小学英语作文常见错误(优秀20篇)

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小学六年级英语作文：My Day(4篇)

My Day 1

May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

May Day is my favorite day!

My Day 2

I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games .

We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun !

My Day 3

Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I do morning exercises at 7:50.We have four classes in morning. At 11:30, I’m very hungry. I have lunch at school. I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon. We have three classes in the afternoon. I have computer class and art classes. I like them very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school. My sister、brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I go to bed at 10:00.

My Day 4

Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I don‘t go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.

翻译

我的1天

5月1日是星期日。今天是劳动节。妈妈对我说：“睁开你的眼睛!望向窗外。多好的天气啊!让我们去公园吧，“所以我的妈妈，我和我的同学去了公园。我们在书包里拿了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看见梨树和一些苹果树等等。树下有几种花。它是五颜六色的，蓝色，红色，黄色，粉色，紫色，橙色和白色。我看见一些气球和蝴蝶在天空中。我吃了爆米花，玉米片，香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。

下午，我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类，老鼠，猫，狗，鹦鹉，仓鼠，兔子等。

五一节是我最喜欢的一天!

我的2天

在春节我度过了一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在学校门口见面。我们骑自行车去公园，那是一个美丽的日子。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们拍了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃汉堡包和一些饮料，但我知道他们不健康，对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。

我们都累了，但我们很高兴!这很有趣!

我的3天

今天是星期一。我6点起床。我大约在：6分58秒30.then我打扫我的房间吃早饭，洗脸刷牙。我早餐吃面条。我七点钟去上学。我做早操在7 50.we在早上有四节课。11:30，我很饿。我在学校吃午饭。我中午12点上床睡觉。我们下午有三节课。我上电脑课和美术课。我非常喜欢他们。我5:30回家。放学后我做作业。我姐姐、弟弟和我晚上8点看电视。然后我洗脸刷牙。我10点上床睡觉。

我的4天

今天是星期日。是晴天。我不上学。我想去购物。我早上6点半起床，早餐吃麦片粥和鸡蛋。我8点出去。商店在附近。我步行去那里。许多人在商店里。我买了一支铅笔。中午12点我回家吃午饭。我午饭吃了一些蔬菜和肉。我下午读了一本书。晚饭我吃面条和水果。晚饭后，我做作业。然后我看电视。后来，我在电脑上玩。我躺在床上。我听收音机。我有一个快乐的日子。

16 April 2006

Dear Sir,

I am working on a new project which is called A Survey of New Industry in the Maywood District. According to the design of our district, we need information about firms that have recently moved into this area. Your firm is one of the largest of these, so I shall be very grateful if you can spare the time to help me.

Three points are specially important to the project. The first one is the training schemes for school leavers. The second one is about the transport arrangements to overcome poor road and rail links in this district. The third is the plans for expansion.

Any other information will be useful, but those points are the ones with which I most need your help.

I am enclosing an information form for you to fill in. I hope you can post it to us as soon as possible. I apologize for adding to your work with this request, but I do hope that you will feel able to assist me.

I would be most grateful for your favorable consideration of this request.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Spencer

Everybody knows that our life is very short, so the great educators always

advocate us to do what we like and pursue for our goals bravely. Most people

have many ideas in their minds and they dare not to take action, because

thinking of the effort they make but what if they accomplish nothing, so they

decide to give up and just live the boring life. It reminds me of the famous

words, some people just die at age of 20 but only to be buried at the age of 70.

As we are young and full of energy, it is a good time for us to fight for our

future, never be afraid of failure, because it is the mother of success. We can

achieve our goals if we have patience, just to cherish time and keep

fighting.

I have many friends, they each is very severe.

My friend has trees, grass, flowers, fish, dog, cat, frogs, birds, the ants, the earthworm, cricket, bee... Trees can make me cool in the hot summer, the grass can let me every day can see green, flower can let I could smell fragrant breath every day, the little fish can wait me to learn tired to depict, the dog to play with me running, cat can give me scratching, frogs and birds would it be possible for me to evaluate who sings best, ants can tell me when it rains, earthworms can help me to flowers scarification, two cricket can let me see that only worse, can let me eat the fresh honey bees.

My best friend is PeiYi Yang, he always come when I most lonely and helpless, both of us to help each other, solidarity and affection, what good things to share together.

Good my good friend!

我有很多朋友，它们每一个都很厉害。

我的朋友有大树﹑小草﹑小花﹑小鱼﹑小狗﹑小猫﹑青蛙﹑小鸟﹑蚂蚁﹑蚯蚓﹑蛐蛐﹑蜜蜂……大树可以在炎热的夏天让我乘凉，小草可以让我每天都可以看到绿色，小花可以让我每天都能闻到香气息，小鱼可以等我学习累了养眼，小狗可以跟我比赛跑步，小猫可以给我抓痒，青蛙和小鸟可以让我评价谁唱的最好，蚂蚁可以告诉我什么时候下雨，蚯蚓可以帮我的小花松土，两只蛐蛐可以让我看那只更厉害，蜜蜂可以让我吃新鲜的蜂蜜。

我最好的朋友是裴易扬，他总是在我最孤单最无助的时候出现，我们俩互相帮助，团结友爱，有什么好东西一起分享。

怎么样我的好朋友不错吧!

Maybe you will surprise that my best friend is book. But you don’t need to suspect you hearing, it’s true, book is my best friend. I like reading since I was a child. The knowledge in the book makes me feel enjoyable and peaceful. When I am unhappy, I will go to find my best friend---book. And then I will forget the the things that make me unhappy and attract by the book’s content. From the book, I learn the story of Helen Keller, I know the history in the ancient times, I also know the culture of foreign countries that I have never been. Therefore, I think book will be my best friend forever.

也许你会很惊讶，我最好的朋友是书。不过你不用怀疑你听到的，这是真的，我最好的朋友是书。在我还是个小孩的时候我就喜欢阅读。书中的知识能让我开心，平静。当我不开心的时候。我会去找我最好的朋友——书。之后我就会忘记了让我不开心的事情，被书中的内容吸引住了。从书中我懂得了海伦凯勒是的故事，知道了古代的历史，还了解到了我从未到过的国外的文化。所以，我觉得书永远都会是我最好的朋友。

Hello, My name is Gu Siyao. My English name is Hellen. I am 12 years old. I form Xiouzhou Experimental Shool. I love my school. Because my school is very beautiful and big .The trees are green and the sky is blue. The classes are interesting and exciting. The teachers are not strict. And the students are very lovely. They always help each other.

my favourite teacher is my english teacher Ms Hu .her english name is Sally .she is a beautiful lady. she is very humorous. but sometimes she is very strict with us.She can speak english ,But She also can speak Japnese very well.so all classmates love and respect her very much. after class she often helps us learn patiently. I like my english teacher , because i think she is the best teacher in the world.

一天，小明在幼儿园被老师表扬有爱心，要小明继续发扬下去，小明是非常的高兴。

放学后，小明在回家的路上，看见一只小鸡在树下叫，小明疑惑地说：“咦!这是什么?好像是一只小鸟耶!!!!它一定是从树上掉下来，飞不上去的。看来我要赶紧把它送进窝里面，这样小鸟一定会很开心的。”

说着，小明就抱着“小鸟”爬到树上去，不过，树可不是那么好爬的，小明刚爬到一半就摔下去了，小明想起老师让小明继续发扬下去，就重新抱起“小鸟”爬上树，终于，他把“小鸟”送进了鸟窝，小明是非常地高兴呀，他不禁想：等一下到家告诉妈妈，妈妈一定会表扬我的。想着想着就回到家了。

小明对妈妈说：“妈妈，妈妈，今天我送一只小鸟回到鸟窝。”小明的妈妈笑着说：“嗯，我们的小明真是一个有爱心的人啊!”小明特别高兴。

再次回到“小鸟”“住”的树下，有一只大母鸡回来了，见自己的孩子不见，非常地着急，它着急地找着她的孩子，说：“天呀!!我的鸡宝宝到底到哪去了?”

地球，这美丽的星球，在宇宙海洋中是多么耀眼！可是最近我感觉我们的地球正在变灰变黑，正在失去原来的光彩，这是怎么回事？

原来，很多人为了自己图便利把垃圾扔垃圾箱外，每天垃圾箱外都会积起来很多垃圾，环卫工人都打扫不过来了，忙了这忙那儿，所以街道上的垃圾都来不及扫了。城市也越来越脏了。地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

还有一些人乱扔用完了废电池，难道他们没上过学吗？没学过化学吗？连这一点都不知道，乱扔废电池会产生重金属污染。对我们人类的生活危害很大，甚至威胁到了地球……地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

有一个海上钻井平台漏油了污染了很大一块海面，海岸边到处可见漂浮油污。就连鸥也受到了威胁——它们在捉鱼时，被又黏又稠的石油粘住了，再也飞不起来了。经过人们的奋力抢修，钻井平台的漏油处终于被封住了。地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

很多条小河从原来的清澈见底，变成现在的浑浊不堪。这些都是一些化工企业干的。他们把有毒肮的污水排进小河，把小河的新衣服都弄脏了。小河正在哭泣……地球啊您原谅人们的错误吗？

地球，这个美丽的星球，是多么的耀眼，但是我们的错误太多了，一时难以纠正。地球，我们的母亲啊！请您给我们更多的时间吧。我们一定会改正的。

Hello!Boys and girls.I am a boy,Iam study in a middle school,I am a monitor，I think Im a good student!I have many dreams,like teacher,doctor，scientists.But I want to be an engineer now.Because my father is an engineer,I think he is very tired but happy,too!And have some mony!Ha ha!This jock.As for study,I want to study English better!I think my English is not very well.English make me sad...So my parents spend lots of money to improve my English.I think my parents give me a lot of expectations.If my grades dont well,That would be sorry to them.So I must study better!I think I‘ll study progress!Please believe me!

thanks!

大家好。我是一个男孩,我在一所中学学习,我是一个班长,我认为我是一个好学生!我有很多梦想,像老师,医生,科学家。但是现在我想成为一名工程师。因为我的父亲是一名工程师,我认为他很很累,但是很开心,!并且有许多的!哈哈!这个运动员。至于学习,我想更好的学习英语!我想我的英语不是很好。英语让我伤心…所以我的父母花很多钱来提高我的英语。我想我的父母给我很多的期望。如果我的成绩并不好,他们会难过。所以我必须学习更好!我想我会学习进步!请相信我!

谢谢!

Next week, my birthday will come and I am so happy about it. My father tells me that he has prepared the gift for me and he wants to give me the surprise. But my father later tells me that he has to go out for business. I am so disappointed, he has promised me before. But my father keep his promise and sends me the gift.

下周,我的生日即将到来,我很高兴。我父亲告诉我,他已经为我准备了礼物,他想给我一个惊喜。但后来我父亲告诉我,他必须出差。我很失望,他之前承诺过我。但是我的父亲信守诺言,把礼物寄给了我。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

Therearesomecherriesinthebasket.(一般疑问句，否定回答)划线部分提问)Kittylikesthebluedress.(用thepinkdress改为选择疑问句)Don`tplaywithfires.(换一种说法)

Joelikesreading.Dannylikesreadingtoo.(把两句连成一句)Pleaseeatsomecakesandbiscuits.(改为否定句)划线部分提问)Thereissomewaterintheglass.(划线部分提问)划线部分提问)Whatdayistoday?

What`sthedatetoday?

Whatdoyouusuallydoafterdinner?

Whichpearsdoyouwant,thegreenonesortheyellownoes?Whichwesternholidaydoyoulikebest?Whenisit?

WhatdoyoudoattheLanternFestival?

5B2

Thosebooksareours.(同义句)划线部分提问)划线部分提问)

ThosecrayonsareDanny`s.(.(用Alice改为选择疑问句)Arethesetheirschoolbags?(单数句)划线部分提问)

Theyridetheirbicyclestothepark.(用May改写)

Thecocooniswhite.(用browng改为选择问句)划线部分提问)Heisfouryearsold.(改为一般过去时)

Iwasathomeyesterdayevening.(改为一般疑问句)

Thecaterpillarslikeeatingleaves.(改为单数句)划线部分提问)划线部分提问)

WhatdoyoueatattheMid-autumnFestival?(根据实际情况回答)

The Lunar New Year occasion to the Chinese people. It lasts about the first

four days of the year, during which people do not work except for the workers on

duty. Students do not go to school, and shops are closed.

Several days before the new year, people begin to prepare. Farmers kill

pigs, sheep, cocks and hens. City dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables. Houses

are cleaned; couplets are posted on the doors. Colourful lanterns are hung at

the gate.

On the eve of the new year, each family has its members gatherd together

and eats a family reunion dinner. After the meal they watch TV until the clock

strickes twelve. Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers

and other fireworks to welcome the new year. On the first day of the new year,

almost everyone is dressed in his or her best. When

people meet on the way, they say to each other "Happy New Year". Friends

and relatives pay new year calls and gives presents to each other. Children

indulge themselves in games.

Low carbon life today is no longer a fresh word, the people all know what call low carbon life.

Today I will say the low-carbon life in our house. One day, after I had finished my homework was sitting on the sofa watching TV, movie about environmental protection commonweal advertisement attracted me. The frame there are pieces of white clouds in the blue sky, the endless prairie, green grass in the wind gently shake its head, the colorful flowers and small butterflies dance ballet on the ground. But, the scene became is full of weeds, desolate desert.

I sat on the sofa, looking out the window the yellow sky thought:

If we dont protect the environment, cant tell which day our hometown will become like that. Thought of here Ill stand up to mom and dad said: "low carbon life is start from our home!"

After that day, our family really played a low-carbon life.

As long as it doesnt black home absolutely does not turn on the light. Go out not to ride electric vehicles is the bus. And I put up a piece of white paper in the bathroom write "please save water" several characters, ah! Indeed effective, mom and dad would never waste water, both of the water to wash the dishes, wash clothes of water save flush the toilet and do it saves water, also save a lot of water.

My dad used to throw rubbish are packed in a bag together willy-nilly throw it away. But now is different, he always put the garbage classification, not thrown away, can be recycled are collected to sell to recyclers, the sale of the waste of money saved up can also buy vegetables.

So two months of low-carbon life, not only make people form good habits, our family also save a lot of cost of living. Mother happily say: "low carbon life is environmental protection, and save money, also can let us healthy life, we must put the low carbon life in the end!"

碳低生活在今天已经不是什么新鲜词了，人们都知道什么叫低碳生活。

今天我就来说说我们家的低碳生活。有一天，我写完作业就坐在沙发里看电视，一部关于环保的公益广告吸引住了我。画面中蔚蓝的天空中飘着一朵朵白云，一望无际的草原上，嫩绿的小草随风轻轻摇动着它的小脑袋，那些五颜六色的小花在地上和小蝴蝶跳起了芭蕾。可是画面一转，就变成了到处都是荒草，荒无人烟的大沙漠。

我坐在沙发上，看着窗外昏黄的天空心想：

我们要是再不保护环境，说不准哪一天我们的家乡也会变成那样。想到这儿我马上站起来对爸爸妈妈说：“低碳生活要从我们家做起!”

从那天以后，我们家真的过起了低碳生活。

只要天不黑家里绝对不开灯。出门不是骑电动车就是坐公交。而且我在卫生间里贴了一张白纸写上“请节约用水”几个大字，哎!果然有效，爸爸妈妈再也不浪费水了，他们俩把洗菜水，洗衣服的水都存下来冲马桶，这样做既节约水，还省下了不少水费。

我爸以前扔垃圾都是不管三七二十一装在一个袋子里一同扔掉。可是现在却不同了，他每次都把垃圾分类，不可回收的都扔掉，可回收再利用的都收集起来卖给收废品的，这样卖废品的钱攒起来还可以买菜。

就这样两个月的低碳生活，不仅让我们家人人养成了好习惯，还节省了不少生活开销。妈妈高兴的说：“低碳生活既环保，又省钱，还能让我们健康的生活，我们家一定要把低碳生活进行到底!”

When I was a child, I once went camping with my family in the summer. We decided to make a barbecue in the valley. So we collected some tree sticks to make a fire. My father asked me if I could try to make a fire.

I was glad to take the job. Then I tried to set fire to the wood with a match, but produced only smoke. Then my father said, "That’s not the right way. I’ll show you how to do it. First use the small pieces of wood because they catch fire easily. Then put the larger ones on top of them."My father helped me make a big fire.

Our classroom is bright and clean. But it is not big. There are twenty-three desks and chairs in it. They are new. Theres a big desk in front of the classroom. Its for our teachers.There are five pictures on the right wall. Theres a map of the world and a map of China on the left wall.

Beside the window theres a bookshelf. There are many books on it. Our classroom is very nice. We have lessons here. We like our classroom.

A few days ago, we here in the fog, the haze weather. All of the schools have a day off, just because we are a boarding school, so we didnt have a holiday, really sad!

Next class, I looked at a distance, looked at the gray day, the mood also become sad.

Smog is due to large amounts of automobile exhaust emissions and the destruction of nature and people, to improve this bad weather now, to protect the environment. This is not just an individual responsibility, or each of our earth citizens responsibility!

Let us act together, protect the environment, protect our only the survival of the earth!

前几天，我们这儿出现了雾霾的天气。所有的学校都放了一天假，就因为我们是寄宿制学校，所以我们没放假，真可悲!

我下课时，望着远处，看着那灰蒙蒙的天，心情也变得忧郁了。

雾霾是由于汽车尾气的大量排放和人们对大自然的破坏而产生的，要想改善现在这恶劣的天气，就要保护环境。这不仅仅是个人的责任，还是我们每一个地球公民的责任!

让我们一起行动起来，保护环境，保护我们唯一的生存之处地球!

banana always grows in the warm area.

its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

you can see this in the zoo.

im a student.i like eggs and coconut.because eggs is very good for me .its very healthy.the coconut is a very sweet .the haunans coconut is very great.i like them.

Although the winter vacation, I will continue my learning, in the morning,

is a good time to read, with the early morning, our family to read with relish,

three people has become a bookworm. Dad read the literary works such as crazy,

my mother read prose leisurely affectionate, for me, I read catchy childrens

poetry. A book, lets open horizon, increase knowledge. Reading good books is

like and wise in the communication, the author of often we read happy place,

could not help but laugh; Read moving place, can flow was moved to tears... . A

good book, often make us forget all about eating and sleeping, really achieve

"reading a good book, three days and I do not know meat".

Winter vacation, there is a Spring Festival, this is my most happy moment.

The New Year, my father came back from the street to buy a dozen small red

lanterns, and string them into 2 series, dad smiled and said: "the twelve red

lanterns indicates our whole family, in the New Year, twelve months are

prosperous". Mother, busy preparing for dinner, but rich, seafood, vegetables,

beef, little of course not a fish, in the traditional Chinese Spring Festival,

eat fish means "more than" year after year, good luck. I have not been idle, and

come back to the supermarket to buy necessities such as orange juice and

beer.

Winter vacation, I could have just like all the children have a blast, but

my eyesight is bad, only looking at the computer to buy, occasionally WangSha

several renju experience, very good!

Happy and short winter vacation life, really want to keep the pace of time,

has been living in the winter vacation.

我改正了错误

刚开学，班里有好几个同学不完成作业，其中也包括我。

我猜想原来的老师每天看到我们这些不爱完成作业的就头疼，新老师也一样吧!没想到新老师看到我们，不仅不讨厌我们，还说：“明天，如果谁完成作业情况好，我就和他握握手!”听后全班立刻沸腾起来，平时淘气的同学问道：“老师，你可要说话。”老师像孩子一样地说：“我可是很讲诚信的。”

放学后，我不仅认真完成了作业，而且还预习了明天要学的课文。说来也怪平时我最难完成的“工程”，一会儿就“竣工”了。

第二天很快到了，我主动交了作业。组长看我破天荒的叫了作业，吃惊的瞪大了眼睛。我扬了扬头，做出无所谓的表情;写作业，小菜一碟。要上课了。老师来了，我心里紧张起来了，不知老师看到我的作业了没有。我的眼睛一直追着老师移动的身影。

老师笑了笑说：“今天，张立斌同学作业进步很大，我要和他握手。”我有点不相信自己的耳朵，但同学们多再为我鼓起来了掌在大家羡慕的眼光下，我伸出了手和老师的大手握在了一起。我感觉一股暖流、一股力量涌遍我的全身。我抬头对老师说：“老师我一定好好学习!老师拍了拍我的肩，说：“我希望，你们都是老师的骄傲!”

从那天起，我感觉自己像换了一个人似的，那个懒懒散散我已经变成了一个努力上进的孩子了。