小学英语作文常见错误【经典20篇】

太阳在蔚蓝的天空中发出万道金光，天气格外好，可是我的心情却好像遭到了晴天霹雳一般，一直愁眉苦脸的······

就在数学课上，数学老师叫全班同学做数学书上的课堂作业，大家看了看都认为很简单，纷纷翻开了数学本，自信满满地奋笔疾书，但前提是必须改正完昨天家庭作业的错误，我就是家庭作业有错误的其中一员，等我修正完毕后，有许多的同学都已经完成了课堂作业，这不得不让我有了些紧迫感，这才马马虎虎地把课堂作业潦潦草草地写完了，就在我准备把作业拿去给数学老师批改，这才发现我做错了一道题，急忙转过身走下讲台拿笔修改时，却被吴老师一声叫住了，我回过头去，数学老师皱着眉头凶巴巴地对我说：“十遍。”我疑惑地看着数学老师，“把作业抄写十遍”，数学老师不耐烦地解释道“明知道自己做错了题，还笑，回去，抄十遍。”我很不服气，心想：我天生一副笑嘻嘻的模样，这叫天生开朗，怎么一到你这里就是不严肃，还要受到惩罚，真是的。

突然，我不知是从哪儿里来的勇气，居然对着数学老师说：“我没有因为做错题就笑。”这时全班同学都用眼睛在对我说着“你完蛋了”这几个字，的确，数学老师彻底被我激怒了，用那震耳欲聋的声音对我说：“那你这是责怪我错怪你咯，那请同学们评评理，你到底笑没有笑!······”我的脸一下子变得通红、炽热起来，真想找个洞钻进去，我实在忍不住了，眼泪在眼眶里打转最后从脸颊上滑落下来，这下数学老师就像一头没捉到小羊的大灰狼，十分可怕：“你还要哭是不是，唉，你们都不准去安慰她，回去。”这下我哭得更厉害了，更不知所措，“你，下课后到我办公室来一趟。”数学老师十分严肃的对我怒吼道。

在办公室里，数学老师告诉我，做人就要踏实不能马虎，以后不准与老师犟嘴，课堂是严肃的地方，开朗也要选对地方，不能不分场合时间地胡乱开朗，这样只会弄巧成拙······从办公室回来以后，我终于理解了老师，也知道了自己错误的地方。

天空还是依然耀眼，但今天的我与昨天的我心态不同，我告诉自己要坚强，永远记住这个深刻的错误。不要让昨天的泪水打湿了今天的阳光。

英语字母教学作为英语学习的基础，是小学英语教学中重要一环，这一阶段的教学，教师应给予足够的重视，通过各种教学组织形式使这一阶段的学习得以很好的落实。学好26个字母对以后单词的学习起着至关重要的作用。因此，在学习字母阶段，我们要利用一切可利用的资源，创设情境，让学生和字母交朋友、做游戏。

一、字母读音教学

1. 注重示范发音的正确性

字母发音直接影响着学生单词的发音，而且学生错误的发音一旦形成就很难再纠正。因此教师在教学字母之前一定要多听录音，纠正好自己的发音。在课堂教学中教师要让学生听磁带跟读，观察他们的口形，并鼓励模仿得好的学生示范领读，帮助其他同学纠正发音。

2. 把握学生的发音难点

受各地方方言的影响，学生对字母的发音往往会出错。比如：南方人容易把A读成/e/。因此，教师要把握好学生方言发音难点，预先采取各种教学方法防止错误发音的出现。

3. 强化个别字母教学

尽管许多学生对字母有了一定程度的掌握，但大多数学生都没有进行过系统的字母学习，中间难免存在着许多似是而非的现象。例如学生对GgJj两个字母的读音容易混淆，对Uu和Ii这两个字母的发音不到位。教师在教学中应针对这种情况加强这几个字母的训练。

4. 注重读音归类教学

把字母按读音进行分类是字母读音教学的一个重要任务，也是学生觉得有一定难度的一项内容。为了使学生能更好得掌握，教师可采用分家游戏的方法，按家族将26个字母进行分类记忆。首先将字母划分为七个家族，再对号入座，最终编成一首音素家族chant 帮助学生记忆：

A、H、J、K 是A 家族，A，A是族长。

E的家族有八位，BCDE，GPTV，E，E是族长。

/e/ 的家族没有族长，它的成员有七位，FLMN，SX 和Z。

U 的家族有三位，UQW，U，U是族长。

I 的家族有两位，IY，I，I是族长。(手势指着自己)

R 和O单独住，它们自己是族长。

5. 注重语音暗线的铺垫

在三年级下册学生用书中，字母读音和字母例词的安排是一条语音暗线，教师教学时要努力让学生掌握字母的正确读音，并初步感知字母在例词中的读音，为以后学习语音奠定基础。比如讲到字母Ee时，例词是egg，elepghant，教师可突出字母E的发音。英语有48个国际音标，如果学生能在学习 26个字母的同时掌握与此相关的26个音素，将会为以后的语音学习打好基础。

二、字母书写教学

字母的书写过程要一步步进行：先观察性状，再观察笔顺、占格情况，然后书空，使用活动手册进行描红，最后达到仿写。

1. 字母认读的教学

字母的书写首先要求学生能正确区分一些形近的字母。有些字母可以通过猜谜的方法让学生记住它们的形状特点。例如：弯弯的月牙(C)、一条小蛇 (S)、三叉路口(T)、1加3(B)、一座宝塔(A)、胜利的象征(V)、大号鱼钩(J)、一张弓(D)、一扇小门(n)、一棵小苗(r)、一把椅子 (h)。这些谜语既能让学生记住字母的形，又能激发学生的学习兴趣。同时，还可以让学生自编谜语学习字母，充分发挥学生的想象能力。另外，还可以将字母的一部份遮住，让学生根据漏出来部分来猜字母。

2. 字母书写的教学

字母的书写是小学生的一个薄弱环节。小学的英语书写一定要求学生做到严格遵照书写规范，教师绝对不能马虎。因为英语字母有印刷体和书写体之分，所以容易使学生在书写时发生混淆，教师在教学时应多在这方面进行强调。

(1)笔顺教学

教师要充分利用多媒体设施让学生仔细观察字母的笔画和笔顺。正确的笔顺在活动手册的描红练习中有正确的示范。但有时学生会受到汉语拼音笔顺的影响，错误书写字母，因此教师要对容易出错的笔顺进行比较细致的指导。如i和j都是后加点，t先写钩，H先两竖等。建议教师不妨采用汉语拼音的教法，使用一些形象的比喻，帮助学生理解记忆书写规则，防止笔画出错。比如：H是一双筷子拴根线，j是海豹顶皮球，i是小海狮头上顶个球，t是伞把带开关等。

(2)格式教学

字母的占格同样是字母书写教学中的一个教学难点，尤其是当字母的大小写混在一起的时候，学生很容易混淆。这样，教师要先清楚示范，提醒学生注意并总结字母占格的规律。同时，教师还可以借助儿歌帮助学生掌握字母的占格规律。如：英语书写，四线三格，大写字母一二格，上不顶线是原则;小写字母认准格，上面有 ‘辫’一二格，下面有‘尾’二三格，无‘辫’无‘尾’中间格;i，t中上一格半。在学生掌握了字母的占格规律后，还要通过活动手册上的描红来加强练习。这里要注意的是，到一定阶段的时候，教师要让学生能在没有四线格的一条线上，甚至是没有任何线的白纸上也能正确地表示出字母的书写格式。

三、操练

字母操练我们还可以采用游戏的形式。

1. What’s missing?游戏

学了几个字母以后，把字母卡片放在一起让学生认读，然后抽去其中的一张，让学生寻找：What’s missing?此时，学生注意力高度集中，急于表现自己，识记的效果就会很好。

2. 左邻右舍游戏

学生准备好已经学过的字母卡片，教师出示一个字母，让学生找出它的左邻右舍，请找到的几个学生快速把字母拿到讲台上站在相应的位置上，其余的学生一起认读这几个字母。

3. Make letters游戏

让学生用肢体动作表示不同的字母，或让学生用火柴棒拼出不同字母的形状。

Today is December 25, 2015. I am going to give the Christmas CARDS to my classmates in my schoolbag.

I dont know which classmate went to search my bag, the classmate of my schoolbag cried out: "wow. What a beautiful Christmas card." This voice has attracted many students. At the time, I was angry, but I felt that it was the happiest time to share Christmas with my classmates.

In the end, I distributed the Christmas CARDS to my classmates, and some also gave them to me.

Ah. Today is my happiest day.

今天是2015年12月25日，我准备送给同学们的圣诞卡还藏在书包里。

不知道哪位同学去搜我的书包的时候，搜我的书包的那个同学大叫一声：“哇。好漂亮的圣诞卡。”这一声，招引来了很多同学。当时，我很生气，但是我又觉得，和同学们一起分享圣诞节这个时候，是最快乐的时刻。

最后，我还是把圣诞卡分给了同学们，还有一些也送了给我。

啊。今天是我最快乐的一天。

it has been 2 days since i didnt come here and write my diary.today is the totally holiday for the first time. i got so much fun.i went to meet a friend who i didnt know before.she is my colleges girlfriend in the future.hehe.but unfortunately, when we get there,she wasnt there.we got a little depress .

im recieved a lot of messages from many friends unkonwn.here,im wanna say thanks to all of you and your supporting.because i am lazy, so sometimes i cant find the right time to read your diarys,and leave some message to show my support,hope you will not think me slefish.thats all today.thanks to all of you.

Hello,everybody.大家好

My names( ).我的名字叫（ ）

Im in Class( )Grade six of( )school.我在（ ）学校6年级（）班级

Im tall(short).Im ( )centimeters.我很高（矮），我（）厘米。

I like English very much.我非常喜欢英语

Beacuse English is interesting.因为英语很有趣。

So my English is very good.所以，我的英语很好。

I acquire many award.我获得过很多奖项。

I hope that every of you will love me。希望大家能喜欢我。

Then, the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken.

They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwitted. He shouted our, "The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn." The hall After that, they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there, the other three stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right:"The dog stands out among a group of chickens."

一、材料：李芳也来参加毕业考试了，同学们都感到意外，她能这样做真不容易啊！

要来：根据提供的材料自拟文题，抓住“感到意外”“这样做真不容易”展开合理想象，写一篇400字左右的记叙文，要把事情的起因、经过写具体。

二、(一) 六年的小学生活即将结束。回顾这六年的生活，你一定会有许多感慨，或高兴，或得意，或自豪，或遗憾，或后悔，或困惑如果你能再做一回小学生，你将会怎样呢？请你以《如果，我能再做一回小学生》为题，写一篇文章。

(二) “尝试”也就是试一试，这是非常有意思的实践活动。它可能成功，也可能失败。然而，不管怎样，它都会使你有所发现，有所感悟。请选取你在生活中曾经历的一次尝试，把题目《那是一次()的尝试》补充完整，写一篇记叙文。

要求：1、从以上两题中任选一题完成。

2、内容具体，感情真，语句通顺，有一定的条理。

三、根据下面所给的词语，编个故事，不少于400字。 考场 小白兔 山坡 指南针 狐狸

四、你们家的星期天都是怎么过的，选择一个你最愿意写的星期天，写出来。注意在叙事的过程中写出你和家人的感受。

要把内容写具体，语句写通顺。

五、生活中，我们一天天在长大，懂得了孝敬父母，懂得了珍惜幸福请你写一写成长过程中懂得的某一种生活道理。题目自拟，字数400以上。

六、题目：可爱的＿＿＿＿＿＿

要求：先补充完整题目，可以填人或小动物，如“表弟、表妹、小猫、小狗”等，然后按一定顺序写出人或小动物的可爱，做到语句通顺，内容具体。

七、给自己的幼儿园老师写一封信，汇报你几年来的变化。要求重点介绍一、二个方面，注意选择合适的语言。 要求：审清题目，重点写一件事情，将经过写具体。

九、我们玩得真快活

要求：1．按照事情的发展顺序，抓住重点写。

2．注意写出快活的情感。

十、题目：告诉你一件新鲜事

要求：选材要新颖，按事情发展顺序写，条理清楚，结构完整，字数400个以上。

十一、1．写作知识。

(1)把括号里不正确的部分用“／”线划去，留下唯一正确的一个。

①《我的同桌刘兵》这篇作文应重点写（我 刘兵）。②在一篇文章里，有的内容在前面讲过了，后面又交代一

下，这种写法叫做（前后照应 承上启下）它可以使文章前后联系紧密。

(2)《春游南山》这篇作文应该选择哪些材料来写。选择最适合的3个材料，把序号填在括号里。（ ）（ ）（ ）①天亮起床、梳洗、作准备。

②集队候车近一小时。

③沿途所见、所闻、所感。

④来到南山公园门口，顿觉秀色欲流。

⑤按游览顺序描写南山美景。

⑥一个同学不慎跌倒，手擦破了点皮。

⑦登到山顶，极目远眺，不忍离去。

⑧回来的路上，同学们有些疲劳，多数人在车上睡着了。”

2．看图作文。仔细观察图画，把看到的内容想象成一件事具体地写下来。中心是老师同学之间相互关心。要求叙述有条理，有详有略，语句通顺，不写错别字，正确使用标点符号。（题目自拟）全文不少于350个字。

十二、他（她）这样做不好

提示：写别人做过的一件事，要把事情经过写清楚，并写出自己的看法或想法。

要求：（1）中心明确，内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（2）字数在500字左右。

十三、我这堂课

要求：从“喜欢”、“不喜欢”、“讨厌”中选择一个填在横线上，然后按题作文。要求写成记叙文，要交代清楚是一堂什么课，以及这堂课的内容和感受。

十四、温暖

要求：（1）写一件表现人与人之间真诚关心帮助的事。

（2）内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（3）文章在400字以上。

十五、那件事，我总忘不了

要求：要有具体内容，有中心，有条理，有真情实感；注意前后照应，语句通顺，字体工整，会用学过的标点符号。 十六、再见了，老师

提示：六年的小学生活中，有许多往事历历在目，有许多心里的话想要倾吐。请你选择一件或几件事，围绕一个中心，向老师诉说你毕业前夕的心里话。

十七、 愉快的一天

要求：（1）选择一天中的一两个事例来写。

（2）中心明确，叙事具体。

（3）450字左右。

十八、我学会了

要求：（1）先审清题意，再从学习、劳动、文体活动或其他方面选择一件事来写。

（2）要围绕中心，按事情的发展顺序有条理地、具体地写

出学的过程和心情。

（3）500字左右。

十九、 想起这件事，我就

要求：（1）把题目补充完整。

（2）中心明确，内容具体，条理清楚，语句通顺。

（3）字数在450字左右。

二十、 我得到了

要求：（1）在横线上填上一个适当的词语，如“表扬”、“锻炼”、“理解”、“教育”、“关心”、“教训”等，把题目补充完整。

（2）通过一件事来写。注意围绕中心把事情的经过写具体，做到语句通顺，前后连贯。

（3）450字左右。

二十一、真了不起

提示：在我们现实生活中，有许多有能耐、有特长的人，请你围绕“了不起”选择二、三件事，把人物的本领叙述下来。注意人物动作、语言及心理的描写。

二十二、不做“小皇帝”了； 小帮手； 妈妈笑了 （任选一题）

材料：今天是星期天，爸爸、妈妈不在家，我决心抓住这个机会锻炼一下自己。我克服了不少困难，洗衣、做饭爸爸、妈妈回来了，看到这情景

Here is a difference between science and technology.Science is a method of

answering theoretical questions; technology is a method of solving practical

problems. Science has to do with discovering the facts and relationships between

observable phenomena in nature and with establishing theories that serve to

organize these facts and relationships; technology has to do with

tools,techniques, and procedures for implementing the findings of science.

Another distinction between science and technology has to do with the

progress in each. Progress in science excludes the human factor. Scientists, who

seek to comprehend the universe and know the truth with the highest degree of

accuracy and certainty, cannot pay heed to their own or other peoples likes or

dislikes, or to popular ideas about the fitness of things. What scientists

discover may shock or anger people--as did Darwins theory of evolution. But

even an unpleasant truth is more than likely to be useful; besides, we have the

option of refusing to believe it! But hardly so with technology;we do not have

the option of refusing to hear the sonic boom produced by a supersonic

aircraft-flying overhead; we do not have the option of refusing to breathe

polluted air. Unlike science, progress in technology must be our slave and not

the reverse. The legitimate purpose of technology is to serve peopie--people in

general, not merely some people; and future generations, not merely those who

presently wish to gain advantage for themselves.

We are all familiar with the abuses of technology. Many people blame

technology itself for widespread pollution, resource depletion and even social

decay in general--so much so that the promise of technology is obscured. That

promise is a cleaner and healthier world. If wise applications of science and

technology do not lead to a better world, what else will?

【摘要】考研英语作文的评分，首先关注的就是单词、句子、格式的正确性。因此，在作文的复习中，不能只关注高端句型，正确的格式也是不容忽视的。

写作格式错误主要包括题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。

题目的写法

题目是首先映入读者眼帘的，所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离，即比正文行距稍宽一些。

其次，要注意题目的大小写，实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词（但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如：

跳动的心（例子）

误：Attitudes Toward Money

正：Attitudes toward Money

文章的格式

1、四边留空：卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观，给人以清晰、明快的感觉。

2、空格：文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格（一般缩进4-6个字节）。

大小写方面的错误

在考研文章的评改过程中，有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷，这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说，大写规则有以下几条：

1、大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母

如：He said,He is going to Shanghai next week.

2、大写专有名词，或用作专有名词的部分普通名词，通常是缩略形式

如：DrG .G . East

3、大写缩写字母

如：MPA ,MBA ,BBC

4、文章标题要大写

5、头衔在专有名词前要大写，在专有名词后就小写

例如：Captain SmithSmith, the captain；Uncle GeorgeGeorge ,my uncle

标点符号

考生在写文章时，一定要注意正确使用标点符号，切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法，尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。

三段式作文注意事项

1、作文卷面要保持整洁，不要连笔，不要涂改，这是获取印象分的重点。很多考生由于在考场过于紧张导致作文的单词老是写错，这是致命伤啊，会直接让你越写越没感觉就越没信心了，所以平常要加强练笔！

2、全文的第一句和各段的第一句必须是文章的中心句，最好能用复杂句表达。这是因为阅卷老师一般没有那么多的时间去看作文，所以只能大概浏览下各段的首句，这是获得高分的关键。

3、全文结构布局：全文分为三段，第一段3句，第二段5句，第三段4句，可根据具体情况调整。段落中，第一句是topic ，第二三句是detail ，第三句是conclusion 。

另外为了方便大家学习，提高复习的效率。小编为广大学子整理了考研技巧和考试大纲，更有历年真题提供测试等等。针对每一个科目进行深度的探讨和技巧挖掘。欢迎各位考研的同学进行了解和资讯。考研的痛苦是难免的,不要丧失信心,坚信苦尽甘来。预祝各位学子取得成功！

[考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误

英语念起来干枯无聊，我偶尔往前面望去，有一排同学没事可做，竟然搞起敢死队的工作——在英语老师的眼皮子底下看漫画书，晕。更为巧合的是――竟然都是坐在一排的人！怀疑是不是串通好了的呢。

敢死队员1号：小心翼翼型

这位队员一边看着书，一边虎视耽耽地望着老师。瞧，他刚翻一页，就抬头看看老师，接着又翻一页，然后有抬头望望老师，这样重复循环，真不知道他把内容看进去没有。看见老师的目光没有扫向他，他赶紧抓住机会连翻几页，然后突然抬头，盯着老师。

敢死队员2号：动作怪怪型

这位队员可有点怪了，看着书，一会儿掏掏鼻子，一会儿打打哈欠，一会儿摸摸耳朵，一副惟恐天下不乱的样子，好像不让老师发现他的举动就不甘心似的，真是个怪人。

敢死队员3、4号：谈天说地型

这两位同学有些不把老师放在眼里了，边看书边聊天。我隐隐约约听见他们说冒险岛OL，说漫画内容，说小说，说娱乐咨询，就连老师和同学的目光扫向他们，也无济于事。

敢死队员5号：边学边看型

这位同学好像有些明白学习的重要性，看了几分钟的书，马上立起来听老师的讲课。课上一半时，老师为了扫查班上的敢死队，把同学们一个叫起一个问问题。这下可让这群敢死队员们开始惶恐不安了，他们连书都顾不着看呢。而这位队员呢，看一会儿就学学，这一招算是对他的MISS了。

敢死队员6号：理直气壮型

这位同学可是班上的霸王级分子了（注：别乱想，不是我啊），他可是一人之下，几十人之上，谁敢对他不敬，他的落雷马上就落在你头上了，（注：我已经欠了他3顿打了，要不是我能帮他弄电脑作业，我早就魂飞天了）因此每人敢告发他。不知是她的好运还是老师放水，他这样看了一堂课，竟然都没半点被批评，真太不公平了！！

谁知道，老师从天而降，为了抓住敢死分子，居然来个背后突袭，到所有座位后边地毯式搜索。5名敢死队员唰地一声，在同一时间内放下书，装起乖乖。只有敢死队员6号稳如泰山，而老师的目光明明瞄准了他，可老师却好像在放水一样，竟纵容他在自己眼皮子底下活动，真气死人了！而其他5位的敢死队员便无机可乘，只好乖乖停课，唯独6号占了便宜。

22 October 2004

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the post of Works Manager, which was advertised in The Guardian of I2 October 2004. I feel that my qualifications and experience are ideally suited for the position.

I was born in 1968, and I went to school from 1973 to 1988. In 1987 I took the General Certificate of Education, and I got good grades in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. After leaving school, I attended the Orient Technical College, where I first studied Fiber Technology and Color Chemistry; later I studied other subjects related to textile manufacture, and in 1991 I obtained the Diploma in Textiles.

After completing my studies, I joined the Top Clothing Company where I worked until 1996. In that year I moved to Prior Productions, who was pleased with my work, and as a result, in 1998, I was promoted to Assistant Works Manager there.

I enjoy my work, and I am prepared to work hard. Moreover, I am sure that Prior Productions would give me an excellent reference. I therefore feel that my application deserves your serious consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Ma

spring is the first season of a year . there are there months in spring : morch , april and may , the weather is warm and windy . it rains a lot . the trees turn green and all the flowers are coming ont . in spring, i can wear my shirts . i often plant trees and go hiking . so i like spring very much . of course , i like the spring festival , too .

My Spring Festival plan

I&rsqu; ging t Shenzhen t see grandther and uncle&rsqu;s fail. I&rsqu; ging t pla with brther. And then I&rsqu; ging there t get luc ne. I&rsqu; ging t the cinea t see the fil 《Superan》with fail. And I&rsqu; ging t learn English with uncle&rsqu;s wife. I&rsqu; ging t have fun there.

I thin this will be the best Spring Festival.

I have a beautiful school.

In the spring,the weather become warmer and warmer.And the trees become green.Some birds are singing on the trees.The flowers are open.Some butterflies are fly over the flowers.In the fall,the weather is windy.The leaves of trees like butterflies are in the sky.

What a beautiful school is!I like my school.

My hometown is a prosperous and beautiful city, it is located in the south of the motherland, hot and cool guangxi province, it is also a small city - jingxi.

It is rich in fruit, and many of the fruits in wuhan, such as durian and shanzhu, may cost more than 50 yuan in wuhan, while in jingxi, it may be only 25 yuan.

The scenery there was beautiful too. Once, we went to a place called tongling grand canyon. When we reached our destination, the night was already deep, and we soon fell asleep.

In the morning, the veil of light mist over the city, we went out.

The scenery here really startled me. The ancient trees were so beautiful that we walked in. The flowery pavilion is gorgeous in our sight.

The grand canyon was big, and we walked for a long time to reach the waterfall. When the water comes down, it stirs a thousand waves.

We went back to the secret road. It was a natural air-conditioner!

After coming home, I had been thinking about the grand canyon for a long time, unable to sleep.

If you come here, will you go to the grand canyon? Its so beautiful, so spectacular, I think you cant miss it.

There are many beautiful and magnificent scenery in my hometown. Welcome to visit here!

December 25, Christmas day, is a foreigners New Year.

But I also had a happy Christmas, and my mother bought me a toy that I had been thinking about for a long time, a remote control plane. I was stunned when I received the gift. Because my mother had never promised to buy me before, it may be that I have done my homework these days to be more conscious, and I am very happy.

12月25日，是圣诞节，是外国人的新年。

但是我也过了快乐的圣诞节，妈妈给我买了我想了很久的玩具，一架遥控飞机。我收到礼物的时候，我都愣住了。因为妈妈以前从来都没有答应过给我买，可能是我这几天做作业比较自觉，才奖励我的，我开心极了。

myname is wu yuwei .i’m 13 years old. i’m a chinese girl .i study in inqi primaryschool.i’m in class 3,grade 6. i’min row 3. i have many friends in class.for eample, che lei is my best friend . she is 13 yearsold , too. she is a good girl. weoften help each other.there are fourpeople in my family .they are my father, mother, sister and me .my parentsare formers . they work hard. my sister is a student . i love themand they love me ,too.

I am Happy

Today， the biology class is very different. We don’t need to sit in the

classroom， because the teacher takes us to do activities. We go to a field that

is near our school， and the task for us is to observe flowers. We feel so

excited and finish the task very carefully. It is a good way for us to learn

knowledge. I am so happy.

今天，生物课与平时不太一样，我们不需要在教室里面坐着，因为老师带我们去做活动。我们来到学校附近的一片田野上，我们的任务是观察花朵。我们非常激动，也非常认真地完成这项任务。这是一个学习知识的好方法。我很开心。

Everyone has a family. We all live in there, and from there to get warm, there are six people in my family, my mother, father, grandfather, grandmother, sister, and me. We live a happy life together, our house has many interesting stories, especially mom and dad.

My father works hard. He is a driver, he always do his best to handle each car, try to make them comfortable. Sometimes, he worked too hard to forget to date.

My mother is a very bad memory. She would do a lot of housework, but sometimes because of her carelessness while doing something wrong. For example, one day, she use the washing machine wash his clothes, and finally found himself forgot to water in the washing machine.

Now let me tell you a funny thing: one day, the father thought as usual to get up early, but because he doesnt set the alarm clock the day before yesterday, so he got up late, when he woke up, he hurried to brush my teeth wash my face and went off to work, my father left, mother said to me mysteriously, "he must be back in a moment." "Why?" I am very surprised. "Because today is Sunday, his holiday." Mom just then, a little later, my father came back, and went to bed again, because he is too tired.

You see, what an interesting family! I hope you have a family like me.

每个人都有家。我们大家生活在那里，并从那里获取温暖，我们家有六口人，我妈妈、爸爸、爷爷、奶奶、妹妹，还有我。我们在一起幸福地生活，我们家有许多有趣的故事，特别是爸爸妈妈。

我爸爸工作认真。他是一名司机，他总是尽他最大的努力去搬运每一车的东西，尽力使他们舒服。有的时候，他工作太认真以致于忘了日期。

我妈妈是一位记性很不好的人。她总是做很多家务活，但有时却因为她的粗心而做错事。比如说，有一天，她用洗衣机洗衣服，最后却发现自己忘了在洗衣机中放水。

现在让我告诉你一件有趣的事：一天，爸爸想像平时一样早起，但是由于他前天没有设置闹钟，所以他起晚了，当他起床时，他匆匆忙忙地刷牙洗脸就去上班了，爸爸离开后，妈妈神秘地对我说：“他一会儿一定回来的。”“为什么?”我十分惊讶。“因为今天是星期天，他的假日。”妈妈正说着的时候，不一会儿，爸爸就回来了，并且再次上床睡觉了——因为他太累了。

你瞧，多么有趣的家庭!我希望你也有一个像我一样的家庭。

Although the winter holiday is very short, but we cant play because of the

winter vacation short and follow ones inclinations, should be playing at the

same time not forget to study combining exertion and rest.

Gorky once said that "books are the ladder of human progress" in peacetime

because learning busy and have no spare time to read reference books. Winter

holiday is coming now, we just can use the time to read reference books.

"Has its own gold room in the book, the book has its own treasure to", so I

decided to use this holiday season more than look at the name of the ancient and

modern, Chinese and foreign. Not only that I also want to consolidate the

knowledge of this semester, prepare the knowledge of the next semester. I hope

next semester moved on. Learning to lay a foundation for the next semester.

In the spare time to complete the teacher and parents the assignment, look

at news concerned state affairs. In the time of the Spring Festival is not only

to watch the Spring Festival gala, will eat dinner, visiting friends and

relatives.

After the Spring Festival to loose heart a accept, to start put your heart

in learning, the work can not continue to play. To the teacher and the school

the assignment check check is done. Again next semester need to information and

exercises will be ready.

This is my winter holiday life, my winter vacation I make decision.

I love my campus, the beautiful campus.

In school, teaching building eight golden characters on the wall are greeted, "harmonious, bold and unrestrained, exploration, innovation", this is the school motto of our school.

Right, foot on the way with the stones of cobblestone, unknowingly came to the gallery. Corridors, greeted the vine climb to the top of gallery to for students to keep out the sun. The class was over, the students all like to play here. The park has a small bamboo forest, spring, small bamboo forests of bamboo shoots crowds of his head.

Go further to the right, it is the playground of school. Have children in the rope skipping, running on the playground... there are a large camphor tree, spring, pulled out big camphor tree buds, summer big camphor tree is like a big green umbrella, to shade the students. In winter, at school, large camphor tree was covered with snow, like a big white hat. Big camphor tree is very charming all the year round, the classmates all like to go there to play, after gym class. Big camphor tree is like a kindly grandfather, to meet us to school every day, has watched the us to leave.

Campus, in the most distinctive is the teaching building of the hall, walked into the hall, the most noteworthy is that hung on the hall on top of the "west", "west" with photo is miyoshi students, the teacher I hope we can spread your wings and fly like a bird.

A circle around the school, you should be familiar with my campus is a bit, then please come to my school to watch!

我爱我的校园，这个美丽的校园。

走进校门，教学楼墙上的八个金光闪闪的大字映入眼帘，“和谐、奔放、探究、创新”，这是我们学校的校训。

向右走，脚踩在用一颗颗鹅卵石铺成的石子路上，不知不觉来到了长廊。长廊里，密密麻麻的藤攀上了廊顶，为同学们遮挡太阳。下课了，同学们都喜欢到这里玩。公园里有一片小竹林，春天到了，小竹林里的笋成群的探出头来。

再往右走，便是学校的操场。有小朋友在跳绳、跑步······操场上还有一棵大樟树，春天，大樟树抽出来新芽，夏天大樟树像一把绿色的大伞，为同学们遮阳。冬天，下学了，大樟树上盖满了雪，就像一顶巨大的白帽子。大樟树一年四季都非常迷人，同学们上完体育课时都喜欢去那儿玩耍、嬉戏。大樟树就像一位慈祥的老爷爷，每天迎接我们上学，有目送着我们离开。

校园里，最有特色的要数教学楼里的大厅了，走进大厅，最引人注意的是那挂在厅顶上的“西子鸟”，“西子鸟”上贴的都是三好学生的照片，老师希望我们能像小鸟一样展翅飞翔。

绕了学校一圈，你应该对我的校园有点熟悉了吧，那么就请来我的学校细细观赏吧!