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321高中期末考试英语写作技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点,要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章,非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达,我们可以看出,高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置,要求考生总结自己的感受和见解,给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式,因此,我们不得不重视。
第一步,写作的内容,要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心,基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目,要求写暑假的安排,是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求,第一要提出讨论话题,Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点,然后是另一方面的观点,最后提出自己的看法,根据要求缺一不可,否则就会被扣掉相应的分数,这就是完整。再比如,2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事,不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程,还应该根据要求点名寓意,否则也是不完整,这点只要在课堂上强调,学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关,也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息,不能过分发挥,一般学生犯此类错误的较少。
第二步,写作中的语法。在阅卷中,一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分,一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以,学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调,对于语法基础薄弱的同学,除了加强自己的语法功底外,就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确,而且一定是高考中的有效得分点,即使语法偏弱,记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误,一举两得。比如,倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用,但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果,所以我会给出四组倒装句,然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括:
1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.
2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.
4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.
第三步,连接词的运用,使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类,叫做“畅词”,往往学生由于中西方语言的差异,会忽视这一点,所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写,还写出高水平的畅词,因为高考是选拔性考试,要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如,“首先”这个表示次序的畅词,一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”,绝大部分启用but, however,我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。
第四步,也是整个课程的核心部分,要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识,在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分,其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子,如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此,我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型,不是说全部必须高级,而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中,我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”,通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解,学生会感觉成绩的快速提升,效果明显。
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+ 加入清单I was born in an ordinary family, but the love my parents gave me made me
feel that I was the happiest girl in the world. Before I went to middle school,
my parents decided to let me live in the hometown, where I spent the good time.
I was surrounded by green trees and clean water. Every day, I would play funny
games with my friends. When I went to middle school, I left hometown and moved
to the city to live with my parents. I needed to focus my attention to study.
Every night, my father would check my homework and if I had questions, he would
help me to solve them. My mother always made delicious dessert for us. When I
finished homework, we ate them together and talked happily. I had the good time
of my childhood.
篇2:小学六年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单Dear Wei Fang,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇3:六年级语文期末考试
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+ 加入清单我的家乡在嘉定的马陆。那是一个风景如画、葡香四溢的地方。每年七月底,葡萄园内挂满了密匝匝是葡萄,就似一座座珍珠塔,一堆堆翡翠,让慕名而来的游客望而惊叹!
暑假里的一天,阳光明媚。我早早地和爷爷来到了美丽的美丽葡萄主题公园,参加一年一度的葡萄节。一进园,凉风习习,一阵阵葡萄香就迎面而来,甜甜的,好闻极了!随着香味,我们来到了葡萄架下。只见一串串葡萄如翡翠玛瑙似的,展现在我们眼前,紫红的、情侣档、淡黄的……我们的眼睛看得都快花了。“黑加仑,水晶,巨峰……”一个个地念出了它们的名字。尤其是“水晶”葡萄,那可是我的最爱!长长地的,绿绿的,晶莹透明的。真像是用水晶和玉石雕刻出来的。
参观完葡萄,我们来到了一个大草坪上。哈哈!那里正在举行“吃葡萄”比赛呢!我毫不犹豫地举手参加了。比赛是一对一淘汰赛。我的对手是一个大哥哥。大哥哥看看我,昂着头说“小家伙,我一定能赢你!”我握了握拳头“嘻嘻,吃葡萄可是最拿手的哦!鹿死谁手,还不一定哦!”果然,出乎他的意料,我以48:41的优势大获全胜……
不过随着比赛的继续,我的小肚子终于抗议,吃得太饱了,结果输给了一个叔叔。正当我垂头丧气的时候,叔叔鼓励我说:没关系,小朋友。输赢不重要!只要努力了,开心就好,葡萄好吃吧!”哈哈,草地上传来了一阵阵愉悦的笑声。最后,还去品尝了“葡萄”水饺,真是一绝啊!哎呦,我的肚子又在抗议了……
快乐的时光总是那么短暂,离开了葡萄园。我依依不舍地结束了这次葡萄节游玩。明年我肯定还会再来的!带上我的同学,我的老师,让他们也来品尝品尝我家乡的美味葡萄!棒极了!
篇4:精选高一上学期英语期末考试话题作文
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+ 加入清单Topic one:Environment Protection(环境保护)
Water Pollution
With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.
We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.
Environment Protection
Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.
Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.
For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.
Forest Pretention保护森林
篇5:小学六年级关于五一劳动节英语作文
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+ 加入清单国际劳动节又称“五一国际劳动节”、“国际示威游行日”,是世界上大多数国家的劳动节。定在每年的五月一日。它是全世界无产阶级、劳动人民的共同拥有的节日。
International Labor Day is also called "the five one international Labour Day", "International Day", is the worlds labor day in most countries. On May 1st of each year. It is the world proletariat, the working people have holiday.
五一国际劳动节源于美国芝加哥城的工人大罢工。1886年5月1日,芝加哥的二十一万六千余名工人为争取实行八小时工作制而举行大罢工,经过艰苦的流血斗争,终于获得了胜利。为纪念这次伟大的工人运动,1889年7月第二国际宣布将每年的五月一日定为国际劳动节。这一决定立即得到世界各国工人的积极响应。1890年5月1日,欧美各国的工人阶级率先走向街头,举行盛大的示威游行与集会,争取合法权益。从此,每逢这一天世界各国的劳动人民都要集会、游行,以示庆祝。中国心!
The workers International WorkersDay source in Chicago city USA strike. In May 1, 1886, Chicago of 20 workers for the implementation of the eight hour working day strike held, after a bloody struggle, finally achieved victory. To commemorate the great labor movement, in 1889 July Second International declared May 1st each year as the international labor day. This decision immediately positive response from workers around the world. In May 1, 1890, Europe and the United States to lead the working class to the streets, held a grand demonstrations and rallies, fighting for the legal rights and interests. From then on, every day working people of all countries in the world to rally, parade, to show to celebrate. The heart of china!
篇6:2024初二上期末英语作文
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+ 加入清单1.根据下面内容,以My Vacation to Beijing 为题,写一篇约50词的短文。
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny.I went to Beijing Hutong. It was beautiful. We took some photos . I liked this place because It was interesting . For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious In the evening, I felt really tired.
2.根据调查结果写一篇短文
Here are the results of the students activities survey in my class. Everybody does their exercise for an hour every day. 90% of the students eat fruits and drink milk everyday.7% of the students eats junk food for 2 or 3 times a week. Nobody drinks coffee. Most students sleep for 8 or 9 hours a day.
3.你和你朋友在外貌和性格方面有什么异同呢?请以"My best friend and I"为题,运用比较级写一篇英语文章.
Should friends be the same or different? For me ,It’s not necessary to be the same .My name is David. My best friend Jeff is quiet different from me. He is shorter and quieter than me . We both like sports ,but he plays baseball better than me ,so he always wins .Jeff works harder and always get good grades .We can talk and share everything. I think my best friend helps to bring out the best in me .We’ll be good friends forever.
4. 上周,我们举办了一次“我们城市的一些好场所”的问卷调查,请根据下面的表格所提供的信息写一篇调查报告,不少于80词。
A survey of good places in our city
Last week we did a survey about good places in our city. And this is what we learned. Most of the high schools are good, and the No. 10 High School is the best in our city. It has the best teachers and its the most beautiful. Peoples Hospital is the best of all. It has the most comfortable beds and the friendliest service. Modern Cinema is the best. It has the biggest screens. The best clothing store in our city is Xiwang Clothing Store. It has the best quality and its the most popular. As for radio station, most young people think Hefei 168 FM is the best radio station. It has the most news and the most interesting music.
5.请根据下列表格内容写一篇他们各自的爱好情况字数在60词左右
Today ,I asked my family about movies .Some of their answers are very interesting. Here are their likes and dislikes. My sister likes cartoons very much, but she can’t stand action movies .My mother can’t stand action movies either .She likes comedies. My father dislikes sitcoms ,but he likes action movies .My brother likes action movies ,too. He can’t stand cartoons.
6.新学期要到了,写一篇关于学期的计划,讲述一下自己打算在新的学期要做些什么?提示:可以写自己在学习,健身,娱乐,培养业余爱好等方面的计划或打算.
New Year’s Resolutions
New year is coming, I’m going to do a lot of things next year. First, I want to improve my Chinese, so I’m going to practice it very often and have many conversations with my Chinese friends. Next, I want to be more healthy, so I’m going to do sports every day such as swimming, running and so on. At the same time, I’m going to eat less junk food. Finally, I want to join the dancing club, so I’m going to practice dancing twice a week. I hope my resolutions can come true in the coming year.
7.以My life in ten years 为题写篇短文,要求描写生动,语言流畅。60词左右.
In ten years, I think Ill be a reporter. As a reporter, I think Ill meet lots of interesting people. And I will also travel all over the world. Ill live in Beijing because I went to there last year and fell in love with it. And I will keep a pet pig, because I like it very much. I will live in apartment with my parents. This is my life in ten years, I think I will be very happy in the future.
8.你知道感恩节这天,人们会吃什么吗?请根据本单元知识叙述一下这种食物的制作过程.
Here is one way to make turkey for a Thanksgiving dinner.
First, mix together some bread pieces, onions, salt and pepper. Next, fill the turkey with this bread mix. Then, put the turkey in a hot oven and cook it for a few hours. When it is ready, place the turkey on a large plate and cover it with gravy. Finally, cut the turkey into thin pieces and eat the meat with vegetables like carrots and potatoes.
9.假如你的好友邀请你去参加生日聚会,但因为你下周的日程已经排满,不能前往。请根据提示给她回信婉言谢绝,并表达你的谢意。
Hi Ann,
Thank you for your invition . I am sorry I cant come to your birthday party this week. I am really busy. On Monday, I am going to the movies with my friends. On Tuesday, I am going to visit my aunt. On Wednesday, I have to help my mother. On
Thursday, I am going to my sisters birthday party. On Friday, I am going to Ning Bo on vacation with my parents. Please call me after the vacation.
Candy
10你将来可能会有很多钱,请你以 If I have a lot of money,I will ...为题,写一篇短文,表述自己拥有财富后将如何帮助他人。 If I have a lot of money,I will ...
If I have a lot of money,I will buy what I need and do what I want,such as traveling around the world,
studying abroad and buying my parents a big house.I hope my dream will come true.Of course,
I will do something helpful to others.I will give away money to charities.I will help those kids who are too poor to go to school.In a word,if I have a lot of money,I can do a lot of wonderful things and make a contribution to our country.
假如你们学校计划在本周六下午举办一个英语聚会,作为学生会主席的你需要制定一些规则(至少三条),同时写明如果违反这些规则,会有什么样的后果。
要求:70~80词。
Were going to have an English party on Saturday afternoon.Please remember the following rules.
Dont bring food to the party.If you do,we will take it away. Please bring your ID card.If you dont have it,
we wont let you in. If you bring friends to the party,youll have to write down their names. Dont speak Chinese at the party!If you do,you will have to leave.
我的梦想
I want to be an artist when I grow up. I like drawing. When I was a little kid, I ever won the
first in a drawing competition. I hope to have my own art room. I am taking art lessons every weekend. My art teacher is kind to me. But he is strict with me. I think he can help me to make my dream come true.
篇7:小学六年级我的暑假英语作文
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+ 加入清单在这个暑假中,旅行使我增长见识,学习使我深受启发。
In this summer vacation, travel to my knowledge, learning greatly inspired me.
生活中,我们迎着微风乘车去旅行,让我看到了一望无垠的大海,绿树成荫的森林……仿佛走进了仙境一般。一天,我们来到了十里荷塘,那时正是荷花盛开,我们看到了在水面上亭亭玉立的荷花,无比娇艳,像一位骄傲的公主。我们又去了繁华的都市——上海,夜晚,繁华的上海滩成了光的海洋,霓虹灯闪耀的东方明珠塔,堪称上海的地标建筑。
In life, we meet the breeze bus to travel, let me see the boundless sea, green forest...... Just like entering a wonderland general. One day, we came to the ten in the lotus pond, then it is the lotus in full bloom, we see a stand gracefully erect on the surface of the lotus flower, very beautiful, like a proud princess. We went to the bustling city -- Shanghai, the bustling night, Shanghai Tan into ocean of lights, neon lights shining in the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, a landmark building in Shanghai.
学习中,我学到了许多,尤其是写作、阅读、奥数都能得到老师的表扬,所以在暑假中,我的学习收获也是满满的,我对学好阅读与写作更有信心了。
In the study, I learned a lot, especially reading, writing, math can get the teachers praise, so in the summer vacation, my study is full of harvest, I to learn reading and writing more confident.
小队活动中,我去了污水处理厂、滨海的向日葵基地、十里荷塘、袍江的国家电网公司,我在实践中学到了很多课外知识,受益匪浅,同时也增进了同学之间的友谊。
Group activities, I went to the ten sewage treatment plant, the sunflower base, pond, Paojiang China State Grid Corp, I learned a lot in practice of extra-curricular knowledge, benefit, but also enhance the friendship between the students.
这个暑期,我收获很多,我觉得过了一个有意义的假期。
This summer, I learned a lot, I felt a meaningful holiday.
篇8:六年级关于母亲节的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Mother’s Day is a holiday when children honor their mothers with cards, gifts and flowers. In many countries, such as Denmark, Finland, Italy, Turkey, Australia and the US, people cel lebrate Mother’s Day on the second Sunday in May while many other countries of the world celebrate their own Mother’s day at different times through out the year.
One of the best ways to celebrate Mother’s Day is to give your mom the day off. Let her relax with the rest of the family doing all the housework. Usually, dad and the kids will let mom sleep late that morning as they go into the kitchen to prepare her favourite breakfast. Never forget to place a vase with a single flower on the table beside the food. The kids can pick up the flower from the garden or buy one from the shop. Arrange everything nicely before mom wakes up. Some families will carry the food and mom’s favourite sections from the newspaper to her bedroom so that mom can have breakfast in bed. Presents and cards from the kids can be handed to mom by themselves or just placed on the dining table.
After breakfast, go anywhere mom likes to go. Shopping, swimming or going on a picnic in the garden. Make a special Mother’s Day dinner or take mom out for a great meal in a famous restaurant she loves most.
Anyway ,let mom enjoy the whole day and feel your love, and then the Mother’s Day can be a good one. As Mother’s Day is around the corner, it’s time to take actions!
母亲节是一个节日当孩子纪念他们的母亲,卡片,礼物和鲜花。在许多国家,如丹麦、芬兰、意大利、土耳其、澳大利亚和美国,人们庆祝母亲节在5月的第二个星期天,而世界上许多其他国家在不同的时间庆祝他们自己的母亲节在。
庆祝母亲节的最好方法之一就是给你妈妈一天假。让她放松和其余的家人做所有的家务。通常,父亲和孩子们会让妈妈睡晚了,早上当他们进入厨房准备她最喜欢的早餐。永远不会忘记一个花瓶和一个花旁边桌子上的食物。孩子们可以拿起花的花园或从商店买一个。妈妈醒来之前很好地安排一切。一些家庭将携带食品和妈妈最喜欢的部分从报纸上她的卧室,这样妈妈可以在床上吃早餐。礼物和卡片的孩子可以自己交给妈妈还是放在餐桌上。
早餐后,去任何地方妈妈喜欢去。购物、游泳或者去野餐在花园里。做一个特别的母亲节晚餐或带妈妈出去吃一顿大餐著名的她最喜欢的餐厅。
无论如何,让妈妈享受一整天,感觉你的爱,然后母亲节可以很好。母亲节即将到来,是时候采取行动了!
篇9:六年级英语作文:My School Life
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+ 加入清单I like going to school very much, because I am happy in school. In school, I can learn knowledge from teachers. They are always kind to me. Having class is interesting. I like answering questions in class. I am proud to get the right answers. Besides, I am glad to play with my friends and classmates in school. We have many activities after class. We talk to each other, share our lives together. After class, we often play on the playground. We have many games to play. After that, we often go home together. Some of us live nearly.
篇10:以打扫卫生为话题的小学六年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单There is always a pile of smelly rubbish in front of the building we live. Everyone has to cover his nose with his hand while he passes by. One day, our teacher told us in class some good deeds done by Uncle Lei Feng. I was moved deeply by that. So after school, I started to clear the rubbish away. Now my neighbors dont have to cover their noses.
我们家住的楼前总是有一堆垃圾,天长日久都发出了恶臭。人们经过时都得捂着鼻子。有一次课堂上,老师给我们讲了雷锋叔叔助人为乐的故事,我被深深地感动了。于是我放学回家后就开始清扫那堆垃圾。现在我的邻居们就不必捂着鼻子进家门了。
篇11:高三期末英语作文:My Dream School Life
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+ 加入清单My dream school day starts at 8:30 a.m. It finishes at 3 p.m. so we would have a lot of time for after-school activities.
我的理想学校每天上午8:30开始它下午3点结束。所以我们会有很多时间进行课外活动。
We have half an hour for lunch. We can eat anything and chat with each other. We can also listen to pop music in the hall. We eat an apple every day, because it can keep us healthy.
我们有半小时的午餐。我们可以吃任何东西和互相聊天。我们还可以在大厅里听流行音乐。我们每天吃一个苹果,因为它可以使我们保持健康。
We have Chinese, Maths, English and physics every day, because they are useful and very important. We wear school uniforms on Monday.
我们有语文,数学,英语,物理的每一天,因为他们是有用的,重要的。我们星期一穿校服。
My dream school has a park on one side and a shopping mall on the other. We have a big library with a lot of useful books. We also have a swimming pool and a tennis court. We can do any activities after school or at weekends.
我理想中的学校在一边和其他购物中心公园。我们有许多有用的书有一个大图书馆。我们也有一个游泳池和一个网球场。我们可以在放学后或在周末做任何活动。
We only have half an hour of homework every day. We do not do homework at weekends. Every month, we go on a school trip to a museum or a theatre. In the summer time, we can go to Beijing or Shanghai. Every week, we go to Dongzhou Park or shopping malls.
我们每天只有半个小时的家庭作业。我们周末没有作业。每个月,我们去博物馆或剧院的学校旅行。在夏天的时候,我们可以去北京或上海。每个星期,我们去东洲公园或购物中心。
I like my dream school life very much.
我非常喜欢我理想中的学校生活。
篇12:10八年级下英语期末
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+ 加入清单Dear Jean,
I am sorry to argue with you several days ago。 We haven t talked with each
other these days。 You are my best friend, aren t you?
Few days ago when I heard you lost my lovely book, I was really mad, so I
argued with you, and said that I could not be your friend from then on。 Later, I
didn t sleep well those days。 I always remembered a lot of fun we had。 So I
decided to write a letter to say sorry to you。 I also think you should be
careful and take good care of your things。 Let s be best friends again, OK?
Yours ever,
Julia
篇13:六年级低碳减排英语作文
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+ 加入清单We live in a planet is surrounded by the atmosphere, that is the earth. This is a beautiful planet earth, but has been weakened, emaciated day by day, whats going on, let me tell you:
We now live in a high-tech era, from day to day to day of good, can the environment pollution as the improvement of our life also become more severe. We should pay more attention to low carbon life, the so-called "low carbon" is to reduce carbon dioxide. Because the carbon dioxide can let - that is, the earths protective ozone layer gradually thinning, after can cause new environmental problems, such as excessive ultraviolet ray can make plastic and other polymer materials is more easy to aging and decomposition, the results and photochemical air pollution. To do low carbon life first of all, we want to bike more, driving less, because now he gets richer people, almost every family has a car, the car exhaust emissions caused environmental pollution, serious impact on peoples health. Secondly we have to plant trees, more reason is that trees can desertification land, control soil erosion, windbreak and sand-fixation, increase soil water storage capacity, can greatly improve the ecological environment, reduce the losses of flood disasters. Less air conditioning, because of the use of air conditioning, will reduce the fresh of ozone in the air, especially in the summer, as far as possible less air conditioning, can blow fanner. Finally, we should also with environmental protection shopping bags instead of plastic bags; Replace the incandescent lamp with energy-saving lamps; Permanent chopsticks, lunch boxes, to replace disposable tableware; Using traditional clockwork alarm, replace the electronic alarm clock.
Let low carbon come into our lives and environmental protection into our hearts, we want to make the earth mother to restore the original appearance.
我们居住在一个被大气所包围的星球,那就是地球。地球本是一个美丽的星球,可是如今已经虚弱不堪,一天一天地消瘦下去,这是怎么回事呢,让我来告诉你吧:
我们现在生活在一个高科技时代,日子一天比一天过的好,可环境污染也随着我们生活的改善变的更加严重了。我们应该重视低碳生活,而所谓的“低碳”就是减少二氧化碳。因为二氧化碳能让臭氧层——也就是地球的保护伞渐渐变薄,之后就会引起新的环境问题,如过量的紫外线能使塑料等高分子材料更加容易老化和分解,结果又带来光化学大气污染。要想做到低碳生活首先我们要多骑车,少开车,因为现在人们便得富有起来了,几乎每家都有一辆汽车,而汽车的尾气的排放造成了环境污染,严重影响了人们的健康。其次我们还要多植树,原因是树木可以理沙化耕地,控制水土流失,防风固沙,增加土壤蓄水能力,可以大大改善生态环境,减轻洪涝灾害的损失。还要少开空调,因为使用空调,会使新鲜的空气中臭氧减少,特别是夏天的时候,要尽量的少开空调,可以吹吹电风扇。最后,我们还应该以环保购物袋替代塑料袋;以节能灯代替白炽灯;用永久性筷子、饭盒,取代一次性餐具;使用传统发条闹钟,取代电子闹钟。
让低碳走进我们的生活,让环保走进我们的心中,我们要让地球母亲恢复原来的面貌。
篇14:小学六年级作文:期末考试
全文共 506 字
+ 加入清单经过一学期漫长的学习,期末考试终于到了。虽然大家都对期末考试有些畏惧,都是期末考试之后就是美好的暑假,所以大家还是自信满满地去期末考试了。
我也是这期末考试的一员,就在这个星期一,我们学校带我们到中学去考试了,对于那天的考试,我感慨万千。
当我踏进考场时,深深地感到一种神圣的感觉。我找到自己的位置坐下,看着这干净整洁的桌椅,我仿佛看到了这六年自己走过的艰辛,听到了老师的谆谆教诲,这,就是我六年需要交的答卷;这,就是证明我六年的成绩的机会。这一战成功,走上阳关大道;这一战失败,就坠入万丈深渊。
随着机械女声响起,考试开始了,我细心地看着没一道题,丝毫没有怠慢。试卷的第一面的题还挺简单,但是阅读就不单单是靠基本功,而是要智慧与课文内容结合,算是所有题中比较难的了。而国学园地和综合性学习则是考察同学们平时的积累,以及综合社会能力,这点我还没问题。
最难的就是阅读了,因为阅读不能靠背,也没有什么特定的技巧,就只能平时多读多练。而且出题范围也有无限大,想要在这么短的时间内写出一个引人注目的开头结尾也并非易事,但是我还是应付过来了。
一天的考试结束,我已经感觉身体被掏空,期末考试,是祸也是福。
篇15:小学六年级英语作文:MyDay
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+ 加入清单导语:你有写日记的习惯吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的关于日记的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My Day 1
May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
May Day is my favorite day!
My Day 2
I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games .
We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun !
My Day 3
Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I do morning exercises at 7:50.We have four classes in morning. At 11:30, I’m very hungry. I have lunch at school. I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon. We have three classes in the afternoon. I have computer class and art classes. I like them very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school. My sister、brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I go to bed at 10:00.
My Day 4
Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I don‘t go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil . At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the computer. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio. I have a happy day.
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我的1天
5月1日是星期日。今天是劳动节。妈妈对我说:“睁开你的眼睛!望向窗外。多好的天气啊!让我们去公园吧,“所以我的妈妈,我和我的同学去了公园。我们在书包里拿了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看见梨树和一些苹果树等等。树下有几种花。它是五颜六色的,蓝色,红色,黄色,粉色,紫色,橙色和白色。我看见一些气球和蝴蝶在天空中。我吃了爆米花,玉米片,香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。
下午,我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类,老鼠,猫,狗,鹦鹉,仓鼠,兔子等。
五一节是我最喜欢的一天!
我的2天
在春节我度过了一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在学校门口见面。我们骑自行车去公园,那是一个美丽的日子。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们拍了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃汉堡包和一些饮料,但我知道他们不健康,对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。
我们都累了,但我们很高兴!这很有趣!
我的3天
今天是星期一。我6点起床。我大约在:6分58秒30.then我打扫我的房间吃早饭,洗脸刷牙。我早餐吃面条。我七点钟去上学。我做早操在7 50.we在早上有四节课。11:30,我很饿。我在学校吃午饭。我中午12点上床睡觉。我们下午有三节课。我上电脑课和美术课。我非常喜欢他们。我5:30回家。放学后我做作业。我姐姐、弟弟和我晚上8点看电视。然后我洗脸刷牙。我10点上床睡觉。
我的4天
今天是星期日。是晴天。我不上学。我想去购物。我早上6点半起床,早餐吃麦片粥和鸡蛋。我8点出去。商店在附近。我步行去那里。许多人在商店里。我买了一支铅笔。中午12点我回家吃午饭。我午饭吃了一些蔬菜和肉。我下午读了一本书。晚饭我吃面条和水果。晚饭后,我做作业。然后我看电视。后来,我在电脑上玩。我躺在床上。我听收音机。我有一个快乐的日子。
篇16:六年级期末考试我的妈妈作文600字
全文共 807 字
+ 加入清单孟郊有一句名言“谁言寸草心,报的三春晖。”这句名言赞扬了母亲的伟大。而我的母亲也是我心目中最伟大的人。曾经有多少诗词和歌曲赞扬我们伟大的母亲呀!
妈妈,是慈祥的,和蔼的。为了能够使我们懂得更多的事情,妈妈常常在我出去玩或者是去学校时,反复地叮嘱我们,不是让我们不要把刚换的衣服弄脏了,就是让我们好好听课,听学校老师的话,我想,大家都一定“逃”不过这一关吧!用我们小孩子的话说吧,也就是“妈妈的唠叨”。
在我上二、三年级的时候,每次出门时,妈妈总要边帮我整理好衣着,一边又开始了,在学校要听老师的话,下课不要在地上玩,不要把衣服弄脏了,看着妈妈这副一点儿刀不耐用烦的脸,我在心里头笑了。“难道妈妈不累逃避“妈妈的唠叨,而骗妈妈。我快要上学去了,一想到妈妈又要为我而又开始了她从不厌烦唠叨,想到这,看见妈妈去我房间整理东西我就趁着妈妈不在,忙着把早餐往嘴里塞,尽管我的嘴小,塞不进去几个,但是我还是”拼命“地塞呀塞,看见妈妈准备出来了,我就马上背起书包,道了一声”“妈妈,我走了。”就往外跑,妈妈也跟着出来,看见我离她很远,就在门口大声说:“不要把衣服弄脏了,原老师的话,”虽然我离妈妈很远,但我还是能模模糊地听到。不要把衣服……像这样事,还发生过很多次。
我渐进地长大了,也慢慢地懂得一些照顾自己等一些事了。随我渐进长大,妈妈也随着我长大,而慢慢地把她“厌烦”的唠叨减少了,慢慢地,甚至到没有!
如今我长大了,懂事了,才明白以前母亲对我的关怀,是那样的深,那样的深。每一句都是对儿女的期待。都说世界上有一位最善良,最伟大的女性,她就是我们的母亲,都说人世间有一种最美丽,最温和的声音,那就是母亲对儿女的呼唤,都说这个世界上有一个最伟大、最无私、最勤劳的人,希望我们能够早点长大成人,懂得更多的是非。母亲没有了唠叨,但我还能够听到自己的母亲在远方为自己的儿远在他方的女祈祷着。“一定要好好学习,保重好自己的身体,要为妈妈争气。
篇17:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导
全文共 5333 字
+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Dont worry, well send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
篇18:高一英语期末考试
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+ 加入清单Water Pollution
With the development of industry, water pollution isbecoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.
We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.
篇19:英语期末考试分析
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+ 加入清单一、试卷特点:
本次试卷的命题紧扣了教学大纲和教科书的书本知识,在考察学生英语基础知识的前提下,注重了对学生语言综合能力和知识迁移的考察,注重语言环境及文化背景的设置,减少了词汇、语法等单纯知识性的试题,增加了试题的灵活性、开放性、探究性及综合性。试题以听、读、写的形式,全面地检查了学生应掌握的英语基础知识和基本能力,考题不是很难。
二、学生对各题得分情况分析:
1.听力部分:
此题考察学生是否能正确理解所听的内容,并具备用英语进行释义的能力,用英语回答问题的能力,在特定的语境中进行交际的能力。听力部分共a.b.c.d小节,设计由浅入深,由易到难,循序渐进,从知识到能力,具有一定的梯度。a部分为理解,1-5小题看图听句子,十分简单,学生只要听懂个别单词就能回答出来;b部分为反应:6-10小题根据所听到的句子,从a,b,c三个选项中选出最佳答案。这部分与前部分相对难一点,即要求学生听懂句子的内容又要求选出答案。c部分为对话理解,听对话根据问题选出答案,这部分简单。d部分为笔录要点:根据你所听到的的内容,填写下面的表格。这部分为整个听力的难点。即要听懂句子又要能写单词。总之就整个听力部分而言,略显简单,对于基础较好的学生来说,此套听力题略显简单,小部分都是满分大部分都在18分以上,他们对听力题中侧重的词组及一些英语成语已做到熟练掌握的程度,完全达到了英语教学中对听力的要求。对有一定英语基础,但掌握不扎实的学生来说,听力还存在薄弱的环节,尤其在b部分,c部分和d部 分,句子的理解和写单词对这类学生来说,仍然是个难点,缺乏对整个话题、文章的理解,单词记得不牢,语音、语调、连读、弱读方面还缺乏一定的训练。另外学 生除了对听力的训练不够,答题的方法和技巧也掌握的不是很好。对于英语学习吃力的学生来说,听力是相当难的,成绩也很不理想。
2.笔试部分的单选题:
基础知识题占三分之二,能力题占三分之一左右。此题注重考察词的辨析、语法以及习语等语言知识,在特定的语境中运用语言知识进行交际能力。此题知识覆盖面较广,重点,难点比较突出.注重了语言能力考察,以考察动词为主,兼顾其它词类,并考察句法,考察方式突出了语境.学生在27,31,34小题失分较多,对于人称代词主格和宾格的用法;like后接动词的ing形式的用法;以及let’s的用法都掌握不够。
3.笔试中的完形填空题部分:
紧扣课本中的课文,基本上只要读懂课文就能选出正确的答案,里面包含了介词at和of,以及人称代词的用法,这都是本学期的重点和难点.学生的失分较多.而且向来完形填空就是试卷中的一个较难点。
4.笔试中的阅读理解:
此题考察学生是否具备根据上下文猜测词意进行推理等思维活动,识别选择归纳所提供的信息,探索语篇中的表层含义和深层含义的阅读能力,从而达到获得正确的语言信息的目的。本大题包括a,b,c,d部分,安排的比较合理,由易及难.a部分为三段段文,情节清晰,学生得分较高.b部分为摘录要点和回答问题.摘录要点很简单从文中找出相对的答案,而回答问题就难了既要看懂课文还要有扎实的英语基础回答写出正确的答案.此部分也是一个拉分的部分.整个阅读理解难度不大40%的学生满分,50%的学生20分以上,10%的学生10分以下。
5.笔试中的书面表达:
主要考查学生调查以怎样的方式上?学生写的时候不觉的费力. 但个别同学在语言的灵活应用上欠功夫,不能够把书上的语言恰当的运用到自己的作文中去,且中式英语较重, 语言表达不地道,语法错误较多。这说明学生在日常写作教学中我们还存在着问题,没能在很好的驾御教材的同时注重学生能力的培养。
四、学情分析
总的来说,这次考试成绩不是很理想,优秀率偏低,尖子生还没有发挥水平;低分较多,两极分化的距离还没有缩少。通过整体的分析,反映了学生在复习中,基本上 能领会课堂的要点要求,一些知识点在堂上反复出现的,掌握得较牢固,但是运用这些知识去解决实际问题的能力较差,这与课后的练习有关,说明了部分学生对课 后的练习作业不够重视、缺乏主动性,而且,解题的依赖性强,缺乏独立的思考能力,另外,对于一些相关的语法知识和句子的构成,学生的遗忘率也很高。还有一 个也是最关键的一点就是普遍的学生学习习惯不好,及少的同学能聚精会神的听课,认真完成作业的.
五、今后的教学中应改进的措施。 通过期末这套试卷的分析,我们教师在以后的教学中,应该在以下几外方面进行改进。
1.加强词汇教学,尤其是书中的黑体字部分,一定要学生保证过关。
2.充分利用课本中的听力部分,加强学生的听力技巧训练,善于捕捉听力中的信息,培养学生猜测的能力。
3.尽多的背诵课文,加强语感,有助于学生听力和写作的提高。
4.加强阅读训练,督促学生每天阅读二至三个语段,提高学生的阅读能力。
5.授课时教师要适当渗透语法教学,让学生能够用英语中的语法修改自己做题中的失误,进行知识的迁移和创新能力的培养。
6.班级学生两极分化明显,各班的低下率都在上升,所以教师在教学中要有效地抑制两极分化,对学习有困难的学生进行转化提高.
7.一定要把“抓好学生的学习习惯”放在一切工作的首位,只要习惯好,成绩就自然而燃提高了.
篇20:高二期末英语
全文共 1110 字
+ 加入清单From Monday until Friday most people are busy working or studying, but in
the evenings and on weekends they are free to relax and enjoy themselves. Some
watch television or go to the movies; others participate in sports. It depends
on individual interests. There are many different ways to spend our spare
time.
Almost everyone has some kind of hobby. It may be anything from collecting
stamps to making model airplanes. Some hobbies are worth a lot of money; others
are valuable only to their owners.
I know a man who has a coin collection worth several thousand yuan. A short
time ago he bought a rare ten-yuan piece worth 250 yuan. He was very happy about
the purchase and thought the price was reasonable. On the other hand, my son
collects match boxes. He has almost 600 of them but I doubt if they are worth
any money. However, to my son they are extremely valuable. Nothing makes him
happier than to find a new match-box for his collection.
Thats what a hobby means, I guess. It is something we like to do in our
spare time simply for the fun of it. The value in money is not important, but
the pleasure it gives us is.