小学英语作文常见错误合集20篇

Hello,everybody.大家好

My names( ).我的名字叫（ ）

Im in Class( )Grade six of( )school.我在（ ）学校6年级（）班级

Im tall(short).Im ( )centimeters.我很高（矮），我（）厘米。

I like English very much.我非常喜欢英语

Beacuse English is interesting.因为英语很有趣。

So my English is very good.所以，我的英语很好。

I acquire many award.我获得过很多奖项。

I hope that every of you will love me。希望大家能喜欢我。

In the fall, I and a few children to the orchard to pick apples.

Came to the orchard, the grass dancing in the breeze, as if to say: "Come and dance with me!" Chrysanthemum blooming smile. Ginkgo tree and maple are still walking in the breeze little dance! Fruit trees also follow them to learn to dance.

Look, Xiao Li and Xiao Gang in picking up the leaves, they picked up the leaves to do it? They picked up the leaves to make bookmarks it! Red big apple straightened, as if to say: quickly take me off it. Xiao Ming Dianqi from the tip of the apple picked up. Picked a big and red apple, happy smile. I also saw a big and red apple, but also how can not pick enough. I shook the tree vigorously, the apple fell on the tree down a lot, I was happy to pick up the apple. We eat big mouth mouth of the apple, which is personally picked their own fruit, eat up sweet heart.

At noon, we should go, we would like to play here for a while, but adults are waiting for us to go home for lunch yet. We reluctantly left this beautiful orchard.

The Tree in Front of My House 我房前的树

There is a tall tree in front of my house. I love it very much. When spring comes, the thick leaves make the tree beautiful and lively. And in summer, my parents and I often sit under the big tree and enjoy the cool air.

But when autumn comes, the leaves will turn yelow, and fall from the tree. And then, it stands there in the cold wind alone. I am sad, too.

Mother tells me the tree wil grow bigger and taller in the coming spring. I feel happy again.

[小学四年级英语作文：我房前的树

地球给人类?给动物?给植物?到底由谁来保管它?谁来看护它?我们共有的家园呢?上帝在发呆。

上帝把地球给人类时，它非常高兴，因为人是最高级的动物，人类的智慧是无穷的，人类肯定会把地球营造得如诗如画，如我仙境哟。

让我们看看自己的身边吧。

空中烟雾弥漫，并夹着一股异味，小河中垃圾在上面安居乐业，小鱼无法呼吸新鲜的空气，小荷才露尖尖角的美景在我的童年当中没有记忆，炎日大树荫下纳凉的感觉不曾有过，读着前辈写景写物的文章，我感觉我的眼帘下见到为什么不一样呢，我问妈妈?我问老师?我问大地?是它给予我们不一样的世界?同一个阳光下?为什么会有不一样的产物?

上帝心疼地拍着自己的胸口，他想一定是女娲给人类的聪明和法力不够要补充，补充后，上帝才满意的离开。它心里乐滋滋的，这下地球肯定会变得很美丽。

三年了，上帝准备亲自看看，于是他驾云来到人间，天啊!人们不但没有美化环境反而变本加厉地破坏环境树木被砍伐，水被污染，动物被捕杀………上帝差点了气得背过气了。

这些人类太可恶了!我要收回地球!在上帝的一声怒吼下，地球又乖乖地回到了上帝的手中。没了地球人类可怎么生存啊?这时，人类才意识到自己的错误，请求上帝把地球还回来了，可是……晚了。

人类痛哭。

这时，上帝在干嘛呢?噢，我想它在考虑下一个地球的掌门人吧，这次它可要想好啦。

1. No rose without a thorn.

没有不带刺的玫瑰。

2. Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧。

3. Actions speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩。

4. An apple a day, keep the doctor away.

每日一苹果，医生远离我。

5. No one can do everything, but everyone can do something.

没有人可以做任何事，但是每个人可以做一些事。

6. Character------It’s what you do when nobody’s looking

品质——就是当你在无人看着时的所为。

7. Reading a book is like opening a window to life.

读一本书，像对生活开了一扇窗。

8. A good book is a light to your soul.

一本好书，照亮心灵。

9. Respect yourself Respect others Respect your school

尊重自己 尊重他人 尊重学校

10. It is better to be faithful than famous.

守信用胜过有名气。

11. No cross, no crown.

不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。

12. No garden without its weeds.

没有不长草的园子。

13. No living man all things can.

世上没有万事通。

14. No man can do two things at once.

一心不可二用。

15. No smoke without fire.

无风不起浪。

16. No man is wise at all times.

聪明一世，糊涂一时。

17. No news is good news.

没有消息就是好消息。

18. No sweet without sweat.

先苦后甜。

19. No pains, no gains.

没有付出就没有收获。

20. No pleasure without pain.

没有苦就没有乐。

How I Spent My Summer Vacation The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

暑假有来了。我很高兴我能忘掉学校至少一段时间。免得我我浪费了这个暑假,我做了一个计划如何度过我的暑假。首先,我认为我应该复习所有我的老师一学期教的那些东西,这样我就可以有更好的理解。然后我想我应该参加一些不同形式的运动,如散步、跑步划船、让我身体强壮。它的原看在这样的一个很好的计划,我应该好好利用我的休假。事实上我也这么 做了,因此我没有辜负了我的计划。

The Dragon Boat Festival, must not not include dumplings! Today, my sister is teaching me the dumplings! You see.

Make zongzi must be prepared. My sister was ready to soak for three hours of glutinous rice and bought the leaves, which surprised me.

I put my rice in the leaves, and I was all over the table, and I was angry. My sister said to me, "you want to make a triangular shape of the leaf and put the rice in it!"

So I did what my sister said, and pressed it on the rice. Whats in the middle of that dish? It was minced meat! I dug a small hole in the middle of the glutinous rice and made it into a round shape, stuffing it into glutinous rice and adding it to the glutinous rice. How can you seal it? I looked at my sister and knew everything.

I pressed down one of the warped leaves and pressed the rope hard. Success! I covered a lot of them in the previous method. Now its time to get the pot down, boil the water first, and then put the dumplings on.

After a while, the dumplings were cooked. The four of you sat at the table and ate the dumplings.

I untied the rope and was trying to remove the leaves, but when I touched it, it was hot. Her sister looked and laughed. I blew and blew the heat away. I again carefully will leaves open, eat up to her delicious dumplings - among all be stuffed glutinous rice, wrapped in a delicious meat, fresh juice in your mouth, no oil is not greasy, and chewy, feels so good!

So the Dragon Boat Festival in the past, his mouth to eat with his hand package dumplings, thought the tang dynasty poet du fu wrote poems: palace clothing is famous, dragon boat be reward. The wind is soft and the snow is light. When the weather is wet, lets go to the heat. The meaning is the length of the word, the whole life.

What a happy Dragon Boat Festival!

过端午节，一定少不了粽子!今天，姐姐就在教我包粽子呢!你瞧。

做粽子一定要有准备的。原来，姐姐已准备好浸泡了3个小时的糯米，同时也买好了粽叶，这样准备就让我大吃一惊了。

我把米放在叶子里，可米全撒在了桌上，我生气极了。姐姐对我说：“你要把叶子做成一个三角形的样子，然后再把米放进去啊!”

于是，我按照姐姐说的步骤作了一遍，在米上按了按，咦?旁边那个盘子中间放的是什么?原来是肉馅哦!我在糯米中间挖了一个小洞洞，把肉馅弄成圆状，塞入糯米中，让它也加入糯米的行列中。可怎么封好呢?我看了眼姐姐，就明白了一切。

我把翘起来的一片叶子按下来，并用绳子用力的扎紧。成功啦!我按照前面的方法，包了好多个。现在就要下锅了，先是把水烧开，然后把粽子放下去。

过了一会儿，粽子煮好了。大家四人坐在桌子旁，吃起了粽子。

我把绳子解开，正想把叶子摘掉，可我一碰，就被烫着了。姐姐看了，哈哈的笑了起来。我吹着吹着，把让热气吹走了。我再次小心翼翼的将叶子掀开，吃起了自己亲手做的香喷喷的粽子来——白白胖胖的糯米中间，包着一团鲜汁可口的肉馅，放入口中，不油不腻，又有嚼劲，感觉太好了!

端午节就这么过去了，嘴里吃着自己亲手包的粽子，心里想着我国唐代诗人杜甫写的诗：宫衣亦有名，端午被恩荣。细葛含风软，香罗叠雪轻。自天题处湿，当暑着来清。意内称长短，终身荷圣情。

这真是一个快乐的端午节!

There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. You must wear warm clothes.

The most exciting thing is playing with snow. Skating is also very interesting there.

I will always remember Harbin, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. I love Harbin.

Some students dream of being a game experts, play the best game, be the best player; Have a classmate wants to be a sports star, uncle yao Ming to win honor for our country; Some students want to become a master of racing, driving the fastest car. And my dream is to be an outstanding inventors, create world-famous super machine.

Super machine is the most advanced and most intelligent machines. This machine can do anything, can store all kinds of energy, and can be released at the right time. For example, when summer it was very hot, I can keep the heat absorption of the super machine into the machine, the outside air temperature is reduced, and when the day is cold in winter, my machine will vomit the quantity of heat inside, make my house warm. Not only can eat heat, my machine also can eat the thunder, when thunder on rainy days, I will put my machine to the outside, he can eat a lot of scary lightning, as energy storage in the inside, in the evening I let my superhero machine release electric lighting for us, for our cooking, provide we need electricity, not to mention enjoyment.

Superhero machine is not only powerful, but also very obedient. Whenever he drink enough to eat, he just like a lazy pig, drum belly slumber. Is really very cute, I want to let him like a pet with me every day, for I serve a lot of people, too. But my mother said to me, in order to realize my dream, will study hard and strive for my dream, from now on solid to learn scientific and cultural knowledge. Dont let the dream appears only in the dream, want to let my dream like a seed, germination, slowly grow, until he blossom, bruised fruit.

有的同学梦想成为游戏专家，玩最好的游戏，做最棒的高手;有同学想成为姚明叔叔一样的体育明星，为我们国家赢得荣誉;有的同学想成为赛车高手，驾驶最快的汽车。而我的梦想却是当一名杰出的发明家，制造出举世闻名的超极机器。

超极机器是最先进、最智能的机器。这种机器无所不能，能储存各种能量，并且能够在合适的时候释放出来。例如当夏天，天很热时，我的超级机器就能把热量吸进机器，把外面的气温降低了，而冬天天冷时，我的机器就把吃进去的热量吐出来，让我的屋子暖暖和和的。不仅能吃热量，我的机器还能吃雷电呢，每当下雨天打雷时，我就把我的机器放到外面，他能吃掉很多吓人的闪电，作为能源储存在里面，晚上我就让我的超能机器放出电来为我们照明，为我们做饭，为我们提供需要的电，别提多方便了。

超能机器不仅功能强大，而且还很听话。每当他吃饱喝足以后，他就像个懒惰的小猪一样，鼓着肚子打盹。真是可爱极了，我要让他每天像个宠物一样陪着我，为我也为很多人服务。 不过妈妈对我说，要实现我的梦想，就要好好学习，从现在开始为我的梦想而努力，扎扎实实的学习科学文化知识。不要让梦想只出现在梦里，要让我的梦想像一粒种子，慢慢发芽，茁壮成长，直到他开花，结出累累的果实。

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents last month and we stayed there for a week.

To my surprise, Beijing is such a modern city that my parents and I all admire the development of it these years. We visited many wonderful places there, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. What impressed me most was that people there were all very friendly and some of them could even speak Enlish. But still I think that there are some problems of this city, which I dislike. Those are too many people there and the heavy traffic. If there were fewer people and less traffic, it would be better.

下午，随着上课铃响，同学们陆续走进教室，英语老师也捧着试卷慢慢的走进教室。老师站在讲台上严肃地说：“今天我们考试，请大家准备好考试用的东西。”我一听，呆呆地坐在那，想“唉，竟然是英语考试，这可是我最怕的事情，啊，真是悲剧啊！”想完，只见老师发下试卷，说：“现在开始考试。”唉，只能写了。于是，我硬着头皮，乱写一通。

咦？这个怎么写呀！于是我想呀，想呀……忽然，我觉得试卷正面好像有这道题目，于是，我把试卷翻过来，看了一下，果然有这道题目，然后，我把填的答案抄过来，这样，这道题目就做完了。

过了半个小时，我的试卷做完了，看了看时间，快要下课了，于是我检查了一遍。过了一分钟，下课铃响了，我把试卷交了上去，静静的离开了教室。

[一次英语考试小学作文

To introduce myself（介绍我自己）Hello,every one!（大家好）My name is **** .（我叫****）Im a 15 years old boy.（我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改）I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩）In the school ,my favourite subject is maths .（在学校,我最喜欢数学）Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学）But I like it.（但我喜欢他）I belive that if you try your best,everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）Such as,running,volleyball and so on.（像跑步、排球等等）Im kind-hearted.（我很热心）If you need help ,please come to me .（如果你需要帮助,就来找我）I hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友）OK.This is me .A sunny boy.（好了,这就是我,一个阳光男孩）

Although the winter holiday is very short, but we cant play because of the

winter vacation short and follow ones inclinations, should be playing at the

same time not forget to study combining exertion and rest.

Gorky once said that "books are the ladder of human progress" in peacetime

because learning busy and have no spare time to read reference books. Winter

holiday is coming now, we just can use the time to read reference books.

"Has its own gold room in the book, the book has its own treasure to", so I

decided to use this holiday season more than look at the name of the ancient and

modern, Chinese and foreign. Not only that I also want to consolidate the

knowledge of this semester, prepare the knowledge of the next semester. I hope

next semester moved on. Learning to lay a foundation for the next semester.

In the spare time to complete the teacher and parents the assignment, look

at news concerned state affairs. In the time of the Spring Festival is not only

to watch the Spring Festival gala, will eat dinner, visiting friends and

relatives.

After the Spring Festival to loose heart a accept, to start put your heart

in learning, the work can not continue to play. To the teacher and the school

the assignment check check is done. Again next semester need to information and

exercises will be ready.

This is my winter holiday life, my winter vacation I make decision.

My daddy is a medium-sized man with a big and dark eyes, a black and bright short hair, a slender figure that looks very strong and strong, and the strong arm is strong and everyone is praising him.

My dad is very strict with me, often Saturday, Sunday do not let me go out to play, let me do exercises at home, so my math test test 92 points plus stars. My dad usually likes to swim, summer as long as he rest to take me to Taihu Lake swimming, he said that this is a learning ability to survive.

His temper is very bad, angry will use force to educate me, I said my father is "the best martial arts master". But sometimes he is still very kind, often give up nap time taught me to learn Mathematical Olympiad, often self-taught, and then taught me. I also often teach my father some English, such as koala is a koala and so on.

My father himself is also very love to learn, he is a school graduate school students, graduation certificate, and now in the undergraduate, often learn very late. My dad is an example of my study. Although my father is very strict with me, but I still love him.

This time I came to my hometown, guizhou. The day there more lovely than elsewhere, the sky is so blue, the earth is green. Makes me want to sing a song, said filled me with pleasure.

One day morning, I washing a face, just want to pour out the water. Big jiu is stopped, he said, "this water will not pour out, because other people also can wash a face, only when the water is dirty, can pour out." Said, "he told the big aunt come out to wash a face, big aunt quickly washed clean your face. In the evening, I and others had finished washing face, just wanted to pour out the water, big jiu, said: "the water washing a face can also stem what?" I say: "can water the flowers." Big jiu said: "no, you missed, is wash feet." "I know." I quickly wash feet clean, then put the water used to flush the toilet.

On one occasion, my grandfather out a piece of land over the land. I am very happy, I said to my grandfather, "we can build a playground here." Grandpa said: "we want to kind of fruits and vegetables on the land." Grandpa hurriedly put Chinese cabbage seeds in the ground. My grandfather gave them fertilization, watering every day. Now, with every piece of land has green Chinese cabbage, delicious fruit, tall trees, formation of the woods. Every day we breathe the fresh air in here. Most of the people here is very healthy, because there are many green.

The classmates, every one of us to do to save water, protect the environment. Together, let us do the basic conditions of saving water.

这次我来到了我的故乡——贵州。那里的天比别处更可爱，天空是那么蓝，大地是绿色的。使我总想高歌一曲，表示我满心的愉快。

一天的清晨，我洗完脸，刚要把水倒掉。大舅却出来阻止，他说：“这水不能倒掉，因为别人还可以洗脸，只有在水很脏时，才能倒掉。”说罢，他叫大舅妈出来洗脸，大舅妈迅速地把脸洗了干净。到了晚上，我和别人洗完了脸，刚要把水倒掉，大舅说：“洗完脸的水还可以干什么?”我说：“可以浇花。”大舅说：“不，你漏了一样，是洗脚。”“我知道了。”我迅速地把脚洗了干净，接着把水用来冲马桶。

有一次，外公的土地上空出了一片地。我很高兴，我对外公说：“我们可以在这里修建游乐场。”外公却说：“我们要在土地上种瓜果蔬菜。”外公连忙把大白菜的种子撒在地里。外公每天给它们施肥、浇水。现在，在每一片空地上都有绿油油的大白菜，好吃的水果，还有高大的树，形成的树林。我们每天在这里呼吸新鲜空气。这里的人大多数很健康，因为这里有很多绿色。

同学们，我们每一个人都要做到节约用水、保护坏境。让我们共同做到节约用水的基本条件。

我们玩得很开心 We play very happy

Today Im very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.

Its a sunny day ,the bird is singing,Im singing too.When I get to park,I

see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have

lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.whats a happy day!

During those days。 I enjoyed myself。 At first， I went to the zoo to see lovely animals。 And then。 I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes。 That was very interesting。 Secondly I went for a trip with my parents， we went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat minority’s foods。 We rode horse on the grassland and had a fun with local children。 It was very exciting。 After that， I held a party and invited some of my best friends to visit my house。 My mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us， we also took many photos on the party。 We played very happy。 I also watched lots of carton films at home， they were wonderful。

I like the holiday。 I like my May Day。

关于TOEFL考试作文相信大家都买了不少参考书，并且背诵了不少好段子，但是有的考生依旧作文不理想，究其原因在写作时可能不太在意，好了，让我们看看专家怎么评点TOEFL考试作文的常见错误的……

1.结构不平行例：IwasabletoraisemyTOEFLscorebystudyinghardandIreadlotsofbooks.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

2.不知所云例：Manycompaniesbeganusingcomputersmouth.

3.段落过长，不分段主语与动词一致问题SheareagoodfriendofminethatIhasknownforalongtime.主语和动词在数方面不一致。

5.不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，donot，itis，wewill，theyhave等等)。

6.关联词语重复SinceIwanttogotoagoodschool,thereforeIamtryingtoraisemytestscores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。

7.句子不完整Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Forexample,myfriendinhighschool.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。

8.不要使用getWhenIgothome,Igottired,soIgotabookandgotintobed.Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become,receive,find,achieve,等等。

9.书写难以辨认信息不正确IwouldliketostudyinAmericabecauseallmoderntechnologyoriginatedthere.传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确（如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。非英语单词Computersareveryhelpfulandadvantageable.尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。

10.介词多余Iwouldliketodiscussaboutsomethingimportantthatyoumentionedabouttomeduringyesterday.Wewenttodowntownyesterdaytobuyawatch.WhenIfirstcametotheUS,Ididnothavealotoffriendsinhere.Inclass,myclassmatenevermentionedaboutherhusband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。

12.陈词滥调Itisokayforchildrentofailsometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。

13.标点问题Iloveanimals.AndIliketohelpthem.Becausetheyarehelpless.SoIwanttobecomeavet.这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

14.重复冗余Personally,Ibelievewhatthenewspaperprints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。

15.单数/复数Manyyearago,dinosaurroamedtheEarths.单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词（a,the,my,his,her,Gary’s,no,any,1,3,50,most,等等）。

16.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题Iwanttobuysomethingformymotherthatshewilllikeit.Therewasaterribleaccidenthappenyesterday.句子的基本结构有问题 缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。

17.语气与文章不符Iwaskindofmadattheguywhovociferatedangrywordsatme.IhaveheardmanywonderfulthingsaboutsuchcosmopolitancitiesasParis,London,Tokyo,andHongKongandIwouldlovetovisitthesecitiestocheckthemout.语气与文章其他部分不相符可能是过于正式或者太不正式。

18.代词指代不明Ifpeopledonotspeakthesamelanguage,ithasagreaterchanceofmiscommunication.IintendtocompletemystudiesintheUnitedStatesbecausetheyhavegoodprogramsthere.代词所指代的指示词（介词所代替的名词）不清楚。

19.过于笼统WeshoulduseourresourcesonEarthbecausetheEarthisgettingworse. 句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。

20.动词时态错误YesterdayIwillgotothestorebecausetomorrowIneededsomefood.动词时态不正确检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。

21.选词不恰当IwaslategettinghomebecauseIlostmyway.在这种情况下不应该使用该词可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。

22.单词形式不当IwanttocreationagreatwebsitesothatIcanbecomingwealth.所使用的单词的形式不正确检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。

23.用词错误EvenIdon’tspeakSpanish,Iwasabletofindabathroominthedepartmentstore.Igainedalotofpoundsduringvacation.用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。 

[TOEFL考试作文常见的23种错误参考

导语：你的假期是怎么度过的呢?有什么有趣的事?以下是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didnt. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

I spend a lot of time on the homework… Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late. Then I listened to the tape，it was nine oclock. Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime!I‘m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

Im unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. Im careless to kindle the firecracker，so Im very unlucky.

I still unlucky on my friends party. In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50. After ten minutes，the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend‘s

home!And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

Im worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram!I must to do banting!

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey…in the sea. Now Ive done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

参考译文：

我们的寒假放假时间是从一月十六号截至到二月七日。我想每个人在这期间，都会去做很多的事。但是我没有这样。下面就让我来给大家讲讲我的寒假发生的事吧。

我花了很长的时间来做作业…，在寒假这段时间里，我每天起的都很晚。然后呢，我听录音机(tape),转眼到九点了。之后，我吃完早饭再花一整天的时间去做作业!其实我做的并不慢，只是家庭作业布置的太多了!

我在玩耍方面也显得十分倒霉。在我玩爆竹的时候，伤着了我的手指。我手拿着放爆竹的时候，太不小心了，所以显得很是倒霉(杯具变成了餐具现在很流行的一个词，杯具餐具-作文地带)。

在我与朋友聚餐时也相当倒霉。早上，我是想着早点起，可是等我睡醒时已经是10：50.十分钟后，聚会就要开始!于是我只吃了块面包就径直向朋友家跑去!在朋友家呆了很长的时间后，我回到家，我爸爸妈妈很生气并且还大骂我一顿。

我很担心我的体重，上学期，我体重是48KG，但是现在我已经涨到51KG了!我必须减肥了!

但是更为重要的是，我已经去过了上海海洋水族馆，我非常期待去那，因为在那我可以看到马、猴子……还有大海。现在我实现这个愿望了。这也是我这个寒假唯一的一个亮点。

Everybody is good! First to introduce myself. Im from class X XX, today have come to the host competition is also a great thing in my life. Today, can not award is not important, important is I gave myself a chance to show themselves, self-understanding, exercise self, also give me an opportunity to ourselves to everybody to learn and improve. The judges the teacher, please vote for the precious for me, I dont live up to the expectations of you to me, my heart is willing to pay for his hot, for others. Today can stand on the stage speaking these words, I will beat myself, I can tell myself, I won. Thank you very much!

大家好!首先自我介绍一下,我是来自X班的XX,今天有幸来参加这个主持人选拔赛也是我人生一大快事.今天，能不能得上奖并不重要，重要的是我给了自己一次展示自我、认识自我、锻炼自我的机会，也给我一次向大家学习、提高自我的机会。各位评委老师,请为我投下宝贵的一票,我一定不会辜负您对我的期望,我心甘愿为他热人付出，为他人奉献。今天能站在这个舞台上讲这些话，我就战胜了自已，我可以告诉自已，我赢了。谢谢!