初三期末英语作文范文10篇【精选20篇】

一 、试卷基本情况：

.这套试卷是一套综合型试卷，考核了学生考之前所应达到的英语运用综合能力，考核的难度系数中上，词汇方面考核了学生生容易掌握的词汇。总的来说，试卷涉及的知识面广，模拟中招试题形式，但缺少考查听力能力的(听力题)。卷面结构为：选择填空25分，完形填空10分,阅读理解30分, 情景对话10分，词汇20分，书面表达25分。总分120分

二、学生考试分数分析：

⑴、⑵两个班最高分：114分, 最低分：10分，⑴班平均分：83分，⑵班平均分：65分;100分以上有11人，90--99分有25人， 80—89 分16人，72—79分有9人，⑴班及格率90%，⑵班及格率：41%，优秀率20%， 60分以下有28人

三、学生答题情况分析

1 、单项填空：单项选择题分两部分，A部分为单词辨音，主要考查字母u 、i,字母组合ea、ear 、ow 在单词中的读音,学生失分主要在第1、3题。B部分为单项选择，考查的知识点多，覆盖面广，有一定的难度。但老师课堂都有讲到，可从学生做题情况来看，此题失分较多，从中可以看出学生对基础题掌握不够扎实，知识掌握还不到位。失分最多的主要集中在第 14(考查kind of 和 a kind of的区别)15、(考查spend，pay和take的区别),16(考查 It is +adj. + do…的句型)，17、(考查have fun doing sth.结构)，20题( 考查多个修饰词的顺序结构)

2、完形填空题的难度不大，既有考查语法知识，还要考查学生的分析理解能力。(1)班此题得分较高，2班级的学生得分较低。此题第23、28、29题丢分最多。由此看出学生的语法知识掌握不够牢靠。

3、阅读理解分ABC篇，C篇为任务读写型。AB篇所选的阅读文章主要考查学生对阅读材料的分析理解能力、推理判断和概括归纳能力。阅读理解难度适中，1班的得分率较高。学生已经掌握一定的阅读技巧。2班的有些学生由于对学习不感兴趣，这类的学生都是胡乱选题。此题失分较多的主要在32、36、40、题。此三题主要考查学生对文章的推理判断和归纳的能力。学生对文章的概括归纳能力还有待加强训练。C篇丢分较为严重，得分率很低，也有得满分的，但人数不多。在这方面学生有待于提高。

4、 情景交际主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。所选材料贴近学生的生活实际，考查题目基本都可以通过上下文语境完成，相对比较容易，得分较高。

5、词汇主要考查常用单词，两个班的学生在词汇题上失分较高，主要存在几点：⑴不会拼写单词;⑵时态的错误;⑶词的词的正确形式。

6、写作

写作分AB篇;A篇小作文的要求是介绍人物的，浅显易懂，学生有话可说。写自己印象最深刻的人，这题材学生练过的，也是都是学生在日常生活中经常用到的，说到的语言，学生组织起来不难。所用的句型、单词都是学生学过的，且都是重点内容。在日常教学中，是老师反复强调的内容。因此，本题得分率还可以;而B篇 书面表达。 从试卷得分情况看，学生对于写作部分的词汇用法掌握不到位。对于动词的第三人称单数的概念不清，时态运用正确，大部分学生基础知识掌握得不好，张冠李戴的现象比较突出，个别学生不注意审题。⑵班好些学生空白不写。有些学生甚至抄阅读理解的短文内容。

四、具体改进措施

1、钻研新教材，夯实英语基础。在练习时，很多学生“一看就会，一做就错”，这种现象比较普遍，失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢，只有扎扎实实从基础做起，才能最终达到“一看就会，一做就对”。

2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的，而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的，因此，要加强理解语篇的能力训练，增强英语语感。

3、规范训练，改进学习方法。要善于分析学生，找出学生的薄弱环节，合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。

4、加强听力训练。冰冻三尺非一日之寒，听力理解能力的提高不是一朝一夕能改变的，而是长期的不间断训练的结果，因此要保证每天让学生至少听力训练10分钟。

This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.

In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.

We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!

We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.

Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.

这次期末考试，考试的结果其实已经是在我的想像之中了。我知道这半个学期来，我的成绩一直以直线下滑。我想:这一定是我的骄傲自满、自以为是，和我对于学习的态度形成的，这也体现了我并没有把知识掌握住。这也是一种极低水平的表现。

我也知道，骄傲使人落后，虚心使人进步，但在被一切冲昏了头脑后，我毅然决然地选择了骄傲，这也标志着我期末考即将迎来一个十分烂的成绩。在英语课上，我打小差，与同学讲话，也变得懒惰，连单词都不记。而对于语文，我懒得就如同猪一般，练习册的完成程度十分糟糕，坑蒙拐骗偷样样齐全，使一个学习委员的光荣逐渐在同学眼中褪去。

新的一学期，我也将迎来新的自己，我会更加认真对待每一门科目，杜绝掉“骄傲”的性格，况且我并没有骄傲的资本。我会认认真真地走好每一步，让下一次测试，来检查我是否合格。

Ah! Christmas morning! Children like to wake up early while its still dark and sneak(蹑手蹑脚) into the living room to check the presentsfind any with their names on it, shake them to guess whats inside, and then maybe theyll go back to bed and pretend they are still asleep when their parents come to wake them with a Merry Christmas!

But almost no one I know gets completely dressed or eats a regular breakfast on Christmas morning. They just put on robes(长袍) or wear their pajamas(睡衣) and go to see whats under the Christmas tree. Some Christian families have a tradition of reading the Bible story of Jesus birth. Maybe its to remind(提醒) the children that Christmas is Jesus birthday.

Someone will begin to take the presents out from under the tree, see whose name is on the package, and then pass them around. Some families wait until all the presents have been given out before opening any of them, while others open each one as it comes to them. There are many thank you to the ones who gave the gifts. New clothes are tried on to see if they are fit, and of course the most interesting toys will immediately be played with.

Usually among the Christmas gifts will be some especially delicious candy or cake or cookies which everyone tastes. These sweet things may be the only breakfast many people eat on Christmas morning. After the gifts have been opened, the room will be tidied up except where the children are playing with their toys. Everyone will wash and get dressed for the day.

[精选初三英语作文：Christmas Day

I had a happy day off last Sunday.It was sunny all day.

In the morning, I helped my mother do housework. After that,I washed the car with my father.And I babysitted my sister.

In the afternoon,we went out for lunch.We ate the BeiJing Duck ,It was very delicious. After lunch , we went to the aquarium.First,we visited the VisitorsCenter and watched a movie about sharks.Then,we went to the Outdoor Pool,we saw a bid octopus.We also saw mang kinds of fishes,but I liked the seals best.Because they were very cute.We took lots of photos there. Finally , tired but happy,we took the bus back to home.

At the end of the day,we visited my grandparents.I watched some DVDs with my grandfather,and my parents told with my grandmother.We were really happy.

I hope I will have a happy day off next week,too.

上星期天我有一个快乐的休息日。这是晴朗的一天。

早上,我帮妈妈做家务。在那之后,我洗了车与我父亲同在一样。我照顾我的妹妹。

下午,我们出去吃午饭。我们吃了北京烤鸭,它非常美味。午饭后,我们去了水族馆。首先,我们参观了游客中心,观看了一部关于鲨鱼的电影。然后,我们去了户外游泳池,看到章鱼。我们也看到许多种类的鱼,但我最喜欢海豹。因为它们非常可爱。我们把很多照片。最后,很累,但是很开心,我们坐公车回到家里。

在一天结束的时候,我们参观了我的祖父母。我看到一些dvd与我的祖父,我的父母告诉我的祖母。我们真的快乐。

我希望我下周将有一个快乐的休息日。

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优尼全能英语：初三英语作文范文-我的朋友my

friend

my friend

每个人都有自己的朋友，请把你最要好或最特殊的朋友介绍给大家。词汇：

1. n. friends, parents, teachers, classmates, family, school, relatives , happiness, sadness, generation gap, feelings, friendship, communication, teamwork

2. v. make friends, understand encourage take good care of,expect, get on well with, play together, smile, trouble, talk with, quarrel with, help each other, discuss, argue, do well in enjoy oneself

3. adj. happy, sad, important, lonely , helpful, necessary

句式

1. i hope we can understand each other.

2. it’s necessary to understand each other.

3. no one can be successful only by himself.

4. there are some sayings, “friendship is sunlight in the dark.” “if there were no friendships in a city, it would become a desert.”

5. although we sometimes quarrel with each other, yet we get on well later.6. we should get on well with everyone around us.

7. the more friends you get, the happier you will be.

8. a friend can not only help you, but also bring you happiness.

9. everybody needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

10. don’t argue, but discuss.

11. people who refuse to consider others have few friends.

12. we need to learn how to take care of other people.

13. “a friend in need is a friend indeed.”

范文

my best friend

i have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. he is my father. my father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. he usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. at weekends he plays chess, cards with me. when i am in trouble. he always help me in time. i prefer my father to any other friend. i think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. i love my father very much.

According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand

from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public

places both inside and outside from May 1 on.

As is known to all, smoking is bad for peoples health. It may cause many

diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to

us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to

us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers

a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to

stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to

smoking.

Recently,people come to realize how much grain we wasted every year. And everyone is called on to join a program,called "GuangpanXingdong",which requires people to eat up all our food.

As for me,i think its a extremely good idea to follow.And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it.For example,when we go out for dinner,we can just order as much food as we can eat to make sure little will be wasted.Of course if we really cant eat up our food,its also ok to take it home,so we can eat it later.Besides,once we have a chance to have meals with other people,who dont realize the importance,we can explain what the program is for and persuade them from wasting food.

Some may question whether the campaign have any effect,but,i think ,one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make,it do make a difference.

伤心寂寞时，寻找你帮我解决;

劳累困惑时，驻足在你的港湾：

你，永远是我无助时想到的，但我的`快乐不同与你分享!但你仍是这样劳作下去，不求回报。

回眸十六年来的点点滴滴，从一个哇哇坠地的小孩到如今已有一米六几的我，您为我操心了多少，付出了多少，想必这数目是无法估算的。但你无怨无悔!

刚迈入小学的我由于胆小，不敢上学，你便放下手头的公事陪我上下学，你教会我认字、念诗，告诉我道理。记得有次上学不小心扭到了脚，当班主任把我送到家时，你埋怨自己，说没照顾好我!从那以后，你天天跟着我，生怕又伤到我。每晚，我都是听着你讲的故事慢慢进入梦乡!你就是这样，含蓄静默不张扬，点点滴滴都是对儿女的呵心。

长大后的我，心里像是长了一堵墙一般，渐渐的我不与你分享我的事，什么事都瞒着你，有事还会为一些小事与你发生争执，开始不理解你，不信任你，甚至去怀疑你。

有次为自己丢掉的信与你发生争吵，你流下了我从未见过的眼泪，那时的我还暗暗的说你是“装”，但了解一切以后，我却没有勇气向你道歉，反倒你来道歉，说都有是你的错，我听着你的的话，心里默默的流泪，原来母亲就是自己的受气包，所有自己不敢承担的错，到最后都“归功”在母亲你的身上，但你还是不怨不悔,默默承担着。

我的任性，你会迁就;我的哭泣，会得到你的安慰;我的错误，会得到你的谅解......而你的一切我只会埋怨。

我曾问过你为什么这样对我，你很淡定的说：“因为我是你的妈妈!”，就因为这一句话和这种不可切断的关系，你为我操尽心，流干泪......

全世界的母亲多么相像啊!她们的心始终一样。每个母亲都有一颗极为纯真的爱子之心。

Most Chinese students have difficulties in learning English. The difficulties vary so much from person to person that it is difficult to cite here in a few words. Some may have problems in reading. Others may have trouble in writing. I also had problems in English learning, but my difficulty seemed to lie in listening. For example, when tested for listening comprehension, I couldnt understand a single sentence, let alone a passage of medium level.

In order to overcome the difficulty in my English learning, I made great efforts to find the key to the problem. I consulted my teacher and found out that I merely didnt have enough time to practice listening. So I bought a tape recorder and listened to it at least two hours a day. In addition, I listened to "Special English" on VOA. I also went out of my way to speak to foreigners on the campus whenever we meet so that I could have the chance to listen to the native speakers. After half a years hard work, I could get 70% of the questions correct in listening comprehension tests.

I own my success to my English teacher. It is him who tells me the correct way to learn English. It is him who always encourages me when I encounter difficulties and feel disappointed.

大多数中国学生在学习英语方面有困难。人与人之间的困难出现如此大的差异,很难在这里引用几句话。可能有一些问题在阅读。其他人可能有困难。我学习英语也有问题,但我的困难似乎躺在听。例如,当听力测试,我无法理解一个句子,更不用说一段中等水平。

为了克服困难在我的英语学习,我努力找到问题的关键。我咨询我的老师发现我只是没有足够的时间来练习听力。所以我买了一个录音机,听了一天至少两个小时。另外,我听美国之音特别英语”。我也出去和外国人说话校园时我们见面,这样我就可以有机会听母语。经过半年的努力,我可以得到70%的问题正确的听力测试。

我拥有我的成功归功于我的英语老师。这是他告诉我学英语的正确方法。他总是鼓励我当我遇到困难,感到失望。

As the saying goes, "not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall".

When I was small, I know there is a Chinese building called the Great Wall. So I

very want to go to there to see. Finally, when I was three years old, my father

and mother took me to the Great Wall.

Far see the Great Wall, it is like a huge dragon, hovering in the numerous

mountain. Its ups and downs, and sometimes hidden in the mountains, and

sometimes jumped out from the mountains, like surf on the roller.

Father hold me, go up along the steep steps, I looked at the Great Wall, it

is hard to find a flat place, all of them are steep, slope, the steps of each

slope and the steps of the joint has a tower. These towers like past a huge,

magnificent castle.

People mountain people sea, climbing to the Great Wall. In the photo and

the Great Wall, magnificent in praise of the Great Wall, people say: "well, the

badaling Great Wall really real!" And enjoy the beautiful scenery. Even the

foreigners come to China to see the beauty of the Great Wall. Looking down from

the Great Wall, the rolling mountains, reflected in our eyes, pieces of thick

forests and maturity, endless.

The Great Wall is built with large stone and ChengZhuan, tall and strong,

the walls covered with square brick, square brick is flat and level. Outside the

wall along the lines of "window" and the "gap".

The Great Wall, it is the world famous great buildings.

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

hoping to excite student interest in our reading center, i asked each teacher to write a new years resolution on a special form and send it to me.

after i posted the resolutions on the bulletin board in the reading center, one young teacher stopped by, looked at them for a few minutes, and then left abruptly. passing two teachers on their way in, she stormed, "my resolution isnt posted - and mine was one of the first ones in!" i cannt help but overhear, and the tone of her voice sent me flying to my desk in search of a misplaced resolution.

looking rapidly through stacks of papers, i uncovered hers. it read, "i resolve not to let little things upset me. "

"...5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go!" On October 15, 2003, China launched its

first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in

Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.

Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket

carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared

spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball betore vanishing into

deep space.

As the worlds largest developing country, China is more than proud of

making its own contribution to human beings outer space exploration. Meantime,

it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and

social development.The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter

in space history.

A Friend of Mine

I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He comes from Beijing.

Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.

We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made GREat proGREss in our studies.

We have made up our minds to study harder and win still GREater success in our studies.

[以A Friend of Mine为题目的初三英语作文

Many people will be unforgettable, memorable things, unforgettable person, memorable day, a class to remember... I was the most memorable of my childhood. Childhood like a cup of milk, contains the fun of childhood. Childhood is like a stream, flowing childhood friendship; Childhood is like a song, the song with our happy childhood. How is not memorable to me?

My childhood was spent in liao home for transshipment. The scenery there is beautiful, green grass, green flowers, fresh air, we all immersed in the village in the mountains, compose a colorful picture. We have a few friend, three group, two group of son, play in the process of that sweet voice, echoed across the sky, wandering the midterm, for a long time cant stop!

During my childhood, I often pick wild flowers on the hill, looking for the bamboo shoots with friends, play games, back childhood that a few interesting childrens song...

很多人都会有难忘，难忘的事，难忘的人，难忘的日子，难忘的一节课……我最难忘的是我的童年。童年像一杯牛奶，蕴含着童年的乐趣;童年像小溪，流淌着童年的友谊;童年像一首歌，歌里有着童年我们的幸福。怎能不令我难忘?

我的童年是在廖家畈度过的。那里的风景格外的美，青的草、绿的花，新鲜的空气，我们整个村庄都沉浸在这青山绿水中，构成了一幅多姿多彩的画卷。我们几个小伙伴，三个一群，两个一伙儿，玩耍的过程中那甜美的声音，回响在整个上空，徘徊期中，久久不能停歇!

童年时，我经常和小伙伴们一起山上采野花、找竹笋、做游戏、背童年那几首生动有趣的儿歌……

Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.旅行不仅拓宽我的视野，还让我看到全世界。小编在此整理了关于旅行初三英语作文，供大家参阅，希望大家在阅读过程中有所收获!

关于旅行初三英语作文篇1

Nowadays, more and more people like to travel in their holidays. The other day I read a report about the ways people spend their holidays. It is reported that in recent yiars several new holiday habits have been developed. Among them, the most interesting one is the growth of the so-called holiday camps.

From the report we can see that in 20XX,40 percent of people stayed at home for holidays. But now the proportion has reduced to 9 percent. More people go out for fun. The proportion of camping and traveling abroad was increasing steadily, from 10 percent in 20XX to 38 percent in 20XX, and 12 percent in 20XX to 26 percent in 20XX respectively. People enjoy the fresh air, clean Water and green hills when they go camping in the suburbs. In 20XX,38 percent people enjoyed going to the seaside while in 20XX only 27 percent prefer to go there. What great changes!

Why did those changes appear? I think there are several reasons. First, it s because people can afford traveling. Second, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life. Third, their attitudes to relaxation have changed. Less people want to save much money by leading a simple life. In short, peoples living standard today has been rising greatly.

关于旅行初三英语作文篇2

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of gamesthere. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

关于旅行初三英语作文篇3

Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.

Advantages of owning a private car. 2)Disadvantages of owning a private car. 3)Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where theregular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds. However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage. Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles.

[关于初三英语的作文:Private car

每一年的初三上期末考试，我们都万分关注，不仅是因为试题难度的提升，题型的综合。更为关键的这一次的期末成绩对我们的学生影响深远……

而面对所有试题中分值最大的作文——50分，我们今年该何去何从呢?下面就由唐哲老师，来为你解开2014年城四区作文的神秘面纱……

【东城区作文解析】

六。作文(50分)

23.请以“一个的人”为题，写一篇文章。

要求：(1)补全题目，将题目抄写在答题卡上。

(2)不限文体(诗歌除外)。

(3)字数在600-1000之间。

(4)作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

今年的东城的作文题目，一出现就激起千层浪，看到这个标题，不禁让我想到这个是小学生的作文题目吗?《一个_______的人》这个作文题目实在是太和谐了。相信我们的孩子看到了这个作文题目也会非常开心。

从整体上里看，我们的学生在面对考场作文是的写作步骤应该是先审题，再构思内容、结构等。而对一个半命题作文来说，我们则需要先补充题目，要想补充出新意更加是有难度的。从已给的信息中，可以看出文章主要是写人的，补充的核心词应该是围绕人来展开。首先我们会想到在横线上补充上关于人物的品质类的词语，像是“一个勇敢的人”、“一个坚强的人”等，这样补充对于学生来说是比较好写的，但缺乏新意。因此在补充题目时，可以采用修辞手法，以这样的方式来补充题目。可以用比喻修辞入题。然后在选择相应包含特殊含义的名词来入题。另外，在结构文章内容的时候，则一定要结合所补充的关键词的叙写。

孩子们要注意，虽然作文题目好写，但是一定要注意文章内容与标题的对应。

从结构上来看则需要学生们注意扣题，开头点题。从选材上则需要注重贴近生活，表现出对于生活的感悟和理解。

【海淀区作文解析】

初中三年的生活，就是一首隽永的诗。一千多个日子，就是一行行美丽的诗句。我们用真诚作笔，以激情为墨，书写着我们青春的诗行，歌唱着我们的理想、胸怀、友谊……请以“青春的诗行”为题写一篇文章，表达自己对初中生活的独特感受。

要求： 1、请将题目抄写在答题纸上。

2、文体不限，诗歌除外。

3、不少于600字。

4、作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

今年海淀区的作文考察依旧保持其偏难怪的特点，又一次突破了我们的预期。整体考查形式承接2013年中考[微博]作文《好奇》。而《青春的诗行》乍一看这个作文题目，感觉无从下手。青春却是如诗一般的美好，着看着就容易写成抒情散文的作文题目，该如何从叙述的角度入手呢?如何破题呢?其关键就是作文题干中给的解释性的文字。“初中三年的生活，就是一首隽永的诗。一千多个日子，就是一行行美丽的诗句。”这一句话需要学生清楚，我们这篇作文所选择的作文素材要紧贴初中三年的生活，如果你不幸的写了小学的发生的事件，那么你就跑题了哦~另外，这一千多个日子，是一行行美丽的诗句，因此我们所选择的内容应该是体现我们美好回忆的一面，不能够是生活中的失意与伤感哦~

“我们用真诚作笔，以激情为墨，书写着我们青春的诗行，歌唱着我们的理想、胸怀、友谊”而从这个要求中来看，文章的主题应围绕我们“理想、胸怀、友谊”任选其一来书写。文章的整体内容更要体现出我们真诚、努力以及激情~究其根本，这个作文的考察目的依旧是围绕学生对于生活的感悟与体验。

【朝阳区作文解析】

旅行不仅是行走过程，也是一种精神历程。我们可以旅行在自然的风景里，旅行在茫茫书海中，旅行在艺术长河里，旅行在仁爱的温馨里，我们或快乐，或感动，或孤独，或徘徊，这些丰富多彩的旅程，让我们顿悟，催我们奋进，促我们成长。请你以“_____之旅”为题写一篇文章。

朝阳区今年的作文题目，无论是从难度上，还是学生写作的高度上都是特别好的一个作文题目。总体来说这个作文题目对于孩子们的作文水平要求还是比较高的。

补充作文的题目，要依据作文要求中的解释性的文字。即“旅行不仅是行走过程，也是一种精神历程。我们可以旅行在自然的风景里，旅行在茫茫书海中，旅行在艺术长河里，旅行在仁爱的温馨里，我们或快乐，或感动，或孤独，或徘徊，这些丰富多彩的旅程，让我们顿悟，催我们奋进，促我们成长。”

从这部分的要求中可以看出，我们在选择切入点时，可以选择的角度为：自然的风景--自然;茫茫书海--知识;在艺术长河--生活;在仁爱的温馨--人生。从以上角度任选其一即可。

选择好文章的切入点后，要注意在我们所选择的素材中要是一个过程--丰富多彩，因此从这一要求来看，我们的文章结构一片段式为佳。由于他要体现出是一个旅程，因此在文章重要体现出时间与空间甚至于情感上的变化的过程。

同时，“让我们顿悟，催我们奋进，促我们成长。”这就是在文章中的主题书写，在记叙事件的同时，应该注意个人感悟的叙写，对人生、自然以及社会等方面的认知，从精神层面获得成长。

【西城区作文解析】

六、作文(50分)

要求：

(1) 将题目抄写在答题卡上。

(2) 不限文体(诗歌除外)。

(3) 字数在600-1000之间。

(4) 作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

今年西城的作文题目以《来之不易的成果》为题，只看题目无从下笔，但是细想之下，这个作文还是比较好写的，只是需要注意以下几点

首先，考查形式为全命题作文，不用绞尽脑汁的补充题目。但是这个题目是一个短语类型的，因此我们需要我们同学注意申请题目中的关键词。而“来之不易”与“成果”，看起来都很重要。“来之不易”--体现出过程，需要我们重点描绘细节;“成果”--强调结果，展现的是我们独特的感悟与体验。

其次，通过对“文学名著是作家长期积淀和勤奋创作的成果，科技发明是科学家不懈探索和忘我钻研的成果，每个人或每个集体经过积累和努力，都会有自己的成果，它可能是一张挂在教室里的奖状，也可能是你的一本习作集”的分析，我们可以了解到写作对象可以是个人，也可以是我们所在的集体。但为了获得成果，我们都需要不断地积累和努力，最终成功。因此我们在选材的时候应该注意，成果的获得不是轻而易举的，而是需要经历一定过程的，进而体现出“不易”。文章在描写细节时要重点刻画此处情节，体现文章的详略。

最后，“这些成果有的使你由衷赞叹，有的让你充满自豪”则是对于文章主题选择角度。我们在获得成果之后，收获的不仅仅是“奖状”“习作集”等，更重要的是在付出的过程中，在来之不易获得成果的过程里，我们品味到了什么?在人生、自然、社会等层面我们有哪些新的认识。

无论各区甚至中考作文题目如何变化，考试对于作文的能力要求却是不变的，因此只有掌握能力才是制胜的关键，才是王道……

导语：也许我们不可以改变自己的容貌,但我们的心灵可以提升,我们的心灵在受到一次次洗礼当中醒悟、净化……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Today, I saw an very interesting movie. The story was about a boy met a girl who lived next to him since he was very small. The girl was so active and the boy was very shy. The boy was scared by the girl’s passion. When they were middle school students, the boy tried to get rid of the girl, but the boy started to realize the girl was very special. Though she was not as beautiful as the girl he once liked at school, he was attracted by her feature. The girl had a beautiful soul. She was not skin-deep and she has her own thinking. The boy realized that she was the best.

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今天，我看了一部非常有趣的电影。这个故事是关于一个男孩在他很小的时候就遇到一个住在他隔壁的女孩。女孩非常活跃活泼，而男孩却很害羞。男孩被女孩的热情给吓着了。当他们上初中时，男孩试图摆脱这个女孩，不过他也开始慢慢意识到这个女孩是非常特别的。虽然她没有他在学校曾经喜欢过的那个女孩子那么漂亮，但是他被她的性格所吸引。这个女孩有着美丽的心灵，一点都不肤浅。她有自己的想法。男孩发现这个女孩才是最好的。

How to get happyness 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。