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初中暑假英语作文:mylife

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I study in XX middle school. My school is very big and beautiful.

I often get up atX.00 a.m. Ten minute later I have my breakfast. Our classes begin at X.00 a.m. we have eight lessons every day. I often have Chinese,English and Maths lessons in the morning. I go home for lunch at about X.00 p.m. From X.XX to X.XX p.m, we have other lessons like Geography, History, Biology, Political and PE.

I don’t like play basketball,football and pingpang. But I like run.

I very like English and Computer lessons. English is very important. It is very hard to learn. Computer lesson is very interesting.

My school life is very colorful.

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篇1:保护环境英语作文初中

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"Green" the eternal topic, let us better to understand the importance of

environmental protection.

Green environmental protection is to make us live a happy life in a clean

environment, however, the environment around us in a worse if we dont alarm,

then, our motherland will be a mess in our hands! Green environmental protection

starts from me. My dad used to drive his car to work, listen to my advice, to

protect the environment, he ride a bike from now on, he thought that not only

the exercise of his body, also for the green environmental protection.

My mother began to contribute to the green environmental protection. Before

she went to vegetable market to buy food, she used plastic bags, a village green

environmental protection propaganda on TV, she understood the green

environmental protection is sustainable, in order to we can have a better

environment. In order to we live healthier lives, so mom from that moment on,

every day go to vegetable market with the own basket, instead of plastic

bags.

As a new era of junior middle school students, and I will response to the

green environmental protection call for, I had at school are all use one off

chopsticks, but now I can bring their own chopsticks to school. I think, though

this is a small matter, but I do my responsibility.

Happiness of life to let China land everyone be permeated with happy smile,

rich products, long history, noble quality, the plot environment. Nowadays, the

environment is polluted, the green environmental protection starts from me, let

us together to protect the environment!

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篇2:初中生暑假英语日记怎么写

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My Family

My family includes three people and a pet. These three people are my father, my mother , and I. I also have a cat named cookie.

My father is hardworking and playful. He rus a small business at home. He is very busy, but he always s firnds the time to cook dinner and help me with homework. Although he is strict at times, he can also be playful and funny.

My mother is caring and hardworking, too. She’s a chemist and often works very late. Nevertheless, she is always there to take care of me. Though her expectations for me are very high. I know she only wants what’s best for me.

My cat, cookie, is a member of my family, too. She is a cute black and white cat. At times I find her eager to play. But usually she’s sleeping on the sofa. I never know what surprises she’ll bring next.

I consider myself very lucky to come from such a loving family. A family like mine should never be taken for granted. I love my family.

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篇3:初中英语作文:嘈杂的声音

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I am primary school now, this is my second year, in order to focus more on my study, I live in school now, I will go home on the weekend. Our school is under construction lately, the workers are doing their work in the daytime, the machines make out large noise, I can’t focus my mind on the study.

That’s not the worse situation, when I take a nap in the afternoon, the machines are still working, I can’t sleep. So when I wake up, my head is not well working, I want to sleep all the day.

The school should limit the time for the workers, they should stop working during the snap time for school. It will be reasonable for students.

我现在在上初中,这是我在学校的第二年,为了地集中精力学习,我现在住在学校,我会在周末回家。我们学校最近正在修建,工人在白天开工,机器发出很大的噪音,我不能集中精力学习。这不是最坏的情况,当我在中午休息的时候,机器仍然在运转,我无法入睡。所以当我起来的时候,我的头脑无法好好的思考,我整天想要睡觉。学校应该限制工人的时间,他们应该在午休时候停止工作。这对学生来说才是合理的。

[初中英语作文:嘈杂声音

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篇4:初中英语满分

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My favorite cartoon film is "Kung Fu Panda".Because its very funny and

interesting.The story was great and the background was beautiful, it really felt

like an ancient Chinese city.So many people like it.In this cartoon movie the

character who I most like is the panda Arab League valuable.Because it not only

unusual lovable and annoys the human to like, moreover is this cartoon movies

lead .But I did not deny that other roles also very much annoy the affection,

for example tigress (Angelina Jolie), viper (Lucy Liu), praying mantis (Seth

Rogen), hoist crane (David cross) and monkey (Jackie Chan).I from this cartoon

movie middle school: Each people have the merit and the shortcoming, perhaps you

only know your shortcoming, so long as but you look diligently, also will

discover that oneself will have the merit.

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篇5:网购初中英语作文

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Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.

However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.

In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.

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网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了,等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时,它通常每天开放24小时。

然而,网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时,许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会,分享购物的乐趣。

总之,我们应该好好利用网络购物。

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篇6:描写怀念初中作文500字

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又路过你的窗前,那灯光还那么熟悉地亮着,你是否在这缓缓的灯光里,怀念着我?

还记得这温柔的灯光下你不知所措的神态,那爱我却又不敢说出的羞涩,那份不知该如何表达的朴实,和那种一直让我割舍不断的坦然和正直。真喜欢那个卖玫瑰的小男孩,当接过你从他手中买的玫瑰的时候,我仿佛突然变得很美丽,那份自信的感觉久久不逝。在你第一次注入情感的目光里,我依稀找到了回家的路。

许是秋风吹走了我的温柔,或是秋风的荆棘刺痛了你,你带着伤在我浩瀚的情感浪潮中消失。从此,你坚毅的背影任多么皎洁的月光也唤不回来。再也听不到你叮叮咚咚的钥匙声了,你的气息已飘逝在风里,离我远去

从不敢告诉你我的思念。思念时,只有拿出那枝已枯萎的玫瑰,在花瓣中找寻你真挚的初恋,但愿你还记得,那,是我。

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篇7:端午怀念屈原诗歌

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为了纪念一个远古的英雄

先民们创造出了这个节日

还发明了棕子

那棕子里包裹着岁月人生

让我们品味

有时候会怀念那个赛龙舟的时候

一伙人站在高墙上

看着河道中百舟竞渡

每家门前依旧悬着菖蒲

依旧挂着艾草

耳朵脑门上依旧会被涂上了雄黄

可是有些习俗我们只是变的习惯

那远古的传说还有谁记住?

棕子还是那么香甜,这节日还是飘散着五味草的味道

记忆悠悠的回到童年

脖子上挂着一串网兜

网中挂着一串蛋...

初一吃糕,

初二吃粽,

初三吃螺,

初四插艾挂蒲,

初五抹雄黄

也许远古那旧日的传说已经暗淡的时候

在沿海一个我的家乡

还保留着所有古时的习俗

一些东西经过岁月沉淀

依然在我们的生活中..

端午是为了纪念一个楚国人

也是为了纪念一种不屈

现在这种精神渐渐少了

我们也会渐渐的忘记了节日本身的味道

只记得那种闹热了...

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篇8:初中英语作文mydreamjob

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there are various kinds of jobs in the world, but different people are attracted by different jobs because everyone has his own interest and destination, many people consider an ideal job as a means of making more money and living more comfortably, it may sound reasonable because money is the foundation of life.

as far as my ideal job is concerned, i think i want to be a psychologist, i have made up my mind to do what i really want to so that i can realize my ideal, i believe interest is of the utmost importance in choosing a job, i have been interested in psychology for a long time, so i want to be a psychologist in the future, i think being a psychologist can help lots of people lead a happier life.

however, it isnt easy for me to become a qualified psychologist and many people around me think that its unrealistic to me. nevertheless, ill make every effort to gain much more knowledge, patience, methods, etc. to live up to the name of a qualified psychologist. i believe my dream will come true someday.

世界上有各种各样的工作,但是不同的人不同的工作所吸引,因为每个人都有自己的兴趣和目标,许多人认为一个理想的工作,赚更多的钱和活得更舒服些,这也许听起来合理因为钱是生活的基础。

我的理想工作而言,我认为我想成为一名心理学家,我已经下定决心去做我真正想要的,这样我就可以实现我的理想,我相信兴趣是至关重要的在选择一份工作,我对心理学很感兴趣很长一段时间,所以我想成为一名心理学家在未来,我想成为一个心理学家可以帮助很多人过上更幸福的生活。

但是,它对于我来说并不是很容易的成为一个合格的心理学家和我周围的许多人认为,它对我来说是不现实的。不过,我会尽一切努力来获得更多的知识、耐心、方法等,一个合格的心理学家的名字。我相信我的梦想总有一天会成真。

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篇9::初中写秋雨的英语作文

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Autumn came, marching with golden brown leaves paved the carpet, quietly came to my side, no sound, no shadow, people unpredictable.

Autumn, no summer warm surging, no winter snow wrapped, no spring full of vitality. Autumn, only a touch of light, a touch of fantastic atmosphere.

Spring is the season of the poets; summer, the season of the girls; winter, the childrens season. And autumn and autumn who is the season? I said: autumn is the season of farmers, is the harvest season, is the dream of the season.

Autumn is the season of rain. Autumn rain is not as delicate as the rain so light, but also has its unique charm. As the saying goes: "a autumn rain a cold," it is true, autumn rain, what is the next few days, the rain drip, dripping in the hands of the ice, with an inexplicable chill, the distance Of the mountain children are dyed gray. Hold up a small flower umbrella, walking in the rain, watching the rain dripping from the umbrella, stroking slightly cold air, this is an alternative to enjoy.

Autumn is the season of leaves. Look at the original green tree leaves from the green into a yellow, was the autumn wind blowing, and even jump to jump, as butterflies generally beat the child fell down. Leaves the roots, the leaves of children who flew to the feet of the mother, into the dust, moisten the soil, so the end of their own short and full of life.

Looking at the leaves, looking at the rain, I can not help but lament: autumn, you are not spring full of vitality, but you have, is a spring does not have, different beauty!

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篇10:积极面对挫折初中英语

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As we all know, "Failure is the mother of success." But few people can really understand what the saying means.

In the world, I am sure that no one dare say he hasnt met any trouble all his life. So we must face failure. In fact, failure is not fearful, but important thing is how to face it correctly. Facing failure, people will never take their fate lying down.They will try their best to work harder and harder until at last they succeed.

Not being courageous to face setbacks, people have no chance to enjoy the pleasure of success. So they have nothing to do but feel sad and empty all day and all night. In fact, they lose the chance of success themselves.

My friend, whenever in trouble, please remember, "Failure is the mother of success."

我们都知道,“失败是成功之母。“但真正理解这句话的人却不多。

在世界上,我相信没有人敢说他一生没有遇到任何麻烦。所以我们必须面对失败。事实上,失败并不可怕,但重要的是如何正确地面对它。面对失败,人们将不再由命运摆布。他们会尽最大努力辛勤工作,直到最后他们成功。

不勇敢面对挫折,人就没有机会享受成功的快乐。所以他们无关但感到悲伤和空日夜兼程。事实上,他们失去了成功的机会。

我的朋友,每当遇到了麻烦,请记住,“失败是成功之母。”

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篇11:初中好词好句摘抄

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1、在那翠绿的荷叶丛中,一枝枝亭亭玉立的荷花,像一个个披着轻纱在湖上沐浴的仙光。

2、阳光照在波光细细的湖面上,像给水面铺上了一层闪闪发光的碎银,又像被揉皱了的绿缎。

3、朝阳下,碧绿的树丛中,一颗颗,一串串的龙眼像一个个胖乎乎的小顽童,咧着小嘴欢笑。

4、山楂开始红了,像一个个怕羞的小姑娘,躲躲藏藏地露出半个脸儿。

5、樱桃花如白云般一笼笼地罩住了寨子。

6、到秋天,深红的柿子,像一树火焰,让你惊叹。

7、一朵朵鲜红的石榴花挂在树上,把石榴树打扮得像含羞的少女。

8、石榴果实老熟时,裂开一口,露出珍珠玛瑙般的种子,好像少女嫣然一笑的皓齿。

9、高高的椰子树像一把太阳伞,总是向海倾斜着,微微地弯着腰。

10、他那红嘟嘟地脸蛋闪着光亮,像九月里熟透地苹果一样。

11、她的脸上有一双带着稚气的、被长长的睫毛装饰起来的美丽的眼睛,就像两粒水晶葡萄。

12、疲倦的月亮躲进了云层休息,只留下几颗星星像是在放哨。

13、月亮斜挂在天空,笑盈盈的,星星挤满了银河,眨巴着眼睛。

14、一轮圆月升起来了,像一盏明灯,高悬在天幕上。

15、月亮睁大眼睛,和蔼地望着村落和田野,极像一只擦亮的铜盘。

16、圆月渐渐升高,她那银盘似的脸,流露着柔和的笑容。

17、明净似的圆月,已经被远方蓝蓝的高山托上天空。

18、月亮,圆圆的,像纺车,纺着她浪漫的遐思。

19、夜,静极了,玉盘似的满月在云中穿行,淡淡的月光洒向大地。

20、一轮杏黄色的满月,悄悄从山嘴处爬出来,把倒影投入湖水中。

21、满月像个黄黄的灯笼,从东方天边挑起在天空。

22、夜晚,满月升起来了,一片宁静随着银雾般的月光洒在大地上。

23、月亮渐渐升高,她身着白色的纱衣,娴静而安详,温柔而大方。她那银盘似的脸,透过柳梢,留下温和的笑容。

24、月亮像一个新娶来的媳妇,刚刚从东天边上来,就又羞答答地钻进树叶子里藏起来。

25、月亮像饱经风霜的老人,不紧不慢地梳理着白花花的月光。

26、月亮像一个含羞的少女,一会儿躲进云间,一会儿又撩开面纱,露出娇容,整个世界都被月色浸成了梦幻般的银灰色。

27、月亮是那么明亮,把大地照得一片雪青,树木、房屋、街道都像镀上了一层水银似的。

28、门外西边的林梢,挂着的上弦月已经变成一片金色的西瓜,不再是一条弯弯的眉毛。

29、清晨,残月像一块失去了光泽的鹅卵石,抛在天边。

30、一枚新月好像一朵白色梨花,宁静地开放在浅蓝色的天空中。

31、夜空挂满了星星,月亮像一只钓鱼的小船,仿佛航行在宽阔的银色的长河里。

32、月亮像一张弓,弯弯地挂在天空。

33、一钩新月从远处的林子里升了起来,它那样白净,就像刚炼过的银子似的。

34、一弯新月像一把银打的镰刀,从黑黝黝的山峰上伸了出来。

35、一弯新月升起来了,像只玉琢的香蕉嵌在天幕上,漾着碧辉。

36、一弯新月宛如一叶小舟,翘着尖尖的船头,在深夜的静湖中划行,给我送来一片情思。

37、一弯新月高高挂在墨蓝色的天空,清澈如水的光辉普照着大地。

38、新月如一只金色的小舟泊在疏疏的枝桠间。

39、天空中出现了一道彩虹,宛如一座彩桥悬在上空、

40、我们的学校就像一个大花园,多么美丽,多么可爱,我们在这里茁壮成长。

41、校园里有迷人的四季:桃红柳绿的春天,花繁叶茂的夏天,枫红菊香的秋天,松青雪白的冬天。

42、东方天边的彩霞时刻在变幻,如霜枫,如榴火,如玛瑙,如琥珀。

43、西湖像一块碧玉,一面铜镜。

44、星星像一双双明亮的眼睛在夜空中闪烁。

45、小姑娘的心灵像雪花一样纯洁。

46、水仙花很漂亮,像一位站在小河边的少女。

47、春天像位爱美的姑娘,让世界姹紫嫣红、

48、春天是位魔法师,她融化了冰雪,让小草破土而出、

49、春天是一首美妙的乐曲,让世界充满生机;

50、春天是一只快乐的小鸟,让世界充满活力;

51、春天是一个优美的舞蹈,让世界充满微笑。

52、母亲像明亮的太阳,让我心中温暖。

53、母亲像温和的阳光,让我满怀期望。

54、母亲像参天的大树,让我感觉凉爽。

55、母亲像鼓起航帆,让我顺利的到达彼岸。

56、母亲像点燃的蜡烛,让我看到光明。

57、玉盘似的明月高挂在淡蓝色的天空中,月光像流水一样泻下来,大地一片银白色。

58、月亮默默的从江心升起来了,圆圆的、亮晶晶的,好像一个银盘。

59、春风像一只彩笔,把整个世界勾勒得更加绚丽多彩。

60、个慈祥的母亲,拂着你的脸颊,使你感到舒畅,心旷神怡。

61、花越开越密,越开越盛,不久便挂满了枝头。走近看,仿佛是一个个活泼的小喇叭,正鼓着劲儿在吹呢。

62、西湖,就是镶嵌在这天堂里的一颗明珠。

63、幸福是染色的画笔,能染红鲜花,也能染绿树叶;能给清澈的湖水染上透明的质感,也能给纯洁的心灵涂抹一层辉煌。

64、这一朵朵菊花,远看像一个个色彩鲜艳的绣球,近抚好似一匹匹细腻的丝绸。

65、天上的云像连绵的峰峦,像湍急的河流,像威武的雄狮,像奔腾的骏马。

66、远处的霓虹灯亮了,像一道亮丽的彩虹,像仙女飘舞的裙带,像一座七彩小桥,像一朵朵耀眼,绚丽的云。

67、春天到了,大地变成了一片绿毯。

68、一艘银灰色的气垫船,像一匹纯种烈马,在金波粼粼的海面上飞掠而过。

69、远远望去,泰山峰上的松树连成一片,浓浓的,看上去就像人的颧骨上横着的一道剑眉。

70、鹅毛,像芦花,像棉絮的大雪降落下来。

71、岸边的华灯倒映在湖中,宛如颗颗宝石缀在湖面之上。

72、北极星像盏指路灯一样挂在天空。

73、小河清澈见底,如同一条透明的蓝绸子,静静地躺在大地的怀抱里。

74、岸边的华灯倒映在湖中,宛如颗颗宝石缀在湖面之上。

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篇12:关于我的家乡英语作文初中

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When I return to my hometown on holidays, I will be very excited, because

it is the place that I love so much. The trees are so green and the sky is so

blue. When I play on the river side, I can catch fish. I grow up there and have

a happy time with my dear friends. I will never forget the beautiful scenery

there.

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篇13:关于描写大海的初中英语作文

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The first go to the seaside Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!

The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus.

Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious.

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篇14:初中英语日记

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20XX.X.X 晴

Today is August 5. I have to study at home in the morning. In the afternoon, I first learned two hours after the acquisition, and then I turned on the computer. In the evening, I and my parents together go to the seaside to swim, I still had to drink a few mouth water.

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篇15:初中英语作文大全之我的喜好

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我们每个人都有着不同的爱好,下面老师就为同学们带来一篇关于我的喜好的范文,供同学们写作参考。

Dear friend,

My name is Wang Lin . Now I live in Hangzhou , China. I want to find a pen pal in England. I’m now 14 years old . I speak Chinese .And I can speak a little English. I like sports ,swimming is my favorite . I also like playing the computer games . My favorite subject in school is math. I like to

go to movies with my friends. My favorite movie is Beauty and Beast . Now I live with my parents .

Can you write to me soon ?

Wang Lin

我们也许会喜欢唱歌,也许会喜欢跳舞,也有可能喜欢看书,但都有一个共同的特点,那就是我们都有自己喜欢的东西。

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篇16:初中英语作文旅游

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Since the National Day is coming, I will have a long vacation. I decided to take 5 days from 1st to 5th visiting Beijing. I would like to make a plan first. I will go to Beijing by train because it is safer and cheaper. On the first day, I am going to visit the Summer Palace. On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall. On the third day, I will get up early and go to Tian ‘an Men Square to see the flag rising. Then, I will visit the Peking University and Qinghua University. I am dreaming for entering one of these two universities. On the fourth day, I am going to visit the National Stadium. The last day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center, which also called “Water Cube”. A wonderful trip, do you agree?

[初中英语作文旅游

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篇17:初中英语作文春节

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The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in our country. Every Spring Festival, people always want to paste Fu characters, couplets, firecrackers. You see, every family has a decorated, the scene bursting with happiness.

Our family is no exception. I picked up a pair of spring couplets, stuck the glue on the door and put it neatly. Dad will "blessing" upside down on the door. Her sister was also busy in the room. She picked up a few red lanterns and hung them in the room, and put a bunch of small colored lights on the wall. The small color lights flicker like a small star in the blink of an eye.

"The year" the sound of firecrackers, the new year has passed. I love fireworks and love the Spring Festival more.

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篇18:初中英语作文大全

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This is my first impression of Mr.Lu Xun.He was "Head-bowed as a willing

ox" day and night to change the destiny of the nation rather busy.Frail,he was

literary giant.Mr.Lu Xun humor,and no lack of cordial.He hated the dark as the

devil,but a lot of the benefit of others,to play down their own.In my opinion,he

is ordinary and great people!There is a sub-heat,made a spectrophotometry."Mr.Lu

Xun,Lu Xun article will always be the history of Chinas most dazzling bright

light.

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篇19:初中英语满分

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I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my

study.I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano,

surfing the Internet.

One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many

years,since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time but also,

more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can

learn a lot.Reading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading

Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I

come back to the old time of China.

Reading really affect my life.

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篇20:初中期末英语作文的写作技巧

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对于我们农村地区的学生来说,英语写作非常困难。尤其在每一次的英语考试中,英语写作题型总是必不可少的,小编收集了初中期末英语作文的写作技巧,欢迎阅读。

一、学生写作过程中出现的现状

1.词汇量太少

词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想,必须以足够的词汇量为基础,但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非等。

语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中,所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。

2.词汇错误较多

学生在写作的时候,中式英语Chinglish :如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误:错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确,缺乏重点句型的使用:如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语,后转化为英语,可能他想到了句子该怎样写,句型也知道的,但却有个别单词不会。如:“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了,句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道,但里面的形容词difficult不会写,导致句子表达含糊,以至于整篇文章错词百出,面目全非。

3.写出的长句达不到表达效果

一般的英语应试作文,总会给出汉语提示,学生写作也是从提示上入手,有的提示意思较长,所以学生写的时候会直接翻译,但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力,导致整个句子错误。

4.听力较弱影响写作能力

我们所面临的是一群农村学生,他们没有特别好的条件练习听力,每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上,听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过:“不写没有读过的语言,不读没有说

的语言,不说没有听过的语言”。很明显,通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。

5.单词书写不规范,卷面书写较乱

对于大多数学生来说,格式、大小写、标点,书写不规范:句首字母大写不注意,使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如:After he went back home. He cooked supper.,考试时把单词写整齐的很少,学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分,虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以,但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数,而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐,写作得分也不是很低。

二、提高写作的方法

1.词汇的积累

初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。

同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况,通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过,由于课程的时间安排问题,测试的工作开展较少,这也是实验工作中的一个不足。

2.熟练记住单词

( 1.) 巩固单词拼写,培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一,有话想说,无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此,我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词,掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心,写出该词的不同形式或词性,组成典型的句型,从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时,不但要写出其过去式过去分词died,而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句,如:The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时,可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥,但很有必要,它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上,可向学生提出稍高的要求,如写出高质量的句子: What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ,too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落,围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用,能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组,特别是能够熟练的运用词组,能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句,只要学生将句子表达清楚,语意连贯,就是一篇好的英语文章。

3.熟练使用简单句

简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些,可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥,也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章,要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件,只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚,而没有遗漏,在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯,那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。

4.加强听力训练,促进写作

目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是:事先提出每课生词,教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后,第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容,并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置,星期一用课堂时间,教师将该文念一、二遍,让学生听写,教师收上来查阅,加以评讲。通过这种训练,提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。

5.书写规范,促进写作

关于书写的卷面整洁与否,字体如何,是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差,很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得,这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中,应坚持要求学生书写规范,写好匀笔斜体行书,注意连写,以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式,让全班同学都参加英语书法评比,从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣,养成良好的书写习惯。

综上所述,在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读是不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。

比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。

美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”,即:阅读能够促进写作,因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得,从大量的阅读中获取的,阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully,but also aloud,and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书,它是写作的基础。

阅读对写作固然重要,但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视,英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践,正如学习游泳一样,写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,因为课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的,而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能,而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。

此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要,应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样,可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记,教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题,如奥运会、环境保护等,让学生在课外习作。

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