节约水资源的英语作文初三(汇编20篇)

现代社会的水资源匮乏，已经到了难以逆转的地步，如果人类在不及时控制水资源的浪费情况，有可能在未来的某一天，水资源会彻底断流，所以为了我们赖以生存的家园，请大家节约水资源，保护水环境。

其实在平时生活中，我们就可以从一件小事坐起，因为往往是在身边发生的小事，却是可以改变现实社会的一些大问题。我是生活在华北地区的一名学生，我们这里的水资源，不能说是匮乏，但是也是接近最低水位线，节约水资源刻不容缓。我们今天就来说一说，怎么样从生活小事情中，去节约水资源。

我们每天早上起床都要洗漱，洗脸，洗头等，现在家家户户都不用井水了，而是水龙头，但是正是因为这样，才会造成水资源大量浪费，因为有的人洗漱不关闭水龙头，造成没有必要的浪费。所以，我们生活中，在洗漱的时候，一定要关闭水龙头，把水接到盆里，用盆里的水洗漱，如果水不够的话，再去接，这样就能有效的节约一部分水了；除此之外，还有就是，大家在冲洗厕所的时候，尽量少用马桶里边的水，我们平时洗菜，洗脸的水都不要轻易地倒掉，把这些水储存起来，就可以用来冲洗厕所了，这样也是一个节约水资源的办法。

所以说，节约水资源的办法有许多，看大家有没有这样意识，只要每个人都有节约水资源的意识，我相信在大家的努力下，水资源的浪费一定可以得到缓解。

Welcome to Suzhou. Today I’m your tour guide. Suzhou is a beautiful place in Southeast China. It was built over 2500 years ago. So Suzhou is an old city with a long history. It’s famous for its gardens and Hanshan Temple. We are all proud of them. Many foreign tourists come to see them. In Suzhou, There are lots of old constructions like Tiger Hill, Beisi Pagoda and so on. After visiting them, you’ll be tired. But don’t be worried. There are also lots of snack shops in Suzhou. They are different from those in Western countries. They are much more delicious than some Western food. Suzhou is a modern city as well as an old city. There are lots of tall buildings and many other modern constructions in Suzhou, too. You can find hundreds of people in smart clothes in the street. What a beautiful city it is!

初三英语作文：The space

The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.

The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.

The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.

The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.

[The space初三英语作文

Every studentis excited about the freshmen year, they are looking forward to seeing theirclassmates and will open the new chapter of their lives. While when the senioryear comes, it means saying goodbye to their classmates and is it time to leaveschool. Freshmen year brings happiness and senior year brings sorrow, students don’twant to say goodbye to their classmates, after the long time’s acquaintance,classmates have built strong friendship, it is hard to say goodbye. In China,there is an old saying that all good things must come to an end, for everystudent, they will leave school and fight for each other’s future. Thoughsenior year is a little sad, it is another turning point for the students, theysome will find a job, some will study abroad, all of them are fighting for theirfuture. Senior year in not the end, it is the beginning.

每个学生都会对入学季感到兴奋，他们期待看到新同学，即将展开新的生活篇章。然而当毕业季到来的时候，这意味着和同学说再见，是时候离开学校了。入学季带来了快乐，而毕业季带来了悲伤。学生不想要和同学说再见，经过长时间的认识，学生间已经建立了深厚的友谊，很难说再见。在中国，有一句方言“天下无不散之筵席”，对于每个学生来说，他们将要离开学校，为彼此的未来奋斗。虽然毕业季有点悲伤，但是确实另一个转折点，有些同学找工作，有些同学出国深造，他们都要为将来奋斗。毕业季不是终点，而是开始。

All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city, and even the smallest village has at least one postal station. You may go to a post office to mail a letter. However, there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.

Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes. If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address, he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.

[关于初三英语的作文:寄信

Now, everyone is advocated to save, in addition to material things, there is time, also need to save.

In fact, one minute can do a lot of things, in a book, I see you can write more than 20 words a minute, can walk one hundred steps, we can see 1-2 pages. After watching, I couldnt help wonder: if do it for an hour, you can write more than one thousand words, walk thousands of step road, like dozens of pages, original, as long as make full use of their time, still can do a lot of things in a day!

Back when I was a child, every time I write a summer and winter vacation homework is in the last days of summer and winter vacation last half a month. Why is that? Because I had too much homework? Or because of me what is causing the delay time? Neither. Is because I was not good to save time, dont have to arrange their own time, I always play in the first place, only a little homework every day, until the final assault began. Because of this, my second grade every summer and winter vacation had bad, is a holiday with regret.

You can think about it, how many people regret for wasted time, and how many people because there is no cherish their own time, and missed a lot of things. "If then arrange their own time!" , "if could save time" at that time some people will say so. But, time is not flow back, and so sorry, as now, starts from me, to save time!

现在，大家都提倡节约，除了物质上的东西以外，还有时间，也需要节约。

其实，一分钟是可以干很多的事情的，在一本书上，我看到一分钟可以写二十多个字，可以走一百多步路，可以看1—2页书。看完后，我不由得惊叹起来：如果这样干一个小时，就可以写一千多个字，走好几千步路，看好几十页书，原来，只要把时间充分利用，一天中还是能多干很多事情的呀!

回想小时侯，我每次写寒暑假作业都是在寒暑假的最后半个月的最后几天完成的。为什么呢?是因为我当时的作业太多?还是因为我有什么事情而耽误了时间?都不是。就是因为我当时不好好节约时间，没有好好安排自己的时间，在一开始的时候总是玩，每天只作一点作业，直到最后才开始进行突击。正因为这样，我的一二年级的每个寒暑假都过不好，都是一个带有遗憾的假期。

大家可以想一想，有多少人因为浪费了时间而后悔莫及，又有多少人因为没有好好珍惜自己的时间，而错过了很多事。“如果当时安排好自己的时间就好了!”，“如果当时能节约时间就好了”有些人会这样说。但是，时间是不会倒流的，与其这样后悔，不如现在开始，从我做起，节约时间!

I never thought ourFriendshipcould be so long. We are classmates, not only are still friends. We was like peas and carrots, no words do not say, learn from each other, to long for short.

Name is ling-ling jin, she is my good friend, she is fat, black hair like a black waterfall down vertically, a pair is eyes, his mouth with a knife. She commanded, considerate, in her heart is how to think how to say, serious and responsible. Speak is a disadvantage, but she is hurt others self-esteem.

We have two years of friendship, can be said to be my friend stay together life learning the longest time of friends. But sometimes, the cup of friendship, we sometimes jokes, but dont to heart. Until that time, we continue to cold for three days, meet dont say "hello", also no longer together, become a stranger, with indifference. Several times we all want to apologize, to lose me, she in and out of a person, very lonely, she and I justdont willing to give up this friendship. After days of ideological struggle, I decided to be friends, although the fault is not in me, we still made up. I often think: true friendship is to pass the test. From now on, we cherish the friendship

True friendship, it is purity transparent ice and snow, the cold the unity, the more tight.

True friendship is a clear spring water, not only to the column into the withered life vitality, but also can wash the stain of the mind

Original all stronger after the test of friendship, will never be apart.

我从来都没想过我们的友谊会如此长。我们不仅是同学，还是好朋友。我们形影不离，无话不说，相互学习，以长补短。

她是我的好朋友，叫金玲玲，她微胖，乌黑的头发像黑色的瀑布垂直下来，一双水灵灵是眼睛，嘴边有一条刀痕。她心直口快，体谅别人，在她心里是怎样想就怎样说，认真负责。不过她有个缺点，就是有是说话伤别人的自尊。

我们已两年的友谊，可以说是我的朋友当中待在一起生活学习最长时间的朋友。但有时，友谊之杯也会裂，我们有时开玩笑，但都没放在心上。直到那一次，我们持续三天冷漠，见面也不打招呼，也不再形影不离，成为陌生人，以冷漠相待。有好几次我们都想道歉，失去我以后，她进进出出都一个人，很孤独，我和她都舍不得放下这段友谊。经过几天的思想斗争，我决定和好，虽然错不在于我，我们还是和好如初。我经常想：真诚的友谊是要经过考验的吧。从此，我们更加珍惜这个友谊

真正的友谊，是冰雪纯洁透明，越冷越团结得越紧。

真正的友谊，是一涧清澈的泉水，不但给即将枯萎的生命柱入活力，而且还能洗涤心灵的污点

原天下所有人的友谊经过考验之后更加坚固，永不垮。

In my memory, I will never efface the image of a common service worker.

It was last New Year when all my family members gathered together that suddenly the heating pipe broke up. The warm steam burst forth from the crack. We could do nothing but have a shot at calling the household management center. Fortunately, someone answered it and decided to send a person here.

Ten minutes later, a middle-aged man came. He quickly shut the valve, but one of his hand was hurt by a spine carelessly. Not having a rest, he replaced the broken pipe. It took him half an hour to finish replacing it. Only after that did he remember his injured hand.

In our thankful sight, he disappeared in the curtain of night. He must have been getting together with his family, but he did the job for the sake fo others’ convenience at this special night. What a nice man! I will never forget him.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：I WontForgetHim

水是一切生命的源泉，保护水资源就是保护我们自己的生命。地球上的水总体积约有13亿8600万千米立方，其中96.5%分布在海洋，淡水只有3500千米立方左右。若扣除无法取用的冰川和高山顶上的冰冠，以及分布在盐碱湖和内海的水量，陆地上淡水湖和河流的水量不到地球总水量的 1% 。 还有我们人为的污染使水资源更加紧缺，如果没有水，将没有生命的存在。

现在水危机已威胁着人类!联合国已将水危机列为未来十年人类面临的最严重的挑战之一。中国目前年刚水量为4500亿立方米，农业用水4000亿立方米，城市与工业用水500亿立方米。农业年缺水量约300亿立方米，城市与工业年缺水量达58亿立方米。我国人均用水量为2200立方米，是世界人均用水量的30%左右。现在就世界而言，工业的高度发展，不仅对淡水的使用量越来越大，排放的大量污水污染了江河湖泊以及大海。另外，人饮用受污染的水或吃了中毒的鱼后，至使人体患病而死亡。人为的污染和不善于节约用水使我们面临着严重的危机，我们应该竭尽全力去节约和保护水资源。

1.要从自己做起，惜水、爱水、节水。还要从家庭做起，让家人了解到破坏水资源的危险，让他们也不破坏水资源。还要让别人跟你一样保护水资源。

2.在家中用水要勤俭节约。洗完菜的水不要倒掉，还可以用来浇水、浇花等。还要让家长在工作单位上也节约用水。不要以为公家的水就可以浪费了。这是不正确节约水的表现。也是不负责任的表现。

3.如果见到有人故意破坏水源，应勇敢的向他劝说，并说明破坏水源会给我们带来极大的危险。而且让他以后要保护水资源。遇到劝阻不听的，并且情节严重的，要直接报告有关部门，用法律来惩罚他们。

4.在学校里，同学们在冲拖把的时候，浪费水极多。应该在冲拖把的地方设立两个水池，一个是冲脏物，一个是清洁的。同学们在拖完地时，上面有许多脏物，先到冲脏物的水池里把脏物冲掉。再到清洁的地方冲干净。这样就节约了不少水既节约了水，又把拖把冲干净了。

同学们，让我们为保护水资源，保护大自然做出一份努力吧!让我们从现在开始，就养成惜水、爱水、节水、保护水的意识和习惯，不仅为了人类，也为了我们每一个人的生命!不要让最后一滴水成为我们的眼泪。

追求绿色环保，减少二氧化碳的排放，低能耗，低污染，低排放，这就是“低碳生活”。低碳生活的方式，就是要在生活中节电、节水、节气、节油。这是我在寒假去科技馆看来的。

水对于我来说很平常，因为我们是水乡，河道纵横，我总以为水是取之不尽用之不竭的。直到有一天，我去了奶奶家，才知道水的重要性。那天，奶奶让我帮她接水。我把水龙头开到最大，水“哗哗哗”地流了出来，溅得地上满是水迹。这时爷爷看见了，不禁皱了皱眉头，一大步走到我面前，一边把水龙头关小，一边埋怨我说：“你这孩子，做事大手大脚的，这毛手毛脚的毛病什么时候才能改啊。”我一听很生气：“爷爷，不就是心疼钱嘛！说这么多费话干什么。”爷爷怒气上来了，打了一下我的脑袋，说“你想把爷爷气死啊？这水对我们这个地方来说当然不算什么，但我从电视上看到好多山区缺水严重，用水都要排队了，地都干得裂开了，对于那里来说，水比什么都重要！你还真是身在福中不知福！”“我……”

我被爷爷的话震撼了，是啊，我怎么就把老师平时教导我的话丢在脑后了呢，我不应该这样的。我顿时惭愧起来。爷爷看我无言以答，便说“好了，以后注意就是了，记住不管在哪里都不能浪费水。”从此，我记住了爷爷的这几句朴素的话语，为我敲响了节约用水的警钟。不管在哪里，看见别人在浪费水，我都会劝他们，因为我也曾犯过同样的错误，我不想让别人跟我一样。又有一个早晨，我到浴室去洗脸，发现昨晚放在这的空盆竟盛满了水。这是怎么回事？“滴答滴答”的水声，使我一下子明白了，原来是妈妈匆匆忙忙的，忘记把水龙头关紧了，水滴到了空盆里，这样，时间长了，无数的小水滴就汇成了满满一盆水。这晚上不知又流失了多少水。我想到了一个主意，在卫生间贴了一张纸条：别让水龙头哭泣。

水是万物之需，惜水以人为本，人的生命需要水来保证，水的生命需要人来保护，让我们从自己做起，珍惜水资源，保护环境，世界将更加美好！

I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.

That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.

When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.

[初三英语作文：That Day

Nowadays the topic on Cinese Dream by our Chairman Xi’s speech inspires everyone all over China, especially the students who will enter university to achieve their dreams. I’m so proud that I am the one.

As for my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. I believe to help others is to help ourselves, and it surely can bring me happiness and pleasure.

To realize my dream, firstly, I must try to work hard from now on. And I must learn as much as possbile so that I can get into a good medical college, where I will prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Senondly, I have to train myself to be more careful, that is the basic to do everything . Finally, believe myself. Because confidence is the key to success. I think only in this way can I accomplish my goal, my Chinese dream.

现在对Cinese梦的主题我们的主席习近平的讲话激发每个人中国各地,尤其是学生将进入大学实现自己的梦想。我很自豪我是一个。

至于我自己的梦想。我一直想成为一名医生。医生不仅可以挽救人的生命也是他们在做一个体面的工作。医生可以帮助人们过上更好的生活与他们的专业知识。我认为帮助别人就是帮助自己,一定可以带给我幸福和快乐。

为了实现我的梦想,首先,我必须试着从现在开始努力工作。和我必须学习半年,这样我就可以进入一个好的医学院,在那里我将自己充分准备一个医生的工作。Senondly,我必须训练自己更小心,这是基本要做的一切。最后,相信自己。因为自信是成功的关键。我觉得只有这样我才能实现我的目标,我的中国梦。

readingis my hobby. While reading, I can get a lot of happiness. When I m free, I often read some famous books. Books are my best friends that always keep me a good company. They often give me powers. Through reading, I can enlarge my eyes as well as widen my heart. Through reading, I become more and more knowledgeable.

读书是我的爱好。读书时，我可以得到很多的快乐。当我有空时，我经常读一些名著。书是我最好的朋友，它们总是好好陪着我。他们给了我力量。通过阅读，我开阔了视野也让我的心变宽了。通过阅读，我变得越来越知识渊博。

My favorite books are Readers and VOA. Readers cover the knowledge of culture, literature, and history, so I can benefit a lot by reading it. VOA can let me know the foreign countries better. Thanks to VOA, my oral English is improving day by day.

我最喜欢的书是读者和美国之音。读者覆盖了文化，文学，历史知识，所以我可以通过阅读受益匪浅。美国之音，可以让我更好的了解国外。由于美国之音，我的英语口语日益提高了。

This is my good habit that I will keep it forever.

这是我会一生都保持的好习惯。

[关于初三英语作文：Reading

My mother is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When I’m in trouble, She always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I become a top student in my class. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future

Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is"What is my dream?"Everyone has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy, I was very weak. Once I was terribly ill. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there at once. I was saved.

A good doctor can save peoples lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

水，是地球生命的源泉，可现在，人们可以用的水少之又少，这样下去，人类迟早会毁灭!所以，大家一起行动起来保护仅存的水资源吧!

地球拥有占其总面积72%的水，而我们可以用的水，才只有全部水资源的0.75%，这其中，有近70%的水被冰封在南北两极，其余我们可以收集的水更是少得可怜。全世界仅9个国家的淡水总量就达到了全世界淡水的60%!

为了我们，也为了整个大自然，一起行动起来，走入节水的行列吧!平时，我们的洗澡水、洗漱用水等可以收集起来冲马桶、浇花;水龙头不用时要随手关掉;尽量不要玩水;看到水龙头在滴水，随手关紧……

我们不仅要节约，还要保护水资源。

就像我家后面的那条小河。以前，它上面布满了大块大块的青苔，河水黑得像墨水一样，夏天还发出阵阵恶臭。前几个月这里来了条清洁船，一个巨大的机械手，伸到水里，抓出了大块乌黑的淤泥，我吓了一跳，原来它那么脏。清洁完以后，河水变青了，微风吹过，荡起阵阵涟漪，小鱼小虾在水下嬉闹，快乐极了。但是，没过多久想不到楼上的邻居还在往河里乱扔垃圾，难道他们还想让河水变得又臭又脏吗?楼上的叔叔阿姨们请手下留情，让我们一起保护清澈的河水。

如果全国13亿人每人节省一滴水，那就有约6500升水，那如果节省一瓶水、一桶水甚至一缸水呢?来吧，一起节约水资源、保护水资源,从个人做起，从身边小事做起，让地球变得更美丽!

ng time ago, we never noticed that we are in a situation that the water on the earth is less than before, and the consequence is continuing.

Until recently, we have started to acknowledge that we should make the bigger efforts to save water. Therefore, so save water from every single person is important. That is why we should save water at home. If every one of us saves water at home, then the water saved together would be a huge amout. And I have some suggestions following: we could cycle the water we just used them to wash clothes to water the plants or to rush the toilet; when we wash our hands, we could turn the tap off for the moment we put soap on our hands etc.

So if we want to save water sincerely, we could save it at home .

有的人认为地球上的水是怎么也用不完的，因为在他们的眼里地球上到处是江河湖海，还有那数也数不清的山间小溪，水是铺天盖地的。实际上根本不是这样，地球上的水是有限的，如果我们现在不注意节约水资源的作文，保护水环境，那么总有一天会用完的。

我们江南水乡，本来河多水多，山清水秀，可是现在有些人不懂得保护水环境，把生活垃圾一股脑儿扔进江河湖泊，还有许多工厂把工业污水也都排进了江河湖泊，大量的水资源被严重污染，使碧水变得臭不可闻，导致人类赖以生存的净水越来越缺乏，水的危机已经向人类敲响了警钟！

谁都知道，人要水，树要水，世间万物都要水，一旦没有了水，一切生物都会失去生命，所以我们从现在开始必须节约水资源的作文，节约每一滴水。

节约水资源的作文就是要尽量发挥每一滴水的作用。比如随手关紧水龙头，大小便后尽量不开大水冲，利用洗衣水冲马桶，将淘米水浇花等等。同时还要保护水环境，要从我做起，从现在做起，不向河里乱扔垃圾。要处理好工业废水，绝不让它流进江河湖泊，让江河湖泊之水永远洁净，造福人类。

水是生命是源，更是生命之本。我们要珍惜每一滴水。

Last summer vacation， I went to Chengdu with my parents. We took the plane to Chengdu . It took us about two hours to get there . Chengdu was one of the biggest cities in China . the weather there was neither too hot nor too cold . My parents thought I was very tired and busy in school ， so they wanted me to have a good rest . There were lots of mountains in Chengdu . At first ， we climbed the Longquan Mountain . It was too high. The trees were beautiful and birds sang songs in the trees. I felt very happy and relaxed. The next day we went to Chuxi Road ， which is the most famous road in Chengdu. My mother bought lots of clothes . My father bought a watch . I also bought a pair of shoes. We were all very happy . Then we returned to our hometown . In my opinion ， Chengdu was really fascinating ， and people in Chengdu were really friendly too. I would like to go there again .

[My Pleasant Trip初三英语作文

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

水是生命之源，生命之本，人类的健康离不开水。人可以几天不进食，但不可以几天不喝水。而现在，全球有20亿人口正处于严重缺水状况!全世界每年因喝了不干净的水而死亡的儿童就有5000万人!这数字是多么令人怵目惊心!水的危机，已经向人类敲响了警钟!

中国的水资源虽然比较丰富，但分布不均，东多西少，南多北少，缺水的地方很多。而在不缺水的地方，人们浪费水、污染水的现象又太严重。

去年，学校组织同学们去茅洲河调查。来到茅洲河，河堤上全是蚂蚁窝，河面上漂满了塑料袋、旧沙发、烟盒等废物。河水早已被人类污染，散发出阵阵难闻的臭味，让人觉得很不舒服。张老师告诉我们：茅洲河是宝安区的第一大河，发源于羊台山，自东向西流经石岩、公明、松岗、沙井，注入珠江口。茅洲河存在着防洪能力低、水土流失严重，河水污染严重等问题。我想：要不是人们乱丢垃圾给茅洲河，它怎么会变成这样呢?

记得还有一次，妈妈高兴的从街上买回一个鱼头，中午用来煮鱼头汤。没想到，煮出的鱼头汤一点都不鲜甜，有股很浓的煤油味，妈妈赶紧叫我别吃，说这是受了污染的鱼，吃了会中毒。妈妈还告诉我说，一些工厂不注意保护水资源，把工业废水排入江河湖泊，造成了水资源的严重污染。鱼虾生活在这样的水中，就会慢慢中毒，死去;人类喝了这样的水，就会生病，严重影响身体健康。听后，我觉得真是可怕!为什么人类只知道赚钱，不知道保护水资源，这样下去，我们就很难喝到干净的水，到那时，人类该怎么生存呢?

我真想大声呼吁：人类啊!不要让河流变得丑陋，不要让鱼儿变成毒药，保护水吧!保护我们生命赖以生存的源泉吧!