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1000英语期中考试反思500字
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+ 加入清单这次期中考试，学生英语成绩很不理想，两极分化十分明显，部分语法知识的掌握不够牢固，尤其是个别题 反复做过几次也没能把握好，阅读理解能力和书面表达能力比较弱。具体有以下几点：
1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，学生遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。
2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。
3.理解能力不强，阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。
4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。
造成这种结果的原因是多方面的，但最重要的有下面几方面：
1.对学生要求不够严格;部分学生偷懒。
2.没能充分调动学生的积极性;提高课堂教学效率。
3. 典型题讲解不够，训练不到位。
4.平时检查督促力度不够。
在今后的教学中，
1、继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功。
2、引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力。
3、培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题。
4、讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语。
5、在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。
6、设计全面、高校的课外作业，并进一步培养学生良好的书写习惯，做到整洁、规范，正确地书写;每周写一篇作文。
7、在教学过程中， 还需加大学习力度，积极研究探索教学方法并及时改变，就一定能提高整体英语水平。
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篇1：优秀英语作文：高中开学
全文共 939 字
+ 加入清单·The first day of my high school life
The first day of high school life, I have some thoughts and feelings. The passage of time can always give people some special things.
In the new environment, I feel a bit excited. Be able to recognize the new students and teachers is my greatest gains. In the next three years, we will learn、work and progretogether to make our dreams come true. I will have new friends, and share the joy and sadnewith them. The proceof learning is also a growing process.
Similarly, I will also face many difficulties. I might have difficulties in learning and getting along with classmates , bearing some pressure in life. However, I will get stronger and get through every step of high school three years.
译文：
在高中生活的第一天，我有一些想法和感受。随着时间的推移总是可以给人一些特别的东西。
在新的环境，我感到有点兴奋。能够识别新的学生和教师是我最大的收获。在未来3年，我们将共同学习，工作，进步，使我们的梦想成真。我也会有新朋友，并分享他们的喜悦和悲伤。学习也是一个成长的过程。
同样，我也将面临许多困难。我可能有学习困难和获得与同学一起，结出了一些在生活中的压力。不过，我会坚强地度过高中三年的每一步。
篇2：高中英语作文大全
全文共 752 字
+ 加入清单When the young people start their career, they will do everything to get
the chance to help their career to make breakthrough, such as follow the
business rules. They choose to drink as much as possible, which is over the
limitation of their bodies. The coming wealth is based on the loss of health.
The media reported the news about how the young people died of drinking a lot of
alcohol. Their ambition made them to undertake the limitation. As a result, they
died at the young age. There is no doubt that health overweighs wealth. If a
rich people didnt have a sound body, how he can enjoy life. A man who has been
badly ill will take special attention to the health. No matter how much money he
is paid, he will turn down the invitation that hurts his body.
篇3：高中英语作文素材：情人节祝福语
全文共 2262 字
+ 加入清单小编导语：Happy Valentines Day!2月14情人节是一个全世界性的节日，这天情侣们会在一起共度美好时光，在这浪漫的节日里，温情的情人节祝福怎么能少呢?情人节英文祝福语大全：快为你的中外友人送上温馨的情人节祝福吧。
To the girl of my dreams and the mother of our child: you are the only Valentine for me. 献给我梦中的女孩及我们孩子的母亲：你是我惟一的爱人。
On this Valentines Day, just like every day, all I have is love for you. 如同每一个平常的日子，我在这个情人节里所拥有的东西，就是对你的爱。
I will be your Valentine until the end of time. 我将是你的情人，直到地老天荒。
To my one and only Valentine: I love you. 献给我唯一的爱人：我爱你。
I didn’t think that I could ever trust happiness. Then I met you.Happy Valenti ne’s Day, Dear. 我一直不相信有真正的“幸福”，直到不久以后，我邂逅了你。亲爱的，情人节快乐。
Be genuine and conceal noting.I write every wiod I wand to say on this small card.I wish my honey a happy Valentine’s day. 真诚，不必隐藏，把所有的话语，都写在那小小的贺卡上。祝我新爱的人，情人节快乐。
Sending you a kiss to say I’m glad that you are mine. Happy theday! 送你一个吻，悄悄的说我很高兴你是我的。情人节快乐!
I love you not because of who you are, but because of who I am when I am with you. 我爱你，不是因为你是一个怎样的人，而是因为我喜欢与你在一起时的感觉。
To the world you may be one person, but to me you may be the world. 对于世界而言，你是一个人;但是对于我，你是我的整个世界。
It is graceful grief and sweet sadness to think of you, but in my heart, there is a kind of soft warmth that can’t be expressed with any choice of words. 想你，是一种美丽的忧伤的甜蜜的惆怅，心里面，却是一种用任何语言也无法表达的温馨。
Do you understand the feeling of missing someone? It is just like that you will spend a long hard time to turn the ice-cold water you have drunk into tears. 你知道思念一个人的滋味吗，就像喝了一大杯冰水，然后用很长很长的时间流成热泪。
Those days when we were together appear in my mind time after time, because they were so joyful, happy, blest, disappointing, sad and painful. I miss you ,and miss you so mach…… 常常想起曾和你在一起的那些日子。开心、快乐、幸福、失落、伤心、痛苦的所有日子。很想你，很想你……
Do you know there is someone thinking of you and caring you all the time ? Your smiling eyes are just like the sparkling stars hanging on the curtain of my heart. 你知道么，有个人时时想念着你，惦记你，你含笑的眼睛，象星光闪闪，缀在我的心幕上，夜夜亮晶晶。
Listening to my heart beating. Seeing how much I love you ,I dare to admit how much I love you .When thinking of you, I hope you can receive the passionat words I left for you! 心要让你听见，爱要让你看见，不怕承认对你有多眷恋;想你的时候，盼你能收到我的真情留言!
I miss you not because of my loneliness but I do feel lonely when I miss you. Only when I miss you deeply I feel so lonely. 不是因为寂寞才想你，是因为想你才寂寞。孤独的感觉之所以如此之重，只是因为太想你。
篇4：高中英语
全文共 858 字
+ 加入清单Today is the first day of the New Year, the morning of fresh air and
sunshine, mother took me to feel the New Years day outside the atmosphere.
Street vehicle comings and goings, flowing very lively, mother took me to
the supermarket to buy things, supermarket bustling, originally people rush to
buy New Year gift! My mother said he wanted to buy a toy, I say: "I is the big
kid dont car these toys, it would save some money to buy school things," then I
will take some learning supplies and a cake billet to do our own cake to
celebrate New Years day. On the way back to my grandmas I saw many shops,
supermarkets in glass written on New Years day wishes everybody happy, return
to my grandmas I took the cake billet and brother in above the text is
made.
Less than half an hour a nifty bright homemade cake will appear in the
present, this is really a happy New Year!
篇5：2024英语六级图画作文写作方法
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+ 加入清单一、描述图画
图画作文对图画的描述应在第一段进行，且最好在首句即开始。此类作文大部分是一幅图，也会有两幅图出现的情况。如果出现两幅图，则很有可能是突显对比的情况。
图画上可能没有任何文字，也可能在上面出现了一句话，也可以单个人物说话或两个人物对话，也可能在图画外写了总结性的一句话。大家注意，这一句话或两句话一般是非常重要的，应予译出。
一般说来，对图画的描写不必过长，应以简练、准确为标准。
二、图画类作文结构分析
我们想象中的最典型最理想的图画题提纲应该是下面这样：
1. 描述图画
2. 推导绘画者的意图
3. 做出评论
对于这一提纲我们来做具体分析，其中第三点更要细致研究。首先由图画引出一种社会现象或社会问题，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推导绘画者的意图时多是展开说此现象或问题的表现，以证明其引人注目。还有一种可能性是说此现象或问题产生的原因，提纲可直接列出，或还用上述提纲。这时可把简单意图推导直接放到第一段描述图画之后，而在第二段中说原因。
第三段做出评论，有可能只是简单评论、深化主题就结束，但这种可能性越来越小了。这一部分很可能说的是办法，不好的事情就是如何解决的办法，好的事情就是如何进一步发展的方法。
通过上述列表，我们可以看出，多年以来，真实的提纲是怎样一步步地向我们想象中的理想模式靠近的。对于提纲里面出现的变化和规律，我们来分析一下。
我们仔细分析，会发现历年考研真题基本上都呈现"现象或问题——原因解释——解决办法"这样的模式，但变化非常多。因为我们谈论的既可以是一件值得弘扬的好事，也可能是一个令人忧心忡忡的社会问题;针对后者我们极有可能需要提出做法;而对于前者，可能解释一下就结束了，也可能要写出相应的做法。
综上所述，可以看出，比起图表作文来，图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲(有时有文章标题)就能有效地审题解题，构造出合理的具体段落的目的。
篇6：英语考试
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+ 加入清单去年暑假，我上了一个英语补习班。一开始，一切都很好。可是到总结考试的时候，意外发生了。
因为，我平时考试的成绩很好，所以，我理所当然地想：这次也一定与平时一样。当时试卷发下来的时候，我一看题目立刻就惊呆了—这张试卷竟是如此容易!于是，我“刷刷”地写了起来。写完之后，就不加思索地将试卷交了上去，在众人惊讶的目光中走出了教室。
第二天，试卷下来了。我看到周围的人脸上露着喜悦的光芒。原来，他们懂得了高分。我想：既然他们都得了高分，那么，我也一定能得高分。可是当时卷发到手时，我傻眼了—我实际的分数和我想象中的分数截然不同，我考了一个前所未有的“好”成绩——实际的分数和我想象的分数截然不同，竟然是86分。看着这个鲜红的86分，我仿佛经历了一场“暴风雨”——父亲那张铁青的脸耷拉着、妈妈那喋喋不休的嘴唇不停地蠕动着。我仿佛还看到了试卷上那鲜红的分数在嘲笑我——笑我不认真、笑我急于求成。我哭了，哭得很伤心……
放学后，老师找到我，把错误的地方给我耐心地讲一遍，并语重心长地说：“莎莎，其实你有能力考100分，可惜太骄傲……”
老师的一席话使我茅塞顿开，明白了一个道理：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后。
篇7：高中英语作文：你会对家长说谎吗?
全文共 660 字
+ 加入清单We are always educated to be an honest person, especially to our parents. While the fact is that every kid will lie to their parents in their lives. For me, my parents are very strict, I am not allowed to go out at night, because the news always reports the bad incidents happen at night. But night activity attracts me a lot, and my friends like to hang out for fun at night, so I choose to lie to my parents and tell them I am doing my homework with my friends. Now as I grow up, I realize it is not right to tell lies, so I decide to be honest to my parents. Once they realize that I am not a little kid anymore, then I will have my right to do what I want.
篇8：高一英语健康词
全文共 1595 字
+ 加入清单All the people want to stay in good health. Health is better than wealth.
It is true that health is the first step to success. Imagine this, if you’re
sick, all you can do is to stay in bed and do nothing at all, how can you chase
after your dreams?But if you’re in good health, you can overcome the adversities
you ever encounter and make your dreams come true. Since health is so important
for everybody, how can we maintain and enhance our health? There are some useful
suggestions:
First of all, we should lead to a regular life. Early to bed and early to
rise makes a healthy man. Do not stay up late. Some people love to play cell
phones games or reading electronic-books before sleep, this can be bad for the
health. We should remember to turn off the phones before sleep. Second, don’t be
too particular about food. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables and less sugars
and soft drinks. If you want to eat a bar of chocolate, eat an apple instead. If
you want to drink milk tea or coffee, drink water instead. Don’t eat too much
meat in one week. Last but not least, we should do exercise everyday. There are
many exercises for us to choose. Such as, swimming, jogging, square dancing,
playing badminton and so on. Doing exercise can increase the circulation of
blood and enhance our immune system. The one who in better immune system, the
less disease he will have.
In conclusion, if we pay close attention to our health, we can avoid
getting sick. Try to sleep earlier, eat more fruit and vegetable, drink more
water, and do exercise everyday. You will realize that it’s not that hard to
stay in good health.
篇9：高中英语作文大全
全文共 615 字
+ 加入清单"Beautiful Tibet" large-scale photographic experience activities the first
period ended, activity by China Tibet news network to Tencent blog, Xinhua,
Tibet yak adventure travel Service Corporation to build, Tibet yak adventure
travel Service Corporation responsible for the organization and reception. The
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including the medicine King Hill, Potala Palace, the Jokhang Temple, the Nam Co,
the Yang Zhuoyong fault,karuola glacier, Mount Everest base camp, tashilhunpo,
bassoon, Sejila Namjagbarwa, LulangLinhai, most famous scenic spots in
Tibet.
篇10：英语议论文的写作方法与技巧指导
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+ 加入清单议论文写作是几种常见文体中要求较高的一种。下面语文迷网整理了一些写作方法，希望对你有帮助。
一、议论文的文体特点和写作要求
英语议论文同中文议论文一样也是以议论的方式，通过摆事实、讲道理来阐述自己观点的一种文体。高中英语议论文是一种限制性的写作, 其论点、论据、论证都必须十分明确，学生必须结合题目要求来阐述相关观点。
议论文的结构可分为三个部分：1、引言段引出一个令人关注的问题或明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么，支持什么，反对什么。 2、主体段对提出的问题进行分析、推论、并运用归纳法、演绎法和类比法等进行论证，取得以理服人的效果。3、结论段可以用两三句话来结束文章，同时要注意重申论点，与引言段呼应，但不能照搬原话。务必做到论点明确、要点齐全、论证严密、结构严谨、层次分明、首尾呼应。
二、议论文的写作方法与技巧
一)、审好题
人们常说：“磨刀不误砍柴功”。审题是写作的开始，是写好作文的前提条件，“好的开始是成功的一半”，议论文写作也不例外。只有明确题目要求，确立观点，确定论证方法及全文段落安排，才可能成功写出一篇好的议论文。如果写偏了题，再精心的构思、再好的语言表达也是枉然。审题主要包括六个方面：一是判断议论文所属类型。英语议论文根据命题特点，从形式上来看可分为如下类型: ①“一分为二”的观点。如：“轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”。②“两者选一”的观点。如：“乘火车还是乘飞机”。③“我认为……”型，如：“你对课外阅读的看法”。④“怎样……(how to)”型，如：“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”。⑤ 图表作文，通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法(杨家贵，2005)。二是确立该文的论点或作者须持的观点，以及支撑论点的道理和事实。三是确定全文所包括的要点。四是确定段落数及每段适用的连接词、过渡句，使文章连接紧凑、过渡自然、层次分明。五是选择全文主要时态及各段适用的其它时态。六是判断该文的格式，是书信还是短文。审题完毕，随即列出提纲。
二)、注重主题句的设置
主题句又叫中心句(topic sentence)，是段落的论点，限制段落中议论的范围，是整个段落的纲领。主题句必须要正确，要明确表明作者赞成什么，反对什么。主题句在一篇百来字的议论文中好比“画龙点睛”，帮助作者分层次阐述自己的观点，让读者快速了解作者的观点。
1、确定主题句的位置
英语议论文的主题句宜设在段首第一句，这是由以下两个因素决定的。1)、主题句出现的位置有三种情况：①在段首，以便读者浏览主题句就可掌握文章的概要，这个位置适用于写提供信息或解释观点的段落;②在段末;③段中(高长梅，2000)。2)、英语民族的思维特点是常采用路标式(直线式)篇章结构，即主题句在段首。
2、写出好的主题句
好的主题句具有以下特点：①有一定的概括性，普遍性而不是罗列具体事实。②句意明确而不是模糊不着边际。③让人有话可写而不是给出无可辩驳的事实。④不以问题的方式出现，也不要同时表达两个以上的观点。笔者要求学生写了以下的主题句：
1)Staying up late is bad for our health.
2)The more cars, the better?
3)There are two reasons why some people are fascinated by Super Girls and two reasons why some dislike them.
4)Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Imperial Palace and other places of interest.
5)a. Tom is a middle school student.
b. Tom is a hard-working middle school student.
6)Living in small cities is better than living in big cities.
然后让学生对照主题句的特点，他们一致认为1)、5)b、6)为好的主题句。在实践和对比中，学生学会了如何写好的主题句，并且运用到议论文写作中，收到较好效果，见以下实例(下段黑体部分是主题句)。
Everyone lives by selling something. For example, teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is extremely difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that skills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at a shop. Everyone has something to sell.
由此可见，好的主题句能帮助作者阐明观点，起到提纲挈领的作用。作者围绕段落的中心论点，运用多种方法展开论证，达到以理服人的效果。
三)、用好连接词和过渡句
从行文需要出发选用恰当的连接词、过渡句可使整篇文章文句流畅，句意转换自然，同时使表达合乎逻辑，文章结构严谨。倘若一篇议论文的段落里不乏高级词汇和复杂语法结构，但缺少了连接词、过渡句的润色而不能从一个观点自然地过渡到另一个观点，或段落里的各论据(supporting sentence)连接松散，势必削弱论证的效果，就算不上一篇好的议论文。下面分别说明如何有效运用连接词与过渡句。
1、句与句的连接词
连接词通常由连词、副词、介词短语和插入语等充当。如何有效使用连接词，使句意连贯、紧凑，以体现文章良好的严密的论证逻辑?
2.段与段的过渡句
过渡句帮助作者展示文章的条理和层次。恰当运用过渡句能使表达锦上添花。当文章从一个层次转换到另一个层次，或由一段内容转入另一段内容时需要用过渡句。恰当有效的运用过渡句，效果明显(见下文，题目及要求略，黑体部分为过渡句)。
Wearing school uniform every day spreads an order over many schools. Is it good or bad for students? Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
Some people say that it has a bad effect on developing students’ personal character. According to them, students are tired of wearing the same clothes every day, which is hard to tell who’s who. Furthermore, the cost of the school uniform is not low as many people think. With the bad quality, it’s not well worth the money.
However, as a popular saying goes: “Every coin has two sides.” Others argue that it is good for students. In their opinion, wearing school uniform will prevent students from wasting so much money on clothes and the time on catching up with the fashion. In addition, it’s easy for the teachers to recognize the students. There is no doubt that wearing school uniform every day is good for students.
In short, I firmly support the view that we should wear school uniform.(康珍，2005)
上文黑体部分综合体现了恰当、有效运用连接词和过渡句的最佳效果。全文行文流畅、衔接自然、条理清楚，浑然不觉作者是在套用各种连接词和过渡句。因此，非常有必要熟记一些常用典型的议论文过渡句，使议论文结构严谨，论点清楚，行文流畅。
1)引言段的常用过渡句
Recently we had a heated discussion on…, Opinions are various among different people.
Different people have different opinions on the question of …
They differ greatly in their attitudes towards …
Different people hold different views/opinions on this matter.
Although most people think… I believe…
此类过渡句能迅速引起读者注意，自然而然地引出全文要讨论的话题，或者开门见山地阐明文章的论点。
2)主体段的常用过渡句
Some may hold the view that… because… But others have a negative attitude. From their point of view…
Some people think that… While others believe…
Some people are for the idea of… because… But some people are against the idea of… because …
本文所指议论文的主体段可以是一段也可以是两段。通过正确使用过渡句，文章思路清晰，结构清楚，显示作者严谨思维，增强表达效果。
3)结论段的常用过渡句
As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the statement that…
Therefore, it’s easy to draw the conclusion that…
As a consequence/result, I firmly support the view that…
Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reach the conclusion that…
To sum up/in a word/in conclusion/in short/above all/in general/ generally speaking, I still hold the view that…
运用过渡句的提示作用进入结论段，作者或是重申论点，或是强调论点，以便加深读者对全文的了解和深刻认识。
英语议论文范文：
Should Examination Be Abolished (取消)?
The examination system has come to be the main theme (主题)of modern education. One should take an examination andsucceed in passing it before he could be admitted， promoted or graduated. As it plays so important a role in the realm of education (教育的领域) it is under much criticism (评论) as to its validity (有效性) . People who are in favour of it try to develop this system more; those who are against it believe that such a system should be abolished. Should examination be abolished? In my opinion it should be.
Many people think that an examination is the only means to test knowledge， but， in fact， that is not true. A few questions given in an examination could by no means cover the whole field of the subject. Thus those who are able to answer them may be the poorest of the students and yet happen to know just a few points about that subject.
Id like to say that， because of the existence of the examination system， students pay so much attention to gaining high marks， that they often forget the chief purpose of education. The so-called clever students devote (贡献) themselves to the study of textbooks only. They， of course， know nothing but the skeleton (梗概) of knowledge. The end and aim of education， however， is to enable students to learn how to live. To do this， students must get themselves to do all kinds of training， physicalas well as mental. The present examination system has discouraged students from making such an attempt.
Moreover， since the students try so hard to put their lessons into memory in as short a time as possible， psychologically (心理上来看)， they soon forget the whole subject as soon as the examination is over. Surely this is one of the greatest wastes ever made in the history of civilization.
Lastly， in order to get high marks， there is a great temptation (诱惑) for students to cheat (作弊) in an examination. Indeed， such a practice becomes the means to the end. They cheat their teachers， their parents and also themselves. Such a tendency would impair (损害) our moral standards (道德标准) .
Therefore， I am of the opinion， in conclusion， that the examination system should be abolished.
篇11：端午节的习俗英语高中
全文共 848 字
+ 加入清单这个节日的由来逝代中国有一位博学多闻的官吏屈原，他是一位爱民而且又受到尊崇的官吏，但是由於一位充满嫉妒的官吏陷害，从此在朝廷中被皇帝所冷落。由於无法获得皇帝的重视，屈原在忧郁的情况下投汨罗江自尽。
由於对屈原的爱戴，汨罗江畔的居民匆忙的划船在江内寻找屈原，并且将米丢入汨罗江中，以平息汨罗江中的蛟龙。即使他们当时并没有找到屈原，但是他们的行为，直到今天在端午节的时候，仍然被人们传颂纪念著。
The origin of this summer festival centers around a scholarly government official named Chu Yuan. He was a good and respected man，but because of the misdeeds of jealous rivals he eventually fell into disfavor in the emperors court.
Unable to regain the respect of the emperor，in his sorrow Chu Yuan threw himself into the Mi Low river. Because of their admiration for Chu Yuan， the local people living adjacent to the Mi Lo River rushed into their boats to search for him while throwing rice into the waters to appease the river dragons.
Although they were unable to find Chu Yuan，their efforts are still commemorated today during the Dragon Boat Festival.
篇12：高中英语日记
全文共 1592 字
+ 加入清单Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask
myself. In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that having a
dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the things to achieve
the target. As long as we have a goal to be realized, we won’t be blind at
least.
My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and
saving their lives. Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will
do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy. Thats my dream. I want to try my
best to help the poor sick people of our country. I want to let them have an
opportunity to receive excellent treatments for their illnesses without having
to pay much or just enjoy them free. China is a developing country which needs
good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant
villages.
Now I’m a junior student on Grade One, all my classmates and I are working
hard. We all know that the entrance exam of high schools coming in the year of
2009 is a big challenge for us, so we must study harder and harder in order to
go to a good high school. Thus after we finish our senior high school, we are
able to go to a good university. Finally, we can find a good job in society.
My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try
my best to be the study winner. Now everything I do is close to my dream. I feel
life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize
my dream.
I know that fantasy is something hard to realize, but dream can. I’ll work
hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.
篇13：心理健康英语
全文共 485 字
+ 加入清单From what has been mentioned above, as students, we should try our best to communicate with our, friends, parents or teachers. Last but not the least; we should not hesitate to go to the mental health consult room for help when we have trouble in mental illness. Only in this way, can we reduce our mental illness, and we will become a strong and confident person in the end.
综上所述，作为学生，我们应该尽我们最大的努力与我们的朋友，父母或老师交流。最后但并非最不重要的；在我们有心理问题的时候，我们应该毫不犹豫地去心理健康咨询室求助。只有这样，我们才可以减少心理疾病，最终成为一个坚强自信的人。
篇14：高中英语作文：课后活动
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+ 加入清单Iusually have a lot of things to do after work. Every day after I come home, Ialways read some English passages, in order to improve my spoken English andfeel the charm of language.
After doing that, I surf the Internet to watch thelatest news and find some useful information for my work.
I think this is aneffective way for me to learn more knowledge and widen my horizon.
Then I beginto learn English by listening to VOA and BBC. There are so many interestingstories in these programs. And the hostesses are very excellent. I can alwayssleep well with their beautiful voices. At weekend, I usually have aget-together with my close friends to share our life experience. Sometimes wealso go out for a walk, so as to enjoy our beautiful nature. In short, I usuallyarrange a lot of activities for myself in my free time, because I want to makemy life more wonderful and interesting.
下班后，我通常有很多事情要做。为了提高我的英语口语以及感受到语言的魅力，每天我回到家后我总是看英语短文。
这样之后，我会上网看最新的新闻，找一些对我工作有用的信息。我觉得这是我学习的知识，开阔了我的视野的有效途径。
然后我开始听VOA和BBC来学习英语。在这些节目中有很多有趣的故事。女主持人是很优秀的。
我总是能听着她们甜美的声音入睡。周末的时候我通常和我关系亲密的朋友聚在一起来分享我们的生活经验。有时我们也去散步，以便享受美丽的大自然。总之，我通常会在我空闲的时间为自己安排很多的活动，因为我想让我的生活更精彩有趣。
[高中英语作文：课后活动
篇15：关于梦想英语作文高中
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+ 加入清单Girls at a training course offered by the "Care for Girls" program in
Qingjian county, Shaanxi province, talked about their pursuit of dreams despite
living in unfavorable conditions.
Initiated by the National Health and Family Planning commission in 2013,
the program helps girls in underdeveloped regions to build their self-esteem and
self-confidence.
"I want to be a teacher teaching Chinese because I like Chinese and
writing," Xi said. "By teaching I can not only share knowledge with my students,
but also keep learning new things from new versions of textbooks."
She is living with her mother in a room that has no bathroom and costs 300
yuan ($48) a month to rent. Merit certificates she received from school are
displayed on the wall. Yan Lingling, Xis mother, said she is proud of her
daughter.
According to the family planning policy, couples in which both the husband
and wife have rural residential permits can have another child if their first is
a daughter. Yan said she isnt planning on adding to the family because she
wants to give her daughter the best she has.
"My husband is away most of the time, working in construction sites and
making no more than 30,000 yuan ($4,840) a year. I work as an hourly worker
sometimes. The rent of our apartment is expensive. One more child means one more
burden," Yan said.
Speaking about how she plans to achieve her dream of becoming a teacher, Xi
said: "I will not give up on my dream easily, though I know it may be difficult.
When something becomes difficult, it only makes me want to try harder."
篇16：紧张的英语考试二年级作文
全文共 335 字
+ 加入清单【导读】：我到了考场，那里面有很多老师，一张桌子一个。告诉你们，我们是考口试，不用笔写，所以进行的很快。我到了老师面前，我没有想到，给我考试的是平时给我们上课的老师。
【正文】：
我在世纪英才学了很长一段时间的英语了，昨天我参加了英语考试。
我在休息室里等着，一位老师进来说：我念到名字的同学跟我来，我带你们进考场。我很紧张，我万万没想到的是老师念的同学中第二个就是我。
我到了考场，那里面有很多老师，一张桌子一个。告诉你们，我们是考口试，不用笔写，所以进行的很快。我到了老师面前，我没有想到，给我考试的是平时给我们上课的老师。老师先让我读了几个英语单词，然后让我翻译了几个句子。你也可以投稿，我的了满分，我现在松了一口气，我对我自己的考试成绩很满意。
[紧张的英语考试二年级作文
篇17：2024—2024年度高中期末考试寄语
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+ 加入清单01、人生终有许多选择。每一步都要慎重。但是一次选择不能决定一切。不要犹豫，作出选择就不要后悔。只要我们能不屈不挠地奋斗，胜利就在前方。
02、亲爱的同学，我们在一起这么久了，都是你在为我付出。我却没为你做些什么…下辈子如果做牛做马，我...我一定拔草给你吃!考试顺利!
03、亲爱的同学，期末考试来了，愿你们考出好成绩，考到自己理想的成绩。
04、期末考试顺利，身体健康，一切都好!相信自己，你们一定是最棒的!
05、努力了,就无怨无悔!有道是:天道筹勤!相信自己吧!你是最棒的!相信六月里你是笑的最美丽的!我会永远支持你的!愿和你分享每一份的喜悦!
06、明天考试啦，以后不用6点起床啦，以后可以天天游泳啦，明天是新生活的开始，一定不能愁眉苦脸，今晚做个好梦!
07、今天就要参加考试了，送你一条幸运短信，据说在考试当天能收到这样一条短信，就会考出自己满意的成绩，祝你考试好运气啊!
08、明天就要考试，出门还得赶早。支出就有回报，赶紧睡个好觉。究竟熬过十年，列入就可骄傲。别想分数凹凸，放松最为主要。老妈比来很累，别忘对她笑笑，老爸场场接送，给他一个拥抱。穿得漂大度亮，誓把监考迷倒。最后提醒一遍，搜检铅笔小刀!
09、快到考试的日子了，希望你干自愿事，吃顺口饭，听轻松话，睡安心觉。使自己保持良好平静的心态，不要太紧张，相信你的梦想会实现的!
10、面对目标，信心百倍，人生能有几次搏?面对成绩，心胸豁达，条条大陆通罗马。 给自己一个恰如其分的自信。
11、眼看考试就要来了，向前看，相信自己，我会在远方为你送去最真挚的祝福，付出就会有收获的!放松心情，去迎接挑战，我相信你，你一定是最出色的!
12、想说爱你，感觉太沉;想说喜欢，感觉太轻;一天天地眷恋，一夜夜的无眠，我只有数着相思的绿莹帘珠，托星月寄到你窗前.祝考试顺意!
13、当离别拉开窗帘，当回忆睡在胸前，要说再见真的很伤感，只有爱依旧灿烂!友谊万岁!考试顺利，共闯人生这一关!
14、我最大的愿望就是：祝愿你能顺利考上今年的研究生，多少个日日夜夜，多少天风风雨雨，多少次挑灯夜读，相信辛勤耕耘终会有回报，相信你考研成功，相信你是我的骄傲，中意，加油啊!
15、我知道你正在经历人生中的一次重要挑战，或许你有焦虑、有恐惧，也有激动，但我想说，请不要忘记身边所有关爱着你的人，我们是你坚强的后盾。
16、我亲爱的战友坚持到底!!!!
17、为你倒数，还有几个小时就要上战场了，希望你能够放松心情，不要紧张。 知道你平时学习一向都很努力，学得很不错，相信你考好成绩是没问题的!
18、水不开得烧，人不懂得教。上行下就效，点播才能开窍。人生路上，名师就是一剂救命的良药，银不换，金不要，只要良师为我来开道!谢谢您，老师
19、手机铃响,那是问候;手机唱歌,那是祝福;手机震动,那一定是我握住了你的手。高考成功!我的朋友。
20、十年寒窗苦读日，只盼金榜题名时，祝你高考拿高分，鲤鱼跳龙门!加油!!!
21、人生终有许多选择。每一步都要慎重。但是一次选择不能决定一切。不要犹豫，作出选择就不要后悔。只要我们能不屈不挠地奋斗，胜利就在前方。
22、亲爱的同学，我们在一起这么久了，都是你在为我付出。我却没为你做些什么…下辈子如果做牛做马，我...我一定拔草给你吃!考试顺利!
23、亲爱的同学，期末考试来了，愿你们考出好成绩，考到自己理想的成绩。
24、期末考试顺利，身体健康，一切都好!相信自己，你们一定是最棒的!
25、努力了,就无怨无悔!有道是:天道筹勤!相信自己吧!你是最棒的!相信六月里你是笑的最美丽的!我会永远支持你的!愿和你分享每一份的喜悦!
篇18：高考满分英语作文：学习方法
全文共 888 字
+ 加入清单As we all know, there are three stages in studypreview, study in class and review, among whichreview is the most important. From my experience, Id like to talk about the importance andsteps of review. Firstly, make a review plan with certain contents of subjects at acertain time.Secondly, carry on the review plan regularly. Thirdly, examine what has been reviewed andmake supplement in time. One thing to remember is to keep notes all the time. I follow myreview plan strictly and have made progress in my study. It turns out to be good enough. Ofcourse, there is more than one way to review. So long as we review regularly, we can find moreways to improve our studies.
我们都知道，学习有三个环节：预习、课堂学习和复习，三者中复习是最重要的。我愿意从我的经验谈复习的重要性和步骤方法。首先，制定复习计划，确定在某段时间里复习课程的具体内容。其次，有规律地执行复习计划。第三，检测所复习的内容，及时弥补。有一件事必须记住，就是要时时记笔记。我严格遵循复习计划，在学习上取得了进步，证明复习是可取的。当然，不只有一种复习办法。只要我们有规律地复习，我们可以找到更多改善学习的方法。
篇19：适合高中生的五四青年节英语演讲稿
全文共 1093 字
+ 加入清单Youth Day (青年节) in the Peoples Republic of China is on May 4. It was established in December 1949 by the Government Administration Council to commemorate the beginning of the May Fourth Movement in 1919. This day is known as …
May Fourth Movement
Chinese intellectual revolution and sociopolitical reform movement (1917 – 21)。 In 1915 young intellectuals inspired by Chen Duxiu began agitating for the reform and strengthening of Chinese society through acceptance of Western science, democracy, and schools of thought, one objective being to make China strong enough to resist Western imperialism. On May 4, 1919, reformist zeal found focus in a protest by Beijings students against the Versailles Peace Conferences decision to transfer former German concessions in China to Japan. After more than a month of demonstrations, strikes, and boycotts of Japanese goods, the government gave way and refused to sign the peace treaty with Germany. The movement spurred the successful reorganization of the Nationalist Party and gave birth to the Chinese Communist Party. See also Treaty of Versailles.
篇20：高中写作方法：援引添辉造语
全文共 5064 字
+ 加入清单导语：写作方法的熟练，合理运用，能使得文章的结构更加完整，主题表达更加清晰，下面和小编一起来看看高中写作方法：援引添辉造语。希望对大家有所帮助。
高考作文的形式方面，语言是最受关注的。古人说话讲究辞令，写文章讲究文采。别林斯基认为，文章内容再好，如果没有文采，“有如一个面貌丑陋而心灵却伟大的女人，可以对她敬仰，但要喜欢她是不可能的。”何况，考场作文由于篇幅所限，与其在不易打造“亮点”的内容上孤注一掷，不如在文章的“外衣”——语言上精心包装，如句式的长短合理、字面的干净洗练，段落的张弛有度……就这种单纯形式上的美感对阅读者的心情影响也很大的。一个成熟的写作者会熟练的在文面上打造自己的文章，使其看起来“团结紧张，严肃活泼”。
但应当注意，这几年大部分的高考一类卷，以语言朴实清淡见长的十分鲜见，抢人眼球的多为名句迭出排比铺陈的“美文”。值得注意的是，最高的文采，是“内涵的文采”;堆砌华丽的辞藻，写成新的“骈体文”，决不是真正意义上的“有文采”。真正让人注目的是优美畅达的语言背后流淌着思想之源。语言是思想的载体，最要讲究与思想的匹配。有人说，语言是思想的外衣。外衣的美丑会影响人们对“穿衣者”的印象的，而这“外衣”最要紧的是“得体”;一味求美而失之得体，美会向丑转化。如果思想是个婴儿，穿着成人外衣，再美也会给人以“家庭贫困”之感;如果思想是个男子，穿着女性外衣，再美也令人作呕;如果思想是具僵尸，套着绫罗绸缎，再高贵也没人会多看一眼。缺少思想的源头活水，“为优美而优美”，则华而不实，甚至弄巧成拙，想得高分，是困难的。因此追求语言之美，先在准确、得体上下功夫，在此基础上的追求典雅优美，才能相得益彰。这是应该先予说明的。
灿若星汉、绵延炳焕的名家典故与诗文，是我们中华文化宝库中的瑰宝，比诸世界任何国家来得丰富多彩，这是值得我们自豪的。这些名家典故诗文，是思想与智慧的结晶，文质兼美的精品，内容包罗万象，应有尽有，让我们取之不尽。考生在课内外积累了许多名家典故诗文，考场中倘若善于援引或化用名家典故诗文之花，则可点缀自己的作文大放异彩!不无夸张地说，高考作文中多用一处名家典故诗文，就可多一个亮点，多一份文采，多一点展示文化文学底蕴的机会，在总成绩的天平上多一枚重重的砝码。
援引可有如下具体的操作：
1.巧借熟语显睿智。“正确使用熟语”是2004年以来高考新增的考点，它包含成语、俗语、谚语、格言、歇后语等，报刊上巧用熟语的，仅是文章标题就很多，如《考试马拉松要不得》、《有心栽花花更发》、《人情消费，温柔一刀》等等。如能在文中恰当使用，可化平淡为神奇，起到锦上添花之效。如：
古人说：“上有天堂，下有苏杭。”古往今来，美丽的西湖承载了多少中国文人的梦幻?苏轼虽被贬至此，然而他没有悲怆，没有怨天尤人，既来之，则安之，一蓑烟雨任平生。他懂得了“为官一任，造福一方”、“当官不为民做主，不如回家卖红薯”的简单道理。于是，一道苏堤便横卧西湖，他要让西湖储藏的心灵，淹没他所有的痛苦、所有的忧伤。(福建考生《苏轼的赤壁》)
“怨天尤人”“既来之，则安之”“当官不为民做主，不如回家卖红薯”等熟语的使用使得文章语言清新灵动，熠熠生辉，意蕴平添。
2.巧引名言(警句)添文采。托尔斯泰说应多用“金刚钻的语言”进行写作。警句名言就无疑是一种“金刚钻”。
如无锡市一考生的《精彩语文》一文中有这样一段：
伴着你，陶渊明的朵朵菊花点缀了朦胧的南山，龚自珍的片片落红幻化成软软的春泥，晏殊的独自徘徊落寞了通幽曲径，温庭筠的脉脉斜晖笼罩了悠悠的碧水……
如江苏盐城一考生写的《语文从我身边轻轻走过》则运用了联用古诗名句的妙招：
如果你是“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆”的边塞大漠，我愿飞奔在漫天黄沙里;如果你是“惊涛拍岸，卷起千堆雪”的浩淼长江，我愿遨游于猛浪湍流中;如果你是“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村”的深山丛林，我愿跋涉在荆棘小道上。啊，语文，美丽如你，叫我爱不释手。
如江苏考生《西安与南京：山与水的对话》
南京，长江南岸的明珠，是苏浙纵横交错的河流湖泊给了明珠最灵动的光泽。抬眼望，“秦淮水榭花开早”，回首瞧，“燕子飞时，绿水人家绕”。那里的“六朝旧事如流水”，那里的“夜船吹笛雨潇潇”。南京用那上天赋予的水，勾勒出如梦如幻、如诗如画的“好江南”。……西安无言，南京无言，一个背靠秦岭，一个脚踏长江，却一起“面朝大海”，霎时“春暖花开”。
此段文字妙在扣合题意而又能充分激活自己的诸多文化积淀，文章显得充实而又灵动，哲理与诗情、历史与现实，融为一体，信手拈来的诗文名句，不露斧凿之痕，结尾化用海子的名句，尤为贴切自然，并赋予了新的意蕴。
3.巧仿诗词见功底。对爱好古典诗词的考生而言，要将平时厚积的阅读素养在考场上薄发出来，除了恰当引用与话题相关的诗文名句，还可自拟诗词。
“谪居黄城中，把盏临风，牵黄擎苍叹英雄。昔日汴河风光处，履履难重。成败任西东，此恨无穷，为了豪情谁与同?一蓑烟雨平生任，踏雪飞鸿。”(《浪淘沙》)这首词是我特意写给贬谪之后的苏轼的，东坡的一生极尽坎坷：爱情的曲折，仕途的偃蹇，政治漩涡的挣扎，满腹冤屈的难鸣。
“素月寄孤舟，只影随水流，家园破，一盏残酒。酒淡怎敌晚风疾，梧桐雨，点点愁。晚来独登楼，恨字锁眉头，黄花瘦，雁声断秋，一溪落花漫汀洲，流离苦，几时休?”(《南楼令》)这首词是我填给历尽漂泊的李清照这位满腹感伤的奇女子的，她历经了国破之凄，丧夫之痛，改适之苦。
(重庆考生《诗人·明月·黄花》)
最突出的特点是语言功底深厚，充满诗情画意。特别是能在紧张的高考竞技场上填诗作词，文采斐然，不同凡响，足见该考生读书多，素养高。(编者注——此词没讲究平仄，最好不要词牌名;李清照改嫁无据)
有一篇谈“减负”的话题作文，开头化用陈然的诗：
教师的门敞开着，阅览室的门紧闭着，一个声音高叫着，回教室去吧，那里有你们的分数。
当然，欲使援引有意蕴，说到底还在于作者的思想认识水平，基于作者对人生的探究，对生命的自省，对社会百态的思考，对历史人文的观照，对自然万物的关怀，这些都是使文章语言有张力有内涵有意蕴的基础。考生平时要从文学精品中去吸取人类语言的精华，从课本中、从报刊中去掌握各种技巧，用语言的砧、心的锤去不断锤炼它们，惟有思想的深刻和凝重，才能达到援引有意蕴的境界。
【例文借鉴】
语文天生浪漫
让我们再次聆听那遥远的声音——“坎坎伐檀兮，置之河之干兮。河水清且涟漪。不稼不穑，胡取禾三百廛兮?”即便是义愤填膺吧，它也是那般的富有浪漫气息。而“蒹葭苍苍，白露为霜，所谓伊人，在水一方”，更是将古人的浪漫情怀推向了极致。
语文，从远古走来，从蛮荒走来，从我们祖先浪漫的心灵中走来。
开天辟地的盘古，以身补天的女娲，用刚与柔成就了远古人类对世界与宇宙浪漫的想象;填海的精卫，逐日的夸父，用血与肉书写了所有生命对自由与光明不朽的追求。
因着浪漫，四十弃官归隐的陶潜“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”;因着浪漫，五十始举进士的孟郊“春风得意马蹄疾，一日看尽长安花”。
因着浪漫，王昌龄发出了“黄沙百战穿金甲，不破楼兰终不还”的豪壮誓言;因着浪漫，李白才会仰天长笑“天生我材必有用，千金散尽还复来”。
语文，从浪漫的心灵出发，走向深广，走向博大。
因着语文，孔雀东南飞的故事成了家喻户晓的绝唱;因着语文，木兰从军的传说成了妇孺皆知的佳话。
因着语文，雪莱的“冬天到了，春天还会远吗”温暖了多少失意者的心怀;因着语文，但丁的“走你的路，让别人去说吧”激荡着每一个开拓者的胸襟。
因着语文，我们收藏了春的温暖、夏的火热，秋的丰硕、冬的冷峻;因着语文，我们领略了北国的冰雪，南疆的椰林，西域的雄鹰，东海的潮汐。
语文，是天生浪漫的文化载体。睿智的思想，高尚的情感，灵动的才智，无不栖于根深叶茂的语文之树，它生生不息地传承着人类文明，它涤荡污浊，提精炼粹，陶冶身心，它汇聚了浪漫又传送着浪漫。
浪漫的语文，呼唤浪漫的情怀。
一个有些浪漫情怀的人，能像范仲淹一样无私，“居庙堂之高则忧其民，处江湖之远则忧其君”;也能像王安石一样无畏，“不畏浮云遮望眼，只缘身在最高层”。他们可以心游万仞、精骛八极，更可以在现实世界中撑门拄户，立地擎天。既可以迎来送往，胜友如云，更可以一人一盏一影，孤灯自守黎明。既可横空出世、笑傲江湖，又可面壁潜心，十年磨一剑。入世可如岳飞，“壮怀激烈”，“八千里路云和月”，也可躬耕垄亩如诸葛亮，“淡泊以明志，宁静以致远”。
唯有具备一些浪漫情怀，才可能真正的理解生活，热爱生活，享受生活;唯有具备一些浪漫情怀，才可能真正的理解语文，热爱语文，欣赏语文。
因为，语文天生浪漫。
浪漫是感性的也是理性的，浪漫是细致的也是博大的，浪漫是喜乐的也是忧伤的。
一分一秒的华年、一朵一朵的笑靥，一句句清风的低语、一帧帧季节的像片，一些黎明、一些黑夜，发黄的故事、春天的屋檐……一并装入生命的全部流程中，一遍又一遍地再读。让我们的心牵着我们的手，在语文的世界里徐徐穿行，在真实与浪漫中徐徐穿行。
全文围绕“语文天生浪漫”这一话题，广泛征引，信手拈来，写得很有感染力。文章激情洋溢，材料丰富，既有诗句和神话传说，又有文学长廊的历史人物;语言流畅，综合运用了记叙、描写、抒情、议论等多种表达方式，内容层层展开。阅读本文，让人有在浪漫的语文世界徐徐穿行之感。
【例文借鉴】
坚守心中的道德律
康德说：“在这个世界上，有两样东西值得我们仰望终生：一是我们头顶上璀璨的星空，二是人们心中高尚的道德律。”星空因其寥廓而深邃，让我们仰望和敬畏;道德因其庄严而圣洁，值得我们一生坚守。
某杂志刊登了一份关于青少年价值观的报告，其中的一些数据显示有相当一部分青少年对“在公共场所大声喧哗”，“在公共汽车上不让座”，“过马路闯红灯”，“竞争可以不择手段”，“诚实意味着吃亏”等明显不文明、不道德的行为表示“难以评价”。为什么会这样呢?我想，这正是我们当中一部分同龄人对社会公德和个人品德的认识模糊甚至错误所致，正说明他们没能坚守住心中的道德律。
不得不承认，有些青少年，在花花绿绿、充满诱惑的现实生活中，丧失了心灵的纯洁、放弃了道德的底线，最终迷失自我、走向罪恶。原因虽然很多，但最重要的，还是他们缺乏正确的价值观，没有守住心中的道德律。比如网上那对最近迅速窜红的“90后贱女孩”孪生姊妹——包包与阿紫，不就是以恶俗博出位、靠犯贱换成名的典范么?
要知道，一个人的真正价值并非取决于其容貌、衣着、金钱、地位等外在的东西，而取决于他的头脑、观念、精神、品格、爱心、气度等综合素质和内在修养，取决于他的躯壳里到底装了一副怎样的灵魂，取决于他是否坚守住了心中的道德律!
1979年度诺贝尔和平奖获得者德兰修女说：“人们不讲道理，思想谬误，自我中心;不管怎样，总是爱他们。如果你做善事，人们说你自私自利，别有用心;不管怎样，总是要做善事。你耗费数年所建设的，可能毁于一旦;不管怎样，总是要建设。你所做的善事，明天就被遗忘;不管怎样，总是要做善事。将你所拥有的最美好的东西献给世界，哪怕你会被踢掉牙齿。”德兰修女用自己的一生，将爱心撒向世界，用善良普渡众生，用微笑去抚平人们心中的伤痛。她的善行，她的义举，使她被誉为穷人的圣母，善良的天使，并成为世界人民心中的女神、天主的化身。这都是因为她始终坚守着自己心中的道德律!
桃李不言，下自成蹊。这次汶川大地震中那么多年轻而伟大的老师和同学，灾难猝临，生死瞬间，不约而同，毅然决然的选择了舍己救人!他们心中那崇高伟大的道德力量，感天动地、惊鬼泣神，高山仰止，日月同辉!
“不论是黄昏，还是晨曦初露，茉莉花，总是洁白的”。正如希腊诗人乔治·赛福斯的这首小诗所说，我们青少年要想有所成就，就一定要坚守住自己的洁白，坚守住自己的芳香，坚守住自己心中的道德律!
通篇中心突出，思想健康，结构严谨，语言流畅，援引添辉，富有文采，材料丰富而新鲜，文体特征鲜明突出，是一篇非常规范的议论文。
开头即用康德名言以先声夺人，巧加阐释并引出观点，兼呼应标题，收“凤头”之效。二段紧扣材料，重申主旨，中规中矩。
3-6段，联系现实，正反对比，例证、引证交叉并用，“90后贱女孩”双胞胎姊妹包包与阿紫，跟德兰修女、震区英雄师生群像对比鲜明，构成饱满充实的“猪肚”。且每段尾句均紧扣主旨和标题，令全文一线串珠，丝丝入扣，结构分外严谨。
结尾巧引希腊诗人乔治·赛福斯之《茉莉花》一诗，借以重申观点，发出号召，语言生动有力，意味悠远，可谓“豹尾”。