小学英语作文常见错误（汇编20篇）

二年级英语作文：My new friend

Now, I’m in Huang Pu School. I’m a new pupil here. But I have some new friends. Luky is one of them. Luky’s Chinese name is Fan Junran.

She’s twelve years old. She is tall, but not plump. She has black long hair, two big eyes and a lovely mouth. She often tells me lots of the funny things.

Luky has many hobbies. She likes sports very much. She can play basketball. She plays very well. She is good at the high jump, long-distance running and swimming.

She is very health, right? And Luky likes art. She likes singing, dancing and playing the electronic organ. She dances very well.

She likes Hip-hop so much. She is so cool when she dances Hip-hop.

We are good friends now. I’m so happy to meet her. She is a very breeziness girl. Do you want to be friends with her now?

二年级英语作文：My English friend

My English friend name is jim.

He is ten, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.he has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend .several days later jim said that he wanted, he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .ok see you jim.see you.

Parents is one day, a day of rain, parents is a tree, protect us grow, their selfless dedication of his own life, let the children grow up safe protection. Their pay is not anything in return, they comforted for the growth of children, for their own pay without regret. In the world because of their love, break through the layers of obstacles in the world changes in temperature to have a letter true zhi scenery... The children have mushroomed generally lively up, but also like a weed is uneven.

Good family can cultivate harmonious personality, make a good man. Because of the parents, it would not have been lost in faith; Rush of starlight, just had moments of light. Every child happy childhood has your escort. When tears, silently blessing you, waiting for you; Sad, you softly comforted; When you lose, you teach earnestly. How many unforgettable time, every day can hear you tender words, every day can feel the strength of your powerful support.

Experienced how many cold sun, how many day night, the great parents, how much you pay? Looked at the child growing up bit by bit, bit by bit mature, the shadow of your face already is full of ravines, hair become white hair. You remember our hours of joy, and cultivate the beautiful future, you are concerned about ZhaoEr female of food and clothing, you back caring ZhaoEr woman. Are you open of the road of life, embrace of love are you, you are leading the people see the future.

Because of you, ignorant children understand the life of truth, good habits achievements in our life.

Because of you, the world has hope; Because of you, the world is full of love.

Because of you, the world become so beautiful!

父母是一片天，是一片遮风挡雨的天，父母是一颗树，保护我们成长，他们无私的奉献着自己的生命，让孩子在成长中得到安全的保护。他们的付出是不要任何回报的，他们为儿女的成长感到欣慰，为自己的付出无悔。世上因为有了他们的爱，突破了层层阻碍，在冷暖人间有了一方真情挚信的风景……孩子们如雨后春笋一般活泼向上，但也如野草般参差不齐。

好的家庭可以培养和谐的性格，造就一个好人。因为有了父母，迷茫中才有了坚定的信念;催擦的星光，才有了瞬间的点亮。每一个儿童快乐童年都有您保驾护航。流泪时，您默默祝福、守候;悲伤时，您轻声安慰;失败时，你谆谆开导。多少个难忘的时光，每天可以听到您温柔的话语，每天可以感受到您强大的支撑的力量。

经历过多少严寒骄阳，多少白昼黑夜，伟大的父母，你们付出了多大的代价呀?看着一点一点长大的孩子，一点一点成熟的影子，您脸上已布满沟壑，青丝变成白发。您回忆我们小时欢乐身影，培育着美丽的未来，您关心着儿女的温饱，您惦记着儿女的归来。您是开启孩子人生之路的人，您是怀抱爱的人，您是引领看到未来的人。

因为有了您，无知孩童明白了做人的道理，良好习惯成就了我们一生。

因为有了您，世界有了希望;因为有了您，世界充满了爱;

因为有了您，世界变得如此美丽无比!

1、思想重视的不够

随着各种教学法涌入我国，对我国英语教学影响最大的当数“听说法”和&ldquo,日记;视听法”。这些教学法提倡将英语作为一门工具来对待，侧重学生语言技能的训练。然而，我们在着意于口头技能培养的同时却忽略了书面阅读和写作，在强调语言结构形式的反复操练的同时却忽略了学生语言能力的培养，从而导致教师和学生轻视英语写作现象的产生。

2、写作素材的缺乏

教师对小学英语写作究竟要写些什么缺乏明确的认识。大部分写作练习表现为简单机械的抄写，学生容易完成，老师易于批改，但写作内容与学生生活缺乏练习。

3、母语文法的束缚

小学生刚刚接触英语，在表达的过程中难免受到母语的构词法、语法和思维方式的影响，用汉语的方式组词或组句，以至于出现大量的文法错误，让人啼笑皆非。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Everyone has a family. We all live in there, and from there to get warm, there are six people in my family, my mother, father, grandfather, grandmother, sister, and me. We live a happy life together, our house has many interesting stories, especially mom and dad.

My father works hard. He is a driver, he always do his best to handle each car, try to make them comfortable. Sometimes, he worked too hard to forget to date.

My mother is a very bad memory. She would do a lot of housework, but sometimes because of her carelessness while doing something wrong. For example, one day, she use the washing machine wash his clothes, and finally found himself forgot to water in the washing machine.

Now let me tell you a funny thing: one day, the father thought as usual to get up early, but because he doesnt set the alarm clock the day before yesterday, so he got up late, when he woke up, he hurried to brush my teeth wash my face and went off to work, my father left, mother said to me mysteriously, "he must be back in a moment." "Why?" I am very surprised. "Because today is Sunday, his holiday." Mom just then, a little later, my father came back, and went to bed again, because he is too tired.

You see, what an interesting family! I hope you have a family like me.

每个人都有家。我们大家生活在那里，并从那里获取温暖，我们家有六口人，我妈妈、爸爸、爷爷、奶奶、妹妹，还有我。我们在一起幸福地生活，我们家有许多有趣的故事，特别是爸爸妈妈。

我爸爸工作认真。他是一名司机，他总是尽他最大的努力去搬运每一车的东西，尽力使他们舒服。有的时候，他工作太认真以致于忘了日期。

我妈妈是一位记性很不好的人。她总是做很多家务活，但有时却因为她的粗心而做错事。比如说，有一天，她用洗衣机洗衣服，最后却发现自己忘了在洗衣机中放水。

现在让我告诉你一件有趣的事：一天，爸爸想像平时一样早起，但是由于他前天没有设置闹钟，所以他起晚了，当他起床时，他匆匆忙忙地刷牙洗脸就去上班了，爸爸离开后，妈妈神秘地对我说：“他一会儿一定回来的。”“为什么?”我十分惊讶。“因为今天是星期天，他的假日。”妈妈正说着的时候，不一会儿，爸爸就回来了，并且再次上床睡觉了——因为他太累了。

你瞧，多么有趣的家庭!我希望你也有一个像我一样的家庭。

旅游有关的小学英语作文四I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to beijing!

人生的道路曲曲折折，小小的错误，像是照影的鸿雁，只用羽翼轻轻一点，便留下了美丽的涟漪。回睎看看这十年里，那次的错误最令我难忘······

一个周末，阳光明媚，我围着桌子转圈玩。只听“啪”的一声，我把爸爸最喜爱的花瓶打碎了。“怎么办?”我的心里不禁打了一个寒颤，虽然爸爸妈妈都不在家，但我急得像热锅上的蚂蚁，过了一会儿，我静下心来，自言自语道：“先把玻璃打扫一下。”等一下，爸爸和妈妈都回来了，爸爸看到了桌上好像少了什么东西，便问：“咦，我的花瓶呢?”爸爸疑惑地问我。“不知道。”我说完就走到房间里去了。只听见爸爸在翻找东西的.声音。那声音一下下地打在我的心里，我的‘金豆豆’不禁掉了下来。我慢吞吞地走到爸爸面前说：“爸爸，我，我把花瓶打碎了，对，对不起。”爸爸和妈妈微笑地对视了一下，语重心长地说：“没关系，只要你勇于面对和改正错误，就可以了。”我用力地点了点头。

俗话说：“人谁无过，过而能改，善莫大焉。”从此，只要遇到错误，就会改正。

I do not know when to start a more members - the dog, it is extremely clever and well-behaved, is my pistachio.

Whenever I go home from school home downstairs, you will see him lying on the balcony looking at me, but also loudly called. When I eat, it always loves to rub over the table to rub, and sometimes with a furry head rub your feet, sometimes on the floor somersault somersault, and I laughing and joking into one.

It is not only a very nice little guy, or a very curious little guy, what things have to get a clear, clearly white. My house bought a computer, I typed in front of the computer, the little guy also want to learn. It squatting around me, quietly watching, sometimes also on the keyboard chaos by a pass, want to catch all get rid of it.

Do you know its cute?

【参考范文】

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing . I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it .

First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much . Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them . I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

【参考译文】

暑假即将来临。我想去北京。我去北京和我的父亲,我的母亲和我的兄弟。我们想乘飞机去那里,因为它花费更少的时间。我们可以看到许多东西。

首先,我们可以去长城,它是非常著名的世界,所以我很喜欢它。第二,我们可以去动物园,因为我喜欢看动物。也有很多外国人在这个城市。我想用英语与他们交谈。我想向他们学习英语。我想我们可以度过一段美好的时光。我希望它快到了。

Thanksgiving Day, first of all I would like to thank the students I raised my father and mother, and then thanks to teach me to train my teacher.

Today, I would like to thank my extracurricular chess teacher, when I was eight years old, I first met in 2005, "61" children game, get encouragement, since then set my chess determination, So that I fell in love with Go. I will Baili teacher as a teacher, in his careful teaching, I gradually learned to "eat, layout, ending ... ..." by a chess blind "layman" into a strength of the amateur 4 small players, in the Repeatedly won several competitions. I remember the best results are the citys race and the sixth session of the eighth championship, the provinces "Linchuan Evening News Cup" second, the International Shanghai Invitational sixth, these hard-won results are Is the teachers hard education of the credit, how can I forget your education grace it?

In the future I will use practical action to thank you for my training, the ancients said: one day for the division, life for the father, dripping grace, when Yongquan phase newspaper. The results can only represent the past, I have to study hard, so that their chess does not continue to improve, humbly learn from chess, sum up experience, get rid of their shortcomings, learn someone elses superb chess and others, the future better To return to my mentor. Never let mentor disappointed.

I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

今天我上网做英语假期作业，我下定决心一定要得个满分给妈妈和爸爸看。

首先点击假期作业，开始玩“疯狂游戏机”啦，它的图案是一个马蜂，我想要是写错了肯定有一些马蜂来顶我吧！再点击一下，哦！原来游戏规则是：我们要按照电脑报出来的句子来按顺序点击它给你的单词。我心想这玩意儿可真难玩：有好几个重复的，而且还不好点击。后来我发现重复的当中，原来还有字首大小写的区别。掌握了这一点就很好玩了。几分钟，我就将它们一举攻下！最后数据给我了一个出人意料的成绩：114分。满分耶！呵呵！其实英语也不是那么难学，这种玩中学的方法我喜欢。你看，上面还有全班大爆料游戏，不用学，我就玩会了，但是同学已经把我爆料了77下啦！

网上作业就是好，同学最近状态，还有在班上你的成绩排第几，都能知道。而且不像其他的英语作业，枯燥无味，一点儿新鲜感都没有，还难把单词给记住。

我喜欢做网上作业！

我的周末

201_年_月_日 星期_ 晴

I have planned a happy weekend.Saturday morning, I must go to see me

aunt.In the afternoon, I must go to the shopping center to go shopping.Evening,

I planned makes the homework.Sunday in the morning, I watch the television, the

television program is e_tremely interesting.In the afternoon, I planned listens

to music and paints pictures.I thought this weekend I can be very weary, but is

certainly very joyful.

我打算过一个愉快的周末。周六的上午，我要去看望我的阿姨。下午，我要去购物中心买东西。晚上，我打算做家庭作业。周日上午，我看电视，电视节目非常有趣。下午，我打算听音乐和画画。我想这个周末我会很疲劳，但一定很快乐。

俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析

My name is Simon. Im 24 years old now. Im from Changsha University. I

major in English, because I have the gift for language study.

In my opinion, English is well-known all around the world. If I can speak

excellent English, I could travel to everywhere in the world without language

barriers. Now I can speak English like an American. Most of my classmates always

envy my oral English.

I like traveling very much. Through traveling, I can widen my perspective

and know more about our world. Now I have been to so many cities, such as

Guangzhou, Zhuhai, and Zhongshan. These cities are nice, clean and modern.

I think Im easy-going and hard-working. When Im at work, I always try my

best to do everything well. I never let others do anything that I can do, and I

never put off todays work to tomorrow. When you have difficulties, I’m eager to

give you a hand if Im able to. I hope I can be your best friend.

In modern society, most people are under the higher pressure than ever

before and some people cannot handle the stress well and choose some extreme

ways to avoid or settle their stress.However, is stress a bad thing? As far as I

am concerned, everything has two coins, and we also need to realize it from two

aspects.

For one thing, stress is a kind of mental burden caused by nervousness or

anxiety. In modern society, stress is mostly caused by the high requirements or

heavy burden from surroundings or us, such as stress from peers or stress in

economy. If we cannot handle the stress well, we would be easy to be in a

negative mood and lost our motivation and courage to keep going or struggle with

difficulties. In this aspect, stress is a threat for our body and mental.

However, for another, stress can also be changed into a kind of motivation

if we handle it well. For example, when you find that you are surpassed by your

classmates in an examination, you feel stressful but at the same time, you also

tell yourself that you need to work harder to surpass him next time. Under this

stress, you will find yourself have more motivation and energy to study. In this

point, stress is a propeller for us to get more improvements.

Thus, we need to use a dialectical method to treat stress and handle it

properly。

In todays world there is no big problem as a population. People began to worry about the support of the earth. And theres probably only standing room for everyone in the future.

The population of Lima is 5. It was 7 million in 1985, but it grew to 9. 1 million in 2000. Tianjin was 790 million in 1985. In 2000, it increased to 9. 7 million dollars. London, Osaka, Moscow, Beijing, Karachi, New Delhi, Jakarta, Seoul and Tehrans population growth has a similar city. Calcutta, Shanghai, New York, St Paul and STO saw a faster population explosion. Tokyo has 18 million 800 thousand in 1985. It became 20 million 200 thousand in 2000. Mexico City had 17 million 300 thousand people in 1985, but in 2000, its population reached 25 million 800 thousand!

What does population growth mean? This means increasing consumption and greater soil pressure. If more people are added to our world, the population has not been warned or taken any action, we will only stand in the end of twenty-first Century.

Each government and the United Nations should see that each countrys population and each city stay for the next 50 years.

[人口增长小学生英语作文

我一天的学习生活 My School Day

I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.

After a quick breakfast, I go to school in my mothers car. It takes us more

than half an hour to get there.

我早晨六点起床，然后我洗脸、刷牙。匆匆吃完早饭，我坐妈妈的车上学。我们要用半个多小时才能到达学校。

We have four hour classes in the morning. I have lunch at my grandparents,

because their home is nearer to my school.

我们上午上四节课。我在爷爷奶奶家吃午饭，因为他们家离学校更近些。

After two classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our

classroom.

下午上两节课后就放学了，然后我们打扫教室。

I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I

do my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can watch TV for half an hour.

I go to bed at half past nine or ten.

我大约五点半到家。我们七点吃晚饭。晚饭后我做作业。如果我完成作业早一些，我可以看半小时电视。我九点半或十点睡觉。

那是我第一次过圣诞节，朋友带我去参加圣诞舞会，在舞会上我们跳舞、唱圣诞歌，我也认识了一些其他朋友，我们相互交换礼物并互道祝福，我过得很愉快。

That was the first time that I celebated Christmas Day。 My friend aksed me to take part in Christmas party. At the party we danced and celebrated with carols. I knew some new friends. We exchanged gifts and said best wishes to each other. I had a pleasant time.

世界上每个人都会犯错，上到伟人，下到无名小卒，都会犯错，所以犯了错无需耿耿于怀，只要知错能改就行了。

当然我也不例外，今天我就犯了一个小小的错误，就是我和同伴玩的时候把我家的花瓶给打碎了，我怕极了，生怕被妈妈骂，于是，我在妈妈问话时说了一个小小的谎，说：“小猫捉老鼠时不小心打碎了。”“真的?”妈妈疑惑的问，“我……我……”“别我我我的了，我问你是不是你打碎的?”妈妈说。我点了点头，我以为又要被妈妈了，可出乎我意料之外的是，妈妈非但没有严厉的批评我，而是语重心长的说：“每个人都会犯错，上到伟人，下到无名小卒都会犯错，可你不用耿耿于怀，但你要知错就改……妈妈虽然没有读过书，但我不会不讲理，打碎花瓶就要骂……”

“世界上每个人都会犯错……”这句话一直记在我心上。

China has many traditional festivals among the year. But I like Mid-Autumn Festival the most. It means harvest, because it is celebrated in the harvest season. And it is the time for famers to express their thanks for harvest. In addtion, it’s the day for reunion. Some people call it Tuanyuanjie. The people work or study far away from home will come back to get-together with their families. They will eat a big meal and mooncake at that time. I hate parting but love reunion. So Mid-Autumn Day is my favorite festival.

一年之中中国有很多传统节日。我最喜欢的是中秋节。那意味着收获，因为它是在收获的季节里面庆祝的。那也是让农民们感激收获的时候。 此外，它也是团圆的日子。有人把它称为团圆节。在远方工作或学习的人都会回来与家人团聚。他们会在那个时候一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。我讨厌离别，喜欢团圆。所以我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。