小学英语作文常见错误20篇

My family has a small white rabbit, it is covered with white hair, big head long with two long ears, white rabbit eyes are red, like ruby, white rabbit tail hairy, Posted behind the buttocks, really interesting.

Once I fed it to eat when it did not dare to eat, and later I am familiar with, after I give it to feed things to eat, it is big mouth to eat up, I feel really cute.

Rabbit is also particularly considerate. Once I was criticized by my mother, the white rabbit came around me, as if to say: "little master, I play with you!"

Little white rabbit is my good friend, I want to take care of it.

My favorite animal is pandas. He name is Beibei, he is blak and white. I like Beibei very much, becavse he is so cute, and he is kind of shy. Beibei form the China. He is five years old. Is so many people take photos with beibei. I want to see the beibei, i want to take photos with beibei. He live in the Beijing zoo.

1、假如我会克隆

2、假如我会72变

3、假如让我……

4、假如我是一名……

5、假如我的生命只剩下三天

6、_______变了（提示：要写出变的过程及原因，要表现出变的前后对比。）

7、_______的感觉真好！（提示：要围绕所填内容，突出“感觉真好”，要点明好在哪里，怎么个好法。）

8、_______错怪了我。（提示：要把事情的前因后果写清楚：谁错怪了我，为什么错怪我？我的心理活动怎么样？）

9、_______的滋味。

10、_______真辛苦。

11、_______真有趣。

12、_______说我长大了。

13、如果，我能再做一回小学生。（提示：六年的小学生活即将结束，回顾这六年的生活，你一定会有许多感慨，或高兴，或得意，或自豪，或遗憾，或后悔，或困惑……想一下，如果你能再做一回小学生，你将会怎样度过呢？）

14、我爱我家。（提示：你为何爱你家？）

15、我发现了_______

16、20年后的_______

17、_______，我想对你说

18、这件事真使我_______

19、谢谢你，_______

20、我眼中的_______

21、我迷上了_______

22、愉快的_______

23、那是一次_______的尝试

24、我是_______迷

25、一堂_______的课

26、当_______不在的时候

27、发生在_______的一件事

28、我们都是一群_______的人

29.童年趣事

30.我的XX

31.家庭风波

32.我长大了

33.记一件难忘的事

34.第一次做家务

35.观XXX有感

36.一件小事

37.XX年后的我

38、《你快乐，所以我快乐》

题解：由于你感到快乐，所以我快乐____哪怕我付出了也值。表达了“我”宽阔、友善的胸怀。

39、《在好朋友生日聚会上的祝词》

题解：意在检测你的口语交际能力。词语里可以插入小故事，要有表达美好感情的祝愿的话。

千万别写成一次生日聚会活动。

眼见为实.Seeing is believing.

人生短暂，学艺无穷。Art is long, life is short.

三思而后行. Look before you leap.

有其父，必有其子。Like father,like son.

再晚也不算迟。Better late than never.

条条大路通罗马。All roads lead to Rome.

并非闪光的都是金子。All that glitters is not gold.

种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。As you sow,so shall you reap.

物以类聚。Birds of a feather flock together.

不劳无获。No pain,no gain.

入乡随俗，When in Rome,do as the Romans do.

那恰是我所喜欢的。Its my cup of tea.

一日一苹果，医生远离我。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

患难见真情。A friend in meed is a friend indeed.

少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。A young idler; an old beggar.

熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.

一分耕耘，一分收获。No sweet without sweat.

时间就是金钱。Time is money.

欲速则不达。Haste makes waste.

说起来容易做起来难。Easier said than done.

人各有所好。Every man has his taste.

物极必反。Extremes meet.

活到老学到老。Live and learn.

事出必有因。Nothing comes of nothing.

隔墙有耳。Walls have ears.

失败是成功之母。Failure is the mother of success.

江山易改，本性难移。A leopard can not change his spots.

好心有好报。Good mind,good find.

得饶人处且饶人。Forgive others whenever you can.

爱乌及乌。Love me ,love my dog.

行动比语言有力。Actions speak louder than words.

年华不虚度，生命自悠长。Life is long ,if it is full.

既来之。则安之。Take things as they come.

岁月不待人。Time and tide wait for no man.

美德胜于美貌Virtue is fairer than beauty.

活到老，学到老.Never too old to learn.

礼尚往来.Give and take.

知足者常乐.Content is happiness.

言出必行 So said ,so done.

光阴似箭.Time flies.

忍耐是美德.Patience is virtue.

天下无不散之筵席.The best of friends must part.

经一事，长一智.It is easy to wise after the event.

少说少错.Least said soonest mended.

少壮不努力，老大图伤悲.The young idler;an old beggar.

诚实为上策.Honesty is the best policy.

切莫半途而废.Never do things by halves.

积少成多.Many a little makes a mickle.

I love computers. Love to what extent, I saw a computer, just like a sweet

drink, as is pleased to want to jump up. I am not like other people who love

playing computer games, I love to paint on the computer.

I remember just started painting on the computer, the mouse does not always

listen to my disposal, I make it point to the document, it refers to another

document or on a roll or several far. Especially in the painting, the mouse不听使唤,

from graphics to painting especially difficult, from the painting I want much. I

repeated practice in the paper how to make the mouse and pen painting painting

painting on paper, the work pays off, and now, I have already use the mouse to

draw a beautiful painting of the painting.

Dealing with regular and computer, the most headache is encountered in a

computer virus. However, I now have to deal with them, and often kill antivirus

antivirus software on it. What if you have a better way, tell me as soon as

possible.

at the weekendsitssunday evening. the read families are at home. mr. read is watching tv. mrs. read is reading a book. ann is sitting at the desk and reading, too. shes doing her homework. her brother, tom, is sitting on the floor andmaking a kite. he is doing his homework, too. mimi is playing with something near tom. where is tom’s bird? oh, it’s near the window. it’s looking at tom and singing. they are having a good time.

I like dogs, because they are man’s good friends. They can do many helpful thingsto us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and soon. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people’s lives.So they‘re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in greatharmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

Good afternoon,teachers! My name is YangXiaodan. I`m 11 now. I`m from Class2 Grade 5 of TongPuNo.2 Primary School. My English teacher is Miss Sun. She`s quiet and kind.She`s short and young. My good friend is ZhangBingbing. She`s 12. She`s talland pretty. We`re in the same class. We both like English very much. I likepainting , listening to music, playing computer games and reading books. Myfavourite food is chicken. It`s tasty and yummy. I often do my homework andread books on Saturdays. This is me. Please remember YangXiaodan. Thank youvery much!

每个人的人生不可能一帆风顺，总会有一些挫折，但往往是这些挫折，让我们慢慢懂事，学会了坚强。上学期的一个星期天，校运会在我校隆重举行了。作为一班的运动健将，我当然报了名，因为我也想为班级争光。一转眼，运动会便进行到了男子800米跑步，我一脸得意地走向起跑线，只等裁判发令。"开始！"裁判一声令下，大家争先恐后地向前跑去，我也不甘示弱，一阵狂奔。还好，我一直占上风，遥遥领先。而我的劲敌在身后紧追不舍。同学们的呐喊早以淹没了我的劳累。

我始终坚持着一个信念：我不能辜负同学们的的希望和老师的用心良苦。我坚持着，等待着胜利的到来。这个信念督促我不断努力，我继续向前冲去，我的劲敌也咬紧牙关跑了上来。快到达一百米冲刺的地方了，我加快了速度，可天有不测风云，在关键时刻，我的脚竟然扭了一下，"啪！"，我重重地摔了一跤，而劲敌也趁机超越了我，我顾不了伤痛，马上站了起来，继续向终点跑去。最后，我得了第五名，倒在了地上，喘着粗气，再也站不起来了，我不甘心！泪水不断涌出，像断了线的珠子滑落下来。

我不甘心！我经过了那么多次的训练，难道就成为了泡沫？同学们都来安慰我，见到同学们的表情，我想起了之前的诺言：开心最好！于是，我慢慢平静下来。原来，失败的滋味这么不好受。以后，我会更加努力，我会永远记住失败，让它成为我前进的动力！

[小学生写错误的作文

人生的道路曲曲折折，没有人不会犯错，错误是成功的开始，失败是成功之母，这是我们必学的一课，接下来我就给大家讲讲我的错。

有一次我跟我们班的一位同学打了架，打完架之后我还对那位同学说：小心你的书包，下午我到学校之后就把他的书包踩了，当时有很多人在场不知道是哪位同学给那位家长说了，就在我坐在位置上就有一个同学说老师叫你，听完这句话我的心就扑通通乱跳心里不断自责，我心想语文老师为什么叫我？我犯了什么错？是不是那件事语文老师知道了？

我带着种种疑惑走进了办公室，就在走进办公室的一刹那间我知道了答案我把那位同学打伤了，那位家长找来了，看见语文老师不断的给那位家长说好话我的心里就酸酸的，老师在那位家长面前批评了我我的心里很内疚，在那时我知道了错，我不应该打同学，不应该触犯纪律，我总是在犯了错之后才知道了错。

我认为错误就是一面镜子，只要认识到错误并改正，镜子永远是明净的，不要为错误找借口那样只会一错再错。

[小学作文从错误中学习正确

Hi,boys and girls,Do you want to know my lastWeekend? Let me tell you.

On Saturday morning,I got up at 10:00,Then I ate breakfast,I did my homework.In the afternoon,I had to go to school to study.

In the evering,I watched TV and played with my little dog. It’s white and lovely.

On Sunday morning, I got up early and went to the school to study. After school, I helped my mother to do housework, She was happy.

In the afternoon, I played a ball with my friends and washed my clothes. At night, I went to bed at 9:00.

This is my last weekend.what a busy one!

I have a good friend whose name is Chen Yingxi. She doesn‘t work very well at her study, but she is very willing to help others.

One day, my lunch box disppeared from our class‘ lunch-basket, so I had to look for it in other classes‘ lunch-basket. Chen Yingxi said, Let me go to look for it with you. Then we went to the third floor and the fourth floor to look for my lunch box. At last, we found it, and sweat covered both of our foreheads. I expressed my thanks to her, but she said, Don‘t mean it. This is what a friend is all about.

I am very glad to make friends with Chen Yingxi.

[我的好朋友为题的小学生英语作文

in my family, you can see a cat, the cat is very beautiful.now let me draw it for you. he has got white hair and two big eyes, they are blue and bright. he has got four short legs and his ears are small, his tail is long. i finish it now. how lovely!

after school, i play with him first, he is my best friend. i like him very much!

oh, do you want to know his name? i’d like to tell you, his name is “mimi”.

One of my classmates was knocked down by car last term. He was badly hurt. He had to stay in the hospital for several months. We were very sad.

One night, he felt very hungry. He wanted to buy some easy noodles to eat. He ran very fast. He didn’t stop when the traffic lights were red. He couldn’t escape. His legs were injured. He said that was a terrible(可怕的) memory. He said he would obey the traffic rules forever.

Please always remember the traffic rules. It is very important for us. Life is wonderful. Let’s obey the rules at any time.

Today I got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. Why is the legends? Because not seen.

But from 7:30 a.m. start raining, I was depressed. Ok just online see the news experts say YinYuTian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。

不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日

全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗。

[小学生暑假英语日记锦集

【摘要】在英文写作过程中，学生们常常误入歧途却自己不能察觉。一些常见的写作错误会出现在大部分考生的试卷上。比如审题不清，经常出现偏题或跑题；习惯汉语思维，逐字翻译；用词搭配不当，张冠李戴；词不达意，拼写错误严重；等等。具体来说，常见的错误主要有这些：

一、指代方面的错误

在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

二、修饰方面的错误

修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

三、一致方面的错误

在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

四、平行结构方面的错误

这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

误：A great change has been taken place since then.

正：A great change has taken place since then.

误：But it may occur some new problems.

正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

五、断句方面的错误

一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

六、连词方面的错误

作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

七、搭配方面的错误

学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

八、误用方面

学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

另外为了方便大家学习，提高复习的效率。小编为广大学子整理了考研技巧和考试大纲，更有历年真题提供测试等等。针对每一个科目进行深度的探讨和技巧挖掘。欢迎各位考研的同学进行了解和资讯。考研的痛苦是难免的,不要丧失信心,坚信苦尽甘来。预祝各位学子取得成功！

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thanksgiving day in the united states, the fourth thursday in november is called thanksgiving day. on that day, americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year.thanksgiving day is usually a family day.

people always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions. pumpkin pie and indian pudding are traditional thanksgiving desserts. relatives from other cities, students who have been away at school, and many other americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home.

在美国,感恩节在11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。在那一天,美国人感谢的祝福。感恩节通常是一个家庭日。

人们总是与大型晚宴庆祝快乐的团聚。南瓜饼和印度甜点布丁都是传统的感恩节。亲戚从其他城市,学生已经在学校,和其他许多美国人长途旅行假期呆在家里。

I have a lot of happy things, but I feel most happy is my six birthday.

That day my father said I was a small birthday, he took a day and my mother to accompany my birthday. They took me to the swimming pool, I like a small tadpole, like in the water free to swim to swim. Then, I went to the mattress bed to play, like a happy little rabbit in the same jump on the jump ... ... I am most happy and Mom and Dad in Zhongshan Park crazy paradise in the fight.

The battle began, my mother and a pair of upstairs, my father downstairs. My mother helped me pick up a lot of bullets, I have poured into the launcher, aimed at the father, "beep, beep ... ..." There are a lot of bullets are hit the father. Dad is not to be outdone, he also launched a fierce attack on us. "Dodo, beep, beep ... ..." bad! Mom shot, but fortunately I hid not played. At this time, my father did not bullets, and he hurried to the ground to pick up bullets.

At this critical moment, we hurry to win. My mother gave me a lot of bullets, we all went to my father. In our concerted efforts, my father was beaten. Later, I pressed another button, who knows, next to the shelves of the ball are falling, like the same day, like the flowers scattered to the father just like picnic. Daddy said I was cunning, we all laughed ...

Every time I think of this thing, I will feel very happy, very happy.

Though I am a child, my parents will not force me to do things as their words. They always tell me the choices and let me make my own decision. Actually, the finally decision I make is what they want me to do. I feel to be respected, because they help me to make the right choice and treat me as an adult.

虽然我只是一个小孩子，但是我的父母从不会强迫我按照他们的想法做事。他们总是让我自己做选择。实际上，我做出的最后决定也正是他们所希望的。我觉得我受到了尊重，因为他们帮助我做出正确的选择，把我当作成年人来对待。

英语作文篇一：This is me

Hello, everybody! My name is Michael. Im a happy boy. Because I laugh every day. I have a big family. There are three people in my family, my mother, my father and I.

My parents are managers and Im a student. I study in Grade Seven, Class Eleven, Dongzhou Middle School. Its a nice place. There are many students in my class. I have a good teacher, Miss Jiang.

My favorite lessons are English and Maths. I like dogs very much. I have only one dog. Its name is Doudou. Its a pretty dog.

Oh, I forgot to tell you something about my old friend. His name is Tad. His hobby is playing basketball. So he is taller and stronger than I. He has two big eyes and long hair. He is my best friend.

This is me, a happy boy!

英语作文篇二：This is me

Hello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. I’m 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I don’t like sports. But like reading books very much. My favourite dood is fish. Because it’s tasty and yummy. My favourite fruit is apples and bananas. Because they are sweet. Do you like Friday? Oh I like it very much. Because the weekend is coming. Who’s my favourite teacher? She’s Miss Zhu. She’s a unversity student. She’s young, tall and active. So her class is so much fun. On Sundays, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. It’s sweet for me! I love weekends. On weekends I often do housework, too. I can clean my bedroom, empty the trash, set the table and do the dishes. But I can’t cook the meals. This is me! Can you cook the meals? Are you helpful at home,too? Tell me, please?

英语作文篇三：This is me

Hello，My neme is Any.I am a nice girl. Im 13 years old.

Im very helpful. at home ,I can sweep the floor、wash the clothes and cook dinner.

I have a so happy family . Ther are five people. my parents , My grandma , my sister , and me. My mom is a good teacher . My dad is asupper doctor.I love my family.

My birthdy in October.On my birthday .My friends are go to my home . We are piay together .and eat biethday caek together.

My favourite season is winter . Because I can play with snow with my friends.

This is me.do you like me?