假期计划的作文英语初一(实用20篇)

Christmas Day-December 25-which celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ， the founder of the Christian religion， is the biggest and best-loved holiday in the United States.

According to the Bible， the holy book of Christians， God decided to allow his only son， Jesus Christ， to be born to a human mother and live on earth so that people could understand God better and learn to love God and each other more. "Christmas"- meaning "celebration of Christ "- honors the time when Jesus was born to a young Jewish woman Mary.

Mary was engaged to be married to Joseph， a carpenter， but before they came together， she was found to be with child. Because Joseph， her husband， was a righteous man and did not want to expose her to public disgrace， he had in mind to p>

Although the exact date of the birth of Jesus nearly 2，000 years ago is not known， the calendar on the supposed date p>

圣诞节只是基督徒庆祝其信仰的耶稣基督(jīdū)诞生的庆祝日。圣诞节的庆祝与基督教同时产生，被推测始于西元1世纪。很长时间以来圣诞节的日期都是没有确定的，因为耶稣确切的出生日期是存在争议的，除了《新约》以外，没有任何记载提到过耶稣;《新约》不知道日期，当然就没有人知道确切日期了。在西元后的头三百年间，耶稣的生日是在不同的日子庆祝的。西元3世纪以前的作家们想把圣诞日定在春分日上下。直到西元3世纪中期，基督教在罗马合法化以后，西元354年罗马主教指定儒略历12月25日为耶稣诞生日。现在的圣诞节日期跟西元纪年的创制是密不可分的。

西元纪年创制于西元5世纪，后来圣诞节这一天就按格里高利历法，即西元纪年的“公历”来确定了，而日历按着假定日期把时间分为公元前(耶稣基督诞生前)和公元后(A. D. 是拉丁文缩写，意思是“有了我们主--耶稣的年代”)。后来，虽然普遍教会都接受12月25日为圣诞节，但又因各地教会使用的历书不同，具体日期不能统一，

Spring is coming. Birds are singing and flowers are blooming. I wanted to plant spring in my home, so I, together with my dad, went to the market and bought some flower seedlings. We prepared to plant them in the yard. When we were back home, we went into action in no time. Some time later, we finished. I will patiently wait for spring to come to the yard now.

New Years day arrived, the school put three days off, I want to think how to arrange this three days holiday. Vacation the first day of my parents and I went to the grandmother home, grandmother home is very far from my home, the grandmother home, my mother cook at home with my grandma, my father and I went to grandma house playing in front of the river. Finished before you know it on the first day of the holiday, but I had a very happy and very happy.

On duty went to the second day of the holidays, mom, dad at home with my homework, dad said: after I had finished my homework, such as to take me to play behind the mountain, I hasten to write my homework quickly, good let dad took me out to play for a while, I used a very short time to finish your homework and check again. After finishing the homework, dad took me to the house behind the mountains play an afternoon. The second day of the holiday finished, just like that.

Tomorrow is the last day of the holiday I will review well at home, because the final is coming up, cant disappoint my parents and teacher I have to take an examination of a good best.

元旦到了，学校放了三天假，我要好好想一想这三天假期怎么安排。假期的第一天我和爸爸妈妈去了姥姥家，姥姥家离我家很远，到了姥姥家，妈妈在家陪姥姥做饭，爸爸和我去了姥姥家前边的小河玩。不知不觉的第一天假期过完了，但我过得很开心也很高兴。

假期的第二天，妈妈值班去了，爸爸在家陪我写作业，爸爸说：等我写完作业带我去后边的山上玩，我赶紧快写作业，好让爸爸带我出去玩 一会，我用了很短的时间把作业写完了也检查了一遍。写完作业后爸爸带我去了家后边的山上玩了一下午。假期的第二天就这样过完了。

明天是假期的最后一天我要在家好好复习，因为快要期末考试了，不能让老师和爸爸妈妈失望我要考出一个好最好成绩来。

What are dreams? Is going to make track for to find, with dreams, we have the vast blue sky in the heart, a kind of hard teacher, a contribute to the motherland defenders, a great inventor like Edison, a great writer like old grandpa, etc., is a great dream, and my dream just want to be a fashion designer.

Be a costume designer, to match the color of the clothes, costume design, draw the look of the clothes and so on, do you want to be when I grew up in a special designer, I want to design a four seasons can wear, and can adjust the color of the clothes, the appearance of the telescopic clothes, transform the style of clothes, I also want to design a special woolen sweater, is the standard I do a costume designer.

Ha ha, you must be very surprised, so how novel clothes design, I want to install a temperature adjustment in the dress of the stealth screens, it will automatically adjust according to the temperature of the weather condition, the color will have a multi-function screen, there is a fashion design decorative pattern, and had good several sets of clothing color, the dress and scaling, can shrink into shorts, grow and shrink, still can slip into various styles, such as dust coat, skirt, the dress is comfortable and tide, I want to make a lot of people do put on my own, after numerous changes, thinking about clothes. Special sweater I to design for children, the outside is full of fluffy, white Snow White, goose feather, hat is full of hair, two balls hanging down, very cute! My dream is to be a fashion designer, a special designers, a wonderful dream!!!!!

Dream is to have you to chase that dream, as long as to look for a good dream is to a good future! My dream is so, the design is novel, fashionable clothes, the achievement of the greatest pleasures in my life!

梦想是什么?是要去追去找的，有了梦想就有了心中广阔的蓝天，一个慈祥辛勤的老师，一个为祖国做贡献的保卫者，一个像爱迪生那样伟大的发明家，一个像季羡林爷爷那样的大作家等等，都是一个远大的梦想，而我的梦想只想做一个服装设计师。

做一个服装设计师，要会搭配服装的颜色，设计服装的款式，画出衣服的样子等等，我长大以后要做一个特殊的设计师，我要设计一件四季都能穿，而且能调整衣服的颜色，伸缩衣服的样子，变换款式的衣服，我还要设计一件特别的羊毛衫，就是我做一个服装设计师的标准。

哈哈，你一定很惊讶，那么新颖的衣服怎么设计啊，我想在这件衣服里安装一个调整温度的隐形屏幕，它会自动根据天气的温度情况来调整，色彩会有一个多功能屏，里面有时尚的图案花纹，还有原本配好的几套衣服的颜色，这件衣服还有伸缩功能，能缩成短装，又能缩成长装，还能伸缩成各种款式，有风衣、裙子等，这件衣服既舒适又潮流，我想让许多人穿上我亲手做的，经过无数修改、思考的衣服。特别的羊毛衫我要设计给小朋友们穿，外面全是毛绒绒的，雪白雪白的，都是鹅毛，帽子上全是毛，垂下两个绒球，可爱极了!我的梦想就是当一个服装设计师，一个特殊的设计师，一个美好的梦想!

梦想是要有你来追的，梦想只要去寻找，一个好的梦想就是一个好的未来!我的梦想就是如此，设计新颖、时髦的衣服，成就我一生中最大的乐趣!

What a colorful world of the fall,this is a credit to the leaves,they have

red and green,the autumn dress up like a large garden.

Red maple leaves,like palms,just five piece children.Leaves a small number

of prominent teeth,the base of the heart-shaped,dark green to dark green above

to below the axillary vein has hair sense,the edge is also trimmed with lace

irregular.Bark grayish brown,with the old growth,the surface grooves and

scales.Maple leaves,autumn brings a festive and warm.

Holly tree is the symbol of vitality,crown thriving,flourish.Leaves

oval,pointed at both ends,like the two tilt of the boat.Stem and leaf surface

veins is very clear,long from bottom to top,from coarse to fine.The front of

dark green leaves,very smooth,negative light green,because there are many

prominent veins and coarse stems.Holly leaves have wavy lines on the edge of the

same jagged,but not scratchy.

The campus,red maple,holly green,a passionate,full of vitality,this is

really the mental outlook of our young pioneers it!I love autumn,I love the fall

on campus.

Im going to do some meaningful thing during the summer vacation, arranged as following:

Im going to go to the moon and sun valley bubble hot spring, because there are hundreds of different kinds of hot springs, I mainly want to realize the great changes in China in recent years.

Im going to a picnic, because since the childhood is spring outing, try for a picnic. So when the summer vacation to go to a picnic.

I am going to my cousin, cousin, cousin go planting activities. Kind of myself, and I want to put this tree is called "hope" tree.

Im ready to get out my small broom. Cleaning the small room. Sweep out I was a small room with personality, sweep out a little.

I will be happy, happily through the hot summer.

我打算在暑假里做几件有意义的事，安排如下：

我打算去日月谷泡温泉，因为那有上百种不同的温泉，我主要是想领悟到中国近几年的巨大变化。

我打算去一次野炊，因为从小到大都是去春游，可以尝试一下野炊。所以趁这个暑假去一次野炊。

我还打算约我的表哥、表妹、表弟一起去植树活动。自己来种，我还要把这棵树取名为“希望树”。

我还准备拿出我的小扫把。清扫整个小房间。扫出我十分有个性的小房间，扫出一片小天地。

我一定会开开心心、快快乐乐地过这个炎热的暑假。

Sunny May Day, our whole family to go to the wolong mountain park to play. Along the way the grass as if in a nod to us, floret in dance for us, the birds are singing for us, we was very happy, in the car, we soon arrived at wolong mountain park.

An enter a door, a lot of green green tree caught my eye, for the countless, how like the stars in the sky! There was a very, very big tree, Im curious thoughtfully looked at this tree, and then solemnly said: "mom, I know that what was the name of a tree." Mother said, "well you say what is the name of the tree is so big." I blurted out, "climb the lion". Mother smiled, said "yes, is getting the lion."

We laughed as he said, soon came to the bridge, the bridge above is very beautiful, the vast lake, tall building loomed as what on the surface of the water like underwater city! Soon we came to the place by boat, I asked uncle still have how long, can we turn a boat? "The uncle said:" about half an hour! I listen to the stunned, but no way, only slowly, etc., etc. For a long time.

Looking forward to finally to our ship. I immediately jumped into the boat and rowing happily, my heart is like to eat the honey as sweet, sail, I see Derek fisher is say "hello" to us, the ducks in blessing to us, bless our happy May Day. Quickly for over an hour, go back, because of the water is too big! Some water in my hand as if to remind our next remember to go to this beautiful place to play.

Ah! This is May Day, our whole family had May Day!

I had a wonderfulspring festival holiday.I went to the park with my friends.We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate.We went to the park by bike.It was a sunnyday.We sat under a big tree and talkedwith each other.We talked about some movies andfunny things.Then we hadhamburgers and some drinks for lunch.Then we played some games.

We went home at 5pm.Although we were all fell tired,we were very happy.It was great fun!

May holiday is coming. Our family is going to do something. Today I called my little brothers phone at the noon. He asked me what I am going to do in the holiday. I told him we want to go on a trip some day during but where we dont decide to go. We are going to sleep in the morning May first. Then we are going to go to Dawukou by bus in the afternoon. We are going to have a day off May 2nd. If its will fine in May 3rd we are going to go out on trip. I am going to go to the Forest Park. Your sisters husband is going to hometown Xiamiao. He wants to go fishing.

Gui Zexuan is going to climb the hill with his friends. We are discussing. I asked my little brother what plans you are going to in the holiday. He invited us to go his home. He wanted to go Suyukou with us. I was glad to hear the news. Our family decided to go Yingchun to Suyukou on trip.

翻译：

五一长假即将到来。我们全家打算做一些事情。今天我打电话给我弟弟的电话在中午。他问我假期要做什么。我告诉他，我们想在旅行几天，但还没决定去哪里。我们将在五月的第一天早上多睡一会儿。然后在下午乘坐巴士前往大武口。5月2日休息一天。如果一切都好5月3日我们要出去游玩。我打算去森林公园。你姐姐的丈夫是要回家乡小庙。他想要去钓鱼。

桂泽轩与他的朋友去爬山。我们正在讨论。我问我的小兄弟你假期有什么计划。他邀请我们去他家。他想与我们一起去苏峪口。我很高兴听到这个消息。我们全家决定去苏峪口旅途。

Today is our holiday on the fourth day, my mother let me thoroughly play for four days, I feel great. After thorough played, starting today I should study hard. Today my mother and I sat on the sofa to discuss for my summer vacation plan, plan is as follows:

At nine o clock every morning to start learning, learning contents are: read gradethree of the thirty minutes of the day to recite, learn ten English words, write an hour.than play games practice copybook (a), study primary school grade threeaoshu 15 minutes, watching English cartoon episode.

At four o clock in the afternoon began to learn, learning content: in the Cambridgechildrens English learning with my mother half an hour, half an hour reading classics, a diary, summer vacation homework Chinese, maths every two pages (after the summer vacation homework about on August 1, preview new lesson threegrade).

Back to the square to play, in the evening, my mother read a story, I repeat thestory.

Other free time to arrange, can draw, playing electronic organ, doing scientific experiments, play computer, watch TV, play with children, and so on.

I will consciously execution plan, such as not according to plan, all the free time of the summer vacation will be mother voluntary deprived.

I have many favorite holiday,such as:the Dragon Boat Festival and the double ninth festival,but I most like the needlework. Because the needlework section is by niulang and zhinv,below I will speak to you of the origin of the needlework section.

Met a sick one day,the cowherds workhorse, cowherd saw it was ill, and was taken care of.

One day, met a group of vega cowherd,and fell in love with the one of the female, the vega also like cowboy, they lived a happy life. This thing is know the heavenly queen, and catch the vega on the day.

After women talked: “when I die, I made a pair of leather shoes, you can walking.” The old cow died, cowherd took the old cow leather to make shoes, find vega flew to heaven, but was head of the heavenly queen hair clasp into the Milky Way of blocking the way. Cowboy on the other side has kept many days,finally, was touched by the heavenly queen so heavenly queen in July 7th this one day,only to meet niulang and zhinv. Vega ingenuity,women are begging for blessing themselves can also ingenuity.

This is the origin of the needlework section.

Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It＇s so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

I’mgoingtothesunonmyholiday.Iwillgotherebyaspaceship.Iwilltakeabigbluespaceship。

thenI’llpilotthespaceshiptothesun.thesunisveryhot.SoIputonthesuper-shirt.Inthemorning,Iwillhavesomesunburgerformybreakfast.

Ateighto’clock,Iwillplaywithmyfriendsthere.theyaresuperdogandsupergirl.Superdogiswhiteandblack.Supergirlisveryclever.Supergirlandsuperdogliketoplaywithme.SoIplaywiththemforfortyminutes.thenIdomyhomeworkinmylittleredroomonasmallbluetable.Aftermyhomework,Iwillhavemylunch.Iwilleatsunsalad.Iwillmakesomeredtoybeartothesunbabies.Iwillhaveredjuice,redfishandredrice.Allthethingsarered.thenIneedalotofwateronthesunbecausethesunistoohot.SoIwillwalktothespaceship.I’llpilotthespaceshiptotheearth.

Thisisagoodholidayonthesun.

[英语我的假期作文

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing .

I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it . First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much .

Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them .

I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

Anew year has come. In order to have a fruitful year, I make a plan for it.Firstly, I must study hard as much as possible. After all, study is the most importantfor me. Secondly, I will take more exercises. I always got illness last year.Therefore, I must be healthy this year. Thirdly, I want to learn swim thisyear. I like swimming very much, because I think it’s cool. I hope I can do it.Finally, I hope happiness is fully filled my home in the new year.

We all know, summer holiday is a long time. Well how should we speng it? I have a good plan to spend my summer holiday.First, Im going to visit my grandparents.

First, Im going to visit my grandpa--ents for three weeks.

Then,Im doing my homework, sounds boring. "When you finish my home work, we are going to aquarium"my mother says. When I finish my homework,we are going to aquarium, and going to take many photos. I am so happy.Two weeks later Im going to school.

This is my plan to speng my sommer holiday. How about you?

1.因为我最薄弱的一项科目是语文，成绩处于中等水平，作文干巴巴的，不生动。

空闲时间多看课外书，每天记1～2条好词佳句,按老师的指导进行写作练习。争取每次作文练习都在95分以上。

2.提前老师的讲解做考纲和全品的题目，前天晚上认真预习。多做深，精的题目，拓展思维。

3.每天坚持朗读外语作品，养成良好的语感。认真识记考纲后面的单词，严格避免中考因单词而失分。认真复习和预习全品的考点聚焦和附录，要求重点掌握语法，句型。注意活学活用。

4.循环复习和背诵常用原子质量表，元素化合价，酸、碱、盐溶解表，严格避免因为忘记它们而在中考中失分。认真识记和归纳老师给出的化学方程式，要求活学活用，知道反应条件，反应结果。

5.认真识记物理公式，物质常量，电学和光学是物理里我最薄弱的环节，我要跟随老师的总复习，认真，仔细的巩固电学和光学知识。根据考纲认真复习各点知识，按时完成作业，做笔记。

6.根据考纲认真复习历史知识点，在未来的2个多月里循环复习，加强记忆，认真记忆老师归纳的口诀，表格，利用它们能很好的记忆知识点，关注今年发生的时事，联系时事与中学历史的联系。

7.根据考纲与全品上面的题目和知识点循环复习，背诵。由于今年中考政治变得很活，所以不能死记硬背，要活学活用，认真参考其他地市的中考题目。

is time for farmers to get ready for their fields.

the second season is summer. the three months are june, july and august. the weather is very hot and it often rains. people can go swimming and sightseeing. it is time for all things to grow up.

the third season is autumn. the three months are september, october and november. the weather becomes cooler and cooler. leaves begin to fall to the ground. it is the harvest time for farmers.

the fourth season is winter. december, january and february are the three months of that season. the weather is very cold, and most of the plants die at that time. sometimes it snows. people can enjoy skating and skiing. but winter doesn t stay with us for a long time, for spring comes again soon.

翻译：

一年四季

一年有四季，每个季节有三个月，每个季节的气候都不一样。生命的轮回由四季控制。

第一个季度是春季。春季的三个月为三月、四月和五月。在这段时间里，天气温暖、晴朗，万物复苏。冬眠的动物们也醒过来了，农民们开始忙农活。

第二个季节是夏季，包括六月、七月和八月。天气非常热，而且老是下雨。人们能游泳、观光。夏季也是万物生长的好时候。

第三个季节是秋季，三个月分别是九月、十月和十一月。天 气越来越凉，树叶开始飘落。这是一个收获的季节。

最后一个季节是冬季，这一季包括十二月、一月和二月。天气非常冷，大多数植物都死了。有时候还下雪，人们可以滑冰和滑雪。但是冬天不会太长，因为春天马上就要来临了。

In the lively sound of firecrackers, sent unforgettable year; the number of warm spring breeze, give smiling people sent a new year. We have been one year longer, and all families open the doors and windows to let the bright sun shine into the house in the early years.

In the sound of the firecracker, where will not be mixed with the noise of the gongs and drums, the cheerful instrumental music, will not be filled with bright laughter?

I am one year older. I should be more sensible. Mom and dad have worked so hard on me. I have to study hard and grow up to win glory for my motherland and contribute to my motherland. It takes a hundred years. I will not fail to live up to my parents and teachers.

Last night, I watched a tennis game, it was the US open, because there was

a Chinese female player came to the semi-final, so I stayed up to watched the

game. Unluckily, she was injured twice, though she still wanted to finish the

game, her body situation did not allow her to do so. Her insistence moved so

many audience, they gave her the biggest applause.

The power of insistence is great, it will help you set free your potential

and keep move on. Just for the players, they will face all kinds of incidences

now and then, but the will to insist will make them finish the game. Sometimes,

people win the game not because of their excellent skills, but their strong

will. Those who can stick on to the final line will win people’s applause.

What’s more, when people insist to finish the game, it is the respect that

they show to their opponents. Their spirit deserves people’s applause.

Insistence is a merit, we should keep it, no matter what we do, we must remember

to insist.