对高中生活的第一印象英语作文通用20篇

盼望已久的夏天来临了，我拿着信心满满的成绩踏上了惊奇而又期待的美好暑假。

我是一名高中的学生，我盼望着自己的暑假是多姿多彩的，可事情却不如我心意，尽管如此我也不是很灰心，乐观的认为人生并不全是践踏在学习之路上的。

等待我的是严峻的考验，我的。爸爸为我找了一名家教，每一天都是一些头痛作业，尽管如此我也很幸福。我的爸爸给我的不是一些压力，而是一些鼓励。我的学习并不是很理想，尽管如此，我的爸爸却从来没有给我时施压力，而是一在鼓励，让我自信。

我的暑假虽然很平凡，但我却认为在这平凡的暑假内总比在这2个月之内没有收获好啊。光阴似箭，日月如梭。时间是金钱买不到的，也是不能退流的。

付出才有收获的啊，人生有几个，时间有怎能摧毁一切呢?

This period of songhua river flows north river jilin city.

How beautiful she was, white net, the color is simple, but will make you feel shine at the moment. Approached her, as if into another world. She like a shaft of the green long picture, like a mirror, like a huge dragon, like a mothers warm hands, caressing jilin the earth. Is she, has brought up the residents near the river. No! Is raising the whole people in jilin. Without her, we would not have good day now, there will be no happy life now, there will be no happy time now!

The winter in the north, a layer of a layer of water ice, can skate. Only the songhua river is not frozen, so the world called the north only a frozen river. Winter, songhua river, only small wearing green sweater wild ducks, also have other color, in the floating, as if quietly thinking about what profound problem. From time to time to see them move the shoulder, neck, very lovely. Sometimes fly a few water birds, skim over the water, want to skate in the songhua river, ha, that is in the dream.

Summer, I remember once, I went to the rivers edge, wow! Water rose to the place where we walk, a bottom go to, water shoes, I am happy is broken. Is playing with water, there is a crawling leeches, really ugly, scared me; One side to a big sister, using ice cream sticks, fight with leeches, let me have a "zhi dou leeches" drama!

The lijiang river water static, clean, green, let all the letters with admiration, has left many colorful article! I think the author may not have been to jilin, did not witness the songhua river.

[高中英语作文我的家乡哈尔滨

Almost everyone wants to live a long life, but longevity is not for all

people. It is reported that most long life people are in villages, far away from

big cities. In village, life is closer to nature. The sky there is clear and

pretty; the air is fresh; the water is clean; and the food they eat are natural,

without any chemicals. Besides, those villages are abundant in green trees,

beautiful flowers, fresh fruit, and wild animals, which can evoke peoples

passions for life. Moreover, the living pace in those villages is rather slow.

People suffer less stress than cities’. Thus, they have more freedom to enjoy

what they like. No wonder that most villagers are strong and healthy. If I

become old someday, I would like to move to village to enjoy a more comfortable

and pleasant life.

The 15-Day Celebration of Chinese New Year.

The first day of the Lunar New Year is "the welcoming of the gods of the heavens and earth."Many people abstain from meat on the first day of the new year because it is believed that this will ensure long and happy lives for them.

On the second day, the Chinese pray to their ancestors as well as to all the gods. They are extra kind to dogs and feed them well as it is believed that the second day is the birthday of all dogs.

The third and fourth days are for the sons-in-laws to pay respect to their parents-in-law.

The fifth day is called Po Woo. On that day people stay home to welcome the God of Wealth. No one visits families and friends on the fifth day because it will bring both parties bad luck.

On the sixth to the 10th day, the Chinese visit their relatives and friends freely. They also visit the temples to pray for good fortune and health.

The seventh day of the New Year is the day for farmers to display their produce. These farmers make a drink from seven types of vegetables to celebrate the occasion. The seventh day is also considered the birthday of human beings. Noodles are eaten to promote longevity and raw fish for success.

On the eighth day the Fujian people have another family reunion dinner, and at midnight they pray to Tian Gong, the God of Heaven.

The ninth day is to make offerings to the Jade Emperor.

The 10th through the 12th are days that friends and relatives should be invited for dinner. After so much rich food, on the 13th day you should have simple rice congee and mustard greens (choi sum) to cleanse the system.

The 14th day should be for preparations to celebrate the Lantern Festival which is to be held on the 15th night.

In the past few decades, our Earth has changed a lot, but to the bad

direction. Among these changes, the air pollutions resulting from a huge number

of automobiles and coal-burning is almost the severest. The severe air pollution

alarms humans of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our insatiable

production and usage of automobiles. However, with the deepening of

urbanization, more cars are needed, which will make the air pollution worse.

Therefore, the following actions should be taken. First, we should apply the

most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as

substitutes for fossil fuels. Second, try hard to develop possible

transportation means, which are enviromental friendly. So that the citizens can

reduce the dependence on cars. In short, our humans should take responsibilities

for the air pollution and have to find ways to solve this problem.

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The Winter Holiday

I like the winter holiday very much. Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival. I can watch cartoon every day. I neednt go to school frepuently. Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside. With the festival coming,I can play all the time. I can play video game with my brother. I am good at playing PC game. So I often beats my brother. Then more and more relative came to my home. We had dinner together. Its so lively that Iam very happy. But I still

have to do my homework. During the holiday,I learned a lot. I love the winter holiday.

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It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home. My father was writing a composition in the study room. My mother was interested in Shanghai opera. She was watching a Shanghai opera contest. The apartment was very quiet. Suddenly the light went out. It was a blackout, but I liked it very much. It came and I didn’t have to do my homework. We went to the living room very slowly. After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa. It was a lucky, fortunate day. I said that let’s held a concert. My parents agreed with me. I took out some candles and lighted up. We were singing, laughing and talking. We had a really good time. But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on. Oh, my God. My father went back to his room went on writing. My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt very frustrated. I sat at the desk and thought I hated light. I hoped there would be a blackout the next day. I thought I would enjoy myself more and more. I went into a dream……

Many children are always looking forward to the winter vacation; this is because during the vacation, children needn’t go to school; They can do everything they like, such as playing, watching TV, traveling, or even sleeping all the day and so on. and when winter vacation come on ,it means that spring festival will come on soon.I spent the whole day at home nearly every day, I played with my computer .I played computer games and surfed the internet. during the vacation ,I still stayed in touch with my classmates and my friends. I think I have been a potatoes mouse .During the spring festival, I visited my relatives ,and I got a lot of red bags. Even though my vacation was crazy and exciting, but I really learnt a lot. It was good for relaxing, and I am getting ready for the coming new term now. Good-bye, my winter vacation.

翻译：我的寒假

许多孩子总是盼望着寒假。这是因为在这个假期间，孩子不用去学校，他们可以做任何他们喜欢做的。象：玩，看电视，旅游，或者睡上一整天等等。而且当寒假来临的时候，也意味着春节即将到来。我几乎整天都呆在家里，玩我的电脑。我玩电脑游戏和在网上冲浪。在寒假期间，我仍然和我的同学、朋友保持联系。我想我就快成“薯条鼠标”了。在春节期间，我拜访了我的亲人，而且我得到了很多红包。尽管我的假期是疯狂和兴奋的，但我的确学到了很多。这对放松是有好处的，我已经为即将到来的新学期做好了准备。再见！我的寒假。

The Winter Holiday

I like the winter holiday very much.

Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.

I can watch cartoon every day.

I neednt go to school frepuently.

Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.

With the festival coming,I can play all the time.

I can play video game with my brother.

I am good at playing PC game.

So I often beats my brother.

Then more and more relative came to my home.

We had dinner together.

Its so lively that Iam very happy.

But I still have to do my homework.

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A blackout

It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home. My father was writing a composition in the study room. My mother was interested in Shanghai opera. She was watching a Shanghai opera contest. The apartment was very quiet. Suddenly the light went out. It was a blackout, but I liked it very much. It came and I didn’t have to do my homework. We went to the living room very slowly. After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa. It was a lucky, fortunate day. I said that let’s held a concert. My parents agreed with me. I took out some candles and lighted up. We were singing, laughing and talking. We had a really good time. But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on. Oh, my God. My father went back to his room went on writing. My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt very frustrated. I sat at the desk and thought I hated light. I hoped there would be a blackout the next day. I thought I would enjoy myself more and more. I went into a dream……

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New Year Resolution

In the new year, I will work hard in school. I will pay attention in class, complete assignments on time and do extra readings preactively to enhance my understandings about the topics covered in class.

I will lead a healthy lifestyle by balancing work and leisure, exercising regularly and keeping a healthy diet.

I will spend more time with my families and friends. I will share with them my joys and tears and give them a hand when they need help.

Let 2009 be a year of happiness and fulfilment.

[有关寒假生活的英语作文

My campus life is rich and colorful.

The university life different secondary school life.And it is a problem that how should I adapt to college life.

I go to attend claeveryday morning excluding weekend .In the class I just listening to lectures, and my teachers and classmates discuss the problem.After  class, ofen i go to play basketball or badminton with my friends.

In the evening,i have two hours for study by oneself in scheduled time, and then go back to my dormitory and surf on the internet.At the weekend,i take part in some part-time jobs and go to the Einglish Corner sometimes.

All in all,life in the University is beatiful and substantial for me.And I believe I will achieve my self-value through  the university life .

in my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. i think that having a dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the things to achieve the target. as long as we have a goal to be realized, we won’t be blind at least.

my dream is to become a successful stateman, helping those people who need help with their rights. of course, to be a good stateman is very difficult, but i will do whatever i can do to keep everyone satisfied. thats my dream. i want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country. china is a developing country which needs good stateman,especially in the countryside and distant villages.

now i’m a junior student on grade one, my dream is also that although at present i’m good at study, i’ll still try my best to be the study winner. now everything i do is close to my dream. i feel life is fill with hope and is colorful, and i have enough confidence to realize my dream.

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I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations.

Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this.

At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.

An unforgettable experience

My mom used to say that I was born to swim. But the truth is that I didn t know how to swim until the last year of my primary school!

Mom always said that I could swim in the basin when I was only two months old. I was surprised at the amazing fact. If this was true, then why was I afraid of water? I went to swim every summer, but I didn t make a little progress. I was worried and blamed myself several times. When I watched people swimming freely, how I wished I had learnt to swim!

The story of how I learnt to swim is dramatic. One hot summer afternoon, my father and I went to the swimming pool to swim. While my father was changing his clothes, I was roaming along the bank of the pool. Suddenly I heard a voice, Look out! and then came a big noise and beautiful splashes. Just when I was admiring the swimmer s skills, I slipped into the pool! I was so afraid that I shouted at once! But the water kept coming towards me and I drank a lot of it. I was moving upside down and trying to reach the bank. I was struggling very hard to keep my head above the water.

A minute was like a hundred years to me. To my surprise, I was able to keep the style! Just then, my father, saw me and he seemed to be shocked. He then said, Calm down, just wave your arms and legs like this. Right! And I got it! I finally learnt to swim! You can t imagine how happy I was and I wanted to jump for joy!

[一次难忘的经历高中英语作文

曾经的走过，有欢笑，又沉默。难以忘怀的难道仅是迟迟的春日? 题记

走过轰轰烈烈的初中后，留下了为数不多的回忆，每一幕似乎都刻骨，但又模糊。情节是那样清晰但每个人的身影又是那么飘忽，那么不定，想要把这个正以流沙速度模糊地一张张将要失真的图片以优美的姿态储存起来。纵使，真切的似梦般，但毕竟那些锁在心里的，都有那么一段过往，那么一段曾经。

高中的色彩是充满浓郁的紫色，紫色的天空，紫色的楼房，紫色的树木，甚至，连早晨的雾都弥漫着梦想的紫色。呼吸一口新鲜空气，仿佛吐出的亦是梦想的每一步。那条路，紫色的路，我们不知不觉，已走得好远

每天，似乎千篇一律：早自习、跑操、上课、午饭、上课、晚饭、晚自习。一天的活动基本上维持着生态系统的稳定性，让我想到初中数学老强调了又强调的三角形

好稳定!作文

每天最欢快的时间，是吃饭的时间。三五成群的被束缚的鸟儿争相逃离那个有四口大窗户提供光明的教师。可是，那光明，可望不可即

每天走在规定的行程上，思想着停止它的办法 无解。于是，此程序框图的无限循环最终将终止在高考的战场上。作文

原来，高中真的能将尖利的峰角磨光磨亮。不管你在曾经是多么的盛气，多么的自我，终究会改变自己，完全适应这高中环境的选择。可能，正是这种无可选择的选择，让每个经历了高中的学子都有了成熟的感觉。现在回想起曾经的我，只好轻轻地一笑而过。

就在每天必走的食堂与教室的连线上，我思考着，我有了我这个年龄不该有的沉默。阳光正茂盛，映在光滑的大理石板上，愈加刺眼

最喜欢下雨的天空，也喜欢雨滴打在衣服上的声音，喜欢看着嬉戏的雨珠儿汇成一条弯弯的小河，它在描绘美丽的图画。

最喜欢接水的时候先逃出的第一缕温暖的水汽，似乎她在溢出杯沿的一瞬也在书写着她的思念，或许，她有她的思想，她有她的文字

我所向往的高中生活

现在高中的自己，愈来愈习惯了自己把玩孤独。我会经常独自站在池塘边，看蹦蹦跳跳的鱼儿在水中欢呼雀跃，也将我带入他们的世界。直到微微的脚步声擦过耳边，才恍然惊醒。抬头远眺，往往看到的是那望不断的晚霞，在风中摇曳。

高中啊，你到底是披着怎样的面纱闯入我的生活的，让我的单调乏味肆意横行，我却无能为力。让我在冲动欣喜的时刻不再那么透着孩子气。高中的生活，我已中意，教我如何把玩自己，把玩自己的情绪。因为我中奖感谢，感谢曾有这么一段过去。

How time flies！ It has been three years since I came to the school。 My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees。 The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework。 My classmates are all very friendly to each other。 We always help each other。 I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends。 I enjoy my school life。 However， I dont do well in math。 I’ll try my best to study math during the summer holidays。 Now Im going to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates。 Ill miss my school life。

有人说，初中生活就像一部电影，每天的生活就像一幅幅场景。不断演绎着青春的故事，不断出现着精彩和惊奇。

我站在蔚蓝的天空下，静静地闭上眼，脑海中浮现着三年来初中生活的点滴记忆。时间似乎停止了流动，但心中珍藏的那些关于初中生活的印象，像一张张动画在我的脑海中闪现着。

曾记得，每个晨曦，都会有清新的空气。一张张挂满幸福的笑脸，一个个轻盈矫健的步伐，迎接着东升的旭日，伴着美丽的的校园尽情地在操场上奔跑，在校园中跳绳，在林荫下漫步，在楼梯边谈笑，享受着一天中最清凉的风，碰到老师问声早安，见到同学打声招呼，相继进入教室开始一天的征程。

曾记得，每个饭前，将要下课时，我们总是急着下楼去取父母送来的饭。眼中常有期待的目光，心中总有温馨的感动。下课了，快步跑到母亲身边，贪婪的吃着，听着母亲亲切的唠叨，不经意间看到母亲满脸的笑容，心中生出更多的幸福，直到看着她带着饭盒离开校园，才记得自己还有更重要的事情要做。

曾记得，每个课堂，我们总是那么全神贯注，侧耳聆听老师讲的每一个重点，手上的笔一直不停的滑动。每当被点名提问的时候，脸上也会闪过一丝无比倒霉的表情，答案也是那么的干脆利落。总能听见老师唠叨的话语，却让人感到无比的亲切；总能看见同学们一起讨论难题的情景，让你不由的获得前进的动力。我们永远是那么谦虚团结，就像我们当初永不言弃的誓言......

初中的生活是幸福的，印象是美好的，心灵是纯洁的，校园是和谐的。老师是慈爱的，同学是友善的。我猛然发现，印象中的校园竟然是那么的让人不舍。

[初中生活印象学生优秀作文

悠扬悦耳的上课铃声准时响起，学生们三五成群，谈笑风生地走进教室，哎?原本应该站在讲台上的历史老师此时此刻已经笑容满面地坐在学生的位置上，讲台上取而代之的是前排一位矮个子女生，这是怎么一回事?原来，这位女学生做了一套有趣的历史课件，历史老师便把宝座拱手相让。

一堂生动活泼的历史课便拉开了帷幕。课上，小老师讲的不足的地方，学生们便帮她补缺补漏。瞧!这边小老师正津津有味的给我们讲三国的故事，讲台下的一个学生却举起了手“什么事?”小老师正讲的高兴，被这个“不速之客”打断，十分窝火。“老师，我可以帮你把这段对话表演一下吗?”学生们面面相觑，小老师的脸上顿时有“阴”转“晴”。“快上来”小老师热情的邀请。于是，有趣的“现代版三国表演”给这堂课添色不少，笑声和热烈的讨论声久久回荡在教室里……

微风拂面，如一双温柔的手抚摸着学生们紧绷的心弦，生物老师带着学生们投入自然的怀抱，在池水边同小鱼嬉戏;在柳树边同纤细的柳枝一起翩翩起舞……与大自然相融，另一堂原来生硬的生物课丰富多彩起来，学生们对自然地赞美转变成一段段优美的文字，抒发得淋漓尽致，学生们在自然界中不由自主地形成两派，激烈的辩论使学生们大显身手，大长见识。

我们在英语世界里漫游，通到电脑屏幕与外国小朋友面对面的用英语交流;在体育课中，接触各式各样的体育器材;生物课上，我们的学习地点常常在动物园与植物园，在这两者中来回观察，多样化的教学开阔了我们的眼界，老师与学生更是交心的好朋友……

当太阳太太涨红了脸沉到了地平线下方时，学生们又过完了充实的一天，少了多如小山的作业，许多学生对图书馆更是“情有独钟”。像海绵吸水般在图书馆里汲取自己所需要的知识，看!不少学生还为周末学校举行的形式多样的知识竞赛做准备，学生们也在这个时候总结一天下来学习的成果……

我说这里是中学，还不如说这是一所环境优美的乐园。这里，老师是我们的好朋友，学习是解放头脑，解放手脚的快乐活动，挑战自我，挑战知识是成长的主旋律。

Recently, a Chinese student who studied abroad delivered a speech at the

graduate ceremony. Her speech soon became the hot issue, because she criticized

Chinese air pollution, which was a great threat to her health. Though her speech

had exaggerated the problem, it is true that China has faced many pollution

problems. The haze in Beijing is famous around the world, which is the

punishment for human to ruin the environment. It needs time to fix the problem,

but there is no need to deny our country. Even for the developed countries, they

have once faced such problem before. We can do something in the daily life to

protect it, such as do not throw away the rubbish.

Recently, the Prince Harry announced his engagement with an American

actress. When the media asked him when he decided this girl would be his

lifetime partner, he said the moment when he saw her for the first time. Love at

first sight sounds romantic and many young people believe that the first feeling

about another person is really important, because it always decides whether they

can be couples in the following days. While many old people think love at first

sight doesnt exist, because they need to know the personality, which will

decide the charm of another person. For a relationship, the good first

impression can bring passion and love, but it cant maintain the relationship

for lifetime. The way to get along with each other and the tolerance of both

sides are key factors to decide whether a couple can stay forever.

5月1日高二（3）班的学生志愿者li yue 和zhang hua 去阳光敬老院（sunshine nursing home）开展志愿者活动（送水果，打扫，聊天等）。假设你校英语报的记者，请写一则新闻报道：1。 时间，地点，人物，活动；2。 老人们的反映；3。 简短评论

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students volunteers brought sunshine to the elderly。on may day， liyue and zhang hua， students from class three，grade two， went to sunshine nursing home and did some voluntary work。 upon their arrival。 li yue and zhang hua were warmly welcomed，and respectfully， they presented the elderly with fruits and flowers。then they started working at once，cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor。 everything done。 they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people。

when it was time for the volunteers to leave。 the elderly people thanked them for their kindness。 they said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever。

li yue and zhang hua were very happy。 what they did has brought joy to other people and enriched their own lives。

by chen jie， school newspaper。

[高中志愿者活动英语作文

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

When I was young at high school,I couldnt stop dreaming about my college life again and again.Suffering too much pressure form college entrance test,I always admired college students for their relaxed life in college.

In my personal opinion,living in university is  an enjoyment.Every day we can open our eyes naturally,and put on clothes in our own style without warring about teachers rigid control.Communicating with great master is no longer beyond our reach.Each course we take can be a feast for our mind and soul.After class,we will lead a rich and colorful life filled with various leisure activities such as .Library in  university is another factor I pursue.I think its an access to enhancing our comprehensive abilities to read even just scan all  sorts of

writings.Whats more,we will have so much disposable time that we can do whatever worthy.And our contact group will be extended signally via organizing and participating many activities.All in all,I once imagined that I can live a life that is substantial but meaningful.

However,I just have to admit that what I just describe is really dream.Now living in SD I cant figure out what I pursue and make a feasible career planning.So many young cynics in this schoolyard  argue for something meaningless.Worse still,the academic atmosphere has already done with nothing left.I havent found a busy but rich thing to try my best.As a matter of fact,I even cant choose a lifestyle I prefer.What a tragedy it is between dream and reality.

Since we were born, we are meant to face the stage of study and work until

we retire, which seems everybody does the same thing in their life. They start

to wonder about the meaning of life. In my opinion, the meaning of life lies in

study and finding the right place.

Study comes first for human being. Since we learn the knowledge, we get to

know about the world. The more we learn, the more we want to search for the

unknown knowledge. The world is beautiful because of diversity, and there are so

many amazing scenery waiting for us to discover. At the process of searching the

knowledge, we also become mature and have our own thinking.

Finding the place in the world is the basic task for us. The purpose of

knowledge is to master some skills, so as to get accustomed to the world and

know what we want to do and what we can bring to the world. The value we create

can bring happiness to people we love and make a contribution to the world.

Life is short, but we keep searching all the time.

低碳生活Low Carbon Life

In recent years, the global warming gets increasingly attention. More and more people make contribution to stop the global warming. Therefore, a new lifestyle occurs--low carbon life. What can we do to live in low carbon?

近几年，全球气候变暖越来越得到关注。越来越多的人为阻止全球变暖做出贡献。因此，一种新的生活方式诞生了——低碳生活。在低碳生活中我们可以做些什么呢？

First, remember to turn off lights and turn off the faucet when you do not need to use. Use the energy-saving lamps. There are many small things we can do to save resources. Second, when we go out, take public transport as much as possible, to reduce gas emissions and to ease the transporting pressures.

首先，但你不需要用电和水的时候，记得把灯和水龙头关掉。使用节能灯。我们可以做很多小事来节省资源。其次，当我们外出的时候，尽可能乘坐公共交通以减少气体排放和缓解交通压力。

All in all, there are many other things we can do to live in the low carbon life. It needs us to do something practically. If everyone can keep this lifestyle from now on, it will greatly change the situation and our home would become more beautiful.

总之，为了低碳生活，我们可以做很多事。它需要我们做出一些实际行动。如果每个人能够从现在起保持这种生活方式，情况将得到很大改善，我们的家园会变得更美丽。