小升初英语作文范文带翻译最新20篇

As time goes by, people are being busier and busier with working, such as

signing their contracts, meeting their customers, drawing up the balance sheets

of their companies and so on. In this circumstance, people forget our most

excellent skill--smile.

随着时间的推移，人们在工作上越来越忙，如签订合同，见客户，制定企业资产负债表等。在这种情况下，人们忘记了我们最优秀的技能——微笑。

There are a great many kinds of power of smile. First of all, common touch

can be showed by a kind smile. Imagine that you go to a company to attend an

audition. With a confident smile, you are more likely to answer the question

better. Furthermore, smile can eliminate angry. As a philosopher said, smile

before you begin to get angry. The last but not the least, it reflects calm of a

person when he is in danger or in trouble.

微笑的力量很多。首先，微笑可以作为平易近人的一种表现。想象一下，你去一个公司参加面试。带着自信的微笑，你有可能会更好地回答问题。此外，微笑可以消除愤怒。一个哲学家说过，在你开始生气之前微笑。最后但并非最不重要的，当一个人处于危险或者麻烦的时候，微笑反映了一个人的镇定。

The beneficial aspects cannot be stated completely in this passage. But you

can understand its power when you smile.

微笑的好处在这里是无法一一列举的。但是，在你微笑的时候你可以理解它的力量。

1、love is like war, easy to begin but hard to end.

爱就像一场战争，开战容易停火难。

2、Love opens your chest and opens your heart and it means someone can get inside you and mess you up.

爱扒开你的胸膛，掏出你的心脏，有人就乘机侵入你的心胸把你搞得一团糟。

3、Does God punish or reward us with love?

爱，是上帝用来惩罚我们的还是奖赏我们的呢?

4、Love your neighbor, but dont get caught.

爱你的邻家女孩吧，但注意不要被逮着了。

5、I love a hand that meets my own with a grasp that causes some sensation.

我喜爱这样的一只手，它的力度让我有几分感觉的手。

6、The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost.

珍爱一切的好办法是：意识到你可能会失去它。

7、Love is like quicksilver in the hand. Leave the fingers open and it stays. Clutch it, and it darts away.

爱就像是握在手里的水银，把手指张开，它好好的呆在那里，要是你紧紧抓着，它反而溜走了。

8、If you judge people, you have no time to love them.

老是审视别人的话，你就腾不出时间去爱他们了。

9、A very small degree of hope is sufficient to cause the birth of love.

极其微弱的一线希望就足以点燃爱的火花。

10、At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

一谈到爱，每个人都变成了一位诗人。

11、Sometimes the perfect person for you is the one you least expect.

有时候，最适合你的人恰恰是你最没有想到的人。

12、How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard.

我是多么幸运啊，拥有一样东西让我的“再见”迟迟说不出口。

13、The Eskimos have 52 words for snow because it is so special for them; there ought to be as many for love!

爱斯基摩人有52个分别表示“雪”的词语，因为雪在他们的生活中太重要了;我们也应该有这么多表达“爱”的词语啊!

14、If equal affection cannot be, let the more loving one be me.

如果世上真的不存在两方对等的爱，就让付出更多的一方是我吧。

15、When two eyes meet and hold strongly, they are bound to meet again.

当两眼相遇久久凝视，这两双眼睛注定将会再一次相遇。

16、I love being married. Its so great to find one special person you want to annoy for the rest of your life.

我喜欢成家，拥有一个在自己的余生中特别想去得罪的人，这不是一件很美好的事情吗?

17、Love doesnt make the world go round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile.

爱不是把地球变圆，爱是让环球旅行有价值。

18、To love is to be vulnerable.

去爱一个人就是把自己变得特别脆弱。

19、Love at first sight never happens before breakfast.

一见钟情的爱从来不会发生在饥肠辘辘的早餐以前。

20、To love is not to look at one another, but to look together in the same direction.

相爱不是你看我我看你，而是一起朝着相同的方向望去。

21、I wasnt kissing her, I was whispering in her mouth.

注意了，我不是在吻她，我只是在她的嘴边呢喃。

22、My love is like an ocean; it goes down so deep. My love is like a rose; whose beauty you want to keep.

我的爱就像浩瀚的海洋，它深沉厚重;我的爱就像芬芳的玫瑰，你疼爱珍重。

23、All shall be well, and Jack shall have Jill.

一切都会好起来，她会向你走过来。

24、First love is only a little foolishness and a lot of curiosity.

初恋只是一分傻冒再加九分好奇。

25、When you love someone, all your saved-up wishes start coming out.

当你爱上一个人的时候，所有深藏在心的祝福都奔涌而出了。

26、Came but for friendship, and took away love.

你为友情而来，却把爱情带走。

27、For, you see, each day I love you more, today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.

你看，每一天我都爱你多一些，今天比昨天多但比明天少。

28、Love doesnt sit there like a stone. It has to be made like bread; remade all the timemade new.

爱不是一块木头，一动不动的坐在那里;对待爱，要像做面包那样--反复揉搓，不断翻新。

29、A man falls in love through his eyes, a woman through her ears.

男人是透过他的眼睛捕捉爱意的，女人是通过她的耳朵体验爱意的。

30、Life is a flower of which love is the honey.

人生是鲜花，爱情是蜂蜜。

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My friend I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl. She lives in Jiujiang. She is a middle school student. She has big eyes, a small mouth, a small nose and a round face. She is tall and thin. She likes watching TV and playing the basketball. On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening.She is a good student. She is good at English. She likes speaking in English. She always reports news in English in her school.She says we are good friends. We often send e-mails to each other everyday. I like her very much.

我的朋友我有一个好朋友。她是个漂亮的女孩。她生活在九江市。她是一个中学生。她有一双大眼睛，一个小嘴巴，一个小鼻子，一个圆圆的脸。她又高又瘦。她喜欢看电视和打篮球。在周末，她总是和她的朋友们在下午和晚上看电视。她是个好学生。她英语很好。她喜欢用英语说。她在学校里经常用英语报告新闻。她说我们是好朋友。我们经常给对方发电子邮件。我非常喜欢她。

The Spring Festival is the Chinese New Years day. The annual lunar New Year is coming again, at five o clock in the morning of 29th annual mom and dad took me from sleep pulled up, I wash a face, a little hurry to eat breakfast, mom and dad took me carry the luggage to the station, a train going to my grandmas New Years day. After a day of travel, finally came to the grandmothers house, the grandmother saw us very happy.

The morning of the New Years eve, everyone is busy to stick couplets, red lantern, a thriving scene. Grandma made a pot of paste in the morning, I and dad busy stick up, I painted the paste on the wall, father stick couplets on the wall, top allied is: smooth fortunes to allied is: all the best fook lam moon guangpi: treasures will be plentiful. Finally, the father stood a few red lanterns hanging up on the chair.

In the evening, eat dinner, my grandmother took a table very rich food side, the family open happy heart eat it, after eating, they give me the money, Im very happy. We keep waiting in front of the television after the beginning of the Spring Festival gala, unknowingly at eight o clock in the evening, the Spring Festival gala, there is a crosstalk, singing and dancing, and sketch... To the eye. The zero point of the bell is ringing, the people of the whole country has entered the countdown on TV "ten, nine, eight..." The outside is playing "or" firecrackers. We are no exception, are put up at the door. The fireworks outside colorful, beautiful!

The first day, I put on new clothes, mom and dad took me, carrying a gift to elder happy New Year, everywhere, I will receive a red envelope, also can eat to various delicacies, and delicious sweets.

过春节也就是过年。一年一度的春节又要来临了，大年二十九日早上五点，爸爸妈妈把我从睡梦中揪起来，我洗完脸，匆忙的吃了一点早饭，爸爸妈妈带着我提着行李往车站赶去，乘车去外婆家过年。经过一天的奔波，终于来到了外婆家，外婆见了我们非常高兴。

除夕的早上，大家都忙着贴对联，挂灯笼，好一片红红火火的景象。早上外婆搞了一盆浆糊，我和爸爸忙的贴了起来，我在墙上涂浆糊，爸爸在墙上贴对联，上联是：一帆风顺吉星到下联是：万事如意福临门横批：财源广进。最后，爸爸站在椅子上把几个红灯笼挂了起来。

到了傍晚，吃年夜饭了，外婆把一桌非常丰富的饭菜端了上来，一家人开开心心的吃了起来，吃完后，大人们都给我了压岁钱，我非常高兴。之后，我们一家守在电视机前等待着春节联欢晚会的开始，不知不觉的到了晚上八点，春节联欢晚会开始了，里面有相声，歌舞，和小品……好看极了。零点的钟声即将敲响时，电视里全国人民已经进入了倒计时“十，九，八……”外面已经响起了“噼里啪啦”的鞭炮声。我们也不例外，也在门口放了起来。外面的烟花五颜六色，漂亮极了!

正月初一，我穿上了新衣服，爸爸妈妈带着我，提着礼品去给长辈拜年，每到一处，我都会收到一个红包，还能吃到各家的美味佳肴，还有好吃的糖果。

Fri. ,Feb. 5 Rainy

In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful brid. I dreamed that I was in a forest. In tht forest,there were a lot of animals. Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution. "All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest. Many animals were caught. The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest. Many old trees were felled. And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked and then I bursted out crying. I woke up at midnight. It was only a dream.

二月五日 星期五 雨

在梦中

昨晚我梦见我变成一只非常漂亮的鸟。 我梦见我在一座森林，森林里有很多动物。 然后有一只老鸟告诉我们，"我们有一座非常美丽的森林，因此我们应该保护它，免受污染"所有的动物都赞成他。

但是第二天，人们进入我们的森林，许多动物被逮捕。 这些人要在我们的森林地上建造房子和公园。 许多年老的树木被砍下，然后，突然间，一切都被夷平了。

我很震惊，接着突然大哭起来。 我在半夜醒来，原来只是个梦。

I like to spring vibrant, I like fruit of their labor to fall, I also like the land of ice and snow in winter, but my favorite was vigorously summer. He came to earth with a warm center of the earth, to show a scene of prosperity.

You vigorous walking, walking down the street, people are buying clothes and shoes, booming, bustling, festive extraordinary to see the girls walking on the street, their clothes are fashionable, bright colors, almost no re-sample I think summer is the girls of the world, is to show the beauty of the season.

You vigorous walking, into the garden, garden flower disappointing fight Yan open, whether it is the Queen of peony flowers, small flowers or no name, are happily greet summer girl, willow by winds, fluttering shook, like summer girl that flowing hair, how beautiful ah! This is a unique scenery summer because summer is beautiful.

You vigorous walking, walking in the market, cries, bargaining sound, together into one, very lively, look purple eggplant, Pie Zhaozui, which is red you smile! That sparkling grape purple, glistening apricot, peach red bite tastes, crisp raw, sour, summer fruit described as paradise.

You vigorous walking, into the fields, sunflowers are facing the open summer girl, put her beautiful smiling face dedicated to summer girl. Four underground struggle. Cicada not miss this great opportunity also for five years, stripped of her clothes that one gold, into the tree, "cicada, cicada" to call, to show it was beautiful summer girl singing, frog hiding grass, quack barking, positive girl summer a summer ensemble hymn it!

Xia, a lively summer; summer, a beautiful summer; I praise you, a charming summer.

小升初英语写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis， she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. 原句：When you come to the second traffic light， turn right. 修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

小升初英语写作技巧之二：删除诸如"who is"或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

句：The novel， which is written in three parts， told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

小升初英语写作技巧之三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. 写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

我的朋友

My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair，two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them， too. Her favourite food is fish， so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary，too. They are cute.

这篇是讲述我的好朋友玛丽。介绍她的住址，她住在一幢高楼里。她住在五楼。她的年龄，她十二岁。她的外貌，她又高又瘦。她有短的黑色的头发，两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。

Winter arrived, it was getting cold, the children the most hope things is under the snow.

When it snows, the white one.

In the outside, and you will see the snow swirl in the fall from the air. Snow girls body, the tree tree girls like with white clothes. The snow on the roof, the house seemed to wear white hat. The snow on the road, the road seems to wear the white scarf. Snow falls on the earth, the earth seems to be covered white wool.

I catch a snowflake, want to count it a few petals, but before I finish counting, it turns into water droplets quietly slip through my fingers.

Ah! I love this beautiful snow, I love the beautiful winter.

冬天到了，天渐渐冷了，小朋友们最盼望的事情就是下大雪。

下雪时，大地白茫茫的一片。

在屋外，你会看见雪花纷纷扬扬地从空中标落下来。雪花落在树姑娘的身上，树姑娘像披上雪白的新衣。雪花落在房顶上，房子好像戴上洁白的帽子。雪花落在马路上，马路好像系上了雪白的围巾。雪花落在大地上，大地好像盖上了雪白的羊毛被。

我接住一片雪花，想数数它有几片花瓣，还没等我数完，它就变成了小水滴偷偷地从我的指缝间溜走了。

啊!我爱这美丽的雪景，我爱这美丽的冬天。

Mathematics was too difficult for me, the teacher spoke so fast that I

could not understand. I failed every math exam, my dad was very angry, he

wouldnt let me watch TV, or let me go out, I was very sad. The math teacher

always asks me to go to the office and tell me the problem. I am not afraid to

make mistakes, because I can correct them. I keep practicing, speed up my

problem, and dont forget to preview and review. In the most recent exam, I

achieved excellent results in maths. A good learner has many good learning

habits.

数学对我来说太难了，老师讲的太快，以至于我不能听懂。每次数学考试我都不及格，我的爸爸很生气，他不让我看电视，也不让我出去玩，我很难过。数学老师总是让我去办公室，给我讲题。我开始不害怕犯错，因为我还可以改正。我不断的练习，加快了我的做题速度，并且不忘记预习和复习。在最近的一次考试里，我的数学成绩达到了优秀。一个好的学习者有很多好的学习习惯。

英语作文自我介绍带翻译

To introduce myself(介绍我自己)

Hello,every one!(大家好)

My name is **** . (我叫****)

Im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改) I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(我住在美丽的Rizhao城)(你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)

Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)

In the school , my favourite subject is maths .(在学校，我最喜欢数学)

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

But I like it.(但我喜欢他)

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)

I also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等) Im kind-hearted.(我很热心)

If you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助，就来找我) I hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友) OK.This is me .A sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩

Hello! My name is Mingming. I am a pupil. I like speaking English very

much. I go to school five days every week. Every day I go to school on foot.

Because my school is not near my home. I like my school. There are about 3500

students and 54 teachers in my school. And I study in Grade 4. There are 45

students in my class. My English teacher is tall and handsome . I love him very

much. Welcome to my school. You must be very happy.

你好!我的名字叫明明。我是一个小学生。我非常喜欢说英语。我每周要去学校五天。我每天步行去上学。因为我的学校不是在我家附近。我喜欢我的学校。在我的学校里大约有3500名学生和54老师。我在四年级学习。在我的班级里有45个学生。我的英语老师又高又帅。我非常喜欢他。欢迎来到我的学校。你一定很开心。

Today I＇m very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.

It＇s a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I＇m singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what＇s a happy day Mothers Day.

Mother＇s Day comes on the second Sunday in May each year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. Receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.

今天我很高兴,我吃早餐后,我去公园。

这是一个阳光明媚的一天,鸟儿唱歌,我也唱。当我去公园的时候，我看到一些女孩在玩游戏，所以我加入了她们。我们玩很开心。然后我和我的朋友们一起吃午饭。我们都过得很愉快。什么是快乐的一天母亲节。

母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天，英语作文 我为母亲买了一件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物，感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到礼物后，非常高兴。

[快乐的母亲节happy Mother’sDay英语作文带翻译

There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother and I .

My father is doctor. He works in Yueqing. He goes to work on foot everyday. My father is not very tall, but he is strong, he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work.

My mother is teacher. She works in a middle school in Yue Qing. She goes to work by car. She is a very good teacher in my eyes.

I am a student in Yueqing FLS. My school is very beautiful. There are many tall buildings, green tress, nice flowers in our school. We have wonderful teachers too. I like studying in my school.

My grandparents don’t go to work any more. They have retired. They stay at home everyday. In the morning they go to the park and do morning exercises. In the afternoon, they drink tea with their friends. In the evening, they enjoy themselves watching TV and reading newspapers.

We have a happy family. I can’t say how much I love it!

My school is very beautiful. I like my school very much.

There is a big playground in my school and we often play sports on it .

My classroom is big and clean.

There are many books in the library.

I often read books here.

There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too.

The teachers in my school are very kind .

The students are very polite and smart.

I am happy in my school.

我的学校很漂亮.我非常喜欢我的学校.

我的学校有一个大操场,我们经常在这做运动.

我的教室又大又干净.

图书馆里有许多书.

我经常在这里看书.

在教学楼里还有音乐室、美术室.

学校的老师都很好.

学生们非常聪明、有礼貌.

我在学校很高兴.

[关于我的学校的英语作文带翻译

My name is Yin Zhaoyi. Im nine years old. Im from Hengyang, Hunan. I love writing and reading.

I was a lively and cheerful girl, face, round eyes, long eyebrows, high nose, black hair, big mouth, short stature, long limbs.

Today is Sunday. I asked my mother if I could go to the library to read books. My mother said yes, I went straight to the library happily, and there were very few people in the library. I picked up a book and looked up. An hour passed, and two hours passed. Until 6 oclock in the evening, I found it was 6, and I ran home at full speed.

My classroom is big and clean.There are twenty-five desks and twenty-five chairs.There is a blackboard on the wall.In front of the blackboard,there is teachers desk.There are four windows and two doors in the wall.All the students like our classroom very much.

The Spring Festival is Chinas most grand festival, the Spring Festival, means the New Year began, means that we again long one year old, means that we should be more reasonable. During the Spring Festival this day, everywhere is beaming, everyone mouth will hang a smile.

Year at night, the street is the most lively, everywhere decorated, kids candy in mouth, there are all kinds of fireworks in the street, occasionally a few adults put up the firecrackers, some children cheered, some children simply put his hand over his ears, and younger children are scared ran home.

This year Spring Festival, and some is not the same as usual, my mother help me raise the abundance of a table delicacies, invited a few best friend come to my house to eat dumplings, mom make dumplings and put the coin in eight dumplings, say who got a coin dumplings who have good luck this year, the result my mother and I and a friend eat to each two dumplings with COINS.

After the Spring Festival gala, the mother brought a large bottle of drink, and we do guess riddle games, method is riddle out by the mother, me and some children take turns to guess, guess, to reward a small glass of drink, had not found out or wrong did not drink, even a small performance.

Time passed in the tick of the clock sound, after half an hour, drink solve finished, I and the children all are sitting in a chair, constantly dozen satisfied ge, some still keep the toilet on the ground.

And had a rest, play a heated up again, you pick up the fireworks and ran outside, the start and the adult child put up outside, I also unwilling to lag behind, two hundred yuan to buy fireworks last year many left? Before long, the full fireworks bag empty belly.

"There is no such thing as a not good things come to an end", friends say goodbye in the firecrackers and laughter.

After you left, my mother began to busy tidying, I also come over to help mom. Although mother said that I dont need, can I still help my mother clean up the rest.

Family reunion dinner finished, the Spring Festival has passed, the New Year begins, I grew up a year old, also become more reasonable, the New Year, I want to study well, with honors returns mothers love for me.

春节是中国最隆重的节日，过了春节，就意味着新的一年开始了，就意味着我们又长了一岁，就意味着我们应该更懂事一些了。在春节这天，到处都是喜气洋洋的，人人嘴边都会挂着一丝微笑。

大年三十的晚上，街上最为热闹，到处张灯结彩，小孩子嘴里叼着糖块，在街上放着各式各样的烟花，偶尔也会有几个大人们放起了爆竹，有的孩子欢呼起来，有的孩子索性用手捂住耳朵，还有更小的孩子则吓得跑回了家。

这年春节，和往常有些不一样，妈妈帮我张罗了一桌丰盛的佳肴，邀请了几个最要好的朋友来我家吃饺子，妈妈包饺子时还在八个饺子里放了硬币，说谁吃到了硬币饺子谁今年就有好运，结果我和妈妈还有一个小朋友各吃到了二个带着硬币的饺子。

春晚结束后，妈妈拿来了一大瓶饮料，和我们做猜迷语游戏，方法是由妈妈出迷语，我和几个小朋友轮流猜，猜对的奖励一小杯饮料，猜不出或猜错的不但没有饮料喝，还要表演一个小节目。

时间在钟表的嘀哒声中过去了，半小时后，饮料解决完毕，我和小朋友们个个都坐在椅子上，不停地打着饱嗝，有的还不停地上厕所。

休息了一会儿，玩的兴头又上来了，大家拿起烟花就往外跑，开始和外面的大人小孩放了起来，我也不甘落后，去年买的两百元烟花还剩下不少呢。没过多久，装着满满的烟花的袋子就空了肚子。

“天下没有不散的宴席”，朋友们在爆竹声和欢笑声中告别了。

大家走后，妈妈又开始忙着收拾碗筷，我也过来帮妈妈的忙。虽然妈妈说不用我，可我还是帮妈妈收拾完才休息。

年夜饭吃完了，春节也过了，新的一年就开始了，我长大了一岁，也变得更懂事了，新的一年里，我要好好学习，以优异的成绩回报妈妈对我的爱。

This is the first diary I’m writing in the youth summer camp.

Everything is new to me, new class, new teachers and new classmates. My

classmates are all good students and they can speak English well. I think I can

learn a lot from them, and I can make friends with them.

The teacher from china is full of emotion when giving a class. And her

class is very interesting. To my surprise our foreign teacher can speak chinese

very well, but in my opinion, her class is a little boring. She should have made

the class more active.

Compared to my school, Zhejiang University seems so big that it takes us a

few minutes to commute between the classroom and cafeteria.

I wish myself good luck and have a good holiday here!

这是我在青年夏令营写的第一篇日记。

一切对我来说都是新鲜的，新的班级，新的老师和新的同学。我的同学都是好学生，他们英语讲得很好。我想我可以从他们身上学到很多，我可以和他们交朋友。

这位来自中国的老师讲课时感慨万千。她的课很有趣。令我惊讶的是，我们的外教汉语讲得很好，但在我看来，她的课有点无聊。她本该让全班更活跃。

与我的学校相比，浙江大学似乎太大了，我们从教室到食堂之间要花上几分钟的时间。

祝自己好运，在这里度过一个愉快的假期!

My home have a naughty cute puppy.

The dog has a golden hair, a pair of round eyes, a pair of ears listened warily around all the suspicious sound. The dog also has a pair of sharp claws, the tail become warped up, appear very arrogant. The puppy is very fierce, as long as hear or see what a little, will be issued a "warning", ready to "fight".

My dog not only naughty, and very musical.

One day, I idle, and put up the music. Who knows, after the dog heard, dont chew bones, immediately approached the tape recorder. I suspected that the dog found the music coming from the recorder! Puppy squat down beside the tape recorder, listening to music, one side with the rhythm of the music wag their tails to place in the past, just like a little musician in command of the band...

The puppy especially love to eat cookies. I will take this opportunity to put the dog when the fish hook. I take out a slender bamboo first, then use the other side of the line is a root in bamboo, reoccupy a milk garland biscuit series, on the other side in the rope is made into "rod". I make cookies have nowhere to come over the past, the puppy dazzling, I suddenly stopped shaking, hanging the cookies from the front of the dog, the dog immediately huanguo to god, to the cookies to rush, and I move biscuits to the dog behind him, let it closed on empty air. In this way, lasted for several minutes. Dog pretend "retreat", I also immediately off guard, who know the dog quickly turned to bite cookies, fortunately, I quickly reaction, dog bites to the line. This is my puppy.

我家有一只调皮可爱的小狗。

小狗长着一身金黄色的毛，一双圆溜溜的眼睛，一对耳朵警惕地听着四周一切可疑的声音。小狗还长着一双锋利的爪子，尾巴翘得老高，显得非常傲慢。小狗也非常凶猛，只要稍微听到什么或看到什么，就会发出“警报”，做好“战斗”的准备。

我家的小狗不仅调皮，而且很富有音乐感。

一天，我闲着没事干，便放起了音乐。谁知，小狗听到后，骨头也不啃了，马上向录音机走来。我猜测，可能是小狗发现那音乐是从录音机里传出来的了!小狗在录音机旁蹲下，一边听音乐，一边随着音乐的节奏把尾巴摇过来摆过去，真像个小小音乐家在指挥着乐队……

小狗特别爱吃饼干。我就借此机会，把小狗当鱼钓。我先拿出一根细长的竹子，接着用一根线系在竹子的另一头，再用一块牛奶拉花饼干系在绳子的另一头，就做成了“鱼杆”。我把饼干晃过来晃过去，弄得小狗眼花缭乱，我突然停止摇晃，把饼干吊在小狗面前，小狗立即缓过神来，向饼干扑去，我又把饼干移到小狗身后，让它扑了个空。就这样，持续了好几分钟。小狗假装“败退”，我也随即放松了警惕，谁知小狗迅速转过身来咬饼干，幸亏我反应快，小狗只咬到线。这就是我家的小狗。

听、说、读、写、译，是我们学习英语中最重要的五个方面，不可偏废。前面发了一些关于口语和音标的帖子，有家长建议我写一些关于写作的内容。

大家都知道口语要说的地道，而我们的写作往往停留在中式英语的误区中，而且很难发现。

“为什么我的词汇量如此丰富却仍然写不出能让阅卷老师满意的作文?”相信不少同学都曾有过这样的疑问。词汇量的多寡往往并不是一篇英语作文质量好或者坏的关键。许多同学即便很努力地去准备作文，但最终分数仍然不理想，这很可能是因为他们陷入了某种写作的误区。今天，张译云老师就要为大家列举比较常见的三种英语写作误区，希望能帮小勇士们“对号入座”，并施以针对性的改进。

误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇

一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来，然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。在这样的作文里，我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：

“When Iwas a child,my parents very love me。”(正确表达：When Iwas achild,my parents loved me very much)。

解决之道：强化语法

要想流利的掌握一门外语，你需要能够使用该语言思考。而将中文式思维转变为英语思维的最根本的途径之一就是强化语法知识。很多同学的词汇量很丰富，但是对于怎么用，什么时候用却并不明白。而这些恰恰是语法知识所能告诉我们的。哪些词要用在句中，哪些词应该用在句尾，语法里都有相应的规定。一旦用错了位置就会写成英国人看不懂的英语作文。另外，对于词汇所存在的不同的形态也应该注意。

误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大局”

不少同学在写英语作文时，将过多的注意力放在“优美的文笔”上面。因此，他们不停地用电子辞典搜集华丽的词藻，并运用难度颇高的句式，以期能让自己的作文“技高一筹”。但事实上，多数情况下会弄巧成拙。太生僻的单词同学们运用起来并不能得心应手，而且使用太复杂的句型也常常会出错。

解决之道：用平常心表达平常事

要写作要求学生能够综合运用逻辑、词汇和语法等多种知识和技能来完成一个写作任务，但并不苛求学生去做标新立异的创作。因此同学们无需力求完美地到电子辞典里去找生僻的词汇，也不需要写得多么高深莫测，而是应该抱着平常的心态去描述自己看到的东西，表达自己想到的内容，将学过的词从记忆深处调动出来，复习语法课上学到的知识。用这样的心态写出来的东西内容虽简单但不乏生活气息，语言虽稚嫩，但却准确易懂。

误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多

不少学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于“可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是便充分发挥想象能力，加入了很多离题较远的细枝末节。这样的文章写出来更像是一篇“大杂烩”，从中找不到任何主题。还有一些作文，句子和句子之间的连贯性不强，逻辑思维混乱，读起来让人摸不到头脑。

解决之道：理清思路，言之有物

我认为，很多人之所以写不够题目要求的作文字数，其中一个重要原因就是对于题目本身没有理解透彻。建议同学们不要急于下笔，而是先考虑清楚自己要说几点内容，这些内容之间的逻辑关系是怎样的。