初三期末英语作文范文10篇【优秀19篇】

As is known to all, food is a priority for the common people. Recently, however, reports about food problems have often been seen in the newspapers, showing that people have always been concerned about what they eat every day. The reason for this problem is that some of the food producers are too fond of making money, leading to the result that they use whatever will make the food look good or taste better without considering the bad consequences. This is not normal because people just cannot live without eating anything.

So we should take all the measures necessary to forbid the food producers to make food that is not safe enough. Laws should be strengthened and the government should have more control over these producers. Only when people are no longer worried about whether their food is safe or not can they enjoy a better life.

众所周知,食物是百姓的当务之急。然而,最近报道食品问题经常出现在报纸上,表明人一直关心他们每天吃什么。这个问题的原因是,一些食品生产商太喜欢赚钱,导致结果,他们使用任何会让食物看起来不错或味道更好而不考虑坏的后果。这是不正常的,因为人们生活中不能没有吃任何东西。

所以我们应该采取一切必要的措施,禁止食品生产商做的食物还不够安全。应加强法律和政府应该有更多的控制这些生产商。只有当人们不再担心是否他们的食品是安全的可以享受更好的生活。

Pollution has been a serious problem for a certain time around the world.

There are many causes for it. Transportation is the main factor of pollution.

When the waste gas from cars is released, the air is polluted. People breathing

in the polluted air can develop respiratory disease. Another factor is that

people throw their garbage everywhere. All kinds of garbage not only spoil the

splendid environment, but also cause environmental pollution. Whats more,

industrial pollution also deserves our attention. Wastewater from factories is

poured into rivers and this causes water pollution. As a consequence, the

greenhouse effect becomes a problem which needs our immediate caution and how to

solve is urgent all over the world. At present, some measures have been taken to

prevernt.

For example, people classify the garbage and some is recycled after being

collected. People are also encouraged to use paper products instead of plastic

products because we know that our living condition will be worse if we keep

ignoring this problem. And I believe we can prevent pollution if everyone makes

the efforts.

Smoking and Health-吸烟与健康

About Internet-关于因特网

The Problem of Food-食品问题

Add Feet-添足

Accompany Us Studying-陪读

Early Rising-早起

My Dream-我的梦想

Going Abroad-出国

Correct Directions-辨明方向

真正的美-True Beauty

读书的价值-The Value of Reading Books

空余时间的利用-Use of Free Time

环境与发展-Development and the Environment

过度词

1)递进：furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition

2)转折：however,but,nevertheless,after all

3)总结：finally,at last,in brief,to conclude

4)强调：really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all

5)对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand

中间段落句

1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.

2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______

5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.

9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.

10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

(三)结尾句

1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……

But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6. 至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.

7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……; 第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.

8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.

9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

My name is Tom Lee. I am fourteen. I study at No. 4 ICT School, not a very big school. There are about six hundred students in my school. There is only one building in our school, but we have a very big playground. There are ten computer labs and one library in the building, and there are many computer books in the library. We often go there in the afternoon.

我的名字是汤姆李。我十四岁。我在第二通信学校学习，不是非常大的一个学校。在我学校大约有六百名学生。我们学校只有一栋楼，但是我们有一个非常大的操场。在楼里面有十间电脑室和一个图书馆，图书馆里也有很多计算机的书籍。我们经常在下午去那里。

We are busy every day. We have four classes in the morning, and two in the afternoon.

我们每天都很忙。我们上午有四节课，下午两节。

ICT is my favorite subject and our ICT teachers are very patient and helpful. I am good at ICT, but bad in history.

通信是我最喜欢的学科而且我们学学校的通信老师是很有耐心也很乐于助人的。我的通信学得很好，但是历史则学得不好。

What impresses me most in Beijing is the Great Wall which is one of the

greatest projects in the world.

Its not only the cultural heritage, but also a symbol of China. "Its

glorious." I think. It looks like a big dragon running across the mountainous

area. It starts Shanhaiguan in the east to Jiayuguan in the west.Its so long that nobody can walk from the beginning to the end.It was firstly built in Qin Dynasty and prolonged in Ming and Qing

dynasties.It was used to protect the enemies from invading in the past, but now it

has become the place of interest which attracts so many tourists both at home

and abroad.

When I was standing on the top of the Great Wall, I felt as if I were in

ancient days.

I could see many laborers working very hard. How could they finish this

extremely difficult task by hand?

Dear Sandy,

亲爱的桑迪，

I offer my warmest congratulations to you for receiving the first prize of The Olympic English competition for the middle school students. I know that you are always good at English. You often win the praise of our English teacher and always in the first place of our class. So I’m surprise at all that you become champion for this competition. However, in my mind, this match is very difficult. So I becomemore and more admire you. Sincere congratulation to you again.

我表示热烈的祝贺你接收的获得了中学生奥林匹克英语竞赛一等奖。我知道你的英语一直都很好。你经常赢得我们的英语老师的表扬而且在班里总是第一。所以我一点都不惊讶在这个竞赛中你会成为冠军。然而，在我看来，这竞赛是很困难的。所以我越来越佩服你了。真诚的祝贺你。

Best wishes,

Mandy

曼迪

Now, the students learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life.

The biggest pleasure in my spare time is to collect rubber. Those strange and eccentric, imitate characters, animal images and daily necessities like rubber to collect a small jar, every time I look up will be an endless enjoyment. Those lively and lovely animals, such as rubber, lifelike daily necessities, erasers, and some funny and funny rubber, can relieve the pressure and annoyance of my learning and life. Whenever I collect the eraser, their lovely and genuine smile intoxicated me, as if I felt that I was one of them. I could play with them freely.

Im the only child at home. My mom and dad are busy, and I dont have time to play with me, so my best partner is the rubber. There are no secrets and lies between us. We take care and comfort each other. We are the best friends.

We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend.

If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot.

Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make

friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made

since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much

about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends.

What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about

anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for

drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make

friends, the real one is what we need.

Spring Festival, a day Im looking forward to for a long time, should be

full of happiness, bustle and laughter. But this years novel coronavirus is so

rampant that I can only stay at home and wear masks when I go out, and my

parents remind me to keep warm and pay attention to personal hygiene every day.

The novel coronavirus seemed to have no intention of retreat, but doctors

struggled for many days and nights. In these days, I dont know how many people

have been killed by the virus, and how many doctors are still fighting against

the virus in order to fight the epidemic.

The computer and I are good friends, I know its character, understand the language, and often "talk" with it.

"Faithfulness" computer it is my most friends. My brain to it into a program, it will do as my instruction.

Computer it on my small teacher. Mother let me learn English, I let it to teach me, I sometimes do wrong topic, regardless of the friends of love, it made a "X", let me redo, I helplessly obey its orders.

Computer is my happy fruit. Once, I let the computer to help me to find a small game, look! Game started, is life do eggs Fried rice in the game, I Fried Fried, somehow, is over, had guest holding your nose to eat, pay only 1 yuan money, is really piss me off, make persistent efforts... The computer gave me endless fun!

Computer is my bosom friend, it will accompany my whole life! It is also my best friend forever, I not only on the computer in many friends, also let my grades have improved a lot.

Computer ah, my good friend!

我和电脑是好朋友，我知道它的性格，懂得它的语言，而且常常和它“交谈”。

电脑它是我最“忠实”的朋友。我给它的大脑里输进一个程序，它就会按照我的指令去做。

电脑它上我的小老师。妈妈让我学英语，我就让它来教我，我有时做错了题目，它不顾朋友之情，打了个“X”，再让我重做，我无可奈何地服从了它的命令。

电脑也是我的开心果。有一次，我让电脑帮我找一些小游戏，瞧!游戏开始了，是生活篇里的做蛋炒饭的游戏，我炒啊炒，不知怎的，就炒糊了，害得客人捏着鼻子才吃完，工钱只有1元钱，真是气死我了，再接再厉啊……电脑给了我无穷的乐趣!

电脑真是我的知心朋友，它将陪伴我的一生一世!它也是我永远的最好的朋友，我不仅在电脑上交了许多朋友，还让我的学习成绩提高了许多。

电脑啊电脑，我的好朋友!

Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products, in order to make the biggest profit, they don t deal with the pollution. Water gets polluted, it does harm to people s health, we drink water everyday, the government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water pollution.

今天，随着经济的快速发展，人们可以买到所需的，生产商提供了各种各样的新产品，所以工厂生产很多产品，为了挣最大的利益，他们不处理污染。水被污染了，对人们的健康有害，我们每天都喝水，政府控制厂商来找到处理谁污染的方法。

[初三英语作文及翻译：Water Pollution

This year,I had an exciting Spring festival.Do you want to know about it?Let me tell you! First, I went to ocean park with my family in Hongkong.It was very relaxing there.I ate the sea food.I played with the dolphins! I was really happy there!

Then,we went to the Disneyland. It was very romantic.We enjoyed our selves there.It reminded our mind to our childhood! If we will have another chance to visit Hongkong.We will come there again!

This is my spring festival!What about you?

[盘点初三英语作文：The exciting Spring Festival

1.A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight.(P.

B. Shelley ， British poet )伟大的诗篇即是永远喷出智慧和欢欣之水的喷泉。(英国诗人 雪莱。 P.B)

2.Art is a lie that tells the truth 。( Picasso ， Spanish painter )美术是揭示真理的谎言。 (西班牙画家 毕加索)

3.Humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in earnest. (Mark Twain ， American novelist )幽默被人正确地解释为“以诚挚表达感受，寓深思于嬉笑”。(美国小说家 马克·吐温)

4.The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation; the two keep in their downward tendency.( Johan Wolfgang von Goethe ， German poet)文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的。(德国诗人歌德 。 J 。 W 。)

5.When one loves one‘s art no service seems too hard 。(O. Henry， American novelist)一旦热爱艺术，什么奉献也不难。 (美国小说家 欧·亨利)

Education 教育篇

6.And gladly would learn ， and gladly teach 。( Chaucer ， British poet)勤于学习的人才能乐意施教。(英国诗人， 乔叟)

7.Better be unborn than untaught ， for ignorance is the root of misfortune.(Plato ， Ancient Greek philosopher)与其不受教育，不如不生，因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家柏拉图)

Friendship 友谊篇

8. Some friends come and go like a season. Others are arranged in our lives for good reason.(Sharita Gadison)一些朋友随季节离去，而另外一些则伴我们度过美好的季节。

9.A true friend is someone you can disagree with and still remain friends. For if not， they weren‘t true friends in the first place.(Sandy Ratliff)真朋友是可以与你有不同见解的，如果不是，首先就不是真朋友。

10.True friendship is felt， not said.(Mariecris Madayag)朋友是说不出的感觉。

11.Friends are like stars，you don‘t always see them， but you know they‘re always there.(Hulali Luta)朋友是感觉不到的存在。

12.Memories last forever， never do they die. Friends stay together， never say goodbye.(Melina Campos)记忆永不死，朋友永不说再见。

Health 健康篇

13.light heart lives long.( William Shakespeare ， British dramatist)豁达者长寿(英国剧作家莎士比亚。 W.)

14.Early to bed and early to rise ， makes a man healthy ， wealthy and wise.(Benjamin Franklin ， American president )早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。 (美国总统 富兰克林。B.)

15.The first wealth is health 。( Ralph Waldo Emerson ， American thinker)健康是人生第一财富。 (美国思想家爱默生。 R. W.)

When we read newspapers, we often come across the wordPollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to us because.it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health.

There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. This is mainly because of the poisonous smoke coming from factories, especially chemical ones. In rivers, seas and oceans, there are industrial wastes. Some factories just throw their wastes into seas or let them flow into rivers. When people drink the water from such rivers, they get poisoned. Besides, there is rubbish from ships and when sometimes an accident occurs in an ocean, oil flows out from tankers.

On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. This is mainly due to the improper disposal of rubbish by people.

If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. Some people like to put the blame on the industrial revolutions. On the contrary, the pollution problem will be solved only with the help of modem science and technology.

[初三优秀英语作文:Pollution

My Happy Times During Winter Vacation

I often go to see my grandma and grandpa during winter vacation. They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning and breathing the fresh air in the countryside. After snow, I would like to skate and ski with my friends. When night comes, I am used to sitting by the fire and listening to grandma telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back, I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.

你于五一前夕 4 月 28 日上午九点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加一次公益劳动( voluntary labour )，全班分成了三组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。

劳动任务安排

参考词汇： litter 果皮纸屑等废弃物

注意：

1. 短文必须写出提示及表格所列出的全部内容。

2. 词数 100 左右。

3. 日记的格式已为你写好。

参考范文：

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday， just before May Day. My classmates and I went to the park nearby， we didnt go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.

We got there at 9：00. We were divided into three groups and then began working. The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the Childrens Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. We worked very hard. At 11：00， when all the work was finished up， all my classmates met again. Although everyone was in a sweat， yet we felt happy because we had done good job.

[关于初三英语满分作文：voluntary labour

Unit7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家里的规章制度进行了论述。写作中常涉及这一话题。写作时可以发表自己的观点，在表达观点时，要有理有据，观点不能偏激。

写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：

(1)I think teenagers should be allowed to …

(2)I agree that…

(3)I don’t agree with…

【典型例题】

国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪，并谈一下自己的看法。

【优秀范文】

There are many rules in our school.

At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I?think young people should?look smart, so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should?be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.

Although we have different views on the rules, I?think everyone should obey the school rules.

[初三英语Unit 7必考作文

Study is the necessary process that everyone need to experience. And then exam will follow. To obtain a good score, review is inevitable. Almost everyone wants to find the best review method. But there is no best review method, but there is the most suitable way. Different people will find different methods for them to do review. For example, some students should study in group, while some should study alone. When recite things, some need to write it down, some need to speak loudly, and some just need to read it. Different methods just depend on different people. Don’t compare with others; just find the most suitable one for yourself.

学习是每个人都必须要经历的过程。然后考试就随之而来了。为了获得好成绩，复习是必须的。几乎每个人都想找到最好的复习方法。但是，没有最好的只有最适合的复习方法。不同的人会找到不同的复习方法。例如，一些学生适合集体学习，而一些则应该独自学习。在背诵东西的时候，有些需要写下来，有些需要大声说出来，而有些则只需要看看。不同的人依赖于不同的方法。不要与他人相比较;找到最适合自己的。

这次期末考试，考试的结果其实已经是在我的想像之中了。我知道这半个学期来，我的成绩一直以直线下滑。我想:这一定是我的骄傲自满、自以为是，和我对于学习的态度形成的，这也体现了我并没有把知识掌握住。这也是一种极低水平的表现。

我也知道，骄傲使人落后，虚心使人进步，但在被一切冲昏了头脑后，我毅然决然地选择了骄傲，这也标志着我期末考即将迎来一个十分烂的成绩。在英语课上，我打小差，与同学讲话，也变得懒惰，连单词都不记。而对于语文，我懒得就如同猪一般，练习册的完成程度十分糟糕，坑蒙拐骗偷样样齐全，使一个学习委员的光荣逐渐在同学眼中褪去。

新的一学期，我也将迎来新的自己，我会更加认真对待每一门科目，杜绝掉“骄傲”的性格，况且我并没有骄傲的资本。我会认认真真地走好每一步，让下一次测试，来检查我是否合格。

昨天上午，杭州大部分中小学生都迎来了今年的第一场期末考。走出考场，初三学生们晒起了作文题，记者一看，杭州几个城区的初三作文题刚好能凑成一句话：“我和……在一起”、“品味”、“暖暖的冬天”。

其实，不仅是这句话符合当令季节，这些作文题也和如今学生们的日常生活息息相关。语文期末考结束后，记者特地邀请了杭州各城区的语文一线教师和教研员对这些作文题进行了点评，并向他们讨教了作文拿高分的小窍门。

上城区 我和 在一起的日子

这个学期，我们认识了、梁启超、雨果、傅雷、苏霍姆林斯基、鲁迅、苏轼、李清照、辛弃疾等课文作者，了解到闰土、杜小康、于勒、李京京、杨志、杨修、范进、香菱、陈涉、唐雎、诸葛亮这些人物的事迹，如果我们展开想象的翅膀，穿越时间和空间的界限，穿越现实世界和书本世界的界限，和他们中的一位走到了一起，会发生什么样的故事呢？

请你选择他们中的一位，以“我和 在一起的日子”(比如，我和在一起的日子、我和闰土在一起的日子)为话题，写一篇600字以上的作文。要求：(1)想象大胆，写出创意来。(2)想象合理，符合人物形象特征，文章主题鲜明。(3)文体不限，题目自拟。

点评人：吴丹青(上城区中学语文教研员)

这样的作文题不会给学生造成审题障碍，学生不仅会觉得有话可说，而且会觉得很有意思。、梁启超、雨果……都是初三语文课本上出现过的名人，贴近学生的学习生活，更能检测出他们作文的实际水平，并促使他们重视经典文本阅读，将读和写结合起来。

落笔前，学生要展开想象的翅膀构思，但必须建立在合理的基础上，这就要求他们选一个最了解最熟悉的人物来写，这样写出来的内容才能符合人物的形象特征。如果想要拿高分，还要讲究立意，倘若写成和名人吃喝玩乐过一天，主题就未免平庸了，建议学生读透名人作品再确定主题，例如可以和梁启超谈谈敬业和乐业问题等等。

下城区 品味

成长的路上，我们品味过多少生活的百味：妈妈端上的一碗热汤，老师批改的一份试卷，同学递来的一方手帕；书海的馨香，球赛的激烈，郊游的愉快；“千里共婵娟”的情怀，“一览众山小”的豪壮，“人比黄花瘦”的清苦……

请以“品味”为话题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。可以记叙经历，编写故事，发表议论，抒发感受。文体自选，题目自拟。文中不得出现你所在学校的校名，以及教职工、同学和本人的真实姓名。

点评人：张虹(下城区中学语文教研员、景成实验学校校长助理)

作为杭州人，生活在杭州，应该更关注杭州，所以本次初三语文试卷处处都可以看到杭州的影子，作文是全卷的收口，其主题与杭州打造“生活品质之城”相联系，希望学生能关注生活、品味生活。提供的材料是生活百味，说白了就是想引导学生关注生活细节，学会感恩。我们希望学生们能由此生动地描摹出感人的生活细节，写出感情真挚的语句，并去发现生活、热爱生活、抒发情怀。

写作时，学生可以记叙亲身经历，也可以发表感受，不必拘泥于表达形式。主题既可以是纯粹地抒怀，也可以是辨证的生活态度，如何理解生活中的酸甜苦辣，甚至还可以从个人角度出发，写自己应该如何面对生活。

西湖区 暖暖的冬天

(2007)12月28日，杭州某报打造了《温暖2007演唱会》，小娟这个名字成了时下杭州城里的热门话题，听小娟唱老歌成了时髦。“你去看小娟吗？”更成了很多人的见面语。严冬中，人们感受到了“小娟和山谷里的居民”带来的纯净而温暖人心的歌声。

“小娟和山谷里的居民”杭州专场的主宣传语是“生活因温暖而美好，这个冬天请你听本年度最温暖的声音”，500张演唱会门票，只送不卖，这份温暖，无法用金钱来计算。小娟用声音温暖了所有的心灵，勾起了人们内心许许多多温暖的回忆。而听众的热情亦让小娟感觉到了温暖，她笑得很甜很甜……

天很冷，心，却很温暖。

请你以“暖暖的冬天”为话题，写一篇文章，或叙写经历，或发表感悟。题目自拟，体裁不限，不少于600字。文中不能出现真实的人名校名。

点评人：王曜君(西湖区教师进修学校副校长、中学教研室主任)

这是一篇话题作文，相对于命题作文等形式，它更能彰显学生写作个性，更有自由度，便于学生写作时切入生活。由于写作材料来源于生活，并有很强的时效性，使学生对主题的表达不会生疏，让不同程度的学生都有事可写，有经历可说，有情感可以表达。从主题角度看，材料不仅与时代和孩子的生活息息相关，也与构建和谐、提倡人与人之间的温情紧密联系，这无疑在告诉孩子，我们的社会是这样温暖，而作为年轻一代要懂得付出温暖。

这篇作文要拿高分，首先主题表达要与话题材料相一致，不能偏题；其次，着重表达真情实感，我们希望学生在写作中能选取来自生活的事例，吐露真情；此外，谋篇布局也很重要，无论是好标题，还是好结尾，都能给文章增加亮点。

拱墅区、江干区 独木不成林

独木不成林，只有千树万树齿相依，才有那阵阵松涛；滴水不成流，只有千点万点长聚首，才有万顷碧波。生活又何尝不是如此？生活正是因为有了你，有了我，有了他，有了你、我、他的和谐相处，才五彩斑斓。

根据你对这段文字的理解，联系自己的生活实际，自拟题目写一篇不少于600字的文章；可以记叙经历，编写故事，也可以发表议论，抒发情感；文中不要出现你及你本人有关的人名和校名。

点评人：大关中学初中语文教研组

本次作文采用的是材料作文的形式，有了具体材料，学生更容易把握方向。这则材料符合新课程的理念，要培养学生学习合作，合作学习的精神，在现代社会中合作不仅给学生成功带来好处，同时对学生的各种品质产生积极影响。“和气”“和美”“和谐”是整个社会目前关注的热点，让学生想一想，写一写，有利于学生融入社会。

写作时，学生既可以从“家和”“人和”等生活细节入手，又可从人与自然和谐相处等着眼。

点评人：章新其(江干区中学语文教研员)

作为一篇材料作文，它的开放性很强，将立意自主权还给学生，有利于学生的自由发挥，同时也是引导学生关注生活、关注社会。不过文章在立意上对学生的要求比较高，学生立意要准，主题必须从材料而来，所以落笔前一定要仔细看材料。材料里有很多东西好挖，例如和谐、团结、互助等等，一般学生都能正常发挥出写作水平。

写好这篇文章，立意很重要，同时也要注重在形式上的创新，可以参考近年来在中考作文中涌现出的各类新文体，例如采用日记的形式、诊断书的形式、甚至以母亲等他人角色作文都可以，只要有充分的想象力就能写出让人耳目一新的新文体。 （沈蒙和）