朋友英语作文初一精品20篇

The Importance of Electricity

When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights dont work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life.

How terrible it would be if there were no electricity!

关于电力的重要性的初中英语作文

当你早上去上班，发现交通灯不工作，交通堵塞，肯定会发生的。一个病人需要立刻动手术。如果操作不能因为电力会发生什么。没有电，我们不能看电视，听磁带，也不能在网上聊天。电在我们的日常生活密切相关的。

如果没有电将会多么可怕

The day before yesterday, the front wheel of my bike burst the tire, a tack of the ghost, I thought I accidentally got it. Yesterday, the back wheel of my bicycle also exploded, and it was a ghost of a tack. I doubted it very much.

Today, my bike leather are pulled away from my home holding the car, took more than half an hour. What is dad said I was a teacher at the school, really mad at me!

I must buy a bag of tacks, and every man who makes my car will put their car in a tack and let them try the taste of the walking car.

That is, my mother spent a lot of money, is to repair the car frame!

Really mad at me. You say, Ive been down and down???

Lucy once was my classmate, but now she has moved to another city. However, we communicate with each other all the time, sharing our lives with each other. When she firstly moved to the new city and went to the new school, she did not adapt very well. But she is outgoing and talkative, it did not take very long time for her to get on well with others. She is so kind that people are likely to make friends with her. Therefore, I do not worry about her in the new environment. I hope she will have a new start in the new city and school and I am sure she certainly will.

露西曾经是我的同学，但现在她已经搬到另一个城市。然而，我们彼此交流，彼此分享我们的生活。当她第一搬到新的城市，去了新学校，她并没有很好地适应。但她是外向和健谈，这并没有花很长的时间让她与别人相处。她很善良，人们很可能和她交朋友。因此，我不担心她在新的环境。我希望她在新的城市和学校有一个新的开始，我相信她一定会。

[初中英语作文：我的朋友

My Friends 我的朋友

I have many good friends. They are Yuan Tianzhuo, Ji Nan, Lu Fangzhou and Wang Yang.

Yuan Tianzhuo is my deskmate. He is fourteen years old. He is tall but thin. His maths is very good, he usually gets marks in maths. But his English is not very good. So I help him with his English and he helps me with maths.

Ji Nan is from the countryside. He is a good student and he is fourteen, too. He is polite and helpful. He likes sports. I like sports, too. Our hobbies are the same.

Lu Fangzhou is thirteen. He is polite and helpful, too. He is tall and strong. His home is near mine.

I don’t know Wang Yang’s age, but I know he’s polite and helpful. He is tall. He is poor in his study. We all help him.

我有很多好朋友。他们是元天卓，济南，路方舟和王阳。元天卓是我的同桌。他十四岁。他高而瘦。他的数学很好，他通常在数学上取得高分。但他的英语不是很好。所以我帮助他学英语，他帮助我学数学。济南是来自农村。他是个好学生，他也是十四。他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他喜欢运动。我也喜欢体育。我们的爱好是相同的。路方舟是十三岁。他也很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他高大强壮。他家在我家附近。

我不知道王阳的年龄，但我知道他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他很高。他学习差。我们都帮助他。

[英语作文-我的朋友

Halloween is a western festival, legend on Halloween day, will be a ghost. So a lot of people in the home made pumpkin head, to scare people at night; And children knock on the door in someones home say: trick or give sugar; There are people use E-mail to send greeting CARDS to wish...

Halloween is a day in November. In western countries, a noisy:

, a small red girl was followed a group of friends to other peoples house knocking at the door, mouth say: trick or to give candy, give candy, or I really want to rock the boat. The home of the person who opened the door, give the children sweets, mouth smiled and said, give you a candy to eat, dont make trouble oh, go quickly, go to someones home to play well, I wish you happiness. Red and the other children to another to eat candy, return in mouth to eat the sweet sweet candy, to the uncle say: trick or give sugar, to eat candy, otherwise we will be doing mischief. But the uncle rather than give them candy, a meal also scold them: "dont rock the boat to go to go to, you, dont go to my house to candy, you hurry up and get out of here, go to someones home to candy, dont come here." Red and the other children cry, crestfallen walk to another, "ah! A ghost!" "Dont be afraid of me." A wearing a pumpkin heads uncle said, that was you ah, friends and red red red stunned, frighten our uncle was not give us the sugar uncle, the uncle saw that partners and red surprised, explains: "people dont have to be afraid of me, I just tease you play, come on, let uncle give you candy." Friend and red led the candy, his mouth a piece of laughter.

Halloween, although sometimes will be scared, also can eat candy.

Halloween is how beautiful!

万圣节是西方国家的节日，传说在万圣节那天，会有鬼。所以很多人在家里制作了南瓜头，晚上来吓唬别人;还有小孩在别人家敲门说着：不给糖就捣乱;还有人用电子邮箱发贺卡来祝福……

万圣节是在十一月一日。在西方的国家，一片热闹：

一个叫红红的小女孩正在跟着一群小伙伴们一起到别人家敲门，口里念着：不给糖就捣乱，快给糖果，不然我真的要捣乱啦。那个人的家打开了门，给了小朋友们糖果，嘴里微笑着说：给你们糖果吃，不要捣乱哦，快走吧，去别人家好好地玩，祝你们快乐。红红和小伙伴们到另外一个要糖果吃，嘴里还吃着香香的糖果，对那个叔叔说：不给糖就捣乱，给糖果吃，不然我们就要捣乱哦。可是那个叔叔非但没有给他们糖吃，还骂了他们一顿：“去去去，你们别来捣乱，别去我家要糖果，你们快点滚出去，去别人家要糖果，别到这儿来。”红红和小伙伴们哭了，垂头丧气的走到另一家，“啊!有鬼啊!”“别怕是我。”一个戴着南瓜头的叔叔说道，原来是你啊，小伙伴们和红红红惊呆了，这位吓唬我们的叔叔竟然是不给我们糖的叔叔，那位叔叔见伙伴们和红红很惊讶，解释道：“大家不用怕我，我只是逗你们玩的，来来来，叔叔给你们糖果吃。”小伙伴和红红领了糖果，嘴里一片欢笑。

万圣节虽然有时又会被别人吓，但也可以要糖果吃。

万圣节是多么美好啊!

我，住在农村，是地地道道的农村小姑娘。我有许多好朋友。其中和我最要好的是XXX。

在我心目中，她是一个大方、善解人意的女孩子。她有一双迷人的眼睛，披着长长的头发，还有一张特会说话的嘴。

那天，我运气不佳，在学校丢了钱和书本。钱还不算什么，其实重要的还是那本书，是我以前在衡阳的姐姐把它作为礼物送给我的。XXX知道这件事后，不仅借给我钱吃饭，还特意到超市买了一个非常漂亮的本子送给我，并安慰我说：“你今天丢了一个本子，我又特意送你一个，虽然不含有你跟你姐姐的那份深厚情谊，但是含有你我之间的那份友谊。”听完这句话，我虽然没有热泪盈眶，但是这在我心里已经留下了一个美好的印象，值得我一辈子珍惜。

前些日子，XXX的爸爸从广东回来了，给XXX买了一款白色的智能手机。知道后，我们都非常想玩，不约而同地来到她家，但不好意思向他开口。XXX很快就看出了我们的心思。真没想到，XXX自己都没有玩过的手机，却让我们玩了一个上午。她真是一个大方的女孩子呀!

XXX就是这样一个人，值得做一辈子好朋友的人。有机会，我会把她介绍给你。

Ihave many friend.do you know who they are？are they my pet？no.are they my classmates?no. let me tell you:they are my favourit book.

I like books very much.i like reading science book,cartoonbook so on.not only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good person in the society,they give me great pleasure.

I love books!

她，留着乌黑的长头发，整天披在肩上，看起来像个老巫婆。在我漫长而又短暂的记忆画卷中，她给我坏的印象大于好的印象，也许因为她太调皮的缘故吧!平时，她的面容上总显得无能的神情，我总替她捏一把汗。别看她无能的神情，她在许多方面是值得我学习的.。比如：在英语方面，她的成绩就比我好;喜欢唱歌等。

但是她和她的朋友们，一玩起来就无法形容了。不，可以用胆大包天改词来形容。为什么这样说她，我来告诉你吧!在课堂上，她非常喜欢来个金屋藏娇，因此，也别老师教训过呢!

在我的记忆中最清楚的是：在一节地理课上，她照常金屋藏娇。嘿，不愧是地理老师，地理老师太棒啦!眼睛真像孙悟空的火眼睛星!在听课的我，别这突如其来的事情打断了情绪。我心理想，竟然是她。起初是和同情的，但下课以后我以一个淘气的孩子，对她幸灾乐祸几句。下课大约过了五十多分钟吧，这五十多分钟约占三分之二是我对她怜惜，其三分之一便是我对她的幸灾乐祸。没想到被老师批评过后的她，竟和她同学还是朋友一起来教训我。结果，我挨了一下。最后，我向她道歉。

另一件印象最为深刻的是：在一节课堂上，她和她后面的同学玩得太着迷了，这倒不影响我正常听课，因为我已经习惯啦!没想到她越玩越着迷，就如我前面说的胆大包天。突然，她推了后面一位同学。这下来个连续撞击。顿时，我听到她含有道歉的语言，瞪了她一眼，她赶紧缩回去。那天，授课老师没说什么。只是，到了期终考，她也感到很内疚。班主任好像也知道，她提醒我该管就管。

草，那么绿…在绿色的陪同下，一颗全心全意的友谊树苗正在快速生展，但愿我们能以友谊来化解之前的矛盾，希望我们用真诚来使这颗友谊之树永不凋谢。

On Monday the typhoon had gone. Luckily it was not hurricane. And it had only been here for 2 days. Also after this typhoon, not many people lost their lives. On Saturday I finally finished my second learning. Some students were very happy because we finished all summer learning. But some students sighed because of the heavy homework. I wasn’t sad and wasn’t happy, either. I just know we have been junior three students. We must work hard to enter a good senior high school and pave the way for the future. So heavier homework, shorter holiday and more study are all a must

dear kate,

this term i moved to a new house and studied in a new school. but i always missed my friend. my old house was move comfortable than this new house. i wanted to go back to my old house.

everything was strange for me,so i couldnt study better. i felt nervous in the first test. and i got bad scores,i felt very sad. the teacher shouted at me. and then,i felt under too much pressure and very tired. my parents were also sad with me. when my classmates knew this thing,she helped me,and gave me some advice. later,i thought i can be better next time.

i hope to get on well with everyone and get a good mark soon.

yours,

li hua

People will make a lot of friends during their lifetime, the more friends

they make, the more capable they are. Some young people are proud of having many

friends, but only the true friends deserve us to care about. The person we make

must be positive to life. He will set the good example to you and help you to be

a better man. The bad friends will make you perverted, especially for the

teenagers, they can’t make the right judgement and are easy to follow others, so

the friends are very important part of their lives. Once they make the wrong

friends, they will do the bad thing. So we don’t need more friends, just the

right one.

前我为朋友下了定义，朋友就是用来弥补孤单的工具，换一种思路来讲就是“利用”。

表面上看起来似乎很友好，一起上厕所、一起回家、一起聊八卦，事实上在不知名的情况下自己也有可能成为八卦的主角。

也许你会差异，我为什么会这样说，因为我曾经被“抛弃”。我和她是别人羡慕的对象，我和她总是形影不离，一起上厕所、一起回家、一起聊八卦。我曾经也认为她是我最重要的朋友，但在“危难的时候”她总是对我远之又远，等事情过去又跑来笑着说什么“我不是有意的，你永远是我的朋友。”

只是一句“你永远是我的朋友”让我相信了她多少次又失望了多少次。“朋友之间是不用说谢谢的。”这句话是她告诉我的，所以她从来都没说过“谢谢”。现在我不这么认为，如果是朋友就应该为对方着想，我认为这样不礼貌。

一次考试，我离开了这所学校，来到了重点中学，在这里我没有交任何的朋友，班里的人以为我性格本是如此，也就没有和我打过招呼，。可是只有一个女孩，整日在我耳边叽叽喳喳，我给她起了外号叫“大嘴巴”，她太爱说话了，就是这样的她让我笑出了声，不过，场合不太对，我在上课时笑出声来，结果被罚站。

让我感到吃惊的是她竟然同我一起罚站，原因是她把我逗笑了。就这样我和她开始说话，有一次我想都没想就说出了以前的故事，她笑了，她说我“一根筋”干嘛那么认真，可她不知道，我就是这样“一根筋”。

“朋友很重要。”这句话从我嘴里说出来连我都有点不相信。我，以前不是认为“朋友就是用来弥补孤单的工具”吗？

她笑了“那，我来做你的朋友吧。”她是这样说。当时我想都没想就答应了。她和她完全不同，她会说“谢谢”。

有一次，她说：“知道吗，真正的朋友不是在一起就有说不完的话题，而是在一起就算不说话也不会感到尴尬。”

的确，这才是朋友，因为有你，我才懂得了拥有朋友是多么令人高兴的事，谢谢你“大嘴巴”。

我想我也应该为朋友重新下一个定义了：真正的朋友不是在一起就有说不完的话题，而是在一起就算不说话也不会感到尴尬。

[我的朋友_初一作文800字

One of my friend is a beautiful and clever girl whoes name is Li Hua,with rosy cheeks,she has a pair of bright eyes,which shine below herarch eyebrows. within her small mouth there are two lines of white teeth.

Her hair is straight and long. hanging down to her shoulders. she is healthy and attractive.She is loved by her classmates.

One person when I am sad always comfort me, when I am happy we laugh together, when I meet with difficulties, always help me, every time I am trapped by difficulties, she always helped me, he is my best friend - Yang Yang

She didnt know is my fourth grade, when she came to our class, grow tall, short hair, I thought she was a boy, a look, no, she wore a pink blouse, boy wont wear pink coat. Yang Yang he was behind me, we both became friends.

We both have the same hobby, that is, sports, running, playing basketball, and when we physical education play basketball, his skill are agile, played ball to outdo each other, basketball ball like dragon flew up in a basket, she was not the kui is the most severe of hoops we girls. After the second class in the afternoon well is running in the playground, but every time I run but she, run the sweat down to his face.

Her helpfulness had let me admire, remember once, the two of us go out to play, there is a kids skateboard fell and fell broken knee, hand also chafed skin, he was crying in pain, Yang Yang saw, in a flurry of calling her parents, and then quickly picked up the paper towels and left a bit of water, pour the water into the paper towels, very carefully with a damp towel gently wipe the blood, his wounded place fed him and comfort him with the water. His parents come, Yang Yang also get full head big sweat, panting. His parents to thank her, but Yang Yang did a modest said: dont mention it, this is what I should do. Is really helpful!

She is my best friend - Yang Yang!

有一人在我伤心的时候总在安慰我，在我快乐的时候我们一起欢笑，在我遇到困难时，总是在帮助我，每次我被难题困住是，她总会出手帮助我,他就是我闺蜜——杨洋

她是我四年级才认识的，她来我们班时，长得高高地，短头发，我以为她是个男生，一看，不是，她穿了一件粉色上衣，男生是不会穿粉色的上衣的。杨洋他就在我后面，我们俩变成了朋友。

我们俩有着同样的爱好，那就是运动，跑步，打篮球，，我们体育课的时候打篮球，他身手敏捷，打球时互不相让，篮球球象飞龙一样飞进筐里，她不愧是我们女生最厉害的投篮高手。上完下午第二节课我们都要在操场是跑步，可是我每次都跑不过她，跑完脸上的汗顺着往下流。

她的乐于助人不得不让我佩服，记得有一次，我们俩出去玩，有一个小朋友玩滑板跌倒了，膝盖跌坏了、手也擦破皮了，疼得他哇哇大叫，杨洋见了，慌慌张张的给她父母打电话，然后又迅速的拿起了纸巾和还剩一点的水，把水倒到纸巾上，很小心的用湿纸巾把他受伤的地方的血迹轻轻地擦掉，然后一边安慰他一边拿水喂他。他的父母来了，杨洋也搞得满头大汗、气喘吁吁。他父母给她道谢，可杨洋却谦虚的说：不用谢，这是我应该做的。真是乐于助人啊!

她就是我的闺蜜-杨洋!

My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too.

When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogen in future.However, I knew very well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher.Although I was very busy with teaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I made experiments to practise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was so deeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time.

Now I have made great progress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy.The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.

I’m sure it’s very important to dream. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

每个人都有梦想。作为青年学生，我们的梦想多姿多彩。它们构成了伟大的中国梦。梦想可以是远大的，也可以是微小的。实际上，远大的梦想是从实现许多微小的梦想开始的。

我叫李红。我也有一个梦想：我希望成为一名伟大的科学家。从现在起，我必须好好学习，为实现梦想而努力。不管遇到怎样的困难，我都要克服它，决不会放弃。

我相信梦想的力量。有些梦想是比较现实的，有些梦想可能并不那么现实。不管我们的梦想是什么，我们都应该为了梦想而坚持，总有一天它们会实现的。

导语：你会跟大家怎么介绍你的好朋友呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

有关朋友的英语作文 精彩句子抢先看

1、For this reason, I have always felt it a blessing if a friend comes to console me in my sadness, cheer me up in my low spirits, or heartedly share with me my happiness.

2、Yet, they, too, have mercilessly accused false friendship, for there are always some mean characters who approach you and act as dear friends when you are wealthy or influential, but desert or even betray you the instant you come down in the world or are entrapped by unfortunate things.

3、 The old saying "A friend in need is a friend indeed" has become the teaching and standard for true friends.俗话说“患难朋友才是真正的朋友”。

4、 So long as a person has a heart of gold, being warm-hearted, selfless, honest, open-minded, but not brutal, cold, shortsighted nor narrow~minded, I am willing to make friends with him or her, give my due support and help, and remain faithful to him or her all my life.

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend, for life without friends will be a lonely voyage in the vast dark sea or one in the barren desert. Traly, a friend gives out light and warmth like a lamp. For this reason, I have always felt it a blessing if a friend comes to console me in my sadness, cheer me up in my low spirits, or heartedly share with me my happiness. It is wonderful, too, to feel that someone is standing by me and ready to provide help and encouragement in my pursuit of a noble and glorious cause.

For millions of years, people have heaped beautiful verses and essays upon friendship. Yet, they, too, have mercilessly accused false friendship, for there are always some mean characters who approach you and act as dear friends when you are wealthy or influential, but desert or even betray you the instant you come down in the world or are entrapped by unfortunate things. Therefore, people all attach great importance to the recognition of true friendship. And a faithful friend is considered even more precious than a priceless pearl or a precious stone. The old saying "A friend in need is a friend indeed" has become the teaching and standard for true friends.

Still, it is natural that different people observe different principles in making friends. Some view it important to make friends with whom they may share similar interests or hobbies with. Others are liable to befriend VIPs so as to gain some favors or privileges. And I am of those who think very little of similarity or position or power. So long as a person has a heart of gold, being warm-hearted, selfless, honest, open-minded, but not brutal, cold, shortsighted nor narrow~minded, I am willing to make friends with him or her, give my due support and help, and remain faithful to him or her all my life.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

June 23rd Sunday Sunny

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking,Dont do that. Its bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them. His face turned red and answered he wouldnt do that again.

6月23日星期日睛

今天是个风和日丽的好天，我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱，大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的，一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说：不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们，就应该爱护它们。他的脸红了，并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

[初一英语作文 爱护动物

I have a good friend。 Her name is Wu Mi。She is thirteen years old，But she is short。She has  big eyes，a small mouth，a small nose and a round face。It is very cute。She likes reading books and do manually。Her skillful hands，can make a pleasant surprise。I like her very  much，because we are good friends。

We grew up in a happy times, living conditions have made a lot of improvement than before. But the environment around us has suffered severe damage, human homes, earth is facing ecological crisis, if not protect the environment, human will be faced with a major disaster.

In recently listen to TV news said: our capital Beijing area and more dust storms have taken place in the city, these economic developed city almost was huge sand "bury", the oasis is gradually reduced, we human beings that only themselves to blame disorderly cut down trees, destroy the environment, make the soil and water loss. Dont, only the forest into the barren hills, grassland into desert, humans will suddenly realize?

Now the most polluted on earth resources, is the water. River that the original clear float above is full of garbage, plus factory emissions of industrial wastewater, the water is now dark and smelly, passing from the river to wu wear the nose, the fish in the river ah, shrimp had long ago lost.

Just take a look at the sky, is always a grey, which is called the blue sky white clouds, it is grey day ash cloud. Can only look at the moon at night, the stars are gone. See the most is the factory, thick tall a black smoke from the chimney. Took to the streets, often can smell exhaust frying. Recipients pollution everywhere around us.

Man is the master of the earth, but also its destroyer, is the final victim. As the owner of the new century, we cant let environment continue to be polluted. Environmental consciousness is the people should have modern consciousness of the 21st century, in order to in the new century to create a beautiful and pleasant environment, let us take action immediately: save a drop of water, save electricity, once more take a tree... To protect our home together!

我们生长在一个幸福时代，生活条件比以前有了很大的改善。但是我们周围的环境却遭到严重破坏，人类的家园——地球正面临生态危机，如果不保护环境，人类将面临着重大的灾难。

在前不久听电视新闻说：我们首都北京和区多城市都发生了沙尘暴，这些经济发达的城市几乎被巨大的风沙“埋没”，绿洲正在逐渐减少，这只能怪我们人类自己乱砍树木，破坏环境，使水土流失。难道，只有等森林变成了荒山，草原变成了沙漠，人类才会恍然大悟吗?

现在地球上受污染最严重的资源，就是水资源。原来那清澈的小河，现在上面飘满了垃圾，再加上工厂排放的工业污水，河水现在又黑又臭，从河边路过的人都要捂着鼻子，小河里的鱼呀、虾呀早就消失得无影无踪了。

再抬头看一看天空，总是灰蒙蒙的，哪叫蓝天白云，简直是灰天灰云。晚上也只能看看月亮，星星都不见了。看得最多的还是工厂那又粗又高的烟囱里冒出的一股黑烟。走到街上，经常可以闻到汽车排出的油烟味。我们周围到处都受者污染。

人类是地球的主人，但也是它的破坏者，又是最终的受害者。作为新世纪的主人，我们不能再让环境继续被污染下去了。环保意识是21世纪人们应有的现代意识，为了在新世纪里创造一个优美宜人的环境，让我们立刻行动起来：节约一滴水，节约一度电，多载一棵树……共同保护我们的家园吧!