小学英语作文常见错误【汇编20篇】

I like to listen to music so much, because music can smooth my mood. My favorite singer is Leehom Wang. He is not only very handsome, but also very smart. He graduated in the top school and he is a music genuis. His great talent in music attracts me a lot. I will always stand by his side, he is an excellent music artist.

我喜欢听音乐,因为音乐可以平复我的心情。我最喜爱的歌手是王力宏。他不仅很帅,而且很聪明。他毕业于一流的学校,是一个音乐天才。他在音乐方面的天赋很吸引着我。我会永远支持他,他是一位很优秀的音乐艺术家。

Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie,

afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, C______,

midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of

the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two

thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus,

dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet

bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat

Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general

chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the

king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official,

listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan

heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very

indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone,

in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang

qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in

their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that

the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of

zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such

as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang,

outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk

string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series,

variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节，又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同，但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗，每到这一天，家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲，赛龙舟，吃粽子，饮雄黄酒，游百病，佩香囊。

今天是端午节，大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人，很有学问。他在楚王身边做官，以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话，把屈原削职流放。在流放中，屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领，百姓遭难，悲愤极了。五月初五这一天，他来到汨罗江边，怀抱一块石头，以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息，都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原，还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼，希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟，挂香囊，香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药，外包以丝布，清香四溢，再以五色丝线弦扣成索，作各种不同形状，结成一串，形形色色，玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

导语：老师就像辛勤的园丁，我们应该感谢我们的老师，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I am lucky to have a teacher like you. And no matter what kind of person I will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you, I learned what kind of person I want to be and what I should get from life. This means everything to me.

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我很幸运有像你这样的老师。无论我变成什么样的人，你都会对我有你的影响。你教我如何学习，如何生活，甚至如何成为一个男人。从你身上，我学会了我想成为什么样的人，我应该从生活中得到什么。这对我来说意味着一切。

我的周末（my weekend）

OK,let me tell you something about my weekend.

大家好，让我来给大家介绍下我是如何度过周末的吧。

I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning.

周末我得做好多事，所以我的周末就显得尤为忙碌，所以我一般都在周六上午就把作业都做完。

In the afternoon， I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl， I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning， I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon， we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites.

到了下午，我跟我妈妈一起做家务，因为我是个好孩子，我也想给家里做点自己该做的事；周日早上，我跟父母去见外公外婆。下午，我们一起去公园，因为那有一场风筝展览会，并且我外公外婆也非常喜欢做风筝。

I think， we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too.

我想，我们可以在那看到很多漂亮的风筝，同时也可以买一些好看的风筝。

Then， we are going to fly the new kites， that’s fun. In the evening， we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner， we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy.

最后，我们一起去放风筝，相当给力！晚上，我们去吃大餐。由于外公外婆喜欢吃鱼，所以我们晚餐吃鱼。我外婆做的鱼非常香。晚饭后，我们一起看电视。我想我们会非常愉快。

This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend？ Can you tell me？

这就是我的快乐周末，我非常喜欢周末，你的周末是如何度过呢？可以告诉我吗？

[我的周末小学英语日记

almost everyone has seen bamboo. bamboo grows up straight and thin, with branches at the top. it has long leaves.it looks like a tree, but it is really a kind of grass.

there are more than five hundred kinds of bamboo. some grow over ten meters tall, and some are only a few inehes tall. bamboo grows best in places where it is warm and it rains often.

the long stem of bamboo is hollow, which makes them light and strong.people use it to build houses and bridges over rivers. it can be used to make tables,chairs, baskets and many other things. bamboo is also made into paper. the tender young shoots of bamboo are tasty. people like to eat them.

do you like bamboo?

Computer has considered to be one of the most important inventions in 20

century. It has brought many changes in this world. With the rapid development

of science and technology, more and more people have their own personal

computer. It’s not only can do the calculations at a very high speed, but also

can access to the Internet to get information from the outside world.

Computers play an very vital role in our daily life. They can do a lot of

things. Access to the Internet, you can find the answers to your questions, you

can do on line shopping without going outside. Computer has provided us lots of

convenience. There is no doubt that people can have a better life with

computer.

Some people worry about that someday computers may replace human beings.

Then most people will have no jobs. However, in my opinion, computers are not

replacing us. Even though computers can take over some difficult tasks that we

can not do. They are nothing but machines. They work for us. They will never

take the place of man.

last term we had a sports meeting . It has last for a day. I think it’s funny, just like a game.

First is running. And the other part is jumping. The meeting is very exciting. I watched the running match, but I didn’t watch the jumping match. What a pity!

Ha-ha, I ran with my classmate then. Because I want to cheer them on. But always they ran faster than me long. So I had to try my best to catch them up. It’s a hard work, I think.

The match is very fierce. The players are powerful. Who is the best? We guess. All of us hope the winner is our class. Finally, the best will get congratulations. And others also will get comfort and support.

Oh, I am forget something. Before the match beginning, it is warmth and fragrance doubled and redoubled, all of the pupil and teacher will give ther best wishes to the players in their class and also the other classes. They are kind people. And the match is the best way to make people happier, stronger, and also make them become more friendly.

[小学生优秀英语作文运动会

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

Persons lips can emit the most sweet words, is "mother", the most beautiful and good voice, is the "mother".

Persons life, from the strange pain to ineffable jing. This process, a support me through any difficulties, she is my mother.

She is not beautiful, but smile can make my heart head lecture dissipation; She is not learned, even before he graduated from university. But her selfless love to me, let I touched, but also let me guilty.

A school in the morning, the mother, as usual, got up early to cook, Ive told her many times I can go outside to eat, but he is worried about the outside food is not health, determined to do breakfast for me. That got up late, I hastily wash out, went towards the door, my mother just came out from the room, did not move chopsticks on the table, then told me to fill in something into the belly, otherwise will be hungry, but I didnt listen to mothers words, but feel she vexed, slammed the door hurriedly ran downstairs. In the mind always feel uncomfortable, mother is also good for me, running head out just now. "And so on of xx, an umbrella, it is a bit dark, afraid that it will rain, take it." Looking at the panting mother, in the heart of guilt to upgrade, tears seemed to jump out, "see, Im going." Along the way, Im thinking, mother have been busy for the child, the rest of my life in the end is supported by two white himself. Mother is great.

Back to school and heard other classmates in the loving mother Yin ", very feeling in the heart, dont say anything.

Now I have grown up, know how to filial piety mother, recall the past, there are still many places Im sorry. But, because of the past, only now understand. Have a love my mother, just have now sheets of testimonials on the wall.

Ill always remember that I now all the glory and pride are from mother.

人的嘴唇能发出的最甜美的字眼，就是“母亲”，最美好的呼喊，就是“妈妈”。

人的一生，是从莫名的痛苦到不可言喻的静。这个过程中，有一位扶持着我走过任何困难的人，她就是我的母亲。

她，不算美丽，但笑起来会令我心头上的愁云消散;她也不算有学问，大学也还没毕业。可她那对我无私的爱，让我感动，但也让我愧疚。

一次上学的早晨，母亲像往常一样，起早做饭，我曾多次告诉她我可以到外面吃，但他担心外面的食物不卫生，执意要为我做早饭。那次起得晚，我匆匆洗漱完，就奔向门外去，母亲正好从房里出来，看见桌上没有动过的碗筷，便叫我填点东西到肚子里，否则会饿的，但我并未理会母亲的话，反而觉得她烦，一摔门急忙跑下楼去。心里总觉得不舒服，母亲也是为我好啊，边跑眼前浮现出刚才的画面。“等等××，雨伞啊，天有点黑，怕是会下雨，带上吧。”望着气喘吁吁的母亲，心中的愧疚感升级，眼泪似乎要蹦出来，“知道了，我走了。”一路上，我在想，母亲一辈子都在为孩子忙着，到头来自己却两鬓发白。母亲是多么伟大啊。

到了学校，听见低年级的同学在背《慈母吟》，心中万分感慨，什么也说不出来。

如今我已经长大了，知道怎样孝顺母亲，回想起过去，还是有很多地方对不起她。但，是因为有过去，才有现在的懂事。有爱我的母亲，才有现在墙上一张张的奖状。

我永远都要记住我现在的一切光荣和骄傲，都来自母亲。

又是一个丰富多彩的暑假，我怀着喜悦的心情回我的老家——蓝田。这次不光能和爷爷奶奶见面，还可以跟我那活泼可爱又有趣的表妹——新新玩耍呢!

到了蓝田，我们直接去县城的新新家。见到新新，我一蹦三尺高，简单和姑姑聊了几句后，便拉着新新下去玩：滑完滑板打篮球，打完篮球编笑话，编完笑话踢毽子，踢完毽子就跑步。跑着跑着，突然，我们看见一辆大卡车，上面小山似的堆起一个个绿油油的大西瓜。我们疾步迎了上去。看见一个“小黑胡子”与一位男青年正在吆喝着：“新鲜的西瓜，两毛五一斤的西瓜嘞!”我和新新好奇地走了过去，问那位看起来脾气比较好的青年：“叔叔，给我拿五元的西瓜，行吗?(因为我只带了五元钱)”他点了点头，然后转过身对“小黑胡子”嘀咕了些什么。“小黑胡子”笑眯眯地对我说：“好的。”说着便拿出一个翠色欲流的大西瓜，用刀切成一半给我，我也不假思索地从口袋里掏出五元钱递给他，便与新新一起抬着西瓜上楼了。

回到新新家，正好赶上吃饭，我们兄妹俩把西瓜放在大人们面前，夸耀着：“看我们五块钱买的两毛五一斤的大大的西瓜。”他们先是一楞，然后姑父上来掂了掂，用惊异的眼光看着我：“两毛五一斤买的?”我和新新不约而同地点了点头。姑父又说：“如果两毛五一斤，这西瓜最多值三块钱。”听后，我仔细想了想，是啊，如果两毛五一斤的话，至少能买20斤才对呀，可这西瓜最多十一二斤。我气极败坏：“我现在就去叫几个保安一块找那个黑心的‘小黑胡子’算账去。”姑姑笑得喷饭，妈妈则安慰我：“算了吧，你最好把这搞笑的错误记住，以后要勤于动脑，数学知识无处不在，比如今天就涉及到估计重量、乘法计算的问题，虽然上了小当，得到的教训却是深刻的。你们为大家买西瓜消暑的行为更是值得表扬。”听了妈妈这番发人深省的话，我也不由地陷入了沉思。

唉，都是懒惰惹的祸，我如果当时估一估，算一算，也不会出现这样的错误呀。吃一垫，长一智，看来一定要勤动脑才对啊!然而，这件事激起了我学好数学的欲望，使我不断进步。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Over the years, the story of Qu’s demise transformed into the traditions of racing dragon boats and eating zongzi – a kind of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. The races have certainly captured the imagination of people from all over the world. Every spring there are nearly 60 dragon boat races held outside of China in cities from Vancouver to Sydney, from Gdańsk, Poland to Cape Town, South Africa. Canada alone has nearly 50 dragon boat teams and Germany has nearly 30.

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多年来，屈原逝世的故事演变成了赛龙舟和吃粽子的传统--一种用竹叶包起来的米饭。种族当然吸引了来自世界各地的人们的想象力。每年春天有将近60场龙舟赛在中国举行的城市从温哥华到悉尼，从波兰到开普敦ńGDA的SK，南非。仅加拿大就有近50支龙舟队，而德国队有近30支。

My father is long with a black hair, a pair of bright and piercing eyes, big nose, looks very handsome, there is a problem - love to drink.

A father came back from work to see the table with two bottles of Wuliangye, my father suddenly enraptured, "ah! Great! Great!" Said, my father flew past, pick up the bottle to drink, "Gudong Gudong ... ..." Breath to drink a bottle, and then picked up another bottle, so that two bottles of Wuliangye is also no left. Dad after drinking, said to me: "go! And I went to thousands of passengers Long supermarket, I bought you a car to go!

Come back, my father riding a crooked, my heart is very afraid, urging my father to ride, my father said: "Nothing! Nothing!" Said, the car just like the earth embrace. "Oh ... ..." my ass broke the flowers, my father quickly worried to ask me: "how ah, did not fall?" Looked at my father look anxious, I had to say: "nothing!" Then I squeaked and said: "Dad, you - after - do not drink -" Dad lowered his head and said: "Well!" Look at my fathers appearance, I laughed.

This is my dad, i love my daddy.

i went to the supermarket the other day with 10 yuan. i was a bit hungry, so i decided to buy a small pack of cookies which cost me 4 yuan. after i ate them, i was still hungry, so i decided to buy a small bag of potato chips which cost me another 3 yuan. after i ate them both, i was no longer hungry.

however, i was very thirsty and wanted to buy a large bottle of milk to drink, but i didn’t have enough money left because even a small bo of milk would cost me 2 yuan and i needed 2 yuan to pay the bus fare. so i gave it up at last.

People are enjoying the comfortable life of the modern civilization,

meanwhile, they are also experiencing more and more competitions and suffering

much more stress than before.With the tremendous rhythm of living imposed by

todays world, it isnt unusual for people to feel tired and to try to evade from

the daily problems and stress. I think that there is no magic way that is

appliable to every one of us, and proves itself the most efficient method of

escaping stress. Each man has his specific activities that help him regain the

joy of life. For me the best activities to reduce stress and to forget about

problems are sleeping,playing football, going on a short vacation to the

countryside, attending live performances and spending time with my friends and

with my family.

First and foremost, sufficient sleep, needless to say, is indispensable for

each person, especially those encountering difficulties and suffering enormous

stress. There is no denying that sleep could bring the body sufficient rest,

modulate the function of each organ and release the body from stressful status.

Whats more, sufficient sleep would enable the brain operate more swiftly and

efficiently, thus making us more energetic to handle difficulties. Therefore,

not only could sleep loose the fatigue of the physical body, but also release

the mental stress.

What is more, I think that family is the most important thing in a mans

life. They are always there when you need them. Family provides support when you

need it most, helps you go through the difficult moments of your life.The most

important of all, their love for you gives you confidence in yourself, and makes

your life easier and a lot more beautiful. Friends also have an important role,

because you can evade from concerns by going out with them, talking about things

that are not related to your work, and sharing with them your problems and your

acheivements.

My father doesnt talk much. Though he is not funny, he loves me very much.

Last week, he travelled for business and when he came home, he took out a box

and brought me a nice present. I was so happy. He always remembered to bring me

some surprises. It was a special notebook and I could use it to write

diaries.

march 12th is tree planting day. this year our school bought enough trees before that day . on that day , we didn‘t had classes . the teachers and our classmates planted trees around our school.

we began to planted trees as soon as we got to school . some students dug the holes . some students put the trees into the holes.

some students put the earth back to the holes. then we pushed the earth hard with our feet . at last we watered the trees as much as possible.

from then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very well . it made our shcool more beautiful .and how happy we are !

[关于植树节的小学生英语作文

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程当中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程当中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

1。句子成分残缺不全

we always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)

we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)

we should read books may be useful to us。 (误)

we should read books which may be useful to us。 (正)

2。句子成分多余

this test is end， but there is another test is waiting for you。 (误)

one test ends， but another is waiting for you。 (正)

the driver of the red car was died on the spot。 (误)

the driver of the red car died on the spot。 (正)

3。主谓不一致

someone/somebody think that reading should be selective。 (误)

some think that reading should be selective。 (正)

my sister go to the cinema at least once a week。 (误)

my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week。 (正)

4。动词时态、语态的误用

i was walking along the road， and there are not so many cars on the street。 (误)

i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street。 (正)

we have little time to read some books which we interest。 (误)

we have little time to read some books in which we are interested。 (正)

i am a student who has studying in the college for two years。 (误)

i have been studying in the college for two years(正)

5。词类混淆

it is my point that reading must be selectively。 (误)

in my opinion， reading must be selective。 (正)

honest is so important for everyperson。 (误)

honesty is so important for everyone。 (正)

the old man was hit by a car when he across the street。 (误)

the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street。 (正)

[英语作文中常见的典型语法错误分析

Cannot see the wood for the trees.一叶障目，不见泰山。

Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。

Caution is the parent of safety.小心驶得万年船。

Children are what the mothers are.耳濡目染，身教言传。

Choose an author as you choose a friend.择书如择友。

Come what may, heaven won‘t fall.做你的吧，天塌不下来。

Complacency is the enemy of study.学习的敌人是自己的满足。

Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.

自信是走向成功的第一步。Content is better than riches.知足者常乐

Constant dripping wears away a stone.水滴石穿，绳锯木断。

Count one‘s chickens before they are hatched.蛋未孵先数雏。

Courtesy on one side only lasts not long.来而不往非礼也。

Creep before you walk.循序渐进。 Cry for the moon.海底捞月。

Custom is a second nature.习惯是后天养成的。

Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯，事事皆不难。

Diamond cuts diamond.强中自有强中手。Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。

Do as you would be done by.己所不欲，勿施于人。

Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。

Do it now.机不可失，时不再来Do nothing by halves.凡事不可半途废。

Don‘t claim to know what you don‘t know.不要不懂装懂。

Don‘t have too many irons in the fire.不要揽事过多。

Don‘t make a mountain out of a molehill.不要小题大做。

Don‘t put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。

Don‘t put the cart before the horse.不要本末倒置。

Don‘t trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.不要自找麻烦。

Don‘t try to teach your grandmother to suck eggs.不要班门弄斧。

Do well and have well.善有善报。

Bad news has wings.好事不出门，坏事传千里。

Barking dogs seldom bite.吠犬不咬人。

Beauty lies in the love‘s eyes.情人眼里出西施。

Be swift to hear, slow to speak.听宜敏捷，言宜缓行。

Better late than never.不怕慢，单怕站。

Better to ask the way than go astray.问路总比迷路好。

Between friends all is common.朋友之间不分彼此。

Birds of a feather flock together.物以类聚，人以群分。

Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。Blood will have blood.血债血偿。

Books and friends should be few but good.读书如交友，应求少而精。

Business is business.公事公办。Cheats never prosper.骗人发不了财。

Business is the salt of life.事业是人生的第一需要。

By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.

读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。

China has many traditional festivals among the year. But I like Mid-Autumn Festival the most. It means harvest, because it is celebrated in the harvest season. And it is the time for famers to express their thanks for harvest. In addtion, it’s the day for reunion. Some people call it Tuanyuanjie. The people work or study far away from home will come back to get-together with their families. They will eat a big meal and mooncake at that time. I hate parting but love reunion. So Mid-Autumn Day is my favorite festival.

一年之中中国有很多传统节日。我最喜欢的是中秋节。那意味着收获，因为它是在收获的季节里面庆祝的。那也是让农民们感激收获的时候。 此外，它也是团圆的日子。有人把它称为团圆节。在远方工作或学习的人都会回来与家人团聚。他们会在那个时候一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。我讨厌离别，喜欢团圆。所以我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。

Everyone has his own dream job, and everybodys dream is different, some want to be a scientist, some want to be a designer, and I? I want to be a actor.

When looking at each TV series, I the whole people into that scene, the joys and sorrows of the dramatis personae, as if I can be felt, act as if I was born and has not cut off the fate. Gradually, I produced in acting in emotion, when nobody in the home, I will bring my watch TV, play the characters in the play.

In later, I took out a notebook, writers, the title and the names of the characters, according to their assigned to play. Until now, I have made up a dozen plot, I had remembered every plot, because that is my idea, I want to store them in your mind forever.

I clearly remember, my first time to make up the story named "heart star", the heroine named "Han Nuoling", two male leading role is called "jun-lin li" and "Cui Yunhao" respectively, around the love triangle between the three of us to write. This is my favorite, the most impressive story, after each story, I can make more and more wonderful, and I also feel good performance and very "in character".

In how, it is ok to play, I really hope that one day, take sport shot at me, as I was carrying lines, while practicing expression, everyone can see I shot the TV series. To tell the truth, I am good at is famous tear jerker of, dont say I brag, my tears but as you "to", and dont take a minute, I can out of tears.

I know, grow distant and long, realize the dream is not lip service is really can do it, but I still want to redouble our efforts. I dont desire to when everybody worship of stars, just want to when a small actors will be satisfied. I want to have patience, step by step towards the dreams of the road, one day, I can reach the key, claiming the dreams of the flag.

每个人都有自己的梦想职业，而每个人的梦想都不同，有的想当科学家，有的想当设计师，而我呢?我想当的是演员。

每当看着一部部电视剧时，我整个人都投入到了那部戏中，剧中人的喜怒哀乐，我仿佛都能感受得到，好象我天生就和演戏有着不可切断的缘分。渐渐地，我对演戏产生了情感，每当家里没人时，我就把我所看的电视剧拿来改编，自己扮演着剧中的各个角色。

到了后来，我拿出一本笔记本，自己编剧情、剧名以及剧中人物的名字，根据自己所编的来演。一直到现在，我已经编了十几个剧情，每一个剧情我都记得清清楚楚，因为那是我的创意，我要永远把它们储存在脑海中。

我清清楚楚地记得，我第一次编的故事名叫《心星》，女主角名叫“韩诺凌” ，两个男主角分别叫“李俊霖”和“崔允浩” ，围绕着这三个人之间的三角恋来写。这是我最喜欢、印象最深的故事，之后的每一个故事，我都越编越精彩，而且我也感觉自己表演得很不错，很“入戏”。

可在怎么样，那都只是自己没事玩玩，我真希望有一天，拍戏的镜头对着我，我一边背着台词，一边练习表情动作，所有的人都能看到我拍的电视剧。说实话，我最擅长的还是哭戏，别说我吹牛，我的眼泪可是“随传随到” ，而且，不花一分钟，我就能流出真正的眼泪。

我心里明白，成长路遥远又漫长，实现梦想也不是嘴上说说就真能做到，但我还是要加倍努力。我不渴望能当人人崇拜的明星，只想当一位小小的演员就心满意足了。我要有耐心，一步一步朝着坎坷的梦想路前进，总有一天，我一定能达到重点，夺下梦想之旗。