小学英语作文常见错误（汇编20篇）

When I was picking up my stuff after school， I saw a dog staring at me at the school gate .I was kind of scary. I thought the dog would bite me when I was going out. But it was not. The dog started to follow me. I was very afraid. I started to run away， but the dog did it， either. Suddenly， the dog ran pass away me. I realized the man in front of me was the owner of the dog. I was relieved.

From then on， as long as a dog stares at me， I will look back to have a look whether there is another person near or not.

There are various emotions in the world. People need valuable emotions

which can support them both in mind and in life. Friendship is one of the most

vital emotions.

It is not easy to deal with friendship. As for friendship, sometimes you

and your friend may meet difficulties. Trust is the most remarkable trait of

forever friendship. Trust plays a very important role in daily communication. As

the saying goes, “Between friends all is common.” Furthermore, tolerance is also

a considerable factor in remaining good friendship. If your friend makes a

mistake accidentally, you should have largeness of mind. Friendship is too

precious. When we face some misunderstandings, we need to make joint efforts to

protect our friendship. We should not give up friendship at random. We should

treat our friends as treasures.

Friendship is so pure, clear and beautiful. We cannot be lack of friendship

in our life. Try our best to insist our trust in making friends.

banana always grows in the warm area.

its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

you can see this in the zoo.

im a student.i like eggs and coconut.because eggs is very good for me .its very healthy.the coconut is a very sweet .the haunans coconut is very great.i like them.

i’m going to the sun on my holiday. i will go there by a spaceship. i will take a big blue spaceship。then i’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. so i put on the super-shirt. in the morning, i will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

at eight o’clock, i will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. super dog is white and black. super girl is very clever. super girl and super dog like to play with me. so i play with them for forty minutes. then i do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. after my home work, i will have my lunch. i will eat sun salad. i will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. i will have red juice, red fish and red rice. all the things are red. then i need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. so i will walk to the spaceship. i’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

this is a good holiday on the sun.

导语：父母的爱就像大海取之不尽，用之不竭。父母养育的恩情，我们无论如何也难以回报，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Dear dad and mum,youre so selfless that you always keep all good things for me.Youre so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever .

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亲爱的爸爸妈妈，你是如此的无私，你总是把所有好的东西给我。你很勤奋，你要继续工作，整天为了生计。谢谢你给我的生命。谢谢你的爱，请相信我。我会努力的，我想看到你眼中的微笑。我永远爱你。

I had a busy summer vacation. I did my homework every day . I went to the library to borrow some books and went to the shops to buy some books and I read books almost every day .I did sports such as playing table tennis, swimming and so on. I visited my grandparents and stay there for a week. I helped my parents do some housework. Of course I went to Hannan Island to spend a week there because it is such a beautiful place.

我暑假很忙。 我每天要写作业。 我去图书馆去借书、去商店买书,我几乎每天都看书。我做运动，如：打乒乓球、游泳等。我去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我帮父母做家务。当然了我也去海南度过一周，因为那里是如此美丽的地方。

那是我第一次过圣诞节，朋友带我去参加圣诞舞会，在舞会上我们跳舞、唱圣诞歌，我也认识了一些其他朋友，我们相互交换礼物并互道祝福，我过得很愉快。

That was the first time that I celebated Christmas Day。 My friend aksed me to take part in Christmas party. At the party we danced and celebrated with carols. I knew some new friends. We exchanged gifts and said best wishes to each other. I had a pleasant time.

My father is long with a black hair, a pair of bright and piercing eyes, big nose, looks very handsome, there is a problem - love to drink.

A father came back from work to see the table with two bottles of Wuliangye, my father suddenly enraptured, "ah! Great! Great!" Said, my father flew past, pick up the bottle to drink, "Gudong Gudong ... ..." Breath to drink a bottle, and then picked up another bottle, so that two bottles of Wuliangye is also no left. Dad after drinking, said to me: "go! And I went to thousands of passengers Long supermarket, I bought you a car to go!

Come back, my father riding a crooked, my heart is very afraid, urging my father to ride, my father said: "Nothing! Nothing!" Said, the car just like the earth embrace. "Oh ... ..." my ass broke the flowers, my father quickly worried to ask me: "how ah, did not fall?" Looked at my father look anxious, I had to say: "nothing!" Then I squeaked and said: "Dad, you - after - do not drink -" Dad lowered his head and said: "Well!" Look at my fathers appearance, I laughed.

This is my dad, i love my daddy.

英语作为一门新兴的综合性课程，走进了小学课堂，要学习它就如同幼儿学习母语一样，一切要从头开始。教师不仅要懂得课堂教学规律，掌握一定的教育学、心理学知识，还必须关注每一位学生，运用一定的组织艺术，努力调动学生的有意注意，激发学生的情感，使学生在愉快、轻松的心境中全身心地投入到学习中去。在课堂上，应注意以下几个方面：

1、良好的课前准备习惯。上课前，要求学生把课堂上要用的东西如教科书、练习本、笔、纸放在桌上一定的地方。预备铃响就自觉地安静下来，收心，唱唱英文歌或chant，造成英文气氛。

2、课堂尽量英语化。

尽量避免用母语进行教学，是进行外语课堂教学的原则之一。语言是思维的工具。为了使小学生的思维尽快地与英语联系起来，在英语课堂组织教学中要尽可能使用英语，做到课堂英语化，以排除对母语的依赖和母语的干扰。小学阶段是学习英语的关键期之一。尽管他们刚涉及英语，掌握的单词和句型甚少，但我们应该从第一节课起，坚持用英语组织教学。由于这时所学一般都是词义具体的单词和简单句子，教师完全可以借助于直观手段来教，帮助学生尽快对内容的理解。在课堂中教师可以充分运用眼神、手势、动作、表情等形式。以此来培养学生直接理解、直接学习和直接应用英语的习惯，初步形成直接用英语的思维能力。

3、教学做到情景化。

小学英语课堂教学必须尽最大限度地引起学生的学习兴趣，为学生提供足够的机会用英语进行活动，让学生感受到运用所学语言成功地达到某种目的后的愉快。这是小学生的年龄特点和英语学科的特殊性所决定的。要使小学生能够在 40 分钟的时间内保持良好的学习状态，教师必须根据不同的教学内容创设各种情景，做到教学情景化。

Learning is a thing that is different from person to person, some people think is very simple, but some people find it difficult. Actually both learning, also want to the learners perseverance, perseverance.

Learning the language is crucial, because it is the foundation of our language, learned it can communicate with people. We must learn the textbook knowledge, strengthen project training; Also widely read reference books, we accumulate good word and apply it to practice.

Math is a good learning attitude, also have good method to learn; The first thing we have to develop mathematical operation ability in the book, stage. To emotional stability calculation, see clear writing again, try to be a success; Maths is no shortcut to ensure the quantity and quality of to solve the problem is the only way to learn mathematics.

To learn English, the first to develop interest in English. "Interest is the best teacher", interest is the driving force for learning English, with interest, learning will get twice the result with half the effort. Many people think its difficult to memorizing words, read aloud, and my experience is mouth pen to write on the paper. Do these memorizing words is very simple.

These experiences are my experience enrichment, hope to get everyones approval. And I a lifetime together.

学习是一件因人而异的东西，有些人觉得很简单，而有些人却觉得很难。其实学习既要方法，也要学习者的恒心、毅力。

学习语文至关重要，因为它是我们语言的基础，学会了它才能与人进行交流。我们必须学好课本上的知识，加强习作训练;还要广泛阅读课外书物，积累好词好句并把它运用到实际行动中。

学习数学一是学习态度得好，还得有好学习方法;我们首先得在书中阶段培养数学运算能力。算题时要情绪稳定，看清楚再下笔，尽量做到一便成功;学数学没有捷径可走，保证做题的数量和质量是学好数学的必经之路。

学英语，首先要培养对英语的兴趣。“兴趣是最好的老师”，兴趣是学习英语的巨大动力，有了兴趣，学习就会事半功倍。很多人认为背单词难，而我的经验就是口中大声的读，用笔在纸上写。做到这些背单词就很简单了。

这些经验是我经验的浓缩，希望得到大家的认可。和我一起受益终生。

Hello

Hello!My name is Jingjing.I am a pupil.I like English very much.I go to school five days every week.Every day I go to school by car.Because my school is not near my home.I like my school.There are about 2000 students and 44 teachers in my school.And I study Grade 6.There are 62 students in my class.My English teacher is short .I love her very much. Welcome to my school.You must be very happy.

一、材料：李芳也来参加毕业考试了，同学们都感到意外，她能这样做真不容易啊！

要来：根据提供的材料自拟文题，抓住“感到意外”“这样做真不容易”展开合理想象，写一篇400字左右的记叙文，要把事情的起因、经过写具体。

二、(一) 六年的小学生活即将结束。回顾这六年的生活，你一定会有许多感慨，或高兴，或得意，或自豪，或遗憾，或后悔，或困惑如果你能再做一回小学生，你将会怎样呢？请你以《如果，我能再做一回小学生》为题，写一篇文章。

(二) “尝试”也就是试一试，这是非常有意思的实践活动。它可能成功，也可能失败。然而，不管怎样，它都会使你有所发现，有所感悟。请选取你在生活中曾经历的一次尝试，把题目《那是一次()的尝试》补充完整，写一篇记叙文。

要求：1、从以上两题中任选一题完成。

2、内容具体，感情真，语句通顺，有一定的条理。

三、根据下面所给的词语，编个故事，不少于400字。 考场 小白兔 山坡 指南针 狐狸

四、你们家的星期天都是怎么过的，选择一个你最愿意写的星期天，写出来。注意在叙事的过程中写出你和家人的感受。

要把内容写具体，语句写通顺。

五、生活中，我们一天天在长大，懂得了孝敬父母，懂得了珍惜幸福请你写一写成长过程中懂得的某一种生活道理。题目自拟，字数400以上。

六、题目：可爱的＿＿＿＿＿＿

要求：先补充完整题目，可以填人或小动物，如“表弟、表妹、小猫、小狗”等，然后按一定顺序写出人或小动物的可爱，做到语句通顺，内容具体。

七、给自己的幼儿园老师写一封信，汇报你几年来的变化。要求重点介绍一、二个方面，注意选择合适的语言。 要求：审清题目，重点写一件事情，将经过写具体。

九、我们玩得真快活

要求：1．按照事情的发展顺序，抓住重点写。

2．注意写出快活的情感。

十、题目：告诉你一件新鲜事

要求：选材要新颖，按事情发展顺序写，条理清楚，结构完整，字数400个以上。

十一、1．写作知识。

(1)把括号里不正确的部分用“／”线划去，留下唯一正确的一个。

①《我的同桌刘兵》这篇作文应重点写（我 刘兵）。②在一篇文章里，有的内容在前面讲过了，后面又交代一

下，这种写法叫做（前后照应 承上启下）它可以使文章前后联系紧密。

(2)《春游南山》这篇作文应该选择哪些材料来写。选择最适合的3个材料，把序号填在括号里。（ ）（ ）（ ）①天亮起床、梳洗、作准备。

②集队候车近一小时。

③沿途所见、所闻、所感。

④来到南山公园门口，顿觉秀色欲流。

⑤按游览顺序描写南山美景。

⑥一个同学不慎跌倒，手擦破了点皮。

⑦登到山顶，极目远眺，不忍离去。

⑧回来的路上，同学们有些疲劳，多数人在车上睡着了。”

2．看图作文。仔细观察图画，把看到的内容想象成一件事具体地写下来。中心是老师同学之间相互关心。要求叙述有条理，有详有略，语句通顺，不写错别字，正确使用标点符号。（题目自拟）全文不少于350个字。

十二、他（她）这样做不好

提示：写别人做过的一件事，要把事情经过写清楚，并写出自己的看法或想法。

要求：（1）中心明确，内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（2）字数在500字左右。

十三、我这堂课

要求：从“喜欢”、“不喜欢”、“讨厌”中选择一个填在横线上，然后按题作文。要求写成记叙文，要交代清楚是一堂什么课，以及这堂课的内容和感受。

十四、温暖

要求：（1）写一件表现人与人之间真诚关心帮助的事。

（2）内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（3）文章在400字以上。

十五、那件事，我总忘不了

要求：要有具体内容，有中心，有条理，有真情实感；注意前后照应，语句通顺，字体工整，会用学过的标点符号。 十六、再见了，老师

提示：六年的小学生活中，有许多往事历历在目，有许多心里的话想要倾吐。请你选择一件或几件事，围绕一个中心，向老师诉说你毕业前夕的心里话。

十七、 愉快的一天

要求：（1）选择一天中的一两个事例来写。

（2）中心明确，叙事具体。

（3）450字左右。

十八、我学会了

要求：（1）先审清题意，再从学习、劳动、文体活动或其他方面选择一件事来写。

（2）要围绕中心，按事情的发展顺序有条理地、具体地写

出学的过程和心情。

（3）500字左右。

十九、 想起这件事，我就

要求：（1）把题目补充完整。

（2）中心明确，内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（3）字数在450字左右。

二十、 我得到了

要求：（1）在横线上填上一个适当的词语，如“表扬”、“锻炼”、“理解”、“教育”、“关心”、“教训”等，把题目补充完整。

（2）通过一件事来写。注意围绕中心把事情的经过写具体，做到语句通顺，前后连贯。

（3）450字左右。

二十一、真了不起

提示：在我们现实生活中，有许多有能耐、有特长的人，请你围绕“了不起”选择二、三件事，把人物的本领叙述下来。注意人物动作、语言及心理的描写。

二十二、不做“小皇帝”了； 小帮手； 妈妈笑了 （任选一题）

材料：今天是星期天，爸爸、妈妈不在家，我决心抓住这个机会锻炼一下自己。我克服了不少困难，洗衣、做饭爸爸、妈妈回来了，看到这情景

Today is Mid-autumn Day. I have a big meal at home with my parents and

relatives. This is an important festival, so my mother was busy with preparing

the dinner from morning. She bought a lot of foods for the dinner. We ate the

dinner at 5:30 p.m.. The dinner was very delicious. I was so full. After dinner,

we went to theHongTingParkto enjoy the glorious full moon. There were many

people in the park. We talked to each other and strangers. Of course, the moon

cake was essential. We had a great night there.

Children’s education has been concerned by the public all the time. As they

are the future and will decide a country’s destiny, so the environment matters

so much to them. Most parents expect the school can provide the children a good

learning environment and ignore the importance of home education.

School provides the children a direct stage to receive education. In the

school, the teachers pass knowledge and educate them the right value. The

children know their task and as everybody around them focus the attention on

study, so they are affected by each other and have the strong desire to

learn.

Home education is easy to be ignored by most parents, they think it is the

teachers’ duty to educate children. Actually, most criminal teenagers have

family issues. Parents haven’t set good example for the kids. Sometimes they are

even the trouble makers. Without love, teenagers won’t grow up as the strong

people.

Both school and family environment are important for the children, and they

need to be nurtured with the good examples and learn knowledge.

Since I was very small, I was very shy in the public place, so I always

avoided giving performance in front of so many people. Though I tried hard to

get over it in school, I still felt uneasy in the public place. When I came to

the job market, I realized that I must get over my fear, or I would lose my

stage.

I still remembered the horrible experience for my first interview. Early in

the morning, I got a called that I was given a chance to the job interview. I

felt so excited. When I came to the company, I found there were other six young

people competed with me, then I started to feel nervous. The employers asked us

to sit in the round table and introduced ourselves one by one. When it was my

turn, I lowed down my head and spoke in low voice. Then the employers continued

to let us give speeches in the stage. I lose confidence and made the horrible

performance.

This interview taught me a lesson that I must get over my fear, or I will

lose chances. So I practise hard and dare to stand in the stage.

我的英语老师是个女教老师。她的眼睛大大的，耳朵有点小，鼻子呢微微向上翘，鼻梁上还架着一幅眼镜，大大的嘴巴。她的身材不是很胖，显得很匀称。

她对我们的学习要求很严格，每天布置的作业还要让家长签字，签字完了还要让家长用印章印，没签字的同学要罚站。检查作业时老师点到那个单词，谁要是会读，谁就可以坐下，要是不会读，就要站十分钟。有的时候，要是时间来不及了，老师会随便抽组检查，抽到那个组，就看那个组的作业。

有一次，我的英语作业忘记签字了，检查作业的时候，老师正好抽到了我们组，我害怕极了，心都快提到了噪子眼儿。可是老师快要抽到我的时候，却停了，老师没有看我的作业。好险哪儿!下一回可不能在出现这样的事情了。

我们的英语老师虽然很严格，不过我们还是很喜欢她的。

Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

15 April 2006

Dear Sir,

I saw your advertisement for "the perfect lighter" in Sunday Times last week and immediately sent off a ￡2 postal order and the completed form for the lighter.

Imagine my surprise when all I got in return was a box of matches! I could understand a mistake. I might even pardon a joke. But in this case, your advertisement is a deliberate lie since a friend of mine who also sent the coupon got the same result.

I think its a shame to promise an economical lighter when in fact you are not selling a lighter a1 all. Instead of saying it works quickly, you should admit that you are offering matches. And what about "only" ￡2: I usually pay 10 pennies for a box of matches, and they are often given away free.

I regard your advertisement as a serious deception and demand that you send me my money back immediately. Otherwise I will take active steps to make sure the Consumers Association hear about it.

Yours faithfully,

Peter Li

I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 3. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?

1. 眼见为实.

seeing is believing.

2. 人生短暂，学艺无穷。

Art is long, life is short.

3. 三思而后行.

Look before you leap.

4. 有其父，必有其子。

Like father,like son.

5. 再晚也不算迟。

Better late than never.

6. 条条大路通罗马。

All roads lead to Rome.

7. 并非闪光的都是金子。

All that glitters is not gold.

8. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

As you sow,so shall you reap.

9. 物以类聚。

Birds of a feather flock together.

10. 不劳无获。

No pain,no gain.

11. 入乡随俗，

When in Rome,do as the Romans do.

12. 那恰是我所喜欢的。

Its my cup of tea.

13. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

14. 患难见真情。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

15. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

A young idler; an old beggar.

16. 熟能生巧。

Practice makes perfect.

17. 一分耕耘，一分收获。

No sweet without sweat.

18. 时间就是金钱。

Time is money.

19. 欲速则不达。

Haste makes waste.

20. 说起来容易做起来难。

Easier said than done.

21. 人各有所好。

Every man has his taste.

22. 物极必反。

Extremes meet.

23. 活到老学到老。

Live and learn.

24. 事出必有因。

Nothing comes of nothing.

25. 光荣之路常坎坷。

The path to glory is always rugged.

26. 失败是成功之母。

Failure is the mother of success.

27. 江山易改，本性难移。

A leopard can not change his spots.

28. 好心有好报。

Good mind,good find.

29. 得饶人处且饶人。

Forgive others whenever you can.

30. 爱乌及乌。

Love me ,love my dog.

DOG    Wong!wong!wong!   Ah well cute,A white dog,Is a public dog.   A pair of sparkling eyes,A light gray hair,There are a small mouth,The longer of the two butterfly-like ears, Many seem to next mustache nose in a very cute. It is a favorite play, the mouth of the total did not blow a mouth full of small balloon . The small dog named Peas,Peas are born masters of the day bought, like buying seeds, like water, they are the large seeds, So called Peas.