小学英语作文常见错误【经典20篇】

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How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

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With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

Recently, the newspapers, on TV are advocated to join the CD action, the classmates, do you know what call CD action? Right! Is to eat them all the food on the plate.

The Chinese custom is when the guest to order food, said the hospitality of yourself. Comes the Spring Festival, people also hard to avoid with their relatives and friends go out to eat a big meal, to express their own mind, a point of a lot of food, in the end, eat not only, also left a lot of food, do not pack again, watched these delicious is poured into the trash can. Alas...

Hunger has become the number one killer of mankind, now many people in Africa are still being plagued by hunger, be starved to death at last. Now the die from hunger in the world, ten million people each year. If we recycle 5% of the food every day, there will be four million people were rescued. Television also often put some of the poor children in the mountain, they didnt eat didnt drink, if we can save food, may be able to change their miserable fate.

These days, when I went to restaurant downstairs, I found there are some guests on the table with good after eating the leftovers and food on the plate almost all have no, eat is very clean, it must be they also read the newspapers and on TV the act after the news. I think Ill join the "CD" action, so at the time of order, I think is almost enough to eat and dont let mother point, when you eat, we also put the dishes and a bowl of rice to eat clean, looking at the bare plate, Im so happy!

Here, I also give you two initiatives for "CD" action: 1, to cherish food, right amount order, avoid the leftover food, reduce the extravagant and wasteful. 2, not comparing, proud of savings, a waste of shame. Do not scraps, waste not, eat whatever you have, prostrate! Join the CD, together to "waste" said no!

The classmates, let us also join "CD" action! Let us also from waste, to save!

最近，报纸、电视上都在提倡要加入光盘行动，同学们，你们知道什么叫光盘行动吗?对了!就是把盘子里的饭菜全吃光。

中国人的习俗就是在客人来的时候多点些菜，表示一下自己的热情好客。到了春节，大家也难免带着亲朋好友出去吃一顿大餐，为了想表达自己的一个心意，就点了许多菜，到最后呢，吃也吃不光，还剩下了许多饭菜，又不打包，只能眼睁睁地看着这些美味被倒进垃圾桶里。唉....

饥饿现在已成为人类的第一号杀手，许多非洲地区的人们还在被饥饿困扰着，最后被活活饿死了。现在全世界由于饥饿而死的，每年就有一千万个人。如果我们每天回收5%的粮食，就会有四百万饥民获救。电视上也经常会放一些山区的贫苦孩子，他们没吃没喝，如果我们能节约粮食，或许就能改变他们悲惨的命运。

这几天，我去楼下饭馆吃饭时，我发现桌子上放着一些客人用好餐后盘子里的剩菜和剩饭几乎都没有，吃的都很干净，这一定是他们也看了报纸和电视上的新闻后做出的行动。我想我也要加入“光盘"行动，因此在点菜的时候，我觉得差不多够吃了也就不让妈妈点了，吃饭的时候，我们也把菜和碗里的饭吃的干干净净，看着吃的光光的盘子,我开心极了!

在此,我也为"光盘"行动给大家二个倡议:1、珍惜粮食，适量订餐，避免剩餐，减少奢侈浪费。2、不攀比，以节约为荣，浪费为耻。做到不剩饭，不浪费，吃多少要多少，吃不了兜着走!加入光盘族，一起对“浪费"说不!

同学们，让我们也一起加入“光盘"行动!让我们也远离浪费，走向节约吧!

Last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".

Last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.

My dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)

我家的小狗

去年，朋友送我一只小狗，我非常喜欢它，放学后就和它一起玩耍，无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。

去年冬天我忙于功课，每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚，这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时，它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来，似乎它是在叫我。

我家的狗不但对我照顾周到，而且还肩负着看家的重任，每当有陌生人来到我家，它总是叫个不停，但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!

Here is a small zoo. I like the tiger，although they are very ugly，but very imposing. Also has the national treasure panda，they are a little shy，does not dare to look at us. Who are those? they are elephants，you look at they to be huge，also has a point to be interesting. I do not like the lion，they compare the tiger clown，is also unimposing.

This is the small zoo.

3.Recently, three owls appeared suddenly on our campus. They made me think of my pet from childhood. When I was little, we had an owl at home. It was small, gray, and had two big eyes. We liked it very much. Every time I went home, it greeted me by making “goo-goo” sounds. We always played with it and talked to it. It would blink its eyes just like it understood what we were saying. It was like my best friend. But when the weather became colder, we forgot to keep it warm, and it died. It made us sad for a long time, and it also taught me how important it is to take care of animals.

A little monkey picks up a pumpkin and wants to take it home.But the pumpkin is toobig.The monkey cant take it home.

Suddenly he sees a panda riding a bike towards him. He watches the bike. "l have a good idea. I can roll the pumpkin. It likes a wheel."

So he rolls the pumpkin to his home. When his mother sees the big pumpkin, she is surprised and says, "How can you carry it home?" The little monkey answers proudly, "l cant lift it, but l can roll it." His mother smiles and says, " What a clever boy!"

it has been 2 days since i didnt come here and write my diary.today is the totally holiday for the first time. i got so much fun.i went to meet a friend who i didnt know before.she is my colleges girlfriend in the future.hehe.but unfortunately, when we get there,she wasnt there.we got a little depress .

im recieved a lot of messages from many friends unkonwn.here,im wanna say thanks to all of you and your supporting.because i am lazy, so sometimes i cant find the right time to read your diarys,and leave some message to show my support,hope you will not think me slefish.thats all today.thanks to all of you.

I had a lovely little white rabbit, it was long with a pair of long ears, red eyes like two rubies, a pink little nose, smooth very, under the nose there is a three mouth, mouth In the long two white teeth, the body of the hair like a large cashmere, his front legs are relatively short retreat relatively long. There is a short tail behind the ass, very beautiful!

Every morning, I am prepared to ask the mysterious guests breakfast, who do you guess I told you that is the lovely little rabbit, I took out his favorite carrots and leaves, it went to her door to the leaves Put it in the bowl, and said loudly: "Come on, come out to eat." Soon it will come out, I want to give it a joke, I picked up the leaves, it desperately pull, who knows me Let go, just hear "when" it fell a four feet overturned, funny I laughed, it relish to eat up.

I like this cute little white rabbit.

母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天，我为母亲买了一件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物，感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到礼物后，非常高兴。

Mother＇sDaycomes on the second Sunday in May each year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. Receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.

Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m veryhappy to make a speech here. Now, let me introduce myself. My name isZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 ofTongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball.Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty.My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On the weekend, Ilike reading books in my room. I have a happy family. My father is tall andstrong.My mother is hard-working and tall, too. My brother is smart. And I`m agood student. My dream is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poorchildren in the future. Thank you for listening! Please remember me!

I Play Guitar

I like playing guitar,so my father buys me a guitar for fun.It is very funny.Then my mother asks me to have guitar class.She thinks to learn more skill

is good for me.I start to have guitar class.It is really funny at first.But later on,I feel very tired.It is not easy to get improved.I want to giveup,but I insist at last.Now I can pay several songs.I feel proud of it.

我弹吉他

我喜欢弹吉他,所以我爸爸给我买一把吉他的乐趣。这是非常有趣的。然后我妈妈问我有吉他课。她认为学习更多的技能对我有好处。我开始上吉他课。这是非常有趣的。但是后来,我感觉非常疲劳。不容易得到改善。我想给最后,但我坚持。现在我可以支付一些歌曲。我感到自豪。

Everyone have their own favorite season. Someone loves the spring the most,

while other one loves winter.The one who like summer might for its hot weather

and they can enjoy the ice-cream, while the autumn fans might love the sky

floating leaves.For me, I love the four seasons equally, I cannot tell which one

i love the most, because all of them have the special reason that makes me

adored them.

Spring is a wonderful season to celebrate rebirth and new life. When it

comes to spring, everything looks so full of vigor. The grass out from the land,

the branches grow new leaves, and the colorful flowers show up everywhere, all

of this beautiful scenery makes people feel encouraged and reborn.

Summer is a magnificent season, which bring warm to us, letting us wave for

it and releasing the passion. Summer is an exuberant season that always makes

people have stirrings to do something. Also, thinks to summer that makes

swimming and surfing much funnier and the ice-cream taste more delicious.

Autumn, fruit is fragrance and fruit. Autumn is the season of harvest, fall

chrysanthemums spit release each other, and a thriving scene. Autumn is the only

season that we could see the leaves flying in the sky. And it is especially

important for Chinese; one of a day of autumn which called mid-autumn festival

brings family together and enjoys happy family reunion.

Winter is a season makes people feel sad and cold, but a warm, toasty house

may feel great in the winter, that is the only charm that other season doesnt

have. Nothing is greater on a cold day than a hearty hot bowl of soup. Moreover,

we can make a snowman and have snow high in winter.

Every season has its own lovely charm, I love them all.

Everyone has a family. We all live in there, and from there to get warm, there are six people in my family, my mother, father, grandfather, grandmother, sister, and me. We live a happy life together, our house has many interesting stories, especially mom and dad.

My father works hard. He is a driver, he always do his best to handle each car, try to make them comfortable. Sometimes, he worked too hard to forget to date.

My mother is a very bad memory. She would do a lot of housework, but sometimes because of her carelessness while doing something wrong. For example, one day, she use the washing machine wash his clothes, and finally found himself forgot to water in the washing machine.

Now let me tell you a funny thing: one day, the father thought as usual to get up early, but because he doesnt set the alarm clock the day before yesterday, so he got up late, when he woke up, he hurried to brush my teeth wash my face and went off to work, my father left, mother said to me mysteriously, "he must be back in a moment." "Why?" I am very surprised. "Because today is Sunday, his holiday." Mom just then, a little later, my father came back, and went to bed again, because he is too tired.

You see, what an interesting family! I hope you have a family like me.

每个人都有家。我们大家生活在那里，并从那里获取温暖，我们家有六口人，我妈妈、爸爸、爷爷、奶奶、妹妹，还有我。我们在一起幸福地生活，我们家有许多有趣的故事，特别是爸爸妈妈。

我爸爸工作认真。他是一名司机，他总是尽他最大的努力去搬运每一车的东西，尽力使他们舒服。有的时候，他工作太认真以致于忘了日期。

我妈妈是一位记性很不好的人。她总是做很多家务活，但有时却因为她的粗心而做错事。比如说，有一天，她用洗衣机洗衣服，最后却发现自己忘了在洗衣机中放水。

现在让我告诉你一件有趣的事：一天，爸爸想像平时一样早起，但是由于他前天没有设置闹钟，所以他起晚了，当他起床时，他匆匆忙忙地刷牙洗脸就去上班了，爸爸离开后，妈妈神秘地对我说：“他一会儿一定回来的。”“为什么?”我十分惊讶。“因为今天是星期天，他的假日。”妈妈正说着的时候，不一会儿，爸爸就回来了，并且再次上床睡觉了——因为他太累了。

你瞧，多么有趣的家庭!我希望你也有一个像我一样的家庭。

As the development of modern technology, Smartphone has become quite popular all over the world with its outstanding functions. People can use phones to surf the Internet, update their personal micro blog, and upload their latest pictures at any place, anytime. It seems that smart phones have already become an indispensable part in peoples daily lives. However, some people are indulging in smart phones, which already have side-effect on their normal life.

Some people, especially teenagers, are easily fall for Smartphone for these reasons. First of all, nowadays, people are under great pressure, while cell phone provides a platform for people to relax themselves. By playing mini-games, vocal chatting with friends, watching movies and listening to music, people can easily forget their problems temporary. Second, there are always something new on the phone. It is can be interesting, mysterious and various. So people are eager to turn on their phones, want to know what is happening around them. When people spend too much time on the phones, they dont have enough chance to communicate with their friends or parents. Their attentions have been drawn away by the virtual world. Lack of good self-control, they are fragile to the smart phone addiction, while they supposed to focus on their study and work.

I think people should take smart phone addiction seriously. Quitting addiction needs time and patience. People should turn off their phones, go outside and communicate with others face to face. Do more exercise and form optimistic attitude towards life!

随着当代科技的迅速发展，智能手机以其卓越的功能风靡全球。人们可以在任何时间、任何地点用它来上网，更新个人微博，上传自己的最新照片。看起来智能手机已经成为人们生活中不可缺的一部分了。然而，有些人过渡沉迷于智能手机，以至于影响了正常生活。

一些人，特别是青少年，极容易被智能手机吸引。原因有这些：首先，当今社会人们压力很大，智能手机提供了一个给人们放松的平台。通过玩小游戏，与朋友语音聊天，看电影听音乐，人们很容易暂时忘记他们的烦恼。其二，手机上总有新鲜事。有趣的、神秘的、种类繁多的信息吸引着大家打开手机，去了解周围到底发生了什么。当人们花了太多的时间在手机上时，就没有足够的机会去与朋友父母聊天沟通。他们的注意力已被虚拟世界所吸引。缺乏好的自控能力，他们在手机成瘾面前弱不禁风。他们理应集中精力在学习和工作上的。

我认为人们应重视把智能手机成瘾症。戒掉它需要时间和耐心。人们应该关掉手机，走出家门与他人面对面的沟通交流。多做运动，培养乐观积极的心态!

A week ago， my best friend gave me a lovely cat. I love it very much. It is special. Its fur is black not yellow. So I call it little black. It has the same taste with me. We all like eating fish. So， after it comes to my home， nearly every meal will appear fish. I like playing with it. It always makes me laugh. Every morning， it will wake me up. It brings much happiness for me.

at the weekendsitssunday evening. the read families are at home. mr. read is watching tv. mrs. read is reading a book. ann is sitting at the desk and reading, too. shes doing her homework. her brother, tom, is sitting on the floor andmaking a kite. he is doing his homework, too. mimi is playing with something near tom. where is tom’s bird? oh, it’s near the window. it’s looking at tom and singing. they are having a good time.

cockroaches are the insects that frighten me the most. i wasnt afraid of them before, but now i cant stand them. it started when i was sleeping one day and smelled a disgusting odor. i discovered a dead cockroach under my body and its eggs on my pillow! i almost died! i jumped off my bed at once and took a bath quickly. the eperience made me hate cockroaches. what i find most disgusting is when i see a cockroach fly around the room. im always afraid that they m1ght land on me. hearing the sound of its wings makes me nervous and afraid. cockroaches pose a threat to our daily lives. a dirty environment will attract many cockroaches and this may threaten our health. they pollute food and water and bring many illnesses, such as dysentery and skin diseases. i cant help shivering at the sight of them.

Li Yangis my classmate. She is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on she way to school, she saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then Li Yang rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When Li Yang hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. She told the teacher why he was late.

旅游有关的小学英语作文四I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to beijing!

16 May 2006

Dear Mr. Williams,

Thank you for your letter of congratulation on my exam results. I was very pleased to hear from you. The results were a great relief. I did much better than I thought I would.

We are having a celebration party on Saturday 22 May and we shall be pleased if you can come. It is a party for me, but my parents and some of their old friends are joining in, so you will find

The party starts at half past six- drinks, and a buffet supper later. You said in your letter that youve given up driving, so my father will meet you with the car at San Mateo station. Please let me know what time your train arrives.

There is a good train back to San Palo at 10:30 and well arrange transport for you to catch that. I hope that wont be too late for you. It would be a pity if you had to leave while the party was still in full swing.I do hope that you will be able to come.

Yours sincerely,

Lily Chen

12 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for a British Council scholarship to study in Britain. I did my five years basic training in medicine at Shanghai University. After this I successfully completed a one-year postgraduate course in Ophthalmology at the Peoples General Hospital, where I am at present serving a two-year probation in the Eye Clinic.

As a result of the publication in 2003 of my article in New Scientist entitled "Soft and Rigid Contact Lenses ", which was based on a survey of 37 patients over 6 months, I made contact with Dr. Li Ming of the Capital Hospital and Dr. Ma Li of the University College Hospital. I have received their help and advice with my current research project, which is a two-year survey of the acceptance of various types of contact lenses in 200 patients.

Despite their help, I feel that I cannot make real progress in this field unless I can actually have day-to-day contact with these specialists. I would therefore like to continue my research at either the Capital Hospital or the UCH as soon as my probationary period here is completed, and I would like to study in Britain for two years.

I enclose a detailed curriculum vitae and an offprint of my article, together with two letters of recommendation from Dr. Li Ming and Dr. Ma Li.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

Autumn to a field after the autumn rain, the fruit of the orchard mature. When I walked into the orchard, I was attracted to the fruit.

The first thing that catches my eyes is yellow pears. Look, that pear tree hanging a pear, like a gourd! A gust of wind blowing, pear shook his head, naughty you squeeze me touch, as if to say: "Come pick me! I am sweet and sweet "I finally could not help temptation, hand to pick one, but I did not pick, because I could not bear.

Go through the pear tree, I came to the banana tree, saw a tree banana tree sturdy tall and straight. A string of bananas hidden in the leaves, like the children of the month, like a fishermans boat, like my fathers sickle, like our children playing the "roundabout", but also like the fairy tale dwarf side by side in the cradle The I want to pick a string, but my mother said: "Only pick the banana can not eat, must go home to cover their yellow to eat."

The fruit of the orchard is so beautiful that the fruit of the orchard is too fragrant, and the feet of many children are painted, and they are sketched under the fruit trees, pick up the leaves, or eat the fruit. See all this, full of apples are laughing red face, persimmon tree also hung a red lantern.

This beautiful autumn orchard, I love you, could not bear to leave, really want to put the home here.