛！”一位同学立即反对。

“谁说的，金鱼明明还有黑色的呢。”一位同学胸有成竹地说。同学们七嘴八舌地讨论着。

“停。”老师做了一个指挥家结束指挥的动作，“金鱼其实是蓝色的。”杨老师捂着嘴笑着说。

“怎么可能？金鱼怎么会是蓝色的？”同学们异口同声地说。

“因为金鱼总是‘blue，blue’啊。”杨老师强忍住笑说道。

大家一脸诧异，然后恍然大悟——原来大家都被杨老师骗了。

虽然杨老师幽默风趣，但是她也有严肃的一面。

一天中午，杨老师前脚刚踏出教室，一大批“口水军”就见缝插针，如同一大群麻雀“叽叽喳喳”地热烈讨论起来，无论班长怎么吼，都盖不住大家的热烈讨论声。杨老师一个健步冲上讲台，把手中的教案狠狠地摔在讲台上，对大家说：“你们把这儿当菜市场了！这里是教室，是学习的地方。如果你自己不要学习，还有别人要学习呢！自己好好反省一下吧！”杨老师的话深深地刻在大家心里。

英语老师杨老师幽默而又严肃，我们都爱杨老师！

[优选作文：我的英语老师

Dear Ms Zhang,

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.

One month ago, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, as my headteacher, you asked me to go to your office. Instead of blaming me, you comforted me and discussed with me the reasons for my failing in the exam. More unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the College Entrance Examination.

Ms Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. Wish you happiness and good health.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

December 27th, 2009

Dear Mr Pan:

It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.

Its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didnt mean you are old, youre young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. Youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.

Ive got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, Id like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

Happy new year.

With every good wish.

Yours sincerely Dali Wang

[给英语老师的一封信,英文作文

“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。”这句名言不正是赞扬老师那种无私奉献的精神吗？如果说“妈妈”是我们来到世界上的第一声呼唤，那么“老师“就是我们步入文化知识的第一声称呼。在这六年的小学生活里，有许多老师曾教过我，在他们的辛勤培育下，让我懂得了做人的道理和中国深渊的文化知识，在这么多位教过我的老师中，我最喜爱的老师就是现在的班主任欧阳老师。

欧阳老师是一位可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师。我们班在学校算是很出名，每个老师来上课都会以笑脸而来，伤心而回。从此我们班在学校就出名了，每个老师都不愿意来我们班上课，只有欧阳老师依然不放弃我们。这也因为我们班的同学很调皮，经常为一两句不中听的话发生争执，为一两件微不足道的事情而打架，使到整个班变得很乱。

虽然欧阳老师也曾对我们失望过，但她并没有因此放弃我们，而是更加耐心地教育我们，让我们懂得做人的道理，让我们知道父母最大的希望就是自己的孩子能够出人头地，不在受没有文化的苦，欧阳老师总是以一些特别的方式让我们记住以往的教训，做到知错能改、诚实守信，不仅是在课堂上还是在课外，欧阳老师总是能给我们一种和蔼可亲，平易近人的感觉。经过几年的奋斗，终于，欧阳老师的付出得到了回报，在去年的期末考试中我们班的成绩在十几个学校中，拿到了第二名，给学校争了很大的光，不管怎么说这也是欧阳老师的功劳呀！

欧阳老师非常关爱学生。记得有一段时间，快临近期末考试，水痘传染很厉害，尤其像学校人多密集的地方，传染的更快。学校各班都有人感染水痘，我们班也有个别同学感染，一请假就是一两个星期，对学习影响很大。欧阳老师为了防止传染水痘的同学成绩下降，就叫一些基础好的同学帮他们补习，一有不明白的问题欧阳老师就耐心的讲解，直到同学弄懂题意，有时还印一些练习卷来做，然后根据同学容易做错的题目，在仔细地讲解，直到同学做对为止，她才慢慢地离去，做自己的工作，老师的付出让同学们对考试也更有信心了，果然在期末考试中，我们拿到了好成绩，算是给欧阳老师的惊喜吧！

我即将毕业了，但欧阳老师为我们班做的一切一切，令我肃然起敬，在这的六年的小学生活里，是您给了我世界上最宝贵的东西—知识；是您让我的成绩和写作水平渐渐的提高；是您让我懂得了做人的道理和做事的原则；是您让我从一个丑小鸭变成里一只美丽的天鹅；是您用知识的源泉改变了我的人生；是您创造了一个全新的我。我会永远记住这为可亲可敬、关爱学生的优秀老师—欧阳老师。

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher. She oomes from New Zealand. She is thirty-one years old. She has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. She looks very kind. And in fact, she is kind indeed.

Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. When we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.

Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm:" Eaoh lesson she Will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.

Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.

I will always praise the look of her -- my Chinese teacher miss wang. My Chinese teacher is an ordinary reveal the extraordinary people, especially the heart of her love life more let I admire; .

Remember in a silent night, the whole school hardly see a muddy footprints, the air is permeated with laughter was the cold wind blowing. Only the teacher the busy figure, I and other two classmates, was in terribly classroom "imprisoned", the write quietly noises. When we fall in the abyss of difficult, the teacher always took pains to teach us homework. Know that we know so far. I looked up, a dark outside the window, the earth has been shrouded in the shadows of the night. Carrying a heavy bag, according to the weak beam. "Does the teacher dont want to go home? Dont want to eat delicious food, enjoy the warmth of home?" This a series of problems for a long time in my ear.

The teacher always to care for us, protect us, my teacher is such a teacher, an ordinary reveal the extraordinary teacher.

我总是会将赞许的目光投向她——我的语文老师王老师。我的语文老师是一个平凡中透露着不平凡的人，尤其是她的爱生之心更让我敬仰;。

记得是在一个寂静的夜晚，整个学校几乎看不见一个浑浊的脚印，空中洋溢着的欢声笑语也被冷风吹得无影无踪。只有老师那繁忙的身影，我还有其他两个同学，被“囚禁”在可怕地教室里，那写字悄无声息地作响着。当我们跌倒在困难的深渊中，老师总是会不厌其烦地教我们作业。知道我们一个个弄明白为止。我抬头一望，窗外一片漆黑，大地已被笼罩在夜幕的阴影下。背着沉重的书包，照着惨弱的光束。“难道老师不想回家吗?不想吃香喷喷的饭菜，享受家的温馨吗?”这一系列问题久久在我的耳旁打响。

老师总是无微不至地关照着我们，呵护着我们，我的老师就是这样的老师，一个平凡中透露着不平凡的老师。

Yao teacher:

You are a red candle, burning the most passionate torch in our hearts. Just into the fourth grade, you are very strict with us, your face of seriousness in my opinion is not used to, because we from the first grade began to be spoiled, spoiled, often lawless. You come, such eyes, such majesty, as if to shock everyone. Everyone again. Also not noisy, after class no longer chase dozen, we are like a new man, we can no longer not be in a temper. We have come to understand that it is for our good that you are strict with us.

Spring silkworm to dead silk, candles into ash tears began to dry. Teacher, you have been working silently in your own ordinary job for 25 years. How many outstanding talents have you cultivated? No one can count. Someone said to see the word such as people, my words have been written not good, is your patience and write in my exercise book some words of encouragement to remind me, therefore, my words slowly beautiful. It gives me a lot of confidence. "A teacher is a true seed, a messenger of good, a banner of beauty, the embodiment of love." There is nothing wrong with this remark. You run between school and home every day.

Once, your sons severe fever caused pneumonia. In the afternoon, family members called to urge you to go to see, although you are anxious, but in order to dozens of students in the school, but still did not go. When you get off work, your husband asks you, "Is your student important or is your son important?" You say: "All important." Then you explained slowly to your husband, Its enough to take care of your son by yourself. But what if there were so many students at school? You walk out of the room and look at your son, who is sallow and coughing, with tears streaming down his face, and you say, "Jack, Ive been a bad mother." You always make choices in bitterness, and you make the choices that came before you. With the persistent pursuit of career and the sincere heart of loving students, you have composed an ordinary and moving song with consistent diligence and enterprising spirit. Teacher I know your health has been bad, for us you also have to take care of yourself. I will repay you with my progress in study and live up to your expectations. In the New Year, I sincerely wish you good health! Students all over the world!

有人说老师是蜡烛，燃烧自己，照亮学生的人生路，但是我却要说老师像妈妈。

我们的班主任张老师，她就是这样一位像妈妈样的好老师。

每天早晨，我们都会早早的来到学校，玩会儿游戏后再上第一节课。我们最爱玩的就是踩线的游戏了。一个同学跳起来，能在落地时去拍到另一个同学算赢。当我正准备跳时，林袁龙同学也向我这边跳来，我就想马上过去拍他一下，可陈省文同学这时也跳起来去拍他了，于是砰的一声，我和陈省文同学相撞了。我的下巴重重地撞在了陈省文同学的肩膀上。顿时，我眼冒金星，感觉天旋地转的，我的嘴巴不能张开，甚至连说话都困难了。在一旁玩耍的同学见状，马上把我都扶到了教室，我捂着下巴很难为情地躲到桌子底下去了。

当上课铃响时，值日生喊了声起立！，我依旧捂着脸站了起来。从指缝中却看见了张老师正朝我望。当老师说了声同学们请坐下后，她并没有立即上课，而是向前排同学打听情况，等张老师了解清楚了我受伤一事后，她马上把我拉进了办公室，亲切地问：需要去医院吗？我摇了摇头。来，我看看，张老师俯下身，托着我的下巴，看了看，那因焦急而紧皱的眉头也渐渐地舒展开：没有伤口，小问题，我帮你涂点碘酒吧。张老师从她办公桌抽屉里拿出一个小纸盒，里面放着许多小药瓶、创可贴、棉签之类的东西。只见她拿起一个茶色小瓶，拧开瓶盖，用棉签在里面蘸了一下，然后在我下巴上轻轻地涂了两遍，顿时火辣辣的下巴感觉凉凉的，疼痛感一下子全消失了。从张老师微笑的眼神里，我似乎感觉到了一种叫母爱的力量。

当我昂首挺胸地重新坐回座位上时，同学们都向我投来了羡慕的眼光。他们似乎在遗憾为什么撞的不是他们而是我呢。这时，微笑着的张老师，也开始给我们上课了，她那清晰动听的声音，更加让我觉得，她是那么的美丽漂亮。这堂课，我听得非常认真，因为，我已经深深地喜欢上了这位像妈妈样的张老师。

[我的老师四年级作文

我们班的老师在讲课的时候都讲的栩栩如生，然而在上下课时却非常的“慢”。例如：今天上午第四节课是语文课，可是上课的铃声过去了许久，还是不见老师的身影。不知问自己多少次“为何黄老师也慢了，真闹心！”就在这时，班上的捣蛋鬼唐某和赵某在教室里打起了口水仗，他们你一句我一句的，听的我儿朵都要长茧子了。

终于，班长到办公室叫老师了，可班长给我的结果简直是晴天霹雳——上数学。随之，数学老师迈进了教室，我们只好无可奈何地拿出了数学书。

我们班的老师除了一个“慢”还在占课，这可就要数“Einglishmiss张小姐”——英语老师了。

太好了，这节课是电脑课，又可以痛痛快快的玩一节电脑了，心里正在美滋滋地想着，可英语老师的出现让我有点无语……老师却笑盈盈的对我们说：“今天没电了，上英语课，”我们全班同学几乎倒下。

我希望老师可以按时上课，给我们一个好的学习心态。

A great change is now taking place in higher education throughout our country。 Teachers are being held responsible as never before for how well they serve their students。 It has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students。 In some universities students＇ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness。

This， however， has caused great controversy。 Some are in favor of the rating system。 They hold that since students attend the teachers classes everyday， they should have their opinion about their teachers＇ effectiveness。 Others， on the contrary， are strongly against it。 They think that students＇ rating is easy to administer and score， but it also is easy to abuse。 They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students＇ rating forms。 Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials used are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject。These judgments require professional knowledge， which is best left for the teachers＇ colleagues。

I think students＇ rating of their teachers is necessary， but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers＇ performance。 Instead of rating the teachers＇ knowledge on the subject， students should be asked to estimate what they themselves have leaned in a course， and to report on such things as a teacher＇s ability to communicate with students， his relationship with students， and his ability to arouse interest in the subject。

[学生评价老师的英语作文

敬爱的张老师：

您好!

您是我心目中最敬重的好老师，您时常关心着我们，我们遇到困难时您也会耐心解答。您就像一根蜡烛，照亮了我们，燃烧的却是您自己。

大树的成长，离不开阳光雨露;花儿的生活，离不开大地;而我们的生活，也离不开您。有了您的热情帮助，您的谆谆教诲，才会有我们的健康成长，早日成熟。

老师，我还清清楚楚地记得我第一次见到您时，当时，我心里又紧张又害羞，但是，您紧张亲切的笑容打消了我紧张害怕的情绪。接着，你指导着我们打扫卫生，发书。从那一刻起，您就成了我心中最敬重的老师。

每天，您都会比我们早到学校，开始了一天的工作。放学了，可您还没有回家，您坐在办公桌前，改着我们的作业，准备第二天的课程。上课了，您循循善诱，谆谆教导。下课后，您年轻又充满活力，是我们的良师益友。

老师，谢谢您对我认真负责的教育，谢谢您对我的关心，谢谢您传授给我知识，谢谢您对我的无私奉献。“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干”是对您辛勤工作的只是写照。老师，现在我想对您说一句心里话：“老师，谢谢您，您辛苦了!”

敬礼!

学生：

20xx年1月26日

I am studying in a middleSchoolnow, my school is near my home. I love my

school, I can learn a lot in my school. The teachers teach me knowledge about

math, Chinese and others things about life, these are important to me, I become

mature. I make many friends here, the first day I come to this school, I get to

know my deskmate, in a few days, I get to know my classmate, now I have a lot of

friends, I feel so happy. In my school, the equipment is modern and we can use

the newly invented resource. The environment of my school is also beautiful, the

trees are tall, the grass is green. I love my school so much.

When summer comes, there are two things I’d like to do most. The first is to go swimming and the second is to eat ice cream. Ice cream is my favorite food, It can make me feel cool and drives away my hotness. The flavor of strawberry always attracts me. I know I can’t eat it too much and have to control myself.

我在英语学校换过好几位老师，而令我印象最为深刻的还是王欣老师。

王欣老师中等个子，一头长发随意扎起，她笑时嘴角有两个梨涡，让人感到温暖。在我心里，她就像神一样完美、善良、乐观、开朗……，而她最显著的特点就是温柔、细心。

她从来不对我们发脾气，就算她多么需要发泄，也不会迁怒于我们。又一次例外，老师到外边接了个电话，回来后脸色很差，十分苍白，嘴唇也颤抖着，而我们仍在吵闹。终于她忍无可忍地大吼：“吵什么，你们能不能懂点事。”我们愣了，低下了头，几分钟难挨的沉默后，她才继续讲课。后来几天都由代课老师上课，我们感到不自在，觉得课程枯燥无聊。几天后，她回来了，大家围着她七嘴八舌地问，她笑吟吟地回答，只是面容有些憔悴。

在诸多的事中，我记得最清楚的是她改变我的性格。在英语学校，除了上课发言我几乎不说话，于是我成了孤家寡人，她似乎觉察到了什么，叫我来，希望我能多说话，多表达，理由是想多听听我的声音，我答应了，但效果不佳。于是，她开始有意无意的让我和同学，外教交流。起先我试图逃避，后来我发现，敞开心扉，与别人交流原来也是一件愉快的事，慢慢地，我变得健谈起来。当我去感谢王老师，她冲我微微一笑，我瞬间明白了，我也对她报以一笑，接着我们心照不宣地笑了。

虽然教完三级后，王老师就不教我们了，但我想，如果我们重逢的话，我一定送她个大大的拥抱。并附在她耳边说：“王老师，谢谢你！”

My father is a humorous person.My father short stature,fine fine thin,white skin,black hair,a head of the “big wave” self-invited roll hair,who would think that he is met at the barbers hot. His colleagues said he is narrowed down fei xiang,I think so too. He is a fine art,is famous in the central south five provinces binding artist,his one-man show has a favorable review in the many famous people. After another wall,he is a funny people,special love kidding,I dont know if all of the art is very humor,I think my dads body is full of humor cells. No matter how tired he how busy work,as long as take a door,exactly,he said,as long as a see me,and immediately he smile,I followed delightful sounds.

我的爸爸是一个幽默的人。我的父亲身材矮小，细瘦，白皮肤，黑头发，一头“大波浪”自来卷的头发，谁会想到他会在理发店烫。他的同事说他是缩小了，费翔，我也这么认为。他是一个很好的艺术，在中南五省的结合是著名艺术家，他的独角戏中有许多著名的人好评。在另一面墙上，他是一个风趣的人，特别爱开玩笑，我不知道如果所有的艺术是很幽默，我想我爸爸的身体充满幽默细胞。无论多累，他工作多么忙碌，只要一进家门，确切地说，他说，只要一见到我，他立刻笑了，我跟着愉快的声音。

转眼间小学快毕业了，在我心里埋藏着许多老师，可爱的、温柔的……印象最深的是幽默的高老师。

高老师第一天给我们上课，周围的人就在喊：“哇，帅哥!有一个帅哥教我们科学倻”为什么说高老师幽默呢?请你听我慢慢道来。

在第二次上课，老师对朱琳琳印象最深，因为朱琳琳正在和周英凯吵架，朱琳琳跟主人似的“命令”老师过来，让老师试试她的指甲厉不厉害，老师看着受欺负的周英凯，同情地说：“你现在跟旧社会的人没什么两样了!”周英凯非常郁闷的玩着子弹，没想到把子弹咽下去了，他赶快像练功似的吸气呼气，正在吸气时，徐艺璇戳了一下他肚子，子弹就出来了，科学老师还说徐艺璇练过内功。

还有一次，在校园里遇见高老师，我过去就握着他的手说你好，没想到老师一直抹我脸，刚开始我还莫名其妙，一闻才知道是风油精，我好不容易从老师那挣脱出来，老师又让我过去看个好东西，我一过去，他又把手放我鼻子上让我闻闻，还好打了上课铃，要不我还不知道怎么办。

高老师每次上课都会逗我们开心，但也有发脾气的时候，眉毛一瞥，眼睛一瞪，仿佛要把人给吃了似的。不管怎样，我就是喜欢这个幽默又会耍坏的高老师。

话说我们班的英语老师啊，那可谓是相当相当地有责任心。这不，一个学期就这样飞速而过，期末的“黑暗时刻”来临了。英语老师又开始到处“借债”了，以下是英语老师的“债务清单”，大家可以过目过目：

“债务”一：借(美术)老师(15)分钟

英语作文，是我们班同学的弱项，令英语老师头疼，她一心要把我们的作文水平提上去。今天下午有上美术课，美术老师正在给我们绘声绘色地讲着动物故事，我们笑得乐不思蜀。突然，一个恐怖的“身硬”——英语老师出现在门口。美术老师走过去之后，英语老师对着他说了些话，美术老师也只是一直点头。难道……英语老师又要借时间？

果然不出我们所料，美术老师上了半小时之后，提着他的文件袋走了，来换班的正是英语老师。Oh！全班惊呼。“拿出练习册！抄一篇范文！”英语老师一声令下，全班鸦雀无声，谁敢违抗？只得拿着笔，皱着眉，抄，抄，抄！

“债务”二：借(全班同学)(10)分钟

抄到范文一半的时候，救命之神“下课铃……”清脆地响着。同学把笔和练习册都收了起来。突然，英语老师一转身，“恶狠狠”地盯了我们一下，真令人毛骨悚然。同学们像老鼠见到猫似的，顺从的把笔和练习册拿了出来。

当作文抄完之后，我们长长地吁了一口气。没想到英语老师还要讲重点词句，易错点啊，说得滔滔不绝啊~如果英语老师到CCTV百家讲坛去，说不定收视率会一路飚升！！讲完之后，数学老师也踩着上课铃声来了……

“债务”三：借(体育)老师(40)分钟

今天早上，有一节心爱的体育课，我们兴高采烈地想飞奔到操场上，没想到一到门口就被“反弹”回来——英语老师在门口挡着呗。只见她手里抱着一叠已阅过的考卷，走进班上，先环顾了一下四周，让我们感到非常的寒冷！

这时，咱们班的小强站起来说：“老师，为什么不上体育课？”

说罢，其他同学在小强的带领之下也“就是，就是”地起哄。

“你们以为你们考得很好是吧，看看，英语科代表才考了八十多，不及格的已经超过一半啦……”

恐怖啊，震得我们班的玻璃“哐铛”响，同学们只能忍气吞声，硬着头皮熬过这“艰难”又“黑暗”的45分钟……

“债务”四：借(音乐)老师(40)分钟

……

总计：105分钟！

天哪，俗话说有借有还，再借不难！

尊敬的英语老师大人，您借的“债”该何年何月还清？

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

在一个骄阳似火的午后，为了躲避酷暑，“二郎神”与“哆啦A梦”在花果山上的小树林不期而遇。

哆啦A梦毕恭毕敬地对二郎神说：“二伯伯，我对您可是久仰大名！您久居神位，一定无所不能吧！”二郎神得意地回答：“那是当然，你有什么困难，尽管来找我！”哆啦A梦瞪着他那圆圆的眼睛，故作惊讶：“真的吗？您能为我唱一首英语歌吗？”

二郎神一下子懵了，作为中国的神仙，怎么会唱英语的歌曲呢？这个“蓝胖子”分明是想羞辱自己，可是作为神仙又怎么可以说“不”？于是二郎神眼珠一转，计上心来，笑眯眯地对哆啦A梦说：“小意思，今天我忙得很，明天太阳下山之时你在这里等我，我为你演唱一曲最优美动听的英语歌！”

告别了哆啦A梦，二郎神赶紧化作一只小鸟，来到了金华市环城小学。当他落在四年级（1）班的教室窗边，发现有一位美丽的老师正在给孩子们上英语课。只见孩子们边唱边跳：“Ifyourfriendistallandquiet……”二郎神似懂非懂地念到：“衣服，用儿不乱的意思，逃安得快……”此时此刻，二郎神心想：原来英语也不过如此，哪难得倒我这神仙！我这就飞回花果山，一定要让那“蓝胖子”对我佩服得五体投地为止。

第二天夕阳西下，哆啦A梦如约来到小树林，只见二郎神嗖的一声从身边飞过，站在一块大石头上。他背对着哆啦A梦，右手不知何时变出一只金灿灿的麦克风，摆出一副大明星的样子，开始演唱“他的英语歌”。仅仅开口唱了几句歌词，哆啦A梦已经捂着肚子，笑趴在地上。

哆啦A梦慢慢地从“百宝口袋”中取出一台电视机，播放着刚才二郎神演唱的那首原版的英文歌曲，此时此刻，二郎神的脸却“由白变成了红，由红变成了黑”！只听见“呀”的一声，二郎神一个翻身，踉踉跄跄的向远方飞去……

从此以后，二郎神再也不敢妄自尊大，而是踏踏实实的开启了学习英语的进程！同学们，你们还想做那个“二郎神”吗？

我们换了一位英俊潇洒的英语老师，帅气的他，个头中等，身材匀称，健康的皮肤，乌黑亮丽的短发，非常有形，高高的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜，可能是因为时间戴久了，已压出了一道深深印子，他看上去斯斯文文的，很有学问，他就是我们的英语老师——何云先生。

他上课风趣幽默，常把同学们逗得开怀大笑。记得有一次上英语课，他先让我们看着书拼读英语单词，我们拼的都很认真，然后他用同学们最感兴趣的开火车的方式，让我们不看书拼单词，大家一下子来了兴趣，纷纷举起了小手。第一个同学李天宇站起来虽然说的不是很流利，但老师还是伸出了鼓励的大拇指，大声的说了声：“棒”！又一位同学站起来响亮而流利的拼出了单词，老师亲切的拍了拍他得肩膀说：“酷毙了！”逗得同学们哈哈大笑。每次上课何老师总能把课堂气氛带动的非常活跃，同学们都能聚精会神的听课，不由得被他这风趣幽默的上课方式给深深地吸引。风趣的他，有时也很厉害哦，对我们的书写要求总是一丝不苟，必须达到工整、漂亮。该背的课文和该默写的单词一定要会背诵，达到会默写，不然绝不会手软，所以我们从不敢抱着侥幸心理，总是老实、认真的去完成。

我喜欢风趣幽默又不失严格的何老师，我想你们也一定和我一样，让我们爱上英语！爱上何老师吧！

My English teacher, Mr. Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose. We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting. After class, he often plays table tennis with us. And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.

When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.

We all get along well with him. All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.