小学英语作文常见错误(经典20篇)

忙碌的星期天

Last week , I had a busy Sunday.

I got up at six oclock at first ,Then ,I must washed my face and brushed

my teeth in ten minutes,Following,I need for breakfast .My breakfast was very

delicious ,so I ate them fast.After this,I went out and went played basketball

with my best friend ,Tom ,in the school playground .We knew many tempering is

good to health, so we can train each week together .In the noon,I went home and

cooked my lunch by myself ,then ate it .In the afternoon ,I stayed at home .I

read books and did my homework three hours .I n the evening ,it is mountain in

the sun ,I began to washed my dirty clothes .At the oclock ,I went to bed and

had a rest.

How a busy day it is !

快乐的周末 A Happy Weekend

I have a happy weekend!Take lessons on Saturday, Im going to cram school,

tutoring English and maths. In the afternoon, I watch TV at home. In the

evening, I want to go out for a walk with mom and dad and sister.On Sunday, Im

going to the shopping center reading, the book is really interesting. After

lunch, Im going to the sports, the body health is very important! In the

evening, I at home reading. How about you? What are you going to do this

weekend?

Dear Professor Smith,

I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on Nov. 28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.

As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.

Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec @163.com if you could come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Lihua

1、思想重视的不够

随着各种教学法涌入我国，对我国英语教学影响最大的当数“听说法”和&ldquo,日记;视听法”。这些教学法提倡将英语作为一门工具来对待，侧重学生语言技能的训练。然而，我们在着意于口头技能培养的同时却忽略了书面阅读和写作，在强调语言结构形式的反复操练的同时却忽略了学生语言能力的培养，从而导致教师和学生轻视英语写作现象的产生。

2、写作素材的缺乏

教师对小学英语写作究竟要写些什么缺乏明确的认识。大部分写作练习表现为简单机械的抄写，学生容易完成，老师易于批改，但写作内容与学生生活缺乏练习。

3、母语文法的束缚

小学生刚刚接触英语，在表达的过程中难免受到母语的构词法、语法和思维方式的影响，用汉语的方式组词或组句，以至于出现大量的文法错误，让人啼笑皆非。

My mother buys me a lot of clothes, among these clothes, I like the sweater which is knitted by my mother best. My mother is good at knitting sweater, she knits the sweater for me in the winter, I feel so warm when I put on it. I am so thankful to my mother, for she taking care of me all the time, I will return her love when I grow up.

我的妈妈给我买了很多的衣服，在这些衣服当中，我最喜欢妈妈给我织的那件毛衣。我的妈妈很擅长织毛衣，她在冬天给我织了那件毛衣，当我穿上那件毛衣的时候，会感觉到很暖和。我很感激我的妈妈，她一直在照顾着我，等我长大了，我要回报她的爱。

I like eating fruit. Watermelons are my favourite fruit.

Watermelons are big and round. In Cixi, watermelons are very sweet, because they grow on the salty ground.

During summer holiday, I can eat watermelons every day. After eating, I often make a watermelon lantern with my friends. In the evening, we often take the lanterns and play in the park.

My grandmother uses the watermelon peel to make pickled food.(酱瓜) It’s salty, but very tasty.

Watermelons are so useful! Do you like them?

During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11

oclock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next

I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on

playing till 2 oclock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day

of my winter vacation.

But I havent bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I

listen to the music or the radio in the bed, because it was very cold outside

and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the

vacation, we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year

and play table tennis tegether. And I watched the spring festival party of the

CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people

of china doing at that time.

Thats all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.

will christmas replace the spring festival?

this worry is fairly unnecessary. why ? one reason lies that christmas only affects christians，college students and joint-venture (合资企业)workers. another reason is that christmas is mostly celebrated in cities. few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exotic(带有异国情调的) festival. by contrast，the spring festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family.

I like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal. It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.

It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.

When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: wom wom.

I like my dog very much.

导语：一年有四个季节，春夏秋冬，各有特色，你最喜欢的季节是什么呢?为什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It was snow just now, there are lots of snow in the sky. The rivers are stopping flowing. The ground is covered with a layer of snow.

The snow looks like smoke, its white. It likes a piece of paper. The snow fall from the sky. It kisses the ground. How white the snow is! How beautiful the snow is!

I like snow! I like winter!

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刚才下雪了，天上有很多雪。河流停止流动。地上覆盖着一层雪。

雪看起来像烟，它是白色的。它喜欢一张纸。雪从天空坠落。它亲吻大地。雪是多么白!多么美丽的雪!

我喜欢雪!我喜欢冬天!

In the fall, I and a few children to the orchard to pick apples.

Came to the orchard, the grass dancing in the breeze, as if to say: "Come and dance with me!" Chrysanthemum blooming smile. Ginkgo tree and maple are still walking in the breeze little dance! Fruit trees also follow them to learn to dance.

Look, Xiao Li and Xiao Gang in picking up the leaves, they picked up the leaves to do it? They picked up the leaves to make bookmarks it! Red big apple straightened, as if to say: quickly take me off it. Xiao Ming Dianqi from the tip of the apple picked up. Picked a big and red apple, happy smile. I also saw a big and red apple, but also how can not pick enough. I shook the tree vigorously, the apple fell on the tree down a lot, I was happy to pick up the apple. We eat big mouth mouth of the apple, which is personally picked their own fruit, eat up sweet heart.

At noon, we should go, we would like to play here for a while, but adults are waiting for us to go home for lunch yet. We reluctantly left this beautiful orchard.

The summer vacation, we came to the star mountain tourism scenic area, visit the lotus with a history of more than two thousand years. It with "artificial didnt mean to take the tico" known for its magnificent spectacle.

: I want to go the lianhua is visit "view of the sea goddess of mercy", isnt it? View the sea goddess of mercy guanyin statue as high as 40. 88 m, is the foil (bo2) gold statue of the world. High overhead, her good-natured, overlooking (kan3) the long steps under her feet, the love is aspersed to the earth. And I was looking up at the sight of the long stairs, thinking: this... If we ascend the stairs, that should be able to see that a piece of vacant land of the gods? We walked around the sea goddess of mercy, it whole body is golden, standing on a lotus flower stage, high about three stories tall, give a person the feeling of soaring coast.

Then we came to next to the clock bell in line. Its my turn to bell, I hold the wood hard against the clock, big bronze "dong -" a deafening noise. Then I thought: if a man got into the clock in it, let me knock the clock, that this much fun? He doesnt have to sit on swing can swing a!

In halfway up the hill, I saw countless lush trees and flowers. To look down the hill, the sea, river, lake, etc. In this state, the people were amazed, and very comfortable, and looked around to long standing, and want to sit down and whisper a little poem magnificent.

Lotus in the cool breeze, fresh air, and the beautiful scenery, I regretted leaving!

暑假，我们来到了莲花山旅游风景区，参观这个具有两千多年历史的莲花山。它以“人工无意夺天工”的奇景奇观闻名于世。

我想：去莲花山就不能不看望“观海观音”了吧?观海观音观音铜像高达40。88M，是目前箔(bo2)金铜像的世界之最。她慈眉善目，高高在上，俯瞰(kan3)她脚底下的那长长的台阶，把慈爱洒向人间。而我则是仰望着眼前的那长长的台阶，心里想着：这…如果我们拾级而上，那应该可以见到那一片空灵的神明之地了吧?我们绕着观海观音走，它全身都是金色，站在高高的莲花台上，大约有3层楼高，给人高耸如云的感觉。

接着我们来到大钟的旁边排队敲钟。轮到我敲钟的时候，我抱着木头用力向大钟撞去，大铜钟“咚——”地发出震耳欲聋的响声。这时我想：如果一个人钻进大钟里去的话，让我敲一下钟的话，那该多好玩呀?他不用坐在秋千上也能荡秋千一了!

到了半山腰，我看到了数不清的繁茂的大树和花草。再向山下眺望，海、江水、湖等映入眼帘。在这种境界，既使人惊叹，又叫人舒服，既想久立四望，又想坐下低吟一首奇丽的小诗。

莲花山那凉爽的微风，清新的空气，还有那美丽的景色，使我留连忘返!

Our country has an ancient patriotic poet named Qu Yuan, he was e_iled by

the calumny, the inability to save the peril of the country, e_cessive anger, so

Jiang himself voted to Health martyred. It is for him not to eat the bodies of

fish and shrimp, one after another to the various pancake into the river, the

water used to feed animals, and some ship off the water at the water beast. This

has become now the Dragon Boat Festival, eating dumplings, fried cake, the

origin of the dragon-boat race.

Having said that, I think of my family have been the scene of the Dragon

Boat Festival. Grandmother pinch a different type of pancake, has florets,

small, small starfish, is really different form. hurry to go shopping Kok,

calmly took my father to buy tzu. A long row of teams, like a long queue, we

managed to buy a tzu. We can see that every household have attached great

importance to this holiday, people in this way to e_press their thoughts and

reverence Yuan.

我国古代有一位爱国诗人叫屈原，他遭谗言被放逐后，无力拯救危亡的国家，悲愤过度，于是投江自尽，以生殉国。人们为了不使鱼虾吃掉他的尸体，纷纷将捏成的各种各样的饼子投入江中，用来喂饱水中的动物，有的划着船在水上敲锣打鼓驱赶水兽。这便成为现在端午节，吃粽子、炸糕点、赛龙舟的由来。

说到这里，我又想起了我家过端午节的情景。奶奶捏了种类不同的饼子，有小花，小人，小海星，真是形态各异。妈妈急着去买菜角，爸爸不慌不忙地拉着我去买粽子。排着长长的队，好似一条长龙，我们好不容易才买到了粽子。可以看出，家家户户都很重视这个节日，人们用这种方式来表达对屈原的思念和崇敬。

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

One of my classmates was knocked down by car last term. He was badly hurt. He had to stay in the hospital for several months. We were very sad.

One night, he felt very hungry. He wanted to buy some easy noodles to eat. He ran very fast. He didn’t stop when the traffic lights were red. He couldn’t escape. His legs were injured. He said that was a terrible(可怕的) memory. He said he would obey the traffic rules forever.

Please always remember the traffic rules. It is very important for us. Life is wonderful. Let’s obey the rules at any time.

today is tree-planting day.

we went to plant trees in daning greenland. as soon as we arrived, we began to work.some were digging holes, some were planting and others were watering. we all know trees are very useful to man. growing trees means saving man himself. we all worked very hard. when the sun went down, we came back home.

although we were very tired, we felt very happy.

Let me tell you what I will be when I grow up. I think languages are the most important tools of communication among people. Each country＇s languages, which are different, are interesting. So I want to be a translator. Since I was a child, I have learned many kinds of languages. I like to make friends with people from other countries. If I can speak a lot of languages, I will have a lot of friends. I don＇t think being a translator is very easy. It must be very hard. But I want to try! So I＇m studying English now. I want to be a translator in Japan. It＇s my dream and I believe I can do it.

导语：同学之间就要懂得互帮互助，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Help Each Other

This morning I went to the classroom at seven oclock because I was on duty today. Of course I was the first one. I was cleaning the blackboard when Li Ming came into the classroom. I asked her, "Who do you come here so early?" She answered with a smile, "I know you are on duty today. Let me help you." I was very happy and said, "Oh, thankyou. " We began to work together. When the teacher arrived, we had already done a good , and the classroom was clean and tidy. The teacher praised me.

The day after tomorrow Li Ming will be on duty. I am going to help her too. We are good friends. We should help each other.

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互相帮助

今天早上七点我去了教室，因为我今天值日。当然我是第一个。当李明走进教室时，我正在擦黑板。我问她：“你这么早来这里是谁?”她笑着回答：“我知道你今天值日。让我来帮你。“我非常高兴的说，“哦，谢谢你。”我们开始一起工作。当老师到达的时候，我们已经做得很好了，教室干净整洁。老师表扬了我。

后天李明将值日。我也会帮助她。我们是好朋友。我们应该互相帮助。

Last week, my cousin was back at home from his trip. He had been away for

more than a month and he was a backpacker. I felt so envious, because he could

live the life he wanted. I listened to him and was so attractive by the scenery

he saw. The people he met also caught my attention. I made up my mind. When I

earned money in the future, I would do the things as my cousin do now. So the

first thing for me was to be more independent. I should learn to do the things

by myself, such as cleaned my own stuff instead of asking my mother to wash.

Secondly, I needed to study hard, so as to find a good job. I needed money to

support my dream. I believe that I can realize my dream and live my own

life.

一天，小明在幼儿园被老师表扬有爱心，要小明继续发扬下去，小明是非常的高兴。

放学后，小明在回家的路上，看见一只小鸡在树下叫，小明疑惑地说：“咦!这是什么?好像是一只小鸟耶!!!!它一定是从树上掉下来，飞不上去的。看来我要赶紧把它送进窝里面，这样小鸟一定会很开心的。”

说着，小明就抱着“小鸟”爬到树上去，不过，树可不是那么好爬的，小明刚爬到一半就摔下去了，小明想起老师让小明继续发扬下去，就重新抱起“小鸟”爬上树，终于，他把“小鸟”送进了鸟窝，小明是非常地高兴呀，他不禁想：等一下到家告诉妈妈，妈妈一定会表扬我的。想着想着就回到家了。

小明对妈妈说：“妈妈，妈妈，今天我送一只小鸟回到鸟窝。”小明的妈妈笑着说：“嗯，我们的小明真是一个有爱心的人啊!”小明特别高兴。

再次回到“小鸟”“住”的树下，有一只大母鸡回来了，见自己的孩子不见，非常地着急，它着急地找着她的孩子，说：“天呀!!我的鸡宝宝到底到哪去了?”

Life is short,so it is imperative that we do not waste a moment of it.We should all live life to the fullest.In order to do that we must focus on what is important in life.By paying attention to the right things we can make our lives colorful rather than dull.

The four most important components of a colorful life are quality of life,people,health and passion.The first,quality of life,can be achieved by doing everything to the best of our ability.If we do that,success will come to us.Second,we must value the people and relationships in our lives.People are the secret to happiness,so we must always treat them right.Third,we must treat our body right,too.It is difficult to enjor life without good health.The last ingredient,passion,is perhaps the most important.We must commit one hundred percent to our relationships and career.

We should have a passion for living. In conclusion,we can all have wonderful lives.All we have to do is remember that the for keys to a colorful life are:quality of life,people,health and passion.By paying attention to these things we are bound to live meaningfully and well.