我的梦想英语作文高中生（通用20篇）

There is no doubt that learning English is vital for us. On the one hand,

English has become an international language that people can communicate with

each other in many countries. On the other hand, if we learn English well, we

could get more chance of success.

However, it is well-known that there are many methods for us to learn

English well. There are some tips. First, we can study in a group to improve

learning efficiency. Second, we could listen to English songs and watch English

movies; this way is very suitable for student to improve their listening and

speaking abilities. Third, I have believed that a great deal of practice can

strengthen language knowledge.

In a word, it is natural for us to learn English well by making efforts. If

we didnt work hard, we would never do well in learning English.

Almost everyone wants to live a long life, but longevity is not for all

people. It is reported that most long life people are in villages, far away from

big cities. In village, life is closer to nature. The sky there is clear and

pretty; the air is fresh; the water is clean; and the food they eat are natural,

without any chemicals. Besides, those villages are abundant in green trees,

beautiful flowers, fresh fruit, and wild animals, which can evoke peoples

passions for life. Moreover, the living pace in those villages is rather slow.

People suffer less stress than cities’. Thus, they have more freedom to enjoy

what they like. No wonder that most villagers are strong and healthy. If I

become old someday, I would like to move to village to enjoy a more comfortable

and pleasant life.

蔚蓝的天空，插上一双灵动的翅膀，带着梦想自由地飞翔。

——题记

小时候，常常喜欢跟着奶奶漫步于田埂，看奶奶辛勤劳作，我在一旁用泥土堆积‘城堡’。奶奶笑着说：‘囡囡造的房子真漂亮啊，你要给谁住呢?’‘这是给奶奶造的，我要给奶奶住，这样你就可以天天陪我，给我讲故事了。’奶奶乐呵呵地，爽朗的笑声回荡在天空下。

最喜欢夏夜，我躺在躺椅上乘凉，奶奶坐着，拿扇子帮我一边扇风，一边讲故事。看着明亮的夜空，星光点点，感受着丝丝凉风，周围的虫鸣鸟叫，唱出一首和谐的交响乐。那时的我虽不曾体会到幸福的真正含义，但是我真的希望，这快乐的日子能永远停留在这一刻。不知何时，我幼小的心灵里生出一个天真的梦。我指着天边最亮的一颗星星，对奶奶说：‘奶奶，将来我要造一座好大好大的房子，里面有好多好多的星星。让奶奶住进里面，然后天天给我讲故事。’‘是吗?那囡囡一定要努力实现你的梦想啊，奶奶可等着你呢!’奶奶笑呵呵地说。

夜，静静地，弥漫着温馨的气息。可是这个美丽的梦却不知不觉，随着时间的流逝，它被压在了沉重的书底下。

三点一线的生活压得我喘不过气，不知何时，奶奶也看不到我脸上的笑容了。直到有一天，奶奶突然对我说：‘囡囡的房子造好了没啊，我可是等不急了呢!’我傻傻地笑着，奶奶轻抚着我的头，慈祥的笑脸使我感受到了久违的温暖和快乐，原来，奶奶还一直记着我那个天真的梦。我回答奶奶说：‘奶奶，就快了。到时候你别忘记要每天给我讲故事啊。’‘那么多故事讲来讲去你还听不厌啊，傻丫头。’……

奶奶唤起了我对小时候的梦想的回忆，于是，我便努力寻找我的那个美丽的梦想。

六月总是悄悄地来临，让我来不及感受到它气息。夏夜，我坐在教室，安静地上着晚自习，窗外时时传来虫鸣鸟叫的声音，抬头，仰望，突然意识到已是夏夜了。我想到自己曾经在这样一个夏夜，向奶奶诉说自己的梦想。它是单纯的，是七彩的梦，我要把它紧握在手里，为自己的人生鲜艳上色。我努力堆积自己梦想中的城堡，回忆里，是我和奶奶欢乐的笑声。

‘心的方向，挥动着洁白的翅膀……梦想远航，不会再等待彷徨……’快乐由梦而生，出发吧，带着梦想，扬帆起航。

Every one has a dream. I have a dream, too. I have a dream that one day I could become a math teacher.

I love math very much, because I think math is quite useful. Its useful when people are buying things. Its useful when students are learning subjects like physics and chemitry. And its useful when scientists are doing experiments. Teachers can not only help students to learn things but also teach the students to apply what they learn into practice.

Therefore, I hope to be a math teacher in the future. I want to help more students learn math.

导语：民族传统文化的生态环境遭到不同程度的破坏，传统文化形态逐渐被现代化的生活方式所替代，民族传统文化日渐流失。所以，保护我国的民族传统文化势在必行。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

假如你是李华，某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你准备给该报投稿，稿件内容包括：

1、保护中国传统文化的重要性;

2、列举1-2个你所知道的国家或当地政府文化保护的事例;

3、谈谈你对文化保护的建议。

字数要求：120字。Protect Traditional Chinese Culture

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Dear editor,

I know on your school English newspaper that the readers are expected to have a discussion on the topic of protecting Traditional Chinese Culture. The protection of national and folk culture is of great significance to Chinese cultural diversity and also to the harmonious social development. I have a strong desire to share my personal viewpoints on it.

In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively. To begin with, we should make a law to regulate the society’s performance. What’s more, we should draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of culture protection, the stronger support we can get from the public.

In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.

漫漫人生路，有荆棘，也有醉人的花香;有风和日暖，也有雾霭寒潮;有黑夜的降临，也有阳光的普照。但不管怎样，人生的缰绳掌控在自己的手中，生命的纤绳也背负在自己的肩上。只要拥有一颗希望之心，就能奔向理想的人生。

我们的面前是一座房子，大门敞开着，烟雾一缕一缕地飘出来，直往人鼻孔里钻。门里黑漆漆的，像是宇宙中的黑洞，有着一股无形的力量，想把我们都吸进去。

“现在我们来模拟一下火场逃生。”农校老师的声音响起。恐惧顿时笼上我的心头，刚看过有关火灾的录像，我还心有余悸。

很快，同学们两两一组地进去了，不一会儿，就都从窗口爬下来了。我暗想：看来还不是太难，我一定要通过，可不能让同学们给看扁了。

轮到我了。我先将毛巾打湿，边打湿边在心里默念：不要害怕，一定会通过的。抱着这样的信念，我闯进大门，里面是回环曲折的道路，路上弥漫着烟雾，呛得人喘不过气儿来。睁开眼睛，烟雾就往里钻，很难睁开眼，就算睁开了，烟雾也就像眼泪的催化剂，眼泪就像断了线的珍珠似的，不一会儿，便流满了脸颊。但是，正当我艰难地睁开眼时，我突然发现一个奇怪的现象——凡是通往出口的道路上，或多或少都有些光线透进来。那是生的光线啊!于是，我循着光线，跟是一条条道路玩着“捉迷藏”，果然，便找到了出口。我想：正是因为我怀揣着希望，坚定“一定通过”的信念，我才能驾着“希望”这叶小舟，顺利地驶向胜利的彼岸。

希望是我们的心灵之灯，它在深夜让我们?望到未来黎明的曙光;希望是我们的心灵支撑，它让我们在风雨中望见未来光明的前程;希望是我们内心的冷静，它让我们在灾难中找到求生的道路;希望是我们心灵之声，它让我们在静谧中聆听自然的真谛。

希望给我们力量，希望给我们意志。怀揣希望的人，是永远不会被打败的!

last week i went to mount emei in sichuan province with my family. early in the morning, we took a taxi to beijing west railway station. the station was very lively.

half an hour later, we got on the train. on the train, we had a lot of fun. after 26 hours, we reached sichuan. there, we took many photos and had a goodtime. 5 days later, we came back to the beijing. even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.

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上周我去峨眉山在四川省与我的家人。清晨，我们乘坐一辆出租车到北京西站。车站很热闹。

半小时后，我们上了火车。在火车上，我们有很多的乐趣。26个小时后，我们到达了四川。在那里，我们拍了许多照片，还不错。5天之后，我们回到了北京。即使我的旅行似乎很短，但我的愉快的记忆将持续很久。

The Great Wall is famous as the one of the miracles in the history, it attracts the people from all around the world to witness its greatess. But according to the research, the Great Wall is missing gradually, for it suffers the damage from both nature and human being. As the environment is polluted, the acid rain often comes and destroys the buildings in the long run. What’s more, the increasing number of tourists step on the bricks, which will damage the building. More unpolited behaviors have been reported, such as people like to write down some words to remember their trip here, which disfigures the appearance of this great site. When the Great Wall disappears some day, it is the greatest pity, we are no longer have the chance to appreciate its grandness. To save this miracle, we need to behavior ourselves and protect the environment.

长城是历史上一个著名奇迹,它吸引了来自世界各地的人去见证。但根据研究,长城正在逐渐消失,因为受到来自自然和人类造成的损害。随着环境受到污染,经常下酸雨，长期破坏建筑物。而且,越来越多的游客踏在砖上,这会损害建筑。越来越多不礼貌的行为被报道出来,比如人们喜欢写一些词来纪念他们的旅行,这会让长城的外观变形。长城有一天消失了,这是最大的遗憾,我们不再有机会去欣赏它的雄壮。为了拯救这个奇迹,我们需要我们约束,保护环境。

I have many dreams， such as I am rich in the future。 Therefore， I can buy all what I want。 But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut。 Our country develops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades。 It has great achievements。 All of our country are proud of it。 Therefore， I want to be one of this amazing area。 In order to make my dream e true， I must work hard now。 So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge。 I hope my dream can e true one day。

Some students dream of being a game experts, play the best game, be the best player; Have a classmate wants to be a sports star, uncle yao Ming to win honor for our country; Some students want to become a master of racing, driving the fastest car. And my dream is to be an outstanding inventors, create world-famous super machine.

Super machine is the most advanced and most intelligent machines. This machine can do anything, can store all kinds of energy, and can be released at the right time. For example, when summer it was very hot, I can keep the heat absorption of the super machine into the machine, the outside air temperature is reduced, and when the day is cold in winter, my machine will vomit the quantity of heat inside, make my house warm. Not only can eat heat, my machine also can eat the thunder, when thunder on rainy days, I will put my machine to the outside, he can eat a lot of scary lightning, as energy storage in the inside, in the evening I let my superhero machine release electric lighting for us, for our cooking, provide we need electricity, not to mention enjoyment.

Superhero machine is not only powerful, but also very obedient. Whenever he drink enough to eat, he just like a lazy pig, drum belly slumber. Is really very cute, I want to let him like a pet with me every day, for I serve a lot of people, too. But my mother said to me, in order to realize my dream, will study hard and strive for my dream, from now on solid to learn scientific and cultural knowledge. Dont let the dream appears only in the dream, want to let my dream like a seed, germination, slowly grow, until he blossom, bruised fruit.

有的同学梦想成为游戏专家，玩最好的游戏，做最棒的高手;有同学想成为姚明叔叔一样的体育明星，为我们国家赢得荣誉;有的同学想成为赛车高手，驾驶最快的汽车。而我的梦想却是当一名杰出的发明家，制造出举世闻名的超极机器。

超极机器是最先进、最智能的机器。这种机器无所不能，能储存各种能量，并且能够在合适的时候释放出来。例如当夏天，天很热时，我的超级机器就能把热量吸进机器，把外面的气温降低了，而冬天天冷时，我的机器就把吃进去的热量吐出来，让我的屋子暖暖和和的。不仅能吃热量，我的机器还能吃雷电呢，每当下雨天打雷时，我就把我的机器放到外面，他能吃掉很多吓人的闪电，作为能源储存在里面，晚上我就让我的超能机器放出电来为我们照明，为我们做饭，为我们提供需要的电，别提多方便了。

超能机器不仅功能强大，而且还很听话。每当他吃饱喝足以后，他就像个懒惰的小猪一样，鼓着肚子打盹。真是可爱极了，我要让他每天像个宠物一样陪着我，为我也为很多人服务。 不过妈妈对我说，要实现我的梦想，就要好好学习，从现在开始为我的梦想而努力，扎扎实实的学习科学文化知识。不要让梦想只出现在梦里，要让我的梦想像一粒种子，慢慢发芽，茁壮成长，直到他开花，结出累累的果实。

I have a dream about my career.I want to be a teacher, because I

thinkteacher is a good job.Generally speaking, teachers have much

knowledge.Theycan help students to enrich their knowledge.Besides, teachers can

communicatewith students all the time.It helps teachers keep young at

heart.Finally,teachers have two long holidays a year.In the free time, I can do

many things Ilike.And I have time to travel.It makes me exciting.I must work

hard torealize my dream.

关于梦想与现实的英语作文带翻译 Dreams and Reality

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活 奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我 们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

是什么，来得悄无声息，走的悄无声息，却带来了一串串悦耳的铃声？是什么，走的悄无声息，来得悄无声息，却为我们的心纺织出洁白的梦？

梦想的实现不是一帆风顺，新的梦想也是未来的导航！

皇甫谧，魏晋年间人，是吸金著名的学者和医学家。他晓得时候顽劣异常，被村里人称为

小霸王。一次，他将同窗受气包的枣树皮铲掉，使得枣树枯萎，全村人看到他都不理他。在婶婶的教训下，他决定成为一个有作为的人，并最终浪子回头，去的了医学界的成功。

是一块劈材在炉灶间拥有片刻的火焰与光华，还是茕茕孑立一世聆听清香纹理中的琴声，不同的木头有不同的选择，不同的选择就铸造不同的人生。

梦想的实现要经过艰苦的努力，才能披荆斩棘，达到彼岸。伽利略出生在比萨斜塔旁边，父亲是一个破产贵族。当他来到人世时，家境已经很穷。贫穷他让不得不提前离开大学，但是他并没有就此放弃，他继续钻研数学，当他25岁时，比萨大学破聘请他为数学教授，他取得了成功。

理想是天空，奋斗史彩虹。没有彩虹的天空是灰暗的，没有天空的彩虹是暗淡的，只有在理想的天空里架起一道彩虹才是完美的！

梦在路上，努力远翔，让我们放飞我们新的梦想！

倘若莱特兄弟没有梦想，人类至今不能像鸟儿在天空翱翔；爱迪生没有梦想，当夜幕降临，世界仍然被黑暗笼罩，达尔文没有梦想，人类对物种起源的认识还会停留在神创论上。因为一个个梦想的实现，我们才能探索宇宙的奥秘，探索海底的神奇，畅游包罗万象的因特网上。

理想不是参天大树，而是是一颗种子，需要我们去播种，去耕耘；理想并不是一片绿洲，而是一片荒漠，需要你在上面栽种绿色，理想不是海洋，而是一条小溪，需要汇聚才成江海。

哦，是梦想，轻轻地来了，又悄悄地走了，在收货的季节留下了丰硕的果实；是梦想，悄悄地走了，又轻轻地来了，在成功的路上留下了到达彼岸的航标。

只要我们坚信没有比人更高的山，没有比脚更长的路，坚持努力，梦想就能照进现实！让我们带上梦想，努力远航！

[梦想作文800字高中

As soon as I was enrolled in college I reit a big burden off my mind. So did my classmates. We just wanted to relax. But at our first English Lesson on how to improve our study the teacher told us," There is no end to learning. You can only become a top student with additional work." And she says hard work is rewarding.

The teachers words awakened me. In fact everyone in the world is always learning. Mans talents are like wild plants. They need cutting and pruning with the tool of learning, We lears not only inside the classroom but also outside the classroom. Learning is a process in which man adapts to his surroundings. It is driven by mans desire to win respect and to contribute to society. It is the curiosity for knowledge stimulated by knowledge itself." To learn is to be young. Not to learn is to die." This saying applies to every society and to all ages.

Indeed, everyone living on earth is learning all the time. Man learns not only from books but also from his own experience We can not hope that as long as we learn we will gain benlfits. Efficient study is inseparable from good methods and motivation, A man of a strong sense of responsibility and full of ambition is insatiable in learning.

I entered the university after much efforts. I know it is only the first step on the road leading to the sea of knowledge. It is but the first page in the book of science. The further away ! am off shore, the more far-sighted! will be. The more you learn. the more you feel the need to learn. Art is long, life is short.

一进大学，我感到思想上卸了一个包袱，就像我们的同班同学一样，大家都想放松一下。可在如何提高学习水平的笫1堂英语课上，老师就对我们说：“学无止境。只有通过努力才能成为优等生。”同时还说努力学习是会有报偿的。

老师的话唤醒了我。事实上，世上每一个人都在学习。人的才能如野生植物，需要用学习这把工具予以修剪。我们不仅在课堂上学，而且还要在课外学。学习就是不断适应环境的过程。学习受“人要赢得尊重，就得对社会做贡献”的欲望所驱使。学习就是知识本身所引起的对知识的好奇。“学习使人年轻，不学习等于死亡。”这句话造用于任何社会、任何时代。

确实，世人无时不在学习。人不仅从书本上学，而且在经验中学。我们不能指望只要学习就必有所获。有效的学习是与好的方法与动机分不开的。责任心强且有抱负的人会学而不厌。

经过努力，我进了大学，但我知道，这只是通往知识海洋上的第一步，只是科学这本书中的第1页。离岸越远，视野越宽。越学越想学。生命短暂，艺术无涯。

I have a great dream, is to be a policeman.

I dream all want to be a police, now social bad too much, I watched TV on the police, they caught the thief takes great effort to catch, but some of the police for the money, put the bad guys sneak out, or not to catch the bad guys, let the bad guys run amok in the outside, so now for the bad guys, courage is more and more big, the society is very unsafe.

I want to be a police, have a sense of justice a real police. From now on I will exercise more, practice have to stick the body, I have to study hard all kinds of knowledge, the criminal investigation of more reading, I also want to learn computer knowledge, grasp the bad guys with the network knowledge. If I when the police, I must be strict with myself, all the bad guys are caught, and put them in the tube so tight, finally put their education into a good man, let the world be in peace; I also want to actively help people with difficulties, to serve the people, let the world filled with love.

I hope my dream will soon realize, that our living environment can be more harmonious happy.

我有一个伟大的梦想，就是当一名警察。

我做梦都想当警察，现在社会上的坏人太多，我看了电视上的警察，他们抓小偷要费很大的力气才能捉到，可是有些警察为了钱，把坏人偷偷地放出来，或者不去抓坏人，让坏人在外面胡作非为，所以现在坏人的胆子越来越大，社会也很不安全。

我要当一个有正义感的警察，一个真正的警察。从现在开始我要多锻炼身体，把身体练得棒棒的，我还要努力学习各种各样的知识，多看侦查破案的书，我还要学习电脑知识，用网络知识抓坏人。如果我当警察，我一定严格要求自己，把所有坏人都抓到，并把他们管得严严实实的，最后把他们教育成好人，让世界变得平平安安;我还要积极帮助有困难的人，为人民服务，让世界充满爱。

我希望我的梦想能够很快的实现，这样我们的生活环境就能更加的和谐美好了。

When I was very small, my grandpa liked to tell me his tough year and I liked to listen to him. At that time, wars were everywhere, people ran away for keeping alive. My grandpa was so hungry all the time because he had no food to eat. People had the very hard life before the found of new China. Today, Chinese economy develops so fast, we live the good life, we are no longer struggle for the hunger. Thanks to our great predecessors, they build the road for us. We enjoy the peaceful life and I know it is not easy to achieve. My grandpa educates me not to waste the food and I keep his words in my mind. Peace is the main theme of today’s world, we can chase our dreams and enjoy our life, but we must remember the contribution which is from our predecessors.

在我很小的时候，爷爷很喜欢给我讲他的艰难岁月，我也喜欢听他讲。那个时候，战争无处不在，人们为了活命而逃亡。爷爷总是很饿，因为他没有东西吃。人们在新中国成立前过着艰难的生活。今天，中国的经济发展快速，我们过上了好生活，不再为饥饿挣扎。多亏了我们伟大的先辈们，他们为了开拓了道路。我们享受这和平的生活，我知道这来之不易。爷爷教育我不要浪费食物，我一直记着他的话。和平是世界现在的主题，我们可以追求梦想，快乐生活，但是我们必须记得先辈们的贡献。

[《和平的生活》高中英语作文赏析

一、遣词方面：用词要贴切而丰富，善用短语 ,词汇是语言的建筑材料，文章的好坏，选词很关键，如果用词精湛，就会使文章“亮”起来。

1、措辞要贴切具体

试比较下面句子：

A man is walking down the street.

A man is strolling down the street.

通过比较可以看出，前一句不如后一句表达得具体、生动。一个词如果内涵越具体，那么在特定的场景中恰当地使用它，就会收到意想不到的效果。很多同学写作时常随便用一个很笼统的词来描述一个具体事物或人，如 a nice man给人感觉很笼统空泛，我们可以用很多有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如 generous(大方的，慷慨的)，humorous(幽默的)，smart(漂亮的，潇洒的)，kind-hearted，warm-hearted，hospitable(好客的,招待周到的)，gentle(文雅的)，optimistic(乐观的)，easy-going(随和的)，spirited(英勇的)，cultivated(有教养的)，manly(有男子气概的)，knowledgeable(知识渊博的)等等。

2、要善于运用短语

短语用得好，会给评卷员留下深刻印象。如：

When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything.( 普通)

When he was a child，he had a strong appetite(胃口) for knowledge.(高级)

3、要避免汉语思维

用词要符合英语习惯，避免汉语思维的影响，如某些名词和动词搭配已约定俗成，不能随意打乱其搭配习惯，否则会显得生硬和词不达意。如汉语中的“学到知识”，英语中就不能说“learn knowledge”，而要说acquire knowledge (获得知识) 。类似的动宾结构还有achieve success (获得成功)，gain reputation (获得声誉)，attain ones end (达到目的)等。

二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变，活用复合句

简单句用得太多，会造成文章读起来乏味。在评卷员看来，同样意思的内容，能够运用比较复杂的句式结构来表达，当然会认为其运用语言的能力要比只会用简单句来表达要强，评分自然就高。

1、巧用非谓语动词

运用非谓语动词，可使文句看起来更简洁，使语言更加丰富多彩，重点更加突出，增加文采。如：

I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，but failed. (2004广东卷)

2、巧用with复合结构

“with+名词/代词+现在分词/过去分词/形容词/副词/介词”结构，常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性和情感性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。试比较：

I couldnt go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me. (普通)

I couldnt go on studying with so much noise troubling me. (高级)

3、巧用复合句

高考评分标准强调使用语法结构的数量和复杂性，鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的结构，并且对由此产生的错误采取了宽容的态度。如果恰当运用各类从句，就会使文章出彩。

如：(定语从句) Whats more，people have easy access to the Internet，which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.

4、巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等

使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感受作者的强烈情感。

(倒装句)Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.

(感叹句)I thought，“How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.”

5、巧用排山倒海句

如能运用一个个排比句、对偶句、不定式或短语，可令文章增色不少，会给评卷员眼前一亮的感觉。如：

The purpose of the program are to make our school more beautiful，to make the air cleaner and fresher，and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.

三、谋篇方面：结构要清晰而流畅，巧用过渡词

众所周知，语言的最高层次不是传统语法所说的句子，而是语篇。语篇指的是一系列连接的语段或句子构成的语言整体。一篇好的文章不但句子正确，要点齐全，更重要的是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。因此，恰当使用好连接性的词语和句子，是使作文获得高分的一个重要因素。

下列各组表示列举或补充的短语或句式非常实用，对高考写作很有帮助：

(1)Firstly...，secondly...，thirdly...，finally...

(2)In the first place...，in the second place...，in the third place...，lastly...

(3)to begin with...，then...，furthermore...，finally...

(4)to start with...，next...，in addition...，finally...

(5)first and foremost...，besides...，last but not least...

(6)most important of all...，moreover...，finally...

如果只有两层意思，可选用下列两组中的任一组：

(1)On the one hand...，on the other hand...

(2)For one thing..., and for another thing...技巧，希望对大家有帮助

China has long been known as “the land of ceremony and propriety.” Today however people often complain that public morals are no longer what they used to be. A family for example likes a cell of society which also mirrors the general mood of a country. As we know the Chinese have very strong family ties. But with the emergence of a “modern” concept to families people find that problems like high divorce rate and extramarital affairs become more serious than ever before.

Another example: the name of Lei Feng who was always ready to lend a helping hand to others used to be known by almost all Chinese as a model to learn from. But today some people claim that “the spirit of Lei Feng” is outdated. Fashionable ideas say money talks. In the early stage of the market economic development the appearance of some evil phenomena is not surprising. But we should not sit passively by and let it run rampant. Instead active measures should be taken to improve morals and ethics of the public.

Personally the media should play a leading role in this regard. They should spare no effort to praise the good and criticize the evil. They should guide people how to tell the truth goodness and beauty from the fault ugliness and evil.中国素有“礼仪之邦”的今天，然而，人们经常抱怨公共道德也不再是过去的样子了。一个家庭，例如，喜欢一个社会的细胞，这也反映了一个国家的一般情绪。正如我们所知道的，中国人有很强的家庭关系。但随着家庭的“现代”概念的出现，人们发现问题的高离婚率和婚外情变得比以往更为严重。

另一个例子：雷锋的名字总是愿意伸出援助之手给别人，被称为几乎所有的中国人作为一个模型来学习。但今天，有人声称“雷锋精神”已经过时了。时髦的想法说钱谈判。在市场经济发展的初期，一些恶现象的出现并不令人惊讶。但我们不应该被动地坐着，让它横行。相反，应采取积极的措施来改善公众的道德和道德。

就个人而言，媒体应该在这方面发挥主导作用。他们应该不遗余力地赞美善和批判邪恶。他们应该引导人们如何从错误、丑陋和邪恶中讲真话、善和美。

I have a dream. It is a dream that is deeply rooted in human nature. I dream that one day people of all origins can live in harmony and peace without being discriminated against or persecuted. The bounty of the earth can be shared by every single human being. Mutual respect will guarantee the existence and continuation of the diversity of customs and cultures. Love, sympathy, and cooperation will alleviate the sufferings and disasters inflicted upon our fellow men. Respect for basic human rights will put an end to social injustices and evils. When my dream comes true, all men will be truly equal, happy, and free.

我有一个梦想。它是一个梦想,深深扎根于人类的本性。我梦想有一天各种出身的人都能和谐和平地生活,而不受歧视和迫害。地球的资源可以共享的每一个人。互相尊重将保证习俗和文化的多样性的存在和延续。爱、同情和合作,将减轻施加于我们的同胞的痛苦和灾难。对基本人权的尊重将终结社会不义和弊端。当我的梦想成真,所有的人将会真正的平等,快乐,自由。

仰着头看望高高的穹空，聆听微风拂过发尾的声音，闻着不知名的花的香气，我手捧梦想的花瓣，撒在我成长的道路上。

在很小的时候，每次抬头仰望夜空，总是看见那西方有一颗最亮的星星，我很想当这颗星星，因为它很美，闪亮闪亮的，在它那个地方可以看见整个太空。那时，我的梦想是多么天真呀!怎么才能实现呢?

到了会认字读书的时候，我终于找到了这条路，那就是阅读。

在看书的过程中，我能学到许多知识，还能领悟到一些人生哲理。不知从什么时候开始，每当放学回家，一有时间就想捧一本书，坐在竹椅上，安静的看着。

我从不曾想过，当看见一本写的好的书，一篇写的好的文章时，心灵是那样惊喜，如同遇到了知音，动容了。摩挲着带着浅浅墨香的书纸，我突然很想当一位作家。

我知道，这个梦想是遥远的，但散文家尼采曾经说过“每个人距离自己都是最远的。”而我就在寻觅自己的道路上，不畏惧前方的荆棘。

还记得鲁迅先生从小认真学习，少年时在学堂读书，第一学期成绩优异，学校奖了一枚金质奖章给他。可他却拿到南京一个街头卖掉。拿卖掉的.钱买了几本书，又买了一串红辣椒。当晚上寒冷时，夜读难耐，他便摘下一颗红辣椒放在嘴里嚼，嚼的直辣头冒汗，他用这种方法驱寒坚持读书，终于成为我国著名的文学家，实现了他的人生梦想。

我也正一步一步向我的梦想走去。

当苦难接踵而至时，当命运有乌云时，保尔柯察金告诉我“请你把头抬高，不为困难，向着自己的目标前进。”当我彷徨无助时，茨威格告诉我“坚守住了梦想就坚守住了自我。”三毛也曾说过“一个人至少拥有一个梦想，有一个理由去坚强。心若没有栖息的地方，到哪里都是流浪。”

助我成长的是那些纯真的梦想，我坚信阅读会一直陪伴我到生命尽头，那时的梦想已历经风雨，滋润雨露，沐浴阳光，长成了枝繁叶茂的苍天大树了。即使追梦的过程再苦，是书籍让我始终相信风雨过后便是晴天。

生命不息，追梦的脚步永不止。阅读，让我的灵魂更加丰盈。梦想，见证了我从一个懵懂孩童到青春少年的成长。是阅读点亮了我的梦想，是梦想帮助了我成长。

首先，大家应该拥有自信，自信地微笑着面对这个世界。自信就是相信自己，不要小看自己。自信的关键在于自己。如果你自己总认为自己不行，你是无法得到自信的。“天生我材必有用” 每个人都有自己的特性和长处，而问题的关键在于，你如何找到它、挖掘它。生命本身就是一个自我完善的过程，只要你去努力，去完善，去雕琢，同样会赢得美丽的人生。

其次，大家要学会宽容。宽容，就是我们要容纳这个世界。或许这个世界并不是你所想象的那样，甚至也不是你所看到的那样。之所以有这样那样的无奈，就是现实与理想有差距，我们能做的就只能是改变接受不了的，接受改变不了的。既然你不能改变它，那你就应该容纳到这个社会，热爱一切充满活力的事物，有了爱心，你才会有快乐，才会去宽容。同学们要学会坦然地接受一切，并且更积极的、健康的、自信的面对一切。

然后，大家要学会感恩。同学们已经习惯了拥有，以至于忽略了你们所拥有的。你们要感谢父母，他们给了你的生命，你们的身后永远有亲情注视的目光；你们要感谢好友，因为有了这份情义，原本单调的生命历程会显得丰富多彩；你们要感谢老师，因为他们的引导帮助，你们的未来才会更加美丽；即使有人伤害了你，你也要学会感恩，因为他磨练了你的心志；即使有人欺骗了你，你也要学会感恩，因为他增长了你的见识；即使你不懂感恩，也要学会去感恩。

最后大家要拥有梦想。因为有了梦想，凡事才有可能，因为有了梦想，你才会去坚持，因为有了梦想，你才会去拼搏。一旦有了梦想，一旦确定了人生目标，你就可以在它的指引下，坚持不懈，直到实现梦想。或许你以前是老师眼中的后进生，你是否想过从现在开始，发奋努力，迎头赶上；或许你学习方面真的很有困难，你是否想过只要你尽心尽力，只要你获得进步，你就是成功的。在各个方面，尽情展示自己的特长，令师生们对你刮目相看。因为梦想，所以你与众不同！

梦想在前，自信与宽容相伴，请让你的青春亮一回，火一把，牛一次！