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英语作文及翻译:苹果树

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A young apple tree begins to grow from a seed. When its roots reach into the soil, it gets water. The young tree uses light from the sun and makes its own food. For several years, the tree grows bigger.

Then, in spring, it grows sweet flowers. During the summer, apples begin to grow. They grow bigger and bigger. In autumn, they began to fall from the tree.

People like apples because they taste good. And they are good for health.

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苹果树是由一颗种子长大的。当它的根扎到土壤里,它就得到了水分。小树利用阳光,制造了自己的食物。几年以后,小树长大了。

后来,到了春天,树长出了清香的花朵。夏天时,蘋果开始生长。它们长得越来越大。到了秋天,蘋果开始从树上落下来。

人们喜欢苹果,因为它们味道好,而且对健康有益。

[英语作文及翻译:苹果树

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篇1:初二英语作文大全

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My Traveling in Beijing

A few years ago, I went to Beijing. I really had a great time there.

The first time I went to Beijing, I was very confused. Beijing was very

big. It was so big that I couldn’t find the right directions. And the traffic

was always so busy.

During my staying in Beijing, I visited so many places of interest, such as

the Great Wall, Tiananmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, and so

on. I also went to Wangfujing shopping mall. But things were very expensive. So

I just did the window shopping.

What’s more, the most exciting thing for me was taking the underground.

Although it was crowded, I still felt excited. Because I could follow the steps

of the modern city.

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篇2:关于我的夏天英语作文带翻译

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It is very hot in the summer.people dont like going out on summer afternoon because the temperature is high.

sometimes it is raining after sun,that is cool!maybe on a summer night,it is thunder and lightning.it is make people scary,and dangerous!so please dont go out when it is thunder.

Though the weather in summer is hot,but I think summer is interesting,because we can swim in the poor!that is great!

夏天天气很热。人们不喜欢在夏天的下午,因为温度高。

有时太阳后下雨了,很凉爽!也许在一个夏天的夜晚,雷声和闪电。它是让人可怕,危险!所以请不要外出时雷声。

虽然在夏天的天气是热的,但我认为夏天是有趣的,因为我们可以在泳池里游泳!这是非常好的!

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篇3:对上网的看法高考英语作文及翻译

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上网对孩子好还是不好,好在哪里,不好在哪里,并谈谈自己对这个问题的看法

We should say that every coin has its two sides. So it is with surfing on line.

我们应该说,每个硬币都有两面。所以这是与网上冲浪。

Generally speaking, students will benefit a lot from Internet. People can get lots of useful information through the Internet quickly ,no matter it is national or throughout the world. We can also listen to the music and chat with the friends far away.The most important of all is that we can search many foreigners who speak English as their native languge, which can help us improve our Enlish rapidly.We can send Email to our good friends in a few seconds---with the internet your friend dont need to wait for so long time as receiving a letter as before.

一般而言,学生会受益很多,从互联网。人们可以通过互联网获得大量有用的信息,不管是国家还是世界。我们也可以听音乐和外地的朋友聊天。最重要的是,我们可以寻找许多外国人讲英语作为他们的母语,这可以帮助我们快速提高我们的英语水平。我们可以在一个网上朋友不要几秒钟---我们的好朋友发电子邮件需要等待很长时间才收到一封信。

But it also can spread many side effects.for example ,there are some sexy news and pictures on web which will not do good to teenagers. And there are some games that can easily attract the students and even make you addict to the games so you can waste a lot of valuable time.

但它也可以传播许多副作用的例子,网络上有将不利于青少年的一些性感的新闻和图片。还有一些游戏,可以很容易地吸引学生,甚至让你沉迷于游戏,这样你可以浪费很多宝贵的时间。

On the whole it will give you both good and bad things, the thing matters much is how do you make use of it.

总的来说,它会给你既好又坏的东西,这件事很重要的是你如何利用它。

[对上网的看法高考英语作文及翻译

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篇4:英语日记带翻译

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This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the

bike, eating a banana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street

randomly.

今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。

No sooner had I done this than I realized that I had done something bad to

our environment. And maybe someone would step on it and tumble over. I must pick

it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumped off the bike and ran

back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeing

this, father praised me and I felt very happy.

我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more

about others.

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。

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篇5:初二英语作文:AYoungPioneer

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Wang Lin is a Young Pioneer. It seems to me that he is a very ordinary student. He is tall and thin. He is a boy of few words. But we all know he is quite good at English and Chinese.

Last week a woman came to our school. She came to thank Wang Lin. The woman is Li Qiangs mother. This is the story she told us.

"A year ago, my son, Li Qiang, was seriously ill. He was so ill that he couldnt go to school. When Wang Lin learned it from the newspaper, he decided to do something to help my son.

He kept visiting my son and encouraged him. He helped him with his lessons once a week. They made good friends. With the help of Wang Lin, Li Qiang didnt feel lonely any more. Now Li Qiang has recovered. I am quite grateful to the boy for his kind help."

What a good Young Pioneer he is!

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篇6:初二寒假英语日记

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I got up early this morning and had breakfast quickly.Then my mother and I took the bus to my grandmother`s home.My grandmother was glad to see me again.She gave me candies and a cup of milk.She was really kind to me.At noon,we had lunch,There were lofts of people.After that,I talked with my grandmother.She laughed again and again.Then I played with my brother and my little sister.Finally ,I said "see you " to each other.

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篇7:寒假英语日记带翻译

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January 17 20xx

20xx年1月17号

It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mothers business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometowns special product. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.

这是一个特殊的时光今天。我的母亲寄100红bayberries篮子。我喜欢吃红bayberries。味道不错。当他们来到上海,但他们仍记忆犹新。但是,其中大部分将被派往我母亲的商界的朋友。我选择了最好的红色bayberries篮子吃。我把我的冰箱的休息。杨梅是我的故乡的特殊产品。这是着名的中国。许多人喜欢吃它。作文地带提供中文翻译寒假英语日记带翻译仅供大家参考和学习,祝大家学习进步、寒假愉快!

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篇8:英语日记带翻译

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A hot day

Today is very hot,the heightest temperature reached to 40 degree.So I

stayed at home all the day.I recited english text this morning,after I finished

my homework,I prepared lunch for my families.I cooked egg-fried rice for

lunch,because there was eggs in the fridge only and I didnt want to go out

shopping for the hot weather.In the afternoon,I slept half of the day.It was

time to cook dinner when I wake up.It was a boring day,I hate hot weather.

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炎热的一天

今天天气非常地热,最高温度达到40度,所以我一整天都呆在家里。早上我被英语文章。完成了家庭作业之后,我就为全家人准备午餐。我做了鸡蛋炒饭作为午餐,因为冰箱里只有鸡蛋,并且由于天气热我不想出去购物。下午,我睡了大半天。当我醒来的时候就已经是做晚饭的时间了。这是非常无聊的一天,我讨厌炎热的天气。

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篇9:八年级英语作文我的暑假带翻译

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My summer vacation

This years summer vacation, I so happy.

The summer vacation, I at home carefree get boring, until one day, my dance teacher told me that we are still in perfect order, dance dance of the class is rhythm feeling worse, if good rhythm, can go to the match in a couple of months.

Once I listen to, the game soon, then looking for right away. Ah! Where there is a plate to exercise good rhythm?

"Ah," I sighed. Suddenly remind of a computer. Yi? The computer can play MP3, isnt it? Ha ha! Some I le. I immediately opened up the computer, listening to music. I have heard for three weeks, finally recognized the lasting appeal. Turned out to be "dong man dong man" "dong man dong man" every first "dong" is "a" first "man" is "2" the second "dong" is "three" the second "man" is the "four". Rhythm is "1234, 1234" repeatedly, but want to use English.

I believe that as long as we work hard and have good grades.

Happy summer vacation, happy summer vacation, summer vacation without anxiety.

我的暑假

今年的暑假,我过的特别开心。

暑假,我在家闲得无聊,直到有一天,我的舞蹈老师告诉我,我们这个班舞蹈跳的还是井井有条,就是节奏感差些,要是节奏感好,过几个月就可以去比赛了。

我一听,马上就要比赛了,便马上到处找起来。啊!哪里有碟子让了锻炼好节奏感啊?

"哎"我叹了口气.突然想起电脑.咦?电脑不是可以播放MP3吗?呵呵!有的我乐了。我立即把电脑开起来,听曲子。我听了整整三个礼拜,终于听出了里面的韵味。原来是"咚哒哒咚哒哒""咚哒哒咚哒哒"每第一个"咚"就是"一"第一个"哒哒"就是"二"第二个"咚"就是"三"第二个"哒哒"就是"四"。节奏就是"一二三四,一二三四"重复不停的念,不过要用英文。

我相信,只要我们努力比拼,就一定会有好成绩的。

开心的暑假,快乐的暑假,没有忧虑的暑假。

[我的暑假生活英语作文带翻译3篇

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篇10:短篇英语日记带翻译

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I think my teacher got out of bedon the wtong side this afternoon as she

hasn’t cries.i went to office saw the boys unhappy.Because the students got

their teacher’s goat became they didn’t do their homework..I think this is my

teacher unhappy’s cause. Today, I saw a boy ,he played the handset.But didn’t

saw the walls so he Rnocked we laugh up our sleeve at he knocked ,but he hurt

his norse in the accident, and he was laying it on thick about how painful it

was .

It’s also a happy day, isn’t it ?

我想我的老师走出bedon的错误方向今天下午,她就一直没有哭.我到办公室看到男孩不高兴.因为学生得到老师的山羊成为他们没有做功课..我认为这是我的老师不愉快的事业。今天,我看到了一个男孩,他发挥了handset.但是没有看到这样的墙壁,他使我们笑了我们套在他撞倒,但他伤了挪威在这起事故,他就铺设厚如何痛苦这是。

这也是一个快乐的日子,是不是?

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篇11:初中英语作文有翻译

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People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.

人们总是说我们缺乏发现实现生活中的美丽的眼睛。我十分同意。上周,我早上很早就醒了,所以我决定出去散步。街上很安静,有很多老人在广场上跳舞。街上没有了很多小车,我意识到这个城市看起来那么干净和漂亮。一些咖啡店装修很好,吸引了我的眼球。这座城市被绿色的树木覆盖着,这是一个绿化放的城市。我很喜欢这种感觉。这时,我发现这个城市是如此的可爱,平常我忽略了它的美。

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篇12:高二英语作文及翻译

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Today, as the development of the medical, people can slow down their aging. As for the celebrities, they use the developed technology to keep young, seeing their unchangeable faces in the screen for so many years, the audience also want to imitate the celebrity, they believe that by using the developed technology, they can keep young all the time. While in my opinion, the way to keep young is to hold a young heart, some people look young outside, but in their hearts, they are old enough and refuse to keep pace with the time. While for another group, even they have wrinkles, they are curious about all the things and are willing to change. My grandpa is old, but he knows all the fashionable things, sometimes I have to ask him for the new things. The young heart is the way to keep young forever.

今天,随着医疗的发展,人们能够延缓衰老。对于名人来讲,他们使用高科技来保持年轻,看到他们常年在屏幕上保持不变的容颜,观众也想要模仿名人,他们相信通过使用高科技就能一直保持年轻。然而在我看来,保持年轻的方法就是拥有一颗年轻的心,一些人表面看起来年轻,但是在他们的心里,他们足够的老,并且拒绝去与时俱进。对于另外一些人来讲,虽然他们有皱纹,但是他们对一切都保持好奇,并且愿意去改变。我的爷爷年纪大,但是他对一切时尚的东西都了如指掌,有时候我不得不问他关于新的事物。年轻的心是永葆青春的方法。

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篇13:初二英语

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Li Yan, an engineer, was born on February 9, 1965 in Beijing, China. After

he graduated from Qinghua University in 1987, he made an important decision in

his life. He decided to go to the United States for his further study. After

four years hard work, he mastered new management ideas an advanced technologies

in computer field. In 1992, he got his doctors degree. he made another

decision that to return to his motherland and started a company. However, his

wife and daughter had got used to the American way of life, so they still stay

in the United States. But they still can meet frequently, because of the

convenient transportation, and his wife and daughter often visit him in

holidays.

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篇14:初二英语作文大全

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Different people have different hobbies.For example,someone likes

reading,someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.

I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could

learn many funny things.But now I dont like it.I can only learn from books.I

couldnt get knowledge from others.I need a change.Traveling is my favorite

hobby now.But I cant go traveling a lot.I can visit many different places of

interest by traveling.I can learn a lot about people,places and history.Its

very interesting.What is your hobby?Lets share each other!

I have many good friends.They all have their hobbies.Ann studies very

hard.So her hobby is book reading.Tony loves labour,and his hobby is

gardening.He usually plants flowers and trees in his yard.Judy is a quiet

girl.She likes knitting.She always knits some sweaters for her dolls.We have

different hobbies,but we are good friends.

I love traveling.I have great fun in traveling.

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篇15:英语日记带翻译

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I bought a jeans today

Today,I went shopping with my intimate.We set out at 11:00 by riding Ofo

bicycle.Because both of us hadn‘t eaten breakfirst.,as soon as we arrived the

street,we ate a cheese iscream respectively.Then we went to underground

market.In the market,I bought a blue jeans,and my intimate bought a short

jeans.After three hours of hanging around the street,we were very tired and

hungry,so we bought a new chicken cutlet,and then went home by bus.We were so

hungry that we ate the chicken cutlet on the bus.After I backed home,I tried my

new jeans on,my mother said that looks old,let it be,as long as I happy.

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今天我买了一条牛仔裤

今天,我和我的闺蜜去逛街。我们上午11点就骑小黄车长发了。因为我们都没有吃早餐,所以我们一到那就各自吃了一个奶酪冰淇淋。然后我们就去地下商场。在商场里,我买了一条蓝色长牛仔裤,我的闺蜜买了一条短牛仔裤。我们逛了3个小时的街之后,又饿又累,所以我们就买了正新鸡排并且坐公交车回去。因为我们实在太饿了,于是就在公交车上吃了鸡排。我回家之后,就试穿了我的新牛仔裤,我妈妈说那看起来太成熟了,管他呢,我开心就好。

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篇16:我的爱好英语作文带翻译

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My name is Qiou Ye. I am twelve.My favorite sport is ping-pong and swimming. I like basketbll and I like volletball. I can play the piano and draw, I can play them very well. This is Me.

Can you tell me about yourself ?

我的名字是丘叶。我十二岁,我最喜欢的运动是乒乓球和游泳。我喜欢篮球,我喜欢volletball。我可以弹钢琴和画画,我可以打得很好。这是我。

你能告诉我你自己吗?

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篇17:英语日记带翻译

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My New Deskmate

My new deskmate is a boy of sixteen. His name is Zhang Gao. He is 1.8

meters tall. His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a

sportsman. He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebows. It seems that

they are always smiling at you. Compared with my yellow hair, his hair is black

and thick. He speaks a little bit fast but very clearly. However, he likes to

gesture from time to time while hes talking. He has a dream of becoming a famous

actor one day. I believe his dream will come true because of his handsome face

and well-developed figure.

我的新同桌是一个16岁的男孩。他叫张高,身高一米八。结实的身材、晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像运动员。他浓浓的眉毛下有一双又黑又大的眼睛,似乎总是在对人微笑。与我的黄头发相比,他有一头浓密的黑发。他的语速有点快,但相当清楚,只是他说话时爱打手势。他的理想是当一名演员,我想他英俊的长相和匀称的身材定会让他好梦成真。

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篇18:写旅游的英语作文

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你喜欢旅游吗?一起来用英语记录你的旅游经历吧,下面是写旅游的英语作文,欢迎阅读。

I most like to travel! Travel makes me have fun, and can learn a lot, then I to introduce you to the place where I feel funny, everybody follow me go travel together!

Every time I go to the most place is hangzhou, go to all feel a lot of fun. Summer can go to west lake for a walk, play would be.

You can go to the prince bay park in March to appreciate the beautiful cherry blossoms and gorgeous tulips.

If students want to get a lot of knowledge, I suggest that we can go to hangzhou science and technology museum, there are a lot of science show allows us to try myself.

Shaoxing is the place where I have been to the deepest impression, why? Because the day I first go to shaoxing shaoxing hospital, I had a high fever 40 degrees, also want to know when I was only 4 years old ah, can put the ssi urgent is broken, straight Shouting regret taking me out to play, then mom said to me, if you want to swim in shaoxing, tomorrow I must be able to keep the fever down. Strange to say, in order to swim the day I really cooled down, is really god to help me also. Ha ha, is also a doctor attributed to aunt! The next day I play a day, a good thing they have been dying for ssi also always think Im good. In shaoxing, I visited the former residence of lu xuns grandfather, ancestral, swimming for yu ling, herbals, shen garden, etc.

Then I want to say, hengdian is fun place. Theres really big ah, every scenic spots have to spend two or three hours. Theres a lot of film and television production, I saw a lot of performances, there the first time I have bought a 褀 robe.

Say again lets own here, we have yuhuan park, agricultural sightseeing garden, I think may the students have been to all of these, I think is interesting, there is a place that is mom took me to the LuPu rape and pick strawberries to eat. Im having a great time that day.

I most like to travel!

译文:

我最喜欢旅游了! 旅游让我既玩得开心,又能学到很多知识,接下来我向大家介绍一下我觉得好玩的地方,大家跟着我一起旅游去吧!

我去的最多地方就是杭州,每次去都觉得很好玩。夏天去可以西湖走走,宋城玩玩。

三月份去就可以去太子湾公园欣赏漂亮的樱花和绚烂的郁金香。

如果同学们想要获得很多知识,我建议大家可以去杭州科技馆,那儿有很多科学展示可以让我们自己动手去试。

绍兴是我去过的地方印象最深的,为什么呢?因为去绍兴的那天我首先逛的是绍兴医院,我发高烧了,还40度呢,要知道当时我才只有4岁呀,可把老爸老妈急坏了,直喊着后悔带我出来玩,后来老妈对我说:如果想游绍兴,到了明天我必须能退烧了。说也奇怪,为了能游我真的第二天退烧了,真是老天助我也。哈哈,其实也是医生阿姨的功劳!第二天我就好好的玩了一天,这件事情对老爸老妈来说他们一直后怕也一直觉得我好厉害。在绍兴我参观了鲁迅爷爷的故居,祖居,游了大禹陵,百草园,沈园等。

接下来我要说的好玩地方就是横店。那儿可真大呀,每个景区都得花个两三个小时。那儿可是很多电影、电视生产的地方,我看了很多的表演,在那儿我还第一次买了一件褀袍。

再说说咱们自己这儿吧,我们这儿有玉环公园,有农业观光园,我想这些地方可能同学们都去过了吧,我还有一个地方觉得也有意思,那就是老妈带我去芦浦看的油菜花和摘草莓吃。那天我也玩得非常开心。

我最喜欢旅游了!

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篇19:封信英语翻译

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Good morning,everyone! I`m very happy to have this chance to give my

presentation. Before I start my speech, please let me ask you a question. Do you

think you are confident in yourself? If you are, do please raise your hand.

My topic today is “ to Be a Confident Person.”

What is confidence? Confidence is to trust yourself. Confidence is to look

upon yourself. It is not to indulge in self-admiration. It is not to get

extremely arrogant. It is not to get dizzy with success or to be opinionated. It

is just to inspire yourself ahead of a quality of mind, in high spirit, full of

energy. It is to meet the challenges of life in a positive mood. It is to

overcome your inferiority, farewell, to get rid of the trouble of a a ready-made

panacea.

Remember, I have just entered junior high school. In the face of the

challenge of new environment, in the face of so many new courses and learning

contents, I lost faith in my own and gradually developed a psychological sense

of inferiority. Achievement glided ceaselessly. It is a teacher and mother who

encouraged me and let me regain confidence. Gradually, my grades got higher and

higher and everything began to go on well. Gradually I adapted to the life in

middle school.

Friends, lets say goodbye to inferiority. Let’s be a confident person.

Because: only if you have self-confidence, can you control yourself; only if you

have confidence, can you achieve success and create your a brilliant life of

your own!

大家好!

今天我演讲的题目是:做一个自的人。

什么是自信?自信,就是自己信得过自己,自己看得起自己。它,不是孤芳自赏,也不是夜郎自大,更不是得意忘形和自以为是;而是激励自己奋发进取的一种心里素质,是以高昂的斗志,充沛的干劲迎接生活挑战的一种乐观情绪;是战胜自己,告别自卑,摆脱烦恼的一种灵丹妙药。

还记得,我刚刚升入初中时,面对新的环境,面对那么多的新的课程和学习内容,我对自己失去了信心,逐渐产生了自卑心理,成绩不断下滑,是老师和妈妈及时帮助我、鼓励我,让我重新找回自信。渐渐的,我的学习成绩及各个方面都有明显进步,逐渐适应了初中的生活。

朋友们,让我们告别自卑,做一个自信的人吧。因为:只有拥有自信,才能拥有自我;只有拥有自信,才能走向成功,才能创造自己辉煌的人生。

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篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧

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下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧,欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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