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小学寒假80字英语日记

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January 18 2014

It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special.

I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

[小学寒假80字英语日记

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篇1:小学三年级关于旅游的英语作文

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The summer vacation, we came to the star mountain tourism scenic area, visit the lotus with a history of more than two thousand years. It with "artificial didnt mean to take the tico" known for its magnificent spectacle.

: I want to go the lianhua is visit "view of the sea goddess of mercy", isnt it? View the sea goddess of mercy guanyin statue as high as 40. 88 m, is the foil (bo2) gold statue of the world. High overhead, her good-natured, overlooking (kan3) the long steps under her feet, the love is aspersed to the earth. And I was looking up at the sight of the long stairs, thinking: this... If we ascend the stairs, that should be able to see that a piece of vacant land of the gods? We walked around the sea goddess of mercy, it whole body is golden, standing on a lotus flower stage, high about three stories tall, give a person the feeling of soaring coast.

Then we came to next to the clock bell in line. Its my turn to bell, I hold the wood hard against the clock, big bronze "dong -" a deafening noise. Then I thought: if a man got into the clock in it, let me knock the clock, that this much fun? He doesnt have to sit on swing can swing a!

In halfway up the hill, I saw countless lush trees and flowers. To look down the hill, the sea, river, lake, etc. In this state, the people were amazed, and very comfortable, and looked around to long standing, and want to sit down and whisper a little poem magnificent.

Lotus in the cool breeze, fresh air, and the beautiful scenery, I regretted leaving!

暑假,我们来到了莲花山旅游风景区,参观这个具有两千多年历史的莲花山。它以“人工无意夺天工”的奇景奇观闻名于世。

我想:去莲花山就不能不看望“观海观音”了吧?观海观音观音铜像高达40。88M,是目前箔(bo2)金铜像的世界之最。她慈眉善目,高高在上,俯瞰(kan3)她脚底下的那长长的台阶,把慈爱洒向人间。而我则是仰望着眼前的那长长的台阶,心里想着:这…如果我们拾级而上,那应该可以见到那一片空灵的神明之地了吧?我们绕着观海观音走,它全身都是金色,站在高高的莲花台上,大约有3层楼高,给人高耸如云的感觉。

接着我们来到大钟的旁边排队敲钟。轮到我敲钟的时候,我抱着木头用力向大钟撞去,大铜钟“咚——”地发出震耳欲聋的响声。这时我想:如果一个人钻进大钟里去的话,让我敲一下钟的话,那该多好玩呀?他不用坐在秋千上也能荡秋千一了!

到了半山腰,我看到了数不清的繁茂的大树和花草。再向山下眺望,海、江水、湖等映入眼帘。在这种境界,既使人惊叹,又叫人舒服,既想久立四望,又想坐下低吟一首奇丽的小诗。

莲花山那凉爽的微风,清新的空气,还有那美丽的景色,使我留连忘返!

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篇2:小学生一件高兴的事英语作文

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In the things I have experienced, a lot of things are like rain, and soon disappeared, and only one thing is to make me excited.

That day, I went to the school to get a transcript, when the teacher announced my grades, my heart mentioned the throat, and other teachers say my grades, I scared almost dizzy. "Tian Zi Tong mathematics 99 points, language 106." When the teacher finished, the students for my results sounded a warm applause, because I was in our class count students, ranked on the top ten, and some in the upper Students are ranked below ten.

So, I heard the teachers announcement, tears. School, I am happy to hum the ditty, the tree like a bird singing for me, butterflies like to dance for me, the sun is very bright, like the light for me, I am happy that even the North can not find the , The name of all forgotten.

Come back home with my parents talking about my happy reason, my mother laughed from ear to ear, my father rewarded me ten yuan bonus, grandmother put up the thumb, grandfather said: "grandchildren really powerful, really furious. Tell me: "You go to the house to see the reward it!" I thought: "What will be rewarded? Can you be me?" I dumbfounded into the house, Wow! This is my dream computer And the computer desk! Solid wood computer desk with a black computer, how to see with, I am really happy, really want to jump to the universe at once.

This day is the happiest thing in my experience.

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篇3:小学英语作文60字翻译

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I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

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篇4:小学六年级英语写一封信

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To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered(订购)a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

Lookingforward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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篇5:小学英语字母和写作的学习方法

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英语字母教学作为英语学习的基础,是小学英语教学中重要一环,这一阶段的教学,教师应给予足够的重视,通过各种教学组织形式使这一阶段的学习得以很好的落实。学好26个字母对以后单词的学习起着至关重要的作用。因此,在学习字母阶段,我们要利用一切可利用的资源,创设情境,让学生和字母交朋友、做游戏。

一、字母读音教学

1. 注重示范发音的正确性

字母发音直接影响着学生单词的发音,而且学生错误的发音一旦形成就很难再纠正。因此教师在教学字母之前一定要多听录音,纠正好自己的发音。在课堂教学中教师要让学生听磁带跟读,观察他们的口形,并鼓励模仿得好的学生示范领读,帮助其他同学纠正发音。

2. 把握学生的发音难点

受各地方方言的影响,学生对字母的发音往往会出错。比如:南方人容易把A读成/e/。因此,教师要把握好学生方言发音难点,预先采取各种教学方法防止错误发音的出现。

3. 强化个别字母教学

尽管许多学生对字母有了一定程度的掌握,但大多数学生都没有进行过系统的字母学习,中间难免存在着许多似是而非的现象。例如学生对GgJj两个字母的读音容易混淆,对Uu和Ii这两个字母的发音不到位。教师在教学中应针对这种情况加强这几个字母的训练。

4. 注重读音归类教学

把字母按读音进行分类是字母读音教学的一个重要任务,也是学生觉得有一定难度的一项内容。为了使学生能更好得掌握,教师可采用分家游戏的方法,按家族将26个字母进行分类记忆。首先将字母划分为七个家族,再对号入座,最终编成一首音素家族chant 帮助学生记忆:

A、H、J、K 是A 家族,A,A是族长。

E的家族有八位,BCDE,GPTV,E,E是族长。

/e/ 的家族没有族长,它的成员有七位,FLMN,SX 和Z。

U 的家族有三位,UQW,U,U是族长。

I 的家族有两位,IY,I,I是族长。(手势指着自己)

R 和O单独住,它们自己是族长。

5. 注重语音暗线的铺垫

在三年级下册学生用书中,字母读音和字母例词的安排是一条语音暗线,教师教学时要努力让学生掌握字母的正确读音,并初步感知字母在例词中的读音,为以后学习语音奠定基础。比如讲到字母Ee时,例词是egg,elepghant,教师可突出字母E的发音。英语有48个国际音标,如果学生能在学习 26个字母的同时掌握与此相关的26个音素,将会为以后的语音学习打好基础。

二、字母书写教学

字母的书写过程要一步步进行:先观察性状,再观察笔顺、占格情况,然后书空,使用活动手册进行描红,最后达到仿写。

1. 字母认读的教学

字母的书写首先要求学生能正确区分一些形近的字母。有些字母可以通过猜谜的方法让学生记住它们的形状特点。例如:弯弯的月牙(C)、一条小蛇 (S)、三叉路口(T)、1加3(B)、一座宝塔(A)、胜利的象征(V)、大号鱼钩(J)、一张弓(D)、一扇小门(n)、一棵小苗(r)、一把椅子 (h)。这些谜语既能让学生记住字母的形,又能激发学生的学习兴趣。同时,还可以让学生自编谜语学习字母,充分发挥学生的想象能力。另外,还可以将字母的一部份遮住,让学生根据漏出来部分来猜字母。

2. 字母书写的教学

字母的书写是小学生的一个薄弱环节。小学的英语书写一定要求学生做到严格遵照书写规范,教师绝对不能马虎。因为英语字母有印刷体和书写体之分,所以容易使学生在书写时发生混淆,教师在教学时应多在这方面进行强调。

(1)笔顺教学

教师要充分利用多媒体设施让学生仔细观察字母的笔画和笔顺。正确的笔顺在活动手册的描红练习中有正确的示范。但有时学生会受到汉语拼音笔顺的影响,错误书写字母,因此教师要对容易出错的笔顺进行比较细致的指导。如i和j都是后加点,t先写钩,H先两竖等。建议教师不妨采用汉语拼音的教法,使用一些形象的比喻,帮助学生理解记忆书写规则,防止笔画出错。比如:H是一双筷子拴根线,j是海豹顶皮球,i是小海狮头上顶个球,t是伞把带开关等。

(2)格式教学

字母的占格同样是字母书写教学中的一个教学难点,尤其是当字母的大小写混在一起的时候,学生很容易混淆。这样,教师要先清楚示范,提醒学生注意并总结字母占格的规律。同时,教师还可以借助儿歌帮助学生掌握字母的占格规律。如:英语书写,四线三格,大写字母一二格,上不顶线是原则;小写字母认准格,上面有 ‘辫’一二格,下面有‘尾’二三格,无‘辫’无‘尾’中间格;i,t中上一格半。在学生掌握了字母的占格规律后,还要通过活动手册上的描红来加强练习。这里要注意的是,到一定阶段的时候,教师要让学生能在没有四线格的一条线上,甚至是没有任何线的白纸上也能正确地表示出字母的书写格式。

三、操练

字母操练我们还可以采用游戏的形式。

1. What’s missing?游戏

学了几个字母以后,把字母卡片放在一起让学生认读,然后抽去其中的一张,让学生寻找:What’s missing?此时,学生注意力高度集中,急于表现自己,识记的效果就会很好。

2. 左邻右舍游戏

学生准备好已经学过的字母卡片,教师出示一个字母,让学生找出它的左邻右舍,请找到的几个学生快速把字母拿到讲台上站在相应的位置上,其余的学生一起认读这几个字母。

3. Make letters游戏

让学生用肢体动作表示不同的字母,或让学生用火柴棒拼出不同字母的形状。

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篇6:小学生一年级英语作文:我的老师Myteather

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Our art teather is not too young and not too old .She has black hair two big and black eyes ,a big mouth and a small nose .

Look, She is wearing a blue and white jacket ,a blue hat ,brown pants and a pair of old shoes.She is very funny.

She is a good art teather .we all like her .

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篇7:小学生关于学习的英语作文

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Learning is a thing that is different from person to person, some people think is very simple, but some people find it difficult. Actually both learning, also want to the learners perseverance, perseverance.

Learning the language is crucial, because it is the foundation of our language, learned it can communicate with people. We must learn the textbook knowledge, strengthen project training; Also widely read reference books, we accumulate good word and apply it to practice.

Math is a good learning attitude, also have good method to learn; The first thing we have to develop mathematical operation ability in the book, stage. To emotional stability calculation, see clear writing again, try to be a success; Maths is no shortcut to ensure the quantity and quality of to solve the problem is the only way to learn mathematics.

To learn English, the first to develop interest in English. "Interest is the best teacher", interest is the driving force for learning English, with interest, learning will get twice the result with half the effort. Many people think its difficult to memorizing words, read aloud, and my experience is mouth pen to write on the paper. Do these memorizing words is very simple.

These experiences are my experience enrichment, hope to get everyones approval. And I a lifetime together.

学习是一件因人而异的东西,有些人觉得很简单,而有些人却觉得很难。其实学习既要方法,也要学习者的恒心、毅力。

学习语文至关重要,因为它是我们语言的基础,学会了它才能与人进行交流。我们必须学好课本上的知识,加强习作训练;还要广泛阅读课外书物,积累好词好句并把它运用到实际行动中。

学习数学一是学习态度得好,还得有好学习方法;我们首先得在书中阶段培养数学运算能力。算题时要情绪稳定,看清楚再下笔,尽量做到一便成功;学数学没有捷径可走,保证做题的数量和质量是学好数学的必经之路。

英语,首先要培养对英语的兴趣。“兴趣是最好的老师”,兴趣是学习英语的巨大动力,有了兴趣,学习就会事半功倍。很多人认为背单词难,而我的经验就是口中大声的读,用笔在纸上写。做到这些背单词就很简单了。

这些经验是我经验的浓缩,希望得到大家的认可。和我一起受益终生。

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篇8:小学4年级英语写一封信

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22 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I understand your well-respected college offers a number of places to overseas students every year, and I am writing to enquire about the application procedure.

I am at present a student at Mary High School, Hong Kong, where I have been studying for the past five years. I passed the Hong Kong Certificate of Education Examination last year with distinctions in English and History, and credits in Economics and English Literature. My advanced-level subjects are History, Economics and English Literature. In addition to these subjects, "Use of English" is also a compulsory subject because a pass in English is a minimum requirement for admission to most faculties of the University of Hong Kong.

Apart from academic work, I have been actively involved in extra-curricular activities. I am Chairman of the English Club and I have represented my school in many inter-school contests.

On the advice of my friends, I have decided to further my studies in England because I wish to widen my horizons and benefit from the scholarly heritage of your country.

I wish to continue to study the above-mentioned subjects at your college in the 2006/7 academic year before I sit the Advanced-level Examinations in England.

As regards my character, Mrs. Chen, my Principal, and Mr. Huang, my English master, have agreed to act as my references.

As I come from a family of fairly limited means, I would like to know if there is any financial assistance available for overseas students.

Attached is a summary of my qualifications for your reference.

I should be grateful if you would kindly consider my application and notify me of the result at your earliest convenience.

Should you require any further information, please feel free to contact me or my references.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

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篇9:小学五年级优秀英语作文_我的朋友

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As the saying goes, "depend on parents at home, out by friends". Yes, a friend will always help us, they grow in the happy together with us.

Lady cut with the same short hair, but the bang clip together, a quiet, laughing eyes narrowed into a little man who is it? Yes, she is my good friend -- Ye Zichao.

Because live nearly, so often play together, became inseparable friends.

One Saturday, I go with Ye Zichao learn Chinese calligraphy. Originally we are talking and laughing as always together, can the, my depression, without a word. Ye Zichao stopped "whats wrong with you?" "No, nothing." "You cant full me, quick say!" "Well, I tell you. Last week learning interest class, to learn, be scolded by the teacher, I cant." Im going to cry, a BiSuan, tears in her eyes. But she said: "its okay, like to learn calligraphy, there are no pains, no gains! Which teachers dont want their students study well? The teacher is good for you!" I keep back the tears, blinked my eyes a little red. She added: "thats ok, take it easy, a cake, just be careful. Dont be sad, go, go learn Chinese calligraphy."

I was impressed with this thing, because it is a classmate of my concern, concern is a good friend to me. I listened to her, think shes right, which the teacher didnt want their students to learn well, as long as I work hard, will bear fruit.

Look! This is my good friend Ye Zichao. She is so concerned about friends, I wish our friendship last forever...

俗话说,“在家靠父母,出门靠朋友”。没错,朋友会时时帮助我们,她们跟我们一起在快乐中成长。

剪着淑女一样的短发,却把刘海夹起来,一个文文静静,笑起来眼睛却眯成一条缝的人是谁?对,她就是我的好朋友——叶子超。

因为家住得近,所以经常一起玩,成了形影不离的朋友。

一个星期六,我和叶子超一起去学毛笔字。原来我们一起走时总又说又笑,可那次,我闷闷不乐,一言不发。叶子超停下了脚步“你怎么了?”“没,没什么。”“你满不了我的,快说呀!”“好吧,我告诉你。上个星期学兴趣班,没学好,被老师骂了一顿,我真不敢去了。”我快哭了,一阵鼻酸,眼泪到了眼眶里。可她却说:“没事的,就像学毛笔字,有付出才有收获呀!哪个老师不希望自己的学生学习好呢?老师是为你好呀!”我忍住眼泪,眨了眨我那有点儿红的眼睛。 她又说:”没事,放松点儿,一个兴趣班嘛,只要认真点就好了。别难过了,走,学毛笔字去。”

这件事我印象深刻,因为那是同学对我的关心,是一个好朋友对我的关心。我听了她的话,觉得她说的对,哪个老师不希望自己的学生学习好呀,只要我努力,必会结出硕果的。

瞧!这就是我的好朋友叶子超。她是那么关心朋友,真希望我们的友谊永远持续下去......

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篇10:小学英语作文暑假计划

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导语:暑假即将来临,你有什么计划吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

I am in six grade now next term I am going to middle school so the coming vacation is my last summer vacation in primary school. It is so special to me. I plan to spend it with my friends we want to take part in the summer camp to have close access to the nature. I am so excited now I think we will have a good time.

我的暑假

我现在上六年级下学期我要去上中学了接下来的假期是我小学的最后一个暑假。它对我来说是如此的特别。我和我的朋友打算参加夏令营接近自然。我现在太兴奋了我认为我们将有一个美好的时光。

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篇11:小学生写人英语作文:我的爸爸

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My father is long with a pair of bright eyes, high nose, wearing a pair of thick glasses, laughing very cute, like a rubber doll. However, the raw gas is very terrible. I remember one time, I would not play the piano, my father gave me a teachers shelf, his eyes staring round, fingertips almost to my nose, and said angrily: "You in the end is playing, or Do not play? "Looks like only ready to eat sheep wolf.

My dad is a teacher, he loves to learn. Every morning, after eating breakfast, began to read English. He usually did not work against the computer, that is, reading, but also wrote a lot of books.

Dad usually likes to tell me jokes, often amused me laughing. Do not know when he gave his students class, will not this?

Dad went to exercise every afternoon, sometimes running, sometimes skating, sometimes at home doing sit-ups, and sometimes as my sports equipment, lifted it!

I love my dad, no matter what I am, I will not change my father.

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篇12:小学英语日记:属于我们的生活

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导语:写日记可以提高文学素养,完善文学功底,帮助写一手好文章。希望同学们以后也养成用英语写日记的习惯。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语日记作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later, we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.

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我已经休息了一个星期。我开始觉得无聊。所以,我和我的朋友一起出去。他们是我中学最好的朋友。我们没有去的地方特别。我们刚才看到的。我们共进午餐。虽然我们吃午饭,我们仍然谈论新学校和新朋友。是!一年后,我们已经发展成熟。我们学到了很多东西,得到更多的新生活。我们还没有足够的时间来浪费。我们只有两年。两年来的时候,我们将得到真正的属于我们的生活。

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篇13:关于秋天英语作文小学

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Everyone have their own favorite season. Someone loves the spring the most,

while other one loves winter.The one who like summer might for its hot weather

and they can enjoy the ice-cream, while the autumn fans might love the sky

floating leaves.For me, I love the four seasons equally, I cannot tell which one

i love the most, because all of them have the special reason that makes me

adored them.

Spring is a wonderful season to celebrate rebirth and new life. When it

comes to spring, everything looks so full of vigor. The grass out from the land,

the branches grow new leaves, and the colorful flowers show up everywhere, all

of this beautiful scenery makes people feel encouraged and reborn.

Summer is a magnificent season, which bring warm to us, letting us wave for

it and releasing the passion. Summer is an exuberant season that always makes

people have stirrings to do something. Also, thinks to summer that makes

swimming and surfing much funnier and the ice-cream taste more delicious.

Autumn, fruit is fragrance and fruit. Autumn is the season of harvest, fall

chrysanthemums spit release each other, and a thriving scene. Autumn is the only

season that we could see the leaves flying in the sky. And it is especially

important for Chinese; one of a day of autumn which called mid-autumn festival

brings family together and enjoys happy family reunion.

Winter is a season makes people feel sad and cold, but a warm, toasty house

may feel great in the winter, that is the only charm that other season doesnt

have. Nothing is greater on a cold day than a hearty hot bowl of soup. Moreover,

we can make a snowman and have snow high in winter.

Every season has its own lovely charm, I love them all.

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篇14:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法

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一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:

(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。

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篇15:小学一年级英语作文:我的英国朋友MyEnglishfriend

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My English friend name is Jim.

HE is ten years old, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.He has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend .Several days later Jim said that he wanted, he said that i love China .I will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .Ok see you Jim.see you.

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篇16:小学五年级英语作文myschoolday

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I get up at 6 o clock in the morning, then I wash my face, brush my teeth. In a hurry after breakfast, I in mothers car to school. It will take us half an hour to get to school.

We have four classes in the morning. I have my lunch in my grandparents house, because they are closer from the school.

Proceed in the afternoon after school, then we clean the classroom.

I went home about 5:30. We have supper at seven o clock. I do my homework after supper. If I finish the homework earlier, I can watch TV for half an hour. I sleep half past nine or ten o clock.

我早晨六点起床,然后我洗脸、刷牙。匆匆吃完早饭,我坐妈妈的车上学。我们要用半个多小时才能到达学校。

我们上午上四节课。我在爷爷奶奶家吃午饭,因为他们家离学校更近些。

下午上两节课后就放学了,然后我们打扫教室。

我大约五点半到家。我们七点吃晚饭。晚饭后我做作业。如果我完成作业早一些,我可以看半小时电视。我九点半或十点睡觉。

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篇17:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on

the fifth day of the fifth month according to the

Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat

races to celebrate it.

The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the

southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. It ís very popular.

The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat

different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.

And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is

said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.

Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!

端午节,又称端午节,是庆祝第五个月的第五天,根据中国的农历。人们总是吃粽子和赛龙舟来庆祝它。

该节是最知名的龙舟比赛,尤其是在有很多河流和湖泊的南部地区。它很受欢迎的。

粽子是由糯米饭,肉类等。你可以品尝不同种类的粽子。它们很好吃。

龙舟节是屈原。他是一个诚实的大臣已承诺在溺水自杀河。

总的来说,端午节是非常有趣的!

端午节的英语小学作文带翻译15

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on

the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. This

festival is to commemorate the death of QU Yuan, an upright and honest poet and

statesman who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a

river.

The most important activity of this festival is the Dragon Boat races. It

symbolizes people‘s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. In the current period, these

races also demonstrate the virtues of cooperation and teamwork.

Besides, the festival has also been marked by eating zong zi (glutinous

rice)。 Zong zi is made of glutinous rice stuffed with different fillings and

wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves. People who mourned the death of Qu threw Zong

zi into the river to feed his ghost every year.

With the changes of the times, the memorial turns to be a time for

protection from evil and disease for the rest of year. People will hang healthy

herbs on the front door to clear the bad luck of the house. Although the

significance of the festival might be different with the past, it still gives

the observer an opportunity to glimpse a part of the rich Chinese cultural

heritage.

端午节,又称为端午节,定在第五个月的第五天据中国日历。这个节日是为了纪念屈原的死,一个忠厚老实的诗人和政治家据说在河流溺水自杀。

这个节日最重要的活动是龙舟竞赛。它象征着人们的努力救屈原。在当前时期,这些比赛也证明合作和团队合作的优点。

此外,节日还被吃的粽子(糯米)。粽子是糯米做的塞满了不同的馅料包在竹叶或芦苇叶。人哀悼屈原的死亡把粽子扔进河里喂他的鬼魂。

随着时代的变化,纪念转向防止邪恶和疾病是一个时间的。人们会把健康的草药挂在前门清理房子的坏运气。虽然这个节日的意义可能与过去不同,它仍然使观察者看到的机会丰富的中国文化遗产的一部分。

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篇18:小学四年级英语作文:我房前的树

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The Tree in Front of My House 我房前的

There is a tall tree in front of my house. I love it very much. When spring comes, the thick leaves make the tree beautiful and lively. And in summer, my parents and I often sit under the big tree and enjoy the cool air.

But when autumn comes, the leaves will turn yelow, and fall from the tree. And then, it stands there in the cold wind alone. I am sad, too.

Mother tells me the tree wil grow bigger and taller in the coming spring. I feel happy again.

[小学四年级英语作文:我房前的树

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篇19:小学五年级关于国庆节英语作文

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Today is October 1st, the annual National Day again.

National Day seven days off, some people traveling to some rest at home, they are also in a shu Lin, it is difficult to come out. Early in the morning I and my mother went shopping, I saw on the street is crowded, people as the tide came from all directions on the street, many places with flags, flags fluttering with the wind, beautiful. Everywhere showing a festival atmosphere.

Every time my birthday, mom and dad wish I could grow up healthy, happy. Today is mothers birthday, I wish the motherland prosperous, more and more powerful.

I also want to remind you: a festival when many cars, more must pay attention to safety when crossing the street, but also to do the red light stop, green line.

今天是十月一日,一年一度的国庆节又到了。

国庆节放七天长假,有的人外出旅游去了,有的人在家里休息,有的人则还在一片书林中,难以走出来。一大早我就和妈妈去逛街了,只见马路上是人山人海,人们如潮水般地从四面八方来到了大街上,许多地方插着彩旗,彩旗随风飘动着,漂亮极了。到处呈现出节日里热闹的气氛。

每次我过生日的时候,爸爸、妈妈都祝愿我能健康、快乐的成长。今天是祖国母亲的生日,我祝愿祖国繁荣昌盛,越来越强大。

我还要提醒大家:过节日的时候人多车也多,过马路的时候一定要注意安全,而且还要做到红灯停,绿灯行。

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篇20:假期有趣的事小学生英语

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Today, as I have nothing to do, my father decides to take me to the gym. There are people playing all kinds of sports. I see my father play badminton and he teaches me how to play. It is so easy for me to learn, after a while, I can play with my father. I fall in love with this sport, I will play it on the weekend.

今天,当我无事可做的时候, 爸爸决定带我去健身房。人们在玩各种各样的运动。我看到我的父亲在打羽毛球,他教我怎么玩。这对我来说很容易学习,过了一会后,我可以和父亲一起打。我爱上了这项运动,我会在周末去玩。

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