中考英语作文高分万能句(汇集20篇)

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

looking up at the stars, i know quite well

仰望群星的时分，我一清二楚，

that, for all they care, i can go to hell,

尽管它们关怀备至，我亦有可能赴地府，

but on earth indifference is the least

可是尘世间我们丝毫不必畏惧

we have to dread from man or beast.

人类或禽兽的那份冷漠。

how should we like it were stars to burn

倘若群星燃烧着关怀我们的激情，

with a passion for us we could not return?

我们却无法回报，我们作何感想?

if equal affection cannot be,

倘若无法产生同样的感情，

let the more loving one be me.

让我成为更有爱心的人。

admirer as i think i am

尽管我自视为群星的崇拜者，

of stars that do not give a damn,

它们满不在乎，

i cannot, now i see them ,say

现在我看群星，我却难以启齿，

i missed one terribly all day.

说我成天思念一颗星星。

were all stars to disappear or die

倘若所有的星星消失或者消亡，

i should learn to look at an empty sky

我应该学会仰望空荡的天空，

and feel its total dark sublime,

同时感受天空一片漆黑的崇高，

though this might take me a little time.

虽然这样可能要花费一点时间。

[中考英语作文：让我们成为有爱心的人

2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月，因此现在是复习的关键时刻，在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题，以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“i think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, lin haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:being saved from the earthquake, two of linhao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that ____。

2、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today。

3、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First， ____ Second，____。 What makes things worse is that______。

4、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。 Nowadays，it is common to ______。

Many people like ______because ______。 Besides，______。

5、任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages。

6、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。

7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious。

8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way。

9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。

10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while. Obviously，______，but why?

11、Recently， the problem of … has aroused people’s concern。

最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。

12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。

13、Nowadays，(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face。

如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

14、With the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…

导语：无论是什么时候环境保护问题都是中考热门话题，尤其在今年这种大范围的环境污染下，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

典型句子：

1. It s our duty to save wate

2. As we know , water is very important to man,

3. we can t live without water.

4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

5. But some people don t care about it .

6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.

7. Its our duty to protect our environment。

8. It is very important to take care of our environment

9. We should not throw litter onto the ground

10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

11. We should plant more flowers and trees。

12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.

15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.It s everyone s duty to love and protect the environment. ​ ​

【参考译文】

1.它是我们的责任来节约水

2.正如我们所知，水是非常重要的人，

3.没有水我们不能生存。

4.适合饮用的水的量越来越少。

5.但有些人不在乎。

6.许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染，必须采取措施制止污染。

7.保护环境是我们的职责。

8.照顾我们的环境是非常重要的

9.我们不应该扔垃圾到地上

10.我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐树木

11.我们应该种更多的花草树木。

12.我们必须捡起一些垃圾扔进垃圾箱

13.如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界将变得更加美丽。

14.树对我们非常有益和重要。

15.我们应该种植越来越多的树为了将来生活得更好更健康每个人都有责任保护和保护环境。

Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.

I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.

昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力，但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信，他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。

我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。

Yesterday evening the team of China played against the team of Brazil. The game started at 7: 30. It was an exciting game.Brazilian Team is the best one in the world. Everyone in the team of China tried his best, but the team of Brazil was too strong.Chinese Team couldn＇t stop them. They kicked four goals, and our team lost the game.

We hope the players in Chinese Team can make great progress, and it will be a strong team one day.

昨天晚上，中国足球对迎战巴西足球队。比赛在7：30开始。那是一场令人激动的比赛。巴西队是世界上最好的足球队，中国队的每个队员都尽了最大努力，但是巴西队太强大了。中国队根本抵御不住他们的进攻，最终以零比四输了这场比赛。

我们希望中国足球队队员能取得较大的进步，将来能成为一个强队。

Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数８０左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_____________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Tom

Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help for their foreign language studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated online.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

1.如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。其优点如下：1.可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流;2.可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等;3.不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话;4.使用时不受时间地点限制;5.使用时免费。

词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it.

饮食安全是个不变的话题，YJBYS为大家准备的这篇范文绝对值得大家收藏，请继续关注我们英语作文栏目。

假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.

Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmenshouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peopleshealth. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food isdelicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.

Finally, I hope the family in the accident will getbetter soon.

1.as an old saying goes,.正如一句古老的谚语所说

2.be nothing but... .不过就是...

3.from where i stand. 从我的立场来说

4.give oneself a chance to.给某人一个机会去...

5.i feel sure that...我坚信...

6.is the best way to make sure that.确保...的最好办法是...

7.we must do our absolute best to.我们必须竭尽全力做...

8.there is no denying the fect that...无可否认.

9.nothing is more+adj.+than to+v.没有比...更重要的了

As the social civilization develops at a fast speed, the new century has brought us with an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of other indoor activities. People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.

随着社会文明的发展速度比较快，新世纪给我们带来了与从传统的户外活动如打球到其他各种室内活动空前的各种娱乐活动。人们可以做运动，唱歌，跳舞唱歌，看电影，玩游戏或在线游戏，或上网冲浪。

On one hand, recreational activities are good to people’s health, both physically and mentally. Sports and dancing can keep people fit. Singing karaoke will bring more excitement and enrich people’s life. Playing video games can satisfy people’s imagination and develop people’s intelligence. Surfing the Internet can bring people plenty of information and knowledge. What’s more, some recreational activities, such as going to the cinema or theatre, playing volleyballs in a team will be inductive to strengthen the affection of the family.

一方面，娱乐活动对人们的健康有益，包括身体上和精神上的。体育和跳舞可以使人健康。唱卡拉OK将带来更多的刺激和丰富人们的生活。玩游戏可以满足人们的想象和开发人的智力。上网能给人们带来的信息和知识丰富。更重要的是，一些娱乐活动，比如去电影院或剧院，在一队打排球将感应加强对家庭的影响。

On the other hand, some recreational activities, such as playing mahjong and poker, might be time-consuming and harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time and money on these activities will seriously influence people’s normal lives. There are also some on-line games which is great appeal to the young generation. Those who are indulged in the games may waste too much time to study and exercise.

另一方面，一些娱乐活动，如打麻将和扑克，如果人是上瘾的是耗时的和有害的。花太多的时间和金钱在这些活动会严重影响人们的正常生活。也有一些在线游戏的是年轻一代的巨大的吸引力。那些沉迷于游戏可能浪费太多的时间来学习和锻炼。

As far as I am concerned, people should take part in meaningful recreational activities and try to benefit more from recreational activities. Only in this way, can they become more energetic and creative when they work and study. When it comes to those addictive, and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.

在我看来，人们应该参加有意义的休闲活动，试图从娱乐活动更多的利益。只有这样，他们才能变得更有活力和创意时，他们的工作和学习。当谈到那些上瘾的，少的有意义的活动，我想远离他们是一个明智的决定。

Today, I want to introduce to you my hometown--particularly coastal. Of course, my hometown because east is sea, is a yellow sea, so just named coastal.

My hometown is in jiangsu province on the north side of yancheng city, although home is poor and backward, and television often see cities are not comparable, also do not have high mountain, not famous scenic spot, but my home have I close-knit family.

My hometown is the vast expanse of the plain, not famous mountains, no treasures and the people are very honest, kind-hearted, and we heard that this area is the sea of alluvial out a relationship, because the land is out of the sand deposition, no earthquakes, floods, not happened are expressed notebook farmers, hard-working simplicity of virtue continue from generation to generation. However, our hometown some local products still amazing, if you heard of zhang guo3 lao3 after eating, the magic of the immortal multiflower knotweed, and legend of the ancient emperor seal was the mosquito qingshui river,

My hometown, people good, well, the future is better, I must be in the introduction of the Internet to see home, home next to the north of China Eurasian continental bridge to head east-edge cloud port, the south is natural wetland scenic spot--MI deer and red-crowned cranes hometown, the distance from the international metropolis Shanghai also but three hours of journey home town, developing the natural harbor-binhai port, a coastal highway after, are building new airport, the train way will give my hometown come again limitless vitality, I have determined to be good friends with good study, with my wisdom and hands build our beautiful home, my hometown coastal must be more beautiful tomorrow.

今天，我要向大家特别介绍我的家乡——滨海。当然，我的家乡因为东边是海，是出了名的黄海，所以才取名滨海。

我的家乡在江苏省靠北边的盐城市，虽然家乡还是比较贫穷落后，和电视里经常见到的大城市不能相提并论，也没有高山，没有出名的风景区，但我的家乡有我最亲近的亲人。

我的家乡是一望无际的平原，没有名山大川，没有奇珍异宝，人们都很诚实善良，听说和我们这一带是海冲积出来的有关系，因为土地是沙子淤积出来的，没有发生过地震，没有发生过洪水，人也都是本本分分的农民，勤劳简朴的美德世代相传。不过，我们家乡有的土特产还是很神奇的，如果你听说过张果老吃后就成仙的神奇的何首乌，还有传说古代皇帝封的不生蚊子的清水河。

我的家乡，人好，地好，将来一定更好，我在网上看到家乡的介绍，家乡北边紧挨着中国的欧亚大陆桥东头——边云港，南边是天然湿地风景区——MI鹿和丹顶鹤的家乡，距离国际大都市上海也不过3个小时的路程，家乡有正在开发的天然良港——滨海港，有沿海高速公路经过，正在兴建的飞机场、火车道都会给我的家乡再来无限的生机，我立志要好好学习，用我的智慧和双手建设我们美好的家园，我的家乡滨海明天一定更美好。

英语作文是最考察同学们英语功底的一类题型，也是在英语考试中所占分值很大的一类题型。所以在写英语作文的时候要掌握中考英语作文写作技巧才能够在中考的时候写出一篇优秀的英语作文。

初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累，但是在面临中考的紧要关头，要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情，这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。

最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员 理想职业 原因

mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画

kate 园艺工(gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美

mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事

tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物

你 ? ?

注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

……

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

★ 范文

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. mike would like to be a writer. he’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. tom would like to be a cook. he’d like to cook delicious food for others. i would like to be a policeman. i want to protect the people safe.

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

写作，作为中考英语三大重点模块之一，满分15分，是整张试卷中最难拿满分的部分，也是很多同学头疼的地方。

中考英语作文分四档：第一档（15—13分），第二档（12—9分），第三档（8—5分），第四档（4—0分），每一档都有具体的评分细则。

乐加乐中考研究中心胡赛楠老师强调：“充分认识到写作评分标准的重要性，按照标准要求规范自己的写作并多加修改，才能做到知己知彼、百战不殆。”

首先，审题要准。要点齐全，8分以上；要点不全，直接进入三类文；

其次，一档文应“观点正确”“语言准确”。“观点正确”是文章要积极向上，不可出现反动消极言论；所谓“语言准确”是要忠诚于词汇的惯用法和辨析，要有非常好的文字功底才能达到。

最后，第一档的“句式多样，词汇丰富”与第二档的“语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要”不同，要求更多的句式和词汇。因此，应在作文中适量使用定语从句、感叹句、倒装句、祈使句等特殊句型；此外，一二档文的差别还在于“逻辑性”，在句式、词汇都相当的基础上，逻辑性强的文章容易得高分。

1)Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that some certain sports contribute directly to our health by giving us some physical exercises.

现在越来越多的人开始相信体育锻炼能有助于身体健康。

(2)As a matter of fact, travel has become part of our life. This situation is encouraging, for it not only broadens minds to the extend which may not be reached previously, but also relaxes them physically, which help people work out mental problems more actively.

实际上，旅行已经成为我们生活的一个部分，这样的情形是喜人的，因为旅行不仅可以拓宽人们的视野达到之前没有达到的范围，而且还可以在身体上得到放松，这能使人们更加积极的克服心理问题。

(3) Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.

污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。

Some of the…are poisonous and dangerous to health.

(4)Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

(5)…Under considerable pressure from… therefore…will only add to their burden.

在这样的压力之下，所以会增加他们的负担。

(6) I see three kinds of pressure working on people today: pressure from education, family and career. It is easy to blame the school for charging too much money, the family members for the heavy burden, the society for the fierce competition. I think people should relax. It is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.

我能看到今天人们身上的三种压力，教育的压力，家庭和职业的压力。学校所收学费太贵，家庭成员负担过重，来自社会的激烈竞争。我认为人们应该放松，他们他们来说，在任何环境下保持一个好的情绪是很重要的。

(7)Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.

而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。

想让你的作文更上一个台阶吗？想让阅卷老师们耳目一新、眼前一亮吗？快来学习今天这几个亮点句型吧，让你的作文脱颖而出，让你的中考取得一个更好的分数！

一、~~~the + ~ est + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most+ 形容词 + 名词 +（that）+ 主词 + have ever + seen（known/heard/had/read, etc）

Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen.

姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员

Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen.

刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.

没有什么比环保更重要的事。

Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge.

没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。

三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）

We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

We cannot emphasize the importance of education.

我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的……）

There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.

不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道……）

It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的……）

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（……的优点是……）

An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create(produce) any pollution.

使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.

锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（……的原因是……）

The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.

我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子（如此……以致于……）

So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.

时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。

So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.

西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。

十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然……）

Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}

虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈……愈……）

The harder you work, the more progress you make.

你愈努力，你愈进步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.

我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着……，……能够……）

By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.

借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

By reading, we can broaden our horizon.

通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。

十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （……使……能够……）

Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

Travelling enable our life to be enriched,

旅行能丰富人们的生活。

Watching movies enable our horizon to be broadened.

看电影能开阔视野。

1.Above all ( things ), S + V...最重要地，…

2.According to the aforementioned, S + V...综观上述所云，…

3.As a result ( consequence ), S + V...结果，…

4.As long as S1+ V1, S2 + V2...只要…，…

5.As we know from the above, S + V...由上述我们可知，…

6.At any rate ( cost ), we should V...无论如何，我们应该…

7.Because of this, we can find that S + V...因为如此，我们可以知道…

8.For this reason, S + V...基于此因 ，…

9.From the ... point of view, ...从…的观点来看，…

10.If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that S + V...假如我们能做到以上所提者，无疑地…

11.In a word, S + V...一言以蔽之，…

12.In any case, we should V 无论如何，我们应该…

13.In short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ，…

14.In conclusion, we should V 总而言之，我们应该…

15.Judging from the above, S + V...从以上来判断 ，…

16.Last but not least, S + V...最后还有一件重要的事就是…

17.Only by this can we V...只有以此我们才能…

18.On the whole, S + V...整体而论 ，…

19.On this ground, S + V...基于此种原因

20.Owing to this fact we can find that S + V...因此我们可以知道…

21.The long and the short of it, S + V...总之 ，…

22.To be short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ，…

23.To sum up ( conclude ), S + V...总之 ，…

24.Thus, this is the reason why S + V...因此，这就是为什么…的原因

25.Under no circumstances should we V...无论如何我们绝不…

26.What we must do is to V...我们只要…就可以了

Dear ______ ,

①I have learned with delight that you ______(祝贺事由). ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.

⑤ ______(所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ______(被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点).

⑧Kindly let me know when you ______(咨询对方何时有空).⑨I hope ______(表达自己的愿望). ⑩My best wishes for your further success.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming