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485高一英语作文:远离香烟GiveupSmoking
全文共 957 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays, many school students smoke, and the number is growing increasingly, which makes school and parents worried.
如今,很多在校学生吸烟,而且人数不断增长,学校和家长对此很担心。
According to a survey, more than two fifths of the students smoke in a school. They often get extra money from their parents to pay for cigarette, but their parents usually do not realize it. Even, some students steal money to buy cigarette, which is really a serious event. For middle school students, smoking do more harm to them than to adults, which is not only harmful to the body, but also detrimental to thinking. Furthermore, smoking is also harmful to others. Experts say that the second-hand smoke do more harm to others than the smoker.
据调查,超过五分之二的学生在校吸烟。他们经常从父母那里得到额外的钱去买香烟,但是父母通常没有察觉到这一情况。有的学生甚至投钱来买香烟,这种情况真的很严重。对中学生来说,吸烟对他们的伤害比成年人更多,这不仅对身体有害而且对思维也有害。另外,吸烟对别人也是有害的。专家说,二手烟对别人的害处比对吸烟者的害处更大。
In short, smoking is a bad habit which wastes of money as well as do harm to health.
总之,吸烟是一个不良习惯,既浪费钱又有害健康。
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+ 加入清单每当月光洒满窗台的时候,他喜欢在窗边坐着,默默地,只剩寂静陪伴着他。这如水的月光也好似只为他一人而来。
走出门,来到莱茵河畔,金秋的夜晚,月光在湖面上撒下了金金闪闪的光辉。如水的月光下,他倾听星辰的私语,墙角间絮絮不止的心事和每一片树叶飘落的声音。
心情大好,轻快地漫步在莱茵河边,哼着小曲,欣赏月光。借着光亮走入一个密草丛中,不知所措。
月光悄悄隐去,莫名的恐惧与清新在心中慢慢化开,幽暗中有伞的弧线在眼前划过,下雨了。
雨越下越大,他只能继续在绿芜中穿梭,渐渐地,他惊讶了,这绿芜后竟是一片大海。
无奈,匆忙地躲进海边的一个小屋。他感到一阵压抑,乌云聚拢,开先细细的雨丝已变成了无数的“尖针”,似秋千一般,欲断的惊恐,让人想要逃离。但他却心灵平静——这也许能为写曲子找到些灵感。
大海上瞬间波涛涌起,巨大的浪花拍打着沿岸的石块。白色的飞沫好似一个个白衣恶魔,狰狞地望着这岸上的一切。旋转,翻腾,旋转,翻腾——浪潮越来越高,他与海隔的十分远,但竟溅到了被抬起,卷袭而来的海水。
抹干脸上的海水,他似乎有些疲倦了,但狂风的袭来,又使他睁开双眼,静静的等待着这场暴风雨的停息。
满是落叶的秋夜,氤氲着无数的伤感与澎湃,正如此时的海水,渐渐的,开始平息。
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月亮越升越高,整片大海上洋洒着金黄色的光辉。耳畔似乎响起一首钢琴曲,是如此的轻快与明亮。他的灵感来了,抬头,月色正好,拿出笔和纸,伴着轻快的钢琴曲,谱写了《月光》!
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篇2:以考试为话题的高一英语作文
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+ 加入清单There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examinations. Some people think that examinations can help them review the lessons regularly, while others maintain that too many examinations have frustrated them.
To me, I think an examination is a good thing for both teachers and students. Teachers can find out how much the students have grasped and then improve their teaching; students, on the other hand, will learn what their weak points are and then study even harder.
All in all, we should not waste time arguing whether examinations are good or not. What we should do is to try to improve the exam system and try to adjust it to our different requirements.
篇3:高一励志英语100字
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+ 加入清单In 2011, the greatest CEO of Apple company, Steve Jobs passed away. People
from all around the world felt pity for the loss of this great talent. They laid
down notes and wrote some comments on the blog to show their respect. Looked at
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interest. He overcame the difficulty of being poor by earning money through
collecting bottles. His insistence and creativity brought him great success in
career, but later he got fired. He felt frustrated then he realized he could
start his another career. He bought an animation studio and now it is very
successful. The Pixar movie studio is popular around the world. Steves story
inspires the young people to fight for their dreams.
篇4:高一英语作文我的理想
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篇5:2024年期末英语写作高分素材经典名言
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+ 加入清单1.A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight.(P.
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2.Art is a lie that tells the truth 。( Picasso , Spanish painter )美术是揭示真理的谎言。 (西班牙画家 毕加索)
3.Humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in earnest. (Mark Twain , American novelist )幽默被人正确地解释为“以诚挚表达感受,寓深思于嬉笑”。(美国小说家 马克·吐温)
4.The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation; the two keep in their downward tendency.( Johan Wolfgang von Goethe , German poet)文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的。(德国诗人歌德 。 J 。 W 。)
5.When one loves one‘s art no service seems too hard 。(O. Henry, American novelist)一旦热爱艺术,什么奉献也不难。 (美国小说家 欧·亨利)
Education 教育篇
6.And gladly would learn , and gladly teach 。( Chaucer , British poet)勤于学习的人才能乐意施教。(英国诗人, 乔叟)
7.Better be unborn than untaught , for ignorance is the root of misfortune.(Plato , Ancient Greek philosopher)与其不受教育,不如不生,因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家柏拉图)
Friendship 友谊篇
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Health 健康篇
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15.The first wealth is health 。( Ralph Waldo Emerson , American thinker)健康是人生第一财富。 (美国思想家爱默生。 R. W.)
篇6:高一年级英语作文:My school
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+ 加入清单There is a beautiful school in the Shanghai West suburbs----Qingpu senior high middle school. She covers an area of simple more than 150 mu. And it is one of the lodge senior middle schools in Shanghai. That is my school, my family.
Judging by her system, it is not hard for us to know, every student who studies in the school should live at school. Really so, I live at school all the day.
Our school is a modern senior middle school .In each classroom there is a computer which controls a projector. It is the paperless teaching that the teacher attends class. Students dive into it completely.
The environment in the school is also the most. There is a river in the school side. And water in river is limpid, in which there is several small fish and some shrimps etc.
The gym installations of our school are complete. She not only has a tartan track, a basketball court and a football field, but also has a tennis field ,a shuttlecock field ,a table tennis house and gymnasium etc . Everything needed is there.
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I love my school, and I love my family!
篇7:旅游高一英语作文
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+ 加入清单Today, our family went to Wuzhen tourism,I am very happy.
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A meal I took my father to the direction of the cruise ship terminal,came to the terminal has been a long row of the team, my father touched my head and said to me:“so many people,you still sit?Long time yo? ”I looked at the long team, thought for a while:“ sit,I want to ship.”Mom shook her head to buy a ticket.About an hour or so,we have a family finally got on the boat,sitting on the boat I saw a lot of landscape lights,lotus-shaped, there are lamb shape,there are many, many,a variety of shape landscape Light,really beautiful, can be a good look!
Half an hour after we take the boat to the exit of the terminal,Wuzhen Xiguan tour is over,I looked back at the water town, next time I have the opportunity to come.
篇8:高一英语作文题目
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+ 加入清单Dear Wang Lin,
It’s really my pleasure to make friends with you. I’m Zhao Gang and I’m 17
years old. I like playing football and reading. I’m good at writing and playing
the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from
university. To get good marks, firstly, think listening carefully in class is
most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time.
Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the
advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the
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篇9:高一英语作文:如何控制人口增长
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+ 加入清单Progress in science and the improvement of living conditions have led to the rapid growth of the world population. Modern medicine, for example, has made it possible for babies to grow up healthily and for people to live longer. With improved living conditions, particularly in the countryside, people tend to have larger families. As a result, the world population has increased so rapidly that it has now exceeded 6 billion.
But the overgrowth of population presents a threat to the existence of human society. A large population demands a GREat deal of food supply and shelter space. However, limited productivity and scarce world resources can hardly meet the needs of the ever-increasing population. Thus, in the long run, the overgrowth of the world population will only harm mankind.
To guarantee the steady development of human society, mankind must realize the consequences resulting from fast population growth and carry out a family planning programme. Only by adopting effective measures, can human society develop steadily and have a bright future.
篇10:除夕夜高一英语词左右
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+ 加入清单Today is New Years Eve morning, firecrackers sounding snap snap away. As
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together to form a Red Sea. The family have their own homes going up in the
beautiful, it seems like in the match. My family is no exception, sweeping,
glass, cabinets, such as rubbing. Prepare the arrival of the New Year.
Afternoon, we posted in accordance with the custom of the Chinese New Year
couplets, father and a good paste, and then said to me: "I paste you posted, I
looked at the high level you say rich, said that if the lower rising good
you ", I asked my father why? Dad said: "The plan is a lucky," "Oh, I
understand," We posted on the Alliance are: evil Hongfu family happy is: wang
gas people to come into everything.
篇11:高一英语作文范文
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+ 加入清单A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. That s terrible.
As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. It s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.
In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.
篇12:保护环境英语作文高一80词
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physical features of the earth。 He has transformed woodlands and prairies into
farms and made lakes and reserviors out of rivers for irrigation purposes or
hydroelectric power。 Man has also modified the face of the earth by draining
marshes and cutting through mountains to build roads and railways。
However, mans changes to the physical environment have not always had
beneficial results。 Today, pollution of the air and water is an increasing
danger to the health of the planet。 Each day thousands of tons of gases e out of
the exhausts of motor vehicles。 Smoke from factories pollutes the air of
industrialized areas and the surrounding areas of the countryside。 The pollution
of water is equally harmful。 The whole ecological balance of the sea is being
changed and industrial wastes have already made many rivers lifeless。
Now environmental protection is more pressing than ever before。 As we know,
massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even
poses a great threat to mans existence。 Indifference to these problems will
mean mitting suicide。 Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws
passed to conserve environment。 Otherwise,man is certain to suffer from the
serious consequences caused by this lack of care for his living
surroundings。
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to parks to fly the kites.
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篇14:高一优秀英语作文_高一年级英语作文900字
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+ 加入清单Dear Mary, Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem. Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you! Your, Jane
亲爱的玛丽,压力是当今世界的一个严重问题。我知道你承受太多的压力。你不能和你的同学相处得很好,你可能会担心你的考试。我总是在压力下。我父母想让我成为一流的学生。所以他们在周末送我去各种培训班。
上个星期一晚上,我和我的妈妈说了一次。我告诉她我不懒。我真的感到很累。我需要时间放松。我妈妈终于同意了。所以我想和你父母的谈话是解决问题的必要的。更少的压力,更好的生活!最美好的祝愿给你!
篇15:高一下册关于手机的英语作文
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I developed a kind of the latest model of mobile phones, and rubber difference would like, the test, you can take it in hand, tried to cheat, and when the supervisor came over, you can immediately said: "this is the difference in rubber." In the paper, and then moved on, the supervisor, and continue to cheat, very convenient.
Kind of function with this phone is can be changed into human form, when you are happy, he will share it with you, when you are sad, he will share with you, when you are sad, he will give you, when you worry, he will give you happiness, has a very strong voice systems, languages, and identify system.
This phone is better than a computer, with convenient. On the Internet, the network is a computer 100 times, and with carry, where go to, to play games also better than the computer manipulation, and acoustic control, the appearance of mobile phones also can change, but also is the size of rubber is poor, if you want to make it big, you can unlock the function of size, as well as great.
This is developed by my mobile phone, convenient, and easy to understand.
未来的科技不可想象,千变万化,手机也是很方便的。
我研制了一种最新型的手机,和橡皮差很想,考试的时候,可以把它拿在手里,使劲的作弊,,当监考老师走过来的时候,你可以马上说:“这是橡皮差。”然后装作在差卷子,监考老师走后,又继续的作弊,很方便的。
这款手机还有种功能,就是可以变成人形,当你快乐时,他会和你一起分享,当你伤心时,他会和你分担,当你忧愁时,他会给你解闷,当你烦恼时,他会给你快乐,拥有很强大的语音系统、语言系统与分辨系统。
这块手机比电脑更好,跟方便。上网时,网速是电脑的100倍,而且随声携带,走到哪里带到哪里,玩起游戏来也比电脑好操纵,而且还是声控的,手机的外形也可以变化,但也只有橡皮差大小,如果想让它变大,就可以开启大小功能,和金箍棒一样。
这就是我研制的手机,方便、易懂。
篇16:关于网购英语高一
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+ 加入清单Many years ago, when the online business first became popular among the
public. The manufacturers tried to make some slogans so as to catch more
customers. Then the day of November 11th was named the single day, and they gave
great discount. Today, it has become a shopping day.
There is no doubt that e-commerce is the future. With more young people
rely on the Internet, they get used to purchase online. Looked at the past five
years, November 11th gala has been famous around the world for the great profit
gained on that day. According to the report, the total income of e-commerce on
this gala surpasses the rest days of the year! What a surprise data.
The businessmen sense the great market potential and they advocate people
to make purchase on that single day, because there is great discount. If they
miss it, they will be regretful. With the successful marketing strategy, all the
people are so crazy about this gala. No one can resist the temptation, because
there is always something they want.
篇17:关于梦想英语高一
全文共 497 字
+ 加入清单Since I was a little child, I had a dream that I wanted to be a doctor.
When I was little, I watched many TV series and movies about doctors. I thought
they were so great. Therefore, I made up my mind to be a doctor. In my opinion,
doctor is the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain.I want
to be the person who can help others. However, being a doctor needs so much
professional knowledge and there is a long way to go. So I have to try my best
on my study and go to a good college.
篇18:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导
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+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Dont worry, well send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
篇19:2024年高二期末英语满分
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+ 加入清单"...5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go!" On October 15, 2003, China launched its
first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in
Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.
Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket
carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared
spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball betore vanishing into
deep space.
As the worlds largest developing country, China is more than proud of
making its own contribution to human beings outer space exploration. Meantime,
it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and
social development.The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter
in space history.
篇20:寒假英语作文高一100词
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+ 加入清单The New Year is coming and this term has finished. Now, I can enjoy a happy
winter holiday. In winter holiday, I don’t have to get up early every morning.
It’s the best thing for me. I often get up at nine o’clock in the morning. My
parents go to work so I stay at home alone. I will go out for breakfast. Noodle,
milk and egg are my favorites. Then I go back home to watch TV or meet my
friends. We always have many things to do. My parents would go home at noon so I
have lunch at home. In the afternoon, I will sleep and then do some homework. In
short, I spend most time in playing. I love winter holiday.