我的梦想英语作文高中生（实用20篇）

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

读书是一件快乐的事情。对于爱读书的人一但读上就让人欲罢不能，无法放弃读书，想让人读到天涯海角。有人说：“人生最深最平和的快乐，就是静观天地与人生，慢慢品味出它的和谐与美。”静下心来，翻开书本，那些沉积的墨香一点点溢满空间，那些尘封的快乐一点点打开。读书真的很快乐!

到了初中，我们有七门功课，然而我最喜欢读的功课是历史和语文：我喜欢读历史是因为我想知道我们中国开国五千年以来的辉煌和耻辱。我要以我们国家的辉煌引以为豪，将我们国家的耻辱铭记在心;读语文是因为我想知道我们中国的文化基础是多么的雄厚，唐诗宋词是多么的让人陶醉，我们中国有多少领先于世界前列的文化。

歌德曾经说过：“读一本好书，就是和一位高尚的人谈话。”是的，读好书，就像结交了良师益友，使我受益匪浅;读好书，就像沐浴在温暖的春风里，使我心旷神怡;读好书，就像找到了快乐之源，使我领悟到快乐的真谛!

有人说过：“人生是没有意义的，但你必须赋予它一个意义。”而我也就一直想着人活着干什么?因此我认真的寻找每一个理由，让生活快乐的理由。因此我找到，是读书，也正是如此，我不再苦恼，不在埋怨。

子曰：“学而时习之，不亦说乎?”古人云：“书中自有颜如玉，书中自有黄金屋。”高尔基说：“书是人类进步的阶梯。”古往今来，不少诗人和学者都陶醉在书中，感受着读书带给他们的欢乐，像蜂蝶飞过草丛，像泉水流经山谷。读书生活恰似一副流光溢彩的画页。书对我来说是极其重要的，因为它可以带给我知识和欢乐。

书，是我进步的阶梯;书，是我打开智慧大门的钥匙;书，是我灵感和创作的源泉;书，是我前进的马达;书，是我生活的方向盘;书，是我生活中不可缺少的一部分。书，就像一台吸尘器，除去了人们灵魂中的污点;书，就像我的知己，伴我们走过生活中的沧桑。我爱书，更爱读书，书是我的快乐之源，将使我一生受用不尽。书，我的快乐之源，将伴我一世，助我实现梦想。

梦想的天空，承载所有的感动，勇敢地飞行，到信仰的顶峰，有过的伤痛，见证生命的历程，用拼搏铸成那心中的英雄”……现在的一切都是为将来的梦想编织翅膀，让梦想在现实中展翅高飞——题记

梦想是一轮红日，照亮你前进的步伐;梦想是一泓清泉，荡涤你心中的尘埃，梦想是一首高歌，唱出你不屈的灵魂;;梦想是一场烈火，燃烧你搏击的信仰。人，要有梦想，才能有前进的动力，如果没有梦想，那么你的人生就没有方向。梦想，是对美好未来的憧憬;梦想，是成功后的满足。一辈子，总要为自己的梦想拼搏一次。把梦想亮出来，不要封存梦想，朝着你喜欢的方向前进，自己选择的路，跪着也要走完。追逐梦想，追寻金色的希望。每一次扬起风帆去远航，难免都会有阻挡，只要有梦想在鼓掌，未来就充满着希望;每一次张开翅膀去飞翔，难免都会受伤，只要有梦想在激励，未来就承载着希望。

梦想的魅力在于即使遇到险运，亦能召唤你鼓起生活的勇气;梦想的伟大在于即使遭遇不幸，亦能促使你保持祟高的心灵，史蒂芬霍金就是一个很好的例子。

他之所以在轮椅上坐了46年，是因为他在21岁时就不幸患上了会使肌肉萎缩的卢伽雷氏症，演讲和问答只能通过语音合成器来完成。英国剑桥大学应用数学及理论物理学系教授，当代最重要的广义相对论和宇宙论家，是本世纪享有国际盛誉的伟人之一，被称为在世的最伟大的科学家，还被称为“宇宙之王”。

霍金在17岁时进入牛津大学学习物理。他不是一个用功的学生，这种态度与当时其他同学是一致的，他们对一切厌倦，觉得没有任何值得努力追求的东西。霍金在学校里与同学们一同游荡、喝酒、参加赛船俱乐部，如果事情这样发展下去，那么他很可能成为一个庸庸碌碌的职员或教师到牛津的第三年，霍金注意到自己变得更笨拙了，有一两回没有任何原因地跌倒。一次，他不知何故从楼梯上突然跌下来，当即昏迷，差一点死去。直到1962年霍金在剑桥读研究生后，他的母亲才注意到儿子的异常状况。刚过完21岁生日的霍金在医院里住了两个星期，经过各种各样的检查，他被确诊患上了“卢伽雷氏症”，即运动神经细胞萎缩症。大夫对他说，他的身体会越来越不听使唤，只有心脏、肺和大脑还能运转，到最后，心和肺也会失效。霍金被“宣判”只剩两年的生命。那是在1963年。起初，这种病恶化得相当迅速。这对霍金的打击是可想而知的，他几乎放弃了一切学习和研究，因为他认为自己不可能活到完成硕士论文的那一天。霍金的病情渐渐加重。1970年，在学术上声誉日隆的霍金已无法自己走动，他开始使用轮椅。直到今天，他再也没离开它。永远坐进轮椅的霍金，开始了极其顽强地工作和生活着。虽然身体的残疾日益严重，霍金却力图像普通人一样生活，完成自己所能做的任何事情。他甚至是活泼好动的——这听来有点好笑，在他已经完全无法移动之后，他仍然坚持用惟一可以活动的手指驱动着轮椅在前往办公室的路上“横冲直撞”;

我的手指还能活动，我的大脑还能思维;我有终身追求的理想，我有爱和爱我的亲人朋友;对了，我还有一颗感恩的心……霍金不仅以他的成就征服了科学界，也以他顽强搏斗的精神征服了世界。梦想照亮人生，追求改变了他的命运。

没有人能打倒你心的追求，如果一个人如果已经把自己拘禁在拼搏的傲慢中，你怎么能期望他还有梦?西楚霸王项羽就是一个很好的例子。

“羽之神勇，千古无二”他在辉煌时横刀立马指点天下，给予大秦最沉重一击，使强悍的大秦再无能力开动其战争机器，无疑的天才之作——巨鹿之战。失措时确如墙角的梅花般落寞，“力拔山兮气盖世，时不利兮骓不逝。骓不逝兮可奈何，虞兮虞兮奈若何!”他是历史浮沉中的一把倚天巨剑，却经历了命运无情的捶打，为什么会有这么大的反差?是因为他的居功自傲，使得部下军心离散，背弃国家临阵倒戈，他那拘泥的思想，在鸿门宴中给了刘邦机会，傲慢使他的思想不能转换，逐渐封杀了他的追求，将他的梦想击碎，在四面楚歌之中，万夫莫敌之勇的他被逼到了乌江边，结束了自己本该万丈光芒的一生。

青春，不应该服输!我们的梦想不应该停止!一粒普通的沙，都想成为美丽耀眼的珍珠，我们又怎能不想成为一个有所成就的人?青春的感觉，就像是坐在山谷中，小溪边上的石阶上，风吹拂着脸，柳絮，花瓣飘落一地，仿佛身处仙境。那么自由，那么轻快，那么美好。青春的岁月，如同天边划过的流星，眩目耀眼，尽管只是短暂的一瞬，但仍然那么明亮，那么灿烂。

踏进校门的那一步我彻底失望了，放眼望去，像刚从废墟的战场中得到轮回。只有矗立拔起的教学楼引人入目外，其余的一片狼籍!霜风呼啸吹过记忆的的边缘只留下空气中那渐渐散去的再也找不回的馨香。

忧伤地伫立校园的某个角落，失败的疼痛充斥了我的全身。不知这是我第几次的考试失败，又将是我第几次的努力的开始。“失败乃成功之母”?我不免对这真理产生极大的怀疑——失败了那么多次，然而依然没有成功。毕竟梦想不是嘴上说说就可以的，它需要付出太多的汗水、毅力和信念……但是，向着自己的梦想前进，这又算什么呢?这一天终将降临眼前。那时，由我们建筑的宫殿，高处传来圣洁的钟声。悬在我们头顶的黑云被撕成碎片，珍珠和钻石为我们向大地撒遍。”也许成功的终点最终还是看不见，但我也不让泪水和懦弱浸湿今天，带着阳光一样的微笑，扇动梦想的翅膀，去追逐那个“伟大”的梦想

青春的我们，仿佛洁白的栀子花，蕴涵着一种纯净，但又拥有持久的香味，内敛中带着一丝张扬。她没有玫瑰的妩媚，没有牡丹的现实，没有菊花的忧愁，就是简简单单，那么纯净，那么神圣。在这段青春岁月中，我们丢失了一些东西。我们用学习代替了自由，用更多的时间去奋斗，去打拼。尽管偶尔会迷失方向，但梦想总是像大海中的引航灯一样，指引着我们往前走，因为暴风雨已经过去，还有更多新的挑战等待着我们，纵然我不能一步登天，但我愿意像蜗牛一样“一步一步往上爬。

追逐梦想，寻觅梦想的清香。记得有人说过这样一句话：梦想的代名词是跌倒、挫折、希望与成功。而在追逐梦想的过程中，恰恰也需要这种动力。不要彷徨了，不要悲伤了，坚定的信念会射穿梦想，照耀到人们的心田。它会让人们感到梦想的清香无时不在;它会让人们感到幸福与温暖无时不有;它会让人们感到只有付出才有收获;它更会让人们感到希望的种子不会自然去成长，只有用人们的双手去栽培它，它才会生根、发芽、开花、结果。

透过雨，了望天，迎着风，还要走，不放弃，才能够，有成功。这一生，这一次，为自己，抬起头，至少要，骄傲的，盛开过。

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. I was appreciating the beautiful lake when a scene that didn’t go with its harmony came into my eyes. A couple were cheering loudly on a boat, letting out the noise disturbing all the visitors around. They even threw litter and spat into the water, completely ignoring the sign nearby “No throwing litter into the lake!”

How could they lack public morality so much? I felt sad about them. And I was totally against what they did.

Every individual should think about others’ feelings and avoid polluting the environment while they are enjoying the beautiful scenery; otherwise the Fairy Lake Park would not be fairy at all and lake might be a pool of dirty dead water some day. Therefore we should mind our behavior in public places so that the environment in public places will be more and more beautiful.

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上周日，我去和我的朋友在仙女湖公园观光。我很欣赏美丽的湖时，一个场景，不去与和谐进入我的眼睛。一对夫妇被大声欢呼，船上的噪声干扰，让所有参观者。他们甚至扔垃圾，吐入水，完全无视标志附近的“不乱扔垃圾入湖!“

他们怎么可能缺乏公德这么多?我感到悲伤，他们。我是完全反对他们做了什么。

每一个人都应该考虑别人的感受，避免污染环境而他们享受美丽的风景;否则，仙女湖公园不会仙女在所有和湖是一池的水脏死了有一天。因此我们应该注意我们在公共场所的行为，在公共场所的环境会越来越漂亮。

Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask

myself. In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that having a

dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the things to achieve

the target. As long as we have a goal to be realized, we won’t be blind at

least.

My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and

saving their lives. Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will

do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy. Thats my dream. I want to try my

best to help the poor sick people of our country. I want to let them have an

opportunity to receive excellent treatments for their illnesses without having

to pay much or just enjoy them free. China is a developing country which needs

good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant

villages.

Now I’m a junior student on Grade One, all my classmates and I are working

hard. We all know that the entrance exam of high schools coming in the year of

2009 is a big challenge for us, so we must study harder and harder in order to

go to a good high school. Thus after we finish our senior high school, we are

able to go to a good university. Finally, we can find a good job in society.

My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try

my best to be the study winner. Now everything I do is close to my dream. I feel

life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize

my dream.

I know that fantasy is something hard to realize, but dream can. I’ll work

hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.

Zeng Qiao is one of my friends. She is a beautiful, outgoing and good-tempered girl. She smiles frequently. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same dormitory, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. At first, I don’t like her very much, because she is always talking. It seems that she can’t stop open her mouth. I am a little bit quiet and introverted, so I seldom talk to others. But gradually, I find that she can have influence on others by what she says. Zeng Qiao likes sharing interesting things with others. For example, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood or her former classmates. She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend.

生活如此平凡，如此现实，但是却有着不少无私的人乐意为爱奉献，他们仿若纯洁大爱的天使，守护和眷顾着那一片贫瘠的土地，那一群需要给予帮助的人儿。

这世间，爱无处不在，只是爱都存在于默默无闻的付出中，需要人们把爱传递，把爱洒向整个神州大地。大爱令我动容，但是作为一名高三学子的我，坚毅的刘伟更是令我铭记于心。

刘伟成长历程中的艰辛是我们这些健康而幸福的孩子无法体会到的。身残但志坚，小小的年岁便开始向命运挑战，誓不服输。当命运的绳索无情地缚住双臂，不怕!他还有一双脚。他历尽千辛万苦，只求参加残奥会的游泳项目，但是最后关头，命运又给他设了一条通往死亡的道路。这是天意弄人吗?为儿子奔波操劳的母亲也被打击得痛不欲生。然而刘伟没有因一次次打击而变得颓废、堕落。相反，他一直靠着他的双脚在人生的道路上奔跑。

一句“要么死，要么精彩地活着”在他口中淡定地道出。当中的执着、洒脱和坚定，在我心中激起片片浪花，我的心，我的理想仿佛又澎湃起来。他用激情燃烧岁月，用心灵演奏音乐，用脚下无限的风光去追逐他心中执着的梦想。他的人生不存在着退路，因此他能轻巧地触着琴键，踏着一段段轻盈的旋律，飞向远方。

刘伟的故事是现代最好的励志故事。一个不平凡的青年的成长历程和成功历程，让我收获甚多!在这世间上，没有办不到的事，奇迹也不会只是个传说，只要你敢去想，你会奋力去做。如今高考已是迫在眉睫，后头是我们踏下的坚实脚印，而前方是一章需要我们续写的乐章。光阴踏出坚实的足迹，年华划出美丽的未来。只要播撒过汗水，必定会收获金色的梦想!在那火红的六月，艳阳因我而灿烂，高考必定胜利!

Friend plays important role in our lives. Everyone needs his or her own

friends. Some people make friends easily but some do not. And “friend” means

differently to people. Some people think friends should stay together all the

time, but some others think that share and support is the real meaning of

friend. From my point of view, friend is the person who will always be with you

no matter what happens. It’s the person who can share your happiness as well as

sorrows.

Everyone has dreams. Some want to be doctors. Some want to be scientists. Some want to be engineers. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. Because I’m good at talking to people. And I like the job. I would be nice to all my students. I would encourage them to be creative. I wouldn’t give them too much homework on weekends.Maybe I will be a manager. I would run a business and lead a team. I would work hard and make the company bigger and stronger. My teacher often says to us . “No matter what you will be ,you must work hard today”. The main thing is to know yourself and to choose the right path for you. Rich or poor, it doesn’t matter. Our biggest goal is to be happy. I think if we work hard ,our dreans will come true. We will have a good future.

After seeing so many movies about the youth, we are starting to wonder about what do we have in our youth, the fight, the drink or the love?

My answer is no.

What we see from the movie is not true, the plots are exaggerated and misunderstood.

For students, their youth is the process of fighting. They have studied so hard to realize their dreams.

When they are in primary school, they want to do well and make their parents be proud of them.

When they are in middle school and high school, they need to take part in the exams so as to enter the better future schools.

Even they are in college, they still need to study and fight for the ideal job. There is no doubt that most people keep fighting for their future and this is the memory of youth.

看了很多关于青春的电影之后,我们开始思考我们的青春有什么,打架,喝酒或谈恋爱?我的答案是否定的。

我们从电影看到的是不正确的,故事情节被夸大了,也被误解了。对于学生,他们的青春是战斗的过程。他们努力学习来实现梦想。

在上小学的时候,他们想要做的很好,让父母为他们感到骄傲。当他们在初中和高中的时候,需要参加考试,以便将来进入更好的学校。甚至在大学,他们仍然需要学习和争取理想的工作。毫无疑问,大多数人一直在为自己的未来奋斗,这是青春的记忆。

[高中英语作文：青春的记忆

I have aDream. Compared toMartin Luther King’s, my dream is very small. I want to be a teacher in the future. And then I can have a two long vacations for traveling. I can travel around the world. I can go America, Canada, New York, New Zealand, Hong Kong, Beijing, Shanghai and so on. It’s perfect. Yes, going travel around the world is my dream. Even I want to go to the moon for travel.

我有一个梦想。相对于马丁路德金的梦想，我的梦想实在是太小了。我将来想成为一名老师。之后我就可以有两个很长的假期去旅行。我可以环游世界。我可以去美国，加拿大，纽约，新西兰，香港，北京，上海等。真是太完美了。是的，环游世界就是我的梦想。我甚至还想去月球旅行呢。

What is art? When people think about this question, they will naturally

think about all kinds of musical instruments or the great paintings in the art

museums. Art seems to so far away from the ordinary people, but I don’t think

so. Art is everywhere. For example, the delicious food that is made by our

parents is the great art, and the value of the food is to bring people the great

joy when they have a taste of it. The scenery around us is the visible art, when

we appreciate it, our mood become eased. Art is something that brings people the

positive value for me, so art is around everybody. If we take time to slow down

our pace, then we can enjoy art from life and feel the comfortable

lifestyle.

一、遣词方面：用词要贴切而丰富，善用短语 ,词汇是语言的建筑材料，文章的好坏，选词很关键，如果用词精湛，就会使文章“亮”起来。

1、措辞要贴切具体

试比较下面句子：

A man is walking down the street.

A man is strolling down the street.

通过比较可以看出，前一句不如后一句表达得具体、生动。一个词如果内涵越具体，那么在特定的场景中恰当地使用它，就会收到意想不到的效果。很多同学写作时常随便用一个很笼统的词来描述一个具体事物或人，如 a nice man给人感觉很笼统空泛，我们可以用很多有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如 generous(大方的，慷慨的)，humorous(幽默的)，smart(漂亮的，潇洒的)，kind-hearted，warm-hearted，hospitable(好客的,招待周到的)，gentle(文雅的)，optimistic(乐观的)，easy-going(随和的)，spirited(英勇的)，cultivated(有教养的)，manly(有男子气概的)，knowledgeable(知识渊博的)等等。

2、要善于运用短语

短语用得好，会给评卷员留下深刻印象。如：

When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything.( 普通)

When he was a child，he had a strong appetite(胃口) for knowledge.(高级)

3、要避免汉语思维

用词要符合英语习惯，避免汉语思维的影响，如某些名词和动词搭配已约定俗成，不能随意打乱其搭配习惯，否则会显得生硬和词不达意。如汉语中的“学到知识”，英语中就不能说“learn knowledge”，而要说acquire knowledge (获得知识) 。类似的动宾结构还有achieve success (获得成功)，gain reputation (获得声誉)，attain ones end (达到目的)等。

二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变，活用复合句

简单句用得太多，会造成文章读起来乏味。在评卷员看来，同样意思的内容，能够运用比较复杂的句式结构来表达，当然会认为其运用语言的能力要比只会用简单句来表达要强，评分自然就高。

1、巧用非谓语动词

运用非谓语动词，可使文句看起来更简洁，使语言更加丰富多彩，重点更加突出，增加文采。如：

I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，but failed. (2004广东卷)

2、巧用with复合结构

“with+名词/代词+现在分词/过去分词/形容词/副词/介词”结构，常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性和情感性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。试比较：

I couldnt go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me. (普通)

I couldnt go on studying with so much noise troubling me. (高级)

3、巧用复合句

高考评分标准强调使用语法结构的数量和复杂性，鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的结构，并且对由此产生的错误采取了宽容的态度。如果恰当运用各类从句，就会使文章出彩。

如：(定语从句) Whats more，people have easy access to the Internet，which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.

4、巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等

使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感受作者的强烈情感。

(倒装句)Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.

(感叹句)I thought，“How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.”

5、巧用排山倒海句

如能运用一个个排比句、对偶句、不定式或短语，可令文章增色不少，会给评卷员眼前一亮的感觉。如：

The purpose of the program are to make our school more beautiful，to make the air cleaner and fresher，and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.

三、谋篇方面：结构要清晰而流畅，巧用过渡词

众所周知，语言的最高层次不是传统语法所说的句子，而是语篇。语篇指的是一系列连接的语段或句子构成的语言整体。一篇好的文章不但句子正确，要点齐全，更重要的是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。因此，恰当使用好连接性的词语和句子，是使作文获得高分的一个重要因素。

下列各组表示列举或补充的短语或句式非常实用，对高考写作很有帮助：

(1)Firstly...，secondly...，thirdly...，finally...

(2)In the first place...，in the second place...，in the third place...，lastly...

(3)to begin with...，then...，furthermore...，finally...

(4)to start with...，next...，in addition...，finally...

(5)first and foremost...，besides...，last but not least...

(6)most important of all...，moreover...，finally...

如果只有两层意思，可选用下列两组中的任一组：

(1)On the one hand...，on the other hand...

(2)For one thing..., and for another thing...技巧，希望对大家有帮助

Is who Im grateful for my parents. I dont know what words to describe them. I only know that they since the childhood is the most hurt me. On that occasion, I do not know is I do wrong, or if they do wrong. I dont know how they love me, and I know, how they education I.

Since the childhood, my father often said to me: "good good study, you will have a way out, dad believe you." I dont know how to answer. Only she complains and chagrin. Now, I grow up, is no longer that easily to "swept" my dad; Is no longer the only a day I will cry; No longer is that the I couldnt climb up. Experienced a lot of things, I understand a lot.

Do you understand the heart? I dont know my heart is warm is cold. Because, I too cold to parents, and they are still to me every possible way to caress. Maybe every parents to their children! Sometimes you will because and their contradiction and conflict, sometimes you will because of his capricious caused you and their relationship broke down and sometimes, you will be an exam because they blame you angry.

Now, lets cherish every second, learn to be grateful, starts from oneself.

我要感恩的是我的父母。我不知道用哪个词来形容他们。我只知道，他们从小是最疼我的。那一次，不知是我做错了，还是他们做错了。我并不懂他们是怎样爱我的，而我，知道，他们是怎样教育我的。

从小，爸爸就常常对我说：“好好学习，你会有出路的，爸爸相信你。”我不知道该怎样回答。只是一句句的埋怨与懊恼。现在，我长大了，再也不是那个动不动就对爸爸进行“批斗会”的我;再也不是那个每天只会哭鼻子的我;再也不是那个跌打了爬不起来的我。经历过很多事，我懂得了很多。

你懂人心吗?我不知道我的心是暖的是冷的。因为，我对父母太冷，而他们对我依旧是百般呵护。也许每个父母都会这样对他们的子女吧!有时候，你会因为和他们的一次矛盾而起冲突，有时候，你会因为自己的任性而导致你和他们的关系破裂，有时候，你会因为他们埋怨你的一次考试而愤怒。

让我们珍惜现在的每一秒，学会感恩，从自身做起。

我的梦想（宇航员） My Dream(astronaut)

I have many dreams， such as I am rich in the future。 Therefore， I can buy all what I want。 But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut。 Our country develops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades。 It has great achievements。 All of our country are proud of it。 Therefore， I want to be one of this amazing area。 In order to make my dream e true， I must work hard now。 So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge。 I hope my dream can e true one day。

我有很多梦想，比如我期望将来变得富有，这样我就能够买我想买的一切。但是我最大的梦想是成为一名宇航员。我们国家发展得很快，而且在过去几十年中太空取得了巨大进步，有很多大成就，所有人都为之骄傲。因此，我想成为这一神奇领域中的一员。为了使我的梦想成真，我务必从此刻开始努力。这样我就能够去一所好的大学学习更多的知识了。我期望有一天能够梦想成真。

[关于我的梦想英语的作文

If a person did not have a good dream, like a bird cannot enjoy flying in the blue sky; If a person did not have a good dream, just like the fish cant free to swim in the water, and what is my dream?

When I see those ill endure the painful, very heartache! I want to be a doctor, relieve the pain for them, and healed them body, so that they can healthily, and people to live happily together.

I admire the teacher this profession, because the teacher like a candle, burns himself, lights others and consumes itself. If I become a teacher, I would cultivate a batch excellent talents for our country.

If I become a scientist, I would develop a drug for the treatment of cancer. People often say that "is a medicine three minutes poison". I developed this kind of medicine, not only no toxicity, and no side effects.

If I become a painter, Ill keep each country places of historic interest and scenic spots have picture in my album. I will draw a dove a wake-up call for war, let tomorrows world be full of sunshine, flowers, and true love for humanity.

I will study hard, grasp the more scientific and cultural knowledge, let the dream become a reality!

如果一个人没有好的梦想，就像鸟儿不能尽情在蓝天翱翔;如果一个人没有好的梦想，就像鱼儿不能尽情地在水中遨游，而我的梦想是什么呢?

当我看到那些患病的人在忍受着痛苦地煎熬，非常心痛!我想当一名医生，为他们减轻痛苦，医好他们的身体，使他们能健康地、快乐地和亲人们生活在一起。

我很羡慕老师这个职业，因为老师就像蜡烛一样，燃烧了自己，照亮了别人。如果我成为一名老师，我会为祖国培养出一批批优秀的人才。

如果我成为一名科学家，我会研制出一种治疗癌症晚期的药。人们常说“是药三分毒”。我研制的这种药，不但没有毒性，而且没有副作用。

如果我成为是一名画家，我会把各国的名胜古迹和各国的旅游景点都画入我的画册。我将画出和平鸽为战争敲响警钟，让明天的世界真正成为充满阳光、鲜花和爱的人类家园。

我要努力学习，掌握更多的科学文化知识，让梦想成为现实!

Since we go to school, the teachers educate us to be a better person, they

tell us that we must study hard, so that we can be the useful person. Many

students confuse about what is the useful person. In my opinion, the useful

person must have the good merit.

A person with the kind heart is favored by everyone and he has the sense to

serve others. The bad person will bring danger to others, even to the society.

The most important thing of the useful person is to make a contribution to the

society.

They will make full use of their knowledge and be proud of serving for the

society. Our premier Zhou stated his purpose of learning knowledge was to make

our country rise. He did it and he became the great person. Becoming the useful

person is not easy, we should fight for it.

对于梦想和现实，第一,我们需要面对现实,虽然不理想,但是我们是生活在世界上,需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二,为了实现我们的梦想,我们需要根据现实调整梦想。下面是小编收集整理的相关资料，希望对您有所帮助。

Dreams and Reality

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

梦想与现实

当我们谈到梦想的时候,会感到很兴奋,我们有很多理想,比如成为一个出名的人,环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的,拥有梦想,我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实,我们不得不每天面对现实,现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一,我们需要面对现实,虽然不理想,但是我们是生活在世界上,需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二,为了实现我们的梦想,我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

友谊是一条善良的河流,澄清着沿路的风尘;是上天在人的心灵中植下的一方净土,培育着诚实善良的花朵。下面是小编整理的关于友谊的英语作文，希望对大家有帮助。 关于友谊的英语作文一：

Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble, we

need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.

Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. It implies loyalty, cordiality, sympathy, affection,and readiness to help. No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.

Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings. We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them. In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life. 关于友谊的英语作文二：

making friends is a skill like many other skills. it improves with practice. if you want to meet people and make friends, you must be willing to take some actions. you must first go where there are people. you won’t make friends staying home alone. join a club or a group. taking with those who like the same things as you do is much easier. or join someone in some activities. many people are nervous when talking to new people. after all meeting strangers means facing the unknown. and it’s human nature to feel a bit uncomfortable about the unknown. most of our fears about dealing with new people come from doubts about ourselves. we imagine other people are judging us of finding us too tall or to short, too this or too that. but don’t forget that they must be feeling the same way. try to accept yourself as you are and try to put the other person at ease. you’ll both feel more comfortable.

try to be self-comfident even if you don’t feel that way. when you enter a room full of strangers, such as a new classroom, walk tall and straight, look directly at other people and smile.

if you see someone you like to speak to, say something . don’t wait for the other person to start a conversation.

just meeting someone new does not mean that you will make friends with that person-friendship is based on mutual liking and “give and take”. it takes time and effort to develop. 关于友谊的英语作文三：

Friendship Friends play an important part in our lives,and although we may take friendship for granted,we often dont clearly understand how we make friends.While we get on well with a number of people,we are usually friends with only a very few----for example,the average among students is about 6 per person.In all the cases of friendly relationships,two people like one another and enjoy being together.but beyond that,the degree of intimacy between them and the reasons for the shared interests vary enormously.As we get to know people we take into account things like age,race ,economic conditions,social position,and intelligence.Although these factors are not of prime importance,it is more difficult to get on with people when there is a marked difference in age and background.

Some friendly relationships can be kept on argument and discussion,but it is usual for close friends to have similar ideas and beliefs,to have attitudes and interests in commen ---they often talk about being on the same wavelength .it generally takes time to reach this point.And the more intimately involved people become,the more they rely on one another .people want to do friends favours and hate to break a promise.Equally,friends have to learn to put up with annoying habits and try to tolerate differencesof opinion.wWw.xiNgkoo.coMIn contrast with marriage ,there are no friendship ceremonies to strengthen the association between two persons.But the supporting and understanding of each other that results from shared experiences and emotions does seem to a powerful bond ,which can overcome differences in background ,and break down barriers of age, class or race. 关于友谊的英语作文四：

Friendship is priceless, is not buy friendship, and when you give up your friendship who, you need his help, he can not help you, even if you can not buy with thousands of gold back.

I am a heavy feeling of people, sense of obligation, so there are a lot of friends, such as: "Tang Tao, Zhou Jie, Liu Longyu, Liu Fan, off field ... ... my good friend, are infinite in number, no one told me they After a wonderful childhood, with these friends, my childhood full of joy.

They gave me numerous times to help, Don Tao is my first grade friends, our class took part in the running, everyone knows me and the strength of the Tang Tao comparable to the running of the day, I was flabbergasted, my running time, slipped and fell a somersault, then, Tang Tao, Stop right now, pick me, help me to pat the dust off, suddenly, I felt a burst of warm heart, the somersault to get my speed was much slower , Tao Tang met with me crossing the finish line is busy pulling up and give me the second I knew that he was very second.

Zhou Jie is my understanding in the second grade, he often helped me record straight. D O I did not play and when to give me happiness. Liu Longyu fifth grade I knew, he was my classmate, math problems often tell me, tell me a joke, was my best playmate ... ...

Liu Fan, off field in the sixth grade, I know, and we you, for me, be sworn, and I have a difficult time, they are always the first to help me. Friendship is priceless, with friends, you will be better tomorrow.

[关于友谊的高中英语作文

my daddy was not happy because he thought it was not good for my study.Sometimes I felt I was not a free boy when my daddy was so strict with me,so I tried to talk to my daddy,and he said he was happy because I talked to him,and now he let me play games if I study well.From this,I understand a friendly talk can help people get along well.

Many people regard money as the most important thing in their life, but I dont agree with them. There are so many things that money cant buy. The first, money cant buy us knowledge, abilities and experience. The second, money cant buy us a happy mood and a good health.

However, money plays a significant role in our daily life. We cant live without it, because we have to use money to buy our daily necessities, like food, drinks, clothes, books, and so on. And we also need money to pay for our houses and education.

All in all, we should have a correct concept of money. We cant live for money, but take it as a tool leading a better life.