湖北中考英语试卷真题【优秀20篇】
“生命是上帝赋予的,我们唯有献出它时,才真正拥有它。”你依旧微笑着,向我讲述着永恒的真谛。下面是小编整理的穿越百年的时光作文,希望对大家有帮助!
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:
2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)
2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)
2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
1.整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
2.内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
3.不满60个词,少15个词扣0.5分,610个词扣1分。
4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
5.每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
6.语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):词固定搭配、高频重点词汇;句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰;内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握;亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
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篇1:预测2024中考英语作文:假期生活
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+ 加入清单Winter holiday will soon be over, really is coming. See, it is such a rich and colorful holiday ah, what to compare it to, it is like seven rainbow of colors, like a changeable clouds, like colorful shells... Always beautiful, brilliant. How could such a good winter vacation life, I was the only one person alone, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!
One of my winter holiday life: study. Holiday life, learning is indispensable, consolidate the previous knowledge that can let you can also preview in advance once you are going to learn after the part. Learn to learn well, dont half-hearted by playing. I have more than 4 hours of study time every day. Of course, I also have a few hours of exercise time, go out for a walk, many activities, some exercises. Sometimes I read some books, the expanded aspect of knowledge, of course, is the computer class, because I like computer, dont make the vision loss.
My holiday life # 2: sports. To do more sports is the guarantee of a healthy body. Everyone should have a favorite sports, I like most is skating and playing badminton. The skating sport is very simple, but you really come to ice are different! This is not your imagination of so simple and easy. Stand up, it is very simple, of course, but you slip a lap down is very difficult. Because I spent a long time, technology also can also wrestling this word is very strange to me now. Badminton everyone who will, learning to learn tired want to relax, you can play a minute ball, it can be you tired when I let you relax.
My winter holiday life # 3: the computer.
Computer is wonderful its hard to express in words. Do you know? The size of a small mouse mouse, can bring you into a magical world of computers. You can use it to play computer games interesting, to carry out the exploration of one adventure; You can use it to mail hair net friend, share strangers friend sent joy; You can also use it on the Internet, enjoy the fun of surfing the Internet. In this high-tech virtual world, how can you know the progress of modern science and technology rapidly, the pace of the modern human is powerful.
This is my winter holiday life, my life colourful winter holiday. It has trained me a loving heart, I love all beautiful things in the world. All, how can I was the only one, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!
寒假马上就要过去了,真令人依依不舍。看,它是一个多么丰富多彩的假期啊,把它比喻成什么呢,它像七色的彩虹,像多变的云朵,像缤纷的贝壳……永远美好,灿烂。这么好的寒假生活,怎能只有我一人独享呢,把它写出来,让大家一块享受吧!
我的寒假生活之一:学习。假期生活中,学习是必不可少的,这样可以让你巩固以前的知识还可以提前预习一下以后将要学的部分。学就要学得好,不要三心二意边玩边学。我每天都有大于4小时的学习时间。当然我也会有几小时的运动时间,出去走走多多活动一下,锻炼一下身体。有时我看一些课外书,扩大知识面,当然是电脑类的,因为我很喜欢电脑,千万不要使视力下降。
我的假期生活之二:体育运动。多做些体育运动是有个健康身体的保障。每个人都应该有个自己最喜欢的体育项目,我最喜欢的就是滑冰和打羽毛球。滑冰这项体育运动说起来很简单,可是你真正地来到冰场上可就不一样了!这可不是你想象中的那么简单那么容易。当然站起来是很简单的,但你滑一圈下来就是很难的。因为我花了很长一段时间了,技术也还可以现在摔跤这词对我是很陌生了。羽毛球大家是谁都会,学习学累了想放松一下你就可以打会儿球,它可以在你疲劳之际让你轻松一下。
我的寒假生活之三:电脑。
电脑的奇妙真是很难用语言表达出来。你知道吗?一个小老鼠般大的鼠标,就能带你进入一个神奇的电脑世界。你可以用它玩有趣的电脑游戏,进行一个个惊险刺激的探险;你可以用它接发网友的邮件,分享素不相识的朋友寄来的欢乐;你还可以用它上网,享受网上冲浪的乐趣。在这高科技的虚拟世界中,你能知道现代科技的进步是多么迅速,现代人类的步伐是多么有力。
这就是我的寒假生活,我多姿多彩的寒假生活。它培养了我一颗充满爱的心灵,使我爱世界上一切美好的事物。,怎能只有我一人独享呢,把它写出来,让大家一块享受吧!
篇2:预测2024中考英语作文:食品安全
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+ 加入清单Food safety is very important for every one of us, because food safety is related to the physical and mental health of each and every one of us.
We eat, for example, often eat junk food will cause great harm to the body. So the first thing to see if you eat food safety food, generally have the safety and production of a trademark can we eat, because of security and production of a trademark in general can guarantee food safety. If food has environmental protection sign, so much the better, because environmental protection sign of food to put it another way of green food, eat more security, and nutrition. So I suggest that we eat more green food.
In fact we all have a common bad habit, that is love to eat junk food.
What is junk food? We love to eat KFC, McDonalds, usually happy Tom inside of Fried food is junk food, and it is the small food is junk food sold outside the school gate.
Ill give you an example to eat KFC: there is a person, every day he is to eat KFC, the results longer than pig fat, ugly. Students often eat at the school gate shop in the small food also easy to cause the stomach is bad.
So we must not eat KFC and other 3 without the product.
食品安全对我们每一个人都很重要,因为食品安全关系到我们每一个人的身心健康。
例如我们吃东西的时候,经常吃到垃圾食品就会对身体造成很大的伤害。所以首先要看看你吃的食品是不是安全食品,一般要有安全商标和生产商标我们才能吃,因为安全商标和生产商标一般可以保证食品安全。假如食品有环保标志,那就更好了,因为环保标志的食品换一种说法就是绿色食品,吃了更安全,而且还有营养呢。所以我建议大家多吃绿色食品。
其实我们大家都有个共同的坏习惯,那就是爱吃垃圾食品。
那什么是垃圾食品呢?我们平常最爱吃的肯德基、麦当劳、开心汤姆里面的油炸食品就是垃圾食品,还有就是学校门口卖的小食品也是垃圾食品。
我给大家举一个吃肯德基的例子:有一个人,他每天都是吃肯德基,结果长的比猪还胖,多难看。同学们经常吃学校门口店子里的小食品也容易引起肠胃不好。
所以我们大家一定不要吃肯德基和其他的三无产品。
篇3:中考作文Myfutureplan_其他类英语作文1500字
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+ 加入清单1、以MY Future plan为题目,100字左右
2、我决定大学毕业后当一 名中学教师,这是我孩提时代的梦想
3、我很喜欢教师在个职业,与中学生在一 起可以使自己永保青春
4、我国师资力量缺乏,主要原因是教师工作辛苦,收入低。想当老师的人很少,所以需要大批有志青年献身教育事业
中考英语作文范文:我未来的打算(My future plan)
I decided to be a middle teacher after college. (大学毕业后我决定当一名中学教师)There are many reasons contribute to this decision.(这有很多理由来说服这个决定)
Firstly, when I was a little/boy, I have been dreaming of being a teacher.(首先,当我还是个小孩时就梦想成为一名教师) It seemed so fascinate to me and I hope I can make my dream come true.(它让我很着迷,我希望我的梦想能够实现)
And, I like so much to be with middle school students. (另外,我是如此的喜欢中学生)Most of the students at that age are full of youthful spirity and I am sure their passion would pass to me.(大多数的学生都在充满年轻激情的阶段,我确信仪仗队他们的热情会传染给我) I will retain all the zest of adolescence.(我将可以使自己永保青春)
The most important reason is that our country needs plenty of teachers.(最重要的原因是我们的国家需要教师) So far, teaching is considered a tough and low-income job in China.(讫今为止,在中国,教书被认为是一项辛苦又收入低的工作) However, if we have not enough teachers, our future will lack of excellent scientist, managers, businessmen, soldiers and even goood workers and farmers.(然而,如果我们没有足够的教师,我们将来会缺乏优秀的科学家,经理,商人,士兵甚至于好的工人和农民) How can our country to be strong and wealthy? (那我们的国家怎样才能强大和富饶起来呢)I wish my country to be a better one. (我祝福我的祖国的明天会更好)I am ready to be a teacher and hope all the persons with lofty ideals may dedicate themselves to this meaningful career.(我准备在为一名教师,我也希望大家带着崇高理想献身于这有意义的工作.
篇4:一.中考英语写作十个黄金句型
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+ 加入清单1. 不用说……
It goes without saying that …
= (It is) needless to say (that) ….
= It is obvious that ….
例:It goes without saying that it pays off to keep early hours.
不用说早睡早起是值得的。
2. 在各种……之中,……
Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …
例︰Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
3. 就我的看法……;我认为……
In my opinion, …
= To my mind, ….
= As far as I am concerned, …
= I am of the opinion that ….
例:In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
在我看来,玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。
4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …
随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …
例:With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.
随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5. ……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do/that …
…… 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …
…… 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …
……是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …
例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.
=It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.
我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
6. 花费 spend … on sth. / doing sth. …
例:We shouldn’t spend too much time on something we aren’t interested in.
我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
7. how 引导的感叹句
例:At least it will prove how honest you are.
那至少可以证明你很诚实。
8. 状语从句
⑴ 如果你不…,你就会… If you don’t ..., you’ll ...
例︰If you don’t keep working hard, you’ll lose the chance.
如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。
⑵ 如此 ……,以至于…… so … that …
例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.
当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。
⑶ 每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.
每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.
每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.
每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.
每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.
例:Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.
每当我想到我家附近那一.清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。
9. 宾语从句
我认为,…… / 我认为……不...... I think / I don’t think that …
我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …
例:He doesn’t think I should stop him joining the club.
他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10. Since + S + 过去式, S + 现在完成式.
例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。
篇5:2024年中考英语作文押题:中国梦
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+ 加入清单When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.
Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.
当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么?我将毫不犹豫地回答:是一个好医生。我想成为一名医生的原因是,我想要尽可能的挽救人们的生命。当我年轻的时候,我有一个可怕的车祸。多亏了医生,他们把我带回生活。从那时起,成为一个好医生一直是我的灵感。我将努力学习,以确保在未来我的梦想成真。
中国梦是由每一个普通人的梦想。我们应该尽力使我们的梦想成真。
篇6:优秀中考英语步骤
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+ 加入清单导语:写作练习对于英语能力的综合提高,特别是对高阶学习者而言有重要意义,不管做什么都需要技巧,写英语作文有什么技巧呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语写作指导,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
如何写好一篇60字的作文,争取18分的最大值,显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字“练”。目标有了,最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。
60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。
60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分这样五个层次:
1)开始句
2)向主体过度句
3)主体叙述
4)向结尾过度
5)结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右(每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整),最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。
说到这里我们只解决了层次清晰、符合字数要求的问题。其次注意没有把握的句子不写,拼写要准确,叙述中没有语法错误,时态要符合背景。我们学了含不同从句的复合句。所以作文中应该适当地出现复合句。一定要注意词汇上的不必要重复和句式的单一。巧妙地插入平时积累的格言警句,使作文生辉。设法满足“词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如;文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达方式。”同时注意大小写、标点正确。
再次,一定注意作文的题内要求,往往是以问题形式出现为多,千万不可丢掉任何一个。
最后提醒大家注意的就是一定要打草稿,避免在卷面上涂抹。
以上这几点做到了,离满分作文也不远了。
篇7:2024浅谈提高中考英语写作指导
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+ 加入清单导语:听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分,其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
一、学生写作过程中出现的现状
1.词汇量太少
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想,必须以足够的词汇量为基础,但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非等。
语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中,所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。
2.词汇错误较多
学生在写作的时候,中式英语Chinglish :如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误:错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确,缺乏重点句型的使用:如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语,后转化为英语,可能他想到了句子该怎样写,句型也知道的,但却有个别单词不会。如:“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了,句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道,但里面的形容词difficult不会写,导致句子表达含糊,以至于整篇文章错词百出,面目全非。
3.写出的长句达不到表达效果
一般的英语应试作文,总会给出汉语提示,学生写作也是从提示上入手,有的提示意思较长,所以学生写的时候会直接翻译,但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力,导致整个句子错误。
4.听力较弱影响写作能力
我们所面临的是一群农村学生,他们没有特别好的条件练习听力,每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上,听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过:“不写没有读过的语言,不读没有说
的语言,不说没有听过的语言”。很明显,通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。
5.单词书写不规范,卷面书写较乱
对于大多数学生来说,格式、大小写、标点,书写不规范:句首字母大写不注意,使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如:After he went back home. He cooked supper.,考试时把单词写整齐的很少,学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分,虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以,但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数,而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐,写作得分也不是很低。
二、提高写作的方法
1.词汇的积累
初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。
同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况,通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过,由于课程的时间安排问题,测试的工作开展较少,这也是实验工作中的一个不足。
2.熟练记住单词
( 1.) 巩固单词拼写,培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一,有话想说,无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此,我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词,掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心,写出该词的不同形式或词性,组成典型的句型,从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时,不但要写出其过去式过去分词died,而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句,如:The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时,可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥,但很有必要,它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上,可向学生提出稍高的要求,如写出高质量的句子: What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ,too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落,围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用,能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组,特别是能够熟练的运用词组,能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句,只要学生将句子表达清楚,语意连贯,就是一篇好的英语文章。
3.熟练使用简单句
简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些,可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥,也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章,要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件,只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚,而没有遗漏,在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯,那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。
4.加强听力训练,促进写作
目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是:事先提出每课生词,教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后,第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容,并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置,星期一用课堂时间,教师将该文念一、二遍,让学生听写,教师收上来查阅,加以评讲。通过这种训练,提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。
5.书写规范,促进写作
关于书写的卷面整洁与否,字体如何,是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差,很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得,这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中,应坚持要求学生书写规范,写好匀笔斜体行书,注意连写,以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式,让全班同学都参加英语书法评比,从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣,养成良好的书写习惯。
综上所述,在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读是不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。
比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。
美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”,即:阅读能够促进写作,因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得,从大量的阅读中获取的,阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully,but also aloud,and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书,它是写作的基础。
阅读对写作固然重要,但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视,英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践,正如学习游泳一样,写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,因为课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的,而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能,而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。
此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要,应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样,可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记,教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题,如奥运会、环境保护等,让学生在课外习作。
总之,学生要提高写作能力应在教师有计划、有组织的引导下进行,开展多种形式的写作实践,努力扩大学生的生活面和知识面,以提高学生的写作能力。
篇8:初三期中考试英语作文
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+ 加入清单This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating abanana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No sooner had I done thisthan I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone wouldstep on it and tumbleover. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumpedoffthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeingthis, father praised me and I felt very happy.
In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.
上学路上
今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。
将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。
篇9:中考英语作文热点句型
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+ 加入清单①在此结构中,there是引导词,在句中不能充当任何成分,也不必翻译出来。句中的主语是某人或某物,谓语动词be要与主语的数保持一致。例如:There is a man at the door. 门口有一个人。
当主语是由两个或者两者以上的名词充当时,谓语动词be要跟它邻近的那个名词的数一致(就近一致)。例如:There are two dogs and a cat under the table.桌下有两只狗和一只猫。 比较: There is a cat and two dogs under the table.
②There be句型中的be不能用have来代替,但可以用lie(位于,躺),stand(矗立),exist(生存),live(生活)等词来替换。例如:There stand a lot of tall buildings on both sides of the street. 街道两旁矗立着许多高楼。
There lies lake in front of our school. 我们学校前面有一个湖。
Once there lived a king here. 这儿曾经有一个国王。
There is going to be a sports meeting next week. 下周准备开一个运动会。
与there be 类似的结构: there seem(s)/happen(s) to be…
There seems to be one mistake in spelling. 似乎有一处拼写错误。
There happened to be a ruler here. 这儿碰巧有把尺子。
There seemed to be a lot of people there. 那儿似乎有很多人。
篇10:中考英语作文:MayDay五一劳动节
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+ 加入清单May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
May Day is my favorite day!
五月一日是一个星期日。这是劳动节。妈妈对我说:“打开你的眼睛,看看窗外。多么好的一天!让我们去公园,“所以我的母亲,我的同学和我去公园。我书包里带了一些食物。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天白云。我看到一些梨树和苹果树等。在树下面,有几种不同种类的花。它是丰富多彩的,蓝色,红色,黄色,粉色,紫色,橙色和白色。我看到一些气球和蝴蝶在天空。我吃了爆米花,玉米片,香蕉和棒棒糖。他们都很棒。在下午,我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类,老鼠,猫,狗,鹦鹉,仓鼠,兔子等。可能是我最喜欢的一天!
篇11:浙江中考满分英语作文:MyEnglishLearning
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+ 加入清单Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示:
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
篇12:英语中考作文:诚信
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+ 加入清单请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括:1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。
提示词:traditional virtue(传统美德), wolves(狼), tell lies(撒谎)
To Be an Honest Man
As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.
I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.
Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.
篇13:2024中考英语作文万能句子精选
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+ 加入清单导语:2016中考不久就要到了,写英语作文的时候可以套用万能句型。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
1.打算做....../计划做......
intend /plan to do 打算做......
be going to do 打算做......
decide to do决定做......
determine to do决定做......
be determine to do 决定做......
make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......
2.想/希望......
want to do= would like to do想做......
hope to do希望做......
expect to do期待做......
wish to do 希望做......
consider doing 考虑做......
looking forward to doing盼望做......
dream of doing 梦想做......
cant help doing 情不自禁地做......
3.表示喜欢和感兴趣
like /love doing 喜欢做......
enjoy doing 喜欢做.......
be fond of doing 喜欢做......
be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......
prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣
show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣
4.其他短语
keep on doing 坚持做......
keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......
be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......
spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......
have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难
满分句型
1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...
2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...
...too...to do 太...而不能...
such...that...如此...以至于...
3.not...until...直到...才...
4. The reason why+句子is that +句子...的原因是...
5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因
6. That is because+句子 那是因为...
7.It is said that+句子 据报道...
It is reported that+句子 据报道...
8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...
9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...
10. There is no need to do 没必要做...
11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做
13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?
14. I think you should do我认为你应该...
15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...
16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话,我会做...
篇14:2024中考英语作文写作高分秘诀
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+ 加入清单中考英语考试中“书面表达”往往是最后一项,怎么样在那么短的时间内尽可能的拿到高分呢?
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。
所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
标点错误:每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。
篇15:中考英语作文:低碳生活
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+ 加入清单现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语:be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
★ 范文
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
篇16:预测2024中考英语作文题目:我的梦想
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+ 加入清单Everyone has a dream, everyone dreams of each has its own characteristics.
My dream is to become a singer. Astronauts ya-ping wangs dream is when astronauts, soaring in the sky, after a test, 1 on 1 June 2013 live at 38 points, 5 ya-ping wang realized their dream. Dream is all the motivation, if did not have the power, then you will always be stepped in situ, power will let you constantly burning inner small universe, you want a perennial desire for a better life. Dream, can let you are not afraid of wind and rain, l fearless risk, keep moving forward.
Dancers Liao Zhi lost her legs in an earthquake, also lost daughter, hospitalized for 4 months, finally can was released from the hospital, but she must take prosthesis, thought it wont pain again, but she never thought with prosthesis is how much pain. Back to the home, want to go to the Wc, and calling to dad, mom, called for a long long time no one her. She remembered that mom and dad might not be home, so, she endured the pain with the prosthesis to the toilet. Just walked into a toilet and a load into the toilet, the hair is wet, look in the mirror before their mess, she decided to practice, have not yet learned to walk just learn to dance, in order to dream hard practice for six, seven years.
This reminds me of the dishes during the summer vacation, didnt stick to quit a few days. Will insist on a dream, the realization of the dream is not, make track for to dream on the road requires effort and sweat, and tears. In to abandon, do not give up. Vocabulary, dream, how beautiful dream, only constant efforts, constantly insist, to be courageous ya-ping wang, Liao Zhi insisted.
每个人都有一个梦想,每个人的梦想都各有特色。
我的梦想是当一名歌唱家。宇航员王亚平的梦想是当上宇航员,在天空中翱翔,经过一番的考验,就在2013年6月1住1日5时38分,王亚平实现了自己的梦想。梦想就是一切前进的动力,如果没有了动力,那你将永远的踏步走在原地,动力会让你不断的燃烧内心的小宇宙,激发你对美好生活向往生生不息的渴望。梦想,会让你不惧风雨l,无畏风险,不断前进。
舞蹈家廖智在一次地震中失去双腿,也失去了女儿,住了4个月的医院,总算可以出院了,但她必须带假肢,本以为不会再痛苦了,但她万万没有想到带假肢是有多么痛苦。回到了家,想上Wc,便叫爸爸,妈妈,叫了很长很长时间都没有人理她。她才想起爸爸妈妈可能不在家,于是,她忍着痛苦带着假肢走向了厕所。刚走进厕所便一头载进了马桶,头发也湿了,看着镜子前狼狈的自己,她便下定决心苦练,还没有学会走路就学会跳舞,为了梦想苦苦练习了六,七年。
这让我想起了在暑假里洗碗,没坚持几天就放弃了。有梦就要坚持,梦想的实现并非一朝一夕,追来梦想的道路上需要付出努力和汗水,甚至泪水。在抛弃,不放弃。梦想,是多么美好的词汇,梦想,只有不断的努力,不断地坚持,才能拥有王亚平的勇敢,廖智的坚持。
篇17:湖北荆州中考满分作文:走在回家的小路上
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+ 加入清单这是一个冬天的夜晚,天完全黑了下来,路幽静得吓人。树枝上偶尔一声猫头鹰的悲啼,或斑鸠的一翅"扑棱",都会让人毛骨悚然。中午我和爸爸赌气没有吃饭,他那凶神恶煞的面孔让我对这个家失去了兴趣,于是我想到了离家出走,气冲冲地离开了这个让人生厌的家。究竟要去哪里,我自己心中也没有目标。
远处投来一束灯光让我警觉起来,我想起了小说和电视剧里的恶人抢劫,毕竟我还是一个未成的女生,于是躲在路旁的树后悄悄地观察起来。一个老大爷拖着一辆车慢慢地走来,前面一位老太婆用手电给他照路。我这才放心地走了出去,却把他们吓了一大跳,原来他们是在前面的集镇上卖完烤红薯回家的。老太婆见只有我一个人,她攥紧我的手生怕我逃跑了似的询问情况。我如实地回答了她的提问,她并没有多说什么,只是从灶膛里拿出了一个热乎乎的烤红薯塞到我手中。我推辞不要,其实肚子饿得"咕咕"直叫,只是口袋里没有钱的一句托词而已。
"小姑娘,吃吧,想必你也饿了,这红薯是送给你的,不要钱!"老大爷温和地说。"谢谢了!"我话没说完就狼吞虎咽地吃了起来。他们见我吃得"吧嗒吧嗒"作响一副馋相,老两口于是笑了起来。我一边舔着手指上沾着的薯泥,一边不停地道谢,这时老太婆发话了:"你吃了我一个红薯就千恩万谢,那你的父母养育你十多,你该吃了他们多少粮食,怎么就为一句不中听的话就离家出走,你觉得这应该吗?"我愣住了,痴痴地望着老太婆,咀嚼着这简单而富有力度的话语,刚刚还愤愤不平的心霎时变得内疚起来,我无言以对,只是低下了尚存余怒的头。
"小姑娘,回家吧,你爸妈肯定会着急的,说不定他们在四处寻你。"老大爷劝慰我说。"我们同走一段吧,等会我们到家后再送你一程。"老太婆拉着我的手往回走。
夜更深了,我帮老大爷推着车子往回走,寒风迎面吹来,也没有那么刺骨。猫头鹰偶尔的一声啼叫也不再那么悲凉,斑鸠的"扑棱"也仿佛是在用暖翅给它的孩子遮挡风寒。我聆听着车轱辘的转动声,它和北风的呼啸声交织在一起,好像奏响了一首回家的进行曲。
"小翠!小翠--"(化名),前面传来了熟悉的呼喊声,我知道那是爸爸妈妈撕心裂肺呼唤。滚烫的泪水抑制不住从眼眶中涌了出来,情不自禁地大声回应:"我在这--"
"我在这--"我和老大爷、老太婆齐声回应。
走在回家的路上,我仿佛一下子长大了许多。这冬夜幽深的小路呀,它留下了我美丽的记忆,留下了我深深的成长足迹!
篇18:2024中考英语作文热点话题:交通问题
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+ 加入清单越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含:
遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
劝父母不能酒后驾车。
你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注:第一段已给出,不计入总数
★ 参考范文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
篇19:中考英语myfriend
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+ 加入清单My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .
篇20:中考英语作文:自然的灾害
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+ 加入清单As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service. The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic loss was caused. Many people could not work and live normally. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.