初中英语作文难忘的旅行【最新20篇】

暑假里的一天，天气炎热，太阳火辣辣的，大地像冒烟似的。

我和家人商量好，今天去“中国第一滩”玩。我们五个小孩，六个大人，开着两台小汽车出发啦！一路上我们几个小孩子特别的兴奋，说说笑笑，打打闹闹的，居然不知不觉就到了“中国第一滩”。

这儿人山人海，人声鼎沸，大家在这尽享风光，在大海远处有小岛和云雾在若隐若现，真想去看看，我们停好了车子在人群中走了过去，终于来到了大海的面前，我一下“呆若木鸡”。

哇，这海，清如白玉，风平浪静，一会有风来，出现小小的浪花，在水中拍打着，发出“哗、哗、哗”的青脆悦耳之声，让人陶醉在这声音之中。那大海、浪花、白云、蓝天在面前构成了一副美丽的图画。那沙滩上金黄金黄的沙子在太阳的照耀下金光闪闪，沙子细小的如同灰尘一样小，摸起来怪舒服的！散在沙子上的贝壳，更让人爱不惜手。我们捡了一大堆贝壳，有尖头的，有圆头的、有扇形、有红的、有蓝的、有绿的、有黄的、有橙的、有黑的、有灰的……颜色各异，形状万千……

这些物品让我大开眼界。‘唉！之前知道的东西真是太少了，这让我知道世界是那样的美好，知识是那样的多！一不留神，又恐怕会神不知鬼不觉的从眼前溜走。

我们又迫不及待的奔入海中游泳，那海浪一次次向我打来，是那么温柔，那么让人陶醉，一个个的浪花打在我身上，无比舒服，但我并不往海的深处游去，因为妈妈说海的深处十分危险，所以不能去。

除了捡贝壳、游泳，我们还跑步、抓木头人、挖沙洞、玩着各种各样的小游戏，大家都开心极了。玩了很久很久，突然，爸爸妈妈说：“我们玩了很久了，太阳也快要下山了，我们回家咯。”时间确实不早了，原来熙熙攘攘的人群不知什么时候已悄悄的变得稀疏了，人们已经开始陆续回家了，看来我们也必须该回家了，真是依依不舍啊！

“中国第一滩”真是太美丽、太好玩了，让人流连忘返……。

一轮明亮的圆月已经高高地挂在天空中，向地上洒下皎洁的月光，像轻纱似的一样温柔。中秋节的月亮十分调皮，一会儿钻进云姐姐的怀里，一会儿和星星谈话，一会儿唱歌跳舞。

很久之前，妈妈说嫌我房间的灯太暗了，在今天中秋节，妈妈给我买了新灯。

中秋节本应该呆在家里赏月的，为什么要出去买灯，天这么热，我一点儿也不想出去。妈妈真麻烦，我迫不得已答应了。

中午，我和妈妈去了东明家居来买灯，我问妈妈“为什么要买灯啊，家里的灯不是好好的吗?”"家里的灯太暗了，你每天晚上写作业都看不到，还要开两个小灯，加起来大大小小一共三个灯，你不觉得麻烦吗，直接换一个新的亮点的灯就好了。"妈妈说道。一进门，一股清凉迎面而来，让人感到很是舒适。来到了卖灯的地方，各种各样款式的都有，一眼望去，金碧辉煌的我一眼就看中了那款圆圆的灯，妈妈也觉得不错，我们就买了它。这让我觉得很是高兴。

回到家，接下来的事就交给我们在家的‘能手’——爸爸来负责安装灯了，爸爸先把所有电源全部关闭，然后把旧的取下来，接着再钻几个小洞在墙上，最后将灯安装上。大功告成，果然是"能手"!

不一会儿到了晚上，到了中秋节最快乐的时光了。妈妈端上了一桌子的好菜，我拿来了无敌美味的咸蛋黄月饼，爸爸打开了电视机。望着头顶的新灯，爸爸十分得意。看着眼前的中秋晚会，主会场是在淮安，我感到很是骄傲，中秋主场会在自己的家乡。往下看一桌的美味佳肴，妈妈笑容满面。我左一口右一口地吃着月饼，把自己的脸吃的活像一个包子!

吃完晚饭了，来点饭后甜点—咸蛋黄月饼。我们拿小刀切开月饼，月饼流出了金黄的蛋黄油，看着就十分有食欲。看看外面的月亮，又大又圆。像头顶上的灯一样明亮。

吃完晚饭，我一个人躺在床上，望着窗外的明月，看着头顶的灯，心中是满满的温暖。

这个中秋，我的家里也多了个小月亮。

The traffic problem is one of themost serious problems in my hometown. Recently, more and more people have privatecar, but the roads are so narrow that we have to fight against the heavytraffic when we go out. Especially during the rush hours, cars and buses areunable to move. To make things worse, many people are killed in the trafficaccidents. How miserable it is!

在我的家乡交通问题是最严重的问题之一。现在越来越多的人拥有私家车，但道路却是如此的狭窄，所以我们出门的时候都必须和交通拥挤对抗。尤其是在繁忙时间段，汽车和公共汽车都动不了。更糟的是，许多人在交通事故中丧生。那是多么悲惨的啊!

For the sake of our life andsecurity, some measures must be taken to change the present situation. In thefirst place, as there are a great many cars, we should control the number ofprivate cars and vehicles and use the public transportation more often.Secondly, the government should widen the roads and build more flyovers, so asto ease the traffic pressure and reduce the traffic accidents. In addition, theundergrounds and light rails should be constructed, so that we can have morechoices when going out and do not have to worry about the traffic jams in thefuture.

为了我们的生命和安全起见，我们必须采取一些措施来改变现状。首先，因为有很多车，所以我们应该控制私家车的数量，更经常使用公共交通工具。其次，政府应该拓宽道路，建造更多的立交桥，以缓解交通压力，减少交通事故的发生。此外，应构建地铁和轻轨，这样我们将来外出时可以有更多的选择也不用不必担心交通堵塞。

I believe the traffic problem couldbe solved if we devote our actions to them.

我相信如果我们采取行动的话交通问题是可以解决的。

If you ask me what my favorite holiday is, I will not hesitate to tell you it is the Lantern Festival. I remember the Lantern Festival last year.

That day I was out of the house, and I was happy. Our family gathered together to make gnocchi. My mother has a good dumpling. The dumplings were white and round, and they looked delicious. How did the name tang yuan come from? My mother told me that it was round and soup, so it was called tangyuan.

At this moment, we can begin to eat dumplings, I like to eat bean paste filling of dumplings, taste sweet, sticky taste good. As soon as I ate, I ate a dozen. Tangyuan, like its name, is round and round. This is a fun day! After dinner, we went home. On the way home, I saw a group of kindergarten children, carrying only a variety of small lanterns, row tidy team in the parade, the lights of the small lantern, the light of the earth as the street was radiant.

As a student, my main target is to study well and then make progress step

by step. When holiday comes, it is time for me to play, and I should be happy,

while playing all the time makes me feel empty in my heart. I have done nothing

at all. I want to do something meaningful to enrich my life. So a target is

needed for me. I set a small goal, such as, read a book, or help my mother with

her work. Everytime when I finish my target, I will feel so satisfied. The

meaningful life is to do something useful and make you feel happy.

去年暑假，我们和表妹全家一起去甘南自驾游。沿途我们走过了许多名胜景区，拉卜楞寺、若尔盖大草原、尕海湿地、扎尕那景区、黄龙……这些景区各有特色，但我还是最喜欢神奇的九寨沟。

九寨沟的清晨似乎来的格外地早，一大早就能看见游客们熙熙攘攘的身影。我们起床吃过早饭，带好行李，就兴高采烈地出发了。一路上，我本来想人不会很多，可是到了沟口才发现结果却恰恰相反。售票大厅外排着像龙一样的长长的队伍，检票口也被游客们堵得水泄不通。经过耐心的等待，我们好不容易才挤进观光车，从景区入口出发了。

我们坐着观光车经过扎如寺、荷叶寨、盆景滩和芦苇海，从火花海站下了车。啊！湖水是蓝绿渐变的，在靠近湖边的浅滩，能看见几棵千年枯树横七竖八地倒了下去，这些都是自然形成的，没有任何污染。平静的湖面像一面大镜子，倒映着蓝天白云和连绵起伏的山峦。远处，太阳光照射着湖面，波光粼粼，一圈圈波纹荡漾着，水是那么清，那么蓝，还有许多小鱼苗欢快地游来游去。

在树正群海和树正瀑布徒步游览后，我们在犀牛海站上了车，来到了著名的诺日朗瀑布。

刚才经过的瀑布上游还是平静的湖面，到下游就立刻变成了气势磅礴的水柱，十分壮观。这可真是“飞流直下三千尺，疑是银河落九天”啊！远看是十分雄伟的大水柱，但走近一看，大水柱里面还隐藏着许多像冰柱一样的小水柱。瀑布的周围飞溅着很多水雾，在距离瀑布最近的栈道上就能感受到，一层层水雾围绕着瀑布飘飘渺渺，朦朦胧胧，好像给瀑布披上了一层轻纱，让人有一种神秘无比的感觉。

夕阳时分，太阳快要落山了，落日的余晖弥漫着整个天边，九寨沟的湖水山色更美了，我们在依依不舍中结束了一天的旅行。

回去的路上，我再次仔细地回味着，感受到九寨沟有两种景观最美，一种是平静的湖面，一种是雄伟的瀑布。因为特殊的地质位置，九寨沟才形成了如此独特的自然环境，真是美不胜收啊！

注：神奇的九寨沟美景不必多言，九寨沟口以及旁边的乡已经发展成国际化旅游商业中心了，接待量最高上限4。1万人。据新闻报道，我们去的那天几乎达到了峰值，3万8千多人。由于九寨沟三条线路总长达98公里，三百辆公交观光车从早上7点一直运行到下午6点多，司机师傅们辛苦了！

“唉，下节课就是英语课了，怎么办呀？昨天教的英语歌我还不会唱呢！”我愁眉苦脸地坐在位子上。

“叮铃铃……”上课的铃声打响了，对其他人来说，这铃声也许很正常，可是对于我来说呢，简直就是世界末日。

“请同学们打开课本，翻到26页，把这些英语单词跟我念一遍。”同学们都很轻松地念着，我却在那里紧张地鹦鹉学舌。

“好了，现在我来检查昨天要求唱的英语歌，谁会唱，举起手！”大家都飞快地举起了手，我像被针扎了一样，无精打采地看着书本，心里暗暗说着：“千万别让我唱啊！”

真是怕什么有什么，老师偏偏叫上了我，我的心更沉重了，只好慢吞吞地站起来，吞吞吐吐地说：“老师，我……我不会唱。”让我惊讶的是老师不但没有批评我，而且夸奖了我：“敢于承认，就是好孩子，我让大家再给你唱一遍英语歌，你可要记住了啊！”我不禁流下了两滴热泪。

经过这次教训，我下定决心，一定要把英语成绩提高上去。

Now, many encyclopedias, such as: "hundred thousand whys", the mystery of

the world "and so on a wide variety, all kinds of books can give us many

benefits, our world is so vast, some things in the world, and books have,

encyclopedia like" dumb teachers diligently teach us knowledge. Visible, how

useful book! Also, we learn knowledge also want to use in our daily life, to be

accurate and determine whether to do so, the right to enrich our knowledge, the

outside is good for our healthy growth. You said, a lot of the benefits of

reading?

Nowadays, more and more of the books in the library, we should also learn

to read and appreciate books, should put the book back on the in situ after the

play, not just throw the place. Also, we must find a give us the knowledge of

books to read, dont look at those who are not good for our growth.

In short, the benefits of reading. Come on! Let us to soar in the sky of

knowledge fully!

望着窗外茫茫的雾霾，我心里沉沉的。不知怎么的，突然回想起那清澈的天与蔚蓝的海。

今年寒假，我在海南三亚经历了一次难忘旅行，在这里体会到了的与众不同的“炎热的冬天”。炎热的冬天？听到这个，聪明的你就要发问了。是的，只有在三亚这个神奇的地方才可以实现这不可思议的梦。

这里天蓝蓝海蓝蓝，天空上飘着软绵绵好似棉花糖的云朵，全然见不到家乡那雾霾围城的景象。太阳放射出七彩的光，沙滩上金黄的沙子北折射的金光闪闪。远远望去，广阔无垠的大海似乎没有边。几棵椰子树上挂着圆圆的椰子，懒懒地垂在海边。阳光、沙滩、海浪好一派南国风光！

三亚是以旅游闻名世界的，这里的旅游景点当然更是美不胜收了。亚龙湾是这里数一数二的景点。这里的海水仿佛更蓝，沙更细更白。赤脚漫步在暖暖的沙滩上，感受着海水打在脚上的清凉。已经忘了此时还是冬天。海水像一个调皮的孩子，当人们“侵占”她的沙滩是，她便将软软的海浪送到人们身边与人们玩耍。贝壳是她的玩具，礁石是她的发饰。这美景不禁让我窃喜：哇哈！终于逃过了雾霾的追捕！

“请到天涯海角来，这里四季花常在……”伴随着动听的歌声，来到了传说中的天涯海角。奇形怪状的礁石成了这里一道独特的风景线。人们给这些礁石起了形象的名字：有的像花苞，名为“花苞石”；有的像一条从海里跃起的“鱼跃石”……还有很多形态各异的石头。有一块天然形成的巨石，是这里最出名的景点了。上面刻“天涯”两字，引来很多游人拍照。可是，“海角”哪去了？抬头一看，原来“海角”在上面呀！难怪有人找不到它呢。

天色渐渐暗下来了，陪伴了我们一天的太阳慢慢向海里游去。在只剩下几速光时，海面映成了金黄色，我被这美景吸引了。“咔嚓”一声将它定格在相机里，也定格在我心里。不知怎的，看到这样的美景心里会有淡淡的忧伤。我想，如果我的家乡西安好好保护环境，一定可以变得与这里一样美。我下定决心，要号召身边的人一起加入保护环境的行列中，让我们的家乡更美好！

Recently, I saw an interested video that was shot by a young foreigner. He

played two roles-a Chinese mother and an American mother. He imitated the

reaction about how the mothers treated their children in education. It was so

obvious that Chinese mothers took care of their children all the time and they

would do all the things for them. While the American mothers focused on the

childrens independence. They would ask the kids to do housework and when they

grew up, they asked the kids to move out. Both parents showed different ways to

love their children and their love was equal, for every mother is a great

heroine.

I was so excited that night. When you do your homework, you have to go to the light meeting. Mom had no choice but to take me. There are lanterns, rabbit lights, monkey lights, chicken lights, and lotus lanterns... They shine in the moonlight, and my eyes are dazzled. The streets were decorated with lights and decorated. By the way, there are not only all kinds of colorful lights, but also colorful neon lights.

Shopping arcade etc.service, brand stores to attract a lot of customers, the store down the street a wide variety of goods, uncle have to wear a suit, the aunt wear jewelry, and kids love to eat ice-sugar gourd and pearl milk tea. People came to the street in high spirits to watch the night scenes.

I seemed to enter the world of man and lamp.

My Plan for Winter Holiday

How time flies. This term ends quickly and the winter holiday is coming. I make a general plan for it. Firstly, my teachers leave us some homework, so I must earnestly finish them on time. I plan to finish them before the Spring Festival, and then I can enjoy the festival with all my heart. Secondly, I will spend some time with my friends. Generally, we study together but have little time to play. During the holiday, we want to have fun together. Finally, I will visit my grandparents with my parents, and then we will spend the Spring Festival with them. I haven’t seen them for a long time. I miss them very much. This is my winter holiday plan. What is yours?

The teacher set up the summer homework. Good guy, that damned language

teacher actually call us to the 4th grade the old poem famous quote to copy 8

times! By this time, the roof of the classroom was "overturned". The students

were Shouting at each other. I myself comfort myself: nothing, dont copy 8

times, the big deal I make quick, still do not change plan.

Another day after that, my classmate xiao sheng called me to study

taekwondo with her. After the family discussed, I decided to let me go to

school. Then the cousin called again and said, "hello, yueyue, stay for a few

days during the summer vacation! I will teach you to draw pictures, by the way!"

"Really? Thats great! I must come!" By this time, I had forgotten to plan and

threw it out of the clouds.

When I look at the schedule, I have found that I am completely filled with

the schedule and time is not enough. How to do? Only a little bit of time... But

in comparison, none of them are free. That how to do? Can only be changed. What

better? Well, I only had a three-hour nap to learn taekwondo... That way, my

summer vacation will be "ample". What a bad summer!

你听说过苍耳冒险的故事吗？有一天，有两只互相看不顺眼的苍耳在一次冒险中相遇了，它们开始了暗中的较量。一只想要过河，另一只就要更快的过河；一只要附在猫背上唱歌，另一只就要附在猫背上更大声的唱歌。

当我听到这个故事的时候，心中不免吃了一惊，这说的不就是我和小A吗？我们从幼儿园就认识了，在那个时候，我们就比谁的朋友多，谁的成绩好，谁受到老师的表扬最多……而现在我们却又相遇在了一起，刚见到我，她就狠狠地说：“等着瞧吧，我一定会比你厉害，哼！”而我也一样不甘示弱，就这样，我们开始了暗中的较量。

在跑步比赛中，她为了战胜我，不惜自己的体力消耗，跑得一定要比我快；在考试过程中，她努力埋头苦做，为了不受影响；在课堂上，我们也互不相让，努力回答问题。可我们知道，最重要的是这次期末考试。为此，我们从气势和实力的双重作用下打击对方。可也就是在那一次考试中，也让我正确地认识到了她······

而在那一次考试中，我因为一次疏忽而输给了她，倍受打击的我躲在一个角落里默默地哭泣，这是有一个人递给了我纸巾，并说：“你不应该哭。”我抬起了头，发现这个人竟然是小A，我很惊讶，在我最难过的时候，安慰我的竟然是自己的对手。顿时心中暖流涌出，眼泪更是止不住的往下流。小A轻轻点着我的额头说：“还哭，再哭你就变得难看了。”我破涕为笑。

我又想起了那个结局：后来，两只小苍耳再一次较量中紧紧地扎在了一起，在冒险旅途中，两只带刺的苍耳紧紧地拥抱着……这就像我和小A，虽然我们在较量，但是我们的真挚友情不会变！

[陪另一只苍耳去旅行初中作文

这真是个坏天气，天空灰蒙蒙的，天气异常闷热，花草树木都耷拉着脑袋，显得垂头丧气，毫无生机。天上没有一只鸟，也许都已经在巢里了吧，云朵层层堆积着，似乎要压下来，看到这些，我便知道要下雨了，于是背着书包迅速往家跑。

总算跑到家了，我一边喘气，一边打开书包翻找拿钥匙，伸手摸了摸书包，咦？怎么没有？我把书包每个口袋都拉开来仔细翻找，钥匙却依旧毫无踪迹，最后我把书包整个倒着提溜起来，把书包里的所有东西都倒了出来，却连钥匙的半点影子都没有看到，准是落家里了。

我叹了口气，无奈地望着门，手机也没有带，没法向妈妈说明这件事，只能在这儿干等了。这可不行，我还有作业没写完。我急得像热锅上的蚂蚁，不断挠着头，跺着脚团团转，脑子里一片空白，“到底该怎么办呀？”我唉呀地叫着，10分钟过去了，15分钟过去了，20分钟过去了。事情依旧没解决，也不见任何一个人回来。我的心里如同装着一只兔子，“砰砰”直跳。我已经浪费了20分钟，可不能再浪费时间了。虽然急得要死，但我的理智告诉我着急解决不了任何事，于是我坐在了一旁的楼梯上，渐渐冷静下来，继而沉着地转动着我的脑袋。

忽然，一个想法从我脑中浮现：小区里还住着我的同学，我可以去同学家写作业，再向他借电话打给妈妈，让她来接我。我顶着雨来到同学家，与他讲述了原因，他便让我进屋写作业，我用他的手机打了电话，妈妈表扬我很机智并说下班回来接我。晚上，我写完了作业，不舍地与同学告别，和妈妈一起回家了。

这真是与众不同的一天，这真是一段难忘的经历，因为它让我明白了一个道理：着急解决不了问题，一定要保持沉着冷静。

一次难忘的旅行，在新年的第一天，每个人都知道去拜访亲戚朋友。事实上，拜访亲戚朋友也是一次旅行。

“抓，抓……”鞭炮在耳边回响，我们踏上了回家的旅程。

新年的第一天，我们回到了家乡，在笑声中，我们回到了我们一整天都在想的家乡。在我们的家乡，我们家乡的气氛是如此浓厚，“啊，我们回来了”我们忍不住说。事实上，我们的家乡经常萦绕在我们的心头，并经常提醒我们。今天，我们终于回来了。

新年的第一天，我们拜访亲戚朋友。顺便说一下，我们给我们最喜欢的-新年的钱，"新年的钱，新年的钱"。这时，一群孩子将得到新年的钱，但我们只是跟在后面（我们现在都很大了吗，没有他们那么兴奋）。收到我们自己的红包后，我们应该去拜访我们的亲戚朋友。虽然我们不多给钱，但我们也很开心。

现在，我不知道为什么新年的味道正在消退。今年，我不知道为什么，我也不想过新年。

我说:事实上，我不知道为什么，认识多年的老朋友只在新年的第一天见面。也许当前的高科技太先进了，不能坐在家里用微信和QQ和朋友聊天。然而，我仍然觉得我应该多锻炼，多和老朋友聊天来增进我的感情，对吗？

My name is Beth. Im 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of

Hangzhou. My school is very big and beautiful. Im very happy in the school.

I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the

playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers

in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my

classmates.

We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like

all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My

favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak

English with many other students there. Its very interesting and exciting. I

think its helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play

games with my friends. We play soccer ball,basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and

so on. They are very relaxing.

I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school.

I find my school life more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is

wonderful, isnt it?

关于五一假期的英语作文

In this holiday l was very happy.Why? Because my famliy go to Beijing.We saw Tiananmen.The sky was blue ,Tiananmen was red and yello.It is very nice.Then I played with my mother and father in Xiangshan.In the afteroon we went to Yuanmingyuan.

Look at Yuangmingyuan, I was very sad.In the evering we ate some litto food.

Beijing was very big.I love it very much.

Ching Ming festival is a traditional Chinese festival, has a history of two

thousand five hundred years; Its main traditional cultural activities are:

grave, outing, cockfighting, swing, play mat, pull hook, tug-of-war), etc. The

members (the grave), is very old. Tomb-sweeping day, as a traditional culture,

it is a full of mysterious colorific festival, on this day, the pedestrians on

the road are missing people who died, to express their respect and grief!

Ching Ming festival, in hainan many locals call it the "qingming festival".

Middle age the qingming festival is very important, if not as a legal holiday,

they will also take time to go home "qingming festival". This suggests that the

qingming festival has become a culture, become a man of the late express a way

of missing loved ones.

Qingming festival, is a kind of Chinese traditional culture recognition and

respect. Qingming festival is very important in the ancient tradition of a

festival, is also the most important festival of festivals, was the day of

ancestor worship and the grave. This grave, the shrine of the dead an activity.

The han nationality and some minority are mostly in the tombs. According to the

old tradition, the grave, people to carry goods such as especially fruit, paper

money to the grave, will be food for offering in the family tomb, then paper

incineration, new soil up to the grave, fold a few branches pale green branches

ed in the grave, and then salute kowtow worship, finally eat especially home.

The tang dynasty poet tu mus poem "qingming" : "rains fall heavily as qingming

comes, and passers-by with lowered spirits go. Restaurant where? Boy pointed

apricot blossom village." Write the tomb-sweeping day is special atmosphere.

Until today, tomb-sweeping day ancestor worship, mourning the late relatives

customs still prevail. And the more brought to the attention of the people.

Chinese is influenced by its culture, make clear the Chinese memorial

ancestors festival. Ancestor worship in qingming festival people are back, this

is a kind of culture, a kind of habit.

说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的，如：自然环境，仪表设备等；也可以是抽象的，如概念定律等。以下是小编整理的初中英语说明文写作要点，欢迎阅读！

说明文的写作相对于论说文来说，有一定的套路可循，因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然，随着对象的不同，具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。

说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点：

1.语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，避免夸张华丽的辞藻，要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。

2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多，但不能喧宾夺主。

3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚，脉络明晰。因此，练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作，找出最合理的一种。

4.由于说明文写实性较强，有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此，可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段，来增加文章的色彩。

下面是一篇说明一所医院布局的文章。文章虽短，但需要说明的内容却达11处之多。平均一句话就要描写一处，如果组织得不好，便会给人凌乱的感觉。

为了避免这一点，文章把整个布局图分三部分来写：

贯彻医院的是main road，第一部分以大门为参照物，介绍了靠大门且通过main road东西相对的急诊楼和门诊楼。

第二部分以湖为参照物，中心线还是main road，介绍其他分诊楼、实验室、放射室等。

第三部分写main road尽头的建筑物。

这样，繁多的细节显得井井有条。因此，选择好主线及参照物是决定文章成功的关键。

Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about“THE LAYOUT OF A HOSPITAL”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the information given below.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.

（1）the Emergency Department

（2）the Out-patient Department

（3）the Surgery Department

（4）the Dispensary

（5）the Physician Department

（6）the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department

（7）the Dental Department

（8）the Laboratory

（9）the X-ray Department

（10）the Administrative Building

（11）the Ward

例文：

The Layout of a Hospital Near the gate，on the westside of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary，which face the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall，from south to north，stand three buildings：the Physician Department，the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department，and the Dental Department.

The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about，and beside the Laboratory，the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road. A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.

Near the end of the Main Road，the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.

When winter comes, the topic of haze will never be ignored. When it comes,

many pictures will be showed. People make fun of these pictures and they

actually laugh at themselves, living with these poison air. Even in the daytime,

people can’t see their faces beyond 10 meters. Many schools choose to stop the

class and let the students stay at home. It is obvious that haze is a great

threat to people’s health. This new type of destruction is the result of

polluted environment. Businessmen chase for the profit and take the cost of

polluting the environment. Now their offspring have to suffer from it. It is

never too late to do something to protect our earth.