最喜欢的歌手英语作文带翻译实用20篇

What kind of animals do you like in our common homeland - earth, how many animals do you like? Anyway, my favorite animal is our most loyal friend - dog.

My favorite dog is my neighbors home that is a Beijing dog and rounds and Coli sheep shepherd handsome. They play together every day, is a pair of good friends, I also like them, they saw me and wagged my tail came to me.

Handsome body Biao big, the body about sixty centimeters long. Two legs standing, fully able to my shoulder, his eyes, nose, mouth, ears are more than round, and most like to see him running when the figure - curly flying, like a horse. I often and round, handsome with the running, each time is handsome first, round second, my third It is no exaggeration to say that the speed of handsome hands run no less than the speed of purebred horses. The general dog ran up, will be issued a "blah" sound, handsome handsome hands up very small, not careful is not heard. Handsome handsome look is also handsome: curly flying, the body was arcuate. If you want to use a word to describe handsome, that is: handsome. If you use a word, that is: impeccable.

Relative to the handsome hands, round the size of a lot of small, only about thirty centimeters long, less than half the handsome handsome. The meaning of his name comes from his pair of eyes, it is too round. Like a shiny black gem. And his legs are round, round the name is so come. And his legs are very short, so even if he sprinkled his feet running, but also run fast, but I still like his kind of simple cute.

This is my favorite animal, you like it?

It was Mothers Day. Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his mother. He decided to help his mother do some housework. After school he went to a shop to buy some food on his

way home.When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food, though he couldnt do the cooking well. Then he cleaned the room. He felt verGPS论坛[bbs.xc138.cn]y tired, but he was very happy.When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which werent so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said, Thank you, my child!今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应当为妈妈做点事，他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上，他往商店买了食品。到家后，他尽全力做些好吃的，固然他实在不善于烹任。做完饭，他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累，但依然很兴奋。当父母回来后，看见干净的房间和实在不太美味的饭菜，他们依然很兴奋。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说：谢谢你，孩子。

I made cake today

Today,I suddenly wanted to eat cake,so I decided to make one. Firstly,I

prepared ingredent: eggs,flour,butter,orange juice,baking soda, sugar and milk.

Then started work. First step, beat the eggs.Second step,mixed the flour, butter

and sugar.Third step, put fruit,milk, orange juice and baking soda into them and

mixed.Fourth step, kneaded into a small dough.Fifth step,put the dough in the

oven and baked for one hour. Finally the cake was done!I ate the cake that I

made myself,that was very delicious,I was so happy.

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我今天做蛋糕了

今天，我突然想吃蛋糕，所以我决定做一个。首先，我准备原材料：鸡蛋、面粉、黄油、橙汁、小苏打、糖和牛奶。然后就开始做了。第一步，打鸡蛋。第二步，将面粉、黄油和糖和打好的鸡蛋混在一起。第三步，放入水果、牛奶、橙汁和小苏打，并且拌匀。第四步，将拌好的面粉揉成一个个小面团。第五步，将小面团放入烤箱烘焙一个小时。最后，蛋糕就做好了。我吃着自己做的蛋糕，美味极了，我很开心。

My home have a naughty cute puppy.

The dog has a golden hair, a pair of round eyes, a pair of ears listened warily around all the suspicious sound. The dog also has a pair of sharp claws, the tail become warped up, appear very arrogant. The puppy is very fierce, as long as hear or see what a little, will be issued a "warning", ready to "fight".

My dog not only naughty, and very musical.

One day, I idle, and put up the music. Who knows, after the dog heard, dont chew bones, immediately approached the tape recorder. I suspected that the dog found the music coming from the recorder! Puppy squat down beside the tape recorder, listening to music, one side with the rhythm of the music wag their tails to place in the past, just like a little musician in command of the band...

The puppy especially love to eat cookies. I will take this opportunity to put the dog when the fish hook. I take out a slender bamboo first, then use the other side of the line is a root in bamboo, reoccupy a milk garland biscuit series, on the other side in the rope is made into "rod". I make cookies have nowhere to come over the past, the puppy dazzling, I suddenly stopped shaking, hanging the cookies from the front of the dog, the dog immediately huanguo to god, to the cookies to rush, and I move biscuits to the dog behind him, let it closed on empty air. In this way, lasted for several minutes. Dog pretend "retreat", I also immediately off guard, who know the dog quickly turned to bite cookies, fortunately, I quickly reaction, dog bites to the line. This is my puppy.

我家有一只调皮可爱的小狗。

小狗长着一身金黄色的毛，一双圆溜溜的眼睛，一对耳朵警惕地听着四周一切可疑的声音。小狗还长着一双锋利的爪子，尾巴翘得老高，显得非常傲慢。小狗也非常凶猛，只要稍微听到什么或看到什么，就会发出“警报”，做好“战斗”的准备。

我家的小狗不仅调皮，而且很富有音乐感。

一天，我闲着没事干，便放起了音乐。谁知，小狗听到后，骨头也不啃了，马上向录音机走来。我猜测，可能是小狗发现那音乐是从录音机里传出来的了!小狗在录音机旁蹲下，一边听音乐，一边随着音乐的节奏把尾巴摇过来摆过去，真像个小小音乐家在指挥着乐队……

小狗特别爱吃饼干。我就借此机会，把小狗当鱼钓。我先拿出一根细长的竹子，接着用一根线系在竹子的另一头，再用一块牛奶拉花饼干系在绳子的另一头，就做成了“鱼杆”。我把饼干晃过来晃过去，弄得小狗眼花缭乱，我突然停止摇晃，把饼干吊在小狗面前，小狗立即缓过神来，向饼干扑去，我又把饼干移到小狗身后，让它扑了个空。就这样，持续了好几分钟。小狗假装“败退”，我也随即放松了警惕，谁知小狗迅速转过身来咬饼干，幸亏我反应快，小狗只咬到线。这就是我家的小狗。

My favorite book is "How the Steel Was Tempered." This book tells the hero Pavel Korchagin from a poor, struggling at the bottom boy, has grown into a cause of the motherland and the people fighting life-history of the proletarian revolutionary fighters. Paul had done the young clerk, as the fancy bullying; stole German pistol, due to save Zhu Helai jail; was removed in the smoke of the battlefield, many struggle with death; after the victory of the revolution turn all his heart them into the national development ... In this process, Paul has shown a real proletarian revolutionary fighters has the determination, courage and selfless devotion of the noble character, his own precious youth to the party and the people, in the case of paralyzed still bravely picked up the pen to serve the people. Pauls spirit is eternal side of the banner, Pauls deeds and character of every 21 young people to learn from.

乡村游记(A TRIP TO the COUNTRY)

One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.

While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful).

When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.

有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。

当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲，风景实十分美丽。

当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。

My favorite little animal bunny, it has a white fur, the play is very cute. Her two eyes are red, the play is like a pair of red gems. Sparkling. Every morning the little white rabbit to eat a carrot, two pieces of leaves, it is full.

Every day I put a study at noon, a home, it bouncing to jump in front of me, as if you are welcome to go home. I see it every day, even if I am not happy, I saw him I was very happy. Forget all those unhappy things.

Once again, my classmates came to my house to guest, it is still as usual bounce to me, my classmates saw, she said: "your familys small rabbit is so cute Oh! Home for a while I let My dad bought me a little rabbit.

In this way, I am more and more like my little rabbit, I must take good care of it!

nowadays more and more people have the habitat of exercise,because in this way,people can keep health.and in these sports,my favourite sport is swimming.swimming can not only take good effection to my health,but also keep me fit.

swimming makes me enjoyable,when i swim, i feel i am just like a free fish,i like the feeling that you can enjoy the endless freedom.

swimming makes me confident,when i swim so fast that i can hear the brisk voice of the water,i think i am the best swimmer,though maybe somebody swims faster than me ,but i keep the good feeling and high spirit.

i like swimming, it makes me positive and happy,i will insist on this hobby all the time.

Twinkling of an eye, I have been looking forward to the winter holiday is coming, but I want to customize for myself a little plan, now let me introduce for everybody!

In this winter vacation, Im going to learn some extra-curricular knowledge, enrich their own imagination. I need to finish the winter vacation homework, finish the teacher assigned tasks. I have to help mom necessities and ready to prepare for the holiday. I also want to help with cleaning, so, the guests come to our new home, the will see a white as the mirror, a new family. I also prepared in this summer holiday, to save money for himself, to help the children in the disaster areas.

This is my plan.

转眼间，我一直期盼的寒假来临了，但是我要为自己定制一个小计划，现在我来为大家介绍一下吧!

在这个寒假里，我准备多学习一些课外知识，丰富自己的想象力。我还要按时完成寒假作业，按时完成老师布置的任务。我还要帮助妈妈准备年货，好准备过年。我也要一起帮忙大扫除，那样，客人来我们家里拜年的时候，才会看见一个洁白如镜，崭新的家庭。我还准备在这个暑假里，为自己存钱，帮助灾区的小朋友们。

这就是我的计划。

The Spring Festival, I think the most happy thing is to set off fireworks on New Years eve.

The day before New Years eve morning, my father and I came to China merchants field sell fireworks, bought a lot of fireworks, were blowing away joyfully music! Night, I almost cant sleep with excitement, looking forward to in the heart: New Years eve to come!

On New Years eve finally came. In the evening, I and dad immediately after having my family reunion dinner with fireworks in the underground floor. Dad found a glade first, and then put the fireworks "flying rocket" gently on the ground, with lighter lit the fuse and finally listen to "sou", flying rockets into the sky, blossom a colorful spark, beautiful! When dad smiled and said to me: "stress, to put yourself!" I listened to frighten hurriedly to keep shake head to say: "I cant, I cant." "Macho man there is nothing to fear, as long as you a lit fireworks just stay away from it!" Dad said to me. Hear the word of the father, I was a little scared, "dont be afraid of, pay attention to safety! Father encouraged me to say. Hear the word of the father, I get up the courage to learn to dads appearance with lighter lit fireworks, and then quickly hid behind the father, see the fireworks sprayed out beautiful spark, open for a while like a chrysanthemum, for a moment like a meteor, now like split of... Ah! I made it! I am pleased to jumped up, because of the success of the first, I am no longer afraid of, I also more and more brazen, suddenly put a lot of fireworks, it is very happy!

Through the fireworks in this matter, I know that "nothing in the world is difficult if you put your heart into it" the meaning of this sentence, there is nothing difficult in the world, if we have the courage and perseverance will be successful!

春节里，我觉得最快乐的事是除夕夜放烟火。

在除夕夜的前一天早上，我和爸爸来到招商场那里卖烟花的地方，买了一大堆烟花，我们吹着欢快地乐曲满载而归了!这天夜里，我兴奋得几乎睡不着觉，心里盼望着：除夕夜快点到来!

除夕夜终于到了。晚上，我吃完团圆饭就和爸爸带着烟花兴高采烈地下楼了。爸爸先找了一块空地，接着把烟花“飞天火箭”轻轻地放在地上，最后用打火机点燃了引线，只听“嗖”地一声，飞天火箭冲向了天空，绽放出五颜六色的火花，真美!这时爸爸笑着对我说：“力力，你自己来放吧!”我听了吓得连忙直摇头说：“我不敢，我不敢。”“男子汉大丈夫没什么可害怕的，只要你一点燃烟花离它远一点就行!”爸爸对我说。听了爸爸的话，我还是有点胆战心惊，“不要害怕，注意安全!”爸爸鼓励我说。听了爸爸的话，我鼓足了勇气学着爸爸的样子用打火机点燃了烟花，然后飞快地躲到了爸爸的身后，只见烟花喷射出美丽的火花，一会儿象菊花开放，一会儿象流星，一会儿又象天女散花……啊!我成功了!我高兴地跳了起来，因为有了第一次的成功，我不再害怕，胆子也越来越大，一下子放了许多的烟花，真是太高兴了!

通过放烟花这件事，使我知道“世上无难事，只怕有心人”这句话的意思了，世界上没有什么难事，只要有勇气和恒心就一定会成功!

maybe everyone has a kind of animal which he favourite,me too!

i like all the little animals,but my favourite animal is dog,maybe you will ask the reason,why do i like it ?very simple ,cause of his loyal heart,and they are so cute,they always make a friendly ship with people.they are friends to the human.they bring too much joy to us!do you agree with my view?

and whatyour opinion?

August 12，2012 Friday Today， I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and bee better. Suddenly， an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again， I make a decision to be a good girl. 译文：这天，我帮忙了奶奶做家务.奶奶的身体不好.我以后要常帮她做事.这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些.突然觉得，人老了真不好.不但身体不会好，而且一不留意就会惹得大家厌恶.我又做了一个决定，以后必须要做个乖孩子。

今年最难忘的就是元宵节了，那天的天气不怎么好，但街上人山人海，大街小巷都挂着五颜六色的灯笼，真是美丽极了。

This year, the most memorable is the Lantern Festival, the day the weather

is not so good, but the streets are crowded with people, the streets are hung

colorful lanterns, it is beautiful.

我和爸爸、妈妈、姐姐、弟弟一起到了中山公园，中山公园的大门在工人叔叔和阿姨们的巧手下被彩灯和其他材料，装饰得特别漂亮。大门上挂着几百个火红的彩灯，就好像红红的太阳，带着微笑，欢迎每个朋友的到来。我们随着人群来到中山公园内，里面的彩灯更好看。我看到一个“美丽的城堡”，代表着美丽祖国的大好河山。还有的彩灯上是叔叔阿姨们用彩纸和其它材料做成的小，朋友在那里跳起了美丽的舞蹈。真让我看得眼花缭乱。

I and my father, mother, brother and sister went to Zhongshan Park,

Zhongshan Park door lights and other materials in the hands of workers and their

uncle aunt, decorated very beautiful. There are hundreds of red lights on the

gate, like the red sun, with a smile, welcome every friends arrival. We came to

Zhongshan Park with the crowds, and the lights were better. I saw a beautiful

castle “ ”, represents the beauty of the motherland beautiful rivers and

mountains of a country. There are lights on is the uncles and aunts with colored

paper and other materials made of small and beautiful dance friends there. It

really makes me look dizzy.

今年的元宵节，真是使我无法忘怀。

This years Lantern Festival is really something I cant forget.

My secret

My mother’s birthday is coming soon, I want to give her a surprise, it is my secret. My mother takes care of me all the time, she is working so hard for the family, as I grow up, I know it is not easy for her to be a housewife. I have saved some money, I plan to buy her a scarf, which she will like.

我的秘密

我妈妈的生日就快到了，我想要给她一个惊喜，这是我的秘密。妈妈一直照顾着我，她为这个家庭付出了很多，随着我长大，我知道对她来说成为一名家庭主妇是很不容易的。我已经存下了一些钱，我打算给她买一条围巾，她会喜欢的。

[我的秘密英语作文及翻译

Remember the famous Russian writer gorky said: "responsible, is one of the most basic quality. If we give up the responsibility also is equal to give up the whole world."

Is ah! As long as we pay attention to, in every corner of the life it is the responsibility of the embodiment. When you are in the classroom clean, you clean responsible for class; When you put cans into the bin, you are in the responsibility for the society; When you will own pocket money to the environmental defense fund, you are a responsible for the entire earth. What we do every thing, seem to be all the responsibility. Therefore, be an upright person should have the sense of responsibility.

A successful person in the world but also has a high sense of responsibility. Chinese ancient famous doctor li shizhen in order to understand the effects of the "red fruits", actually oneself ate three times, nearly die, he was holding the responsibility of medical research work. Chemist after David found seven kinds of chemical elements, in line with the sense of responsibility for academic research, and repeatedly studied for two years, will be published. Lu xun, a high sense of responsibility, holding the revolution under the white terror custody, transfer the manuscripts for communists... These are not all goes to show how important responsibility of a person is?

However, if a person has no sense of responsibility, will bring social and personal misfortune. Just because some irresponsible, make a beautiful rainbow bridge instantly turned into a heap of rubbish; Just because some irresponsible, make zhanjiang customs smuggling "paradise", resulting in the loss of hundreds of millions of dollars to the country. How terrible thing it is irresponsible!

Famous educationist Mr CAI yuanpei said: "a person, must first." The people of the 21st century, let us take their own responsibility! So tomorrow will be better!

记得俄国著名作家高尔基说过：“负责任，是一个最基本的品质。如果我们放弃了责任也就等于放弃了整个世界。”

是呀!只要我们留心，在生活的每个角落都有责任的体现。当你在教室打扫卫生的时候，你为班级的清洁负有责任;当你将易拉罐投入垃圾箱时，你在为社会负着责任;当你将自己的零用钱捐给环保基金会的时候，你是在为整个地球负着责任。我们所做的每一件事，似乎都是在承担责任。由此可见，做人要有责任感。

世界上成功的人更是有着极高的责任感。我国古代著名医学家李时珍为了了解“红果”的药效，居然自己吃了三次，险些被毒死，他当时就是抱着对医学研究的责任而工作的。化学家戴维在发现了七种化学元素后，本着对学术研究的责任感，又反复研究了两年，才将成果发表。鲁迅先生，抱着对革命的高度责任感，在白色恐怖下为共产党人保管、转移文稿……这些不都说明了责任对一个人是多么重要吗?

然而一个人若没有责任感，便会给社会、个人带来不幸。正因为某些人的不负责任，使美丽的彩虹桥转瞬之间化为一堆垃圾;正因为某些人的不负责任，使湛江海关成为走私的“天堂”，使国家蒙受了上亿元的损失。不负责任是多么可怕的事啊!

著名教育家蔡元培先生说过：“做人，要先负责。”21世纪的人们，让我们负起自己的责任吧!这样明天将会更美好!

My family has two lovely bunny, they have a pair of ruby-like eyes, with the ball as interesting tail, there are a pair of long and white ears. They are very cute, you will certainly fall in love with them.

Bunny likes to eat rabbit grass. This is a very common grass, everywhere can see, green leaves, which can be squeezed out of fresh milk, very strange. I have never noticed this grass before, but now a rabbit, I know that the world has such a strange grass, and everywhere are the same with the weeds.

Bunny eat when the devour, less than ten seconds, you will find a little grass, because it has been in the belly of the bunny. Bunny will also be issued when the baby sounds very loud voice, "Pakistan twitter ... ..." I stood outside the meter can hear the sound. Oh, the two bunny looks so cute, why can I eat so ugly?

Bunny also like people will sleep like it! Every time you sleep, they will consciously went to my carefully prepared small mat, comfortable to lie down, the four fat fat feet down to their own Arms, for fear they are cold, and then slowly put the ruby-like eyes closed, shrink into a group, looks like a velvet snow white ball. I looked at them happily and covered them with green little quilts. In order not to wake them, I also called the people around to speak a little!

Bunny is very cute, their every action will make you crazy to love them, I have been the two "little star" fascinated.

I like reading books when I have time.I think its a good way to relax and spend my free time.When I was a kidmy mother often read books for me before I went to bed.From then on I was interested in reading books."Books are mans best friends." Books give us knowledge.Through readingwe can understand more kinds of peoplehow do they think.When I readI always lose myself in the book and forget all my worries.I like reading all kinds of booksstory-booksnovels and so on.My farourite book is "Harry Porter".当我有时间时我喜欢读书.我认为读书时很好的放松和度过业余时间的好方法.当我还是个孩子时我母亲在我睡觉前经常给我读.从那时起我就对读书感兴趣.“书是人类最好的朋友”书给我们知识通过读书我们可以明白各种各样的人及他们如何的想法.当我读书时我总沉浸在书中忘记了我的烦恼.我喜欢读各种各样的书故事书小说等等.我最喜欢的书是《哈利波特》.

Each of us kown that there are four seasons a year,each season is diffent .Different people like different seasons, my favourate season is the spring.Spring is the season of hope.Green is the color of sping,and it is also the color of hope!Spring is also the season of life.All things started to recover at this time .It is a symbol of the beginning of life.So i like the sping!

I got up early this morning。 After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends。 We went there by bike。 As soon as we got there， we played with the sand and walked on the beach。 We also went boating。It was really fantastic。 In the afternoon I went to the library and read books there。 I also helped my parents make dinner。 After dinner I washed the dishes。 In the evening I did my homework。 Then I surfed the internet。 I had a busy and interesting day。翻译：我这天起床早。吃完早饭后我和朋友们去了我家附近的海滩。我们骑自行车去的。我们一到那里就玩沙子，在海滩走。我们也划船。很棒。下午我去图书馆看书。我也帮忙我的父母做晚饭。饭后我洗碗。晚上我做作业，然后上网。我这天很忙也过得很愉快

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main

material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can

get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We

can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other

materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which

will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from

learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of

my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours

Bella

尊敬的蒋老师：

您好!我写信是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本，这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源，比如英语杂志，歌曲，电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识，同时从其他材料获取更多知识。另外，那些材料更真实和实用，这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外，通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得更多乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议，谢谢!

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。