我的英语老师作文四年级（汇编20篇）

There are six teachers in my class. I like my English teacher, Miss He most. She is a young lady, about twenty five years old. I like her most because I think she is a good teacher. She is very serious and patient to us. The English class is always interesting, because she tries her best to make it well. Miss He has a lot of knowledge and she always tells us her experience of learning English. She encourages us to study hard.

我的班级有六位老师，我最喜欢的是英语老师，何老师。她是一名年轻的女老师，大概二十五岁左右。我最喜欢她，因为我觉得她是一位好老师。她很认真、耐心地对待我们学生。英语课总是很有趣的，因为她尽最大的努力上好课。何老师有丰富的知识，她也总是和我们说她学习英语的经历和经验。她鼓励我们努力学习。

“同学们，对不起，上一次我吵你们了……”你知道这是那个老师在向学生道歉吗？那是我们的何老师。那一次，周六我们学校有社会上的考试，在周五最后一节课老师指导我们把桌子搬出去。由于是第一次干这种活，大家不知道什么东西放到哪儿。过了一会儿还没有弄好，何老师大发雷霆：“懒死你们了，连个桌子都不会摆，摆不好谁都不准走。”我们都吓呆了，可是万万没有想到的是，到了下星期一出现了文章开头的那一幕。这种事不要说老师跟学生，就是学生和学生之间都很少有人说对不起，从这儿可以看出何老师师德是多第高尚。何老师不仅师德高尚，还很有教学方法。在学生字的时候，老师不是让我们死记硬背，而是让大家举手说记字的方法。有一次，学“甩”字，有同学说：“甩是用手甩，所以有用的一半，甩都是向后甩，所以向后有一个竖折弯钩。”从那以后“甩”字我一次也没错过。还有一次，老师听写生字“喉”，好多同学把右边写成“候”，老师提醒同学们：“喉，就是喉咙的意思，喉咙里塞根棍子，谁能受得了啊！”我顿时眼睛一亮，感叹到：“真形象，太容易记了！”我相信我们班不会再有写错“喉”字的学生了。何老师的字写得也很不错。在开学的第一天，黑板上有何老师写给同学们的寄语，美术老师一进我们的教室，就问：“黑板上的字是何老师写的吧？”“对———”我脱着长音得意的回答。“我一看就知道”美术老师又说。我仔细观察了一会儿，何老师的字确有独特之处：笔画中间有一些连起来的地方，可一点也不显得潦草。何老师在我们作文本上写的批语就非常漂亮！妈妈就常说：“我要是能写成您何老师这样的字就好了。”这样好的老师，能不让人崇拜吗？

Mr Wu is my math teacher. She is not tall, plump, arch eyebrows temples scattered into the eyebrow, phoenix eye times add gentle, small nose on a pair of big eyes, phnom penh for her face a grave. I can be like her.

Mr Wus eyes, gesture has distinguishing feature very much. In math class, some children deserted, platform to a look, there are soft in the serious, let the urchins quietly put a little affectations. Some children did not fully understand, the nimble fingers waving in the air, like the command band baton, like the bees eight dance, woven into a network, and a knowledge of unconsciously let us swim in the palace of knowledge. My favorite is her smile: the children are in trouble, can see her understanding smile, after the children understand the knowledge, and to see her pleased smile. Every time after I answer this question right, always can see her smile. Her smile is like a flower blooming with a smile, let us full of the joy of understanding; Like a tall, quiet lindens, let everybody learn faith; Like in full bloom on the snow-capped mountains of snow lotus, let each other feel the pleasure of success.

Mr Wu is my favorite smile.

吴老师是我班的数学老师。她个子不高，身材丰满，柳叶眉散入眉鬓，丹凤眼倍添温柔，小巧的鼻梁上架着一副大大的金边眼睛，为她的面孔添了一丝庄重。我可喜欢她了。

吴老师的目光、手势很有特色。上数学课时，有些小朋友开小差了，讲台上投来的一眼，严肃中有温柔，让小淘气们悄然收起了小动作。有些小朋友没有完全听明白，只见灵巧的手指在空中挥动，像指挥乐队演奏的指挥棒，像指路蜜蜂的八字舞，编织成一个又一个知识之网，让我们不知不觉在知识的殿堂中遨游。我最喜欢的是她的微笑：小朋友们有困难时，能看到她理解的微笑，小朋友们弄懂了知识后，又能看到她欣慰的笑容。每次我正确回答问题后，总能看到她舒展的笑顔。她的笑容就像盛开的含笑花，让我们充满理解的喜悦;像高大宁静的菩提树，让大家坚定学习信心;像雪山上怒放的雪莲，让彼此感受到成功的愉悦。

我最喜欢吴老师的微笑。

Mr. Lee is my English teacher, and is thirty. He likes sports very much, so he looks strong and young. He is fond of singing too. When we feel tired in the class, he will teach us some English songs. Sometimes he tells us some funny stories. He often encourages us to speak and write in English. Although we may make mistakes now and then, he always corrects them patiently and tells us how to write properly. He is really a good teacher. We all love him and his class.

我的英语老师姓李，他30岁了。他特别喜欢体育，所以看起采既年轻又强壮。他还很喜欢唱歌。每当我们上课累了的时候，他就教我们唱一些英文歌曲。有时还给我们讲一些有趣的故事。他经常鼓励我们用英语交谈和写作。虽然我们时不时地会犯一些错误，但他总是耐心地给我们指出并改正，还教我们如何正确表达。他真是一位好老师。我们都喜欢他，也喜欢上他的课。

我最喜欢的老师

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

黄老师非常喜欢狗，因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

编辑点评：这篇小作文情感真挚，写出了真情实感，在教师节之际，特别适合表达对老师的感激之情。

Dear teacher,

Hello!

On the occasion of Christmas is approaching, I would like to send you the

most sincere greetings!

I will all kinds of respect and deep wishes woven into the text, with my

piety - bow to you! I silently pray, pray that this thin piece of writing paper

is a boat, with affectionate eyes, sailing into your dream bay, guard your

fatigue, comfort you lend...

Teacher, your hard work! Whenever you figure flashing in the night under

the window lattice, I remember, remember the sacred and ancient division,

remember what an amazing ChengChu exclamation topic...

824. Teacher, I love you for you, for you are sharp in writing style in the

little room; In the quiet of night, with candle burning, you sit in the book

city; You too much hard work and grievance, you too little too little to obtain

and complain...

Ah, your cold and unrestrained, bearing the secular, bearing the

indifference, silently compose a high and vigorous life! Teacher, in your

students bid farewell to the campus that day, in your haoshoupaui that day, your

soul will be comforted, will laugh proud forever!

Teacher, I respect you! The ancients said, "The state will prosper, and

your teacher will be rewarded." China cant take off without you sowing fang Zhi

Xin, science and education to revitalize the country, cant leave you paving the

road and building stones! Look up todays Chinese, respect for teachers and

education, has become a trend. I am excited and excited! I wish every Chinese

respect teacher!

So dead! Several years of cold window, I cant remember how much I have

listened to your teachings! Often recall the old friendship between teachers and

students, often see the teacher todays face, I have a surge of excitement,

gratitude wanfen! "Who made the heart-inch grass, reported in the apartments?

Teacher, please once again accept my sincere blessing and infinite gratitude to

you! Best wishes to your teacher

Good health, happy holidays!

Your students:

敬爱的老师:

您好!

值此圣诞节翩然即至之际，谨向您致以无比诚挚的问候!

我将万般的敬意和深深的祝福编织成文字，带着我的虔诚——给您鞠躬!我默默祈望，祈望这张薄薄的信纸是只小船，载着深情的眼睛，驶进您的梦湾，守护您的劳累，给您慰藉藉……

老师，您辛苦了!每当您的身影在夜幕下的窗棂中闪动，我便记起，记起神圣而古老的师道，记起一个令人枨触感叹的话题……

老师，我热爱您——您，斗室中孜孜矻矻，励精笔耕;您，静夜中秉烛苦读，拥坐书城;您太多太多的辛劳与委屈，您太少太少的索取与抱怨……

啊，您的清寒与潇洒，背负着世俗，背负着冷漠，默默连缀励节高亢的人生!老师，在您的莘莘学子告别校园那天，在您皓首穷经那天，您心力交瘁的灵魂将获抚慰，将笑傲千古!

老师，我尊敬您!古人云:“国将兴，必将贵师重傅。”中华腾飞，离不开您播芳植馨，科教兴国，离不开您铺路筑石!举目当今华夏，尊师重教，蔚然成风。我欣喜感奋!我祝愿每位国人都敬重人师!

逝者如斯!几载寒窗，记不清我聆听过您多少教诲!每每回忆旧日师生情谊，每每再睹老师今日面容，我都心潮激越，感念万端!“谁言寸草心，报得三春晖?”老师，请您再一次接受我对您的真诚祝福和无限感激!敬祝老师您——

身体健康，节日愉快!

您的学生：

I want to thank you。You are the one of brightest stars in the sky。I want to thank you，you teach me how to do well in all things。

I want to thank you，you give me advice about how to be a top student。Thank you Mrs Xu。When I have trouble，you will give me a helping hand and have a rest with the help of you。

My English has improved much。In the word I really want to thank you。

黄晓澄

我们班有人喜欢讲课生动的语文老师，有人喜欢表情严肃的数学老师。而我最喜欢的是和蔼可亲的英语老师——冼老师。

冼老师有一双会说话的眼睛。每当我拿作业上去办公室时，我在门口报告，说：“老师们好。”冼老师就会对着我笑。当我把作业放好给老师，走到办公室门口说：“老师们再见。”冼老师又会再次对我笑。虽然冼老师没有说话，但是我看到老师的眼睛似乎在对我说：“你好呀，进来吧。”“再见。”这温暖的表情，每次都让我心里很舒服。

有一次，冼老师叫我们写第一单元的作文，我想来想去都不知道可以怎样写。我抬起头看了看周围的同学们，他们个个都如有神助，奋笔疾书，而我却什么都没写。

冼老师见到我什么都没有写就走过来，指导我写作业。冼老师给我分析了题目，并理清写作思路，我一下子茅塞顿开，下笔如有神，很快就把作文写完了。我拿着我的作文去给冼老师改。冼老师改完之后对我说：“你以后上课要认真听课，不能开小差，知道吗？看认真听讲后作文写得多棒！”我惭愧地低下了头，说：“知道了，冼老师。”我本以为老师会批评我没有认真听讲，没想到冼老师不但没有骂我，还耐心指导我，我真的很感谢冼老师。

冼老师，您是辛苦的园丁，为我们修枝，剪叶，让我们开放得更美丽。冼老师，请您相信，我一定用好的成绩来报答您！

I thank each teacher teach me, and I want to thank the most, is my Chinese teacher zhu, she is a good teacher, has won many prizes in the aspect of teaching. Mr Zhu short hair become small ponytail, cut the neat bang, wearing a pair of glasses, looks especially beautiful. Mr Zhu due to the daily teaching management guidance place, to be busy all day meeting arrangement work, even to our class time came out. Teacher is both metasomatic task to complete school, evening also want to give us lessons, corrects students papers, often sleep late. Mr Zhu to our requirement is very strict, but I know its love for us! Im glad I am to have such a good teacher, my parents also have said Mr Zhu taught me is my blessing.

Signing up new term begins, I hope can see the magdalene teo Mr Zhus face. But only saw the yellow teacher, miss huang said: "Mr Zhu fractures, very serious!" The whole class is quiet down, and then a series of sighs. The next semester, must let another substitute teacher to teach us.

Back home, I told the story to their parents. Dad said: "alas ~ oh, what a pity!" Who also did not think, Mr Zhu had a fracture at home to rest, also are very concerned about our study. Mr Zhu sent a text message, with Mr Zhu to write inside our expectations and requirements, and refueling. Write pages! I am very touched, dad and grandma more hope that Mr Zhu soon, come back to teach us.

Teachers day arrived, Id like to repay teacher with very good grades, I want to loudly say to the teacher: "teacher, you were laborious! Thank you!" Also to Mr Zhu said: "Mr Zhu, wish you recover at an early date, we are all waiting for you to come back to teach us!"

我感谢教我的每一位老师，而我最要感谢的，是我的语文朱老师，她是一位好老师，曾在教学方面多次获奖。朱老师短短的头发扎成个小马尾辫，剪着整齐的刘海，戴着一副眼镜，显得特别漂亮。朱老师由于负责教导处日常教学等管理工作，整天要忙开会布置工作，连给我们上课的时间都是挤出来的。老师晚上既要完成学校交代的任务，还要给我们备课、批改作业，常常很晚才睡。朱老师对我们要求十分严厉，但我知道那是对我们的爱!我很庆幸我有这样一位好老师，我家长也说有朱老师教我是我的福气。

新学期开始了，我盼望报名的时候能看见朱老师那张慈祥的脸。可是却只看见了黄老师，黄老师说：“朱老师骨折了，十分严重!”全班安静了下来，然后是一串的叹气声。接下来的一个学期，都得让另一位代课老师来给我们上课了。

回到家里，我把这件事告诉了家长。爸爸说：“唉~可惜啊，可惜!”谁也没有想到，朱老师骨折了在家休息，还十分关心我们的学习。朱老师发了个短信，里面写着朱老师对我们的期望和要求，还有加油。写了好几页呢!我十分感动，爸爸和奶奶更加希望朱老师早日康复，回来教我们。

教师节到了，我想以优秀的成绩报答老师，我想大声对老师说：“老师，您辛苦了!谢谢您!”另外还要对朱老师说：“朱老师，祝您早日康复，我们都等着您回来教我们呢!”

Im not that kind of student who good at English and learn very quickly.I cant say that I love English more than other subjects.Even I can say English is a headache for me in the passed days.

我不是那种学习英语有天赋的学习很快的学生，

感谢老师的英语作文

。我也不能说我非常喜欢英语更甚于其他，或者说曾经对于我来说，英语是一个头痛。

However, this not last long since I met the current English teacher.He/Shes such a good teacher who can absorb students attention to the lecture.And make the class so vivid that we dont feels so boring.And she/he can make us feel relax and being encouraged, nobody has the feeling as a looser.这种状况没有持续太久直到我遇到现在的英语老师。他是一个能够吸引学生注意力到讲堂上来的好老师，让我们觉得课程并不枯燥。最重要的是他能让我们感到放松并受到鼓励，没有人感到自己是差生。

Im really appretiate the god arranged such a teacher for us.

我十分感激上天赐给我们这样一个老师。

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You are like a third parent. We all love you and respect you. 您就象我们的家长，我们都敬爱您。

The primary purpose of education is not to teach you to earn your bread, but to make every mouthful sweet.——James Angel 教育最主要的目的，不是教你懂得如何谋生，而是使每个人生活得更香甜。——安吉儿

We all like having you as our teacher. You have our respect and gratefulness. 我们喜欢您做我们的老师，我们尊敬您、感激您。

This is Teachers Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers Day. 时逢教师节，是向所有教师表达谢意的日子。这个职业值得受到特别的重视和尊重。此刻是向您及您的同行们致敬的最佳时机。我永远感激您。祝节日快乐!

We are more thankful than we can express. 对您的谢意，我们无法用语言来表达。

You have been a qualified teachers and even better friend. Thank you for all that you have done. 您不仅是一位合格的教师，更是一位好朋友，谢谢您所做的一切，

Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire. 教育不是灌满一桶水，而是点燃一团生命的火焰。

The man who can make hard things easy is the educator. 能使艰难之事变得容易的人是教育者。

Send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulness and thankfulness on this special day. 在这特别的日子谨向您致以我们永恒的感激之情。

A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops.——Henry Adams 一个教师对人的影响是永恒的。——亚当斯

It is the most appropriate time to show you our thanks. 现在是向您表达感激之情最为恰当的时刻。

This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness. We all want to thank you. 这件小小的礼物略表我们的感激之情。我们大家都很感谢您。

I am truly grateful to you for what you have done. 我深深地感激您所做的一切。

Dear teacher, thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. My grateful sentiments come from the bottom of my heart. 老师，感谢您用自己的生命之光，照亮了我人生的旅途，对您我满怀感谢之情。

The whole secret of the teachers force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. 教师力量的全部秘密，就在于深信人是可以改变的。

No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.没有人比您更值得如此深厚的谢意。仅这一天远不足以表达我们对您的感激之情。

Thank you for making learning not a dull thing but a great joy. 感谢您使我们把枯燥的学习变成了巨大的乐趣.

We all pitched to buy this gift. We are all grateful to you. Without your unselfish dedication could we achieve no success today. 这是我们买给您的礼物，谢谢您，老师。没有您无私的奉献，就不会有我们今天的成功。

Our beloved teacher, you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts. The love and care you have given us will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.亲爱的老师，您就象那春天的细雨，滋润着我们的心田。您给予我们的爱和关怀将鼓舞着我们走过艰难困苦.

I really had a wonderful summer holiday. I finished doing my homework on time and prepared for the new lessons. I visited my grandparents and spent a week with them. There I helped my parents with the housework and climbed the mountain with them. I do sports with my friends nearly every afternoon. Besides, my parents and I went to visit Shanghai and we enjoyed ourselves very much. Whats more, I also read some interesting books and went to movies with my friends. What a happy and meaningful summer holiday.

可爱的你带给大家温暖。

这是一位年轻长得清纯，皮肤白皙。有一点婴儿肥，还有一颗少女心的教师，我们都很喜欢他，喜欢她的默契，喜欢她的可爱，喜欢她认真的模样，喜欢她书上密密麻麻的笔记。

第1次见到这个知心姐姐时，心想是个学生吧，应该是来实习的教育水平不会很高吧，可上课后我才发现我错了，直到现在我已经爱上了这个知心姐姐，我喜欢她上课时那种轻松的气氛，独一无二，她的课堂不像语文老师迅速激昂，不像数学老师严肃安静，而且而是轻松愉悦的。我喜欢你甜美的声音，让人专注，喜欢你可爱的模样让人发笑，喜欢你，认真的态度让人钦佩喜欢你。

我有时都搞不懂你，你平时那么辛苦，却在每日的自习课上，挤点时间给我们辅导，让大家学英语，检查听写或教育差生，可你不累吗？上这么多课不休息吗？不怕学生们埋怨你吗？都不是，你有时就是这么傻，愿意奉献自己，即使我们班英语不是很好，你也会在失落后满血复活，可爱的你给了我们许多机会，让我们能够好好的学习英语，每天都不厌其烦的指点我们，开导我们，细心的包容我们，我们想请你每天开心，因为我们会和你在一起。

在这里我想说：英语老师，你是我们心中的女神，我们爱你！

December 27th, 2009

Dear Mr Pan:

It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.

Its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didnt mean you are old, youre young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. Youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.

Ive got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, Id like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

Happy new year.

With every good wish.

Yours sincerely Dali Wang

[给英语老师的一封信,英文作文

新学期开始了，学校里发生了很大的变化。我们的教学楼换了，我们的英语老师也换成了现在的何老师。何老师今年二十四岁，她有一双明亮的大眼睛，高高的鼻梁，一头乌黑的秀发，显得格外的美丽。

老师在课上，非常地认真，每一次都是先抓住重点，再详细的解释给大家听，解释完了之后，她会出一些同学们经常出错的题目教我们做，她还会让我们现场进行口语对话的环节，一个人问，另一个人回答。

有一次，老师叫我起来和她进行一次表示请求的对话，就是问一下可不可以做什么事情，另一方直接回答就可以了。很简单，只要听清楚老师说的是什么意思，根据意思来提问或回答就可以了。我就是这样做的，老师还说我做得非常好，这是我感觉到了学习英语也不是很困难，除了这些之外，她还教我们许多背单词的技巧和背诵课文的方法，我非常喜欢她，我很高兴有何老师这样好的人被我一起度过这一年，我相信在他的细心指导下，我的英语成绩一定会有更大的进步！

[以我的新英语老师为题的作文

敬爱的张老师：

您好!

您是我心目中最敬重的好老师，您时常关心着我们，我们遇到困难时您也会耐心解答。您就像一根蜡烛，照亮了我们，燃烧的却是您自己。

大树的成长，离不开阳光雨露;花儿的生活，离不开大地;而我们的生活，也离不开您。有了您的热情帮助，您的谆谆教诲，才会有我们的健康成长，早日成熟。

老师，我还清清楚楚地记得我第一次见到您时，当时，我心里又紧张又害羞，但是，您紧张亲切的笑容打消了我紧张害怕的情绪。接着，你指导着我们打扫卫生，发书。从那一刻起，您就成了我心中最敬重的老师。

每天，您都会比我们早到学校，开始了一天的工作。放学了，可您还没有回家，您坐在办公桌前，改着我们的作业，准备第二天的课程。上课了，您循循善诱，谆谆教导。下课后，您年轻又充满活力，是我们的良师益友。

老师，谢谢您对我认真负责的教育，谢谢您对我的关心，谢谢您传授给我知识，谢谢您对我的无私奉献。“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干”是对您辛勤工作的只是写照。老师，现在我想对您说一句心里话：“老师，谢谢您，您辛苦了!”

敬礼!

学生：

20xx年1月26日

我赞美我的家乡美景，因为在我眼里多美的家乡，一个亲切的词;家乡，一个温暖的家;家乡，一个优雅的地方。地方。也及不上家的温暖。 我的家乡四面彬都是绿油油的景田野，人们天天都忙得不可开交。田野里，一到春天，到处都是高大的大棚铁架，像一座小部落;夏天，大棚的塑料一取，里面全是绿油油的瓜枝和金灿灿的甜瓜;秋天，村子里飘着成熟地气息，眺望去田野一片金黄，村子人人都笑开了花;冬天，大雪纷飞，为村子穿上了一件雪白棉袄。田野，更是一片美景，雪花落在景田野上，田野显得分外美丽辽阔。

I praise my hometown beauty, because in the eyes of my beautiful hometown, a kind word; home, a warm home; home, an elegant place. Place. And the warmth of the family. My hometown four bin is green landscape field, people are busy every day. In the field, in the spring, everywhere is a tall canopy frame, like a small tribe; in summer, the plastic greenhouse, which is full of lush fruit branches and golden muskmelon; autumn, the village with a mature atmosphere, look to a golden field, village everyone laugh flowers; winter, snow village, wearing a white jacket. The field, is a piece of scenery, snow fell on the king of wild, appears particularly beautiful vast fields.

我家乡拥有四季不同的美景，陶醉了我的心。让我沉浸在一年四季的优美景色之中。真是“身在福中早知道”。

My hometown has four different scenery, with my heart. Let I immersed in the beautiful scenery of the four seasons of a year. It is "early know growing up in happiness".

我爱我的家乡，因为它的美景陶醉了我，因为它生育了我。因为它教育了我。

I love my hometown, because of its beautiful scenery intoxicated me, because it gave birth to me. Because of my education.

我爱家乡，它是一片育人的沃土，又是一片育人的净土;在我心里它有着许多名胜古迹所不及的独特之处。

I love my hometown, it is a fertile ground for educating people, educating people is a piece of pure land; it has many places of historic interest and scenic beauty as unique in my heart.

今天晚上，我去上英语课外班。上课时，英语CANDY老师教我们了一个英语小寓言，名字叫CityMouseandCountryMouse（城市老鼠和乡下老鼠）。这个寓言特别有意思，一只城市老鼠乘公交车去乡下看望他的老兄——乡下老鼠。他看见了在田野上有好多奶牛、马、池塘、篱笆、鸟。这时，他的表兄张下老鼠说：“你好，表弟，见到你很高兴。”

过了一会儿，城市老鼠不高兴了，说：“我好饿，可这里却没食物，还冷。还不如去城市，我可以让你住我的公寓，那里很暖和。”乡下老鼠说：“好，走吧！”

他们来到城市老鼠的家——一座公寓里。他们看见牛奶和奶酪放在一个大桌子上，正准备吃，却有一只猫要吃掉它们。乡下老鼠不想过惊险的日子，只好回到了乡下。

学完这篇小故事，老师要让我们表演，我很高兴，因为我最喜欢表演了。老师把全班16个同学分成四组，有四个角色：城市老鼠、乡下老鼠、大花猫、旁白。我和TINA、LILY1、DANG一组，我演乡下老鼠，TINA濱城市老鼠、LILY1演大花猫，DANG读旁白。

开始表演了，TINA假装坐着公交车来到乡下，我友好地打招呼，我们来到城市，我很惊讶，开心。我们表演得声情并茂，有时还加上小动作。4个小组表演完后，老师还说我们小组表演得最出色。

这个故事很有意思，同时我们表演得也很棒哦！

I want to be a model student. What shall I do?

I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. I shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldn’t run in the corridors. I shouldn’t fight. I shouldn’t be noisy in the library.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

彭昕怡

在新的学期中，我们班换了一位新的英语老师。她个子不高，有着一头乌黑亮丽的秀发。一双黑溜溜的眼睛，好像会说话一样。我们班的英语课也因为她的到来而变得积极向上了一些。

记得她给我们上第一节课时，在黑板上写下了A，B，C，D四个字母时，我们都一脸蒙圈的看着她。她也没卖关子，而是直按告诉我们这每一个字母向映代表着你们每一个大组，往后的每一节课中每大组之间都是有竞争的。你们可以通过回答问题，领读，默写单词来获得分数，而分数最高的大组可以在英语家业中获取减半的权力。随着老师的话落，同学们都摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试。在老师的提问下，每组之间可以说是“八仙过海，各显神通"，个个都使出了自已的看家本领，生怕自己的大组落后。

"叮铃铃，叮铃铃"下课铃声响起了，这有趣而又积极的一节课结束了。最后老师帮我们统筹了每个大组的积分成绩，获胜的大组获取了奖励，然而没有获胜的大组老师也叫他们不要气馁，争取在下一堂课取得好成绩

这就是我的英语老师——徐老师。

There is a lovely teacher in our class. we like her as our friends. we would like to tell her everything, sadness and happiness . She helps us on our lessons and guides us on other things. I am happy to have such a good teacher.