0

朋友英语作文初一(热门20篇)

在应聘外企共工作岗位的时候,我们可以简单地用英语来进行自我介绍,以下是朋友英语作文初一,欢迎阅览!

浏览

5338

作文

884

初一英语作文MikesTestPaper

全文共 658 字

+ 加入清单

根据所给的四幅图画,以“Mikes Test Paper”为题,按顺序写一篇不少于80字的短文。内容必须符合题意。

迈克英语学得不好。昨天,参加了英语考试。他又没考及格。他不敢告诉他妈妈他得了低分。在他回家的路上,天下起了大雨。于是他有了个主意。为什么不把卷子当伞用呢?他就把卷子顶在头上开始往家跑。当他到家时,卷子全湿了,几乎被雨淋成了碎片。当他妈妈问他分数时,迈克尴尬地笑了笑,把试卷递给妈妈看。

Mike is bad at English. Yesterday, he had an English test. He failed again. He dared not tell his mother the low marks. On his way home, it rained heavily. So he got a good idea. Why not take the paper as an umbrella? He just put the paper on his head and began to run home. When he arrived home, the paper was all wet and almost torn to pieces by the rain. When his mother asked about the marks, Mike showed the paper to his mother with an embarrassed smile.

展开阅读全文

更多相似作文

篇1:MyCat初一优秀英语作文

全文共 594 字

+ 加入清单

I have a white cat. it is a present from my mother on my birthday. it’s very beautiful. i call it mimi.

mimi is very naughty. she likes to play with me. she often runs here and there and likes running after something. mimi’s favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. i love it very much. sometimes, mimi is very gentle. she likes to wash her face and doesn’t play with me. after lunch, mimi often lies on the sofa to sleep. when i go home, mimi often jumps onto my knees. i like to give a bath to mimi.

oh, my baby the cat brings me much happiness. we are good friends. i love mimi.

展开阅读全文

篇2:我的朋友英语

全文共 469 字

+ 加入清单

John is my good friend.

John is my good friend. He is twelve. He is English. We are in the same (同一个) school. We are not in the same class. His father Mr Black is a cook. He is forty-five. His mother is not a cook. She is a nurse. She is forty-two. John has a sister. Her name is Alice. She is twenty-one. She is a new teacher at our school.

约翰是我的好朋友

参考译文:约翰是我的好朋友。他12岁,我们在同一个学校。我们不在一个班级。他的爸爸布莱克先生是一位厨师。他今年45岁。他的吗吗不是厨师。是一位护士。她今年四十二岁。约翰还有一个姐姐。她的名字叫做丽丝。她今年21岁。她是一个新老师,在我们学校。

展开阅读全文

篇3:mygoodfriend初一英语作文

全文共 668 字

+ 加入清单

i have a good friend , her name is gina . she is a girl. she is 13 years old.she is a student in class 1 of no.1 middle school . she studies very well. her favorite subject is chinese , beacuse it is very interesting.her like strawberries best.

she usually gets up at 6:00am .then she brushes her teeth. next she goes to school at 7:40. she has four classes in the morning . her last ciass is history . that is her faorite subject , too.she goes to bed at 9:00pm.

she has a big family.she love her mother and father . and she also has a sister.she also like she.

this is my good friend . i want to learn about your good friend. please write and tell me about your friend.

展开阅读全文

篇4:难有此朋友初一作文

全文共 926 字

+ 加入清单

俗话说得好“在家靠父母,出门靠朋友”。交朋友就像盖房子一样,如果你不打好基础是没有一个知心朋友的。如果你没有朋友你的一生就没有意义了,我就有一个助人为乐的好朋友—晓玉,我跟她“姐妹”相称。我们一起玩,一起学习,留下了许多美好的回忆。

她,一头乌黑发亮的头发,大大的眼睛,活脱脱的一个小公主。大方、幽默,使她成为我们班的焦点。在我们之间发生过很多事情让人难以却忘。

记得那是以个凉爽的星期一早晨,我开开心心的来到学校,一进教室,就见“火星人”在一个个的问“地球人”作业,我也在其中。当“火星人”拿着一搭作业走到我面前,用一口流利的普通话跟我说:“交作业。”我立刻在我的书包进行“大搜索”,“搜索”进行了两三秒钟,但对于“火星人”来说已经过了几小时,过了一会,她说:“放心,我不会帮你瞒天过海的。因为我相信你一定会做完的,实在不行我帮你和老师说一下,你下午再交,怎么样?”看着,她那样子使我很无奈,我满不在乎地说:“下午我一定交。”果然不出我所料,老师上课果然说了不交语文作业的事,那些同学因为没有和老师说明情况,而受到了惩罚,事后我就非常的感激我的好朋友晓玉。要不是她我恐怕早就被老师的教鞭抽的稀巴烂了。又一次,她看见我又为一点小事儿生气了,拿着笔,一步跨过来说:“怎么,又生气了,你怎么就那么爱生气呢?不要那么小肚鸡肠嘛!人家都说沉默是金,我看宽容才是金呢。”听完之后,我被她逗得嘴角上扬,说:“哪有说宽容是金的?”“就是,宽容是金,宽容是金!”我们俩顿时嘻嘻的笑了。“记住,以后不要在生气了!否则我就生气了!”她帮我改正了不少毛病,我因为有了这样一个不可多得的朋友而感到骄傲。

记得还有一次,那是我们最后一次春游,同学们个个满面春风、喜上眉梢,中午自由活动时,我们坐在遮阳伞下乘凉,谈论毕业后出去吃一顿的设想,她讲的是那样津津有味,满脸的笑容……“记得,一定要去哦!一个都不准落下!”她说着。

她是我小学五年的好伙伴,这个朋友陪我度过了五年的小学生活,无论有多么困难,她都以她那灿烂的笑容去面对。无时无刻地,她那笑容之花都在绽放着……

朋友,谁都不能没有朋友,朋友固然重要,但是能有几个难忘的朋友,能有几个真正的好朋友呢!

我会永远记住她——这个永远难忘的朋友!

展开阅读全文

篇5:初二英语作文写给朋友的一封信

全文共 261 字

+ 加入清单

Dear Chris:

It rained here last Sunday. I was happy last Sunday.

First, I finished my homework. Then, I cleaned my room. Next, I play I played chess. After that, I played the computer games.

How about you? What did you do on last Sunday? Did it rain?

Write soon

Atms

展开阅读全文

篇6:我的一位好朋友英语作文

全文共 1055 字

+ 加入清单

By the light of the setting sun, without any word, Tom and I were sitting by the lake that shone like glass. Because our hearts filled with sadness, the birds seemed not to want to sing.

The last three years have seen the deep friendship between Tom and me. Thinking about the days when we studied and grew up together, we couldnt help hugging.

At first, I got to know Tom through playing basketball. He was fond of basketball, which left an impression on me. Unluckily, I got injured in one basketball match, which made me want to give up playing basketball. Tom encouraged me not to give up my dream of becoming a famous basketball player. He taught me how to protect myself in games, so I gradually rebuilt confidence. Finally, friendship was built in our hearts deeply.

However, the three-year life at junior middle school was going to be at an end. Now, we must be apart. By the light of setting sun, sadness spread in our hearts. The thing which we could do is what we would like to do. I still keep the friendship as a treasure in my mind.

[我的一位好朋友英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇7:介绍朋友的优秀英语

全文共 634 字

+ 加入清单

Everyone has a really good friend or Zhixin Ren, so I have a friend like her grown very ordinary, very pure, performance is also very good, she is adorable, but her character is very cheerful, I particularly like him.

He helped me a lot of busy, I have once physical education class, careless, wrestling has. Her to send me to school medical room, and she still takes care of me and asked if I have things to buy me water to drink, I am very grateful to her, so呀was my best friend.

翻译:每个人都有一个真心的好朋友或者是知心人,我就有一个这样的朋友,她长得很普通,很纯洁,成绩也很好,她是个活泼可爱的人,她的性格非常开朗,我特别喜欢他。

他帮我很多的忙,有一次,我上体育课时,一不小心,摔跤了。是她把我送进校医室的,她还很照顾我,问我有没有事,给我买水喝,我非常感谢她,所以呀是我最好的朋友。

展开阅读全文

篇8:我的朋友英语作文

全文共 431 字

+ 加入清单

I have a good friend ,his name is Tom, he is 12 years old.he is also my classmate. hehas a big nose and too big eyes.his mouth is big ,too.he is an active boy,he likes playing basketball.we often play basketball together on weekend .he plays well.he is good at singing .he often sing songs for me.i think his voice is good.we have been good friends for 2 years and i think we will be good friends forever.I enjoy the time with Tom.

展开阅读全文

篇9:给朋友的一封信英语

全文共 2395 字

+ 加入清单

Dear friends,

Hello!

How have you been doing? Are you okay? Where did you go this summer

vacation? I now introduce a good place to you, that is my hometown. My hometown

is He Street, which is about 20 kilometers away from the downtown of Hezhou

City. It is surrounded by mountains on all sides with a wide basin in the

middle.

When you are driving on the road, you will involuntarily look around the

surrounding mountains: the mountains on the east are like a giant Chinese

dragon, winding and winding; the mountains on the west are like high humps with

continuous peaks; the mountains on the south are plum red. The small tree on the

hill to the north is green. If you walk on a mountain path and look up at the

blue sky, the blue sky is like a blue belt; looking down on the earth, the earth

is like a beautiful picture. Isnt this living in a fairyland?

When you walk out of the mountains, you will clearly hear the crowing of

chickens, the singing of children and the bells of the mountain village

elementary school. At this time, the appearance of the mountain village will be

revealed before your eyes: a brand-new cement road leads directly to the

entrance of the village; small bungalows are strewn together; under the sun,

industrious people are watering and fertilizing the rice fields. The village

here is like a pearl, inlaid on the placket of the lichen.

When you come to my home, the hospitable grandparents will bring out their

own peanuts, bean sour, radish sour, mung bean porridge and other delicious

things to greet you, and tell you the fun that will never be finished. s

story……

Dear friend, in fact, there is nothing peculiar about my hometown. It can

be said that it cannot be simpler or simpler, but the unique charm of the

mountain and the unique taste of the person are not worth your visit. ? You are

welcome to come and play!

I wish you learning progress! May all go well with you!

Yours,

____

亲爱的朋友

你好!

你近来好吗?身体还好吧?今年暑假你去哪里玩了?我现在介绍一个好地方给你,那就是我的家乡。我的家乡在贺街,它距贺州市城区约20公里,它四面环山,中间是宽广盆地。

当你乘车走在路上时,你会不由自主地环视四周的群山:东边的山像一条中华巨龙,蜿蜒盘旋;西边的山想高高的驼峰,峰岭连绵;南边的山上李子红了;北边的山上小树绿了。如果你走在山间小路,仰望蓝天,蓝天像一条碧蓝的带子;俯视大地,大地像一幅美丽的图画。这难道不是生活在仙境中吗?

当你从群山中走出来时,就会清晰听见鸡鸣犬叫,还有孩子们的歌声和山村小学的钟声。这时,山村的容貌便会展现在你眼前:一条崭新的水泥路直通村口;一幢幢小洋房错落有致;阳光下,勤劳的人们在稻田里浇水、施肥。这里的村庄就像一颗珍珠,镶嵌在大地衣襟上。

当你来到我的家时,热情好客的爷爷奶奶便会拿出自家产的花生、豆角酸、萝卜酸、绿豆粥等等好吃的东西招呼你,给你讲永远也讲不完的有趣的故事……

亲爱的朋友,其实我的家乡并没有什么奇特之处,可以说简单得不能再简单,朴实得不能再朴实,可是它那山独特的魅力,那人独特的情趣,难道不值得你来看看吗?欢迎你来玩哦!

祝你:学习进步!万事如意!

____

展开阅读全文

篇10:有关交通英语初一

全文共 727 字

+ 加入清单

With the rapid development of the society, people can live a better life in

general. So because of the improvement of people’ s living standard, more and

more people own cars. Traffic jam comes to life. While people in order to be

punctual, they often ignore the cars crossing on the road. This behavior will

easily bring traffic accidens. On the other hand, the car owner also want to be

on time and then regardlss the traffic rules, which is also easy to have traffic

accidents. Both the driver and people themseves’ behaviour leads to accidents.

Those accidents may take people’s lives away. It’s so terrible. Therefore, for

the sake of life, the driver and the pedestrian should obey the traffic

regulation as we have only one life.

展开阅读全文

篇11:描述朋友的英语

全文共 500 字

+ 加入清单

My friend I have a good friend. Her name is Susan.She comes from America. Now we are in the same class within No.8 Middle school. We often go to school and go home toghter,just like sisters.She likes English very much and actually she is good at it. So, If I have a question of English, I will turn to her for help. She is very helpful. She also does well in singing and dancing. Everytime there is a party,she will give us a wonderful show. This is my good friend, kind,excent and helpful.

[描述朋友英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇12:我的好朋友英语

全文共 616 字

+ 加入清单

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

展开阅读全文

篇13:关于朋友的英语作文带翻译

全文共 734 字

+ 加入清单

I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He comes from Beijing.

Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.

We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made GREat proGREss in our studies.

We have made up our minds to study harder and win still GREater success in our studies.

我有几个朋友。王林是我最好的朋友。他是11岁。他来自北京。

王林三年前来到这里。他和他的父母来。他的父亲是一位工程师,母亲是一名中学老师。他没有兄弟或姐妹。他是父母的唯一的孩子。

我们是同班同学在学校,所以我们看到彼此。他喜欢英语,我擅长数学。我们总是互相帮助。我们在我们的研究取得了很大的进步。

我们决定努力学习,赢得更大的成功在我们的研究。

展开阅读全文

篇14:我的朋友英语作文《myfriend我的朋友英语作文》

全文共 616 字

+ 加入清单

My friend

I have a best friend, Cathy.

She is tall and thin. She has two big and beautiful eyes. Her father is my father’s brother. He goes to work by motor cycle.

Her mother is a singer. She is very beautiful. She goes to work by car.

Catch gets up at 6:30. Then she goes to school on foot. Her favourite food is noodles. Her favourite season is fall.

Her hobby is planting flowers, me too! So on Sunday. We are going to the plant shop. We are going to buy many beautiful tulip and lily. Then we are going to go home and plant flowers. I’m very happy!

This is my fayourite friend. What about you? Can you tell me, please?

展开阅读全文

篇15:初一英语作文Mydreamhome

全文共 537 字

+ 加入清单

My dream home

My dream home is not very large.Its a wooden house. it is near the sea.Id like to have 5 rooms in my home.I have a kitchen ,a bathroom, a sitting room,a studyand my own bedroom. I like living near the sea because it is very quiet there. I can watch the sea and can always play on the beach.

The furniture in my house is all made of wooden.

It is good for our health. I like having a rest in my bedroom.I like listening to music of JJ while Im reading books in my room.I always ask my friends to come here.

[初一英语作文 My dream home

展开阅读全文

篇16:初一英语作文教学

全文共 5518 字

+ 加入清单

初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

展开阅读全文

篇17:英语作文-我的朋友

全文共 944 字

+ 加入清单

My Friends 我的朋友

I have many good friends. They are Yuan Tianzhuo, Ji Nan, Lu Fangzhou and Wang Yang.

Yuan Tianzhuo is my deskmate. He is fourteen years old. He is tall but thin. His maths is very good, he usually gets marks in maths. But his English is not very good. So I help him with his English and he helps me with maths.

Ji Nan is from the countryside. He is a good student and he is fourteen, too. He is polite and helpful. He likes sports. I like sports, too. Our hobbies are the same.

Lu Fangzhou is thirteen. He is polite and helpful, too. He is tall and strong. His home is near mine.

I don’t know Wang Yang’s age, but I know he’s polite and helpful. He is tall. He is poor in his study. We all help him.

我有很多好朋友。他们是元天卓,济南,路方舟和王阳。元天卓是我的同桌。他十四岁。他高而瘦。他的数学很好,他通常在数学上取得高分。但他的英语不是很好。所以我帮助他学英语,他帮助我学数学。济南是来自农村。他是个好学生,他也是十四。他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他喜欢运动。我也喜欢体育。我们的爱好是相同的。路方舟是十三岁。他也很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他高大强壮。他家在我家附近。

我不知道王阳的年龄,但我知道他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他很高。他学习差。我们都帮助他。

[英语作文-我的朋友

展开阅读全文

篇18:Punctuality初一英语作文

全文共 434 字

+ 加入清单

Punctuality is a good habit. It means to do things at the fixed time. When others are late and you have waited for a long time,you must be angry. And then you should try to be punctual. So you will win others’ trust. At the same time if you are always not punctual, you will become lazier and lazier, even fail in the life.

No punctuality is a bad habit. We should get rid of it. We should try to be punctual forever.

[Punctuality初一英语作文

展开阅读全文

篇19:初一描写四季的英语作文

全文共 592 字

+ 加入清单

there are four seasons in a year. they are spring、summer、fall and winter. i like spring. it is warm. it often rains. i can plant trees and flowers in spring. t he spring is green. summer is very hot. i can swim in the r iver. fall is a good season. it is nice. i can fly kites in fall. i can eat many apples too. winter is cold. i wish i can play snow a nd make a snowman in beijing someda y. because it does not snow in xinxing.

一年之中有四个季节。它们是春天、夏天 、秋天和冬天。 我喜欢春天,它是温暖的,它常常下雨。 我可以种植树木和花卉,在春天。春天是 绿色。 夏天是非常炎热。我可以在河里游泳。 秋天是一个好季节,它非常好。我可以放 风筝,也可以吃很多的苹果。 冬天是冷的。我希望有一天我能在北京玩 雪和堆雪人。 我爱所有的季节,因为它们都非常好。

展开阅读全文

篇20:初一年级英语作文:A Sad Story

全文共 572 字

+ 加入清单

Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom, my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldnt accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.

Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher. He was full of sense of humour. We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching. His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class. He was an experienced teacher.

Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!

展开阅读全文