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高考英语的满分作文:上网看法

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导语:网络是把双刃剑,我们不能一概的批评,很多东西都是有利有弊的,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

We should say that every coin has its two sides. So it is with surfing on line.

Generally speaking, students will benefit a lot from Internet. People can get lots of useful information through the Internet quickly ,no matter it is national or throughout the world. We can also listen to the music and chat with the friends far away.The most important of all is that we can search many foreigners who speak English as their native languge, which can help us improve our Enlish rapidly.We can send Email to our good friends in a few seconds---with the internet your friend dont need to wait for so long time as receiving a letter as before.

But it also can spread many side effects.for example ,there are some sexy news and pictures on web which will not do good to teenagers. And there are some games that can easily attract the students and even make you addict to the games so you can waste a lot of valuable time.

On the whole it will give you both good and bad things, the thing matters much is how do you make use of it.

【参考翻译】

我们都说任何事物都有其两面性,所有上网也不例外。

总的来说,学生通过互联网还是受益颇多的,我们可以很快从网上取得很多有益的信息,不管是国家的还是世界的。还可以在网上听音乐和远方的朋友聊天,最重要的是可以接触到很多讲英语的外国朋友和他们当地的方言,以帮助我们快速提高英语水平。通过互联网我们远方的朋友不再像以前一样需要花很长一段时间才能收到信件,只需几分钟就可以给我们的好朋友发送邮件。

但同时也带来很多不同的影响,比如,很多不利于青少年的色情新闻或者图片在网上出现,同时还有很多易于吸引学生的游戏甚至长时间沉溺于游戏。

总的来看很多东西都有利有弊,就看你如何去利用它。

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篇1:2024高考写作素材:名人素材经典评析

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历史名人经典评论

1、 中华文化的先驱:孔子

他用最锐利的智慧开启了那一道道尘封的门,阳光从那错开的门缝间挤出来,于是门外面铺满黄金;他用最朴实的教诲铸造了一把坚韧的利斧,劈成了一道道深深的印痕,它留下的不是疼痛,而是刻骨铭心!于是,子子孙孙有了一条光明的大道。

2、 曳尾涂中的庄子

九万里的情怀荡漾于三千濮水之上。赤子之心归于自然,终成南华经。曳尾涂中,逍遥一游于尘世,哲学的巅峰便已铸就。他有蛇的冷酷犀利,更有鸽子的温柔宽仁。踌躇满志却又似是而非,螳臂挡车却又游刃有余。有谁看不出他满纸荒唐言中的一把辛酸泪泥?对这种充满血泪的怪诞与孤傲,我们怎能不肃然起敬?

3、 不朽的行者:屈原

当黎明还黝黑时,他就触着光亮而长吟。上下求索,踽踽独行。他使一条不屈的生命得到了高度的提升,他使一个站立的灵魂,得到了不朽的诠释。

4、 俞伯牙、钟子期

一挥手,一拨琴,一段旋律;一高山,一流水,一段传奇。他们艰难地跋涉于七根琴弦,他们用紧扣的十指敲开了心灵之门,他们的生命也由此产生了共振。即使远隔千里,即使天上人间,但在他们人生原始的画卷里都巍峨着山,清澈着水,飞舞知己的音韵。

5、 忘却荣辱书定历史:司马迁

你海棠般的容颜,弹响"史家"千古绝唱?谁,能幽愁发愤,吟出无韵之《离骚》?他以海的大度包容了内心之苦、世人之讽,他以山的刚毅正直书写了两千年的沧海桑田。他的坚韧撼动历史,彪炳史册;他的刚正直上霄汉,照耀尘寰!

6、永恒的美丽:王昭君

你海棠般娇羞的容颜,你菊花般孤高的傲世风骨,你柳絮般飘飞的沉思,你桃花般红消香断的泪痕,都在这广漠中消隐。你的聪慧,痴迷着汉赋唐诗的韵律,怎能不如履薄冰?你的深刻,承受着岁月无痕的忧伤,怎能不形销骨立;你的清高,拒绝着蝇营狗苟的生活,怎能不心力交瘁?你默默地离去,为了那永世的安宁,你的名字载入史册,也记载下人们对你永恒的记忆。

7、两朝开济老臣心:诸葛亮

一颗忠心,两朝元老,三顾茅庐而三分天下,五丈原头,八卦阵中,六出祁山而七擒孟获。赤胆忠心,足智多谋,助他人之霸业,成自己之威名。出师未捷身先死,长使英雄泪满襟。

8、青梅煮酒论英雄:曹操

成,如朗月照花,深潭微澜,是不论顺逆,不论成败的超然,亦是扬鞭策马,登高临远的驿站;败,仍滴水穿石,江流入海,有穷且坚,不坠青云的傲岸,不"将相本无种,男儿当自强"的倔强;荣,江山依旧,风采犹然,恰沧海巫山,熟视岁月之流,浮华万千,不屑过眼烟云;辱,胯下韩信,雪底苍松,宛若羽化之仙,知暂退一步海阔天空,不肯因噎废食。荣辱成败,尽显英雄本色。

9、一代书圣:王羲之

狼毫一挥是生命的舞动,砚纸是他的舞台,满载生命的厚重,楷如泰山稳立,行如清洌之风,草如龙凤舞动,他让人们真正了解什么是书法,他让世界了解中国书法的伟博,兰亭己矣,永不逝去的的《兰亭集序》中最豪迈的一次舞动。

10、把酒东篱:陶渊明

他来了,带来了一阵阵菊香,带来了与自然相合的阔达心境。面对官阙,他选择了江湖,选择了自然的那份恬适。他追求的是"采菊东篱下,悠然见南山"的生活,他有着"阡陌交通,落英缤纷"的理想;他绽放了压在心底的那份"自然"。他的丰碑永远树立在田园郊野之上。

11三尺微命一书生:王勃

生命,对他太吝啬了!他却仍在身后留了累累秋实。他没有被时间谋杀,反而跨越了生命,永远灿烂于文学历史的天空。

12、狂放不羁酒中仙:李白

一星升起,他灿烂的是整个盛唐星空。他飘逸,欲上青天揽明月;他自信,天生我材必有用;他狂放,我辈岂是蓬蒿人!他用酒涤荡自己的秉性,用诗放牧自己的灵魂!

13、女中豪杰:武则天

一朵深宫玫瑰却偏偏如此铿锵,一双娇弱的肩膀却担起天下的希望!三从四德禁锢不住你的步伐,你默默地演绎着属于你的繁华。

14、27年完成毕生心愿:李时珍

还是一介农夫时,已有指出医书典籍中错误的胆识,看到病痛中的村民时,已萌生了编著一部医书的念头。怀揣着那份执著,走进大山经风历雨,身试百种药草,成就医学巨著。

15、永恒的飞翔:万户

是他,承载起最早的飞天梦想,是他,为人类装上梦的翅膀。火光耀眼,他无悔生命的短暂,尘土飞扬,掩不住他真情的渴望。他用生命的代价换取了一次人类文明的飞跃。湛蓝的天空中永远舞着他无畏的英雄。

16、留得清高照尘寰:李清照

纵观古今,唯有你是真正氤氲在水墨之间的婉约女子,柔情似水,盈盈一掬。但是,你那看似浅浅的豪气也在柔弱中发酵壮大,令世人更增一份敬仰。

17、竹的冥想者:郑板桥

看看那挺拔的竹子吧,"千磨万击还坚劲,任尔东西南北风。"正是他的写照。那以时间为间距的节,是他的冥想。一支画笔画出竹的气韵,擎着一方永不塌陷的写意天空。竹子在他的笔下更显精彩,他对竹子的冥想造就了美的舞台。

18、笔尖上的舞者:鲁迅

一个漫长的拯救,一段思想的斗争。一双眼看透世态炎凉,一支笔写尽悲情苦难,一身青袍衬出他的颀长傲骨,嘴角的烟斗,悠悠冒出的丝丝缕缕,让沉默不再是沉默。

19、一代才女:张爱玲

十里洋场的意乱神迷中,清醒着一处清幽,她是一枝气质媚人的蕙兰。她用敏感的笔触,红色的激情,喷涌出闺阁的意味、洋房的欲望,抒写了一个个淋漓的灵魂后,乘着它们渐行渐远,暗洒一路幽香,任由裙裾飞扬|。

20、冰心一片在玉壶:冰心

好的名字亲切、优雅,她的文笔朦胧、潇洒。她那圣洁的言辞像母的手抚尉着每个读者的心房,她是天地间最美的兰朵!

鲁迅颁奖词:"把生命献给中国,让世界为之景仰。矮矮的身躯,创造出崇高的事业,瘦削的肩膀,承载着千年的使命!从狂人的眼睛里,我们读出了历史的沉重;从阿Q的身影中,我们体会到变革的艰难;从坟头的花环上,我们看到了未来的希望;从铁屋的呐喊中,我们听清了奋进的声音!你在孤独中呐喊,你在市声里彷徨,采一片朝花为自己送行,荷一杆长戟向黑暗进攻!大星陨落,天地同悲;巨著行世,千秋共仰--我们知道任何奖项也不足以涵盖你的贡献,但谨以此菲薄的礼品献给你--世纪伟人鲁迅。"

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篇2:流行歌手高考英语作文

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my favourite pop star is zhou huajian. i like him not only because he is very handsome, but also his songs are very beautiful.

on october 18, he gave a performance in tianjin. about 2500 fans went to the stadium to see him. almost all of them were students. some of them were even from beijing, the capital city of china ,which is about 200 kilometres from tianjin. i really wanted to watch the performance,but unfortunately,i didnt get a ticket. so i watched him on tv.zhou is one of the most popular stars in china. he is living in hong kong. his family is very happy. he has a good wife and three lovely children. he liked playing football when he was a university student. however, he has no time to play football now.

i hope he will be happy all his life, for he is loved by all of us.

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篇3:高考热点写作素材:文明社会

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导语:当我们认为道德不再是应该履行的一种义务,而是像我们赖以生存的空气时,真正的文明才离我们不远了。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的高考作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

20世纪80年代,我曾和林斤澜、柳溪两位老作家访法。在一个风雨天,我们所乘的汽车驶在乡间道路上。在我们前边有一辆汽车,从车后窗可以看清,车中显然是一家人。他们的车轮扬起的尘土,一阵阵落在我们的车前窗上。终于到了一个足以超车的拐弯处,前边的车停住了。开车的男人下了车,向我们的车走来。为我们开车的是法国外交部的一名青年翻译,他摇下车窗,用法语跟对方说了半天。后来,我们的车开到了前面。

我问翻译:“你们说了些什么?”

他说:“对方坚持让我们将车开到前边去。”

我挺奇怪,问为什么。

他说:“对方认为,自己的车始终开在前边,对我们太不公平,他自己也根本没法儿开得心安理得。”

隔日,我们的车在路上撞着了一只农家犬,只不过是“碰”了那犬一下。它叫着跑开时,一条后腿稍微有那么一点儿瘸。法国青年却将车停下了,去找养那只犬的人家。十几分钟后回来,说没找到。半小时后,我们在一个小镇的快餐店吃午饭,那法国青年说他还是得开车回去找一下犬的主人,要不然心里很别扭。终于找到了养那只犬的农家,于是他郑重道歉,主动留下名片、车号、驾照号码……而此时那只犬已经若无其事了。

回来时,他心里不“别扭”了。接下来的一路,又有说有笑了。

我想,文明一定不是要刻意做给别人看的一件事情,它应该首先成为使自己愉快并且是自然而然的一件事情。正如那位带着全家人旅行的父亲,他不那么做,就没法儿“心安理得”;正如我们的翻译,不那么做就“心里很别扭”。

素材运用:道德的最高境界就是不用任何法律来强制约束,而自觉由人们来遵守,并逐渐演变为人们的一种习惯。当我们认为道德不再是应该履行的一种义务,而是像我们赖以生存的空气时,真正的文明才离我们不远了。

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篇4:高考热点写作素材:规则的智慧

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导语:古语有云“无以规矩,不成方圆”,说的就是要有规则.规则是为人处事之根本,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的高考作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

德国人相信规划,生活中,充满了规划。

德国的门把手,一律“一”横。因为“扭”力比“一”横的柄大,结果故障率高。“一”横柄,往下按,轻轻推,豁然洞开。用力小,损耗低,最符合工程经济学。

德国的窗,都是往里开,而且从上部开,这样上宽下窄,兜住所有轻轻扬起的室内浊气、尘埃,落于窗外,又不让落叶、雨水漏入室内。倘若侧开窗,雨就会从侧面斜入。风,不管从哪个侧面飘,侧开窗的上面豁开的角度肯定会渗入。

在欧洲,有教堂的地方未必有广场,那是小镇:有广场的地方一定有教堂,那一定是个大镇。

而号称法兰克福南京路上的广场,却不在教堂门前。原来,第二次世界大战,法兰克福几乎化为废墟,所以那里的古建筑少,高楼多。这是座重新规划的城市,所以在这里广场不再是教堂的附属物,而体现出现代市政的理念。广场是人流、车流中转,更是商业聚合中心。那个广场是地铁出口,四周都是“豁”口,而不是只有十字路口,这样便于抄近路去到每个方向,但任何“豁”都不会堵车。每个“豁”口都有“包口”--岔路口弧形店铺,左右过客都能一目了然的店铺。过去上海法租界这样的商铺较多,可谓是“龙额上的珍珠”,在上海是“可遇不可求”,租金明显高于隔壁沿街店铺。站在法兰克福的广场,环顾椭圆四周,包口店铺尽收眼底,这样的店铺开角更阔、收视率更高,租金也更高。路口越多,包口越多,顾客越多,消费越多,政府税收就越高。

在德国,凡事都很合理,合理的背后就是规划,规划的结果是规则,有了规则,就按照规则做,哪怕看上去有那么一点儿迂腐。

素材运用:德国人以严谨闻名世界。1899年,德国人在青岛租借区铺设了水管网,百年后一些零件需更换,德国一家企业发邮件提示,按德国人做事的规则,他们必定在老化的零件周边3米内。存有备件。承建公司按图索骥,果然发现了百年前留下的备件,崭新完好,可见德国人从规则中学到了足够的智慧

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篇5:2024高考英语写作常用套句

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一、开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned

2.It goes without saying that...

3.It can be said with certainty that...

4.As the proverb says,

5.It has to be noticed that...

6.It`s generally recognized that...

7.It`s likely that ...

8.It`s hardly that...

9.It’s hardly too much to say that...

10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...

13.what’s far more important is that...

二、衔接句型

A case in point is ...

As is often the case...

As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述

But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……

But it’s a pity that...

For all that...In spite of the fact that...

Further, we hold opinion that...

However , the difficulty lies in...

Similarly, we should pay attention to...

not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是

In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

As has been mentioned above...

In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说

However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …

三、结尾句型

I will conclude by saying...

Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...

All things considered,总而言之

It may be safely said that...

Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….

The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….

It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

四、举例句型

Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明

let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.

Here is one more example.

Take … for example.

The same is true of….

This offers a typical instance of….

We may quote a common example of….

Just think of….

五、常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.

3. I believe the title statement is valid because….

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.

六、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.

3. A and B differ in….

4. A differs from B in….

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….

七、演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5. The reasons are as follows.

八、因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

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篇6:关于英语作文的写作方法指导

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导语:写作方法就是写作中进行表现时运用的方法,是作者为表情达意而采取的有效艺术手段。

学生写作时,如果语句平平,只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词,那么,这样写出来的文章根本没有可阅读行,就像是一碗没有油盐酱醋面条一样,让人提不起一点精神和看下去的欲望,呆板、单调,没有可读性。如果一篇文章要让读者有可读性、有深度,同学们更应该掌握一些高级点词和语句来装饰你的文章,突出这篇文章的彩头,使文章增添文采,给读者以不一样的感受。具体方法可以参照下面的语句:

1. 画龙点睛,一篇文章的开头很重要。

在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语一般都会在谓语前面。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如在文章的开始的时候写一些倒状语句或以状语为起始语句的开头,这样子的文章更具表现力和感染力。如:

(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.

→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

在小山顶上有一座古庙。

(2) You can do it well only in this way.

→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

(3) A young woman sat by the window.

→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。

2. 避免重复使用同一词语

为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:

I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。

3. 合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如:

(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?

→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?

(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。

(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.

→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。

4. 适当运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如:

(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。

(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。

5. 结合使用长句与短句

在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如:

At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.

→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。

6. 适当使用短语代替单词

(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.

→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

他已决定长大了当老师。

(2) He doesnt like music.

→ He doesnt care much for music.

他不大喜欢音乐。

(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.

→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.

他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

7. 恰当套用某些固定表达

(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.

→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

他太累了,不能再往前走了。

(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。

(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。

8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”

(1) Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.

→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.

别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。

(2) Thank you for playing with us.

→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

谢谢你陪我玩。

9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构

(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

现在人人都知道这消息了,我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

我们所能做的只是站在那儿,设法抓住违章者。

(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话,至少也不会比她老师的差。

10. 适当使用名言警句点缀

在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如:

(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”

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篇7:英语写作基础改写病句的技巧

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改写,就是把原有的一篇文章改变形式、长短的一种写作类型。下面是英语写作基础改写病句技巧,欢迎参考阅读!

改写,包括改写、缩写、扩写、写摘要等多种形式:或改头换面,或削足适履,或海阔天空,或归纳总括,让你有足够的内容、机会和样式适应要求,施展才华。

改写是用不同形式表达同一内容的方法,使之成为与原文意思相同而表现方式、文体不同的作品。改写可以变换文章的人称、顺序,可以改变原文的体裁、结构,可以灵活运用自己的语言,尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文语句的内容。比如,我们可以把对话改写成散文,可以把记叙文变成通讯报导、新闻特写,反之亦然。

缩写是根据词数、字数的要求对原文加以压缩、概括,从而达到缩短篇幅、简化内容、突出中心等目的的写作形式。简言之,缩写是原文的“高度浓缩”。缩写时要忠实于原文,保留原文体裁、题材、主要内容、主要思想、结构顺序、语言风格、人称视角和表现方法等;既要使篇幅缩短,结构紧凑,又要使内容简明扼要,重点突出;不能对原文加入个人的认识、体会或对原文进行评论,也不能加入原文中没有的内容。

扩写则与缩写相反,是把篇幅短小的内容扩展成为篇幅较长的文章。扩写时,可以施展个人的想像力,在不离原文核心内容的前提下海阔天空,任意发挥,从而使细节更加充实、生动,使情节更加具有感染力,使解释、说明、论证更加充分有力。

摘要是一篇文章或一本书的梗概,多指论文或报告内容的提要。一些期刊、杂志上论文的“提要”、“摘要”,某些报纸、杂志在一篇文章前面写的“编者按”,一本书的前言等均属此列。写摘要就是简明扼要地向读者介绍一篇文章,一本书,一篇论文或一个报告的主要内容,使读者用较少的时间阅读后,能了解文章或书的来龙去脉。摘要可以改变体裁。写摘要时,笔者可以用原文的人称、语气、也可以用第三人称,即笔者的语气,但是不能改变原文的事实和观点,也不能丢掉原文的要点,应写成连贯的文章而不能写成提纲。

总之,改写、缩写、扩写、摘要都是对原有的文章进行适合某种需要的裁剪或放大,选取原文的精要而和盘托出,对其要点和实质容不得偷换和贪污。这些写作形式对学习写作的学生来说,是一种练习综合分析、归纳概括能力的好方法;对成人来说,是工作中的很好的帮手。

一个作家可以把一本小说改写成剧本,把一则简短的消息扩展为一部短篇或长篇小说;一名记者可以把一段会谈改写成一篇通讯报导或特写;一个编辑可以把收到的稿件根据版面大小或缩或扩写成适当的文章;我们在听领导人、某方面的专家做报告时要作点笔记,然后写出摘要文章;我们写成一篇论文后,可以给它写一段简短的摘要,等等。这些都是人们在生活、工作中必不可少的书面表达形式。所以,学会这些写作技巧,能使我们适应各方面的需要。

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篇8:海南经济特区的高考英语作文

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hainan is in the south of china. it is chinas largest special economic zone and youngest province. since it was established ten years ago, the economic zone has eperienced rapid development in many aspects.

the comfortable residential quarters have been built up, highways have been constructed, and modem ports and airports have been built. hainan, as a famous "natural greenhouse", also enjoys a lot of advantages in tropical agriculture.

litchi, for eample, is ripe one month earlier there than in guangdong province. hainan is also a scenic spot and it has quickly become a resort for holiday makers. the hainan special economic zone has a bright future.

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篇9:高考满分作文写作技巧及方法

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高考作文占高考语文分数的半边天,只有写作好作文,同学们的语文成绩才会高。下面是小编整理的高考满分作文写作技巧方法,欢迎大家阅读!

一、忌复制话题

话题作文,出题者只是提供一个写作的由头,意在引出习作者发表新议论,展开新联想,讲述新故事,抒发新感情。所以,写作时不能将命题所提供的话题材料照搬不误——复制一番,然后才进入自己的“话题”。更不能通篇只是颠来倒去的解释所供材料的含义,引用所供材料的例子在原地打转转。

其实,读者不需要复制,读者需要创新。因为试题所供材料,读者已经听过了,感受过了,下面得看你的感悟和创新如何?如果写议,就要能够帮助读者深刻领悟其中道理;如果写记叙文,就要通过描述自己的亲身体验或讲述新鲜的故事,使读者有更具体、更强烈、更丰富的思想感情。有时,根据写作需要对所供的一组材料概括出具有“共性”或独具“个性”的某一见解而适当引用材料,这种情况当然不能算是“复制话题”,反而体现了写作者的创新意识了。

二、忌穿靴戴帽

近年来,话题作文对学生发挥想象能力,进行创新思维提供了相当宽泛的写作范围。但某些习作者由于领悟能力不够,想象、创新能力欠缺,同样会把原来提供的话题变成僵化呆板、穿靴戴帽的病文章。

例如:近年一次以“答案是丰富多彩的”为话题写作时,某考生居然写了这样的内容:“记得有一次,我们去自然博物馆参观,当我们看到地球仪时,讲解员问我们:‘地球为什么是圆的?’一位同学说:‘因为它在地球仪上,比较好转。’也有的说:‘为了使人看得清楚。’各种回答,千变万化,最后讲解员说:‘有位航海家在大海中一直向西行,最终达到了他的出发点,所以证明地球是圆的。’”然后,这位习作者又归结道:“的确,世界是千变万化的,疑问是层出不穷的,答案是丰富多彩的。”

以上这段文字,根本没有理解原话题的丰富的内涵,仅仅是摘引了一些语句生硬地给自己的文章“穿靴戴帽”而已,习作仍然走在缺少想象力、缺乏创新思维的老路上。

三、忌转移话题

一位考生,他的“心灵悟语”一文开头是这样的:“心,我的心不要悲哀,你要忍受命运的安排。严冬掠走的一切,新春会给你带回来。心,我的心,只要是你情乏所钟,你都可以尽量去爱。”可是后面他又接着写道:“平淡,不是与世无争,也不是无所谓,而是平常与淡然。用一颗平常而且淡然的心去面对社会的艰难和压力,就不会过于烦恼和紧张了。就象面对高考,我从小学到真是12年寒窗苦,为的就是在这人生的转折点上有一个好的开始,但这一路上却充满了艰辛与痛苦,即将要达到终点时,还要考虑万一没有考上大学怎么办?这时,我的平常心和淡然的心对我说话了,他告诉我不要有太多顾虑,在这12年里流的汗水会化作春雨毫不吝啬的浇在你身上,严冬夺取的一切,新春会给你夺回来。”

这篇习作,开头谈的是“爱”,后面写的却是如何看待人生路上的“难”与“苦”,明显属于“转移话题”。“心灵悟语”,可“悟”的话题有许多,“爱”心可以去“悟”,“人生”也可以“悟”,但每一篇“悟”只应围绕一个中心来写,如果前言不搭后语,驴唇不对马嘴,谁知道你“悟”出了什么道理呢。

四、忌文意散漫

一般来说,话题提供的是写作范围,并没有规定写作的主旨。所以,在话题规定的范围内,还要“炼意”,也就是提炼自己文章的中心思想。如果在这一环节下功夫不够,没有考虑好自己究竟要写什么,要表达什么意思,就匆匆忙下笔,就有可能东拉西扯,多头指向,文意散漫,不知所云。

例如:有位习作者写《答案是丰富多彩的》,开头三段写学生学习负担太重;接着写李素丽如何在平凡的岗位上成为劳动模范;再下来写一个故意开枪伤人的派出所所长被判死刑;最后又写到做数学题可以一题多解。这样一篇文章,七零八落,让人不知所云,是典型的文意散漫,东拉西扯的病文。

五、忌缺少创新

话题作文的审题难度大为降低,内容更加宽泛,而且更加淡化文体观念。围绕一个话题,可以议论,可以记叙,可以说明,甚至可以编写出小小说或短剧,形式非常自由。

正由于话题作文在内容和形式上彻底松绑,学生可以极大地发挥创造力和想象力。可是,由于旧教学思想的影响,学生的作文中仍有不少八股味。写记叙文只会一味赞“心灵美”,编造虚假题材;也有写“悲壮美”的,以损害父母身体健康为代价编造所谓“车祸”换来“我追求的品格——坚韧”、“战胜脆弱”的作文得高分者也大有人在。(由于以前作文命题的欠缺,造成虚假、编造的作文已越来越此路不通了。)现代社会,人文精神已渗透到生活的各个领域,在作文中写出活生生的富有个性的人,极有创意、大胆想象的科幻故事等是我们中学生应该尽力追求的目标。但要达到这个目标,必须广泛阅读课外书籍,关心未来世界,着眼科学素质的培养,重视想象力的开发,只有这样,才能使你的作文有创新、有特色。

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篇10:英语写作素材积累:诚信的英语名言

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俗话又说:一言既出,驷马难追。诚信是立足之道,为人之本。下面请看语文迷为大家整理的关于诚信的英语名言,希望对你有帮助。

believes really is to link the intelligent bridge up , to be expert in the people who cheats , to arrive at forever the bridge another one holds without end. The sincere message, is one strands of Qing Quan诚信是沟通心灵的桥梁,善于欺骗的人,永远到不了桥的另一端。

Heres the rule for bargains "Do other men, for they would do you." Thats the true precept.Charles Dickens. British novelist这里有一条交易法则:“欺骗他人,因为他们也欺骗你。”这是真正的经商之道。英国小说家 狄更斯 C

it will wash away Augean stable cheating , lets everyone the world corner be flowing cleanly.诚信,是一股清泉,它将洗去欺诈的肮脏,让世界的每一个角落都流淌着洁净。

Economy the poor mans mints; extravagance the rich mans pitfall.Martin Tupper. American economist.节约是穷人的造币厂,浪费是富人的陷阱。美国经济学家 塔珀 .M。

the sincere message is the most beautiful overcoat of person , is an intelligent the holiest and purest fresh flower.诚信是人最美丽的外套,是心灵最圣洁的鲜花。

the sincere message is your no humble price shoes , traverses the length and breadth of a journey filled with numerous difficulties and dangers, mass cantrespondtoeternalinvariable.诚信是你价格不菲的鞋子,踏遍千山万水,质量也应永恒不变。

Did you ever expect a corporation to have a conscience, when it has no soul to damned, and no body to be kicked?Edward Thurlow, British Lawyer公司既没有灵魂可以被诅咒,又没有躯体可以被踢翻,难道你指望它有什么良心吗?英国律师 瑟洛杉矶 .E.

If Enterprise is afoot, wealth accumulates whatever may be happening to Thrift; and if Enterprise is asleep, wealth decays, whatever Thrift may be doing.John Maynard keynes British economist如果企业在进展,不论节俭不节俭,财富也在衰落。国经济学家 凯恩斯 .J.M.

the sincere message is a road, with the fact that pioneers step extends; The sincere message is wisdom , seeks rope accumulation with having a wide knowledge of a scholars; The sincere message is successful , persons going all out approaches with advancing bravely; The sincere message is the wealth seed , is therefore likely to find the key opening a state treasury as long as your sincere desire moves downwards kind.诚信是道路,随着开拓者的脚步延伸;诚信是智慧,随着博学者的求索积累;诚信是成功,随着奋进者的拼搏临近;诚信是财富的种子,只要你诚心种下,就能找到打开金库的钥匙。

sincere message resembles a mirror , break in a single day, crack will appear over your personality.诚信像一面镜子,一旦打破,你的人格就会出现裂痕。

is sincere for message glorious , breaking faith disgraceful. That诚信为荣,失信可耻。

Busineunderlies everything in our national life, including our spiritual life, Witnethe fact that in the Lords prayer the first petition is for daily bread, No one can worship God or love his neighbor on an empty stoach.Woodrow Wilson. American President生活包括精神生活的基矗不容置疑的事实是,在主祷文中向上帝祈求的第一件事是让我们天天有面包。没有人能饿着肚子敬奉上帝或热爱他的邻居。 美国总统 威尔逊 W.

the sincere message is foundation of conducting self , base of starting ones career.诚信是做人之根本,立业之基。

establishes up sincere message campus , sets up up sincere message style of study , becomes the sincere message student.创起诚信校园,树起诚信学风,成为诚信学子。

诚信的英语作文

What is integrity? Integrity is a good quality of being honest. It is a fine virtue for everyone. A man of integrity is loved by all. Without integrity, he will lose the best friend.

Integrity is especially important for students. We should finish our homework independently. We must return books when it is due. We should listen to the teacher carefully no matter what kind of lesson it is. If we promise to do something, we should try our best to do it well.

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篇11:2024年高考写作素材:女孩为救人被狗咬伤事件大逆转

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最近,安徽利辛26岁女子李娟被恶犬咬成重伤的事,持续在网络发酵。李娟的家人多次向媒体表示,9月初的一个晚上,李娟在下班回家途中,救了一名被两条大追逐的小女孩,自己却横遭不测。她的遭遇引发不少人士的捐助,目前爱心款已超过80万元。

但是,由于事发当时没有监控,也没有目击者,情况究竟什么样?现代快报记者赶赴李娟的老家安徽利辛展开调查,发现情节大逆转,真相令人震惊。李娟并非在回家路上受伤,而是在一家养狗场内被狗咬伤的,而这家养狗场的主人,正是她的男朋友张宏宇。在南京的医院里,张宏宇也承认,自己撒了谎,但他表示,所有善款将用于女友治疗。

前情:现代快报记者辗转联系上安徽媒体人“@记者柯南”,他表示,大约一个多月前,自己曾经接到过这家人的求助。“一个同行给我打电话,说我‘脑子好’,问我能不能帮这家人策划策划。”后来,张宏宇和女孩的一位亲戚联系上“@记者柯南”,“他们跟我说的大概,就是女孩为救人被狗咬了。”两人表示,为李娟治病,家里当时已经花了很多钱,经济上实在跟不上。考虑到马上要去南京做植皮手术,至少还需要三四十万资金,他们希望通过媒体,呼吁社会人士的救助。并表示,在得到捐款后,会“好好感谢”他。

“这么做肯定违背职业道德,我拒绝了,但考虑到女孩需要帮助,我也了解了一下这件事,发现在他们提供的信息里,没有被帮助的小女孩、没有狗主人、也没有目击者,只是男方的单方面叙述,第一反应就是假新闻,因此没有报道。”而这件事这两天被报道出来后,火遍了全国,这让他惊讶不已。

在众多证据相互印证下,昨天,在医院楼下,张宏宇终于向现代快报记者说了实话,李娟见义勇为的事,确属编造,“我撒谎是事实,我承认我错了。”但他表示,这样做都是为了女友,所有善款也都会用在女友治疗上。张宏宇称,之所以编造这样一个故事,是因为之前为女友治病已花费了四五十万,其中不少是借的,到10月份,由于资金跟不上,李娟已经停药一段时间,于是他开始向各个媒体、爱心组织求助,在向某家媒体投递材料的时候,为引发关注,他加上了救人后被狗咬的情节,“当时只想着救人,没有想那么多。” 他说,事情报道出来后,影响越来越大,只好“将错就错”。而且这件事李娟并不知情,“我是这两天才告诉她的。”

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篇12:2024高考英语作文:网络公开课

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导语:现在网络公开课很盛行;网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;对此你有什么建议吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

话题:Open Courses

1. 现在网络公开课很盛行;

2. 网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;

3. 我对此的建议。

范文:

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years. Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses. Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.

The courses have brought many benefits to people. Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us. Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world. But that can also be a problem. Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.

In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons. But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.

【参考译文】

在线开放课程近年来越来越受欢迎。以下全球知名大学喜欢耶鲁和哈佛,在中国一些大学也开始提供网上开放课程。这些课程吸引了来自不同职业的班级的人们。

这些课程给人们带来了许多好处。许多课程都是由国外的大学提供的,从而为我们提供了新的思路。通过他们,我们可以跟上世界各地的人们在想什么。但这也可能是一个问题。一些课程可能不适合中国学生,因为文化差异,可能会造成混乱的中国校园。

在我看来,网上开放课程是有用的,我们应该利用它来扩大我们的视野。但我们也要记住,要有自己的思想,不要被错误的想法洗脑。

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篇13:2024年高考写作素材积累:高中生美文美句

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爱心是冬日的一片阳光,使用饥寒交迫的人感受到人间的温暖;爱心是沙漠中的一泓清泉,使用权濒临绝境的人重新看到生活的希望;爱心是洒在久旱大地上的一场甘霖,使孤苦无依的人即刻获得心灵的慰藉。

别在树下徘徊,别在雨中沉思,别在黑暗中落泪。向前看,不要回头,只要你勇于面对抬起头来,就会发现,分数的阴霾不过是短暂的雨季。向前看,还有一片明亮的天,不会使人感到彷徨。

当你身临暖风拂面,鸟语花香,青山绿水,良田万顷的春景时,一定会陶醉其中;当你面对如金似银,硕果累累的金秋季节时,一定会欣喜不已。你可曾想过,那盎然的春色却是历经严寒洗礼后的英姿,那金秋的美景却是接受酷暑熔炼后的结晶。

人生不售来回票,一旦动身,绝不能复返。

人生的价值,并不是用时间,而是用深度去衡量的。

日子总是像从指尖渡过的细纱,在不经意间悄然滑落。那些往日的忧愁和误用伤,在似水流年的荡涤下随波轻轻地逝去,而留下的欢乐和笑靥就在记忆深处历久弥新。

柔和的阳光斜挂在苍松翠柏不凋的枝叶上,显得那么安静肃穆,绿色的草坪和白色的水泥道貌岸然上,脚步是那么轻起轻落,大家的心中却是那么的激动与思绪波涌。

生活的海洋并不像碧波涟漪的西子湖,随着时间的流动,它时而平静如镜,时而浪花飞溅,时而巨浪冲天……人们在经受大风大浪的考验之后,往往会变得更加坚强。

生活是蜿蜒在山中的小径,坎坷不平,沟崖在侧。摔倒了,要哭就哭吧,怕什么,不心装模作样!这是直率,不是软弱,因为哭一场并不影响赶路,反而能增添一份小心。山花烂漫,景色宜人,如果陶醉了,想笑就笑吧,不心故作矜持!这是直率,不是骄傲,因为笑一次并不影响赶路,反而能增添一份信心。

生命,只要你充分利用,它便是长久的。

盛年不重来,一日难再晨。

使一个人的有限的生命,更加有效,也即等于延长了人的生命。

倘若希望在金色的秋天收获果实,那么在寒意侵人的早春,就该卷起裤腿,去不懈地拓荒、播种、耕耘,直到收获的那一天。

希望源于失望,奋起始于忧患,正如一位诗人所说:有饥饿感受的人一定消化好,有紧迫感受的人一定效率高,有危机感受的人一定进步快。

心灵是一方广袤的天空,它包容着世间的一切;心灵是一片宁静的湖水,偶尔也会泛起阵阵涟漪;心灵是一块皑皑的雪原,它辉映出一个缤纷的世界。

在我们了解什么是生命之前,我们已将它消磨了一半。

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篇14:高考作文指导:记叙文写作

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导语:在写记叙文时,如果要使文字内容更具体,不空泛,一定要把叙述与描写结合起来。那么如何才能结合好呢?我们首先需要了解一下这两者的基本概念和作用。

叙述和描写。是作文中两种不同的表现方式。我们这里说的叙述是指把人的经历行为或事件的发生、发展变化表述出来的一种表达方式,它常常把分散的场景,片断的故事和人物的身世,地位,经历,事迹等贯穿起来。它要求做到头绪清楚,脉络分明,有条有理,重点突出。

在记事、写人、状物的文章中,叙述是不可少的,尤其是在介绍人或事物变化为主的文章中叙述的作用更大,甚至有的文章专以叙述为长。我们本讲选的优秀作文《男班长,女班长》就是一个很好的例子。文章中描写部分很少,介绍事件发展过程的叙述占了很大的篇幅,如开头对男女班长来自何方的介绍,女班长对男班长的观察,正副班长必须合作的现实,以及同学们的揶揄,思想的顾虑,同学开玩笑不断,“收到副班长纸条”,到结尾“男女班长仍然合作着处理班里的事务”。这篇文章用很短的篇幅,以叙述为主,把一波三折的事件按发展轨迹清晰有序地介绍出来。对发展过程虽是梗概地介绍,但文章的思想内涵却非常丰富,也可以说在写法上是比较巧妙的。

叙述在按事件发生发展、人物经历的时间来划分,可以有顺叙,倒叙、插叙、补叙等方式,我们在写文章时,可以根据表达的需要去选择叙述的方式。

描写是对人物,事物和环境所作的具体的描绘和摹写,描写是再现描写对象状态的一种表达方式。描写需要采用绘声绘色的办法,把事物的状貌、神采和动态,具体地、真切地饱含情意地勾画出来。写人要使其声可闻,其容可睹;写物要使之可见,可闻,可触,可感;写景要意境鲜明,使读者产生仿佛置身其间的幻觉。

在我们学过的课文中,传神的描写是很多的。如《天山景物记》中对天山深处的描写,“山色逐渐变得柔嫩,山形也变得柔和,很有一伸手就可以触摸到凝脂似的感觉。这里溪流缓慢,萦绕着每一个山脚,在轻轻荡漾着的溪流的两岸,满是高过马头的野花,红、黄、蓝、白、紫,五彩缤纷,像绵延的织锦那么华丽,象天边的彩霞那么耀眼,像高空的长虹那么绚烂。”这段描写抓住山色、溪流、野花这三种最能表现天山特点的事物,重彩浓墨,绘声绘色地把天山美景表现出来。既能使读者如身临其境,也增添了作品的文采。我们在作文时,如果能恰当地运用描写来表现形象,借以表达某种强烈的思想感情。文章的感染力就一定能有所增强。

叙述和描写在记叙性的文字中都是不可缺少的表现方式。叙述着重于一般情况过程的交待,描写则着重形象的描摹和刻画;如果说叙述是纵的绵延,那么描写便是横的扩展。一篇文字若无叙述,就会显得杂乱无章;没有描写,则会干瘪枯燥,毫无生气可言。

实际上,成功的作品中,常常是叙述与描写交错在一起的。我们所选优秀作文,《奶奶与花》就是叙述与描写交融在一起的,近似于一线串珠式的一篇记叙文。

文中以时间为序,先从小时候家门前有一个很大的“花园”叙述开始,然后再描写人物行为语言、花的形态、气味。从而表现我“深深地爱上花”的过程。接着叙述自己病中见到花的情景,描写花的形态,写出自己感受到“花能给人一种强盛的生命力”。接着是叙述“随着年龄的增长,这种认识愈来愈深”又通过对“死不了”“仙人球”的描写,感悟出“花,让我感到一种无尽的生命力,一种明亮的期望”。第五自然段叙述自己养花的过程。这里又运用描写的方式,描绘出花园的美丽,各种花的特点,表现出花可以陶冶情操的作用。这段描写是比较突出的,描写了花的各种色彩,各种形态,用排比、比喻的手法绘色绘形,有丰富的想象力。为了把文章写得曲折有致,第七段、第八段叙述搬进高层楼房前、后我与奶奶对花的珍爱,对小花园的怀念,这里又有对人物的心理、动作的描写,为“小花园”遭到破坏,我和奶奶沉痛心情做了铺垫。

这篇文章用叙述的方式。介绍了事件发展曲折过程,使文章头绪清楚,脉络分明,重点环节突出。这是文章的一条线。在每个重要环节上,作者都生动形象地描绘了人物的行为、场景、物态,内容丰满。叙述和描写有机地结合在一起,深刻地表达了文章的主题思想,增强文章的感染力。

在作文时,恰当地运用叙述与描写,做到有机结合,要注意以下几点。

一、要熟练掌握叙述与描写的功能,注意二者之间互相依存、互相交通的关系。根据作文内容和思想表达的需要,交错运用。

二、在描写范围比较大、内容比较丰富的地域景物或事物状貌时,(例如《天山景物记》等一些游记式的文章)需要有一条贯穿始终的线索,有一个逐步转移、推进的过程,那么这个线索或过程就要依靠叙述来表现。如我们常讲的“移步换景”的写法,其中对“移步”的交代,往往需要叙述。用时间推移来描写事物或人物的发展变化时,对每个阶段的交代,一般也是要运用叙述来完成的。在这种情况下描写的条理性要依靠叙述来体现。

三、在写故事情节比较强文章时,人物的语言,行动往往是构成情节的重要因素、情节又要依靠叙述来展开,这就需要描写人物语言行动与铺叙故事情节同时进行,也就是说要把叙述故事融化在描写中,或把描写融化在叙述情节中。我们仔细玩味一下作文《奶奶与花》,其中有些地方就是把描写与叙述这样融合在一起的。

我们就应当多选读一些优秀作文或名家的文章,刻意体味一下的相依关系,学习二者的结合形式。使自己的作文能更加条理清晰,情节曲折跌宕,内容丰富有致,更具有感染力。

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篇15:高考阅卷老师最喜欢的英语作文句型整理

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英语写作只要掌握了一定的句型与词量,要写出好作文并不难,下面是语文迷为大家整理的八类写作句型,供大家参考。

一.开头句型

1.As far as ...is/am/are concerned 就……而言

例如:就我而言 As far as I am concerned

2.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......

3.As the proverb says,... 正如谚语所说的,......

4.It has to be noticed that... 必须注意到......

5.Its generally recognized that... 普遍认为......

6.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为......

7.Its hardly that... 这是很难的......

8.Theres no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问,无可否认......

9.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比......更重要。

10.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是…...

二.衔接句型

1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是......

2.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore,... 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……

3.But its a pity that... 但遗憾的是…...

4.In spite of the fact that... 尽管......

5.Further, we hold the opinion that... 此外,我们坚持认为,......

6..However , the difficulty lies in... 然而,困难在于…...

7.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样,我们要注意......

8.As it has been mentioned above... 正如上面所提到的…

9.In this respect,... 从这个角度上,......

10.However, 然而, ...…

三.结尾句型

1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…...

2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... 因此,我们有理由相信…...

3.All things considered= In a word=In conclusion 总而言之

4.It may be safely said that... 它可以有把握地说......

5.Therefore, in my opinion,... 因此,在我看来,......

6.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论...…

7.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that… 通过数据我们得到的结论是,....

8.It can be concluded from the discussion that... 从讨论中我们可以得出......的结论

9.From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来,如果……也许更好

四.举例句型

1.Here is one more example.这里有不止一个例子.

2.Take… for example. 就拿……为例子

五.常用于引言段的句型

1.Some people think that… 有些人认为…...

2.To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说,我不能同意他们的意见,理由如下。

3. I believe the statement is valid because… 我认为这个论点是正确的,因为…...

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我无法完全同意….这一观点的说法.

5. Along with the development of…, more and more... 随着……的发展,越来越多的...…

6.It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that… 通常认为…...

7. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter. 就我而言,我完全同意前者/后者的观点。

六 表示比较和对比的常用句型

1. A is completely different from B. A和B完全不同。

2 The difference between A and B is/lies in... A和B不同的地方是......

七 演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones. 对于......有几个原因,但一般,可以归结为三个主要原因。

2. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题,但下面的可能是最有效的。

3. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说,这些优势可以列举如下。

4.The reasons are as follows. 理由如下。

八 因果推理法常用句型

1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。

2. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。

3. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书,我们已经学到了很多。

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篇16:英语写作经典句式积累

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下面是语文迷网小编为大家整理的英语写作的经典句式,希望对你有帮助。

1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。

11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

12a. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。

14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。

17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否认:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

22. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

在过去的几十年,先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。

23. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上,我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

26. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

从这几年我搜集的信息来看,这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。

27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

现在,人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

28. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.

这是一个关系到生死的问题,任何国家都不能忽视。

29. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

我同意后者,有如下理由:

30. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

在给出我的观点之前,我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

31. This view&nbsnbsp;is now being questioned by more and more people.

这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。

32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展,用自行车的人数会减少,自行车可能会消亡, 然而,这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。

33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

环境学家指出:持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题,而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

34. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

考虑到这些严重的状况,我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。

35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康,并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。

36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

尽管自行车有许多明显的优点,但是它也存在它的问题。

37. Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

在速度和舒适度方面,自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。

38. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:自行车的优点远大于缺点,并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。

39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论,其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。

40. This issue has caused wide public concern.

这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。

41. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.

必须指出学习只能靠自己。

42. A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.

许多人存在这样的误解,认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然,他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。

43. As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:

就我而言,我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点,有以下原因:

44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.

人们普遍认为高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的。

45. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.

即使最优秀的毕业生,要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。

46. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化,近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。

47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。

48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.

一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。

49. For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.

对大多数人来讲,退休以后,阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。

50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.

对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说,找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的,正如那句老话:活到老,学到老

51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.

对于大学或高中生打工这一现象,校园里进行着广泛的争论。

52. By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.

通过做一份和专业相关的工作,学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力,而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。

53. Although people’s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.

近几十年,尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变,但必须承认,由于学费和书费日益飞涨,资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。

54. Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

因此,业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。

55. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.

通过上面的讨论,我们不难得出结论:业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响,我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作,这将有利于学生和他们的家庭,甚至整个社会。

56. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

现在,越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果,无法避免。

57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.

人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。 它们使我们的生活更舒适,减少了大量劳动。

58. At the same time, along with the benefits of such machines, employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.

同时,随着这些机器带给我们的好处,员工们也必须要学习与之相关的知识以便使用它们。

59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.

没有人能否认这一基本事实:对于一般工人来讲,轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。

60. In the second place, there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.

第二方面,失业的人似乎太多而又没有足够的工作岗位。

61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.

成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识,使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。

62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.

根据最近的一项调查,越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。

63. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.

通过以上讨论,我完全相信,随着现代社会的进步,幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。

64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.

近些年,国际旅游的问题引起了广泛关注。

65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.

许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用,应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。

66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.

但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。

67. As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited, for the following reasons:

就我而言,我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制,理由如下:

68. In addition, in order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.

另外,为了吸引旅游者,大量人工设施被修建,这对环境是不利的。

69. For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.

由于缺乏独特的文化,一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此,国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。

70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.

近些年,父母要求他们的孩子接受额外的教育呈增长的势头。

71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.

这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。

72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job&nbsnbsp;markets when they grow up.

许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点,通过学习,他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识,当他们长大后,这些对他们就业是大有好处的。

73. In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.

首先,额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出,孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后,从事一些体育活动,而不是额外的学习,是非常重要的。

74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.

孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期,缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。

75. In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

第二,从心理上讲,大部分孩子似乎对额外的学习没有什么好感。

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篇17:高考英语作文热门话题——运动会

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高中阶段,小编最喜欢的除了放假就是学校开运动会了,因为可以我们可以玩三天!而且还是高质量的玩法。那假如让我写一篇关于体育运动或者运动会的文章呢?呃,这个……让我看看……

Last month we had a sports meeting. Though the weather wasnt very fine that day, the students were all very excited and the whole school was alive.This time, I was even more excited.

上个月,我们学校开了运动会。虽然那天天气并不是非常好,但是同学们都非常兴奋,整个学校一片欢乐的气氛,我更是激动的要命。

Because I went in for the sports meeting and my item was high jump. I didnt want to get any place, I only wanted to enjoy the game because I knew I wasnt good at sports. Joozone.com.

因为我参加了运动会,并且我的项目是跳高。因为我并不擅长于运动,所以我没有想过要取得名次,只想好好的享受比赛。

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When I got to the field with my friend. I was both excited and nervous. When I saw the first height, my heart could hardly heat.

当我和朋友们走进赛区时。我又激动又紧张。当我看到第一个高度时,我的心都快跳爆了。

How high it was! It was higher than our desks. I couldnt believe my eyes. This was too high for me to jump over. I wasnt nervous at that time, while I was a bit afraid. But I had gone there, I must have a try.

好高啊! 比我们课桌都高一大截。我简直不能相信我的眼睛。这让我跳过去,简直太高了。我那时已经不是紧张不安了,取而代之的是害怕。但是我都到这里了,我必须得尝试一下。

Not long after, the game began. The first person was great. He jumped over easily. I was too surprised to say a word. The second was good, too. The third nearly jumped over, but he wasnt bad…

不一会儿,比赛开始了。第一个运动员做的非常好,很容易就跳过去了。我简直惊呆了。第二个也一样顺利完成。第三个刚好越过,但是他不是最差的一个……

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jump. Oh, no! My right foot hit the pole. “I failed.” I thought. And then, another unlucky thing happened.

轮到我了。我深呼一口气跑过去。在杆子前面,我开始跃起。噢,不!我的右脚碰到了杆子。我觉得“我失败了”。但是接下来,更糟糕的事发生了。

I didnt stand firm and I tumbled. I hurt my back badly. At that moment I felt my back was broken. It was too painful. It seemed that the people around field all didnt know that, they only laughed at my foolish posture.

我没有站稳,摔倒了。我的背狠狠的摔了一下。那时我感觉我的背摔坏了。太疼了。我周围的人似乎都不知道发生了什么,他们只是一个劲的笑我愚蠢的姿态。

After a very short rest, I stood up.

休息了一会后,我站了起来。

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我揉揉我疼痛的背红着脸走出了比赛区域。我的朋友跑过来。他问我是否严重。我强忍背部疼痛回答了他的问题。我只摇头。我很沮丧。不仅仅是摔坏了背,更主要的是我不能再继续参加比赛了。我只能观看其他人的比赛,并祝福他们得到一个好名次。

Though I didnt have the whole game. I was still very happy. Because a lot of my

classmates tried their best in the game and they got a lot of good places. They were all best in my eyes. I was thankful to them for doing their best for our class.

虽然我没有能完成比赛。但我依旧很高兴。因为我的同学们都尽其所能的完成比赛,并且都取得了很好的成绩。他们在我眼里是最棒的。我很感谢他们能为班级做出这么大的贡献。

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篇18:高考作文写作高分技巧

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写作的文学底蕴的差距的确是没有办法在短时期内弥补的,但是学生可以用技巧来弥补才华的不足,下面是小编整理的高考作文写作高分技巧,一起来看看!

一:作文要注重真情,把握真实是关键

构思是文章的骨架,内容是血肉,而情感则是神经。阅卷老师认为文章不是无情物,一篇好文章,就应该具有良好的情感态度,换言之,即使文章的内容很平实,但情感却足够真挚,就像朱自清先生的《背影》,同样也能憾人心魄。在考场作文中,写人记事发议论,心中饱藏真情,让现实生活的境与溢出纸外的真情相呼应,则自成佳境。没有情感的境,如同行尸走肉,令人生厌。用真情关照生活,虽一花一草,一人一物,也熠熠生辉!

二:开头结尾要简练,最好首尾两行半

大头作文要不得。除非特殊情况,建议考生在写作文的时候,开头结尾占两行半的格子,顶多不能超过三行半。

三:动笔之前要拟题,漂亮标题如美女

准备题目的办法有2个,你可以去网络上搜索作文题目,归纳作文老师讲述的类似技巧;二是翻阅最近一年的《读者》或《青年文摘》等杂志,根据题材选择一些比较精彩的标题,记下来,也许考试的时候灵光一现可以类比运用。

四:适当克隆和借鉴,考前备课攒信息

考试前,建议考生翻阅大量的范文,积累一些佳作的结构。如果写记叙文,最好翻阅《读者》和《青年文摘》,其中一些散文的结构是很好的,适当对其归纳总结,到考试的时候,你采用别人的筐,把自己的东西向里面装就可以了。

另外要关注去年至今年的社会热点。

五:篇幅争取要写满,多写一点是一点

一般来说,如果作文要求600字左右,那就顶多写到700字。如果是不低于多少字,建议考生合理安排卷面,把卷面写满到95%左右。

有人问:考试作文如果不限文体,那么写诗歌,写顺口溜,写三句半行不行?这个谁也不敢作主,你无法揣测阅卷老师的标准,冒险的收益也许只留给准备最充分的人。

六:动笔之前不要慌,想好题目列提纲

列提纲很关键。比如写记叙文,要设计好开头结尾,同时要把你叙述的事情分成几个层次,中间如果能设置一个过渡句或过渡段更好。

一个训练有素的考生,列提纲大约需要5~8分钟。如果时间紧张,提纲可以简练些。

七:作文成绩看字迹,得分要素是第一

任何形式的作文考试,阅卷老师在打分时,第一眼看的是字迹。因此,必须要把字写好,不需要多美,但一定不要潦草。

八:考试作文五六段,干净整洁看卷面

考试作文要注意分段,三四个段落有些少,八九个段落则显得琐碎。除非有特殊情况,段落应以五六个为好。切忌在一段中写八九行字,写成大肚子作文,这样会让阅卷老师产生视觉疲劳。

九:想好主题和文体,非驴非马不可取

无论记叙文还是议论文,一般来说,多是总分总结构。议论文最好是131或者141结构,当然也可以灵活地采用夹叙夹议的手法。注意,议论文不能说了那么多事例却不归纳主题,而记叙文不能议论过多而忘记说事例。

十:作文首尾要精彩,丰富多彩出亮点

考试作文的开头方法很多:六要素开头法、题记开头法、悬念开头法、引名句开头法、排比句开头法、拟人式开头法、设问式开头法、对偶式开头法、合用修辞开头法、巧述典故开头法、解题式开头法、诗文引用开头法希望考生们准备好一些关于道德、学习、礼仪、爱国、美德等方面的典故、名人名言,用得上。

一般来说,结尾是总结全文。如果是记叙文,要注意抒情;如果是议论文,要注意归纳。无论如何,最好要扣准标题。

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篇19:2024年高考英语写作必备佳句

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1. According to a recent survey, four million people die eachyear from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children haveunpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete withgraduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great effortsshould be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of internationaltourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on constructionof city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, whocomplain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严 重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend muchmore time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。

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篇20:高考作文的写作技巧

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考场的高分作文,在有些考生看来则又是可望而不可及的。下面整理了一些高考作文的写作技巧,希望对大家有所帮助!

一、理顺强化内在逻辑

大考前,应该对自己曾写过的文章进行一次大的梳理。查看与反思一下,特别是是深入高三之后,自己写过的文章内部的思路、逻辑、层次、结构是否都合理,有什么不顺通之处吗,该如何改正呢?如果,上述问题基本做得还好,那么,还应该进一步想一想,有没有更佳的思路与表现的角度?在层次与结构上,还可再作那些完善与突破?

一篇考场佳作,需要把握好段与段之间的内部关系。每一文出,必有其内在的行文逻辑,此逻辑一定要顺达严整,合理自然,不偏不拗,不离不散。高分作文,非常重要的一点,便是文脉清晰,文理畅达。

二、牢固拓展写作内容

无论高考作文如何命题,一般而言,题目控制的是题旨,是方向,对于写作内容往往是不加干预的。择选恰切的自我熟悉的内容构思成文,这是考生的写作自由。这一特点,及体现了新课标的核心理念,也是作文成功备考的关键所在。作文命题的题旨与方向,考生一定是事前未知的,但无论怎样的题旨与方向,都需要充实有效的写作内容来支持;而充实有效的写作内容则一定需要考生提前准备,也必须提前准备。当然,这样的准备,不是讲考试的时候,简单的照搬照抄,考生需要依据题目的具体要求对自我写作内容进行恰当的取舍与整合;而取舍与整合的基础则必须是事先的充分拥有。

拥有,分为两步。一为牢固,一为拓展。高三作文备考,教师很重要的工作就是能够不断激发、牢固、拓展考生的写作内容。这是因为,在某种程度上讲:考场,时间紧,考生,阅历浅,在考场上写出有深刻思想内涵的文章实属不易。因此,高考作文思想内涵之争,就往往容易演化为写作内容之争。

高考写作内容的准备包括哪些重要的方面呢?择其要,概括为9类:生命发现、情怀依依、精神强度、艺术之光、万物有灵、中西对比、生活温度、质疑追问、民族文化。此9类,需要考生重点加以关注。

三、增强完善表达方式

我们常提及的5种表达方式记叙、议论、说明、描写、抒情,是对一个人具有较好表达能力的要求,作文备考过程中于此5种方式不容我们忽视。这5种表达方式,在写作运用中,考生朋友可以有所侧重,有所擅长,但应该有一个基本前提,那便是这5种表达方式应该基本都能运用,没有死结,没有盲点。

一些学校,在备考中,只练议论文;有的考生还错误地认为,议论文可以弥补自己语言表现力不足的问题。这些做法与想法都是有片面性的。选用怎样的表达方式,实际上是依据命题特点而定的,不好刻舟求剑。例如,上海卷曾有一个题目曰我想握住你的手,此题写成严正板直的议论文恐怕就不易。再如2011年重庆卷情有独钟,完全可以写成一篇有较为浓郁的抒情氛围的文字。特别是炼就高分作文,更应该达到5种表达方式均可运用得较为自如的程度。因为,表达方式的恰切选用,对于高考作文命题而言,才可以做到新颖独创,异军突起;而这一点恰好是成就高分作文最主要的一个原因。

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