介绍自己的同桌英语作文带翻译汇编20篇

我，大大的脑袋，一张圆圆的脸上镶嵌着一双水灵灵的眼睛，乌黑的头发显得格外精神。我身材不高也不低，但我很健康。

你知道我么？我的名字叫朱逸轩，这个名字是爸爸翻遍了字典才取下来的。逸轩是奔放洒脱气宇轩昂的意思，这个名字寄托了父母对我的希望，不过拆开来的话逸是安逸｀舒适，轩在古代本意是车子，合起来就是安逸｀舒适的车子，怎么样，有趣吧？

不过，我要告诉你，我很粗心。就拿这次期末考试来说，数学错的两道题一道是草纸上算对了，抄上去的时候写错了，另一道竟然是忘了做，够粗心的吧！

但我也有优点。我是个音乐发烧友，每天音乐都伴随着我，你听＂雪绒花，雪绒花 ，清早你向我盛开……＂是谁在唱？是我。＂池塘边的榕树上知了在声声的叫着夏天……＂是谁的吉他弹唱？还是我。

我还爱看书，妈妈说我是个超级小书虫。每得到一本书我总是废寝忘食，非得一口气看完才罢休。中午放学乘饭未上桌前争分夺秒的看，午睡时偷偷躲在被窝里看，走在路上看，坐在车上看……我经常陶醉在书的世界中。这不，暑假来了，我又全身心地扎进书的海洋。拼命汲取知识的营养。

这就是我，一个虽然粗心但是酷爱音乐并且爱看书的小男孩。

dear eric,

HuangMei is my hometown. It is in the East in HuBei.It is East on the city named AnQing of AnHui.And it is south to the city named JiuJiang of JiangXi. It is a great city in my heart.It has a long history for about 1800 years in China .Example .The temple named SiZu and WuZu were in HuangMei for a long years-old.Today,Every year many visitor come different part to there.As a daughter from Huangmei.I leaved it away for about seven years. But I miss it everyday .Even in a lot of my dream in the night .I belive HuangMei will be richer and richer .The new year 2009 will going .Tonight I hope everything will be well in my new 26 years-old.All my friends will be well.I must work hard in the new year.I will be ain growth as my hometown .

1小作者是一个很勇敢的女孩，爱骑自行车(我欣喜若狂，打算长大以后参加奥运会，为了这个目标，我一定会更加努力，因为我相信“有志者事竟成”!)，骑车的水平也非常高!

2这篇习作的开篇非常具有吸引力(这一个“滑板天才”就是我啦!知道为什么我是滑板天才吗?我马上为你讲解，小学五年级作文批语。)，也直接点出了自己的特长—“滑板天才”(这个滑板非常不听话，我想往左走，它偏偏要往右，然后我就和地面来了个亲密接触!)!

My classroom is very nice . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the coner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much. This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like my classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ?

我的教室很好。教室里有四十张桌子和椅子。墙壁上有两只黑木板。还有照片，太。我的教室有十一盏灯和十二个风扇。粉丝是什么颜色的？他们是蓝色的。在角落，有一个书架，书架上有很多书。我非常喜欢这本书。这是我的教室，很好。我非常喜欢我的教室。你有一个漂亮的教室吗？

[英语作文带翻译Myclassroom我的教室

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Nothing is easy if you

don’t try your best.

We often hear people say, “Never give up.” A person who believes in these

words will keep trying to pursue his goal no matter how many times he fails. In

my opinion, the quality of determination to succeed is an important one to have.

Therefore, I believe that we should never give up.

One reason is that if we give up easily, we will achieve nothing. It is not

unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not

feel discouraged. Besides, if we always give up when fail happens, we will can

not develop new skills. Finally, we should never give up because as we work to

reach our goals, we develop confidence, and this confidence can help us succeed

in other areas of our lives.

Probably the greatest example of persistence is Abraham Lincoln. Born into

poverty, Lincoln was faced with defeat throughout his life. He lost eight

elections, twice failed in business and suffered a nervous breakdown. He could

have quit many times - but he didnt and because he didnt quit, he became one

of the greatest presidents in the history of America.

Lincoln was a champion For the reason that ---he ,never gave up.

In short, no matter you succeed or not, you can learn something, no matter

what we learn will help us to become more confident. If we give up, we have no

chance to make our dreams come true, if we keep trying, there is always a

chance, that we will succeed one day. Thank you very much!

世上无难事，只怕有心人。如果你不努力，没有什么是容易的。

我们经常听到人们说:“永不放弃。”一个相信这些话的人，无论失败多少次，都将继续追求他的目标。在我看来，成功的决心是很重要的。因此，我认为我们不应该放弃。

一个原因是，如果我们轻易放弃，我们将一事无成。我们第一次尝试新事物时失败并不罕见，所以我们不应该感到气馁。此外，如果我们总是在失败的时候放弃，我们就无法发展新的技能。最后，我们永远不应该放弃，因为当我们努力实现我们的目标时，我们会建立信心，这种信心能帮助我们在生活的其他方面取得成功。

也许最伟大的坚持就是亚伯拉罕·林肯。林肯出身贫寒，一生都面临失败。他在8次选举中失败，两次失败，并经历了精神崩溃。他本可以放弃很多次，但他没有，因为他没有放弃，他成为了美国历史上最伟大的总统之一。

林肯是一个冠军，因为他从不放弃。

总之，无论你成功与否，你都可以学到一些东西，无论我们学到什么都会帮助我们变得更加自信。如果我们放弃，我们就没有机会实现我们的梦想，如果我们继续努力，总有机会，我们终有一天会成功。非常感谢!

1Learning Style

Educators have known for a long time that people learn in different ways. That is why teachers present information in various forms. For example, as well as explaining a new language, language teachers often provide other learning experiences such as books, charts, videos, audio cassettes, songs, debates and group work. In this way, all students in a class have an opportunity to learn in the way that best suits them.

In the last 50 years or so, researchers have been studying learners in an attempt to identify all the possible learning styles that humans use. They have found that we can very roughly divide people into three groups — those who learn best through seeing, those who learn best through listening and those who learn best through moving, doing or touching.

Some research has identified eight distinct learning styles, and researchers have made up tests to find out which of these learning styles best suits different people. These tests show that, although most people have one dominant style of learning, they are also able to use other learning styles effectively. Some people even seem to have many different learning styles.

The advantage of knowing what kind of learner you are is that you can then study in the way that best suits your learning style.

教育工作者已经认识很长一段时间,人们以不同的方式学习。这就是为什么老师以各种形式呈现信息。例如,以及解释一个新的语言,语言教师经常提供其他学习经验,如书籍、图表、视频、音频磁带、歌曲、辩论和组工作。通过这种方式,一个班上所有的学生有机会学习的方式最适合他们。

在过去的50年左右的时间,研究人员一直在研究学习者为了识别所有可能的学习方式,人类使用。他们发现,我们可以大致将人分成三组——那些最好的学习方式是看到,那些最好的学习方式是听和那些最好的学习方式是移动,或触摸。

一些研究已经确定了八种不同的学习方式,和研究人员组成测试找出哪种学习方式最适合不同的人。这些测试表明,尽管大多数人有一个占主导地位的学习风格,他们也能够使用其他有效的学习方式。有些人甚至似乎有许多不同的学习风格。

知道你是哪种类型的学习者的优势是,你可以研究的方式,最适合你的学习方式。

2learning chinese style

As we know,Chinese is one of the most beautiful languages all over the world,the words of which are also more beautiful than any other languages.The difference between Chinese words and other languages is that Chinese words are square.Chinese culture is rich,such as poems,handwriting,songs and so on.

What you should do is that you ought to read as much as possible if you feel like learning Chinese well,then you can write down a read report,which is good for your Chinese ability.And the more history you read ,the better your Chinese ability is.Whatmore,attending a lecture is also a good way to improve your Chinese.

正如我们所知,中国是全世界最美丽的语言之一,这句话的也比其他语言更漂亮”。中国语言和其他语言的区别是,中国的话是方形的。中国文化丰富,如诗歌、书法、歌曲等等。

你应该做的是,你应该读尽可能多的如果你觉得学习中文,然后你可以写下阅读报告,这有利于你的中文能力。和历史你读得越多,你的中文能力越好。什么力度外,参加讲座也是一个很好的方式来提高你的中文。

3My English learning style

I personally think that English is difficult to learn English,I love english.I have been learning English is very serious.Although my English is not the best,but I will try todo it better.

I remember once,my English homework unfinished remember words one morning,I get up early to recite words,although I was very tired but English is a cumulative process.My English is so serious about.

This is my study of English style!

我个人认为英语是很难学习英语,我爱英语。我学英语非常严重。虽然我的英语不是最好的,但我会努力做得更好。

我记得有一次,我的英语作业未完成的记住单词一天早上,我早起背诵单词,尽管我很累但是英语是一个累积的过程。我的英语是如此的认真。

这是我学习英语的风格!

[学习英语作文带翻译

My name is xxx . There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

I like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. Reading E- books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

I hope to study both  in English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

Yesterday, I decided to go outside for picnic, but unfortunately, it

suddenly rained.I felt very disappointed, but I knew one thing: next time, when

I decide to do something, I should pay attention to the weather

forecast.Finally, I had to change my mind, and I had to stay at home all day

watching TV and reading books.I like sunny days very much, and I dont like

rainy days any more. But I know if there are no rainy days, there will be a lack

of water, and I know it is very terrible if there is not enough water.But I

still like sunny days because I like sunshine very much.

昨天我决定去野炊，不幸的是突然下雨了，我感到很失望。但我知道了一件事，下次当我决定做什么的时候，应该留意一下天气预报。最后，我不得不改变我的主意。整天呆在家里看电视和书。我很喜欢晴天，一点也不喜欢下雨天。但是我知道如果不下雨的话，我们就没有水，那很糟。但我仍然喜欢晴天，因为我非常喜欢阳光。

Hello, everyone. Im glad to introduce myself to you. Im from Chongqing. I

am a teacher. I have many hobbies, such as taking notes, reading, listening to

music, dancing, singing, playing basketball and swimming. I think we should

treat everyday as the last day for us to live in the world. That is me. I like

making friends. I hope I can be your friends.

My name is Lin Zhenghao Fen Lin in the primary school class two, grade three, 11 years old this year.

My short hair, thick eyebrows below a pair of bright eyes, small nose with a below can speak to the mouth, is neither tall nor short, the biggest advantage is that I love reading.

I read a lot, such as: "Sherlock Holmes", "hundred thousand whys", in the life science... Every time I come to the fan inside, a book cant hear sounds. One time when you eat at noon, I sat on the sofa reading a book, the mother call I eat, Im reading a book, have no reaction to come over, the result is mother big scold a meal, also said that I am a "nerd". When going to sleep every night, I always habitually picked up a book to see, the voice of mother upstairs, I didnt find, was mother caught, I have to pick up a book, go to sleep.

While my mother was called several times, but I also learn a lot about the knowledge, in the book, I was impressed the Sherlock Holmes smart, be "hundred thousand whys" is brought into various scientific world, also in the life science study to a lot of life common sense...

My weakness is careless, I didnt out many exams because of careless, I have a math word problems without parentheses, the results for six points, ninety-four points. On the way of this Ma Hucheng I grew up.

This is what I -- Lin Zhenghao, do a love reading and careless boy.

我叫林正昊，在洋汾林小学三年级二班学习，今年11岁。

我的头发短短的，粗粗的眉毛下面长着一双明亮的眼睛，不大不小的鼻子下面长着一张能说会到的嘴巴，个子不高不矮，我最大的优点是爱看书。

我看的书很多，比如：《福尔摩斯探案集》、《十万个为什么》、《生活中的科学》……我每次一看起书来就迷在里面，听不到各种声音。有一次中午吃饭的时候，我坐在沙发上看书，妈妈叫我吃饭了，我在看书，没反应过来，结果被妈妈大骂一顿，还说我是“书呆子”。每晚临睡的时候，我都总是习惯性地拿起书来看，妈妈上楼的声音，我没发觉，结果被妈妈抓个正着，我只好收拾书，去睡觉。

虽然我被妈妈大骂几次，但我也学习到很多知识，在书中我被福尔摩斯的精明折服了，被《十万个为什么》带进千奇百怪科学世界，也在《生活中的科学》中学习到许多生活常识……

我的缺点是做事马虎，我许多考试是因为马虎没有满分，我有一次数学应用题没有加括号，结果扣了六分，考了九十四分。为此马虎成我成长路上的绊脚石。

这就是我——林正昊，一个爱看书又做事马虎的男孩。

HuangMei is  my  hometown. It is  in  the  East  in  HuBei.It is East  on  the  city  named  AnQing  of   AnHui.And it is  south to   the  city  named  JiuJiang  of  JiangXi. It  is  a    great city  in  my  heart.It  has  a long  history for about  1800 years  in  China .Example .The  temple  named  SiZu  and  WuZu were   in  HuangMei for a  long  years-old.Today,Every  year  many   visitor  come  different part  to  there.As  a  daughter  from Huangmei.I  leaved it away  for  about  seven  years. But  I miss it everyday .Even  in  a lot of  my  dream  in  the  night  .I belive HuangMei will  be  richer and  richer .The  new  year  2009  will going .Tonight  I  hope  everything  will  be  well  in  my  new 26  years-old.All  my friends  will be  well.I  must  work  hard in   the new  year.I will be ain growth as  my  hometown .

中文：我的故乡在黄梅.黄梅位于湖北省的东部，它东接安徽省安庆府，南邻江西省九江市.在我心中，它是一座伟大的县城.它在中国史上约有1800余年的历史，像闻名遐迩的四祖寺，五祖寺在黄梅有很长时间的历史了.每年，都有来自不同地域的许多游客去那.我自离开故乡已是七载余，但是我却每天思念故乡，以致在梦里都是如此.作为从黄梅走出来的女儿，我坚信我的故乡会越来越富饶.新的2009就要来临，今晚我祝福新的一年将万事顺利，我所有的朋友都好.在新的26岁年轮里，我必须努力工作，我会像我的家乡一样成长.

Hello！大家好，我叫做裘人源，现在在进化四小五年级一班学习。我是一个既内向又活泼的男孩，身高158厘米。体重58千克，大家都叫我‘裘胖子’。我有一张圆圆的脸，一双乌黑的眼睛，短头发。我今年已经12岁了，已经不小了吧？但是，我还是经常让爸爸、妈妈操心。我会打羽毛球，我会有游泳。我还会打乒乓球。

我最大的爱好就是看书。比如——《三国演义》，《十万个为什么》，《福尔摩斯探案集》这一些书我都十分爱看。我很爱看书，不论在那一个地方，只要一有时间我就会如饥似渴的看书。临睡的时候，我还会经常在临睡前给自己补充一下精神食粮，我会习惯性地拿起手边的书来。因为我很爱看书，所以我的作文写得不错。

说起看书，我还有许许多多段小故事呢！记得有一天早上，我在洗手间上厕所，其实是在偷偷地看故事书，妈妈在外面催我快点，我假装肚子痛，慢吞吞地回答：“再给我10分钟，再给我10分钟，我的肚子有点不舒服。”其实我是想把一个故事看完，结果给妈妈发现了。直到这个时候，我才依依不舍地放下了书本。

我还有着一身子的臭毛病，‘粗心’就是我最大的毛病之一。记得上一次期末考试，我看见一道题从《春夜喜雨》这一首古诗里写一句自己喜欢的句子，但是我却写了《枫桥夜泊》里的句子了。本来嘛，《春夜喜雨》这一首古诗我最会背了。唉，我真是太不应该了！还有一题阅读题，他叫我们在试卷里找出来，并且画上横线。我明明在试卷里找出而且划对了，可是不知怎么的我又把它擦掉，只留下了一道浅浅的痕迹。

看了我的介绍，大家愿意和我交朋友吗？作文

我叫朱柏睿，今年9岁，在德积小学二（4）班读书，

我个子不够高，长得瘦瘦的，留着短短的头发，浓浓的眉毛下面镶嵌着一双大大的眼睛。老师说我有一双明亮、睿智的眼睛，里面装着几分灵气，几分聪颖。我总是享受着老师给与我的评价。

我爱下棋，尤其喜欢军旗，我每天放学回家就缠着妈妈下军旗，每次妈妈都是以失败告终。我爱动脑筋，而且也很善良，妈妈说我善良的性格像女生，我虽然不太爱听，可想想也是，我一遇到不顺心的事就爱流眼泪，只要妈妈一提醒，我马上就会想到我是男子汉，我一定要坚强。

这就是我——朱柏睿，希望大家和我做朋友。

小家伙寥寥几笔，一个瘦弱而又机灵的孩子就这样展现在了人们面前。都说孩子的语言是世界上最美的，没有修饰，没有花哨，但是最能反映孩子纯真的想法。希望小家伙快乐的学习，快乐的成长。

January 13 20xx

20xx年1月13日

It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

这是我们寒假的第一天。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的事,我们喜欢做的。我们是免费的。虽然我们有一些功课。但我们可以在数天内完成这些。而其余的时间我们可以善用。我的上帝!我们已经非常疲倦拼命学习。在冬季假期,我希望能有充分的睡眠和良好的食物吃,以补充自己。最后但并非最不重要,我会好好休息。

As the saying goes: "hunger breeds discontentment, the person is iron, rice is a steel, do not eat a meal hungry."

To say we Wenzhou food, can be really countless...

Wonton is one of my favorite food. Pork, shrimp, vegetables, shallots and ginger are the most basic ingredients for filling. The meat and meat wonton and meat wonton are the basic of the Shanghai snack shop. I cram school teacher told me that the meat wonton is put in a blender to stir once, and then put the meat grinder, and then stir again, so repeated after stir, the meat wonton becomes very bad, so, wonton delicious, because it is delicious meat. I also liked the same Wenzhou delicacy, that is the muffin. When autumn to winter, my grandfather would buy cake for me to eat. And at that time, I was hungry, eating, hungry, eating. Again to dwarves muffin muffin is best known. This is actually the dwarf pine lard glutinous rice sugar cake, use it all is this years pure glutinous rice, water and ground into fine powder, mixed with pig fat and sugar, pork tunjian osmanthus, then cooking cooked diced. Make and sell the dwarf pine cake, eat up soft cotton glutinous, sweet salty, embellishment on the top of the sweet scented osmanthus fragrance it is even more so. It is said that this "ah well, dwarves muffin" invention since the later period of the Anti Japanese War, there was a man named Gu Jinfang Wenzhou, making muffin in the city street to five warn, sophisticated materials, the production of fine. Because Gu Jinfang was a small, just call him the "dwarf pine cake".

Wenzhou there are a variety of delicious snacks, such as rice, fried dry, Erigeron cake, duck tongue, fish cake, Jiang Xiesheng......

My hometown is really beautiful,

Not only is there a green mountain and a green water,

The fragrance of delicious.

The lotus flower is wonton,

Sesame oil is a Tangyuan,

A string of red bayberry tea......

Hello,every one!（大家好）My name is **** . （我叫****）

Im a 15 years old girl. （我是一个15岁的女孩）（具体情况自己改）

I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）

Im an active ,lovely and clever girl.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的女孩）

In the school , my favourite subject is maths . （在学校，我最喜欢数学）

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学）

But I like it.（但我喜欢他）

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）

I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. （像跑步、排球等等）

If you need help ,please come to me .（如果你需要帮助，就来找我）

I hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友）

National Day is our countrys mothers birthday. On this day, we all Chinese people are happy. On this day, we should live in harmony with the people of our country in order to repay the kindness we have in our country.

On this day, the whole nation has a holiday. Although some people are too busy to work for the motherlands mother to celebrate, but I still believe that they are in different places, in their hearts, is still a deep love of the motherland. They will also be in the hearts of the hearts of the love of the motherland.

A lot of people are wondering: Why study hard? I can definitely tell them that the students have to study hard to repay our country. Mother of the motherland for our selfless dedication, we should not return her?

National Day, people will hold a lot of parties. Most of the party is the great motherland, the mother of the title, which is also the contribution of the people who write the arts to china!

Although there is no mid autumn festival. Spring Festival is so popular, but it also said we are all the children of the Yellow Emperor patriotism.

Look at the mother of the motherland prosperity, people live and work in peace Chinese!

国庆节是我国一年一度祖国妈妈的生日。在这天，我们全中国人民都兴高采烈。在这天，我们全国人民更应该和睦相处，以报答我们对祖国的养育之恩。

在这天，全国人民都放假了。尽管有些人们因工作的确太忙而不能为祖国妈妈庆祝了，但我依旧相信身存异地的他们，在心中，依旧是深深地爱这祖国妈妈的。他们同样会以心中的满腔热血表示对祖国的敬爱。

很多人们疑惑不解：为什么要好好学习呢?我可以肯定地告诉他们，学生们好好学习是要报答我们的祖国。祖国妈妈为我们无私奉献，难道我们不应该回报她吗?

国庆节这天，人们会举办许多晚会。晚会大多是以伟大的祖国妈妈为题的，这也是那写艺人们对祖国所做的贡献啊!

国庆节虽然没有中秋节。春节那么热闹，但它更表示的是我们炎黄子孙的爱国之心。

望祖国妈妈繁荣兴盛，望中国人民安居乐业!

The the Imperial Palace in Beijing is a beautiful The Grand Palace. The the Imperial Palace is also called the Forbidden City. There are 24 emperors who have lived in the two dynasties of Ming and Qing Dynasties. The the Imperial Palace of the entire building beautiful decoration, magnificent, known as one of the worlds five palace.

When I entered, the first show in front of me is the lamps. The lamps are "living place, beautiful scenery here, green grass, flowers blooming like a piece of brocade. The Imperial Palace is the palace of ancient buildings Chinas largest and most complete, a total area of more than 720 thousand square meters, the temple palace has more than 90 million rooms, very spectacular.

Through the study to the palace, this is where the emperor on the morning, in front of the palace stood a gilded throne. The dragon carved on many dragons, some Shuanglongxizhu, some around each other is really vivid. I looked up and looked up, there is a large plaque on the wall, the plaque reads "open and aboveboard" four characters, four characters as if it is told ministers: "all things are open and aboveboard to do." I stand in the middle, also saw the emperor and ministers to negotiate the momentum of state.

Out of the Front Gate, I once again looking at the ancient palace, the grand vision is greatly! What a beautiful the Imperial Palace!

北京的故宫是个美丽的大皇宫。故宫也叫作“紫禁城”。这里居住过24个明清两代的皇帝呢！故宫的整个建筑金碧辉煌，庄严华丽，被誉为世界五大宫之一。

当我进去后，首先展现在我眼前的是坤宁宫。坤宁宫是皇妃住的地方，这里风景优美，绿草如茵，繁花似锦。故宫的宫殿建筑是中国现存最大、最完整的古老建筑，总面积达到72万多平方米，殿宇宫室有9000万多间，极为壮观。

穿过书斋就到了乾清宫，这是皇上上早朝的地方，乾清宫的正前方摆着一张镀金龙椅。龙椅上刻着许多龙，有的双龙戏珠，有的互相缠绕，真是惟妙惟肖。我抬头往上一看，墙上有一块大大的匾，匾上写着“正大光明”四个大字，仿佛这四个大字是告诫大臣们：“凡是做事，都要正大光明地做。”我站在这中间，也仿佛看到当时的皇上和大臣们商议朝政时的气势。

走出正门，我再一次遥望这座古老的宫殿，气魄宏伟令人赞叹不已！故宫真美啊！

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。

My name is zheng, this year 9 years old, was a little girl, similar height 1.4 meters, is a medium height, yellow skin, a native of Chinese. I am fat, in the big, round face, with two big eyes like grapes, collapse collapse is nose, small mouth.

My character is: considerate caring, generous, perfectionism, rich imagination, gentle personality is sometimes very lively, with super capacity, sensitive love fantasy, not too confident, not much sorrow but compassion, half-hearted, not rejected, thought is very complex. But these are the students evaluation of me. I think the biggest problem is I love half-hearted, take the math test last time, for instance: I was the score of 100 points, is because of my carelessness, half-hearted, wrong so a trail, button up my 1 minute, there were only 99 points, but I still care, I thought: anyway, I dont like 2 grade exam 89 points, to go, I still progress 10 points!

This is me, do you think I cute?

我叫郑好，今年9岁了，是个小女孩，身高差不多1.4米，是个中等个子，皮肤有些黄，是个地道的中国人。我胖胖的，在那又大又圆的脸上，镶着两颗葡萄似的大眼睛，鼻子是塌塌的，嘴巴小小的。

我的性格特征是：善解人意有同情心，很慷慨，完美主义，想象力丰富，个性温和也有时会很活泼，具超强的包容力，敏感爱幻想，不太有自信，不多愁但善感，三心二意，不善拒绝，思想很复杂。但这些都是同学们对我的评价。我觉得我最大的毛病就是爱三心二意，就拿上次数学考试来说吧：本来我该得满分100分的，就是因为我粗心大意，三心二意，错了那么一小道题，就扣了我1分，只得了99分，可我还是满不在乎的，我想：反正我没像2年级考试时得89分，就行了，我还进步了10分呢!

这就是我了，大家觉得我可爱吗?

一、 (课件逐句出示)黑脸短毛，长嘴大耳，圆身肥肚。穿一件青不青、蓝不蓝的梭布衣服。手提一柄九齿钉耙。

生：猪八戒

师：你是根据哪些内容猜出来的?

师：恭喜你，答对了!了不起。也正因为抓住了他的特点，所以寥寥几笔，就让猪八戒这个人物形象活灵活现了。

师：那么，写人物时，除了要抓住人物的特点，还要注意什么呢?带着这个问题，我们一起走进习作《介绍我自己》吧!

板书课题：习作《介绍我自己》

二、 口头作文“说一说”

1、 我们试试口头介绍一下自己吧。说什么?让别人认识我们的第一步，可以说说自己的外貌。外貌描写要突出自身特点。所谓特点就是与别人不同的地方，特别的地方 重点描写， 能给人留下清晰难忘的印象。师：如果大家写外貌方面最突出的特点，老师准备了一些佳词，希望对大家有帮助，(点击多媒体)写外貌的参考词语

在那么多的外貌特点中，最突出的是哪几点?画“√”。向同桌介绍一下你的外貌吧。要抓住自己的特点，把句子说流畅喔。

2、我们介绍了自己的外貌，别人认识我们了，要让别人了解我们还可以介绍自己的(指板书)(生接：性格、爱好、优点、缺点……)

这就需要我们打开记忆的匣门，(点击多媒体)可以看着大屏幕，希望大屏幕能帮助你们插上回忆的翅膀。

仔细想想，在“性格、爱好、品质”的这些特点中，你认为最能表现你的特点的是什么?每个方面留下一条画上“√”。

同桌交流：

说说你的性格。平时自己是怎么表现的，(点击多媒体)

三、指导成篇，加题目

1、师：一段话，我们写得非常精彩，我们怎么把它变成一篇完整的自我介绍?你还准备写些什么?(学生讨论，出示范文讨论。)

师：我们写作文，不仅要看好要求，还要注意写上一个好题目，还要注意修改。请看看这里的温馨小提示吧!

2、温馨小提示

(1)、写好以后，别忘了给你的佳作配上一个吸引人的精彩题目。比如：《爱哭鼻子的我》、《胆小如鼠的我》、《我是个电视迷》、《聪明的我》等等!

(2)、俗话说：好文章不厌千回改。同学们写好作文以后可要反复去读 , 再三修改，才能出佳作!

四、总结。(为学生树立写作的信心)

师：孩子们，你们的活泼可爱，反应灵敏给我留下了深刻的印象，相信你们在作文中一定能展示独特的自我，祝愿大家写出精彩的“自我介绍”。写出一篇好作文是一件令人非常快乐的事，说出我们的作文口号，“我作文，我快乐”。

五、范文展示

这就是我

大家好，我叫昌南，今年满9岁，我的脸上有细细的眉毛，大大的眼睛，尖尖的鼻子，小小的嘴巴，我的头发长长的，其实我喜欢自己的头发，我总是把头发甩呀甩的，我喜欢这样做。

我 的爱好有很多，比如：弹钢琴、打羽毛球、踢毽子、打篮球等，我最喜欢打羽毛球了，有时偶尔接得到羽毛球，有时却接不到;我的特点只有两个，一个是唱歌，一 个是跳舞，我的舞蹈老师要求非常严格，如果没绷脚尖的话，她就用力的踩一下;我的优点是字写得很漂亮，缺点是爱发点小脾气，胆子小，我的性格是内向的。

我爸爸的同事夸我长得漂亮，老师夸我写字写得很漂亮，我都不好意思了呢，我也有点喜欢搞恶作剧，每次妈妈一回来我都会吓她一跳，哈哈，是不是很有趣?

这就是我，我觉得我自己很幽默，你觉得我是一个什么样的小女孩?