初中英语日记20篇带翻译【优秀20篇】

初中英语日记（一）

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

初中英语日记（二）

As is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. They increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, they are our good teachers and wise friends. This is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing, but we must pay GREat attention to the choice of books. It is true that we can derive benefits from good books. However, bad books will do us more harm than good.

如众所周知，书籍教我们学习 人生，真理，科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识，扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说，它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终是鼓励我们要多读书的理由。

读书是一好事，但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错，我们能从好书中获得益处。然而，坏书却对我们有害无益。

初中英语日记（三）

In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful brid.I dreamed that I was in a forest. In tht forest,there were a lot of animals.Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution."All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest.Many animals were caught.The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest.Many old trees were felled.And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked and then I bursted out crying.I woke up at midnight.It was only a dream.

在梦中

昨晚我梦见我变成一只非常漂亮的鸟.我梦见我在一座森林,森林里有很多动物.然后有一只老鸟告诉我们,"我们有一座非常美丽的森林,

因此我们应该保护它,免受污染"所有的动物都赞成他.

但是第二天,人们进入我们的森林,许多动物被逮捕.这些人要在我们的森林地上建造房子和公园.许多年老的树木被砍下,然后,突然间,一切都被夷平了.

我很震惊,接着突然大哭起来.我在半夜醒来,原来只是个梦.

今天中午，我自己做了一回蛋炒饭。

以前，蛋炒饭都是爸爸妈妈给我烧的，我从没烧过，因为爸爸妈妈怕这怕那，还有……呵呵，我有点不好意思讲-我懒得干。

今天中午，妈妈突然说:“你都这么大了，也应该自己烧一回蛋炒饭了!”“NO!”别以为我这次又懒得干……我还是不出丑吧--因为我根本不会，毕竟我还是第一次嘛!妈妈似乎看

透了我的心思，说:“谁天生就会?谁不是学起来的?来我教你。”接着，妈妈一边说一边做着我就开始炒了起来。

第一步:打蛋。我拿来两个蛋，把蛋壳磕破，将蛋黄和蛋清一股脑儿倒进碗里，再用妈妈教我的方法打了起来。

第二步:炒饭。我先把昨天剩下来的饭拿出来，放在一口碗里，接着打开煤气灶和油烟机，然后，我在锅里放上油，再慢慢放上饭，用铲子炒起来，直到冒烟了--不是烧焦了--就行了。

第三步:放酱油。我将酱油放在铲上，然后铲起饭来，直到酱油均匀了，就好了。

第四步:放蛋。我将蛋全倒下去，然后用铲子铲了起来。如果蛋桨凝固了，那一碗香喷喷的蛋炒饭就大功告成了!

我吃着自己炒的蛋炒饭，觉得特别好吃。

In a few days is the Dragon Boat Festival.

Do you have to know the Dragon Boat Festival? I know, in order to commemorate WuZiLian, his father was murdered by king chu, dig grave after he went to the kingdom of wu, chu got know sword he giveth him dead bodies into river, on May 5, the day the custom of Dragon Boat Festival is a family mo_a grass, pomegranate flowers, garlic, rowing.

Home is the holiday, we get up early in the morning, bath, wash a mo_a grass.

I most like the Dragon Boat Festival!

再过几天就是端午节了。

你知道端午节的有来吗?我知道，为了纪念伍子廉，他的父兄被楚王所杀，之后他去吴国挖墓，楚王知道了他赐剑死了他将尸体投入大江，这天5月5日端午节的习俗是个家插艾草，石榴花，蒜头，划龙舟。

我们家是这样过节的，一大早起床，洗一个艾草澡。

我最喜欢过端午节了!

《失火之后》这篇作文语言生动，文章有理有据，说服力强，上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，首尾照应，结尾点题，不失为一篇佳作。

文章开头新颖，具有先声夺人之效，使读者看了第一句忍不住接着往下读。交代失火原因以及救火时的危险时，加入人物行为，生活中的画面跃然纸上，并以艺术真实和生活真实相结合的手法，把故事写得生动感人。然后引出居民的议论，最后得出“我”的思考，使文章的主题自然而然升华到了较高的境界。结尾部分正是作者要表达的，即写作此文的宗旨，换言之，中心思想。一个中学生能有这样的体会，令人刮目相看。精彩的结尾可谓点睛之笔，看似平常，却最奇特，这便是作品的艺术特色，有着强烈的现实意义。

该文采用第一人称，给人以身临其境之感。语言很有特点，虽然不华丽，但却极为准确、生动、形象，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味，这是很难得的。在描写火势时，“火焰足足有半层楼高，那气势，就算是火红的太阳也要逊色几分”;在叙述失火后的景象时，“原来白色的墙已经变成了一片漆黑，像是被刷了油漆似的”，类似可圈可点的佳句不少，给文章增添了些文学情趣。

该文的另一个特点就是结构合理，作者对原文的理解也十分深刻透彻，加上语言铿锵有力，掷地有声，令人过目不忘。本文题目“失火之后”，但在叙述“失火”的事情时，用了大量的笔墨描写失火的过程，后面的结尾简练，只用了一个很小的自然段。其实这是一种很巧妙的写作手法，前面进行了充分的铺垫，结尾的点题才能水到渠成，前因后果娓娓道来，很自然，让读者信服，且毫无造作之感。如果能把失火后人们灭火时的细节描写出来(不仅仅是“一桶接一桶的水往火上浇去”)，把失火造成的损失着重叙述一下(不仅仅是电瓶车烧毁，把墙壁熏黑)，则更有说服力，更能震撼人，作品就会显得更有思想深度。

Wide sea diving, the days of the birds to fly. Everyone carries a dream of

their own.

However, what is the dream? What is dream? Dream is looking forward to, and

the dream is strong - is fleeting dream you insist on the ideal as their courage

and perseverance, are you responsible for their own highest level. But ask

yourself, how many of us to accomplish his original dream in mind?

Our dream is a simple belief, is a future and life of their own

responsibility. Perhaps, is the Youth

grand ambitions; perhaps, is the adolescent confusion and impulsive; maybe

just a plain desire, desire applause, eager for success. Countless "may,"

innumerable "hope" because of our youthful full of miracles, large and small

dreams in our hearts, in every corner of life filled with fragrance.

Only the ideal but no effort is useless. If you want to be a teacher, you

should to study hard. If you want to be a player, you should do more exercises.

If you want to become a businessman, he should learn to get along with people.

For example, my wish is to be a famous writer grew up, because I really love

writing, so from now on, I should read more, more accumulate knowledge, and

strive to improve writing level. No pains, no gains, because my efforts, so my

article was punished in many newspapers , and in many composition contest, I see

the success Im happy, so, struggle is the bridge to the ideal.

Yes, my dream. to give my famliy a warm, give my friend happy. Yes, my

dream. The podium from the first station began his love this place, started from

the first published an article looking forward to the world of words, decided to

stay here from the beginning, stick to bottom of my heart desire.

Years in our faces no matter how many additional traces, no matter how much

things to us across the chest wounds, as long as we have the right to breathe,

to have a passion for remodeling dreams! Oxygen to survive as long as we have to

have the courage to create a passion!

Choose to continue, select the value, select the achievements of the

passion of life, the brave hearts of the initial dream of success!

海阔凭鱼跃，天高任鸟飞。每个人都怀揣着一个属于自己的梦想。

然而，什么是梦?什么又是梦想?梦是期待，而梦想是坚强--是你把飘渺的梦坚持作为自己理想的勇气和执著，是你对自己负责的最高境界。但扪心自问，我们有多少人能够成就自己心中最初的梦想?

我们的梦想，是一个简单的信念，是一份对自己未来与生命的责任。也许，是二十岁的豪情壮志;也许，是青春期的迷茫与冲动;也许只是一份平淡的渴望，渴望掌声，渴望成功。无数的“可能”，无数的“希望”，因为我们的青春岁月充满奇迹，我们心中大大小小的梦，在生活的每一个角落里芬芳弥漫。

是的，我的梦想。一份从一而终的守望--给我的学生希望，给我的读者温暖，给我的爱人幸福。是的，我的梦想。从第一次站上讲台开始迷恋这个地方，从第一次发表文章开始憧憬文字世界，从决定留在这里开始，坚守心底的渴望。

无论岁月在我们脸上增添了多少痕迹，无论世事在我们胸口划过多少到伤痕，只要我们还有呼吸的权利，就拥有重塑梦想的激情!只要我们还有生存的氧气，就拥有缔造激情的勇气!

落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。选择坚持，选择珍惜，选择成就生命的激情，勇敢的成就心中最初的梦想!

美丽的环城河边种有很多桂花树，每到秋天，一簇簇桂花竞相开放，黄色的金桂，白色的银桂，散发出浓郁的芳香。每当路过环城河边，我都会禁不住赞叹：“好香啊!”星期天，我和小朋友来到桂花树下，一阵风吹过，树上的桂花纷纷落下来，粘在头发上，钻进脖子里，躺在肩膀上，于是我身上也发出阵阵桂花香，妈妈说我成桂花仙子了。

听爸爸说，桂花还有很多用途呢!它可以做空气清新剂，可以做清香的桂花茶，还可以做香甜可口的桂花糕……

我很喜欢美丽的桂花。

How happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a

lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can

have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy

eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone,

if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, try your best.

我有多么的高兴，昨天我很快完成了所有的工作,所以我有很多时间用来自己分配。有时提前完成学习任务是件好事,我们会有更多的兴趣去做下一件事情。正因为如此,我写英语日记都是在早上八点。但在过去的晚上我还是要在晚上写。任何人,如果你能完成这项工作得很快,不要偷懒,尽自己最大的努力。

Someone said “we are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a

book, whose pages are infinite”. I don’t know who wrote these words, but I’ve

always liked them as a reminder that the future can be anything we want it to

be. We are all in the position of the farmers. If we plant a good seed ,we reap

a good harvest. If we plant nothing at all, we harvest nothing at all.

一些人说“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”我不知道谁写了这些话，但是我一直很喜欢它，因为它提醒了我，我们能够创造我们想要的未来。我们都是农夫。如果我们播下好的种子，我们将会丰收。如果我们的种子很差，有很多草籽，收割的将是无用的庄稼。如果我们什么也不播种，什么收获也没有。

We are young. “How to spend the youth?” It is a meaningful question. To

answer it, first I have to ask “what do you understand by the word youth?” Youth

is not a time of life, it’s a state of mind. It’s not a matter of rosy cheeks,

red lips or supple knees. It’s the matter of the will. It’s the freshness of the

deep spring of life.

我们是年轻的。“怎样度过青春?”这是个有意义的问题。为了去回答它，我首先要问“从‘青春’这个词中你能理解到什么?”青春不是人生的一个时期，而是精神的一种状态。青春不是桃面、丹唇、柔膝，而是深沉的意志，。青春是生命的深泉在涌流。

A poet said “To see a world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild

flower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour. Several

days ago, I had a chance to listen to a lecture. I learnt a lot there. I’d like

to share it with all of you. Let’s show our right palms. We can see three lines

that show how our love.career and life is. I have a short line of life. What

about yours? I wondered whether we could see our future in this way. Well, let’s

make a fist. Where is our future? Where is our love, career, and life? Tell

me.Yeah, it is in our hands. It is held in ourselves.

一位诗人说“从一粒沙看世界，从一朵花看天堂，把无限放在你的手掌，永恒在一刹那里收藏”。几天前，我有了一个听讲座的机会，从中我学到了很多东西。现在，我想把这些与大家共享。让我们伸出右手，我们可以看到手掌中的展示我们的爱，事业和生活的三条线。我在生活方面这条线很短，那你们的呢?我想知道我们是否可以用这种办法去看我们的未来。好的，让我们一起握拳。我们的未来在哪儿?我们的爱、事业和生活在哪儿?告诉我!是的，它们就在我们的手中。它们被我们自己掌握着。

We all want the future to be better than the past. But the future can go

better itself. Don’t cry because it is over, smile because it happened. From the

past, we’ve learnt that the life is tough, but we are tougher. We’ve learnt that

we can’t choose how we feel, but we can choose what about it. Failure doesn’t

mean you don’t have it, it does mean you should do it in a different way.

Failure doesn’t mean you should give up, it does mean you must try harder.

我们所有人都希望未来能比过去更美好，但是未来能自己变得更好。不要因为结束而哭泣，微笑吧，为你的曾经拥有。从过去来看，生活是艰苦的，但我们是更坚强。我们知道我们不能选择感觉，但是我们能选择和它相关的东西。失败并不意味着你不拥有成功，它只意味着你应该用另一种方式去做这件事。失败并不意味着你应该放弃，只意味着你应该更加努力。

As what I said at the beginning, “we are reading the first verse of the

first chapter of a book, whose pages are infinite”. The past has gone. Nothing

we do will change it. But the future is in front of us. Believe that what we

give to the world, the world will give to us. And from today on, let’s be the

owners of ourselves, and speak out “We are the world, we are the future.”

正如我在前面所说的“我们正在读一本无穷的书中的第一章的第一节。”过去的已经过去，无论我们无力改变，但是未来却在我们前方。相信“我们给了世界什么，世界也将给我们”。并且从今天起，让我们一起做我们自己的主人，一起大声说出“世界是我们的，未来是我们的。”

There are four seasons in the year .my favorite season is summer .because i

can go to the beach to swimming.i can have sunbath on the beach. i can wear

beautiful dress , i can go to the store to buy some ice creams. i can calling my

friends go to outside!summer is a fun season !I like summer very much!

一年有四个季节，我最喜欢的季节是夏天，因为可以去海边游泳，还可以在沙滩上享受日光浴。我可以穿漂亮的裙子，去商店买冰淇淋。打电话约朋友去外面游玩，夏天是一个有趣的季节，我非常喜欢夏天。

The power of love

Love is the parents is the world‘s largest love， is in their minds share of family support them， let them come in the heart of the disaster sons and daughters.

Kitagawa， May 14， 2008， the parents who struggle with death more than 40 hours after the three-year-old girl Song Xin Yi finally rescued， rescue workers to feed her milk. Her parents live in the time， desperate to protect the fragile body of her， until both passing away， also maintained that posture. Parents touched by the love of God， let the children saved， small Xinyi Zaitianzhiling parents can comfort!

爱的力量

父母之爱莫过于是世界上最大的爱，是他们心中的那份亲情支撑着他们，让他们在灾难来临时心系儿女。

北川，2008年5月14日，在父母身下与死神抗争四十多小时后，三岁的小女孩宋欣宜终于获救，救援人员喂她喝牛奶。她的父母在活着的时候，以脆弱的身躯拼死保护着她，直到双双逝去，还保持着那种姿势。父母的爱感动了上天，让孩子得救了，小欣宜父母的在天之灵可以安慰了!

I bought a jeans today

Today,I went shopping with my intimate.We set out at 11:00 by riding Ofo

bicycle.Because both of us hadn‘t eaten breakfirst.,as soon as we arrived the

street,we ate a cheese iscream respectively.Then we went to underground

market.In the market,I bought a blue jeans,and my intimate bought a short

jeans.After three hours of hanging around the street,we were very tired and

hungry,so we bought a new chicken cutlet,and then went home by bus.We were so

hungry that we ate the chicken cutlet on the bus.After I backed home,I tried my

new jeans on,my mother said that looks old,let it be,as long as I happy.

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今天我买了一条牛仔裤

今天，我和我的闺蜜去逛街。我们上午11点就骑小黄车长发了。因为我们都没有吃早餐，所以我们一到那就各自吃了一个奶酪冰淇淋。然后我们就去地下商场。在商场里，我买了一条蓝色长牛仔裤，我的闺蜜买了一条短牛仔裤。我们逛了3个小时的街之后，又饿又累，所以我们就买了正新鸡排并且坐公交车回去。因为我们实在太饿了，于是就在公交车上吃了鸡排。我回家之后，就试穿了我的新牛仔裤，我妈妈说那看起来太成熟了，管他呢，我开心就好。

The summer vacation had come round again。 I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while。 Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation， I made a plan as to how to spend it。 First， I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them。 Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise， such as walking， running rowing， to keep me physically strong。 It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time。 I did， because I lived up to what I had planned。

This week I didnt do many wonderful things．

I went to learn developing film with my classmates on July 1st． It was easy and we all got good marks．

On July 4th， I went to school to learn， because I will be a junior three student soon． We would have to learn some lessons in advance． The weather was very hot． But I didnt feel that learning lessons was boring． Some teachers are new． They are good I think， although they are all looked strict． And the lessons were not too bad．

This week was the beginning of this summer holiday， but it was really typical ．

今天的第一节课是生物，这是我的第一次.

生物老师让我们全班同学到楼下观察花草，并作出笔记。在老师的带领下，我们满怀着新鲜感飞奔下楼，来到绿化带前。

我们可以从各个方面来观察植物。当我走近这些花儿的时候，就感受到了那泌人心脾的幽香，一种淡淡的，清幽的芳香袭拥而来，我只感到很舒畅，就像一股微微的清风，吹走了这些天给我带来的烦恼。在这众多的植物之中，那“鹤立鸡群”的，就莫过于那些“掌上明珠”的了!这个植物，说来可真是奇怪，这植物的根茎就像城市那纵横交错的道路一般。在这光滑油亮的枝茎上的小绿叶，软软的，叶片薄薄的，把那些“经脉”衬托出来。再仔细看一看这叶子，表面平整干净;背面就像是平地上凸起的小丘，连绵不断。

这植物挺直了腰板，站得笔直，它张开双手，定定的展现在我们的面前，好像实在欢迎我们的到来。我顺着它们的身躯往上看，咦?这是个什么东西?只见这植物的双手托着一个毛绒绒的小球，小球很怪，它是紫色的，周身鼓满了“刺”，那些“刺”并没有垂挂下来，而是正在精神抖擞地努力往外伸展。

“我在生长!”它们嚷嚷。

眼前的小球笑开了嘴，正对着我们傻傻地笑。这艳丽的紫色，这绽放开来的笑容，使我忍不住要上前抚摸一那蕴藏着新鲜活力的紫色小球，可这小东西还是有点儿怕生，没那么温顺，这紫色的外衣有点儿硬，有点儿扎手。中间的白色的小球，可能就是依靠这扎手的外衣来进行自我保护的吧!

这紫色小球还是一个盛装清香的小香水罐呢!

这是一节多么有趣，多么愉快的一节生物课啊!通过观察，我们知道了植物的神奇，植物的奥妙。

Today I came back from a place named “he chuan”, it’s a good place. There

has some nice view like chang jiang river. I came there in two days ago. Our

aunt is here. We had a good time in there. But I also write English dairy too.

Because of the wrong computer, the message didn’t here. I wish myself to live

more better tomorrow.

Dear teacher,

Well have a class meeting this afternoon. All of us students hope that you

can attend it. Please accept our sincere invitation. I

n the class meeting, we will make some plans about all the subjects,

including English. We do have some puzzles and we need your help. So we hope you

can set some time aside to be with us in the class meeting. We will feel honored

if you can come to attend our class meeting.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours

___

亲爱的老师：

今天下午我们将举行一次班会.我们所有的学生希望您能出席.请接受我们真诚的邀请.

在班会上，我们将制作关于所有学科的计划，包括英语.我们确实有一些疑惑并且需要您的帮助.所以我们希望您能腾出些时间来与我们一起上班会.如果您能来出班我们的班会，我们将感觉非常荣幸.

盼望您的到来.

___

教学目标：

1、 知识与能力：通过片段训练，学生能对一件事情做到具体叙述。

2、 过程与方法：通过演示实验、练习，掌握一定的写作技巧。

3、 情感态度与价值观：营造浓郁的文学氛围，激发学习文学热情，陶冶学生心情。 教学重点：片段练习

教学难点：通过片段练习，掌握如何使作文具体化的技巧方法

教学设想：演示实验—练习—分析—片段练习—方法总结

教学过程：

一、组织教学、课堂导入：

同学们在学习语文的过程中感到最可怕的是写作文，感到最难的`也是写作文，胶尽脑汁而无处下笔，搜肠刮肚找不到一个恰当的词语。不由的发出感叹：“作文难啊，难于上晴天”。其实作文难写吗?答案是肯定的!真那么难写吗?亦不然!

因为在祖国的语言文字里，有黄河的不羁和刚强，有长江的奔放和潇洒，有泰山的威武，有草原的粗犷，有彩陶的古朴典雅，有花椒的芳香四溢。有先秦的繁星明月：是皎洁的汉宫秋月，是珠落玉盘的琵琶，是高山流水的琴瑟，是“推”“敲”不定的月下门，是庄子的逍遥游，是孔子的颠沛流利，是魏王的老骥之志，是诸葛的锦囊妙计，是君子好逑的《诗三百》，是魂兮归来的《楚词》，是执过羊鞭的《兵法》，是受过宫刑的《史记》，是李太白的杯中酒，是曹雪芹的梦中泪，是千古绝唱的诗词曲赋，是功垂青史的《四库全书》……它不仅是我们每个人学习、工作、生活的工具，而且负载着丰富的情感，深邃的思想，人类的文明。有了这些，我们写作文怎么会难写呢?何愁写不好呢?这就要我们平时养成多读书、读好书的习惯，写好读书笔记。因为书到用时方恨少。这节课老师和同学们一起解决作文中的一个难题：如何使作文具体化?

二、活动一：

(一) 、教师演示：教师手拿一枚硬币，硬币从手中滑落，掉到讲桌上后又掉到地上。

1、要求：

(1)、每一个同学仔细观察这种现象，然后用一句话描写这种现象。

(2)、同学之间交流、分享。

摘录例句：

(1)、有一枚硬币从老师手中滑落，掉到了地上。

(2)、有一枚硬币从老师胖乎乎的手中滑落，掉到了讲桌上，然后又像一个小精灵叮叮当当的掉到了地上，在地上画了一个优美的圆弧后平静地躺在哪儿。

2、分析：

在同学们写的句子中你认为哪一句写的最好?原因是?第二句比第一句增加了一些内容，说说增加了哪些内容?

通过讨论分析得出结论：都认为第二句好。第二句不仅写出了硬币从哪儿掉下来，更写出了老师的手，硬币掉到地上的响声，还运用拟人的手法，写出了硬币的姿态，写出了情感。

3、教师点拨：

我们在课堂上要会听课：伸开耳朵去细心的听，睁大眼睛去仔细的看，张开嘴巴去详细的说，用心去细细的想，让后用笔去写写、记记——你看看你变的“聪”明了。在前面的学习讨论中，逐步扩充，最终使句子完整、生动、形象，我们不妨给它取名“步步追问”。用这个方法可以把内容写的具体一些。但是同学们想想：在现实生活中，我们遇到的事情，能不能每件事情都要去演示，都要去追问，这显然是不可能的!有些事情我们不能去演示，只能通过联想和想象去解决，使情节更合理，我们不妨叫它“想象延伸”。如“绿色”、王羲之“之”字写法、“台阶”你可以想到什么?

4、学生讨论总结：

由“绿色”想象到：“水、植物、春天、军人、生命、和平、希望、朝气、青春……等”;

由王羲之“之”字写法想象到：“要有个性、不要墨守成规、行行出状元……等”;

有“台阶”想象到：“一切从零开始、成功的道路的不平坦的、人梯精神、永不止步……等”。这样以来我们的思维变的活跃了，视野开阔了，作文变得好写了。

5教师点拨：我们每天生活在祖国温暖的怀抱之中，生活在亲人、老师、同学的关爱之中、生活在亲情之中，其乐融融。要我们去刻画一个人物的肖像，同学们想想，上面两种方法是否可行?显然以上两种方法是不不够的，我们必须对一个人的某一部位，某个方面进行精细的描绘，才能表现出这个人的优秀品质，我们不妨叫它“局部雕刻”。举例：《范进中举》中胡屠户形象。

三、活动二：根据以上方法进行片段练习。

(一)、练习话题1：我惭愧。

1、公式：具体心理形象=步步追问+想像延伸

2、注意：

(1)、是什么原因惭愧?

(2)、惭愧时是什么表情?

(3)、惭愧时是什么心理?

3、师生互动交流，分享成果。

4、教师范文：

我惭愧。我站在老师跟前，耷拉着脑袋，脸火烧火燎的，两只手没处放了，只是无意识的拧着衣角，两脚无力的支撑着身体。心里好像打翻了五味瓶，酸甜苦辣咸，什么滋味儿都有。同学们信任我，选我当班干部，我却做出这等丢人现眼的事儿，我对的起谁?是家里的父母，还是学校里的老师。我的目光在地面上搜寻着，如果有个缝儿的话，我一定会钻进去。

(二)练习话题2：既喜欢又讨厌的同桌。

1、公式：具体人物形象=步步追问+想象延伸+局部雕刻

2、注意：

(1)喜欢到什么程度?

(2)讨厌到什么程度?

(3)为什么会有这样两重情况?

(4)特别注意人物刻画。

3、学生练笔、师生互动、交流分享成果。

4、教师范文：

1、大胆夸张，来点叛逆。

范文：

已知：数学卷2张，语文卷2张，物理、化学卷各1张，英语卷2张， 求：能否在眼皮打架之前做完?

解：因为：一天24小时，在校上课学习时间9个小时，睡觉休息时间8个小时，吃喝拉撒、路上时间2个小时，数学卷2个小时，语文卷2个小时，物理化学卷2个小时，英语卷2个小时。

所以：总共需要27个小时。 结果：在眼皮打架之前不能完成。

2、巧妙悖论，来点幽默。

范文：

3、准确扑捉，画一副漫画。

范文：

4、学以致用，历练身手。

范文：

五、总结：文似看山不喜平。所以除了引人眼球的标题，一锤定音的开头，回头百媚生的结尾外，还要做到词语生动、句式灵活、善用修辞、文体立意等诸多方面。做生活中的有心人，在生活中运用语文，在生活中学会语文。

六、作业：以“他在娘的脸上亲了一下”为话题，写150字左右的片段。

七、板书设计

I am a shy girl, when there is activity in my class, I will run away from it and try to be nobody. But in my heart, I want to be noticed and show my talent. My friend encourages me to take part in the activity, she helps me to finish the task.At last, I become more and more confident and get along with others. I am so thankful to her for finding my confidence.

我是一个害羞的女孩,班上有活动的时候,我会逃离，让自己成为隐形人。但在我的心里,我想要得到关注，并展示我的才华。我的朋友鼓励我参加活动,她帮助我完成任务。最后,我变得越来越自信，与他人相处得也很愉快。我很感谢她帮助我找到了自信。

January 21

It was cooler than yesterday. One of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. You must know it is unusual. Because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. There is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in Beijing. On the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. It was enjoyable. It is said there are wild pigs in the hill. What a beautiful natural.

January 22

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

January 23

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, I was ill.

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I

decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and

become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase

you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I

make a decision to be a good girl.

今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

今天，是一年一度的清明节，奶奶一个星期前就说要带我去祭祖，我天盼地盼终于盼来了。

Today is the Qingming Festival once a year, a week ago, grandma said to take me to worship, I hope to look forward to finally look forward to.

前年，是爷爷带我去祭祖的，所以，这次是奶奶带我去。在通往祭祖的路上，奶奶显得格外严肃，平时那个幽默风趣的奶奶消失得无影无踪了。淡蓝色的小野花,纯金色的油菜花,碧绿色的的小草儿,神气十足的竹子``````给这幅通向祭祖的这幅“图画’’点缀上了一种别具风味的感觉,令人只可以表达出一种严肃的表情。

Two years ago, is the grandfather took me to the ancestors, so, this is my grandmother took me to the. On the way to worship their ancestors, grandma is particularly serious, usually the humorous she disappeared Not the least trace was found.. The pale blue flowers, pure golden rape flowers, green grass of the small, put on airs to this piece of bamboo and so on to worship the "picture with a unique flavor of feeling, it can only express a serious expression.

过了几分钟,我和奶奶到达了目的地，祭祖正式开始了。奶奶让我先去把曾祖父的灵位两旁点上蜡烛，奶奶说了，我去点可以表达我对曾祖父的尊敬。然后，奶奶把鲜花放在曾祖父灵位前，我和奶奶在灵位前磕头，然后再说几句保佑我们全家的话.之后,奶奶还把一些瞑币在灵位前给烧了。然后，我们再在灵位前磕了几个头还用手把周围的垃圾捡掉，并再去祭拜一下，再在坟头插上三根点燃的香。这次祭祖就算是大功告成了!

A few minutes later, my grandmother and I arrived at the destination, the official start of the ancestors. Grandma let me to go to the great grandfathers time on both sides of the candles, grandma said, I can express my great grandfathers respect. Then, she put flowers on my great grandfather before free, my grandmother and me in front of the souls bowed, and then say a few words to bless our family. Later, grandma gave some money to burn bright in front of the souls. Then, we again in front of the souls to knock a few heads with hand around the garbage picked up, and then to visit the grave, then plug in three lighted incense. The ancestor worship even be accomplished!

在回去的途中，奶奶还给我讲了许多曾生前的事。回家后，我还对妈妈说了我们怎么祭祖,和我曾祖父的事，下次祭祖,我一定要带妈妈一起去。

On the way back, my grandmother told me many living things. After returning home, I said to my mother what do we worship, and my great grandfather that next time, ancestor worship, I must take my mother to go.