小学英语作文常见错误(合集20篇)

As the saying goes, "depend on parents at home, out by friends". Yes, a friend will always help us, they grow in the happy together with us.

Lady cut with the same short hair, but the bang clip together, a quiet, laughing eyes narrowed into a little man who is it? Yes, she is my good friend -- Ye Zichao.

Because live nearly, so often play together, became inseparable friends.

One Saturday, I go with Ye Zichao learn Chinese calligraphy. Originally we are talking and laughing as always together, can the, my depression, without a word. Ye Zichao stopped "whats wrong with you?" "No, nothing." "You cant full me, quick say!" "Well, I tell you. Last week learning interest class, to learn, be scolded by the teacher, I cant." Im going to cry, a BiSuan, tears in her eyes. But she said: "its okay, like to learn calligraphy, there are no pains, no gains! Which teachers dont want their students study well? The teacher is good for you!" I keep back the tears, blinked my eyes a little red. She added: "thats ok, take it easy, a cake, just be careful. Dont be sad, go, go learn Chinese calligraphy."

I was impressed with this thing, because it is a classmate of my concern, concern is a good friend to me. I listened to her, think shes right, which the teacher didnt want their students to learn well, as long as I work hard, will bear fruit.

Look! This is my good friend Ye Zichao. She is so concerned about friends, I wish our friendship last forever...

俗话说，“在家靠父母，出门靠朋友”。没错，朋友会时时帮助我们，她们跟我们一起在快乐中成长。

剪着淑女一样的短发，却把刘海夹起来,一个文文静静，笑起来眼睛却眯成一条缝的人是谁?对，她就是我的好朋友——叶子超。

因为家住得近，所以经常一起玩，成了形影不离的朋友。

一个星期六，我和叶子超一起去学毛笔字。原来我们一起走时总又说又笑，可那次，我闷闷不乐，一言不发。叶子超停下了脚步“你怎么了?”“没，没什么。”“你满不了我的，快说呀!”“好吧，我告诉你。上个星期学兴趣班，没学好，被老师骂了一顿，我真不敢去了。”我快哭了，一阵鼻酸，眼泪到了眼眶里。可她却说：“没事的，就像学毛笔字，有付出才有收获呀!哪个老师不希望自己的学生学习好呢?老师是为你好呀!”我忍住眼泪，眨了眨我那有点儿红的眼睛。 她又说：”没事，放松点儿，一个兴趣班嘛，只要认真点就好了。别难过了，走，学毛笔字去。”

这件事我印象深刻，因为那是同学对我的关心，是一个好朋友对我的关心。我听了她的话，觉得她说的对，哪个老师不希望自己的学生学习好呀，只要我努力，必会结出硕果的。

瞧!这就是我的好朋友叶子超。她是那么关心朋友，真希望我们的友谊永远持续下去......

Jack is a good boy but he doesnt like to use his head. He often says something withou thinking.It makes others unhappy.

Mr. Black teaches math in a school. Hes old now and he likes children.On the Friday Mr. Black doesnt go to work, because hes ill in a hospital. And Jacks mother will see him after dinner. "I want to be there with you." says Jack. "Youre a rude boy. I cant take you there. says his mother. "Dont worry, mum. I wont do that again. Please believe me. " says Jack. In the hospital, Jack says nothing at first. When theyre leaving , he says to Mr. Black, "You look fine. The doctor says youre going to die, but I dont think so. "

In the U.S., we hang a christmas wreath and put lights on our house. We give presents to our friends.

In Australia,we have a picnic on the beach. At night, we sing carols by candlelight.

In theU.K., we pull Christmas crackers. We eat mince pies and Christmas pudding.

In Mexico, we have nine Posada parades at Christmas. Then we have a pinata party and get fruit and candy.

20 June 2006

Dear Sir,

I noticed an ad. In the paper today you said you were looking for people to join your expedition team. It sounded as if it might be fun so Im writing to say Id like to come along.

About myself: I left school at 16 because I wanted to earn a bit of money. After that I got a few part-time jobs as a waiter, etc. But I didnt stick to any of them for long. Recently Ive been doing a bit of hitch-hiking round Europe so Ive had some experience of traveling the hard way which should come in handy on the expedition youre planning. By the way, Im a great guitarist so I can keep you all amused round the campfire at night.

Let me know when I can call in for a chat about dates and other details, etc.

Yours,

David Smith

作文是一个人认识事物水平和语言文字表达能力的体现。我们要能够把自己的见闻、感受和想象明白地写出来，做到内容具体、感情真实、语句通顺、书写工整。注意不写错别字，会用常用的标点符号。养成留心观察、认真思考、勤于动笔、认真修改自己作文的习惯。

无论是命题作文或半命题作文、自由作文等，不外乎是写人的，记事的，写活动的，写景的，状物的，看图作文，扩写、缩写、改写、续写，应用文，想象作文等。我们可以从以下几个方面注意写好作文：

1、审清题意。包括审对象（写人？写事？写活动？写物？）；审范围（时间、地点、数量、人称等范围）；审重点（抓住题目的关键词，即题眼）。

2、明确中心。一种是题目本身就规定了文章的中心（如，《一个刻苦学习的同学》）；另一种是只规定了写作范围，写什么内容，确定什么中心要靠自己来定（记自己印象最深刻的一个同学）。

3、选择材料。材料要能反映文章所要表达的中心；材料要真实；材料要有代表性、典型。材料的筛选要经过几个回合，反复思考。可以先将能用的材料一起罗列出来，再根据题意的需要，选择最有表现力，最具体而新鲜的材料，并安排主次详略。

4、组织材料。这就要求我们在写文章之前先列好提纲，明确按什么顺序写，先写什么，再写什么，最后写什么，怎样分段，怎样衔接过渡；哪些详写，哪些略写；怎样开头结尾等等，一一列出来，写出来的文章才会条理清楚。

5、认真修改。文章写好后，必须认真读几遍，边读边查边改。修改文章包括改正错别字，改通句子，正确标点，注意条理清楚，以及重点部分是否具体等。

当然，文章的类型不同，写作时具体的要求也不同。如，写人的文章要抓住事件来写，写好人物的外貌、语言、行为动作和心理活动，能表现人物特点的细节要写具体。

记事的作文，要把事情的起因、经过、结果写清楚，要把事情的主要部分写具体，做到详略得当。写活动的文章，关键要写好活动中的几个场面。写景的文章要按照一定的顺序，把景物的特点写具体、形象、生动，要借景抒情。

看图作文关键要看清图意，合理想象。想象作文关键要大胆展开想象，既是想象、幻想，又对现实有着意义，表达了自己的理想与追求。应用文则要掌握一定的格式，明确写作的目的等等。

[小学语文考试作文类考题常见题型和答题技巧

The Dragon Boat Festival, must not not include dumplings! Today, my sister is teaching me the dumplings! You see.

Make zongzi must be prepared. My sister was ready to soak for three hours of glutinous rice and bought the leaves, which surprised me.

I put my rice in the leaves, and I was all over the table, and I was angry. My sister said to me, "you want to make a triangular shape of the leaf and put the rice in it!"

So I did what my sister said, and pressed it on the rice. Whats in the middle of that dish? It was minced meat! I dug a small hole in the middle of the glutinous rice and made it into a round shape, stuffing it into glutinous rice and adding it to the glutinous rice. How can you seal it? I looked at my sister and knew everything.

I pressed down one of the warped leaves and pressed the rope hard. Success! I covered a lot of them in the previous method. Now its time to get the pot down, boil the water first, and then put the dumplings on.

After a while, the dumplings were cooked. The four of you sat at the table and ate the dumplings.

I untied the rope and was trying to remove the leaves, but when I touched it, it was hot. Her sister looked and laughed. I blew and blew the heat away. I again carefully will leaves open, eat up to her delicious dumplings - among all be stuffed glutinous rice, wrapped in a delicious meat, fresh juice in your mouth, no oil is not greasy, and chewy, feels so good!

So the Dragon Boat Festival in the past, his mouth to eat with his hand package dumplings, thought the tang dynasty poet du fu wrote poems: palace clothing is famous, dragon boat be reward. The wind is soft and the snow is light. When the weather is wet, lets go to the heat. The meaning is the length of the word, the whole life.

What a happy Dragon Boat Festival!

过端午节，一定少不了粽子!今天，姐姐就在教我包粽子呢!你瞧。

做粽子一定要有准备的。原来，姐姐已准备好浸泡了3个小时的糯米，同时也买好了粽叶，这样准备就让我大吃一惊了。

我把米放在叶子里，可米全撒在了桌上，我生气极了。姐姐对我说：“你要把叶子做成一个三角形的样子，然后再把米放进去啊!”

于是，我按照姐姐说的步骤作了一遍，在米上按了按，咦?旁边那个盘子中间放的是什么?原来是肉馅哦!我在糯米中间挖了一个小洞洞，把肉馅弄成圆状，塞入糯米中，让它也加入糯米的行列中。可怎么封好呢?我看了眼姐姐，就明白了一切。

我把翘起来的一片叶子按下来，并用绳子用力的扎紧。成功啦!我按照前面的方法，包了好多个。现在就要下锅了，先是把水烧开，然后把粽子放下去。

过了一会儿，粽子煮好了。大家四人坐在桌子旁，吃起了粽子。

我把绳子解开，正想把叶子摘掉，可我一碰，就被烫着了。姐姐看了，哈哈的笑了起来。我吹着吹着，把让热气吹走了。我再次小心翼翼的将叶子掀开，吃起了自己亲手做的香喷喷的粽子来——白白胖胖的糯米中间，包着一团鲜汁可口的肉馅，放入口中，不油不腻，又有嚼劲，感觉太好了!

端午节就这么过去了，嘴里吃着自己亲手包的粽子，心里想着我国唐代诗人杜甫写的诗：宫衣亦有名，端午被恩荣。细葛含风软，香罗叠雪轻。自天题处湿，当暑着来清。意内称长短，终身荷圣情。

这真是一个快乐的端午节!

15 April 2006

Dear Sir,

I saw your advertisement for "the perfect lighter" in Sunday Times last week and immediately sent off a ￡2 postal order and the completed form for the lighter.

Imagine my surprise when all I got in return was a box of matches! I could understand a mistake. I might even pardon a joke. But in this case, your advertisement is a deliberate lie since a friend of mine who also sent the coupon got the same result.

I think its a shame to promise an economical lighter when in fact you are not selling a lighter a1 all. Instead of saying it works quickly, you should admit that you are offering matches. And what about "only" ￡2: I usually pay 10 pennies for a box of matches, and they are often given away free.

I regard your advertisement as a serious deception and demand that you send me my money back immediately. Otherwise I will take active steps to make sure the Consumers Association hear about it.

Yours faithfully,

Peter Li

a dream

peter: oh, i can＇t believe it. i am now in london in england. i see the big ben. big ben is not the the name of a man. it is a very big clock…. oh, i am so happy.

happy: how are you?

peter: i＇m fine, thank you.

happy: how was your holiday?

peter: it was fun.

happy: where did you go?

peter: i went to england.

happy: how did you go there?

peter: i went by plane.

happy: what did you do and what did you see?

peter: i saw the big ben. the hands are four meters long.and i bought presents for you!

happy: oh, thank you. did you take any pictures?

peter: yes. er…where did i put my pictures? ...

peter: oh, it＇s a dream!

My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall, plunge into a ponytail. Her little mouth, the nose is not high not low, eyes in the dark, dark, bright, seems to be god.

My mothers temper very urgent. If I have the wrong, my mother got angry. On one occasion, my math oral one fault, mother was severely criticized me. Another time, I play with my brother, dont be careful the younger brother cry, mother also criticized me, also let me apologize to him.

Mom is very concerned about me. The last time I was ill that day, while I was sleeping in the evening, mother also get up to me to take medicine, temperature. I want to use my good grades to repay my mother.

Mother is a hard life, work all day and night. At home doing the housework, kindergarten to teach children, goes to school themselves. Its busy and busy not to come. But learning is not for me to relax, to give every day I check my homework and signature.

Mother doesnt like pets, also do not watching TV. Whenever you have a second reading, every other week, will take me to the library once.

Mother likes to eat fish, I said she is a little cat; Mother likes to chew bones, I said she is a little black dog; Mother likes to eat pork, I said she is a little tiger. Mother not picky about food, I want to learn from her.

I think mom is very good. I like it very much, mom.

我的妈妈在我眼里是最漂亮的。她的个子不高，扎了一个马尾辨。她的嘴巴小小的，鼻子不高不低，眼睛黑黑的、亮亮的，看上去有神。

妈妈的脾气很急。如果我有错，妈妈就发火。有一次，我数学口算错一题，妈妈就严厉批评我。还有一次，我跟弟弟玩，不小心把弟弟弄哭了，妈妈也批评我，还让我向他道歉。

妈妈很关心我。上次我生病的那天，在晚上我睡觉的时候，妈妈还起床给我吃药，量体温。我要用我的好成绩来报答妈妈。

妈妈是个劳碌命，一天到晚都做事。家里做家务，幼儿园里教小孩，自己还要去读书。真是忙也忙不来。但对我的学习一点也不放松，每天要给我检查作业和签名。

妈妈不爱养宠物，也不爱看电视。一有空就看书，每隔一个星期，就要带我去一次图书馆。

妈妈喜欢吃鱼类，我说她属小猫咪;妈妈喜欢啃骨头，我说她是小黑狗;妈妈喜欢吃猪肉，我说她是小老虎。妈妈不挑食，我要向她学习。

我觉得妈妈很不错，我很喜欢妈妈。

When we are chatting with our friends happily, suddenly if we are talking

about the awkward topic, we need to do something to change this situation, what

are we gonna do? The answer is using your humor to make things seem easy, and

then your friends won’t take your awkward topic seriously. Humor is very

important, it can adjust the atmosphere, making things work easily. Life needs

humor, without humor, life would be boring. Foreign people like to make friends

with humorous people, they can feel relax when they are chatting, while most

Chinese people are always taking things too seriously. I like to make friends

with humorous guys, they make me feel life is easy, and we should positive about

life.

i have a good friend. her name is emily. we are very friendly. yesterday was her thirteenth birthday. her friend and her parents held a party for her.

in the evening, all her friends came to emily’s home. each had a very nice present for her. at the moment, emily felt very happy. and so were her parents and her friends. look! the meal was on the table. how delicious they were! there were all kinds of food: eggs, fish, fried chicken, dumplings, pork, beef and some fruits.

after supper, emily sang a song“ happy birthday to you!” she has a nice voice. everybody said that she was a good singer. then we celebrated emily, “happy birthday to you! ” she said, “thank you! ” after this, emily’s mother took a birthday cake to the table. we gave presents to emily and emily began to blow candles. everybody was very delighter.

at last, we watched cartoon. what a good, nice birthday party.

my holiday was very wonderful.and it was very busy. in the morning.i went to the park with my parents.im very happy. at noon.i went to the restaurant with my parents. the food was very delicious. in the evening.i was watch tv.then i did my homework.last,i went to bed at10 oclock.

oh! it was winter holiday. i was very happy. i read my favourite books. i have many wonderful books. but i could not read these books too much. i also had a lot of homework to do. i like playing computer games, too. it”s very interesting. but i could not play it too much. i wear glasses, i”m very sad. it”s not good for my eyes to play computer games too much.

oh! it was the spring festival. it”s chinese traditional festival. people were very happy. they went shopping, cleaned their houses, had supper together......i went to my grandparents” home with my parents. my grandparents were very happy to see us. they prepared many kinds of nice food, such as fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. in the evening, we watched tv and lighted fireworks. we also knocked on people”s doors and gave some presents to them. after the spring festival, we went to shanghai to go shopping. we bought clothes, shoes and some delicious food.

i had a good holiday, i think. i also have very nice school life now.

As the development of modern technology, Smartphone has become quite popular all over the world with its outstanding functions. People can use phones to surf the Internet, update their personal micro blog, and upload their latest pictures at any place, anytime. It seems that smart phones have already become an indispensable part in peoples daily lives. However, some people are indulging in smart phones, which already have side-effect on their normal life.

Some people, especially teenagers, are easily fall for Smartphone for these reasons. First of all, nowadays, people are under great pressure, while cell phone provides a platform for people to relax themselves. By playing mini-games, vocal chatting with friends, watching movies and listening to music, people can easily forget their problems temporary. Second, there are always something new on the phone. It is can be interesting, mysterious and various. So people are eager to turn on their phones, want to know what is happening around them. When people spend too much time on the phones, they dont have enough chance to communicate with their friends or parents. Their attentions have been drawn away by the virtual world. Lack of good self-control, they are fragile to the smart phone addiction, while they supposed to focus on their study and work.

I think people should take smart phone addiction seriously. Quitting addiction needs time and patience. People should turn off their phones, go outside and communicate with others face to face. Do more exercise and form optimistic attitude towards life!

随着当代科技的迅速发展，智能手机以其卓越的功能风靡全球。人们可以在任何时间、任何地点用它来上网，更新个人微博，上传自己的最新照片。看起来智能手机已经成为人们生活中不可缺的一部分了。然而，有些人过渡沉迷于智能手机，以至于影响了正常生活。

一些人，特别是青少年，极容易被智能手机吸引。原因有这些：首先，当今社会人们压力很大，智能手机提供了一个给人们放松的平台。通过玩小游戏，与朋友语音聊天，看电影听音乐，人们很容易暂时忘记他们的烦恼。其二，手机上总有新鲜事。有趣的、神秘的、种类繁多的信息吸引着大家打开手机，去了解周围到底发生了什么。当人们花了太多的时间在手机上时，就没有足够的机会去与朋友父母聊天沟通。他们的注意力已被虚拟世界所吸引。缺乏好的自控能力，他们在手机成瘾面前弱不禁风。他们理应集中精力在学习和工作上的。

我认为人们应重视把智能手机成瘾症。戒掉它需要时间和耐心。人们应该关掉手机，走出家门与他人面对面的沟通交流。多做运动，培养乐观积极的心态!

Everybody will meet all kinds of difficulties during their lives, of

course, they are willing to accept success, but the fact is that no one can win

all the time, they will meet failure now and then. Fail is an unpleasant thing

to face, people treat fail a bad thing. While for me, I think we can learn from

failure and be a better man.

Everyone is afraid of facing failure, because failure brings them the sense

of frustration. When facing failure, people choose to avoiding talking about it,

they feel that they will be looked down upon by others. Indeed, no one likes to

failure anything, they want to be successful all the time.

If people change their idea about failure, they can see the positive side.

There is an old saying that failure is the mother of success, which means that

people will learn from failure and make preparation for the success. So failure

is not that hard to face, if people take right attitude towards it, they will

gain success soon.

In a word, failure is not a bad something, it can bring success, only if

people treat it right.

1、思想重视的不够

随着各种教学法涌入我国，对我国英语教学影响最大的当数“听说法”和&ldquo,日记;视听法”。这些教学法提倡将英语作为一门工具来对待，侧重学生语言技能的训练。然而，我们在着意于口头技能培养的同时却忽略了书面阅读和写作，在强调语言结构形式的反复操练的同时却忽略了学生语言能力的培养，从而导致教师和学生轻视英语写作现象的产生。

2、写作素材的缺乏

教师对小学英语写作究竟要写些什么缺乏明确的认识。大部分写作练习表现为简单机械的抄写，学生容易完成，老师易于批改，但写作内容与学生生活缺乏练习。

3、母语文法的束缚

小学生刚刚接触英语，在表达的过程中难免受到母语的构词法、语法和思维方式的影响，用汉语的方式组词或组句，以至于出现大量的文法错误，让人啼笑皆非。

Hi, my name is Susannah Huang. My life is wonderful.

From Monday to Friday, I usually get up at 6.30. I brush my teeth and wash my face at 6.35.And then I have breakfast. For breakfast, I have bread and milk. At 7.00 I go to school. I always get to by bus. I have cLasses from 8.00am to 5.30pm. On Saturday and Sunday, I usually get up at 9.00.

On weekdays, I have many cLasses, Chinese、maths、English and other subjects. My favourite subject is English.

I like my life and my study very much.

This is Lin. She is from Beijing. She studies very hard.In class she can answer theteachers questions very quickly. Lin loves her classmates and often helps them with their lessons. Everybody says she is a very good monitor.

小学生二年级英语作文：我最喜欢的季节(My favorite season)

There are four seasons in the year .my favorite season is summer .because i can go to the beach to swimming.i can have sunbath on the beach. i can wear beautiful dress, i can go to the store to buy some ice creams! i can calling my friends go to outside!summer is a fun season !I like summer very much!

小学生一年级英语作文：我是谁?（Who am I?）

小学生一年级英语作文：我是谁（Who am I?）

Hello！ My name is Weiwei. My father is very handsome.My mother is very beautiful. So I’m very lovely. Look！ My coat is red. My eyes are blue. I have a long tail. Fish is my favorite food. I like mice too. Guess！ Who am I？

小学生一年级英语作文：我的小狗（my dog)

小学生一年级英语作文：我的小狗（my dog)

I have a pet and it is my dog .In my eyes ,he is my closest friend in the world .He is loyal and cute.When I am alone,he can play with me.When I feel sad ,he always touches my foot with his claws.Mostly after that ,I always feel better and more happy .It is all because of he.So,I love my dog and we are best friends .

小学生一年级英语作文：我的可爱老师(My Lovely Teacher)

小学生一年级英语作文：我的可爱老师(My Lovely Teacher)

There is a lovely teacher in our class. we like her as our friends. we would like to tell her everything, sadness and happiness . She helps us on our lessons and guides us on other things. I am happy to have such a good teacher.

小学生一年级英语作文：我的小卧室(My bedroom)

小学生一年级英语作文：我的小卧室(My bedroom)

I have a small bedroom, its on the third floor in my house. there is a small bed, a nice wardrobea and a small table in my room. the bed is on the left side of the table. the wardrobe is on the right, it is very beautiful. there is a lamp and a clock on the table, the lamp is green, the clock looks like an orange, it’s smart.

my bedroom is small, but it’s very comfortable.

小学生一年级英语作文：我的同学(My Classmates)

小学生一年级英语作文：我的同学(My Classmates)

I have many friends in my class. theyre interesting and lovely. I would like to introduce some of them. Suse is very cute. shes also kind to everyone and shes very enthusiastic.

Shes always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. she always forgets to bring her text books, but our teachers always forgive her. Ken is the most talkative boy in our class. his nickname is “chatterbox.” he has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh Lily is a quiet student.

She is good at every subject but she never shows off. Ken is a very tall boy. he plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. he often says, “playing basketball is good for your health. how about your classmates? Do you like them? try to admire your classmates. you will be happier.

Last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".

Last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.

My dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)

我家的小狗

去年，朋友送我一只小狗，我非常喜欢它，放学后就和它一起玩耍，无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。

去年冬天我忙于功课，每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚，这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时，它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来，似乎它是在叫我。

我家的狗不但对我照顾周到，而且还肩负着看家的重任，每当有陌生人来到我家，它总是叫个不停，但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!

导语：一年有四季，你最喜欢哪个季节呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My favorite season is summer. Its hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I dont go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation.

翻译

我最喜欢的季节是夏天。夏天很热。夏天有一个暑假。我不上学。我想很多孩子喜欢这个季节，因为他们可以吃冰淇淋和去游泳。我可以去游泳。有时我和我的父母去海滩。有时我和朋友去游泳池。暑假我经常去很多地方。

我们玩得很开心 We play very happy

Today Im very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.

Its a sunny day ,the bird is singing,Im singing too.When I get to park,I

see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have

lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.whats a happy day!