小学英语作文常见错误（热门20篇）

I have a party on my eleven birthday, many friends give me the present. There is a doll, a pen, a music box, a notebook, a book and a flower. My faverite present is the flower. The flower is very beautiful. Its colour is red. I like to smell it. I put it in a bottle of water. My mother says it is a rose. I can plant it in the pot. I water the flower everyday. I wish it can be beautiful forever.

I Play Guitar

I like playing guitar,so my father buys me a guitar for fun.It is very funny.Then my mother asks me to have guitar class.She thinks to learn more skill

is good for me.I start to have guitar class.It is really funny at first.But later on,I feel very tired.It is not easy to get improved.I want to giveup,but I insist at last.Now I can pay several songs.I feel proud of it.

我弹吉他

我喜欢弹吉他,所以我爸爸给我买一把吉他的乐趣。这是非常有趣的。然后我妈妈问我有吉他课。她认为学习更多的技能对我有好处。我开始上吉他课。这是非常有趣的。但是后来,我感觉非常疲劳。不容易得到改善。我想给最后,但我坚持。现在我可以支付一些歌曲。我感到自豪。

In modern society, most people are under the higher pressure than ever

before and some people cannot handle the stress well and choose some extreme

ways to avoid or settle their stress.However, is stress a bad thing? As far as I

am concerned, everything has two coins, and we also need to realize it from two

aspects.

For one thing, stress is a kind of mental burden caused by nervousness or

anxiety. In modern society, stress is mostly caused by the high requirements or

heavy burden from surroundings or us, such as stress from peers or stress in

economy. If we cannot handle the stress well, we would be easy to be in a

negative mood and lost our motivation and courage to keep going or struggle with

difficulties. In this aspect, stress is a threat for our body and mental.

However, for another, stress can also be changed into a kind of motivation

if we handle it well. For example, when you find that you are surpassed by your

classmates in an examination, you feel stressful but at the same time, you also

tell yourself that you need to work harder to surpass him next time. Under this

stress, you will find yourself have more motivation and energy to study. In this

point, stress is a propeller for us to get more improvements.

Thus, we need to use a dialectical method to treat stress and handle it

properly。

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i go to the xiangjiang zoo in panyu.with my family.

the zoo is very big and very beautiful , the zoo has a lot of animals , panda,lion,tiger,snake,elephant,fox…

panda is very cute and very fat , but it is not my favourite animal.

lion is very strong , but it isn’t my favourite animal either, because it isn’t very handsome.

tiger is very strong and very handsome , it’s my favourite animal, because it’s very strong and very handsome.

i feel very happy !

二

today is the start of the school holiday. i go to the night zoo in panyu with my mother and father.we see the white tigers, the bears, lions, elephants, pandas, polar bears and the snakes. the pandas are very cute. the snakes are very dire! and the bear are very cute too. www

today is my holiday. on my holiday i’m very happy!

When I was picking up my stuff after school， I saw a dog staring at me at the school gate .I was kind of scary. I thought the dog would bite me when I was going out. But it was not. The dog started to follow me. I was very afraid. I started to run away， but the dog did it， either. Suddenly， the dog ran pass away me. I realized the man in front of me was the owner of the dog. I was relieved.

From then on， as long as a dog stares at me， I will look back to have a look whether there is another person near or not.

Since I come to college, I feel so excited about the new life. Before I go

to college, I have pictured the wonderful life here, but now I find I have many

problems and the campus life is not as wonderful as I think. I need to adjust my

lifestyle.

In high school, in order to inspire students to study hard, teachers always

picture the amazing life in college, so most students treat college as the

paradise. But when they start the new life, they find the difference between

dream and reality. For me, I think I could play most of the time, joining

parties and making a lot of friends. However, study occupies most of my time. I

have so many lessons to learn. Sometimes I even have class at night. This makes

me feel unexpected.

But the time to study is not the only annoyance for me. I feel so

frustrated when I lag behind other classmates. In the college, I meet classmates

from different cities, and some of them have the talents in paining and dance,

some studied very well. So I felt small and faced pressure. Now I learn that I

should learn from them and dont treat them as competitors. Enjoying study comes

first.

New York is the first big city in America. It is the world’s commercial

center and there are many sites that attract people from all over the world to

take a visit. One of the famous sites is the Statue of Liberty. Everybody knows

this great site and it has become the symbol of New York.

The Statue of Liberty stands on an island of the New York City harbor. It

is the tallest building ever built. When people get there, they will see a woman

holding a torch of fire. In her feet, people can see the chains that are broken,

which means she gets away from the restrictions and chases for freedom. There is

a book on her right hand, which is the Declaration of Independence.

The complete name of this statue is Liberty Enlightening the World. It is

the present from French people to American people. The meaning of friendship and

freedom are shared by both countries. Today, the meaning of the Statue of

Liberty is shared by the world. People can feel the peace when they see this

image.

My dad is not tall, dark eyes, giving the first feeling is amiable. What he loves is: "Doing people keep trustworthy."

Dad is not only a very wide communication, but also a warm-hearted person. So my father in the community to get to know a lot of close friends, always someone asked him to attend some parties.

Once, I let my father at the weekend to accompany me to Fuyang ecological park to play one day, my father readily agreed. By the end of the week, I was preparing to go to the ecological park with my father, suddenly, the phone rang. From the fathers conversation, I vaguely heard is to invite my father to a friend party. I was so discouraged. Who knows my father said to the man resolutely said: "Im sorry, I have promised his son to the ecological park to play, the child can not speak without a letter, so can not participate, next time it!" Then, put the phone hung up The Happy to accompany me to the ecological park.

On the way to the ecological park, my father took my hand and said, "Children, know why I refuse to attend the party?" I thought for a moment, then hurriedly said: "You are a trustworthy person, promised me "Do not go back!" "That s right." Dad took my shoulder and said, "Since Dad has promised you, it must be done and can not speak." It s a man s truth!

At this time into the ecological park of the door, I suddenly felt that the figure is even more tall father.

Im so proud of having such a dad!

文章摘要：他的儿子也有点奇怪：小树长高了，可是自己长得却不如小树长得高了，这是为什么呢;有红，白，绿，紫，五光十色。中考英语作文十大常见错误分析还有那爬动的八只脚和那来回摇晃的大钳子。在这场战争中，许多医务人员都不幸被感染了，叶欣、邓练贤等医务人员更是为此而付出了生命，在这场战争中体现了作为一个医务人员应有的救死扶伤的精神；

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1.审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题：

误Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher.

正Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I‘mtired.

误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.

正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.

误Theapplescheap.I’lltakesome.

正Theapplesarecheap.I‘lltakesome.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误Becauseheavyrainwecan’tholdthesportsmeeting.

正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan‘tholdthesportsmeeting.

[英语作文常见错误分析

Happy Christmas Eve is coming, my heart is very excited, because Santa Claus comes

Its Christmas day on December 25th, and we still go to school as usual. No way, can only go to school, ah foreign friends must have a holiday, because this is their festival, why, why, China does not have a holiday!

In the evening I see Santa Claus, he and I said with a smile, Ill give you gift, I accept gifts, open on see, is a piece of paper, top write: I wish you good good study, day day up! Dont dwell on vacations!

I dont want to have a holiday when I hear that!! Thank you Santa!

快乐的圣诞夜就要来了，我的心情十分激动，因为圣诞老人来了

早上起来看的日历今天是12月25日圣诞节，我们还是像往常一样上学，我想，圣诞节还要上学，累死人啊!没办法，只能上学了，哎外国的朋友一定放假，因为这是他们的节日，为什么，为什么，中国不放假!

我在这天晚上看到了圣诞老人，他笑着和我说，我来给你送礼物了，我收下礼物，打开一看，是一张纸，上边写着：我愿你好好学习，天天向上!不要老是想着放假!

我听到这句话，我在也不想着放假了!!谢谢你圣诞老人!

I have a good friend. Her name isSchoolBag. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. Its a picture of a lovely girl. She wears a red coat. There are some books, some copybooks and a pencil case in her stomach. From Monday to Frid

ay, I go to school with her. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

The summer vacation, we came to the star mountain tourism scenic area, visit the lotus with a history of more than two thousand years. It with "artificial didnt mean to take the tico" known for its magnificent spectacle.

: I want to go the lianhua is visit "view of the sea goddess of mercy", isnt it? View the sea goddess of mercy guanyin statue as high as 40. 88 m, is the foil (bo2) gold statue of the world. High overhead, her good-natured, overlooking (kan3) the long steps under her feet, the love is aspersed to the earth. And I was looking up at the sight of the long stairs, thinking: this... If we ascend the stairs, that should be able to see that a piece of vacant land of the gods? We walked around the sea goddess of mercy, it whole body is golden, standing on a lotus flower stage, high about three stories tall, give a person the feeling of soaring coast.

Then we came to next to the clock bell in line. Its my turn to bell, I hold the wood hard against the clock, big bronze "dong -" a deafening noise. Then I thought: if a man got into the clock in it, let me knock the clock, that this much fun? He doesnt have to sit on swing can swing a!

In halfway up the hill, I saw countless lush trees and flowers. To look down the hill, the sea, river, lake, etc. In this state, the people were amazed, and very comfortable, and looked around to long standing, and want to sit down and whisper a little poem magnificent.

Lotus in the cool breeze, fresh air, and the beautiful scenery, I regretted leaving!

暑假，我们来到了莲花山旅游风景区，参观这个具有两千多年历史的莲花山。它以“人工无意夺天工”的奇景奇观闻名于世。

我想：去莲花山就不能不看望“观海观音”了吧?观海观音观音铜像高达40。88M，是目前箔(bo2)金铜像的世界之最。她慈眉善目，高高在上，俯瞰(kan3)她脚底下的那长长的台阶，把慈爱洒向人间。而我则是仰望着眼前的那长长的台阶，心里想着：这…如果我们拾级而上，那应该可以见到那一片空灵的神明之地了吧?我们绕着观海观音走，它全身都是金色，站在高高的莲花台上，大约有3层楼高，给人高耸如云的感觉。

接着我们来到大钟的旁边排队敲钟。轮到我敲钟的时候，我抱着木头用力向大钟撞去，大铜钟“咚——”地发出震耳欲聋的响声。这时我想：如果一个人钻进大钟里去的话，让我敲一下钟的话，那该多好玩呀?他不用坐在秋千上也能荡秋千一了!

到了半山腰，我看到了数不清的繁茂的大树和花草。再向山下眺望，海、江水、湖等映入眼帘。在这种境界，既使人惊叹，又叫人舒服，既想久立四望，又想坐下低吟一首奇丽的小诗。

莲花山那凉爽的微风，清新的空气，还有那美丽的景色，使我留连忘返!

I like dogs, because they are man’s good friends. They can do many helpful thingsto us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and soon. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people’s lives.So they‘re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in greatharmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

“叮叮叮，叮叮叮”，一阵清脆的铃声轻轻地唱了起来。我伸了一下腰直起了身子，马上去换衣服，找来找去，终于找到了一件喜欢的衣服，一切准备就绪后，我哼着曲子，推着我的单车下楼“溜达”了!蓦然发现天空万里无云，湛蓝!小花儿被风妹妹轻轻一吹，便随风舞动，跳起了一支支乐曲，树叶宝宝轻轻一跳，便跳到了地上，我开心极了!

到了楼下，我沿着小区的路不紧不慢地踩着单车，边踩边哼着歌儿，周围的鸟儿也叽叽喳喳地叫着，仿佛在给我伴奏呢!“砰——”，突然，一个尖锐的声音穿过我的耳膜!只见一个穿着粉色布罩衫、戴着红色帽子的女孩出现在我面前，她说道：“你把我的单车轮撞坏了，你赔我!”女孩指着她的粉红色单车说道。我刹了刹车，从单车上跳了下来，我跺着脚愤怒地走上前去，这时候的天空，马上飘出来一团云，遮挡了大海一样湛蓝的天空和淡红色的太阳，就像一堆火。我扶过女孩的车，踏了踏轮子，自行车完全可以走，我说道：“完全没有问题呀!”女孩眨着她的小眼睛，然后说道：“我的单车颜料掉了，这个座椅也有点不稳，你赔!”我心想：真的是鸡蛋里挑骨头—没事找事!于是，我站在一旁，正心急如焚地想着该怎么办时，这时，救星来啦!我的妈妈走了过来，妈妈了解了事情的经过，对我说：“孩子，你是个男子汉，如果单车是你撞坏的，一定要勇于承担这个责任哦!”然后，妈妈对我讲了一些道理，又对小女孩说了些什么，我走过去，真诚地对女孩说了一声：“对不起，我不该这么凶，我和我妈妈会一起把你的单车修好的，请你原谅我，接受我的道歉!”女孩听了，笑着摆了摆手：“没关系的!”于是，我们握手言和了!

最后，我和妈妈一起把女孩的单车给修好了!我又哼着小调，高兴地骑着单车溜达在小道上。

妈妈告诉我：做错了事情不可怕，勇于承认错误，并且认真地改正错误，下次不要犯同样的错误才是最重要的!我一定会把妈妈的这句话牢牢记在心里的!

When I was in school, my teacher asked me what I want to be in the future,

I had no idea at the time, because I didn’t think about the question before, now

I have my dream, I have figured out what I want to be in the future, I want to

be a teacher. This is my future ideal career, being a teacher not only fulfills

myself, I also can implant my knowledge to my students. When I look at my

teachers, I adore them so much, they learn so much knowledge, they can help us

learn better, whenever we have questions, they can answer us immediately. I want

to be one of them when I grow up, so I must study hard now.

题目：许多人认为飞机是20世纪最伟大的发明，你是怎么认为的？

首段：引题飞机的发展史；

第二段：飞机的好处——快速；

第三段：飞机的好处——舒适；

第三段：飞机的好处——安全；

最后：否认是20世纪最伟大的发明。

at the beginning of the 20th century, the art of motorzied flying was just starting to take shape, and a century later, at the beginning of the 21st century, the motorized flight has become an irreplaceable means of transportation for modern people.it has immense bearing on our lives.

the airplanes widely used reach the average speed of 500 to 1000 kilometers per hour, indisputablely the fastest means of transportation. they are 20 times faster than ships, 7 times than cars, and 5 times than trains. in a world like ours where efficiency is second to none ,taking airplanes sounds fantastic.www

taking airplanes is more comfortable. passengers are free from the fatigue they may suffer when traveling by bus or train, and the cosy, noi -free cabin and the first-class servere offered both in terms of food and entertainment, convinces people that it is well worthy of paying more for it.

the mass media which are only too happy to cover the reports on air crashes occasionally occurring around our world may mislead the readers that taking flight is dangerous. actually the flight trip is considerable safer than road trip.

however, it would be termerity to claim that the motorized flight is an invention unmached by others. after all, it works in traveling alone. computer technology has introduced inventons like internet , which tend to eliminate the traveling. besides, nuclear energy, penicillin, mobile phone, credit card, hybrid rice breeding, tv set ,to name but are few, are all deniable inventions extremly important for human being.

[小学四年级优秀精选英语作文

12 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for a British Council scholarship to study in Britain. I did my five years basic training in medicine at Shanghai University. After this I successfully completed a one-year postgraduate course in Ophthalmology at the Peoples General Hospital, where I am at present serving a two-year probation in the Eye Clinic.

As a result of the publication in 2003 of my article in New Scientist entitled "Soft and Rigid Contact Lenses ", which was based on a survey of 37 patients over 6 months, I made contact with Dr. Li Ming of the Capital Hospital and Dr. Ma Li of the University College Hospital. I have received their help and advice with my current research project, which is a two-year survey of the acceptance of various types of contact lenses in 200 patients.

Despite their help, I feel that I cannot make real progress in this field unless I can actually have day-to-day contact with these specialists. I would therefore like to continue my research at either the Capital Hospital or the UCH as soon as my probationary period here is completed, and I would like to study in Britain for two years.

I enclose a detailed curriculum vitae and an offprint of my article, together with two letters of recommendation from Dr. Li Ming and Dr. Ma Li.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

Taking exercise is good for our health. All work and no play makes Jack a

dull boy. By taking exercise, we can relax our body and mind. At the same time,

we can harden our muscle and have a good figure. If we dont take exercise for a

long time, we may easily fall sick.

I enjoy several outdoor sports. Swimming in the sea is my favorite. Because

there are too many people in a swimming pool and the water is always dirty, I

prefer to swim in the sea.

Playing badminton is also fun. I can always find a place in the park for

playing badminton. Besides, I enjoy jogging in the morning. Sometimes, I jog

with my parents in the park.

Dear Liu Qi,

I, the undersigned, am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in four years. After watching the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.

First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we must finish our preparation work well and in time.

Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can speak English, Russian, and Japanese. Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer.

I am looking forward to your reply

Sincerely Yours

Recently, the newspapers, on TV are advocated to join the CD action, the classmates, do you know what call CD action? Right! Is to eat them all the food on the plate.

The Chinese custom is when the guest to order food, said the hospitality of yourself. Comes the Spring Festival, people also hard to avoid with their relatives and friends go out to eat a big meal, to express their own mind, a point of a lot of food, in the end, eat not only, also left a lot of food, do not pack again, watched these delicious is poured into the trash can. Alas...

Hunger has become the number one killer of mankind, now many people in Africa are still being plagued by hunger, be starved to death at last. Now the die from hunger in the world, ten million people each year. If we recycle 5% of the food every day, there will be four million people were rescued. Television also often put some of the poor children in the mountain, they didnt eat didnt drink, if we can save food, may be able to change their miserable fate.

These days, when I went to restaurant downstairs, I found there are some guests on the table with good after eating the leftovers and food on the plate almost all have no, eat is very clean, it must be they also read the newspapers and on TV the act after the news. I think Ill join the "CD" action, so at the time of order, I think is almost enough to eat and dont let mother point, when you eat, we also put the dishes and a bowl of rice to eat clean, looking at the bare plate, Im so happy!

Here, I also give you two initiatives for "CD" action: 1, to cherish food, right amount order, avoid the leftover food, reduce the extravagant and wasteful. 2, not comparing, proud of savings, a waste of shame. Do not scraps, waste not, eat whatever you have, prostrate! Join the CD, together to "waste" said no!

The classmates, let us also join "CD" action! Let us also from waste, to save!

最近，报纸、电视上都在提倡要加入光盘行动，同学们，你们知道什么叫光盘行动吗?对了!就是把盘子里的饭菜全吃光。

中国人的习俗就是在客人来的时候多点些菜，表示一下自己的热情好客。到了春节，大家也难免带着亲朋好友出去吃一顿大餐，为了想表达自己的一个心意，就点了许多菜，到最后呢，吃也吃不光，还剩下了许多饭菜，又不打包，只能眼睁睁地看着这些美味被倒进垃圾桶里。唉....

饥饿现在已成为人类的第一号杀手，许多非洲地区的人们还在被饥饿困扰着，最后被活活饿死了。现在全世界由于饥饿而死的，每年就有一千万个人。如果我们每天回收5%的粮食，就会有四百万饥民获救。电视上也经常会放一些山区的贫苦孩子，他们没吃没喝，如果我们能节约粮食，或许就能改变他们悲惨的命运。

这几天，我去楼下饭馆吃饭时，我发现桌子上放着一些客人用好餐后盘子里的剩菜和剩饭几乎都没有，吃的都很干净，这一定是他们也看了报纸和电视上的新闻后做出的行动。我想我也要加入“光盘"行动，因此在点菜的时候，我觉得差不多够吃了也就不让妈妈点了，吃饭的时候，我们也把菜和碗里的饭吃的干干净净，看着吃的光光的盘子,我开心极了!

在此,我也为"光盘"行动给大家二个倡议:1、珍惜粮食，适量订餐，避免剩餐，减少奢侈浪费。2、不攀比，以节约为荣，浪费为耻。做到不剩饭，不浪费，吃多少要多少，吃不了兜着走!加入光盘族，一起对“浪费"说不!

同学们，让我们也一起加入“光盘"行动!让我们也远离浪费，走向节约吧!

There have been many changes in my life. With the development of the economy my life is better off.

For clothing I have spare money to buy all sorts of pretty clothes. But in the past there were fewer clothes in my wardrobe. For food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal rice noodles or a steamed bun. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western food. For housing I moved from a cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat. For getting around I rode an old bike on my way to work a year ago. At present I drive my private car to travel.

I believe my life will become better in the near future.

随着经济的发展我们的生活已经有非常大的变化。我的生活可能会更好点。

对于服装我有比较富余的钱去买各种漂亮的衣服。但在过去 在衣橱里只有很少的一些衣服。 从日常吃食来看通常我们中国家庭只吃一些如：米饭、面条还有馒头之类的传统食品。现在我能买得起任何美味的食物现在，我可以做好多美味的食物，包括西餐。 从住房来看我从一个狭小、灰暗的小屋子，搬到了宽敞而明亮的楼房。一年前，我骑着一辆旧自行车上班。而如今我却开着我的私人汽车去旅行。

我相信 在不久的将来，我的未来会变得更好。