小学英语作文常见错误(经典20篇)

I am a middle school student. I have many new classmates now. One of them is my best friend. Now, let me introduce my classmate to you.

This is my classmate .His name is Lin Peng. He is 12 years old. We are the same age .And he is a little taller than me. He is very kind to me .He likes math most and he is good at it. He always helps me with math .He also likes playing basketball .We often play basketball together after school.

I am happy to be classmate and friend with him. I hope we can be friends forever.

使大家能在短期内提升分数，建议大家着重复习写作这个模块，而写作要想取得理想成绩，则需要地道的语言表达，因此，新东方在线英语六级频道特别为大家精选整理作文中最为常见的习惯表达，望助大家一臂之力。

一、指出现象或争议话题

Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…

自从……起，就有对于……的持续争论。

With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…

随着对……的日益关注，人们呼吁……

… draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discussed yet constantly unsolved social issue.

……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……，这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。

二、引出各方观点

There exists a philosophy that…

有一种观点认为……

While many advocate…, I believe it’s a better idea to…

尽管很多人支持……，我认为……更好。

Quite many are disgusted by this kind of…, because it goes against the traditional Chinese virtue of…

很多人都反感……，因为它有悖于中国的传统美德。

三、表示赞同

It is apparent that it is a more sensible choice to…

很明显，……是更为明智的选择。

…should be encouraged, because it is a rewarding journey, promised with

…应鼓励……，因为它所带来的回报奇迹丰厚，并且允许……

It is fair to say that … is a plausible and advisable option for…

客观来讲，……对于……是合理且明智的选择。

四、提出建议

In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…

我认为，要改进的方面有三点，以便……

It would be better if…

如果……会更好。

五、引用名人名言

As … rightly/ aptly put it, “…”

正如……恰如其分地提出……

As is maintained by …，“…”

正如……提出，……

… is the golden rule to stick.

……是一条金科玉律。

六、举例说明

A case in point is…

一个恰当的例子是……

The recent incident happened in … proves …

最近发生在……身上的一件事情证明了……

A simple example can be drawn from…

一个简单的例子就是……

According to figures/statistics /the findings/data released by an institute, …

根据某机构发布的数据/研究结果，……

七、阐述原因

The epidemic of … is brought / caused both by … and by…

……的出现是由于……和……造成的。

One of the chief causes of… is the fact that …

……的主要原因之一是……

The upsurge of … is resulted from two-fold factors ——…

……的出现源于双重因素——……

八、做出总结

In conclusion, it takes the endeavor of both … and … to …

总之，……需要……与……的努力。

It is hence not difficult to see that …/It therefore can be said that …

因此，不难看出……/ 因此，可以说……

From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that …

从以上讨论内容可归纳，……

九、发出号召或警示

The situation, if unchecked, will lead to …

如果不加以制止，情况将走向……

If not dealt with properly, …

如果处理不当，……

What may be a point of concern is …

可能需要关注的是……

十、表示过渡(承上启下，使新观点不至于显得突兀、武断)

There are no less than three advantages in… as rendered below.

在……方面，至少有三项优点如下显示。

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of…is that…

我支持这种观点的另一个原因是……

What’s more, 而且

Last but not least, …

最后但同样重要的是……

In the early winter, the wind is a little strong, at this time, it is perfect to fly the kite. I am so excited about this activity, my friends and I will always compete to see who can fly the highest kite. When I see the kite, I play with my friends and we have the good time. Running in the playground makes me so happy.

早期的冬天,风有点大,在这个时候,是非常适合放风筝的。对这个活动,我感到很兴奋。我和我的朋友们总是竞争,看谁能飞最高的风筝。当我看到风筝,我就会和朋友们一起玩耍，我们度过了美好的时光。在操场上奔跑让我感到快乐。

I had finished trainning in army for 8 days.Though this trainning I can learn a lot of things without schooling.I made many new good friends as well.

I never finished a whole work myself before this trainning. Because of this, I failed the most important exam. The drillmaster taught us that we must often say "never give up"in our life.Only in this way, we can succeed. I felt bloody lonely after I graduated from school.By mean of this trainning,I have new friendiness.We often talked about our favourite things as football,basketball and so on.... I think we need some trainning.It can make us become better and better. I will remember this trainning forever!

October 1stis the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节，这是全国的共同节日。这一天是中华人民共和国开始的标志。在那天，全国到处都有很多庆祝活动，上至中央政府到普通老百姓。公共场所，包括大的广场和公园，都装饰成节日主题。近年，国庆节同样也是所有人都期待的短假黄金周。随着生活水平的提高，人们又更多的钱和渴望去旅游，黄金周对他们来说是一个很好的机会。除此之外，对于那些不想外出的人来说同样也是休息的好时机。因此，国庆节对中国人来说意味着很多。

"The school has the school rules, the home has rules" is often in a word, can be asked "what is discipline? What rules do you have?" A lot of people immediately transfixed.

The house rules. Every family rules are different. When eating in my home I should be the words of "food, lay not language." After dinner, can not put the chopsticks on the top of the bowl, to put it on the table, this means you have to eat well. If there are bones on the table, bones, etc. To put them into the bowl with chopsticks. Do these things also cannot leave, wait until everyone ate can be away from the table.

Our family has a house rules - matter however three. One time in the park for a walk after supper, because been stepping on a stool, so I took out a piece of paper, clean bench, I lost a lost. A clean workers came out, said: "you this child how so not bred, litter everywhere." I listened to her, my face red with immediately. Apologize as I go to pick up today as he ran into the trash can, this to put the cleaners anger.

Dan, is the family ethos, Dan once destroyed, this family thinking with corruption. It gives bad reputation is going the rounds and then no one will keep company with the people, want to change at this time is too late.

My family trait is "filial piety" as the saying goes, hundred good filial first, we want to filial piety the parents and elders. When our parents getting older, more cant talk back, all want to consider parents. Even if they say no, also want to kind of talk. Told us to do things, do not delay, as far as possible to help parents, so as to achieve "hundred good filial first".

Dan is the house rules, have good manners can in an orderly way, have a good family trait can better based on the society.

“校有校规，家有家规”是人们常挂在嘴边的一句话，可问到“家规是什么?你家有什么家规?”很多人就立刻呆住了。

家规。每户人家的规矩都不一样。我家在吃饭时真应了那句“食不言，寝不语”。吃完饭后，不可以将筷子放在碗的上方，要放在桌子上，这就代表你已经吃好了。如果桌子上有鱼刺、骨头等等要用筷子将它们扫入碗内。做完这些事还不能走，要等到大家都吃完才可离桌。

我们家还有一个家规—事不过三。有一次晚饭后在公园里散步，由于凳子上被人踩过，所以我掏出一张纸，将凳子擦干净，随手一丢就没了。一位清洁工人走了出来说：“你这小孩子怎么这么没教养，随地乱丢垃圾。”我听她这么一说，我的脸立马红了。我一边道歉一边跑去吧至今捡起来丢到垃圾桶里去，这才平息了清洁工的怒火。

家风，是一家子的风气，家风一旦败坏了，这家子的思想也就跟着败坏了。这给坏名声就一传十，十传百，到时候就没有人愿意跟这家人交往了，这时候想改就来不及了。

我家的家风是“孝”俗话说的好，百善孝为先，我们要孝顺父母和长辈。当我们的父母渐渐老去，就更不能顶嘴了，凡是要考虑父母。即使他们说的不对，也要和和气气的说话。叫我们做事，不要推辞，尽量帮父母的忙，这样才能做到“百善孝为先”。

家风就是家规，有了好的规矩才能有条不紊，有了好的家风才能更好的立足于社会。

Hi， everybody！My name is …. I study in  changan  central  primary  school  大家好，我叫… 我在长安中心小学学习

I  am in Class 4 Grade 1  I like English very much. 我在一年级4班，我很喜欢英语

I study English everyday ,  I read books ,I listen to the tapes and watch videos我每天都学习英语。我读英语书, 听英语磁带，看英语光碟

地球，这美丽的星球，在宇宙海洋中是多么耀眼！可是最近我感觉我们的地球正在变灰变黑，正在失去原来的光彩，这是怎么回事？

原来，很多人为了自己图便利把垃圾扔垃圾箱外，每天垃圾箱外都会积起来很多垃圾，环卫工人都打扫不过来了，忙了这忙那儿，所以街道上的垃圾都来不及扫了。城市也越来越脏了。地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

还有一些人乱扔用完了废电池，难道他们没上过学吗？没学过化学吗？连这一点都不知道，乱扔废电池会产生重金属污染。对我们人类的生活危害很大，甚至威胁到了地球……地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

有一个海上钻井平台漏油了污染了很大一块海面，海岸边到处可见漂浮油污。就连鸥也受到了威胁——它们在捉鱼时，被又黏又稠的石油粘住了，再也飞不起来了。经过人们的奋力抢修，钻井平台的漏油处终于被封住了。地球啊您能原谅人们的错误吗？

很多条小河从原来的清澈见底，变成现在的浑浊不堪。这些都是一些化工企业干的。他们把有毒肮的污水排进小河，把小河的新衣服都弄脏了。小河正在哭泣……地球啊您原谅人们的错误吗？

地球，这个美丽的星球，是多么的耀眼，但是我们的错误太多了，一时难以纠正。地球，我们的母亲啊！请您给我们更多的时间吧。我们一定会改正的。

一向幼稚的我，一直以为外教是非常严肃，非常凶的那种，一副死气沉沉的样子，还会随手拿着木棒，哪个学生不乖，一棍子打下去，听不见任何声音。这使我心里颇不宁静。要是有的问题我答不出那该怎么办呢?

因为我的英语成绩不怎么样，所以妈妈要我去参加“英语村暑假夏令营”让我提高英语水平。可是自从我见到外教后，我感觉，外教不但不凶，不坏。而且脸上表情丰富。嘴里说出来的话自然是幽默风趣。让我不得不佩服他们。

外教的课分种：正经课，做活动。

正经课：

就是正常上课，一般，他们都会教我们课本里的东西，什么方位介词：on in under next to in front of ……有时候他们觉得上课改上的内容都上完了，但是还有时间，他们决不像中国教师那样让我们自己休息。而是教我们其他的单词。这样一来，即能不浪费我们的时间，而且还能丰富我们的英语，一举两得。

做活动：

英语暑假夏令营还特别安排了一个外教活动课，就是跳跳绳只类的活动。有一次的活动是跳长绳很过长绳。我们大家都不会，英语老师先来，因为她很肥，所以跑过去，扑，摔了一跤。但是，她一点不计较，而且很开心，让我们也来。很好玩的。

上了2个星期，我已经深深地感受到了外国教师的魅力，他们的幽默风趣诙谐，他们使我学会了标准的发音英语，也让我开朗了许多。

Everybody knows the panda, they are cute and clever, naughty, not only to protect themselves.

The panda is very clever. It often let xiao Lin rat ran out let it eat, of course also use some tricks.

It also is very naughty. Sometimes it took advantage of the hunter is not at home, swaggering into which, ate a hunters game. Finished, also spoon is still far away, even the pot on the branch.

When the enemy comes, it can well protect themselves, not eaten by the enemy.

But, for now, lovely wild animals such as pandas have less and less, hog deer, deer on the hill before the animals can be seen, now already gone.

Crested ibis, golden eagles, crane these gorgeous, beautiful birds, in hundreds of millions of years ago, but now I can only see them in the zoo of beautiful appearance.

Monitor lizards, Chinese alligator, pythons, although these animals is very dangerous, but it is also important wildlife species and the ecological balance of nature also plays a certain role.

In this sense, what do you think of? We cant because their delicious meat, to kill. They are poor, less and less because of their brothers and sisters; They are afraid, because there are risks of killed themselves; They are angry, because of our excessive development, their territory is more and more small.

From now on, dont again disorderly kill wild animals! From now on, dont be a lot of developing forest! Dont ruin the world that animals and animal again!

大家都认识熊猫，它们既可爱又机灵，不但淘气，还会自我保护。

熊猫很机灵。它经常让小林鼠自己跑出来让它吃，当然也会使用一些计策。

它还很淘气。有时，它趁猎人不在家，大摇大摆地闯进去，偷吃猎人的野味。吃完了，还把勺子仍得远远的，甚至把锅挂在树杈上。

当敌人来时，它能很好地保护自己，不被敌人吃掉。

但是，现在，像熊猫这样可爱的野生动物也越来越少了，豚鹿、梅花鹿那样的之前在小山坡上就能看见的动物，现在早已不见了踪影。

朱鹮、金雕、白鹤这些华丽、美丽的鸟儿们，在几亿年前曾经数不胜数，但现在只能在动物园里才能见到它们的美丽的模样了。

巨蜥、扬子鳄、蟒，这些动物虽然很危险，但也是重要的野生动物物种，对自然界的生态平衡也起着一定的作用。

说到这儿，你们想到了什么呢?我们不能因为他们的肉美味，就随便乱杀。它们可怜，是因为它们的兄弟姐妹越来越少;它们害怕，是因为自己有被杀的风险;它们生气，是因为我们的过度开发，它们的领地已经越来越小了。

从现在开始，不要再乱杀野生动物!从现在开始，不要再大量开发森林!不要再破坏动物和动物的家园吧!

Recently, the problem of environmental pollution is getting more and more

serious. The air pollution, noise pollution and water pollution are found on the

newspaper everywhere. It is obvious that we should do something to protect our

earth. Because we have only one home. We should try our best not to pollute the

environment and appeal the people around us make their effort to protect our

unique home.

国庆节到了，我们国家成立六十七周年了，机关、学校、工厂、社区、各单位门前挂着红布，上面写着“庆祝国庆”四个大字。

为了庆祝这一天，我们国家放七天长假，让大家高高兴兴的休息。有的人带着孩子去旅游，有的带着孩子去秋游，还有的带着孩子去超市、逛大街、进公园，大家都玩的特别开心。回家时大家都提着大包小包，有吃的，有穿的，有用的，还有学习用品和书籍。爸爸妈妈告诉我，现在生活真幸福，好像芝麻开花节节高，这应该感谢党的改革开放政策好。

国庆节的夜晚更加美丽，街上有各种各样的宫灯，五彩缤纷，还有人行道上火树银花星星点点，闪闪发光，使人看后流连忘返。

National Day to the sixty-seventh anniversary of our country, organs, schools, factories, communities, units in front of a red cloth, which says "to celebrate the National Day" four characters.

In order to celebrate this day, our country put seven days of holiday, so that everyone happy to rest. Some people take their children to travel, and some children with the autumn tour, and some children with the supermarket, shopping street, into the park, we all play very happy. When we are home, we are carrying a large bag, eat, have to wear, useful, and school supplies and books. Mom and Dad told me that life is now really happy, as if sesame seeds flowering high, it should be grateful to the partys reform and opening up policy is good.

National Day of the night more beautiful, the streets have a variety of palace lanterns, colorful, as well as sidewalks on the fire tree Yinhua little stars, sparkling, people see after lunch.

Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie, afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, ChongWu, midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus, dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official, listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone, in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang, outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series, variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节，又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同，但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗，每到这一天，家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲，赛龙舟，吃粽子，饮雄黄酒，游百病，佩香囊。

今天是端午节，大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人，很有学问。他在楚王身边做官，以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话，把屈原削职流放。在流放中，屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领，百姓遭难，悲愤极了。五月初五这一天，他来到汨罗江边，怀抱一块石头，以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息，都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原，还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼，希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟，挂香囊，香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药，外包以丝布，清香四溢，再以五色丝线弦扣成索，作各种不同形状，结成一串，形形色色，玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

In todays world there is no big problem as a population. People began to worry about the support of the earth. And theres probably only standing room for everyone in the future.

The population of Lima is 5. It was 7 million in 1985, but it grew to 9. 1 million in 2000. Tianjin was 790 million in 1985. In 2000, it increased to 9. 7 million dollars. London, Osaka, Moscow, Beijing, Karachi, New Delhi, Jakarta, Seoul and Tehrans population growth has a similar city. Calcutta, Shanghai, New York, St Paul and STO saw a faster population explosion. Tokyo has 18 million 800 thousand in 1985. It became 20 million 200 thousand in 2000. Mexico City had 17 million 300 thousand people in 1985, but in 2000, its population reached 25 million 800 thousand!

What does population growth mean? This means increasing consumption and greater soil pressure. If more people are added to our world, the population has not been warned or taken any action, we will only stand in the end of twenty-first Century.

Each government and the United Nations should see that each countrys population and each city stay for the next 50 years.

[人口增长小学生英语作文

There are so many people around me,among them,I like my father the most.My father is a hero in my heart,when I have questions,he can answer me and tell

me something about them.My father also takes me to many places,like Shanghai,Beijingand so on.I am so happy when I am with my father,he is the best

I have a happyWeekend.

On Saturday morning I always have English classes at school. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.

So I love weekends.

My family has a cute and naughty little white dog, we call it "yellow".

Yellow and yellow round, the body covered with white long hair, hand touch, soft, warm, slippery, really like a group of lovely small pompon. Eyes black yo, like two shiny black pearls. Ears sharp, very sensitive, erected, vigilant to listen to all around. It is a very, very small "big dog".

Yellow is very lively and fun. When the yellow is very excited, it shook his tail to play its good show: sometimes at home to move west jump, sometimes desperately shaking the tail, sometimes with the claws flutter our legs asked to hold.

Yellow naive cute. We love very yellow.

Home is the warmest place in the world and a sweet home makes every family

member feel happy and comfortable. So, how to make a home sweet?

First, respecting and understanding each other is the key to make a home

sweet, especially living in a big family. Everyone in the family has his or her

own opinion and has different way to deal with the matters, and it is impossible

to make family members see eye to eye with each other. Therefore, when we are

meeting different opinions, we need to give our respect and understanding to

each other.

Second, communication is another important factor to make a sweet home.

Communicating with family members is a good for us to know each other and

strengthen the relationship. Thus, no matter where we are, keeping in contact

with each other is definitely important.

Finally, humor can add more sweet to our home. Humor is a good way to

adjust the atmosphere in a family and close the relationship between family

members. Hence, if there is going to have a quarrel between family members, try

to use your humor to solve it in advance.

In a word, to make a home sweet needs the effort of every family

member.

We are students now，so we all have learning habits ourselves，whether or not they are good，let‘s share with everyone. I have some learning habits too.In the evening，i sometimes read alond .textbook，then memorize them.When i take class ，i listen to teacher carefully，and i learn some knowledges from teacher ，then ，i will take notes，i always keep to doing that every class.In the afternoon，i try my best to finish my homewotk，because i want to have long time to review what we have learned in the evening，but i do my homework so hard，when i meet the problems ，i will ask my father to solve them，so every evening，i will learn useful enough knowledge，i always feel very happy when i understand them.But i think it’s important for us to be interested in studying，i think we have to make friends with study，then we could help other classmates to study，because we can exercise ourselves by helping them. There are my ways to learn，although they are not so good，i will improve them，and start to try new ways. Learn is a life journey，in this journey，may be we will miss a lot of problems，but we can‘t afraid of them，we must to be the owner of study.

After finishing my homework I went to the Tai Mountian with my friends during my holiday. When we got near the Tai Mountain by buswe were very excited. We planned to get on the top of the Tai Mountain. Next we began to walk we to the foot of the mountian. There were many visitors there. And all of us enjoyed the beautiful views beside the steps. At last we reached the top.Not only we had a picnic there but also we took several picturestoo.

Though we were very tiredwe were very happy about that trip.

To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered(订购)a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

Lookingforward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua