我的英语老师作文四年级推荐20篇

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There is an aoyu in the picture. the aoyu has a green tail, two colorful horns and the silver skin. it’s a silver aoyu. it looks beautiful and lively.

Aoyu dance is a traditional dance in shawan piaose. it means it can always get the first. it’s a good symbol. everyone likes it very much.

【原文翻译】

图片上有一条鳌鱼。鳌鱼有绿色的尾巴，两个彩色角和银的皮肤。这是一个银色的鳌鱼。它看起来美丽活泼的。

鳌鱼舞是沙湾飘色表演传统舞蹈。这意味着它可以做第一。这是一个很好的标志。每个人都非常喜欢它。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

尊敬的杨校长：

您好!

自从开学后您担任我们304班的语文老师，

我的语文成绩就突飞猛进，从以前的91、92分，一下子变成了98分，作文从以前的扣5分变成了扣1分。我非常地感谢您。

您是个拥有丰富教学经验的老师， 您在给我们上课时， 总是面带微笑， 您那一双炯炯有神的眼睛总是流出慈爱的光芒， 令我倍感温暖。

在与您接触的这段时间里， 我发现您还是一个非常认真的人。这学期刚开学时， 有的同学没完成作业或者上课不注意听讲， 您总是会与家长联系。现在，

上您的课， 没有一个同学在抽屉里做小动作， 大家都坐得端端正正，听讲认认真真，至于成绩， 当然也有了大幅度提高和上升。

您还是一个非常有责任的人。

记得开学不久，您的女儿病了，要做手朮。尽管这样，您还是每天下午来学校给我们布置作业。虽然只是那短短的几分钟，但我们也感受到您的一片爱心。

尊敬的杨校长，我想发自内心地对您说一句：我感激您，感激您那又严格又有关爱的教育!在这里我想衷心地再一次对您说：谢谢您!杨校长!

此致

敬礼

您的学生

My English teacher, Mr. Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose. We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting. After class, he often plays table tennis with us. And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.

When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.

We all get along well with him. All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.

亲爱的杨老师

新年好!

首先我要感谢您上学期对我的辛勤救导，让我在语文学习上取得了很大的进步，所以寒假里爸爸妈都给我“开了绿灯”，让我可以捧上心爱的“TPAD”，玩起我最爱的游戏!但是老师您放心，我没有每天玩很久哦!

您推荐我读了《手斧男孩》，让我被克莱恩的故事深深打动了，我也想向您介绍一下我看过的电影《流浪地球》，我觉得真的是很精彩!

这部电影讲述了人类发现太阳内核正在迅速老化，变得越来越大。即将香噬整个地球，于是各国政府不惜一切代价，制造了很多“转向发动机”和“推进发动机”，准备逃离太阳系，建立一个新的家园。可是当地球正穿过木星时，很多发动机发生了故障，停止了运转，虽然大家都在不停地补救，可是最终，地球还是被强大的木星心力拉得脱离了“航线”，即将撞上木星，人类最终用“引爆木星”的办法拯救了幸存下来的人!

爸爸告诉我，这部电影是中国人第一部可以和国外大片媲美的“科幻片”，我看到的那些特效，都是我们的电影人自己完成的，但是最让我感动的，不是那些惊人的特效，而是影片中处处显示出的舍己为人，舍小家保大家的情感和表现!如果大家都能为他入多想想，多多换位思考，就不会出现重庆大巴坠江的事情了。在以后的学习和生活中，我也一定要乐于助人，主动做一些力所能及的事情，帮助需要帮助的人!

还有一句台词，每次出现的时候都会引来一阵阵笑声，就是“道路千万条，安全第一条，行车不规范，亲人两行泪”，虽然这个标语实实在在地提大家要时刻注意安全，但是在电影院里特别摘笑。前两天爸爸妈妈还在提醒我寒假作业要尽快完成，不然会变成“假期千万条，学习第一条，作业写不完，开学泪两行!”老师，您放心吧，我作业早就认真完成了也坚持了每天阅读打卡，这个寒假，虽然我没有出去玩，只是留在家里陪伴生病的外公，但是我也觉得过得很开心!

最后，祝福亲爱的老师，祝您新年快乐，身体健康，我们开学见!

学生：张恺棋

20__年2月12日

我的英语老师姓唐，平时她一头飘逸的长发总是直直地披在肩上，秀美且整洁。一双美丽的大眼睛从不掩饰她的喜怒哀乐。微微向外凸出的牙齿衬托着嘴唇成樱桃状，而左下角的一颗美人痣更显樱桃小口的妩媚动人。也许是长年教毕业班且操心我们学业的原因，唐老师整个人十分瘦削，甚至我们班有许多同学都比她壮实多了。 唐老师看似弱不禁风，却是一个深藏不露的体育健将。我也是临近毕业才知道的，记得有次我陪我爸我妈去买菜的路上，我妈说：“你们唐老师很有运动细胞，跳远、跑步、踢毽样样都拿手，在区里还得过奖呢！”当时我很惊讶。

虽然唐老师的运动天赋是偶露峥嵘，而其对工作时一丝不苟的作风却始终贯穿着每个学期。唐老师是六年级才接手我们班的，当时我们班的基础比较差。唐老师为了提高我们的成绩每天都花时间整理重点单词，词组和句子，再来帮我们默写，我们上副课时她总是牺牲自己的休息时间来为个别特别差的人补习，凡是遇上她上延时课总是要讲到老晚才肯放学。可是虽然唐老师如此尽心尽力，我们班上半学期期末考试还是全年级最后一名。赵老师曾经悄悄地告诉我们：“你们唐老师为了我们成绩进步不大的事还在办公室里哭过呢！”瞧，唐老师真是为我们操碎了心啊！虽然她上半学期的付出几乎没有起到什么效果，但是她没有放弃，反而在我们身上倾注了更多的心血与汗水。最终我们没有让老师失望，在毕业考试之中获得了喜人的成绩，唐老师知道后高兴地笑了。

母亲对子女是唠叨的，唐老师对我们就像对子女一样好，所以他免不了有些唠叨。隔壁班的老师将同样一篇课文一节课就讲完了，我们班的唐老师却恨不得三节课都讲不完。将练习卷也是，总把重点讲了又讲，讲了又讲，我们都听到耳朵长老茧了。有一次，唐老师给我们做听力我们好多人把“my”听成了“mine”，结果唐老师把这一道题讲了三遍，又特地找了7、8同一类型的题目给我们练习，下课前又反复强调：“下次千万不要忘记啊，要分清楚啊……”不过，我一点也不认为这唠叨很烦，它不但让我们掌握了所有要掌握的英语知识，使我们取得了好成绩，而且体现了唐老师对我们的关爱。

我在书上看到过一句话：“因为心中有爱，所以才会美丽。”我想唐老师正是如此。她很爱我们，所以在我们眼里她很漂亮，加上她又十分爱打扮自己，便显得美若天仙了。她是如何打扮自己的呢？她总是穿着很时髦的衣服，而且上午穿进教室一套，到了下午又换了一套，套套衣服都很漂亮。我们班的女同学总是私下议论：“唐老师的漂亮衣服可真多呀！”

这就是我们的唐老师，虽然只给我们上了一年课，却让我终身难忘。

Dear teacher takong

Hello, I wish you health and happiness in the New Year!

It is said that one day is a teacher and "life is a father". You have

taught me hard for four years. The knowledge I learned in my four years of

Enlightenment has benefited me a lot. I regard you as "a mother for life". I

often think of three old people -- father, mother and you.

Think of your efforts to us, todays teachers will pay, but their

remuneration is high to the sky. Students who are not good at learning can make

up lessons. In the past four years, there are no repeaters in our class. It was

an excellent class with red scarf in the county. At that time, it was worthy of

the name. It is not like that we have to evaluate what we want to send from East

to west. At that time, there were a lot of poor students. Some students couldnt

even pay the tuition fee of 1 yuan and 6 jiao. You paid it for them. Todays

teachers are impatient to see many poor students.

When you were born to build a new brother, the students invited to see you.

Everyone gathered together a few cents to buy two catties and dried it. You said

that was not good. As long as you had this intention, you would be very happy

and asked everyone to eat it. At that time, you were not sensible and greedy, so

they ate more than half of those sent to you. Now I think of it as ridiculous,

naive and lovely. You told us to listen to the substitute teacher and ask the

monitor to take some poor students to your home with their homework books. You

patiently tell them the reasons why they are not good at their studies, and tell

them about it. An inch of time is worth an inch of money, and an inch of money

is hard to buy an inch of time. If you fail to pass the grade for another year,

its a pity that you have given them supplementary lessons. In order to

consolidate the results, you let the students with good grades help one poor

student, This kind of professionalism has infected us and sowed good seeds in

our hearts. Even when we are adults, we are very dedicated to our work, but not

as good as you.

You said that you often have classmates to see you, said that we have

teacher-student feelings - this is your love for us, so we can not forget you,

so we have to visit you. We know how many years ago you were named a model

teacher, and the students are happy for you; you deserve it!

What moved me all my life is that you came to my sick mother! When you

heard that my mother was seriously ill, you brought the expensive nutriment and

asked to find our home. We all thank you very much. It has been 30 years since

you taught me. Is there any such teacher now? In addition to visiting my parents

every time I go home to visit you, no gift has been given to you. A primary

school teacher remembers the students she taught for decades, Im afraid not

many; Im not a celebrity, Im not a big money, I dont have an official

position, Im a very ordinary person, teacher; you are my cultural benefactor,

the most respected person in our family, when I write this letter to you, my

mother will be happy in heaven, because in her illness, you go to see her, she

is happy for a long time.

New years day, I wish the teacher to enjoy the happiness of his family,

students, you study hard, do not understand the place to ask me, I am a teacher,

"can not mislead peoples children" with this sentence will always linger in my

ears. Teacher, you can live a long life. Now you are 80 years old and still in

good health. I am happy for you. I will not forget you. I will go to see

you.

I wish the teacher health, happiness and longevity

Your student Lu Guiling

My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth， two big ears， two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants， with two big shoes。

My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart， isn’t he? Today， we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou .

Dear Mr. Lu

Hello!

"In the sound of firecrackers, the spring breeze brings warmth into Tu su."

In the morning, the dream slipped away in the sound of firecrackers outside the

window. It is another year of celebration, unity of mind, and family reunion

day, my mother and I also like the past year back to mother-in-laws home.

My mother-in-laws home is not far from Nanjing in the center of the

county. Let me tell you! The spring festival atmosphere in my mother-in-laws

house is very lively. My mother-in-law opened it in the kitchen a few days ago.

She cooked pickles, fried assorted dishes and made dumplings. It seems like Im

going to finish all the food of the year on this day. The kitchen was smoky and

my mother-in-law was like an old fairy in protective clothing. What about

father-in-law? Its his specialty to create a new years atmosphere. You see,

early in the morning, he was also busy in a pile of red couplets, looking for

double-sided stickers, cleaning the door, and being waved around by his

mother-in-law. On such a cold day, sweat glistened on the bald head with few

hairs. Every year, a clean mother would take a bath before lunch, and she was

also known as getting rid of the old and welcoming the new year, washing away

the discomfort and worries of a year, and having a fresh and refreshing new

year. What about me? I write to you to report these in this happy busy life, and

let my beloved teacher LV stay at home and feel a different new years

atmosphere.

First of all, I wish you and your family good health. I wish you more

brilliant achievements in the teaching of the year of the horse!

Your students

今天下午是我们进入这个学校的第一节“大学英语”课，可惜我们连书也还有没拿到，只有老师一个人有书，又是因为第一节，所以没有讲课文。

铃！铃！铃！上课铃响了，一个看上去只有24岁的美女从教室门走向讲台，她戴着一幅眼镜，用她清翠的口声向我们做了个自我介绍，接着，就叫我们一个个的自我介绍，但是因为我们人多，又没 有到齐，所以这个想法没有实现，没办法她只能一个个的点名了。嗯！停了一下，那个名字不就是父母的姓吗？一个小子应答上：“老师真聪明”。真的哦，她在上面偷笑呢。

记得最好的一段就是她说了一句我班的班主任人蛮好的，话刚落我们班上的那个未成年就说是：“嗯 ，是的咯，老师要不要我帮你拉去，这么好的人你可别错过吖？”还有就是我们班里的那个帅哥 ，年龄是大了点，虽然人长得不怎么，但没法，他的名字是叫帅哥，隔壁的那个黑哥说老师他可是有BABY的人了。在上学哪来的BABY咯，老师应到，不信是嘛，等过年带给你看看，你可要给个大红包哟 。说着说着也不知道她讲到哪了，反正一节课都是蛮搞笑的。

Miss Zhang is my maths teacher. She is about twenty-two, and she has taught maths for only half a year. She is not very tall, but pretty. She is a careful teacher, and she is very strict with us. Sometimes we make some mistakes, she will be angry with us, and shouts, Do it again! You are so careless So all of us are afraid of her. But we think she is a good teacher. We like her.

“英语节”的活动真是花样百出，有画海报、抽奖券、看英语电影……真是让我眼花缭乱，兴奋不已。其中，最好玩的就是抽奖券和“圣诞老人抽幸运班级”啦！

活动现场一进门，哇，好多人耶！原来是英语老师正在为同学分发幸运奖券呢！我和王怡然立马奔向傅老师。啊！轮到我了！我紧张地把手伸进神秘的袜子里，心中充满了期待。呦……是一个棒棒糖，没有中奖，但有糖果吃也不错啦！

“叮咚”，同学们一听到广播就知道是杰妮老师带着“圣诞老人”来抽“幸运班级”啦！“现在终于轮到三、四年级抽奖啦！“圣诞老人”笑呵呵地说着，大家马上安静下来，屏住呼吸期待着结果。“让我看看，嗯……当当当当！是四零……，”随着“圣诞老人”故意拉长的声音，同学们纷纷伸长耳朵，瞪大眼睛，准备着又希望着……“是四零五班！恭喜四零五班！”

虽然，我没有中奖，但这个英语节我很快乐，因为英语节本来就是让我们学习知识的活动，我也确实收获了许多，也让我对英语产生了更浓厚的兴趣

xx老师：

您好!光阴似箭，辞旧迎新，下一学期即将开始了。一个内向不善言语的我，禁不住有几句心里话写给您。

xx老师，我不得不承认，我是一个“马虎”的“笨”学生。您教给我的知识，我有时“马虎不清”出差错，有时“笨鸟先飞”忘掉了。因此，我的学习让您费尽心思。

xx老师，是您耐心地开导，使我的理解能力有了提高;是您的鼓励，使我性格逐渐开朗。我认为上学期是我进步最大的一个学期，期末考试各科能考90分以上，这完全是您的功劳。

当然了，在上个学期里，我也做过错误的事情。xx老师，请您放心，在新学期，我一定改掉不好的毛病，争取做一名品学兼优的好学生。

xx老师，遵照您的吩咐，寒假里我经常做家务，像擦桌子、洗碗、拖地等等，尽管是些小事情，爸爸妈妈还是很高兴，夸我长大了，有出息了。我还在假期里练习双拼打字，到开学后，我要让您看看我的打字速度，是不是还可以?

说了这么多，总之一句话，您是我最最敬爱的老师!

祝您

身体健康

万事如意

您的学生：xxx

20xx年xx月xx日

亲爱的老师：

您好!

近来您是否身体健康?生活是否幸福安康?收到这封信您一定很意外吧?是不是因为我从来没有给您写过信呢?那好，今天我就给您写一封感谢信。

不知不觉中，您已经陪我度过了四个春夏秋冬，在这一千多个日日夜夜里，都是您默默地陪伴着我。您，从没有误过一次课;您，没有浪费过一分钟。因为您，让我品学兼优;因为您，让我在期末考试时取得了一个骄人的成绩。

有一次，我因为着凉而发烧了，我吵着闹着要去上学，妈妈怕我生病传染给同学，不让我去学校。还非带我去输液，我只得去了。回到家已经是下午放学时了，几位学习委员和班长来到我家。我问他们：“你们怎么来了呢?”班长笑着说：“是老师让我们来给你补课，因为你，老师今天都没讲新课，只讲了些生字就下课了。”我便说：“我没来就没来呗，闹得你们也听不了新课，怪对不住你们的。”班长说：“老师有事脱不开身，让我们来给你补习功课，顺便来看看你，要好好养病哟!”我感动地说：“你们带我谢谢老师哦。”同学们异口同声地说：“知道了。”

啊!老师，你为我付出了那么多，你那么的关心我、疼爱我，我谢谢您。祝您在以后的生活中天天快乐，万事如意。

您的学生：尹月

Mrs. Jane is my English teacher and she is 30 years old. She looks so young and beautiful that my classmates like her very much. Of course, the most important reason is that she is so kind and her lessons are so great. She likes staying with us and talking to us which can help her to know what problem we have and how she can do to improve her teaching, she once said. She encourages us to work hard often. When we make progress, she is pleased with us. Because of her, my English has greatly improved.

Mrs.Jane是我们的英语老师，她30岁了，但是看起来年轻漂亮，同学们都很喜欢她。当然，最重要的原因是她人好，而且课上得好。她喜欢跟我们在一起，跟我们聊天，这有助于她了解我们的问题所在，帮助她提高教学。她曾说，她鼓励我们多多努力学习。当我们取得进步时，她和我们一起开心。因为有她，我的英语成绩提高得很快。

My summer holiday of this year was very enjoyable.I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays with my grandparents.It is very beautiful there.There are green plants,clear rivers,lovely animals and kind people.I spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there.Besides,I helped the children in the neighborhoods with their lessons.I helped them read English to improve their spoken English.Their parents thanked me for this and thought highly of me.I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.

人们都说：教师是人类灵魂的工程。教师的工作是平凡的，可教师对人类的贡献是伟大的。

我们这些学生像是一颗颗没发芽的种子，但经过老师的精心培养后，长成了一株株茁壮的幼苗。可老师却有了沉重的负担。老师把我们从一个似懂非懂的儿童，培育成了有知识的学生。老师为我们放弃了好几个节假日，多少个日日夜夜。

白天，你总是早早地睁开了朦胧的眼睛，到学校尽力把知识毫不保留的传授给我们。夜晚，老师在灯下备课，批改作业。她改得一丝不苟，都没有任何改错的地方。下课了，我们在尽情的玩的时候，老师却仍然在工作。

老师您辛苦了!

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours,

Bella

我现在最喜欢英语老师了，我的英语老师很和蔼，对学生像对自己孩子一样，虽然，她没有孩子，可是，我们却成了老师的干孩子，在英语课上，她不但给我们讲课文，还在讲课的时候把一些故事带进课堂，所以我们都说她是我们学校五年级最好的英语老师，英语老师长得也很漂亮,英语老师再将课的时候手机响了，他从来不会去接电话，就着一点，我没同学就很佩服她，还有英语老师办的英语小组，每年都有很多人，好的坏的都有，学习不好的老师不但不嫌弃，还一遍又一遍的教，直到教会为止，学习好的进度就快些，英语老师穿的也很朴素，不像其他老师穿得那么漂亮英语老师还经常表扬学生，从不对学生发脾气。

这就是我的英语老师，你喜不喜欢?

An old woman has a cat. The cat is now very old. She can not run fast, and she can not bite. One day the old cat sees a mouse. she jumps and catches the mouse. But she cannot bite it. So the mouse gets out of her mouth and runs away.Then the old woman is very angry because the cat cannot kill the mouse. She begins to beat the cat. The cat says to her, "Dont beat me. Be friendly to me. When I was young, I did good work for you."

一位老妇有一只猫，现在已经很老了，她不能跑得很快，也不能咬人。一天，老猫看到一只老鼠，她跳起来捉住了老鼠，但她咬不住他，所以，老鼠从她的嘴里逃跑了。老妇非常生气因为猫不能杀了那只老鼠，她开始打猫，猫对她说：“不要打我，友好地对待我。我年轻的时候，我为你做了很多工作。”

Dear Miss Wang:

I am writing to express my sinceregratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not bethe top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall.You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always workedtirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatestmotivation.

I sincerely hope that you can have a goodhealth and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attentionto your health, get more rest.

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours

Lily

亲爱的王老师：

我写信是想诚挚的感谢你在我学习上的帮助。没有你的帮助，我的成绩就不会排在班级前三名。是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。我帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。

我真心祝愿您身体健康，永远快乐。另外，我希望你能多注意你的健康，多多休息。

再次感谢你的帮助!

你的学生

李丽