小学英语作文常见错误经典20篇

小学英语作文:我的朋友( My Friend)

我的朋友

Im Sally .I have a friend.He name is Bess. She is nine.Shes very cute. She has two big oyes and a small nose, We are in the sane school.We are learning and playing togethar. She likes dolphin and purple. I like dolphin and purple,too.

We are good friend.

I have a few cute little white rabbits, and I love them very much.

They have a pair of long ears, a pair of ruby-like eyes, dropping yo, tail like a small pompon, a white hair, like snow, really beautiful.

Little rabbits courage is very small, as long as a stranger to hide, the body shrink tight, very afraid.

White Rabbit can eat something, it loves radishes and vegetables, but must be washed, if it is not clean vegetables and radish, will be sick. Oh, its hard to be waiting.

Can be a small rabbit to grab the food looks interesting, and whenever I put the food in its pot, they will scrambling to run over, for fear that they can not eat food, the whole head into the basin; Sometimes they become so friendly, a food is divided to eat, one sub-points, after the end, it is the two legs on the food, three mouth a one together, the body Yi Chan Yi Chan, eat Relish!

Little rabbit, how are you naive and lovely!

In todays world there is no big problem as a population. People began to worry about the support of the earth. And theres probably only standing room for everyone in the future.

The population of Lima is 5. It was 7 million in 1985, but it grew to 9. 1 million in 2000. Tianjin was 790 million in 1985. In 2000, it increased to 9. 7 million dollars. London, Osaka, Moscow, Beijing, Karachi, New Delhi, Jakarta, Seoul and Tehrans population growth has a similar city. Calcutta, Shanghai, New York, St Paul and STO saw a faster population explosion. Tokyo has 18 million 800 thousand in 1985. It became 20 million 200 thousand in 2000. Mexico City had 17 million 300 thousand people in 1985, but in 2000, its population reached 25 million 800 thousand!

What does population growth mean? This means increasing consumption and greater soil pressure. If more people are added to our world, the population has not been warned or taken any action, we will only stand in the end of twenty-first Century.

Each government and the United Nations should see that each countrys population and each city stay for the next 50 years.

[人口增长小学生英语作文

Yesterday is my six-year-old birthday. It is important to me as I can go to

primary school after my birthday. It means that I grow up. I got up very early

at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a little down.

But I recovered with excited soon and then I went out to play. Everything in my

eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o’clock, my mother gave me a

surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave

a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present. I’m so happy that day.

Hello. Im Timmy. I like to eat eggs ang milk for breakfast. I often eat my breakfast at home. It starts the day .

I often have lunch at school. For lunch, I often eat rice and meat. It can give me energy.

For supper. I often have vegetables and apples. They are good for health.I after supper within grandparents at home.

你好。我是蒂米。我早餐喜欢吃鸡蛋和牛奶。我经常在家吃早饭。开始这一天。

我经常在学校吃午餐。吃午饭,我通常吃米饭和肉。它能给我能量。我的饮食习惯

吃晚饭。我经常有蔬菜和苹果。它们对健康有益。我在爷爷奶奶家里吃晚饭。

再次翻开姚xx老师的这本《小学英语情趣课堂教学》时，说心里话真的是很痛苦，像是下了很大的决心。过了两个月的无拘束、无压力的生活之后，发现静下心来做一件事很难，尤其是读书。因为是王老师给我们下了死任务，只好硬着头皮去读。事实证明：有压力才会有动力。这句话说的一点儿也不假。我重点研读了本书的第六章。本章节向我们展示了一些优秀的情趣英语课堂教学设计与课例，精心的教学设计，精彩的教学预设，无不体现了编写教师的独具匠心。设计中体现了人文主义，从教学目标到教学过程，都很巧妙地将传统的“要我学”转换成了“我要学”。

第一部分以北京师范大学新版小学英语教材四年级下册第十单元 Mc’s stre 6个课时的教学内容为例，展开基于情趣教学思想想的教学设计。阅读的过程中，可以看出编写教师非常细心，把课堂上的每个细节都处理的很到位，包括课堂的一些预设，生成。这一单元是一个阅读课，一提到英语阅读，我的脑海中就是bring, difficult。纵观这六课时的教学设计，教师借助插图、对话，并通过肢体语言、声音、多媒体资源、设置有效情境，挖掘文本固有的情趣，给予学生适时的语言支持和铺垫，帮助学生理解语言，理解故事。一步步地帮助学生把握技巧，培养他们的阅读能力。成功地把阅读变成悦读，使它真正地变成一种乐趣。在今后的阅读课上，我会尽力效仿，使它变得不枯燥。

第二部分是姚老师本人执教的展示课例。就像姚老师所说“情趣教学着眼于对学生学习兴趣的诱导”。在教学设计上，教师立足于激发学生的学习情趣，并通过多媒体资源，为学生呈现多个自然又生动的教学情境。另外，姚老师的板书设计给了我耳目一新的视觉体验，能够立足于文本内容的同时，重难点突出，也符合中年级学生的认知特点。

读罢此书，心中感慨万千，作为教师，很佩服姚老师的那份执着，以及对教学认真的工作态度。相比之下,我是差太多了。在教学设计上，我也要有所创新：

1.导入部分需要为所学内容做铺垫，不能华而不实。

2.适当地体现小组合作的魅力，锻炼学生的语言运用能力。根据学生的能力，在适当时机把主动权交给学生，充分关注学生的主体意识，激发学生主动参与的热情。

3.注重教学设计的整体性，连贯性。

[小学英语情趣课堂读后感作文

I have lots of hobbies, among them, my favorite hobby is playing computer.

Play computer in fact there are many benefits, not only gives me much help in the study, but also in life also gave me a lot of help. You see: no problem can be find on a computer; In recent days the weather conditions can see on the computer; You can order things on the computer, cheap and convenient; You can watch TV on the computer, watching a movie; Can also be on the computer games... Is there anyway.

Remember one night, I was in a language the basic training, stumped by a question and she ran and asked my father: "dad, this topic in the flesh in the text said what mean?" After dad thought for a long time said: "this is not very clear to me, you still to look at the computer!" Then I thought to myself: this topic how so difficult? Even give up my dad. "And then, I will go online to find, as a result, let me check the best answer," flesh "is" the human body. In this way, my problem is solved.

In addition, I also like playing computer games, so, after I finish my homework every day, I can play for a while, but I have to remind everybody is, playing computer games, but dont be hidden, it can only be as a relaxation after the completion of a job, playing on the computer at the same time should pay attention to: protect good vision; Computer disease prevention...

This is my hobby?? Play computer.

我有许许多多的爱好，其中，我最喜欢的爱好是玩电脑。

玩电脑其实有许多的好处，不仅在学习上给了我很多帮助，而且在生活当中也给我很多帮助。你瞧：不会的问题可以在电脑上查找;最近几天的天气情况可以在电脑上查看;可以在电脑上订购物品，既便宜也省事;可以在电脑上看电视、看电影;还可以在电脑上打游戏……反正是举不胜举。

记得有一天晚上，我在做语文《基础训练》时，被一道题目给难倒了，就跑去问爸爸：“爸爸，这个题目里的‘血肉’在课文中表示什么意思?”爸爸想了很久之后说：“这我也不是很清楚，你还是去查看一下电脑吧!”当时我心里想：这题目怎么这么难啊?居然都把我老爸给难倒了。”然后，我就上网去查找，结果让我查到了最佳答案，“血肉”表示的是“人的身躯”。这样一来，我的问题就迎刃而解了。

另外，我还喜欢玩电脑游戏，所以，每天我做完作业之后，我可以小玩一会儿，不过，我得提醒大家的是，玩电脑游戏时，可千万不能上隐，那只能是作为在作业完成之后的一种放松，同时玩电脑时要注意：保护好视力;预防电脑病……

这就是我的爱好??玩电脑。

There is always a pile of smelly rubbish in front of the building we live. Everyone has to cover his nose with his hand while he passes by. One day, our teacher told us in class some good deeds done by Uncle Lei Feng. I was moved deeply by that. So after school, I started to clear the rubbish away. Now my neighbors dont have to cover their noses.

我们家住的楼前总是有一堆垃圾，天长日久都发出了恶臭。人们经过时都得捂着鼻子。有一次课堂上，老师给我们讲了雷锋叔叔助人为乐的故事，我被深深地感动了。于是我放学回家后就开始清扫那堆垃圾。现在我的邻居们就不必捂着鼻子进家门了。

i am cendy. i am in nanhai eperimental primary school. i am in class 9, grade 6. i am tall and thin. i live in dali. i have many good friends. i often play with them.

i have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. but i like to read books the best. because of reading books is good for my study. i also like riding bikes. because of it does a lot of good to my body.

what’s your hobby? can you tell me?

Remember a Wednesday afternoon, Grandpa brought back a lovely puppy.

This little dog is very naughty, a gray hair, small eyes like black gem as bright, a pair of small ears cleverly erected on the head, the tail is always upturned, it is particularly cute. Because it is very naughty. So I gave it a name called "little skin."

He likes to eat bones. Eat two claws tightly put the bones on the ground. You look at it when eating bones, how delicious it! It is most like playing with other peoples puppies, it is happy, always love to shake its tail. Unhappy when you do not even look at me. When someone came, it would be barking, as if I said "someone came" I play with a small partner, it straight to my side Minato, but also straight behind me.

Later, the small skin missing, I am very sad, like a knife twist in general. I see someone elses dog to think of small skin, I believe that one day a small skin will come back.

This is Lin. She is from Beijing. She studies very hard.In class she can answer theteachers questions very quickly. Lin loves her classmates and often helps them with their lessons. Everybody says she is a very good monitor.

要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点：

注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持

坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。

(1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。

(2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。

注重平时的写作训练

英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。

五步写出一篇好作文

什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。

(1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式

时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等

人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如：

Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English.

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

(2)找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

(3)成文时表述正确，文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

(4)文章结构清晰，重点句型画龙点睛，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次，考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词：

1.表文章结构顺序：

First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…

And then， Finally， In the end，At last

2.表并列补充关系的：

What is more， Besides，Moreover，

3.表转折对比关系的：

However， On the contrary， but

On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…， while others…

4.表因果关系的：

Because， As、So， Therefore， As a result

5.表换一种方式表达：

In other words

6.表进行举例说明：

For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact

8.表达自己观点：

As far as I know， In myopinion

9.表总结：

In short， In a word.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例：

I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.

感叹句举例：

How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!

动名词做主语举例：

Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.

常用状语从句句型：

1)时间：

when， not…until(直到…才…)， as soon as(一…就…)

2)目的：

so that + clause; (为了)

3)结果：

so…that…(如此…以至于…)， too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件：

if， unless(除非)， as long as(只要)

5)比较：

as…as…(与…一样)， not so…as…， than

(5)认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

We livemore and more comfortable.

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.

改正：much information (不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.

改正：There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)

4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.

改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

我的一生中，我做过很多检讨!岁月如歌，我犯下过累累错误。

检讨也很多了，一个盒子都装满了。但我有错就改，敢于承认错误，而不是逃避!我很好笑，曾问过妈妈一个很好笑的问题，我说：“妈妈你认为犯过错的人还是不是一个好学生吗?”妈妈慈祥的和我说：“当然是啦，我的傻女儿你难道认为犯过错的人就不会再次行使做一个好学生的权利了吗?我告诉你，其实不是的，只要你有错就改，这不是一个好学生吗，毕竟你认识了你的错误，有决心改正。所以你就还是一个好学生!”听过后，我好像恍然大悟，突然明白嗯嗯是啊!改正错误，才是解决错误的最佳方法!因此，从那时候我一犯错就检讨。自罚!

今天这场戏又重演了，我数学作业错了很多，是我错得最多的一次。于是我就向汪老师检讨我错误的原因，并罚自愿自己错了那一题就一题写50遍，于星期五交!真希望自己以后不要怎么马虎，做题速度慢一点。这样可能今天这一幕就不会上演了!呵呵!自己罚自己，可能也是为了下一次作业的效率有所提高吧!

Spring festival Spring festival is coming春节到了. we are very happy我们都很高兴，because we can play a few fireworks因为我们可以放很多鞭炮. the parente will buy new clothes for us父母亲给我们买新衣服, and prapare many goods for Spring festival和准备了好多的年货. we visit grandparents and friends我们去拜访爷爷奶奶姥爷姥姥和朋友们 .we get some money,and we call it yasuiqian我们得到一些钱，我们叫它压岁钱. when we get the yasuiqian， we are vey happy当我们得到压岁钱的时候，我们很高兴.we like Spring festival very much我们很喜欢春节.

导语：同学之间就要懂得互帮互助，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Help Each Other

This morning I went to the classroom at seven oclock because I was on duty today. Of course I was the first one. I was cleaning the blackboard when Li Ming came into the classroom. I asked her, "Who do you come here so early?" She answered with a smile, "I know you are on duty today. Let me help you." I was very happy and said, "Oh, thankyou. " We began to work together. When the teacher arrived, we had already done a good , and the classroom was clean and tidy. The teacher praised me.

The day after tomorrow Li Ming will be on duty. I am going to help her too. We are good friends. We should help each other.

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互相帮助

今天早上七点我去了教室，因为我今天值日。当然我是第一个。当李明走进教室时，我正在擦黑板。我问她：“你这么早来这里是谁?”她笑着回答：“我知道你今天值日。让我来帮你。“我非常高兴的说，“哦，谢谢你。”我们开始一起工作。当老师到达的时候，我们已经做得很好了，教室干净整洁。老师表扬了我。

后天李明将值日。我也会帮助她。我们是好朋友。我们应该互相帮助。

12 March 2006

Dear Sir,

I am highly disappointed in the proposed 2004-05 budget cuts to educa1ion. Taking away basic aid status and slashing our school budgets is a recipe for educational disaster in our school. The future lies with our children. They must have access to high quality educa1ion.

My husband and I have worked hard to be able to live in a school district that provides high quality education for our children. Cutting funding in districts like ours will have a negative impact on property values.

The school that my daughter attends is hardly wha1 I would describe as a "rich" school. Parents are asked to pay for books for all the classes, science supplies and for their students to participate in the performing arts among other items. If our school is to remain a world leader in technological development, cutting our school funds is the worst possible choice to make.

Education funds should not be diverted away from education.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Williams

小学一年级英语作文1：A good young pioneer

Li Hua is a Yong Pioneer. He is going to the park. Now he is waiting for a bus. Suddenly he finds a watchon theground.He askssome people, "Whose watch is it?" But the watch isnt theirs. So he gives the watch to a policeman.

Now Li Hua gets on the bus. He is sitting near the window. An old woman gets on the bus. She has no seat. So he stands up and says, "Here is a seat for you, Granny. Please sit here"

小学一年级英语作文2：The sea

What do know about the sea? Some people have seen it but others havent. The sea looks beautiful on a fine sunny day and it can be very tough when there is a strong wind. What other things do you know about it? Of course, the sea is very large. In the world there is more sea than land. If you have swum in the sea, you know that the sea is salty. Rivers carry salt from the land into the sea. Some places of the sea are saltier than the other places. Do you know the Dead Sea? It is so salty that you cant sink when you are in the water! And fish cannot live in it!

小学一年级英语作文3：A day in my life

My family lives on this street. In the morning, my father goes to work and all the children go to school. My mother takes us to school everyday. She does the housework. She always has her lunch at home, and sees her friends in the afternoon. In the evening all the children come home from school. They always get home early. My father goes home from work and he is often late. After supper my two brothers and I do our homework. We go to bed at ten.

小学一年级英语作文4：My special friend

I have a friend in the U.S. His name is Don Adams. I know him very well, but I have never met him. We write to each other all the time. My letters are very short. It is still hard for me to write in English. I received a letter from Don yesterday. It makes me very happy. He is coming to my country for a visit next summer. We are going to see each other for the first time.

小学一年级英语作文5：Seven days in a week

There are about fifty-two weeks in a year. And there are seven days in each week. The first day of a week is Sunday. The other days of a week between SundayandSaturdayare Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday Thursday and Friday. Monday is the second day, Tuesday is the third day, Wednesday is the fourth day, Thursday is the fifth day, and Friday is the sixth day. Whats the last day? Do you know?

小学一年级英语作文6：I dont think so

Jack is a good boy but he doesnt like to use his head. He often says something withou thinking.It makes others unhappy.

Mr. Black teaches math in a school. Hes old now and he likes children.On the Friday Mr. Black doesnt go to work, because hes ill in a hospital. And Jacks mother will see him after dinner. "I want to be there with you." says Jack. "Youre a rude boy. I cant take you there. says his mother. "Dont worry, mum. I wont do that again. Please believe me. " says Jack. In the hospital, Jack says nothing at first. When theyre leaving , he says to Mr. Black, "You look fine. The doctor says youre going to die, but I dont think so. "

My name is Yu Geqin. I’m nine years old. There are three members in my family, my father, my mother and I.

My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of my family. He can solve the difficult problems, too.

My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.

I have a happy family. I like it very much.

导语：每当暑假一到,我都会很高兴.想到有两个月的时间可以不用上课,那简直就是一年当中最美好的时光了。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.

First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve myEnglish.

Then, I will see some funny comedies. They can relax myself!

If I have enough time,I will go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.Well stay there for three days. We also will do a lot of things there,for examper，playingvolleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.and so on.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever have been going.

I will try my best to do these tings! I hope I have a good time 。

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我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然，我有许多事情要准备。

首先，我要制定计划关于我的假期。我将要做我的家庭作业每天5个小时，我想读一些著名的英文书籍，来提高我的英语。

然后，我将会看一些有趣的喜剧。他们能使我放松!

如果我有足够的时间，我将会去海滩。我将和我父母和堂(表)兄弟姐妹。我们会在那里待三天。我们也将会在这儿做很多事情，例如，打沙滩排球，冲浪，在晚上烧烤，等等。这次旅行将会是我曾经去过的一个极好的地方。

我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我希望我过得开心。

我的暑假计划英语作文

My father doesnt talk much. Though he is not funny, he loves me very much.

Last week, he travelled for business and when he came home, he took out a box

and brought me a nice present. I was so happy. He always remembered to bring me

some surprises. It was a special notebook and I could use it to write

diaries.

good! i jiaoli its far this year, 12-year-old, changsha city in the rice fields junior secondary school reading. i am good at playing table tennis, china is the second in the team; i like playing the piano, for two years has been a five-level 5. i like to eat kfc, so why fat. this is the first time participate in the english game, or lack of experience, but i hope i can play great! next, i bring you a song - edelweiss