诶一篇关于五一的英语作文小学（热门20篇）

Hi, my name is Susannah Huang. My life is wonderful.

From Monday to Friday, I usually get up at 6.30. I brush my teeth and wash my face at 6.35.And then I have breakfast. For breakfast, I have bread and milk. At 7.00 I go to school. I always get to by bus. I have cLasses from 8.00am to 5.30pm. On Saturday and Sunday, I usually get up at 9.00.

On weekdays, I have many cLasses, Chinese、maths、English and other subjects. My favourite subject is English.

I like my life and my study very much.

Betty is a lazy girl. She doesnt study hard, and she doesnt help her mother with the housework, either. "What are you going to be when you grow up, Betty?" Mother asks. "Youre too lazy. No job will ever fit you."

"But I know one," says the girl, "Im going to be Father Christmas," "You want to be Father Christmas?" Mother is surprised, "But why?" "Because he works only one day in a whole year."

Here is a small zoo. I like the tiger，although they are very ugly，but very imposing. Also has the national treasure panda，they are a little shy，does not dare to look at us. Who are those? they are elephants，you look at they to be huge，also has a point to be interesting. I do not like the lion，they compare the tiger clown，is also unimposing.

This is the small zoo.

3.Recently, three owls appeared suddenly on our campus. They made me think of my pet from childhood. When I was little, we had an owl at home. It was small, gray, and had two big eyes. We liked it very much. Every time I went home, it greeted me by making “goo-goo” sounds. We always played with it and talked to it. It would blink its eyes just like it understood what we were saying. It was like my best friend. But when the weather became colder, we forgot to keep it warm, and it died. It made us sad for a long time, and it also taught me how important it is to take care of animals.

My hobbies

Different people have different hobbies， I often cycling to play with my classmates. It is especially good for health. It is good exercise.and its one of my hobbies,I enjoy reading very much.For reading books,I can get lots of knowledge from reading,and get a sense of the outside world,its wonderful.我的爱好

不同的人有不同的爱好。我经常骑自行车玩和同学一起玩。它特别对健康有好处。这是很好的锻炼。除此之外读书是我的另一个嗜好，我很喜欢读书。至于读书，我可以从中学到很多知识，并且对外面的世界有了了解，那真是太美好了。

First, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class.

Second, I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful. We also have lots of after-school activies.

Third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. So I like my school life very much.

我的学校生活是忙碌的，神奇的。首先，我们有四节课在上午和下午三。我们到学校7:30之前因为我们早上有课。其次，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为老师和我的同学都很友好，乐于助人。我们也有很多的课外活动。第三、我们的学校环境很漂亮，老师们都能使自己的课有趣又有启发性。所以我非常喜欢我的学校生活。

The so-called food safety, is the food does not contain any harmful substances to human body. If food spoilage or containing toxic substances, will bring harm to our body and even life-threatening. Food safety is about peoples life and health. Inferior food greatly endanger peoples health, light diarrhea diarrhea, or poisoning coma, moreover may cause death. Indeed, food safety is directly related with the health and quality of life of the masses. Schools around there are many small shops, the inviting "gourmet" from the fragrance, the classmates to withstand the snack temptation, you, me one yuan to buy a lot of snacks, the results some buy snacks classmates because bought not health food and have loose bowels.

Remember once I saw a news on TV: a famous yogurt brand for some reason, the expired yogurt repackage again, also good food quality supervision administration found in time, otherwise the consequence is unimaginable. Look at these factories, how hard, in order to market competition, regardless of the health of consumers.

The above examples are enough to prove that the importance of food safety, food unsafe events caused great influence to peoples life, food regulators have also been attaches great importance to this problem. Believe that relevant departments can seriously, strict management, give you a rest assured food environment. We, as a primary school student, as a member of a society, we should also be constantly improve the self-protection ability and the ego to protect consciousness, render and do our work with regulators.

所谓食品安全，就是食品里不含任何对人体有害物质。如果食品变质或者含有毒物质，就会给我们身体带来危害甚至危及生命。食品安全关乎人的生命健康。劣质食品极大得危害了人的健康，轻则拉肚子腹泻，重则中毒昏迷，更有甚者可能会引起死亡。的确，食品安全直接关系着群众的身体健康和生活质量。学校周边有许多小店，那诱人的“美食“发出阵阵香味，同学们抵挡不住零食的诱惑，你五角，我一元地买了许多零食，结果有些买零食的同学都因为买了不卫生的食品而拉肚子。

记得有一次我在电视里看到了一个新闻:某一知名酸奶品牌因为某种原因，把过期的酸奶重新包装了一遍，还好食品质量监督管理局及时发现，不然后果不堪设想。看看这些厂家，多么毒辣，为了市场上的竞争，竟不顾消费者的健康。

以上事例都足以证明食品安全的重要性，食品不安全的事件给人们的生活造成了很大的影响，食品监管部门也一直很重视这个问题。相信有关部门能够严肃处理，严格管理，给大家一个放心的食品食用环境。而我们作为一名小学生，作为社会的一份子，我们也应该要不断提高自我保护能力和自我保护意识，以及尽自己的绵薄之力配合监管部门工作。

A dog has a large piece of meat in his mouth. Near the water he looks down and sees himself in the water. He thinks it is another dog. That dog has also a large piece of meat in his mouth. He says to himself, "I want to get his meat. Then I can have two pieces." He opens his mouth to bark and his meat goes down into the water.

[小学四年级英语作文A Piece of meat

In the past, people tend to keep on the rail. No matter who doesn’t follow

the rules, he would be criticized by the public opinion. Nowadays, with the

rapid development of our society, more and more people recognize the importance

of creation. The development of our country, our society even ourselves need

creation.

First of all, creation is the most important factor to improve the ability

of our country. Some people think that the essence of the human civilization is

the result of creation. It is certain that in order to stand a good place in the

international circle, our country has to train the creative people, so that they

can make great breakthrough for our mother. However, if our people lack of

creation, we couldn’t realize our dream to become a great country in the world.

In addition, if people in the society are of innovation, it is easy to deliver

the talents to our country to win a better future. And with creative people, the

society can get a lot of benefit. For ourselves, creation also very important.

The obvious point is to improve people’s confidence. When people make some small

breaktrough, the y will get praise from others, which will make them feel

themseves smart and then become confidence.

All in all, as all of us know that how much importance creation for us. We

have to learn as much as possible knowledge to prepare ourselves to be creative

people. In other words, we have to study well to serve our county.

Dear Sales Manager,

I, the undersigned, am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. I ordered a book which is entitled Practical Writing and Reading for NETEM by Wang Li on December 20th, 2004.

However after reading the book on January 10th, 2005, I found that it is a pirated one so that I write to you for complaint.

The book has brought me some negative effects. To begin with, much of my valuable time and energy have been wasted in reading the book since it is quite hard to identify many words in the book. What’s more, I have not benefited from reading the book since some of keys to the exercises are misprinted.

I would like to be informed whether you can refund me the money or change another book for me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely Yours

I had a great time throughout my may day holiday.

On monday, i went bbq with my classmates who threw a celebration party at our middle school principles flat. our parents were invited to the party. everybody was excited about the holiday. i ate a lot of delicious food at that time.

On tuesday, i went visiting my uncles family with my parents. we went to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in shanghai. later that day, we sang karaoke in my uncles house. we stayed for the night.

On wednesday, i went shopping with my cousins. we bought some brand name t-shirts and pants. in the afternoon, my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway. they also taught me how to drive their fancy car, so i tried to do some turning and parking. it was not easy first. but i learnt quick.

on thursday, we returned home with many gifts from our trip. i tried to get some rest. at night, i chatted with my classmates on the phone, and i watched cctv before going to bed.

From friday on, i started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. some of my assignments were quite boring. after i finished the homework, i emailed them to my teachers. that was the end of it. i started to prepare things for school on this coming monday.

According to a recent article on Newsweek concerning children’s’ education,

there is an increasing number of parents worrying their kids to an extreme

extent, depriving them of independence and freedom by keeping them around

parents all the time.

Some people applaud this phenomenon, suggesting that kids’ safety is the

most important. Thus, they’d better not enter the hazardous society without

supervision unless they become adults. From my point of view, some of their

opinion is correct but keeping children away from independence is a completely

erroneous decision. The reasons are as follows:

First and foremost, “locking kids” may hinder their healthy growth, both

mentally and physically. The kids who are locked may have heavy reliance on

their parents, as their comprehensive skills such as communication skills or

cooperative spirit being prevented from developing.

Secondly, what these parents fail to see is the fact that the crime rate

and accidents aren’t on a rapid rise. It is the abuse of mass media that make

crimes and violence more scary. The parents, who love their kids so much, are

completely forced to live under the illusion that our society is full of riots

or threats of accidents. Thus, kids can be allowed to have more freedom such as

walking to school by himself, for instance.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that

kids should be given more freedom by parents’ effort. At the same time, parents

should take many factors into consideration such as the time restriction for

children and the evaluation to kids’ maturity and capability. Only then can they

enjoy a safe and meaningful childhood.

导语：你知道五一劳动节怎么过才有意义呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的有关劳动节的作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Suddenly, "51" Labor Day has arrived, I began to think how to spend this Labor Day, finally, I would like a good idea, and that is cleaning.

Today at noon, he began cleaning.

I picked up a dry rag to wipe the TV, because my mother told me that if you do not dry rag to wipe the TV, then it is easy to bad television. There are switches, computers and other electric stuff ...... must wipe with a dry cloth.

I would also like to rub some furniture and glass, even the doors are not spared. I carefully, conscientiously the house from start to finish, from top to bottom with a rag, mop, dragged again, the rag caked with dust. Oh, my tired, I was sweating profusely, out of breath. But I thought: "I am to give my mother a surprise, say, clean-up has always been to hard Yeah, if I can not stand, it is not just doing it in vain?" Things have beginnings and ends. So I began to sweep the floor. I could not even sparing the corner, finally Saowan. Think carefully, and forget to sweep the room, and I went in, picked up the broom skillfully, slowly sweep up. Then, I installed a bucket of water, wash a little mop, wring the water and began mopping the floor. I hold a heavy mop, slowly dragged there from here.

After this clean-up, I know: "If paid, will be fruitful."

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转眼间，“五一”劳动节就到来了，我开始想怎么度过这个劳动节，最后，我想了一个好主意，那就是大扫除。

今天中午，就开始了大扫除。

我拿起干抹布擦电视机，因为妈妈对我说过如果不用干抹布擦电视机的话，那电视机就容易坏。还有开关，电脑……等有电的东西都要用干抹布擦。

我还要擦一些家具和玻璃，甚至连门都不放过。我仔仔细细、认认真真地把家里从头到尾、从上到下在用抹布、拖把擦，拖了一遍，抹布上粘满了灰尘。这下可把我累坏了，我满头大汗，上气不接下气。但我一想：“我是要给妈妈一个惊喜的，再说了，大扫除本来就是要卖力的呀，如果我现在就坚持不了，那么刚才干的不就是白费了吗?”做事得有始有终。于是我又开始扫地了。我连角落都不放过，总算扫完了。仔细一想，还有房间忘记扫了，我进去，熟练地拿起扫把，慢慢地扫起来。然后，我装了一桶水，洗了一下拖把，扭干水，开始拖地。我握着沉重的拖把，慢慢地从这边拖到那边。

这次大扫除之后，我知道了：“只要付出了，就会有收获。”

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My father looks tall and handsome, water chestnut facial features, black hair, looks like my father is not, like my brother. That he is like my brother is also true, because he is like me very greedy snacks, but also often grab me snack to eat.

Once, I told him to go to the mall to buy snacks, came back after he immediately rushed to pretend to quickly explode the snack bag, I am not far behind. We grabbed very intense, the bag was crushed, but also put the potato chips are full of land, the results were mother cursed meal. We had to clean the ground to eat.

My father is very greedy snacks, but it is definitely a responsible good father, every day regardless of the wind and rain he is on time to send me to school, school. And asked me very strict, whether it is in the habit of living or learning. I remember once, to participate in my sisters birthday party, very late to go home, feeling tired and sleepy, they fell on the bed was trying to sleep. "Im sleepy, do I pray twice tomorrow?" Dad said firmly: "No, go!" I had to execute the order. The And once again, my math works because of my carelessness of 50 points, he put my homework tore, said: "The subject down and re-do!" I begged: "I will do, do not Really do it? "But my father is still very firm to say:" No! "I obediently done again.

Look, this is my father - a childish and responsible father!

早在几天前，街道上就摆满了粽子，到处飘散着粽子的清香。今天终于可以吃到妈妈做的香喷喷的粽子了。因为端午节到来了。

As early as a few days ago, the streets were filled with zongzi, and the

fragrance of zongzi wafted everywhere. Today, I can finally eat the delicious

zongzi made by my mother. Because the Dragon Boat Festival is coming.

妈妈真是了不起，能做出好几种不同味道的粽子，有红枣粽子、豆子粽子、蛋黄粽子，还有我最喜欢吃的肉粽子。粽子刚一出锅，我和哥哥便你争我抢，生怕自己少吃了一个。

My mother is really amazing. She can make several kinds of zongzi with

different tastes, including red date zongzi, bean zongzi, egg yolk zongzi, and

my favorite meat zongzi. As soon as zongzi is out of the pot, my brother and I

will fight for it from you for fear that we will eat one less.

正当我们准备把粽子送入嘴里的时候，爸爸走了过来，微笑着说：”你们知道端午节为什么要吃粽子吗?“我们异口同声地回答：”为了纪念屈原!“”对!那你们知道为什么要纪念他呢?“我和哥哥你

看着我，我望着你，直摇头。”在春秋时期，爱国诗人屈原眼看自己的祖国被侵略，心如刀割，但又不忍舍弃自己的祖国，所以在五月初五抱石投汨罗江身死。以后，在每年的五月初五，就有了赛龙舟

、吃粽子的风俗，以此来纪念爱国诗人屈原。

Just as we were about to put zongzi into our mouths, Dad came over and

smiled and said, "do you know why we eat Zongzi on Dragon Boat Festival?" we all

replied in unison, "in memory of Qu Yuan!" "yes! Then why do you remember him?"

my brother and I looked at me and I looked at you and shook our heads. " In the

spring and Autumn period, Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet, saw his motherland being

invaded and his heart was cut like a knife, but he could not bear to give up his

motherland, so he threw stones into Miluo River on the fifth day of May and

died. Later, on the fifth day of May every year, there was the custom of dragon

boat racing and eating zongzi, in order to commemorate the patriotic poet Qu

Yuan. "

我和哥哥点了点头，原来端午节还有这样的意义。今天不仅吃到了香喷喷的粽子，还让我收获不少。

My brother and I nodded. It turns out that Dragon Boat Festival has such a

meaning. Today, I have not only delicious zongzi, but also a lot of harvest.

Gooda fternoon,teachers! My name is XuLulu. I`m 11. I come from Class1 Grade 5 of TongPu No.2Primary School. There are 4 people in my family. My father is tall. My motheris pretty.My sister has a long hair. And I`m a good student. However, my homeis near the school, I often get up early. Because I must work hard. afterschool, I like playing computer games and reading books. I`d like to eatapples. They are sweet and healthy. And I like Tuesday best. We have English,music, computer and P.E. on Tuesdays. My math teacher is Miss Huang. Her classis so much fun. So my favourite class is math. And I like Chinese and English,too. This is me. An active girl. Please remember XuLulu. Thank you very much!

I have a few cute little white rabbits, and I love them very much.

They have a pair of long ears, a pair of ruby-like eyes, dropping yo, tail like a small pompon, a white hair, like snow, really beautiful.

Little rabbits courage is very small, as long as a stranger to hide, the body shrink tight, very afraid.

White Rabbit can eat something, it loves radishes and vegetables, but must be washed, if it is not clean vegetables and radish, will be sick. Oh, its hard to be waiting.

Can be a small rabbit to grab the food looks interesting, and whenever I put the food in its pot, they will scrambling to run over, for fear that they can not eat food, the whole head into the basin; Sometimes they become so friendly, a food is divided to eat, one sub-points, after the end, it is the two legs on the food, three mouth a one together, the body Yi Chan Yi Chan, eat Relish!

Little rabbit, how are you naive and lovely!

I have many friends, they each is very severe.

My friend has trees, grass, flowers, fish, dog, cat, frogs, birds, the ants, the earthworm, cricket, bee... Trees can make me cool in the hot summer, the grass can let me every day can see green, flower can let I could smell fragrant breath every day, the little fish can wait me to learn tired to depict, the dog to play with me running, cat can give me scratching, frogs and birds would it be possible for me to evaluate who sings best, ants can tell me when it rains, earthworms can help me to flowers scarification, two cricket can let me see that only worse, can let me eat the fresh honey bees.

My best friend is PeiYi Yang, he always come when I most lonely and helpless, both of us to help each other, solidarity and affection, what good things to share together.

Good my good friend!

我有很多朋友，它们每一个都很厉害。

我的朋友有大树﹑小草﹑小花﹑小鱼﹑小狗﹑小猫﹑青蛙﹑小鸟﹑蚂蚁﹑蚯蚓﹑蛐蛐﹑蜜蜂……大树可以在炎热的夏天让我乘凉，小草可以让我每天都可以看到绿色，小花可以让我每天都能闻到香气息，小鱼可以等我学习累了养眼，小狗可以跟我比赛跑步，小猫可以给我抓痒，青蛙和小鸟可以让我评价谁唱的最好，蚂蚁可以告诉我什么时候下雨，蚯蚓可以帮我的小花松土，两只蛐蛐可以让我看那只更厉害，蜜蜂可以让我吃新鲜的蜂蜜。

我最好的朋友是裴易扬，他总是在我最孤单最无助的时候出现，我们俩互相帮助，团结友爱，有什么好东西一起分享。

怎么样我的好朋友不错吧!

小学英语教师读书笔记(一)

俗话说：“良好的开端是成功的一半”。上课也一样。教师的循循诱导，能让学生产生强烈的求知欲和好奇心，从而更积极主动地参加课堂教学，为整节课的成功作准备。

一、导入：⒈歌曲导入。⒉设置悬念。当然导入很多，教学中不能单一的用一种导入，也许这种导入刚开始学生觉得很有劲，但天天用学生就会厌倦了。所以教师设计时要多多新颖，多多改变，尽量多样性。

二、创设情景，多用直观教学.

由于小学生年龄较小，生活经验不丰富，知识范围有限，决定了他们对直观、新颖、有趣的材料容易理解和接受。比如学生学习“good morning ﹑good afternoon ﹑good evening”这三个问候词时很容易混淆，我就用道具设置情景：画了三幅图，有从东面初升的太阳表示上午，有正在上方炎热的太阳表示中午，有明亮的月亮表示晚上。再叫学生用“good morning ﹑good afternoon ﹑good evening”来说，加深了学生的印象。作为一个小学英语教师表情要丰富，如果表情呆滞，语言平淡，学生就不能全身心投入学习中。所以在课堂上，老师需要生动地表演，丰富的表情，使学生进入一个童话世界。在制作教具时可让学生自己动手画、动手做。在教学中要用到的图片，可以提早几天布置下去，当他们的作品被运用在课堂上时，孩子们都很兴奋。这样使学生体会到成功的喜悦也激发了学英语的兴趣。此外画图片，也培养了学生的绘画能力，也可让他们熟悉一下将要学的新知识，真是一举多得啊!

三、运用多种教学方式使学生“玩学结合”。

爱玩是孩子的天性。教师在课前充分利用教材内容，精心设计一系列知识性、趣味性强的听、说、读、写教学游戏，使学生边玩游戏边学习，在丰富多彩的游戏中接受英语，喜欢英语，达到“玩与学”相结合的目的。在小学英语书上有许多单词要记住，这就得通过让学生在各种游戏中慢慢学习单词，而不是死记硬背。我们要掌握的单词以卡片、图片、头饰、动作等各种不同形式展现给学生，通过各种游戏进行渗透。

小学英语教师读书笔记(二)

尽管这世界有许多诱人的芳香，但如果缺少了“书香”，精神家园将是怎样的黯淡。最近，阅读了《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》一书，给我以心灵上的触动! 从《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》中，我看到了一个个令人感动的爱心故事。很多优秀的老师很好地关注沉默的孩子;描述了后进生的转化过程;给于学生关爱和尊重，使学生获得了进步的动力与源泉。他们都能真正赏识这些孩子，他们掌握了一种教育的艺术，爱的艺术。

“每个人心灵深处的信念，都存在着一种能量场，如果你从未怀疑过自己的学生或孩子会成为一个优秀的人，那么他会从你信念的能量场中接受到你的这一信息，并且又会把这一信息变成他的奋斗动力。”“一位女孩”，被国内教师评为“缺乏数学脑子”，却被美国老师赞为“具有数学特长”，能够“优雅且具有创造性地解决难题”;一个“厌学” 的孩子变得出类拔萃，让美国教授对其能力和品质“以性命担保”。爱波斯坦，世界一流的脑外科权威专家之一，然而在读书时却有严重的学习障碍，他称“我曾是智障者”……《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》所展示的是感人至深的教育故事。它为我开启的，是教育的奥秘，那就是在对学生的心灵进行了真正的解读后，爱的付出。

一、真爱学生，才会低着头，弯着腰，与学生进行心灵的交流，才能从每位学生身上找到金子般的闪光之处。长期以来的“精英教育”，致使很多学生因为评价制度的偏颇成为所谓的“差生”，而教育的最终目的在于最广泛的提高人的素质。现代教育理论也表明，人的智力决非是学习的能力。 “一支铅笔有多少种用途?”——无数种，更何况是万物之灵的人!

二、真爱学生，不会将学生的“骄傲”看作甚于“毁灭其自尊和自信”的洪水猛兽，将不吝于对学生的赏识，对学生的优点和长处，始终抱着一颗心上和赞美之心;将小心地呵护孩子的梦，而不会做一个“偷走很多孩子的梦”的小偷，将用赏识为孩子提供梦想成真的自信和拼搏的激情。这份爱心，为学生未来的奋斗岁月里提供阳光的动力，会成为孩子“翅膀下的风”。

三、真爱学生，才懂得“漂亮的孩子人人喜爱，爱难看的孩子才是真正的爱的道理”。素质教育的大旗上有一个大写的“人”字，要求教师们善待每一个生命，尤其是那些曾经遭受到伤害的孩子。《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》为教师们种下了一个信念--每个人都是天才，没有教不好的学生，只有不会教的老师。

四、真爱学生，会清醒地承认学生的差异，会批评学生存在的不足和缺点，但是心中牢牢刻下的是“尊重”和“宽容”。于是，有了乐柏芬老师“小红花”的故事，有梁清颖的爱之画，有在评语上用上“安静”，而非“不积极”、“不活跃”等词，小心呵护着孩子自尊的指导老师，《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》给每一位老师带来了启示，让学生如沐春风，在学生心底下留下最深的感动。

新课标对教师提出了新的要求，既有知识结构、教育方式等方面的更新，又有对教学目的和对学生评价方式的调整，其核心便是教育对“学生主体”的尊重，突出“以人为本”的理念，而《小学英语新课程课堂教学案例》--就是这本书，为教师们提供了与学生最直接、最深切、平等的心灵关照的机会。也许，有些教师还津津乐道于自己的“威严”，也许，某位教师刚刚进行完又一轮声色俱厉的批评轰炸，我想，他们会被这些言语震撼的。这里，有有优秀教师“师心深处”的体验，还有专家精当的评析。正是这些话语，会让每一位“诲人不倦者”不得不反省、深思和探索，因为这些都是来自真实心灵的呼唤声。

【参考范文】

During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.

Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy! i go to beijing yestoday.i see great wall and so on .

im very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.

【参考译文】

五一期间,我和我的家人去了上海。我们都爱上了它目前我们看到它。

上海真是一个美丽的城市!有很多高楼和树木!上海也有很多鲜花,看起来像一个漂亮的花园!如果我有机会再次访问上海,我将会非常快乐!我昨天去北京了。我看到长城等等。

我很高兴,因为我看到一个红色的老人。他已经95岁了。我喜欢他因为他电话我们的许多故事。

一：用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

英语写作注意两点

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

12 May 2006

Dear Mary,

I am sorry to trouble you, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you.

You know, I had planned this holiday for several years. A t last, my dream came true. You could imagine how excited I was. My mind was completely occupied with the holiday. I forgot to collect my laundry. I dont know if you can help me collect my laundry. I sent the laundry to the Johns. It is the one down the corner on St. Peters Street. You cant miss it, because the house is painted green-a big green house. I have got two pairs of trousers, three shirts, one T-shirt and a blanket. Call a taxi to send you home. I will pay you back when I am home.

My first stop is London. It is raining. The streets are very clean. How I wish I could have the chance to see the famous London fog. But someone told me that was already the history. One can only read things like that about London in books.

My best wishes to you.

Yours sincerely, Peter Chen