英语书信作文带翻译80词左右【汇编20篇】

Today is New Years day, I, mother and grandmother go to the supermarket. Go out have a look at the weather, just like put a lot of smoke, the foliage.

In the supermarket, mother first thing is to give my grandmother to buy clothes, buy out again to buy her, I think when I turn? Are more than two hours, finally see the toys, I ran past picked out a box of kitchen utensils and appliances model, the grandmother bought me a box, we happily go back. At home, my grandmother give me cut a little stir, I put in a small pot, pour some water, put on my home appliance heaters, hot, put some sesame seeds, salt, for my mother to eat.

Start her dont eat, at my request, she didnt eat "rice", she also try not to eat to feel! Ha ha.

今天是元旦，我、妈妈和外婆去超市。出门一看天气，就跟放了很多烟雾弹一样，阴森森的。

到了超市，妈妈第一件事就是给外婆买衣服，买完了又给她买，我想什么时候才轮到我?都两个多小时了，终于看到了玩具，我跑过去挑了一盒厨具模型，外婆给我买了一盒，我们高高兴兴地回去了。回到家，外婆切了一点萝卜丁给我，我放在小锅子里，倒点水，放在我家电暖器上，热了以后，放了点芝麻、盐，给我妈妈吃。

开始她不吃，在我的请求下，她才把“饭”吃下去，给她也尝尝非吃不可的感觉!哈哈。

Chinese Spring Festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of

spring. It began in the last day of the lunar year, end in the 15th day of lunar

New Year, also is the Lantern Festival.

During the Spring Festival, people use red lantern and Spring Festival

couplets decorate a house, put on all kinds of colored clothes, often visit

friends and relatives or together eat dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious

food. The children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money, and

together they play each other the fireworks, with happy.

Street with dragon and lion dance and some other carnival activities, CCTV

will held the grand Spring Festival gala.

中国的春节庆祝冬天的结束和春天的温暖。从农历年的最后一天开始，到了农历的第十五天结束，也是元宵节。

春节期间，人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子，穿上各种颜色的衣服，经常拜访亲朋好友，或者一起吃饺子、鱼、肉和其他美味的食物。孩子们盼望着收到红包，他们一起玩烟花，开心地玩着。

街上有舞龙舞狮等狂欢活动，中央电视台将举行盛大的春节联欢晚会。

Dear Mr Fu,

This is my first letter to you. Its a thank-you letter!

Thank you for what? Thank you for teaching me and helping me.

When I am in trouble, is your warm hand to help me, not when I want to give

up when you use your words to support me, I sincerely thank you! Thank you very

much!

In the coming Christmas, I would like to express my deep thanks to you

again!

I wish you good health and good luck in everything!

Your students

亲爱的复老师

这是我给你写的第一制封信，是一封感谢信!

感谢什么呢?感谢你对我的教导，对我的帮助。

在我困难的时候，是你伸出温暖的手帮助我了我，没当我想放弃的时候是您用您的话语支持了我，我衷心的谢谢您!谢谢!

在圣诞节到来之际，我再次向你表达我深深的谢意!

祝您是身体健康，万事如意!

您的学生

Yesterday evening I about zhang boya go to see the "magic gourd". This morning I arrived early to changfeng theater, film she has not come at nine o clock, my mother and I had to go to the advanced. Cinema hall is very large, we are in the middle, suddenly the hall got all black, the film began, in a short time zhang boya and her mother is coming, we seat together to see the "magic gourd".

"The magic gourd" the hero is Wang Bao, Wang Bao like aircraft design, dream to grow up to become an astronaut, always want something for nothing, although often gourd help him, but always to do the reverse, finally gourd also walked, Wang Bao also understand there is no free lunch, what it through his own efforts to get results. I love of gourd, because in Wang Bao chess classmates let him eat "horse", gourd thought from the mouth to eat, let Wang Bao eat this "horse" the pawn, too funny. Film has a lot of joke, made us laugh. From which I know a truth, something for nothing is nothing, we will steadfastly to do every thing, learning is the same.

昨天晚上我约了张博雅一起去看《宝葫芦的秘密》。今天早上我早早就到了长风剧场，九点钟的电影她还没有来，我和妈妈只好先进去看了。影院大厅很大，我们座在正中间，忽然大厅一下子全黑了，电影开始了，不一会儿张博雅和她妈妈来了，我们座在一起看起了《宝葫芦的秘密》。

《宝葫芦的秘密》主人公是王葆，王葆很喜欢航空设计，梦想长大成为一名航天员，总喜欢不劳而获，虽然宝葫芦经常帮助他，但总是事得其反，最后宝葫芦也走了，王葆也明白了世上没有免费的午餐，什么事要通过自己的努力才能得到成绩。我喜欢片中的宝葫芦，因为在王葆下象棋的时候同学让他吃“马”，宝葫芦以为是从口中吃，就让王葆吃下了这个“马”棋子，太搞笑了。片中还有许多笑话，逗得我们哈哈大笑。从片中我知道了一个道理，不劳而获是什么也得不到的，我们要踏踏实实做好每一件事，学习也是一样的。

新学期开始了，同学们都返回学校重新见面。他们正在谈论自己的暑假生活。我更高兴，迫不及待地想告诉他们我是怎么过的。终于轮到我，了，我告诉他们我暑假期间在一家餐馆当服务员。他们起初并不相信。“是真的。”我说，“刚开始时可惨了，但几天我就做得很好了。暑假我挣了600元钱呢。”他们都目瞪口呆地看着我。

a new term began. students all returned to school met again. they were talking about what they had done in the holidays. i was happier. i couldnt wait to tell my story. now its my turn. i told them i got a job in a restaurant. i worked as a waitress.

they didnt believe at first.

"yes, its true. "i said," i really had a hard time at the beginning. but several days later, i could do a good job. i earned six hundred yuan this holiday. "they all looked at me with their mouths open.

Another Chinese New Year arrived, dad said: "the Spring Festival to return home with grandma." Family reunion dinner mom made a delicious fish, mom said: "eat fish on behalf of the annual New Year." I looked up doubt ask a mother: "every year more than fish is on behalf of heaven will drop down to us to eat? She smiled and said to me:" the fish is more harmonics, fish is a symbol of wealth. "Like a duck to water" used to describe the work and life happiness, harmonious, and happy.

On the first day, I got up early, to grandma happy New Year, my grandma gave me a red envelope, I said happily: "thank you, I wish you a happy holiday!" The Spring Festival fireworks, wear new clothes, watching the dragon boat show, visiting relatives and friends, eat, drink, and be merry. The holiday was happy!

又一个春节到了，爸爸说：“这个春节要回老家陪奶奶一起过。”年夜饭妈妈做了香喷喷的鱼，妈妈说：“过年吃鱼代表年年有余。”我仰起头疑惑的问妈妈：“年年有余是不是代表天上会掉鱼下来给我们吃?她笑着对我说：”鱼是余的谐音，鱼象征着富贵。“如鱼得水”用来描述工作和生活和谐美满、幸福。

大年初一，我早早的起床，去给奶奶拜年，奶奶给了我红包，我高兴地说：“谢谢，祝您节日快乐!”春节放烟花、穿新衣、看龙舟表演、走亲访友、吃喝玩乐。这个节日过得真快乐啊!

my mother is a woman of the old school。 she is too conservative to keep up with the times。 however， she is good-natured and treats others incerely。 for this reason， all her neighbors are only too glad (pleased) to make friends with her。 they consider her a model woman。

she is a typical housewife。 she keeps the (her) house neat and clean and looks after us with extreme care 。 she often says to us， “you cannot study too ard。”

"我母亲"英语作文译文:

我母亲是中国老式女子。她太保守无法跟上时代。然而，她性情善良，待人诚恳。基于此种理由，所有她的邻居都十分高兴和她结交朋友。他们认为她是模范女子。

她是一位标准的家庭主妇。她把家保持整洁。她小心翼翼地照顾我们。她时常对我们说：“你们越用功越好”。

Im very happy to be this winter holiday, because you can get a lot of pocket money. But very boring, because cant in my classmate chat, is really boring.

Im very happy winter vacation, you can buy my favorite clothes, trousers, shoes and I love to play with toys, and can go back to my grandmas, to travel, and go to the He Lan anping castle of the building, three hundred years ago in tainan anping road, please appreciate a lot. Now I will introduce the sites is anping castle, right in the middle have to visit the place. Have a 7th floor tower, the top we could see the beautiful scenery, there are a lot of old cannons, took a photograph. Anping old is a very good place.

Bored, Ill write winter vacation homework, or playing computer, and watching TV. My winter vacation homework pages and pages of writing and also checked for her mother, and looking forward to quick opening day of school.

我这次的寒假非常开心，因为可以领到很多的零用钱。但是又非常无聊，因为无法跟班上同学聊天，真是无聊极了。

我非常开心的寒假，可以买到我喜欢的衣服，裤子，鞋子还有我最爱玩的玩具，又可以回去外婆家，去旅行，还有去看三百年前何兰建筑的安平古堡，就在台南市安平路，请大家多多欣赏。现在我要介绍的古迹就是安平古堡，有参观的地方就在正中央。有一个七楼的塔，那座顶端可以看到美丽的美景，那里有很多以前的炮，还照了一张相。安平古保是非常好的地方。

无聊的时候，我会写着寒假功课，或打电脑，还有看着电视。我的寒假作业一页又一页的写完毕，也给妈妈检查过了，而且每天盼望着快开学快开学。

thanksgiving day in the united states, the fourth thursday in november is called thanksgiving day. on that day, americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year.thanksgiving day is usually a family day.

people always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions. pumpkin pie and indian pudding are traditional thanksgiving desserts. relatives from other cities, students who have been away at school, and many other americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home.

在美国,感恩节在11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。在那一天,美国人感谢的祝福。感恩节通常是一个家庭日。

人们总是与大型晚宴庆祝快乐的团聚。南瓜饼和印度甜点布丁都是传统的感恩节。亲戚从其他城市,学生已经在学校,和其他许多美国人长途旅行假期呆在家里。

Finally put the winter vacation!! So happy!!!!! In this semester the joys and sorrows of the school, suantiankula, is about to end before the coming winter vacation.

Just days before the arrival of winter vacation, Im still thinking what to do to make my life more meaningful winter vacation. I suddenly thought of mother daily toil in recent years, always wash his clothes, and cook for us every day, mop the floor... Such as housework. Change is my words might complain about, but mother doesnt even have a complain about words, mom is really great!! So I decided to a large mobilization "family", want to let mom have a good rest, to comfort her daily toil. Come before the Spring Festival, cleaning, make the home look brand-new, like a pipe dream of beautiful.

In addition, I want a winter vacation, go to the aunt home borrows a few good book. As a result, there are two benefits: first, can increase my knowledge. Two, would not have to think about the computer, the computer is like a naughty little monkey, will only tell me: "come and help me to boot, Im waiting for you!" Carelessly will fall into the abyss ─ ─ ─ increase my myopic degree!!!!!

Look!! My winter holiday plan is very full!! I also feel this way in this summer holiday, I will very happy, very happy. May this winter holiday can bring more joy for me!!

终于放寒假了!! 好开心!! 这一学期在学校的喜怒哀乐、酸甜苦辣，即将在寒假来临前结束。

在寒假来临之前，我 还在思考要做什么事才能让我的寒假生活更有意义。突然我想到，这几年妈妈平日的辛劳，每天总是为我们洗衣服、煮饭、拖地......等家事。换成是我的话 可能会抱怨连连，可是妈妈连一句抱怨的话都没有，妈妈真的是很伟大呀!! 于是我决定来个“全家大动员”，想让妈妈好好休息，来慰劳她平日的辛劳。趁春节的时候，来个大扫除，让家里焕然一新，有如镜花水月般的美丽。

另外，我想要在寒假的时候，去阿姨家借阅几本好书。这样一来，有两种好处：一、可以增加我的知识。二、就不会去想到电脑，电脑就像个顽皮的小猴子，只会告诉我：“快来帮我开机，我在等你唷!”一不小心就会掉进深渊───增加我的近视度数!!

看!! 我的寒假计划很充实吧!! 我也觉得这样一来在这个暑假，我会过的很快乐、很开心的。愿这个寒假能带来给我更多的快乐!!

I walk on the road, as the snow fell on me. Wow, what a vanity of build by laying bricks or stones jade world! Air is flying snow, the ground is soft white carpet. The vast heaven and earth color, gray. Fog, lingering in the mountains, white fog around the high mountain, as if that was the world like milk, a piece of white, an infinite yearning.

Nearby, the branches on the blooming of snow, is really "like night of spring breeze comes suddenly, thousand trees critics, pear flower open" in the distance, the evergreen pine and cypress trees, just like past ice sculptures carved jade, exquisite pagoda. In the distance, partners in a pile of white cute snowman. I run past, said we heap together! Partners all said, "come." Soon we heaped up several snowman. I love winter!

我走在小路上，鹅毛般的大雪落在我的身上。嗬，好一个粉妆玉砌的世界!空中是漫天飞舞的雪花，地上是柔软洁白的地毯。天地一色，苍苍茫茫。雾，萦绕在山头，乳白的雾围绕在那高高的山头，仿佛那是牛奶般的世界，洁白一片，令人无限向往。

近处，枝条上绽放着一串串雪花，真是“忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开”啊远处，那些四季常青的松树和柏树，宛如一座座冰雕玉刻、玲珑剔透的宝塔。远处，伙伴们在堆洁白的可爱的小雪人。我小跑过去，说道我们一起堆吧!伙伴异口同声的说道：“来吧。”不一会我们堆起了几个小雪人。我爱冬天!

I internet English that can give me a golden future.Because English is the most pupolar language in the world.These is no country in the world use English. Although English is no our mother language , but I learn hard in many ways.Some subjects are taught in English and some goods wrote in English. Nowdays, English is the more important.So I like it and learn it hard.

我迷恋英文，因为它可以给我一个好的未来，因为英文是世界上最主流的语言。世界上没有一个国家是不用英语的，虽然英语不是我的母语，不过我会尽我最大的努力通过各种方式来学习英语。现在很多科目都用英语教，然后很多商品也变成英文字了，所以我觉得英语很重要，我也要好好学习它，尽我最大的努力。

[《我的爱好》英语作文及翻译

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know

to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was

ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My

parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in

the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went

out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有实力。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间里有空调，并在低温下打开了它。所以，当我走了出去，高温不给me.At最后，我病了。

Hello everyone.

Now let me talk about myself.

My name is _____.I was born in _____.There are _____people in my family, my father is a _____, my mother is a _______.And as everyone know,Im a student.Everyone has his own interests.As for me,I like reading books,playing basketball,listening to the music and so on.Now today we are in the same class,I hope we will get on well with each other.Thanks.

大家好。

现在让我来介绍一下我自己

我的名字叫______。我出生在_______。我家有_______口人，我的爸爸是一个________,我的妈妈是_______。那么就如大家所知，我当然就是一个学生了。每一个人都有他自己的兴趣。至于我，我喜欢看书，打篮球，听音乐等等。今天我们相聚在同一个教室，我希望我们将会相处愉悦。谢谢大家。

Early in the morning, I looked out the window, a piece of white, it was snowing.

Walked on my way to school, white snowflakes swirl, for an instant, the earth and the blanket of snow. Snowflakes like stars shine, dancing in the air, how beautiful it is. Floating ah float, fall in the withered flowers, grass and crops, trees, like a layer of the quilt. The people in the streets wearing a collar, masks, dressed in a thick down jacket and cotton shoes, fat at a draught. Snow on the road to harden, the thick layer of ice, ice hard as stone. Look, the children make a snowman, snowball fights in the snow, have a good time.

I like snow, it has brought the infinite vitality.

清晨，我望着窗外，白茫茫的一片，原来是下雪了。

漫步走在上学的路上，洁白的雪花纷纷扬扬，一瞬间，大地上铺盖着雪毯。雪花像星星一样闪闪发光，在空中跳着舞，是多么美丽动人。飘呀飘，落在了枯萎的小花、小草、庄稼、树木身上，像是盖了一层棉被。大街上的人们戴着围脖、口罩，穿着厚厚的羽绒服和棉鞋，一下子胖了一圈。马路上的雪变硬了，结了厚厚的一层冰，冰坚如石。看，小朋友们在雪地里堆雪人、打雪仗，玩得高兴极了。

我喜欢下雪，它给大地带来了无限生机。

My hobby is to collect different plaster model, have a kind and beautiful little angel have another cat. Let me introduce my favorite story of "little angel".

Recently, I in the square of a boutique store I saw a very beautiful little angel plaster model. Among them, the most striking is the golden hair. Its body is made of gypsum, pink dress, pink magic wand, purple shoes, its eyes clear and transparent, looks very cute.

"I went to ask the boss how much is this little angel"? The boss said ten yuan. But I dont have so much money! I use my breakfast money, save one yuan a day, ten days later, I finally saved up ten yuan of money, I ran happily towards the high-quality goods. I bought the "little angel", back to home, I embrace my "little angel", fondle admiringly.

Whenever I not happy, it is always said to me with a smile: "small host dont not happy, let me tell you a joke!"

Every time after hearing its joke I laughed, it starts to laugh.

I love my little angel! I will cherish it!

我的爱好是收藏不同的石膏像，有美丽善良的小天使，有可爱淘气的小猫。还是让我介绍一下我最喜欢的“小天使”的故事吧!

最近，我在广场的我一个精品店里看见一个非常美丽的小天使石膏像。其中，最引人注目的就是金黄色的头发。它的身子是用石膏做的，粉红色的裙子，粉红色的魔棒，紫色的鞋子，它的眼睛清澈透明，长得十分可爱。

“我去问老板这个小天使多少钱”?老板说十元钱。可是我没有那么多钱啊!我用我的早餐钱，一天省一元钱，十天之后，我终于攒了十元钱，我高兴地朝精品跑去。我买下了“小天使”，回到家后，我抱着我的“小天使”，爱不释手。

每当我不高兴时，它总是笑着对我说：“小主人别不高兴，让我来给你讲个笑话吧!”

每次听完它的笑话我都哈哈大笑，它也跟着笑。

我非常爱我的小天使!我也会好好珍惜它!

One Day of Mine

On May Day, my mother, father, my sister and me went to park to have a picnic, and then visited my grandma and grandpa.

At nine o’clock in the morning, we went to park for picnic. We took juice, cornflakes, apples, oranges, lollipops, bananas, ice creams, mangoes, and so on. I also took toys, such as doll, ball, balloon, skateboard and a kite.

At two o’clock in the afternoon, we went to visit my grandma and grandpa. I helped grandpa do some house work. My sister and me played skateboard and doll.

At eight o’clock in the evening, we went home, and played computer games for two hours and then went to bed.

I was very happy on May Day!

“五一”劳动节那天，我妈妈、爸爸、姐姐和我去公园野餐，然后去看望了爷爷和奶奶。

早上九点钟，我们去公园野餐。我们带了果汁、玉米片、苹果、桔子、棒棒糖、香蕉、冰激凌、芒果等吃的。我还带了玩具，像娃娃、球、气球、滑板和风筝。

下午两点，我们去看望爷爷和奶奶。我帮爷爷做了一些家务活。我姐姐和我玩了滑板和洋娃娃。

晚上八点我们回家了。回家后又玩了两个小时的电脑游戏，然后就去睡觉了。

“五一”这一天我很开心！

[五一假期的小学英语作文（含翻译）

Chrismas Father was the descendant of a deity called Odin. Its also said that Chrismas Father comes from San Nichola, so he is also called St.Nicholas. He was the bishop of Asia

Minor city of Rafah and he was called a man of God after his death. He is an old man in red clothes and he wears a red hat.He has white mustache. He comes from the north on a blowmobile every Chrismas Day. He went into peoples houses by the track and he put the presents into childrens socks. So in western countries,parents put the gifts to their kids in kids socks and put them on the head of the bed on Chrismas Eve. On the second day, the first thing after kids wake up is to find the presents from Chrismas Fathers.

圣诞节的父亲是一个叫奥丁神的后裔。圣诞节还说,父亲来自圣尼古拉,所以他也被称为St.Nicholas。他是亚洲的主教

小城市拉法,他被称为一个上帝在他死后的人。他是一个穿红衣服的老人,他穿着一件红色的帽子。他有白色的胡子。他来自北方的雪撬上的每一个圣诞节。他走进人们的房屋的跟踪,他把礼物放在孩子们的袜子。在西方国家,父母把礼物送给他们的孩子在孩子们的袜子放在床头的圣诞节前夜。第二天,孩子们醒来后的第一件事就是去找父亲圣诞节的礼物。

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Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. The Spring Festival is very exciting, especially on the eve of the Spring Festival.

春节对于中国人来说是最重要的节日。在每年的春节都让人兴高采烈，尤其是大年三十那晚，更是达到了高潮。

The Spring Festival lasts for 15 days, there would be starting on the first day, to the end of the January 15 Lantern Festival.it is the busiest time of the year for Chinese people. The arrangements they have to make for family reunions， buying necessities and preparing food keeps them busy throughout the holiday. Many of them travel back home and meet friends over dinner and drinks. The celebrations include decorating the house and setting off fireworks.But we are talking about a tradition that seems to be fading.

春节一共有15天，从大年初一开始，到元月十五元宵节这一天结束。在这段比较长的时间是中国人最忙的时候，他们为家庭聚会作安排，采购年货，准备丰盛的食物，以至于整个春节假期都忙忙碌碌的。许多人在春季期间都要回老家过年，跟朋友碰碰头，聚个餐。庆祝春节也包括大扫除和放烟火。但是我们现在要谈的是越来越淡的年味。

Spring Festival， as it is celebrated today， has undergone many changes， thanks to the country‘s economic development and globalization.

现在的春节已经因为我国经济的发展和全球化的影响而改变了很多。

Yet no Spring Festival is complete without food. People could not get good food whenever they desired in earlier times， something that does not apply to society today. More often than not， people faced the risk of famine. The best time for people to celebrate was when food was available in plenty， and that was possible in spring， or the beginning of the lunar new year. That was the main reason why Spring Festival acquired such great importance among Chinese people.

但是没有哪个春节是完全离得开“吃”的。从前，不论人们提前多久想要买年货，总是不能如愿，而现在早已今非昔比。过去常常还要闹饥荒。人们最好的庆祝时间就是他们能得到食物丰盛的时候，也就是春天或是元月初的那段时间。那也是为什么春节对于中国人如此重要的主要原因。

But three decades of economic growth has ensured that people in China， except for those who are still poor， can enjoy a good meal whenever they want. Such has been the change in people‘s fortune that some have to be treated for obesity and other health problems associated with excessive eating.

但是三十年来的经济发展已经让中国人，除了那些仍然穷苦的人以外，随时都能享受美食。这得益于人民财富的增长，但是后者也导致一些人吃得太多而受到肥胖威胁和健康问题。

In the past， celebrations were limited to events like song-and-dance duets in North China， dragon/lion dances in South China and fireworks， which required the joint efforts of the entire community. But economic development and urbanization seems to have weakened the social links among people. Many， especially those living in cities， are not interested in celebrating the festival with people they hardly know.

在过去，庆祝春节还只停留在北方的二人转和南方的舞龙舞狮等形式。那些庆祝活动往往需要许多人合力才能办得起来。但是经济的发展和国际化程度的提升似乎已经将这种社会联系弱化了。许多人，特别是城市居民，不太愿意与不相识的人一起共度春节。

Many customs associated with Spring Festival have changed， too. In the past， people used to visit relatives and friends with gifts and lots of good wishes. Today， many people， especially the youth， use their cell phones or the Internet to send their good wishes and even "gifts" to their relatives and friends. Some may say this a sign that people have become less caring about their near and dear ones， but we should see this development as a time- and energy-saving exercise granted by the information age.

与春节相关的许多习俗也被改变了。在过去，人们常常会带着礼物走亲访友，互道祝福。今天许多人，特别是年轻人，用手机或是网络向亲朋好友发去“礼物”和祝福。有些人或许会说，这说明人们已经没有那么关心至爱亲朋了，但是我们应该把这种变化看作信息化时代省钱省力的好办法。

In recent times， many people have started praying for a career promotion or more money instead of invoking God or the Buddha for a healthy and long life and the welfare of their family. But the number of such people is decreasing now， which shows that people are becoming more reasonable.

最近几年，许多人开始祈祷事业高升，财源滚滚，而不是求神拜佛，他们身体健康，长命百岁，家庭美满。但是这样的人数现在正在减少，说明人们开始变得更加理性。

I have a good friend.Her name is Betty.She is 12 years old.I‘m one year older than her.Her eyes are bigger than mine.Her hair is black and long.My hair is longger than hers.Betty is 156 centimetres tall.Im 2 centimetres taller than her.She is about 40 kilos.Im 50 kilos.So she is thinner than me.Betty is a beautiful and helpful girl.She does better in English than me.She often helps me with my English.Well be good friends forever.

我有一个好朋友.她的名字叫贝蒂.她今年12岁,我比她大一岁.她的眼睛比我的大,头发又黑又长.我的头发比她的更长.贝蒂156厘米高,我比她高2厘米.她大约40公斤,我50公斤,所以她比我瘦.贝蒂是个漂亮的乐于助人的女孩,她的英语学得比我好,她经常帮助我学英语.我们将永远是好朋友.

Every year the Spring Festival is my most happy day, every family hangs red lanterns, antithetical couplet, children put on new clothes, we sit together to eat the family reunion dinner, the most happy thing is with fireworks.

I was six years old that year, the Spring Festival after eating the reunion dinner, my brother and I quickly ran into the yard with fireworks, I carefully use lighter to lead a touch, and my brother and I ran to see the fireworks empty and take off on the sky like a bunch of chrysanthemum and our fireworks burst, some like a gyroscope, hovering on the ground; Some like split, in the air and the colorful "flowers"; There is like heaven meteor, flashed in the sky... Beautiful!

If every day can be like the Spring Festival, that it would be good!

Teachers comment: this article hierarchy clear, full sentences. Full text is filled with passion, can realize you read between the lines of the affection of the Spring Festival and longing for a better life. At the same time I also wish you happiness, happy forever!

每年过春节是我最开心的日子，家家户户挂上红红的灯笼，贴上对联，小孩子穿上新衣、大家坐在一起吃团圆饭，最开心的事是放烟花。

我六岁那年春节，吃完团圆饭后，我和弟弟飞快的跑到院子里放烟花，我小心翼翼地用打火机往引线上一碰，我和弟弟就跑，只见烟花空而起飞上天空像一簇菊花，我们的烟花一朵朵炸开，有的好像陀螺一样，在地上转来转去;有的仿佛天女散花似的，在空中撒出五彩的“花朵”;还有的有如天外流星一般，在空中飞驰而过……美丽极了!

如果每天多可以像过春节一样那该多好啊!

教师评语：这篇文章层次清晰，语句流畅。全文充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到你对春节的喜爱之情和对美好生活的向往。同时我也希望你永远幸福、快乐!